Hello owo
Mod Req from Ayyri
~Kantan~1)00:16:341 (1) - Maybe wanna make this a finisher? the deep sound in the background could use it imo
2)00:22:558 (11,12) - I think it would be better a Ctrl+G on these notes, so its consistent with the d k's you placed earlier
3)00:31:107 (5) - Why is this finisher? I don't hear any strong sound
4)00:41:211 (19) - This one could use a finisher however, as it emphasizes the start of the kiai, and the addition of the Violin
5)00:47:040 (29,30) - You could Ctrl+G these, so the d on that pattern has consistency in how you placed the D at the beginning of the kiai
6)00:49:372 - Here you could place a k so it follows the Violin somewhat, and maybe make 00:51:703 (37) - a d so they're different
7)00:53:646 (41) - On this note you could put a Finisher, since theres a strong sound there imo
8)01:05:304 - You can do a 1/1 kdk here, because I don't think 01:06:081 (55) - this d fits that flute very well, and the d in between could differentiate the sounds and follow a background sound there
Its pretty good! I would put a little bit more variation imo, but otherwise, pretty solid diff!
~Futsuu~1)00:16:341 (1) - Could use a finisher, I think theres a strong sound here (Those Twinkles? I have no idea how the instruments are called, sorry)
2)IMO the first Kiai is a bit too dense for a kiai, almost Muzu-like. Consider nerfing it maybe.
3)00:49:955 (63) - Doublet here is a bit too random, Maybe add a k at 00:49:760 - ?
4)00:53:646 (73) - a Finisher here could follow the strong sound there
5)01:05:304 - I think something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9794675 could be better, doing a snap like you did is a bit too much for a Futsuu imo
6)01:21:626 (2) - Maybe a finisher? Emphasizes the Start of Kiai, and feels really needed here
7)Like point 2, Maybe nerf the 2nd Kiai a little bit too
8)01:34:061 (40) - Could use a finisher imo
9)01:44:359 - You can add a d here or at 01:44:747 - , because if you listen closely, that sound you were following gets a little bit more intense
Its Awesome!! Good job!
~Ayyri's Muzukashii~1)00:06:820 (14) - IMO Moving this to 00:06:626 - could represent that pause of the Violin at 00:06:820 -
2)00:28:776 - to 00:41:211 - I think you exceeded a bit with putting finisher at the end of (nearly) every pattern, and I think you should nerf it a little bit, compared to the kiai's, its way more dense than them, and that doesnt make too much sense imo
3)01:08:122 - You could place a d here, could follow the 1/6 flute
4)01:14:339 - ^
5)01:21:626 - This one could be buffed a little bit, to complement Point Nº2, Besides, this is the part that feels most dense imo, so it could really use some buffing
It's Pretty good, Expected from Ayyri
~Oni~1)00:16:341 (1) - This note could use a finisher imo, theres a strong sound there
2)00:34:993 (38) - Maybe put a finisher? so its consistent with the other finishers (00:30:330 (9) - for example)
3)00:38:879 (60) - Maybe make this one a k? Theres a different sound here compared to the previous d's
4)00:40:822 - Maybe make this kkkkd? so that theres an emphasis on 00:41:211 (78) - due to its strong sound
5)01:20:460 (2,3,4) - I dont think they need to be finishers imo, they dont feel as strong as 01:20:071 (1) - and 01:21:626 (1) -
6)01:34:061 (76) - Maybe make this one finisher instead? So its consistent with the other notes and to follow that strong sound
7)01:40:278 (117) - Finisher too? to follow that Cymbal?
Pretty simple, yet fun
~Inner Oni~1)00:21:004 - I would start buffing here, just shoving a stream out of nowhere is not really a good idea
2)00:34:994 (47) - Maybe a finisher could fit here? Strong sound (Don't worry, It's still rankable, its not rankable when its at the beginning or between, but since its in the end, its fine
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3)00:38:102 (71) - ^
4)00:41:211 (95) - ^
5)00:43:834 - You could add a d here, if you listen closely, theres a violin sound here
6)01:15:408 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9795021 You could try a pattern similar to this, so it follows the Flute
7)01:40:278 (490,498) - These two could work as K's, strong sounds, and high pitch
8)01:43:387 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9795042 I would suggest this pattern, imo follows the instruments a little bit better
Its fun AF
Good luck on your beatmap!