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Thanks MisakiANMisakiAN wrote:
eya..can M4M? if you cant its fine,
please mod this map if you want to m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/538803 Sure !
[Insane]
00:01:937 (5) - ctrl g?it would make the flow better Yeah
00:03:622 (8) - NC should be in here,not here 00:03:791 (1) - Thanks!
same as above 00:06:319 (8) - and 00:06:487 (1) -
same again 00:09:016 (8) - 00:09:184 (1) -
00:12:218 - make this into circle,and then slider from this 00:12:218 (4) - to this 00:12:218 (4) - True
make this circle 00:15:083 (2) - closer to this slider 00:14:746 (1) - It have a sound on white tick , thats why ><
NC in here 00:22:499 (8) - ,delete nc in here 00:22:836 (1) -
00:23:847 (5) - NC
maybe you can space it more,and make it more like jumps 00:33:622 (2,3,4,5) - Yup
00:34:971 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:36:319 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:37:667 (1,2,3) - why its so far,make it more closer oh shit i'm not notice it ^^
00:43:060 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:914 (6,7,8) - why dont you make it jump like this? 00:44:240 (2,3,4,5) - Good idea , thanks
00:47:610 (9,10,11) - ^
maybe you can make this 01:10:701 (3) - face to the next slider Yes
01:16:768 (5,6,7,8) - make another pattern,dont just stack it like that,it can make it hard to read It have a good flow , i think
just 1 diff for today,
you have problems with NC and try to make this 00:54:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - more variation I dont have an idea haha . but i'll try !
okayy,GOOD LUCK~~~
Thanks ^^StanDaMan809 wrote:
Hello I am here from M4M queue!GeneralI see , thanks
- The (Anime ver.) has a space in between the A and (. Fix that. Fix
- Also, when you do mod feedback, you use red for everything. I'd say you should use red for changes you don't add, and use green for changes you do add.
Insaneall fixed ><
- I'm not sure why you decided to use only straight sliders for the beginning of the song, and for half of the kiai. It's really off-putting. Haha i dont have an idea at that time
- 00:02:948 (4,5,6) - Uncomfortable movement fix
- 00:04:634 (6,1) - This is difficult to read fix
- 00:09:353 (3) - Place this slightly higher, it's quite hard to reach with the spacing you established. fix
- 00:16:600 (8) - Is not perfectly overlapped with the slider end of 00:16:094 (6) - fix
- 00:17:443 (1) - Rotate 7 degrees, it'll end up looking better fix
- 00:20:139 (1,2,3) - Move this slightly upwards so that the slider head of 00:20:813 (3) - does not collide with 00:21:150 (4) -
- 00:20:645 (2) - Move this to the right. It should look like this: fix
- 00:20:139 (1,2,3) - Rotate by 16 degrees. Then, the jump will ALWAYS be readable. sure
- 00:25:532 (1) - Ctrl+H then rotate by 7 degrees. good idea
- 00:29:746 (7) - Move this to the right, slightly. The slider end should not pass or completely collide with the slider head of 00:30:251 (8) -. A completely straight jump is uncomfortable to play. i see , fix
- 00:32:105 (7) - ^, except place it more to the left. ^
- 00:39:016 (3,4,5,6) - These 4 jumps, whenever you place them, are uncomfortable to play. Have them look more like this ty for the pattern
- 00:50:308 (6,1) - You have to move this such so that it is not 2 straight jumps in a row. fix
- 00:53:173 (3,4,5) - Move these slightly down. fix
- 01:07:667 (3,4,5) - Rotate by 39 degrees, and then make the slider end of 01:08:004 (4) - overlap 01:07:499 (2) - fix
- 01:09:690 (3,4) - The horizontal spacing between these two sliders needs to be shortened fix
- 01:16:094 (3,4,5,6) - 01:16:768 (5,6) - should be shifting away diagonally from 01:16:431 (4,5) - but overlapping about half their sliders. Also 01:17:780 (8) - should never be 100% overlapping a slider.
Good Luck!
Thanks for modding ><Catshy wrote:
Hello from my queue c:General
- Combo Colours 1 and 6 might cause some visiblity issues since it's kinda dark (and most of people play with BG fully dimmed) Fixed
- You probably should lower audio's bitrate to 192kbp/s Alright then ~
- the "h" in the artist's name shouldn't be capitalised Yeah , thanks for notice that !
- Add opening, Tomoko Kawase (that's artist's actual name so you could use it in Artist tab too), (Tommy)february6 (alias) to tags true
xfrac's Extra
- 00:10:027 (5,1) - space them a bit so that they don't touch each other
- 00:11:712 (8,1) - if you're making 1/1 gap between those objects, I recommend you stacking them (something like this)
- 00:16:263 (3,4,5) - I think those jumps are kinda out of place here; make the spacing a bit lower
- 00:20:139 (1,2) - this blanket could be better
- 00:35:308 (5,6) - you probably should keep the pattern same as 00:33:959 (5,6) - and 00:36:656 (5,6) - which is straight into curved
- 00:41:038 (6) - the curve here is different from other sliders from the ongoing pattern
- 00:48:117 (5) - NC on this
- 00:48:117 (5) - improve blanket
- 01:19:802 (4) - and 01:22:499 (4) - in the intro you used 4 circles instead of that doublereverse slider; make it the same because it was 10x better
- 01:28:734 - end the spinner here to match the song
Insane
- 00:10:532 (2,3) - just before you were using stacking for 1/4 rhythm so that might be confusing for some players It have a big loud sound on the white tick , i think it's best for stacked at there ^^
- 00:11:543 - missing a note here I do it purposely since it's bad flow if i do that
- 00:23:847 (6) - 01:15:083 (7) - NC on those Sure !
- 01:16:431 (4,6) - and 01:16:768 (5,7) - make the spacing the same Nope , it's kind a private thing , if i do that , it'll confused the player and it's not 100% overlap
- 01:22:836 (3) - I highly recommend removing reverse arrow and adding a circle here 01:23:173 - instead Fix
- 01:23:341 - the stream is kinda overmapped but oh well.. I'll fixed them ^^
Good luck c:
Thanks for modding!xfrac's Extra
- 00:10:027 (5,1) - space them a bit so that they don't touch each other tbh I didn't get your point ;; but I'm leaving this as it is
- 00:11:712 (8,1) - if you're making 1/1 gap between those objects, I recommend you stacking them (something like this) I pref leaving this as it is, I'm not a fan on stacking notes ^^
- 00:16:263 (3,4,5) - I think those jumps are kinda out of place here; make the spacing a bit lower yeah, unnecesary jumps ~fixed
- 00:20:139 (1,2) - this blanket could be better right, fixed
- 00:35:308 (5,6) - you probably should keep the pattern same as 00:33:959 (5,6) - and 00:36:656 (5,6) - which is straight into curved applied ctrl+g on 00:35:645 (6) -
- 00:41:038 (6) - the curve here is different from other sliders from the ongoing pattern well since it's extra there's not neccesity to make them all same
- 00:48:117 (5) - NC on this wops fixed
- 00:48:117 (5) - improve blanket there's not blanket D: maybe wrong time?
- 01:19:802 (4) - and 01:22:499 (4) - in the intro you used 4 circles instead of that doublereverse slider; make it the same because it was 10x better haahah I was waiting for this mod to fix it, thanks ^^
- 01:28:734 - end the spinner here to match the song alright! fixed ^^
xfraczynho wrote:
Thanks for modding!xfrac's Extra
- 00:10:027 (5,1) - space them a bit so that they don't touch each other tbh I didn't get your point ;; but I'm leaving this as it is [/color]
- 00:11:712 (8,1) - if you're making 1/1 gap between those objects, I recommend you stacking them (something like this) I pref leaving this as it is, I'm not a fan on stacking notes ^^
- 00:16:263 (3,4,5) - I think those jumps are kinda out of place here; make the spacing a bit lower yeah, unnecesary jumps ~fixed
- 00:20:139 (1,2) - this blanket could be better right, fixed
- 00:35:308 (5,6) - you probably should keep the pattern same as 00:33:959 (5,6) - and 00:36:656 (5,6) - which is straight into curved applied ctrl+g on 00:35:645 (6) -
- 00:41:038 (6) - the curve here is different from other sliders from the ongoing pattern well since it's extra there's not neccesity to make them all same
- 00:48:117 (5) - NC on this wops fixed
- 00:48:117 (5) - improve blanket there's not blanket D: maybe wrong time?
- 01:19:802 (4) - and 01:22:499 (4) - in the intro you used 4 circles instead of that doublereverse slider; make it the same because it was 10x better haahah I was waiting for this mod to fix it, thanks ^^
- 01:28:734 - end the spinner here to match the song alright! fixed ^^
update!http://puu.sh/wa5wK/9bc7283a04.osu
Thanksulfanirahmi wrote:
Beatmap yang kamu buat bagus... tetapi ada beberapa yang harus kamu perbaiki (Versi saya)SPOILER1. Easy Diff
Jumlah slidernya lebih banyak daripada circlenya. Kemungkinan besar, pemain akan bosan memainkannya (bila map-mu di ranked). Cobalah kamu memperbanyak sedikit jumlah circle-nya agar player beatmapmu terkagum New player mahu enjoy song nya aja ~
2. Untuk ke semua diff
Menurut saya, hitsoundnya kurang beragam/bernada. Ya , Saya tak buat lagi hitsound .
Alangkah baiknya kamu ubah sample hitsoundnya di timing setup kamu. Contoh :
[*]00:00:000 - 00:12:049 - (Sample-nya Normal) Menurutku... ini kedengarannya sangat bagus, tetapi kalau kamu tidak akan mengubahnya, tidak apa-apa
[*]00:12:049 - 00:54:858 - (Sample-nya N atau S) Teserah kamu yang mana paling sedap didengar
[*]00:54:858 - 01:24:521 - (Sample-nya Normal)
3. Insane Diff
Belum diberi hitsound... tambahkan ya ^^
Untuk Spinnernya (dibagian terakhir)... suaranya kurang pas... saranku sample sound untuk spinnernya Soft- ya ^^
Semoga Berjaya ^^
Gracias por modear criss! D[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
Yo o/ mod requested by xfraczynho
Hi Criss <3xfrac's Extraxfrac's Extra
first of all, volume is too low through all the map, try to alternate between 50-60 and 70, 60 on the regular sections or not that high intensity ones, 50 on slow parts and 70 on kiai
Lol strange, I'm pretty sure I made all volumes through the diff. I'm making them right now ty
try to emphasize more your object placement, in example:
00:01:431 (2,3,4) - (3) should have more distance than 4 because of the white tick, there are strong beats almost always
Yeah I agree with this, but as being the first pattern through the whole song I'm not trying to overmap this tho
00:02:274 (1,2) - 2 should have more distance too because it is when vocals start
I think current one is enough since I'm following the guitar here. Also vocal isn't that strong as being followed so far away
00:07:499 (6,1,2) - this should have more distance too compared to the patterns before this, they are TOO close together
Yeah right, compared to other patterns fixed
00:15:420 (3) - needs more distance, strong beat
there are some examples, try to think what to emphasize based on that, white ticks, intensity and instruments adding, etc
I made some changes according to main sounds
00:12:049 (1,2) - you could try to put 2 slider instead of this, it will follow vocals better
I think current one is better, by deleting 00:12:555 (2) - there's a space that doesn't fit at all with current rhythm I'm following here
00:14:746 (1,1) - try stacking slider tails, this is common if you want to make your map aesthetics better
applied
00:18:117 (3,1,2) - don't clutter objects this much, it ruins aesthetics
included this change as commented above
00:18:454 (1) - dont NC
00:19:802 (6) - NC
fixed both!
00:22:161 (6,7,8,9,10) - this is a totally ghost stream, it doesn't follow anything, if you want to keep something like this i recommend you to do something like this
Agree!
00:22:667 - i think you should add a circle here
I think current one is good: 00:17:105 - have a consistency with this and little break for slow part is good enough for me
00:31:768 (4,1) - this angle is uncomfortable to play, i would ctrl+g 00:31:937 (1,2) - this so you keep the sharp angles pattern
lol I made a mistake here tbh fixed
01:03:454 (4) - i recommend to put a circle, then a slider and continue with other slider
Agree fixed
01:24:521 (1) - i would put a circle instead because the strong beat, then start the spinner at the next red tick
I'd prefer to hold the current one for now, I think starting from here with spinner is good. Anyways open to other comment
I'll be back tomorrow for the Insane mod, i ran out of time today, sorry!