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Nymph
懒得用格式了 排列都没什么好说的

Normal:
节奏和排列还有HITSOUND都没什么好说
00:24:326 - 这几个绿线没什么用 可以删
01:38:556 -
03:21:537 -

Hard:
反正不是触图 难度设置那么高也没有好处 善良就到底呗 我建议掉血-2 OD-1 分数也不会差 星数还是4星半
00:15:960 (1) - 这里加NEW COMBO.. 听说别人因为转盘后面的这个NC BUG差点被UNRANK.. 那就现在就加上好了
00:44:614 (3,4,5) - 这样用回音铃的话 我很建议音量渐变降低 试试4变成37 然后5变成25音量 6再回到50
00:55:383 (5) - 这个其实真不太好看..反正我是不喜欢..
01:01:537 (6,7,8,9,10) - 同44秒我说的那个 类似的我不再说啦 都同理
01:16:152 (1) - 从这开始 FINISH突然用的多了 我建议每个段落的第一个FINISH大点音量 后面小一点 我个人听起来更顺 听到后面感觉FINISH就很多了 一个音量我个人不太喜欢=.= 跟44秒其实也都一个道理 个人建议
01:34:614 (1,1,1) - 这似乎没什么必要都加NC
01:38:460 (8) - 这里加个NC?
01:40:768 (1,1) - 然后结尾也没必要加2个NC
02:01:152 (4) - 这个CLAP有点没必要?
02:08:076 (5) - 也是不觉得这里放CLAP好 不如放下一个1去
02:08:460 (1,2,3) - 不太喜欢这节奏 应该SLIDER在前 2个NOTE在后才更舒服
02:09:614 (4) - finish在这也挺没必要的
02:11:922 (13) - CLAP不如放在12尾巴上了感觉 这样的话后面的1的头也应该加一个clap....
02:14:229 (4) - 这里2个CLAP挺怪的..
02:54:614 (1,1) - NC没必要 前面多加一个就好了吧
03:00:768 (1,1,1) - 也是.. 后面NC也满乱的= =不说啦
感觉CLAP放的有点乱 我建议试试怎么下比较好 然后大部分都按照那个下 现在感觉CLAP很零散 FINISH用的有点多.


哎 歌不错 皮肤也满漂亮 可以考虑加一个自定义的鼠标光标?

好的 2KUDO我收下了 好歌好图好安逸 射2星好了
Topic Starter
Axey

Nymph wrote:

懒得用格式了 排列都没什么好说的

Normal:
节奏和排列还有HITSOUND都没什么好说
00:24:326 - 这几个绿线没什么用 可以删
01:38:556 -
03:21:537 -
all fixed

Hard:
反正不是触图 难度设置那么高也没有好处 善良就到底呗 我建议掉血-2 OD-1 分数也不会差 星数还是4星半好的 遇到善良modder了
00:15:960 (1) - 这里加NEW COMBO.. 听说别人因为转盘后面的这个NC BUG差点被UNRANK.. 那就现在就加上好了以前也有人说过这个问题 2啊
00:44:614 (3,4,5) - 这样用回音铃的话 我很建议音量渐变降低 试试4变成37 然后5变成25音量 6再回到50fixed
00:55:383 (5) - 这个其实真不太好看..反正我是不喜欢..好的不改
01:01:537 (6,7,8,9,10) - 同44秒我说的那个 类似的我不再说啦 都同理ok
01:16:152 (1) - 从这开始 FINISH突然用的多了 我建议每个段落的第一个FINISH大点音量 后面小一点 我个人听起来更顺 听到后面感觉FINISH就很多了 一个音量我个人不太喜欢=.= 跟44秒其实也都一个道理 个人建议其实我懒
01:34:614 (1,1,1) - 这似乎没什么必要都加NCfixed
01:38:460 (8) - 这里加个NC?fixed
01:40:768 (1,1) - 然后结尾也没必要加2个NCfixed
02:01:152 (4) - 这个CLAP有点没必要?fixed
02:08:076 (5) - 也是不觉得这里放CLAP好 不如放下一个1去fixed
02:08:460 (1,2,3) - 不太喜欢这节奏 应该SLIDER在前 2个NOTE在后才更舒服fixed
02:09:614 (4) - finish在这也挺没必要的fixed
02:11:922 (13) - CLAP不如放在12尾巴上了感觉 这样的话后面的1的头也应该加一个clap....fixed
02:14:229 (4) - 这里2个CLAP挺怪的..fixed
02:54:614 (1,1) - NC没必要 前面多加一个就好了吧fixed
03:00:768 (1,1,1) - 也是.. 后面NC也满乱的= =不说啦fixed
感觉CLAP放的有点乱 我建议试试怎么下比较好 然后大部分都按照那个下 现在感觉CLAP很零散 FINISH用的有点多.


哎 歌不错 皮肤也满漂亮 可以考虑加一个自定义的鼠标光标?

好的 2KUDO我收下了 好歌好图好安逸 射2星好了
不错的modding 谢谢~
Megurine Luka
8-) 不嫁給我就不告訴我mod了什麽

回覆后才可以查看哦
[General]

skin部份缺一個reversible arrow。雖然我覺得沒必要但是撒庫拉大姐曾經戳泡的原因之一有這個。理由是爲了不和玩家自定義的皮膚衝突。╮(╯▽╰)╭
[Colours]
Combo1 : 130,187,34
Combo2 : 236,178,200
Combo3 : 180,156,204
Combo4 : 234,220,43
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
這條是必要的。爲了不和自定義皮膚衝突而加的滑條邊緣顏色(白色)

覺得必要的話可以在tag或者source里加上Aoki Gekkoh
master的ID

03:07:691 SB閃的略快,能不能慢慢閃。慢歌配這麼快的閃..有點吃不消

[Normal]
00:16:922 (4) - 00:17:680這個slidertick可以加上clap音。後面雷同。你覺得太擁擠的話就算了
後面整篇5%都太輕了,建議提高O O
00:28:460 (2) - 節點太多導致slider容易歪,其實http://puu.sh/6uXB就可以了,後面的不說了,節點應該是越少越好的XD
00:36:152 (4) - http://puu.sh/6uXE這樣好看點
01:06:152 (3) - 建議平滑一點XD
01:38:652 (4) - 這種遮對NM來說有點太難了
03:21:537 (1) - 不頭尾一條直線嗎
03:23:845 (4) - stack吧

[Hard]
00:38:845 (7,8,9) - 不建議這裡spacing漸大..節奏感不強烈
01:08:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - 五角星歪了O O,還是正五角星好看啊
02:10:768 (7) - 嗚。這個略扭曲了點
02:27:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - 求正五角星
03:06:922 (1) - 我覺得從這邊開始可以整體增大spacingO O畢竟高潮部份了

木有了~
S h i o n
Hey, jiyou

回礼~~(虽然还不太会mod.. :( )

General
- Should 'hazakura' in the title be capitalized?
- Slider tick is 0.5 ?


Normal
01:13:845 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an Normal
02:09:613 (5,1) - How about this ? It sounds better~


02:21:537 (1) - 绕晕了@@
02:49:999 (3) - [nazi] about 2-3 grids right to the end point


Hard
00:23:652 (6) - snap (for flow's sake
00:32:691 (5) -往下弯一点? ( ^
00:52:306 (1) - this slider is 大丈夫?
03:24:614 (4) - 看下这个节奏~ 和之前照应么= =?


That's all.

皮肤和音效好赞~ Miku也好萌 >.<
star一记!
EnakoRin
General
  • M4M优先MOD :D
    Offset + 14?
    note的颜色和背景不大分得开,建议换换(虽然我不知道换成啥颜色比较合适)
    不知道为啥我这进EDIT的test模式的时候光标会出错,不是设置的那个图片,而在PLAY的时候是正常的
    03:07:691 - 找个地方的SB有点吓人,速度慢点的好,毕竟这首歌的节奏不快
Normal
  • 我觉得这个难度稍微难了点,虽然是normal但是这是最低难度,得照顾一下新人
    01:41:537 (1) - 个人感觉没啥必要加new combo
    02:09:998 (1) - 去掉new combo?
Hard
  • AR-1应该会比较合适
    00:55:383 (5) - 唔……不知道这样的slider能rank不
    01:13:845 (1) - 加clap?
    02:18:460 (1,1) - 没有重叠好
    03:29:229 (1) - 唔……不知道这样的slider能rank不
没啥好MOD的了,找MAT去吧,KDS STAR
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
spboxer3
letterbox記得拿掉
kiai 在02:43:076 - 開始
期望有故事的SB出現阿;_;

[Normal]
01:15:960 (1) - 太遠了阿

[Hard]
00:24:999 (2,3,4) - 間距問題
00:41:537 (4,5) - 弧線貼齊[nazi]
02:03:845 (4) - 擋到分數了 這是unrankable
02:16:152 (5) - 嘛... ^
02:18:460 (1,1) - 堆疊
02:20:576 (2,3) - 間距

好歌 star~
Lissette
Add "vocaloid" to the tags?
Set preferred skin: “default” so this skin doesn’t look weird to the ones that are using a custom one

Hard
01:57:499 (2) - make this slider 2 notes, I always click like if they were >.>
03:09:806 (5) - this jump is hard to read, and doesn’t fit ><
03:15:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - make 5 same distance as 2 from 1
03:20:576 (2) - wrong spacing here
03:24:999 - feels like missing a triple here
03:26:152 (2) - end half beat earlier, If you do add a note where the slider used to end

Normal
The difficulty is fine as a normal, but you should lighten it a bit so is less than 3 stars, since this is the easiest diff of the map-set. This song is so calm, it wouldn’t be too difficult to do ^^

Pretty soft map <3
Topic Starter
Axey
thanks every modders

i have fixed sth on map

thank u :oops:
Beatrice_old
BG不错 8-)
xierbaliti
-General-
皮肤还需要1个approachcircle.png, 不想做的话去默认皮肤里偷一个

-Normal-
3.15星现在应该是不行了, 我建议是简单修改一下到3星 实在没办法的话就减一HP一OD 再改几处.
5%音量段从效果上听起来也不是那么好, 15%~20%似乎不错 而且大幅使用5%音量似乎不合规定
01:15:960 (1) - 把这去掉能-0.01
01:22:691 (1) - 把这去掉能-0.01
01:28:268 (5,6) - 去掉(5)的话能-0.01 如果是把这两个都去掉 然后在01:28:076加个折返slider(在01:28:460结束)的话,也是-0.01
因为基本上一样的节奏 后面就不说了

-Hard-
00:52:306 (1) - 这样的slider有些看不清轨迹 根据规定建议改一些
00:53:845 (3) - ^
00:55:383 (5) - ^ 多少要露出来一些, 别全挡住
01:28:845 (1,1,2) - new combo略违和, 把两个(1)的NC去掉 然后在(2)上加上不是挺好吗
02:54:614 (1,1,1) - ^
03:29:229 (1) - 同00:55:383 (5)

star for now.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Topic Starter
Axey

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
有几个图片似乎是没用到._.
  • default-percent.png
    default-x.png
    default-comma.png这下面3个我都没找到上面的都删掉了。
    sliderfollowcircle-0.png
    default-dot.png
皮肤还需要1个approachcircle.png, 不想做的话去默认皮肤里偷一个加了


-Hard-
00:52:306 (1) - 这样的slider有些看不清轨迹 根据规定建议改一些
00:53:845 (3) - ^
00:55:383 (5) - ^ 多少要露出来一些, 别全挡住
01:28:845 (1,1,2) - new combo略违和, 把两个(1)的NC去掉 然后在(2)上加上不是挺好吗
02:54:614 (1,1,1) - ^
03:29:229 (1) - 同00:55:383 (5)

all fixed thank u xier > <

star for now.
xierbaliti
抱歉我2了, 那几个.png还是有用的.
加回来然后我会泡

EDIT: OK, bubbled!
Gonzvlo
Hello,

[General]
  1. Timing: The current offset feels off, try 3066~3067ms (-9~10ms). I'm going to re-check the offset again tomorrow. (Don't forget to re-snap everything, including Kiai Time)
  2. Skin:
    1. The files: "default-comma, default-dot, default-x and default-percent" are unused files. Remove them, please.
    2. "Star2" shouldn't exceed the 52x50 limit.
    3. Besides that tiny circle in the middle of the "spinner-circle" there must be "something" else spinning, right now the "spinner-circle" can be considered invisible. Try increasing the opacity or add something to the circle itself, here's a suggestion.
    4. "Scorebar-bg" is overlapping with the score numbers, try adding a custom "scorebar-bg". You could try this one, here's the whole score-bar set..
    5. The current "hits" are really big, I strongly suggest to reduce its size to 80~85%, here's an example.
[Normal]
  1. The current settings are too high for this diff, if you want to keep this diff as the easiest one in the maps you should reduce them a bit. I'd suggest HP Drain and AR: -1 tick.
  2. 01:16:152 (1) - This post-spinner slider is bugged, the NC must be added manually.
  3. 01:17:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo is too long for the easiest diff. Perhaps NC on (4)?
Overall, nice song and mapset. Let me know when you're ready and I'll re-bubble.


EDIT:

I forgot to mention this:
Even though the FAQ doesn't consider "Spinner-osu, clear and spin" as part of the spinner set. You should add those elements (at least the template ones) because they are directly related to the spinner.
Gonzvlo
Hi, re-checking.

[General]
  1. Skin:Besides that tiny circle in the middle of the "spinner-circle" there must be "something" else spinning, right now the "spinner-circle" can be considered invisible. Try increasing the opacity or add something to the circle itself, here's a suggestion. (It hasn't been fixed yet).
  2. Tick Rate: Oops, I forgot to mention that "0.5" is no longer rankable. Change [Normal]'s Tick Rate to either "2" or "1".
Everything else looks fine, let me know when you're ready.

EDIT:

Okay, Re-bubbled.
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. Add sliderborder code to [Normal] diff. as you did in [Hard], please

Skin

  1. There are some white matte in your section-pass.png
  2. And your hit0.png is not at the centre, not a big deal anyway


    I fixed these two for you (If you want, just put them into your folder and replace original ones)
    Download: skin.rar

Rest are pretty fine, call me back when you done changes, and I'll rank it


Topic Starter
Axey

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. Add sliderborder code to [Normal] diff. as you did in [Hard], please

Skin

  1. There are some white matte in your section-pass.png
    [attachment=2:850b8]00.jpg[/attachment:850b8]
  2. And your hit0.png is not at the centre, not a big deal anyway
    [attachment=1:850b8]01.jpg[/attachment:850b8]

    I fixed these two for you (If you want, just put them into your folder and replace original ones)
    [attachment=0:850b8]skin.rar[/attachment:850b8]

Rest are pretty fine, call me back when you done changes, and I'll rank it
fixed all thanks
Breeze
Nice song and relax map, good use of custom hitsound
RANKED
Nymph
grats!
spboxer3
終於~
恭喜了
Shinkuu
阿黄神麻婆威武
wcx19911123
瞎了神mapper
Tony
yay!!! grats giiiiirl :3
Megurine Luka
GJ!

高考加油!
DarkRingSystem
哇!
好!
-Nanase-
好图给支持下
Topic Starter
Axey
thanks /
vivicat
恭喜阿黄 /
TTTTTTTTTTTT
恭喜~
anthonyyy0
Very relaxing map, thanks for making it.
JimsterG_old
Ah, it's a cool beatmap!
Juiicey
I can't download :( :( :(
Aleks719
We with Kurai checked offset here and decided to make online offset +10. Should be better now!
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