shoujo byou - Gareki no Shuuon

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Doormat

Mir wrote:

Does Aoba need a new pair of glasses cuz that is not a bubble.
shhh i just woke up ;w;
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Kibbleru

Mir wrote:

Does Aoba need a new pair of glasses cuz that is not a bubble.
waiit what was it at first LOL
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Kibbleru
somebody will come eventually, believe
Nao Tomori
[edgy diffname]
00:15:304 (2,3) - blanket tbh

00:18:089 (1,2) - sounds better as 2 1/2 sliders tbh

00:24:946 (1,2) - blanket tbh

00:42:250 (2) - tbh circle and then starting at 00:42:545 - works better cuz its so strong

00:49:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - all these ncs are fucked, if u listen to the song the structure is 12 12 12 12 12 12 all the way through, ncing on a 2 makes no sense..

00:58:063 (2,4) - tbh mapping these as circles to tilt people would be funny

01:09:536 - dude why is this section so dense on rhythm ._. can u make some more 1/1 gaps or something

01:30:871 (1,2) - repeat slider makes more sense tbh cuz then all the clicks are on the violin thing

01:41:659 (1,2,3,4,1) - can u follow the other thing instead of the drums or whatever it'd be cooler imo

02:02:940 (1,2,3,4) - ?? what are these even following
plz nerf

02:03:531 (1,2,3) - felt a bit too big, even with slider leniency. i think ctrl g on 3 and moving 2 above it would be better

02:09:443 (3,4) - slider?

02:40:477 (1,2,3) - spaced quint wuld make more sense with ur hitsounding tbh

02:58:802 (3,4) - ctrl g all of these so that the clicks are on the piano? also theres no reason to put anything on the white tick in the first place just put 2 circles

03:58:063 (6) - justp ut the nc here instead, this is where the new phrase starts anyway

04:01:758 (1,2,3) - most intense guitars and its tiny comfortable jumps hello...

04:03:531 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh the contrast between the first and 2nd bursts isnt enough, make it like a sharp angle change too

04:12:398 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ngl this is rly ugly looking

04:17:718 (3,4) - too big. way too big.

04:46:686 (1,2) - same for all of these

04:49:043 (1,2,3) - follow ur hitsounding with ur clicks plz

04:50:447 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - angery

ok yea fix the 123 ncs and the stupid 1/4 jumps plz..
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Kibbleru

Naotoshi wrote:

[edgy diffname]
00:15:304 (2,3) - blanket tbh prefer makign the perfect triangle here

00:18:089 (1,2) - sounds better as 2 1/2 sliders tbh no real reason to break consistency here tho

00:24:946 (1,2) - blanket tbh okdad

00:42:250 (2) - tbh circle and then starting at 00:42:545 - works better cuz its so strong just gunna do something else

00:49:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - all these ncs are fucked, if u listen to the song the structure is 12 12 12 12 12 12 all the way through, ncing on a 2 makes no sense.. i hear them as 3's tho.. idk i don't hear them as 2s no matter what lol, i can understand if ur listening to the drums i guess

00:58:063 (2,4) - tbh mapping these as circles to tilt people would be funny ... lol

01:09:536 - dude why is this section so dense on rhythm ._. can u make some more 1/1 gaps or something not sure how to reply to this one,
i removed the one here i guess 01:10:773 -


01:30:871 (1,2) - repeat slider makes more sense tbh cuz then all the clicks are on the violin thing k

01:41:659 (1,2,3,4,1) - can u follow the other thing instead of the drums or whatever it'd be cooler imo the other thing is just 1/2s to me lol..
idk how following that wud be better than the drums here, also they're too quiet o-o


02:02:940 (1,2,3,4) - ?? what are these even following following the.. loud drums.. and.. climaxing melody?
plz nerf

02:03:531 (1,2,3) - felt a bit too big, even with slider leniency. i think ctrl g on 3 and moving 2 above it would be better i just moved them a bit closer physically. about the same amount i wud if i followed ur solution

02:09:443 (3,4) - slider? consistency 02:08:113 (2,3,4) -

02:40:477 (1,2,3) - spaced quint wuld make more sense with ur hitsounding tbh upscaled the spacing but i wanted to follow the design of 02:40:182 (1,2,3) -

02:58:802 (3,4) - ctrl g all of these so that the clicks are on the piano? also theres no reason to put anything on the white tick in the first place just put 2 circles how i designed was that the sliders were for the piano stuff and then the drum thingy are on circles 02:59:098 -

03:58:063 (6) - justp ut the nc here instead, this is where the new phrase starts anyway i just wanted to seperate between the drum part and guitar part

04:01:758 (1,2,3) - most intense guitars and its tiny comfortable jumps hello... did something and also nerfed prev jumps

04:03:531 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tbh the contrast between the first and 2nd bursts isnt enough, make it like a sharp angle change too okd

04:12:398 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ngl this is rly ugly looking i like it tho.. :<

04:17:718 (3,4) - too big. way too big. ctrl g'd 3

04:46:686 (1,2) - same for all of these try playing them. even i can do it pretty easily lol.. also the emphasis works well here

04:49:043 (1,2,3) - follow ur hitsounding with ur clicks plz k

04:50:447 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - angery above

ok yea fix the 123 ncs and the stupid 1/4 jumps plz..
idk about the 123 they just sound right to me rather 1212s however i listen to them. and my 1/4 jumps arent stupid >:(
Nao Tomori
its like
high note 00:49:640 -
low note 00:49:788 -
high note 00:49:935 -
low note 00:50:083 -
etc. so theyre in pairs.. therefore 1-2 makes sense
assuming you followed the violin that is

also 04:03:827 (1,2,3,4) - this is still kinda not a big difference imo xc
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Kibbleru

Naotoshi wrote:

its like
high note 00:49:640 -
low note 00:49:788 -
high note 00:49:935 -
low note 00:50:083 -
etc. so theyre in pairs.. therefore 1-2 makes sense
assuming you followed the violin that is
can i just remove the NC lol

also 04:03:827 (1,2,3,4) - this is still kinda not a big difference imo xc wut, i think any bigger wud just make it harder for me to do the blanket :S
also removed the triplets on 04:50:225 (1,2,3,4) - cuz it sounded kinda dumb
Nao Tomori
anime tiddies 😍 😍 😍
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Kibbleru

Naotoshi wrote:

anime tiddies 😍 😍 😍
thnksdad
Civil oath
Qualified ! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ShiraKai
wooooo grats!
IamKwaN
isn't romanised artist shoujo byou? it's on most album covers

IamKwaN
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Kibbleru
fixd
IamKwaN
back
Myxo

Reason for Disqualification



  1. 02:28:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This looks random and a bit ugly, it would better to use a pattern with equal spacing here because the sounds are all equally intense.
  2. 01:50:083 (3,1) - The flow is pretty bad here, after this jump (1)'s slideshape is weird to play. Try to change the slidershape so it fits the movement coming from the previous circles.
  3. 01:55:551 (7,8,1) - Broken flow again, the transition between (8) and (1) is way too sharp. I know it's meant to be sharp to stress (1) but it's a bit too much here.


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Good luck! sry for bad meme
Narcissu
i map it too but i cant find oninekoya's picture for BG ...

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