[General]
The tags only exists in [lunatic] diff.
also, [lunatic] diff has a different preview time. change it in notepad plz.
I think i can't complain much about diff spread (at least it reaches every need...), just saying it may be not so good.
[Normal]
00:29:245 (4,5) - spacing. in an easiest diff, i hope the spacing could be very consistent... even such placement is really common in higher diffs, personally i'll say a no here.
01:10:870 (2) - i know you probably want a "hidden" effects here. but would it be more beautiful if you move it a bit (such as, 3 grid up+1 grid left)
01:44:245 (4,5) - same spaing problem.
02:25:870 (2) - = =
[mizuki]
00:57:182 (6,8) - clap?
02:03:557 (11) - not a big thing, just personally i'd prefer to stack it on next (1)
02:12:182 (6,8) - same thing, clap?
nice.
[happy30]
01:59:995 - add note?
02:08:807 (1) - starts at a strange place imo (doesn't matter when playing but just my suggestion here): 02:08:807 - add a circle, move this slider 1/2 later, change 02:09:370 (2) to a circle at 02:09:557 - . just my sense of the lyric.
03:01:870 (3,4,1) - nazi thing.
03:53:995 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i think you seldom use jumps between circles in this diff... also te spacing is a bit large?
04:11:057 (3) - just stack? in your style such place is a default 1/2
[lunatic]
Lunatic? (L)
00:39:182 (7,8,9) - make the spacing consistent? (doens't matter when playing, just not good-looking)
01:50:620 (5,6) - add clap at the beginning?
02:17:995 (1,2,3,4) - just suggestion
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15957502:23:245 (4,5,6,7) - i don't think it fits = =
02:41:995 (3,4) - switch the place maybe?
03:53:995 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - dunno... maybe move it right and down a bit? after stack the spacing is not as far as you want.