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kors k - Rave Cannon

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Reywateil
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 17, 2017 at 05:20:41

Artist: kors k
Title: Rave Cannon
Source: IIDX 24 SINOBUZ
Tags: iidx 24 sinobuz rave konami bemani
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3107kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5.06 stars, 687 notes)
Download: kors k - Rave Cannon
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rosario wknd
Friendly mods passing through
Feel free to disregard anything I say in favor of your personal preferences.

Another~~~
00:04:290 (7) - There is no audible sound here, I would remove this circle.
00:23:040 (1) - Remove this circle and put a slider at 00:22:946 like you did at 00:19:853 (5).
00:23:790 (1) - Same as ^^ but put a slider at 00:23:696.
00:44:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Shape of this stream is a little odd.
01:02:134 (3,4) - More of personal preference but I would change this to a short slider.
01:03:634 (2) - Remove this and move 01:03:728 (3) to the blue tick since there is no audible sound at 01:03:728.
01:05:134 (2) - Same as ^^^ but move 01:05:228 (3) to the blue tick.
Do the same with 01:06:634 (2), 01:08:134 (2), 01:09:634 (2), 01:11:134 (2), and 01:12:634 (2).
01:43:478 (1) - I would move this so it isn't directly on top of 01:43:103 (2).
01:55:478 (3) - ^^^
01:44:040 (5,6) - Transition between these two objects could flow better.

Hope these help my friend.
Dashing
Hey hey theirs some cool ideas in this map :) lets begin the mod.

First it sound quite just wondering if you can find a louder mp3. and 9,6 ar is fast for 5.02 make it 9.3 or 9.2 if you still want fast.

00:11:228 (1,2) - move slider one, so its more in the semi circle shaped slider to create more structure this makes maps look clean. but to keep with the flow keep distance snap on at 1.6.

00:14:040 (1) - I would just have it go stream than slider no jump things. 4 stream to slider and copy the same slider shape 2 times then make no shape.

00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - this is to weird move the 2nd one down to make a circle flow.

01:25:853 (4,5,1) - make the a back and forth jump.

01:55:478 (3) - maybe make this guy not under all the way but just so you can see it better.

nice song lots of cool things overall I like this map. :D :D :D ;)
Topic Starter
Reywateil
rosariovz's mod
Friendly mods passing through
Feel free to disregard anything I say in favor of your personal preferences.

Another~~~
00:04:290 (7) - There is no audible sound here, I would remove this circle.
00:23:040 (1) - Remove this circle and put a slider at 00:22:946 like you did at 00:19:853 (5).
00:23:790 (1) - Same as ^^ but put a slider at 00:23:696.
00:44:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Shape of this stream is a little odd.
01:02:134 (3,4) - More of personal preference but I would change this to a short slider.
01:03:634 (2) - Remove this and move 01:03:728 (3) to the blue tick since there is no audible sound at 01:03:728.
01:05:134 (2) - Same as ^^^ but move 01:05:228 (3) to the blue tick.
Do the same with 01:06:634 (2), 01:08:134 (2), 01:09:634 (2), 01:11:134 (2), and 01:12:634 (2).
01:43:478 (1) - I would move this so it isn't directly on top of 01:43:103 (2).
01:55:478 (3) - ^^^
01:44:040 (5,6) - Transition between these two objects could flow better.

Hope these help my friend.


00:04:290 (7) - There is no audible sound here, I would remove this circle.
Naah, it has sound for this note. Also removing ruins pattern idea.
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00:23:040 (1) - Remove this circle and put a slider at 00:22:946 like you did at 00:19:853 (5).
I don't think so. This part goes like:

Burst-note
Burst-slider
Burst-note
Burst-slider
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Long-slider
Long-slider
Burst-slider
Burst-slider
-
Long-slider
Burst-note
Burst-note
Long-slider

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00:44:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Shape of this stream is a little odd.
Fixed.
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01:02:134 (3,4) - More of personal preference but I would change this to a short slider.
It fits well with 2 notes too.
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01:03:634 (2) - Remove this and move 01:03:728 (3) to the blue tick since there is no audible sound at 01:03:728.
01:05:134 (2) - Same as ^^^ but move 01:05:228 (3) to the blue tick.

Ruins pattern idea, but i'll think about applying changes.
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01:43:478 (1) - I would move this so it isn't directly on top of 01:43:103 (2).
01:55:478 (3) - ^^^

i n t e n t i o n
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01:44:040 (5,6) - Transition between these two objects could flow better.
Fixed.
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Well, on some things i disagree, but kinda fixed. Thanks for your mod <3
Topic Starter
Reywateil
Dashing's mod
Hey hey theirs some cool ideas in this map :) lets begin the mod.

First it sound quite just wondering if you can find a louder mp3. and 9,6 ar is fast for 5.02 make it 9.3 or 9.2 if you still want fast.

00:11:228 (1,2) - move slider one, so its more in the semi circle shaped slider to create more structure this makes maps look clean. but to keep with the flow keep distance snap on at 1.6.

00:14:040 (1) - I would just have it go stream than slider no jump things. 4 stream to slider and copy the same slider shape 2 times then make no shape.

00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - this is to weird move the 2nd one down to make a circle flow.

01:25:853 (4,5,1) - make the a back and forth jump.

01:55:478 (3) - maybe make this guy not under all the way but just so you can see it better.

nice song lots of cool things overall I like this map. :D :D :D ;)


First it sound quite just wondering if you can find a louder mp3. and 9,6 ar is fast for 5.02 make it 9.3 or 9.2 if you still want fast.
Actually that's the first mp3 i found, because i was waiting it in official release, not as recorded song in IIDX. Also changed AR, thanks for noticing.
00:11:228 (1,2) - move slider one, so its more in the semi circle shaped slider to create more structure this makes maps look clean. but to keep with the flow keep distance snap on at 1.6.
Kinda fixed.
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00:14:040 (1) - I would just have it go stream than slider no jump things. 4 stream to slider and copy the same slider shape 2 times then make no shape.
Explained it in previous mod.
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00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - this is to weird move the 2nd one down to make a circle flow.
That was intention, i wanted to make it not as usual streams, rounded and straight... but i'll think about reworking this stream.
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01:25:853 (4,5,1) - make the a back and forth jump.
Fixed.
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01:55:478 (3) - maybe make this guy not under all the way but just so you can see it better.

01:43:103 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - and 01:55:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. They are same.
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Thanks a lot for your cool mod, fixed almost everything <3
Topic Starter
Reywateil
UPD:
First it sound quite just wondering if you can find a louder mp3. and 9,6 ar is fast for 5.02 make it 9.3 or 9.2 if you still want fast.
Actually that's the first mp3 i found, because i was waiting it in official release, not as recorded song in IIDX. Also changed AR, thanks for noticing.
I can increase the volume in this mp3 when I convert it to 192 kbps.
Avenging_Goose
fyi this is my first time modding anything

1. 00:31:103 (3,4,1) - make this an equilateral triangle because the sounds aren't very different from eachother

2. maybe use a sharper angle instead 00:32:228 (1,2,3,4) - 00:38:228 (1,2,3,4) -

3. 00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think this stream pattern makes sense in the context of this song. I think the way you did it here was better 00:43:478 (1,2,3,4) -
Topic Starter
Reywateil
Avenging_Goose's mod
fyi this is my first time modding anything

1. 00:31:103 (3,4,1) - make this an equilateral triangle because the sounds aren't very different from eachother

2. maybe use a sharper angle instead 00:32:228 (1,2,3,4) - 00:38:228 (1,2,3,4) -

3. 00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think this stream pattern makes sense in the context of this song. I think the way you did it here was better 00:43:478 (1,2,3,4) -


1. 00:31:103 (3,4,1) - make this an equilateral triangle because the sounds aren't very different from eachother
Kinda fixed.
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2. maybe use a sharper angle instead 00:32:228 (1,2,3,4) - 00:38:228 (1,2,3,4) -

Here's 2 same patterns: 00:31:665 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - and 00:33:165 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
And.. sharper angle doesn't look well to be honest...

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3. 00:37:478 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think this stream pattern makes sense in the context of this song. I think the way you did it here was better 00:43:478 (1,2,3,4) -
Hmm, fixed.
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Thanks a lot for your mod <3
Pickkle
from #modreqs

Another

00:01:932 (2,3) - maybe have a snappy jump going into 4 instead of stacking 2 and 3, just a recommendation.
00:09:432 (2,4,6) - don't overlap these, make the jumps different, looks kinda bad.
00:12:619 (4,1) - make the jump between 4 and 1 a little smaller.
00:19:838 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 432/175.
00:20:588 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 266/215.
00:29:494 (2,1) - stack
00:29:307 (1,3) - stack
00:36:057 (1) - this ruined the straight line stream, keep the stream straight on this one.
00:37:182 (1) - too big of a jump.
00:49:932 (5,2) - stack 2 on the slider end of 5.
00:55:932 (5) - move this up a lil.
01:02:213 (3,4) - change the circles into one slider.
01:22:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - space these out a tad bit.
01:28:744 (2,1) - stack.
01:39:432 (6,2) - blanket this more with the curved slider.

fun map, gl
Topic Starter
Reywateil
"Pickkle's mod
from #modreqs

Another

00:01:932 (2,3) - maybe have a snappy jump going into 4 instead of stacking 2 and 3, just a recommendation.
00:09:432 (2,4,6) - don't overlap these, make the jumps different, looks kinda bad.
00:12:619 (4,1) - make the jump between 4 and 1 a little smaller.
00:19:838 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 432/175.
00:20:588 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 266/215.
00:29:494 (2,1) - stack
00:29:307 (1,3) - stack
00:36:057 (1) - this ruined the straight line stream, keep the stream straight on this one.
00:37:182 (1) - too big of a jump.
00:49:932 (5,2) - stack 2 on the slider end of 5.
00:55:932 (5) - move this up a lil.
01:02:213 (3,4) - change the circles into one slider.
01:22:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - space these out a tad bit.
01:28:744 (2,1) - stack.
01:39:432 (6,2) - blanket this more with the curved slider.

fun map, gl


00:01:932 (2,3) - maybe have a snappy jump going into 4 instead of stacking 2 and 3, just a recommendation.
Naah, it's ok here.
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00:09:432 (2,4,6) - don't overlap these, make the jumps different, looks kinda bad.
Removed overlap only on 00:09:432 (2,4) - , because i don't wanna move slider from that place.
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00:12:619 (4,1) - make the jump between 4 and 1 a little smaller.
Fixed.
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00:19:838 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 432/175.
00:20:588 (4,5) - really awkward, move 5 to 266/215.

Naah, here's an intended pattern. Also it's well playable.
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00:29:494 (2,1) - stack
00:29:307 (1,3) - stack

Stack for misread? Naaah. Also stacking doesn't look good.
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00:36:057 (1) - this ruined the straight line stream, keep the stream straight on this one.
I don't want to make a straight stream, 00:36:057 (1) - begins a new pattern, so it's ok here.
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00:37:182 (1) - too big of a jump.
I don't think so.
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00:49:932 (5,2) - stack 2 on the slider end of 5.
Just no.
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00:55:932 (5) - move this up a lil.
Same as before.
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01:02:213 (3,4) - change the circles into one slider.
It won't work good in that way, seriosly.
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01:22:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - space these out a tad bit.
Stream is ok after this calm part.
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01:28:744 (2,1) - stack.
Stack won't be good at this point.
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01:39:432 (6,2) - blanket this more with the curved slider.
Why? Why do you think i should skip this 01:39:619 - and this 01:39:807 - sounds?
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Kinda fixed, thanks for your mod <3
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