Hello, M4M promise.
[General]
The hitsounds are non-hearable for me. Please increase the volume of them at least 20% to make them hearable.
I think the BPM or the offset is wrong, because i hit the notes in time at some places, and i hit some of them late, which means they are mostly off. What i can recommend is shifting the offset 5-6 ms further to keep the balance in the middle. Because I think the song's BPM is inconsistent. Turns out I was the inconsistent one, sorry :3
[Pheodondon]
00:41:910 (14,15,16,17) - 00:42:345 (19,20,21,22,23) - The first one (in terms of trrrrrr sound) is faster than the 2nd one. I think you can replace them.
00:57:635 (1) - Personal preference, but I'd map is as a kat. The sound is different compared to 00:57:418 (1) - this one.
00:58:867 (2,3,4,1) - I think these kinds of 1/6 notes are overmapped. It sounds nice but it doesn't fit the song in my opinion. Consider them editing.
02:05:932 (2,1,2,3) - I see you put these notes in order to keep consistency but, it doesn't contain 1/4 keyboard notes like other ones, such as 02:02:454 (2,1,2,1) - this one. You can change it by deleting 02:06:150 (2) - this note.
02:07:345 (1,2) - I see no reason keeping this spot blank actually. 02:07:454 - 02:07:671 - There are some sounds on these spots and I think you can fill them with kats since you used 1/4 notes on the calm part. It will also create a good build-up.
02:34:954 (1,2,3,4) - Since you used 1/8 on your map, I'd like to remind you that these sounds are in 1/8, not 1/6.
02:42:237 (1) - You can change this to kat, since there is a snare sound on it.
03:24:193 (2,1,1) - Starting from this spot, there is a sound on blue tick ( for example: 03:24:410 - ) which you mapped them as dkkd iirc. Consider adding a note between them.
03:28:867 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Same suggestion mentioned in 00:41:910.
04:40:606 (1) - This one is a suggestion, but the sound is starting from 04:40:389 - here (mostly) and a spinner on red tick without a note behind it looks weird in my opinion. If you don't want to change it's location, at least consider changing it to a slider so you can emphasize 04:40:823 - this sound on the measure start.
05:42:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are in 1/6 and 05:42:997 (1,2,3,4) - these are in 1/4. Try to follow drums only on that pattern which they all are 1/4, or the weird effect (i don't know it's name) which are in 1/6 by changing 05:42:997 (1,2,3,4) - these ones to 6 kats in 1/6.
06:01:910 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Same suggestion.
06:03:432 (1) - In the end, I believe the spinner is not enough. Please change it to kats only. My recommendation: 06:03:432 - 06:04:084 - 1/6 between those two, 06:04:084 - 06:04:302 - 1/8 between those two.
All in all, pretty fun map to play ( DTable for high rank players which will give a lot PP :3 ) and the patterns are very consistent so, consider them as opinions instead of errors because this map is out of my modding range I think. Best of luck getting it ranked, i hope my mod helped~
[General]
The hitsounds are non-hearable for me. Please increase the volume of them at least 20% to make them hearable.
[Pheodondon]
00:41:910 (14,15,16,17) - 00:42:345 (19,20,21,22,23) - The first one (in terms of trrrrrr sound) is faster than the 2nd one. I think you can replace them.
00:57:635 (1) - Personal preference, but I'd map is as a kat. The sound is different compared to 00:57:418 (1) - this one.
00:58:867 (2,3,4,1) - I think these kinds of 1/6 notes are overmapped. It sounds nice but it doesn't fit the song in my opinion. Consider them editing.
02:05:932 (2,1,2,3) - I see you put these notes in order to keep consistency but, it doesn't contain 1/4 keyboard notes like other ones, such as 02:02:454 (2,1,2,1) - this one. You can change it by deleting 02:06:150 (2) - this note.
02:07:345 (1,2) - I see no reason keeping this spot blank actually. 02:07:454 - 02:07:671 - There are some sounds on these spots and I think you can fill them with kats since you used 1/4 notes on the calm part. It will also create a good build-up.
02:34:954 (1,2,3,4) - Since you used 1/8 on your map, I'd like to remind you that these sounds are in 1/8, not 1/6.
02:42:237 (1) - You can change this to kat, since there is a snare sound on it.
03:24:193 (2,1,1) - Starting from this spot, there is a sound on blue tick ( for example: 03:24:410 - ) which you mapped them as dkkd iirc. Consider adding a note between them.
03:28:867 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Same suggestion mentioned in 00:41:910.
04:40:606 (1) - This one is a suggestion, but the sound is starting from 04:40:389 - here (mostly) and a spinner on red tick without a note behind it looks weird in my opinion. If you don't want to change it's location, at least consider changing it to a slider so you can emphasize 04:40:823 - this sound on the measure start.
05:42:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are in 1/6 and 05:42:997 (1,2,3,4) - these are in 1/4. Try to follow drums only on that pattern which they all are 1/4, or the weird effect (i don't know it's name) which are in 1/6 by changing 05:42:997 (1,2,3,4) - these ones to 6 kats in 1/6.
06:01:910 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Same suggestion.
06:03:432 (1) - In the end, I believe the spinner is not enough. Please change it to kats only. My recommendation: 06:03:432 - 06:04:084 - 1/6 between those two, 06:04:084 - 06:04:302 - 1/8 between those two.
All in all, pretty fun map to play ( DTable for high rank players which will give a lot PP :3 ) and the patterns are very consistent so, consider them as opinions instead of errors because this map is out of my modding range I think. Best of luck getting it ranked, i hope my mod helped~