Alan Walker - Alone · forum

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-01T02:27:55+00:00

Xayler wrote:
How hard the Insane must be? I reckon that your Insane is the hardest diff in this map?

Since I did Insane too bad, you can do Insane. I will do hard.
Update beatmap later...

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-06-08T01:05:01+00:00

Hello from my que
Sorry, I was too lazy these days
[General]

Don't search insane This music does not allow you to make them, better look for them Normal

[Lolinator's Easy]

Really SV-1.7 ? You understand that beginners can not play it, even with such bpm 97 pls use SV-1.2
You mix mapping with vocals and instruments. It is better not to do so,
00:42:007 (1,1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 4 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner.
More I will not mod this complexity
First check this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria#Easy
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
And remap after

[xfrac's Hard]

00:21:595 (1,3) - I think it's better not to do stack
00:29:017 (5,6,7,8,1) - What overmap?
00:33:966 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:38:914 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:42:316 (2) - You could do it here^
00:48:192 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should not cost, use one pattern in all places, make a variety
00:53:141 (3,4,5,6) - It is better to reduce the space, not so much
01:03:038 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Very big spase for a pretty calm song
01:05:512 (2,3,4,5) - Do reverse slider
01:26:234 (6,7) - Don't do stack, It is unclear to play maybe use ds with 0.5-0.7x
02:04:894 (3,4,5,6) - Very much broke flow
02:17:265 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better reverse slider
02:19:739 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:22:213 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:27:162 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:29:636 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:32:110 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's very hard to play, decrease spacing
Pls too check this
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria#Easy
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941

[Hyper]

00:17:265 (3) - maybe do so
00:21:285 (1,2,3,4) - Why?
00:27:780 (2,3,4) - Maybe at least do so?
00:33:347 (5,6) - Don't do stack
00:36:440 (5) - NC
00:45:718 (4,5,6) - It is better to make music with spacing
00:58:089 (4,5,6) - ^
00:53:141 (2,3,4) - Miss note
01:24:378 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - WTF This???
02:05:203 (4,5) - Broke flow
And you check this
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria#Easy
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941

It's all good luck with improve your skill in mapping

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-12T23:46:39+00:00

Hi~
I did GD for you, it is 5,14* (don't know why, because i can play it good, but i can play lower 4,5*)
I changed BG, because your BG doesn't fit the song. Your picture too dark. But song is happy, because she does not alone \(^o^)/ So i chose beautiful picture that and dark and happy. You can don't change BG in other diffs. But i just say my opinion. Here BG: https://cloud.mail.ru/public/KumL/xQH8UyvVy
Here map: https://cloud.mail.ru/public/73Eq/Htgp4qW6o
To my mind it is really cool

Aisha

837 posts

Joined December 2012

Aisha 2017-06-13T04:07:18+00:00

Can you please delete my diff? I didn't do it really good as I can. Really sorry for this but I'd rather not continue with this ;;

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-13T04:31:30+00:00

xfraczynho wrote:
Can you please delete my diff? I didn't do it really good as I can. Really sorry for this but I'd rather not continue with this ;;

I'll find another one : (

LimePixel

184 posts

Joined March 2015

LimePixel 2017-06-14T08:59:21+00:00

NM from my queue.

Since xfraczynho's diff is getting removed, I won't mod that one.
(If you've changed your mind i'd be happy to revisit and mod that as well)

[Lolinator's Easy]
(I think you should get used to distance snap if you're making Easy and Normal diffs.)

-00:30:873 (2,1) - Make them curve the same amount so they don't differ from each other
-00:33:347 (2,1) - Small overlap
-00:45:718 (3) - ok no.. way too fast for an Easy diff... Tone down the SV multiplier
-00:48:192 (3) - Same with this and other instances where this occurs
-01:16:646 (1,2,3) - Use same spacing
-01:20:357 (3,4) - Make slider shapes the same. No reason to change them

[Hyper]
-00:06:131 (2,3) - Distance the same amount as 00:04:894 (1,2) since it's the start of the song and it's still calm.
-00:27:780 (2,3) - Overlap under slider tail?
-00:34:430 (7) - Ok, gap between this and 00:33:966 (6) slider end is a tad too high. I suggest either making the spacing here smaller or make the spacing here 00:32:729 (3,4,5) bigger.
-00:41:079 (4,5,6,7) - Make this neater. Looks messy
-00:42:007 (7) - NC
-00:43:244 (1) - Remove NC
-00:44:481 (1,2) - Suggestions: Either stack these or make spacing a lot smaller since it a 1/4th gap.
-00:48:347 (4,5) - Make the same shape
-01:12:007 (1,2,1,2) - Absolutely no reason for this much spacing. The section is very calm.
-01:36:749 (2) - Ctrl+J and move back into place
-02:02:574 (6,7) - Make slider lines parallel
-02:04:894 (2,3,4,5,6) - Equal spacing between circles
-02:15:409 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+H and moving just a little to the right.
-02:19:894 (5,6) - Don't overlap, especially if you plan on using it just once.
-02:33:192 (8,1) - Fix blanket

[Elena's not alone :3]
-00:14:172 (8,1) - Stack correctly.
-00:24:069 (8,9,10,11) - Make jumps a bit smaller since it's still not kiai time. You can use big jumps like these in kiai sections
-00:31:182 (4,6) - Stack correctly.
-01:18:502 (5) - Remove middle anchor point. Unnecessary
-01:28:399 (2,3,4) - Make sure the slider body leads into the next 2 notes
-01:42:935 (4,6) - Stack correctly.

Hope this helps.

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-14T12:02:22+00:00

LimePixel wrote:
NM from my queue.

[Elena's not alone :3]
-00:14:172 (8,1) - Stack correctly. Fixed
-00:24:069 (8,9,10,11) - Make jumps a bit smaller since it's still not kiai time. You can use big jumps like these in kiai sections. Mmmm,
but i think that this part is strong, so i did jumps like that. But ok, fixed
-00:31:182 (4,6) - Stack correctly. Fixed
-01:18:502 (5) - Remove middle anchor point. Unnecessary I fixed it in another way. i just use this point)
-01:28:399 (2,3,4) - Make sure the slider body leads into the next 2 notes. Fixed
-01:42:935 (4,6) - Stack correctly. Fixed

Hope this helps.

Thanks for your mod from my side!

Updating!

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davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-14T14:59:12+00:00

LimePixel wrote:
NM from my queue.

Since xfraczynho's diff is getting removed, I won't mod that one.
(If you've changed your mind i'd be happy to revisit and mod that as well)

[Lolinator's Easy]
(I think you should get used to distance snap if you're making Easy and Normal diffs.)

-00:30:873 (2,1) - Make them curve the same amount so they don't differ from each other I think it's okay
-00:33:347 (2,1) - Small overlap Not really overlap
-00:45:718 (3) - ok no.. way too fast for an Easy diff... Tone down the SV multiplier Remapped
-00:48:192 (3) - Same with this and other instances where this occurs Remapped
-01:16:646 (1,2,3) - Use same spacing Not really sure you mean this
-01:20:357 (3,4) - Make slider shapes the same. No reason to change them Why?

[Hyper]
-00:06:131 (2,3) - Distance the same amount as 00:04:894 (1,2) since it's the start of the song and it's still calm. I think it's better do end timing at the red tick
-00:27:780 (2,3) - Overlap under slider tail? It's isn't unrankable
-00:34:430 (7) - Ok, gap between this and 00:33:966 (6) slider end is a tad too high. I suggest either making the spacing here smaller or make the spacing here 00:32:729 (3,4,5) bigger. Fixed
-00:41:079 (4,5,6,7) - Make this neater. Looks messy Ok
-00:42:007 (7) - NC Ok
-00:43:244 (1) - Remove NC Ok
-00:44:481 (1,2) - Suggestions: Either stack these or make spacing a lot smaller since it a 1/4th gap. Ok, stacked
-00:48:347 (4,5) - Make the same shape Wait? Why?
-01:12:007 (1,2,1,2) - Absolutely no reason for this much spacing. The section is very calm. Oy, this big spacing isn't a reason for calm part.
I put some notes for vocal
-01:36:749 (2) - Ctrl+J and move back into place Sure
-02:02:574 (6,7) - Make slider lines parallel Ok, fixed to make it parallel
-02:04:894 (2,3,4,5,6) - Equal spacing between circles Ok
-02:15:409 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+H and moving just a little to the right. Good, changed
-02:19:894 (5,6) - Don't overlap, especially if you plan on using it just once. Move back number 6 a bit
-02:33:192 (8,1) - Fix blanket

Hope this helps.

Yea. It helps me. Thanks

Gokateigo

289 posts

Joined April 2016

Gokateigo 2017-06-15T15:05:51+00:00

Hi from my q

modderino

Set :

There is an huge diff gap between light insane and Not Alone diff, fix it

Not Alone :

Remove the whistle sound here 00:08:605 (4) - and here 00:18:502 (6) -
00:23:450 (7) - NC
00:43:399 (2,3) - These circles are too close, the jump pattern do Large-Small-Large-Large... because of it and there isn't any change in the drums
00:45:718 (4,5) - larger spacing ?
00:48:192 (4,5) - ^
00:53:141 (4,5) - ^
00:54:223 (9,1) - this jump is too big (other jumps of htis pattern are around 3.5ds and this one is almost 5)
00:55:615 (5,6) - larger spacing
00:58:089 (4,5) - ^
01:00:564 (4,5) - ^
01:03:038 (4,5) - ^
01:57:471 (4,5) - I'm too lazy to do this with all the similar sounds, I think you get the point xd

Light Insane :

00:14:172 (4,5,1) - do a perfect triangle with this, it'll look better
00:48:347 (4,5) - Same thig with Not Alone diff, map this sound like this one 00:45:873 (5,6) - it's fine for a light insane diff
01:01:801 (1) - do a better curve with this
01:12:162 (2) - overlap with the tail of this 01:09:223 (5) -
01:24:378 (4) - NC
01:24:997 (5) - NC
01:25:615 (6) - NC
01:26:234 (7) - NC (new SV for all the sliders)
01:54:997 (2,3,4,5) - that's a really big jump for a light insane, fix it
02:04:584 (6) - or 02:04:894 (7) - NC
02:14:017 (4,5) - the "stream" starts as a curve and ends as a straight line, do a curve it'll look better
02:19:739 (4,5,6,7,8) - this curve can be better
02:25:306 (5) - ctrl+g

GL

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-15T15:57:12+00:00

Gokateigo wrote:
Hi from my q
Not Alone :
Remove the whistle sound here 00:08:605 (4) - and here 00:18:502 (6) - No, i use whystle in big yellow ticks
00:23:450 (7) - NC No, because it's continue of phrase
00:43:399 (2,3) - These circles are too close, the jump pattern do Large-Small-Large-Large... because of it and there isn't any change in the drums Oh, yes, fixed
00:45:718 (4,5) - larger spacing ?
00:48:192 (4,5) - ^
00:53:141 (4,5) - ^
00:54:223 (9,1) - this jump is too big (other jumps of htis pattern are around 3.5ds and this one is almost 5) Sure, fixed
00:55:615 (5,6) - larger spacing
00:58:089 (4,5) - ^
01:00:564 (4,5) - ^
01:03:038 (4,5) - ^
01:57:471 (4,5) - I'm too lazy to do this with all the similar sounds, I think you get the point xd
00:24:687 - from here to the end spacing 2x, so it's good. In other way, SV changes, so distance also changes.

Thanks for your mod!)

Updating!

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davidminh0111

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davidminh0111 2017-06-16T04:56:28+00:00

Gokateigo wrote:
Hi from my q
modderino
Set :
There is an huge diff gap between light insane and Not Alone diff, fix it I'm doing Insane...
Light Insane :
00:14:172 (4,5,1) - do a perfect triangle with this, it'll look better Ok
00:48:347 (4,5) - Same thig with Not Alone diff, map this sound like this one 00:45:873 (5,6) - it's fine for a light insane diff Why? It's fine to me Imo
01:01:801 (1) - do a better curve with this Ok
01:12:162 (2) - overlap with the tail of this 01:09:223 (5) - Fixed overlap
01:24:378 (4) - NC
01:24:997 (5) - NC[
01:25:615 (6) - NC
01:26:234 (7) - NC (new SV for all the sliders) Ok
01:54:997 (2,3,4,5) - that's a really big jump for a light insane, fix it Well, Imo, that big gap there will be complicated for light insane because they will do better more when they play better
02:04:584 (6) - or 02:04:894 (7) - NC Wait? Why?
02:14:017 (4,5) - the "stream" starts as a curve and ends as a straight line, do a curve it'll look better Ok
02:19:739 (4,5,6,7,8) - this curve can be better Fixed
02:25:306 (5) - ctrl+gOk

GL

Thanks for your mod

flake

713 posts

Joined December 2015

flake 2017-06-18T10:21:27+00:00

Hello, NM!

Loli's Easy

00:04:894 - to 00:19:739 - , use more straightforward and understandable slidershapes. It could be hard to comprehend for new players to follow complex shapes.

Also, avoid slider only sections. Sliders can be more hard to understand than circles for new players.

00:34:584 (1) - 's slider end is touching 00:33:347 (2) - 's slider head. You can space 00:34:584 (1) - further from 00:33:347 (2) - .

00:35:821 (2) - 's slider head is touching 00:37:058 (1) - 's slider body.

The first kiai has a lot of inconsistencies, in terms of spacing and angles.

Let's look at 00:44:481 (1,2,3,4) - . It has circular flow.

While 00:46:955 (1,2,3,4) - , has Linear flow, and has some spacing inconsistencies.

00:46:955 (1,2) - has a pretty big spacing from each other, then spacing decreases on 00:47:574 (2,3) - , even if they have the same distance.

00:49:430 (1,2,3,4) - uses large spacing from each other, and then on 00:50:048 (2,3,4) - the large spacing decreases.

I noticed the idea behind it is that when there's a slider, the spacing decreases. But then, the next one.

This time, 00:51:904 (1,2,3) - is somewhat different from the others now. 00:51:904 (1,2) - Has smaller spacing than 00:52:522 (2,3) - , and 00:52:522 (2,3) - has higher spacing than those. This breaks the idea that slider = spacing decrease.

So after the "I know I'm not alone" the song changes, and so does the pattern. I've noticed that the pattern is 1/1 slider followed by a circle sticking next to a 1/2 slider.

You break the pattern on 01:00:564 (2,3) - , where the circle and 1/2 slider are distanced from each other.

01:03:038 (2,3,4) and 02:14:790 (2,3,4) - The white ticks has important sounds, I suggest you change the design to something like this:

open me!

01:06:749 (1,1) - Use simpler and more understandable slidershapes.

02:07:368 (2,3) - and 02:12:316 (2,3) -, I've mentioned these too, following the same idea of circle sticking to 1/2 slider.

For the second and third kiai, there are also a lot of spacing and flow inconsistencies, though there are also a few complex slider shapes like 02:11:079 (1) - ,02:08:605 (1) - ,02:28:399 (1) - , 02:30:873 (1) - , 02:33:347 (1) - and other more if I haven't mentioned.

I do think I can only mod the easy difficulty as of now, Good luck!

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-18T15:08:10+00:00

Flake wrote:
Hello, NM!

Loli's Easy

00:04:894 - to 00:19:739 - , use more straightforward and understandable slidershapes. It could be hard to comprehend for new players to follow complex shapes.

Also, avoid slider only sections. Sliders can be more hard to understand than circles for new players.

00:34:584 (1) - 's slider end is touching 00:33:347 (2) - 's slider head. You can space 00:34:584 (1) - further from 00:33:347 (2) - .

00:35:821 (2) - 's slider head is touching 00:37:058 (1) - 's slider body.

The first kiai has a lot of inconsistencies, in terms of spacing and angles.

Let's look at 00:44:481 (1,2,3,4) - . It has circular flow.

While 00:46:955 (1,2,3,4) - , has Linear flow, and has some spacing inconsistencies.

00:46:955 (1,2) - has a pretty big spacing from each other, then spacing decreases on 00:47:574 (2,3) - , even if they have the same distance.

00:49:430 (1,2,3,4) - uses large spacing from each other, and then on 00:50:048 (2,3,4) - the large spacing decreases.

I noticed the idea behind it is that when there's a slider, the spacing decreases. But then, the next one.

This time, 00:51:904 (1,2,3) - is somewhat different from the others now. 00:51:904 (1,2) - Has smaller spacing than 00:52:522 (2,3) - , and 00:52:522 (2,3) - has higher spacing than those. This breaks the idea that slider = spacing decrease.

So after the "I know I'm not alone" the song changes, and so does the pattern. I've noticed that the pattern is 1/1 slider followed by a circle sticking next to a 1/2 slider.

You break the pattern on 01:00:564 (2,3) - , where the circle and 1/2 slider are distanced from each other.

01:03:038 (2,3,4) and 02:14:790 (2,3,4) - The white ticks has important sounds, I suggest you change the design to something like this:

open me!

01:06:749 (1,1) - Use simpler and more understandable slidershapes.

02:07:368 (2,3) - and 02:12:316 (2,3) -, I've mentioned these too, following the same idea of circle sticking to 1/2 slider.

For the second and third kiai, there are also a lot of spacing and flow inconsistencies, though there are also a few complex slider shapes like 02:11:079 (1) - ,02:08:605 (1) - ,02:28:399 (1) - , 02:30:873 (1) - , 02:33:347 (1) - and other more if I haven't mentioned.

I do think I can only mod the easy difficulty as of now, Good luck!

everything fixed. Thanks

Nightsky

93 posts

Joined March 2015

Nightsky 2017-06-18T17:46:09+00:00

From my modding queue

Elene's Not Alone

- 00:12:316 (5) - NC
- 00:14:172 (8) - ^
- 00:23:450 (7) - ^
- 00:24:069 (8,9,10,11,1) - Distance between these objects seems random, fix this please.
- 00:53:759 (6) - NC
- 01:13:244 (5) - ^
- 01:23:141 (5) - ^
- 02:29:842 (4,5,6,7,8) - The stacks and the single note are a bit too far from eachother and the angle of the pattern is too high, place the notes either closer to eachother or in a triangle if you want.
- Other than that, some patterns need some balancing in their distance, but not a big issue imo.

Interesting map.
Good luck!

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-20T18:48:39+00:00

Nightsky wrote:
From my modding queue

Elene's Not Alone

- 00:12:316 (5) - NC No, because it's the end of the phrase. And at the begining i used Nc in the second big yellow tick
- 00:14:172 (8) - ^ Nc in big yellow tick
- 00:23:450 (7) - ^ Agree, it's good)
- 00:24:069 (8,9,10,11,1) - Distance between these objects seems random, fix this please. It's random, and what? It's insane so it's cool
- 00:53:759 (6) - NC No, no reason
- 01:13:244 (5) - ^ Also, i can't see the reason, why here nc
- 01:23:141 (5) - ^ ^
- 02:29:842 (4,5,6,7,8) - The stacks and the single note are a bit too far from eachother and the angle of the pattern is too high, place the notes either closer to eachother or in a triangle if you want. Fixed
- Other than that, some patterns need some balancing in their distance, but not a big issue imo.

Interesting map. Thank you
Good luck!

Thanks for your mod)

Updating!

osu file format v14

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EpilepsyWarning: 1
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GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.2

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TitleUnicode:Alone
Artist:Alan Walker
ArtistUnicode:Alan Walker
Creator:davidminh0111
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elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-20T21:40:03+00:00

Here SB:https://cloud.mail.ru/public/3z7q/vE3TzASt6
Here new colours and so update of this diff, and pictures, and bg (add new BG, it's for SB): https://cloud.mail.ru/public/KjTT/hbZ6MssiX
And also, i'm thinking about lyrics (it will be down, but i didn't do it now)...
I think that if light (purple) will move, it will be cool, but it takes many time....
I something will be wrong PM me)
So i will think more about sb, and it will be developing. Now i think that it's just draft(

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-06-21T02:56:00+00:00

from queue, being lazy lately lol

[Loli Easy]
Ignore ^

Ah, I just see something wrong from the beginning, as others diss uses 0,5x or so SV, you still use 1x SV which leads it doesnt sync corrrectly with the song, as the song preceed, it just feels weird it looks so fast for a slow song, especially for an easy so take a lower SV or at least use 0,5x at the beginning.
also read my explaination
and dont forget to use DS.

img

not going to mod this diff couse of ^

[Normal]

AiMod

o ye boi fix spacing

As you're following the vocal, why.. 00:21:904 (1,2,3) - ? and 00:22:832 (3) - has no sound lol

Lets talk about flow.
As this is a Normal, probaly an anti flow really unnecessary, BUT, if the time and condition is supported, yeah you can do an anti flow, so lets see an example, 00:25:924 (2,3) - this, this is somehow really anti flow, just look at this image in the box

image

It does really anti flow, the song and condition isn't supported but you force it to do an anti flow, so what are you going to do? here is some example that you can do better.

image

looks really much better, right? now go on to your diff, fix something like this.

Now lets talk about aesthetic, for a simple example, 00:29:636 (1,2) - this, is a bit (im sorry for being rude) bad, so lets change it to something better.

image

this looks really better, yeah of course you need to edit other part of the song since the spacing will be different and so.

Now about clickable thingy in Normal diff.
mostly, a 4/1 (the one which is higher than other) is always clickable, its a rare thing that a 4/1 is not clickable, so please made it clickable on the diff.

Overlapping, overlap is fine, but in some case, like Easy and Normal, you shouldn't do that, since its mostly for a newbies, which may couse readable issues, and in this case, overlap things in your diff is also an anti flow too, which make it way more bad in both aesthetic and flow.

Be aware of sharp angles while creating a slider, it may looks really bad, for example. 00:35:821 (3) - this is a good example for you, to change it with something better, take a look at beatmaps with good sliderart like Boogie, and see the editor, sure it looks so hard to create, but yeah.. thats the main point of it.

I think I have mention most problems.

for other diffs, refer to my explaination above.

[Elena]
for some parts, refer to my explaination too.

00:11:543 (1,2,3,4) - unnecessary stream, no sound.
00:24:069 (8,9,10,11,1) - unpatterned jumps, also unnecessary imo, something like a star shape will be better.
00:43:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - jumps really feels so random, please create a shape and if you can, pattern it, so it looks way much better.
01:13:244 (5,6,7,8,9) - unnecessary stream, no sound.
01:35:822 (2,3,4,5,1) - again

sorry if this sounds rude.
but anyway gl.

[Mad]

415 posts

Joined June 2014

[Mad] 2017-06-21T05:23:20+00:00

Hello! From my modding queue, sorry i'm so late

:

[Light Insane]

A lot of the sliders and patterns would look cleaner if you used the same shapes copy pasted instead of attempting to make the same shapes by hand
00:31:646 (7) - Not sure what this slider head is emphasizing
00:44:481 - This section is in 1/6, not 1/4
01:56:234 - ^
00:45:873 (5,6) - Feels wierd to play these on the offbeat
00:48:347 (4,5) - ^
01:12:007 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why the spacing increased so much here compared to 01:06:749 (1,2,3)
01:13:244 (3,4,1,2,3) - The important sounds of these sliders are on the tails
01:33:656 (7,8,9) - Shapes like this would look a lot cleaner if they werent overlapping
01:37:522 (3,4) - 1 ends on 1/4 beat and the other one starts on a 1/6 offbeat, they should either be both 1/6 or both 1/4
01:39:997 (4,5,6) - ^ if youre using 1/12 time, dont
01:43:347 (5) - slider doesnt start on any sound
01:46:028 (6,7,1) - a 5 note melody but you only map 3, and 1/4 instead of 1/6
01:50:357 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - wat. the placing is completely random, and most of them arent on important sounds
01:59:945 (4,5,6) - hitsounds xd

[Insane]

Same problem as with Light Insane, sliders and patterns would look better if copy pasted
00:12:316 (3) - This could be cleaner if it was rotated the same amount that the first one was
00:21:285 (1) - This should be the same spacing from 00:21:904 (3) as 00:21:595 (2) is, it would look cleaner
00:23:759 (3,4) - Not sure what these are mapped to
00:42:316 (2,3) - ^ + theres some cool drum stuff thats being ignored here
00:45:718 (4,5,6,7,8) - This uses 1/6 timing, not 1/4, this is a problem with the other chorus section aswell
01:13:863 (3,1,2) - The strong sounds of these sliders are on the tails instead of the heads, i'd probably turn 01:13:863 (3) into a 1/4 slider then add another slider
01:15:718 (3,4,5,1) - Weird that the spacing here is different when it's the same intensity, also it is drastically different than 01:12:007 (1,2,1,2)
01:54:069 (2) - Weird that theres nothing after this slider when there's still stuff hapenning in the vocals and the drum beat

[Elena's Not Alone]

Same as with insane, i think some of the patterns would look a lot cleaner if the sliders were copy, pasted, and rotated instead of being hand drawn
00:44:790 (2) - I'd map this to 1/6 beat since there isn't anything happening on the 1/4 beat in the middle of the slider
00:53:759 (6,7,8,9,1) - These jumps feel weird to me since there isn't really anything that they're mapped to, if you wanted jumps here i'd map them in 1/6

GL!

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-21T08:17:23+00:00

Error- wrote:
from queue, being lazy lately lol

[Elena]better

00:11:543 (1,2,3,4) - unnecessary stream, no sound. 'I-wan-na-kno-w~
00:24:069 (8,9,10,11,1) - unpatterned jumps, also unnecessary imo, something like a star shape will be better. Fixed
00:43:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - jumps really feels so random, please create a shape and if you can, pattern it, so it looks way much better. It's not needed of shape, here it is chaos, and it fits the music
01:13:244 (5,6,7,8,9) - unnecessary stream, no sound. 'i-wan-na~-wa~-ke'
01:35:822 (2,3,4,5,1) - again Ok, shape star..done

sorry if this sounds rude.
but anyway gl.

Thank you!)

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-21T08:22:36+00:00

Shogud wrote:
Hello! From my modding queue, sorry i'm so late :

[Elena's Not Alone]
Same as with insane, i think some of the patterns would look a lot cleaner if the sliders were copy, pasted, and rotated instead of being hand drawn
00:44:790 (2) - I'd map this to 1/6 beat since there isn't anything happening on the 1/4 beat in the middle of the slider No, it's for music...
00:53:759 (6,7,8,9,1) - These jumps feel weird to me since there isn't really anything that they're mapped to, if you wanted jumps here i'd map them in 1/6 You like 1/6 sound)))) Anyway It's good now

GL!

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Mombei

106 posts

Joined June 2014

Mombei 2017-06-21T10:17:02+00:00

From my modding queue

[General]

Remove the epilepsy warning for diffs. There are no storybards.
Light Insane shows up not having a background.

[Lolinator's Easy]

HP drain shouldn't be higher than 3
00:12:007 (3) - This isn't really landing on any sound, it should start on a white tick and be fixed up accordingly
00:21:285 (1) - Use of 1/2 patterns is not recommended for Easy difficulties
00:39:533 (1,2) - 00:45:718 (3,4) - 00:48:192 (3,4) - etc. ^
Spacing is often inconsistent, or varies between patterns. You should use DS for Easy difficulties.
Object placement is mostly arbitrary and it seems to lack any criteria behind it whatsoever

Basically, this barely looks like an Easy at all rhythm-wise and it's poor in other aspects. tl;dr - remap

[Normal]

Approach rate should be between 4 and 6. 7 is too high.
00:12:007 (1) - Same as the easy - It makes no sense to skip over 00:11:698 - to map a slider that has a reverse where there's no sound. A possible rhythm choice here would be something like this. It's not great but at least it makes sense.
00:21:904 (1,2) - Exact. Same.
00:48:192 (3,4,1) - The overlap between 3 and 4 looks bad and 3 play very poorly into 4 which sort of plays into 1. Flow is all over the place
01:13:399 (4) - 1/2s in Easies and 1/4s in normals? I advise you take a read at the ranking criteria standard difficulty-specific rules and guidelines.
The map barely changes at all throughout so everything I said so far applies for the rest of the map.

[Hyper]

This acts as the Hard in the set. It's unintuitive to mix std diff names with BBDX diff names (Advanced,Hyper,Another etc.). I advise you rename it to Hard.
AR should be between 6 and 8
00:16:028 (2) - These claps are random and out of place. Hitsounding doesn't fit this calm section of the map.
00:21:285 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:24:997 (2,3,4) - ^
00:26:852 (5) - ^
00:45:718 (4,5,6) - These sounds are not 1/4. They are 1/3. Remap this pattern accordingly
Same for the rest of the kiai
01:24:378 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This progression isn't supported by the song's intensity and is too extreme for an Hard difficulty.
This applies to the second half of the map aswell.

[Light Insane]

This difficulty has the same SR as the Hyper. Delete either one, since they don't contribute to a well-designed spread.

[Insane]

This difficulty presents the same issues as the Hard and all the other difficulties. Object placement is vague, there is no criteria behind patterns, the 1/3 patterns in the kiai are mapped as 1/4. I honestly don't see the use of pointing out the same mistakes again and time again. Use the other difficulties for reference.

[Elena's Not Alone]

00:24:223 (9) - This doesn't exist

This is actually sort of fine. I don't feel like saying anything.

In general: move on. You won't get this map ranked at a satisfying quality unless you work on other maps and come back to this way later. It's too unpolished, it lacks structure; this is the type of map to get 100+ star priority and still be bad. Even the most basic of basics are missing. You ought to work on other maps and improve as a mapper before you even attempt to rank something.

You should really use this playlist as reference material ; it has helped me greatly and I believe it will help you aswell.
Also, play more. Player experience, while not essential, when combined with a knowledge of mapping theory, can forge great mappers.

Thank you for using my queue!

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-21T11:18:49+00:00

Mombei wrote:
From my modding queue

[General]
Remove the epilepsy warning for diffs. There are no storybards. There is storyboard... And it's needed warning!
Light Insane shows up not having a background.
[Elena's Not Alone]
00:24:223 (9) - This doesn't exist It's fixed in higher post, it's just not update for now
This is actually sort of fine. I don't feel like saying anything.

Thank you)

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-22T02:01:09+00:00

Fixed everything from Error-

No comment = Fixed

Shogud wrote:
Hello! From my modding queue, sorry i'm so late :

[Light Insane]
A lot of the sliders and patterns would look cleaner if you used the same shapes copy pasted instead of attempting to make the same shapes by hand
00:31:646 (7) - Not sure what this slider head is emphasizing
00:44:481 - This section is in 1/6, not 1/4 Why should it be 1/6, I think it's look good
01:56:234 - ^ ^
00:45:873 (5,6) - Feels wierd to play these on the offbeat
00:48:347 (4,5) - ^
01:12:007 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why the spacing increased so much here compared to 01:06:749 (1,2,3) To play more complicated
01:13:244 (3,4,1,2,3) - The important sounds of these sliders are on the tails
01:33:656 (7,8,9) - Shapes like this would look a lot cleaner if they werent overlappingIt's for clicking a triangle
01:37:522 (3,4) - 1 ends on 1/4 beat and the other one starts on a 1/6 offbeat, they should either be both 1/6 or both 1/4
01:39:997 (4,5,6) - ^ if youre using 1/12 time, dont
01:43:347 (5) - slider doesnt start on any sound
01:46:028 (6,7,1) - a 5 note melody but you only map 3, and 1/4 instead of 1/6
01:50:357 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - wat. the placing is completely random, and most of them arent on important sounds
01:59:945 (4,5,6) - hitsounds xd

[Insane]
Same problem as with Light Insane, sliders and patterns would look better if copy pasted
00:12:316 (3) - This could be cleaner if it was rotated the same amount that the first one was
00:21:285 (1) - This should be the same spacing from 00:21:904 (3) as 00:21:595 (2) is, it would look cleaner
00:23:759 (3,4) - Not sure what these are mapped to
00:42:316 (2,3) - ^ + theres some cool drum stuff thats being ignored here
00:45:718 (4,5,6,7,8) - This uses 1/6 timing, not 1/4, this is a problem with the other chorus section aswell
01:13:863 (3,1,2) - The strong sounds of these sliders are on the tails instead of the heads, i'd probably turn 01:13:863 (3) into a 1/4 slider then add another slider Why? As each slider contains a strong emphasize
01:15:718 (3,4,5,1) - Weird that the spacing here is different when it's the same intensity, also it is drastically different than 01:12:007 (1,2,1,2)
01:54:069 (2) - Weird that theres nothing after this slider when there's still stuff hapenning in the vocals and the drum beat

GL!

Thanks

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2017-06-23T22:18:25+00:00

Hello!

Wew, amazing song choice, sir! Here's a free star! It wasn't easy for anyone to make me shoot a star for their maps ;p
[- -

General - -]

- Epilepsy warning is not enabled on the Hyper difficulty.
- No plans for adding tags? Or intended?
- The difficulty spread gap, especially on the last three difficulties, is quite concerning and debatable. I'm not absolutely sure about it, but the spread is not really executed properly. Pretty much a spread of 3.46 > 3.91 > 5.1 star rating is not consecutive enough which makes quite a jump though. But I'll leave that to you, if you recall it something else.
- Are you sure you've created a storyboard out of this beatmap? Or is it still WIP? I'm just curious why there isn't any .osb file for the unused storyboard elements and files you have in the beatmap folder.

[- -

Normal - -]

00:07:368 (3) - Try polishing this slider a little it, especially on the two curves. Right now, currently they look a bit sloppy which can be improved better somehow.
00:12:007 (1) - This sounds pretty offbeat as the slider head follows up the vocals, but the rest of its body based on the rhythm composition doesn't follow anything. I think a long slider should fit here rather than a repeat slider in my opinion.
00:22:213 (1,2,3,1) - 00:28:399 (4,5,1,2) - The whole distance spacing is really inconsistent, as if it weren't for a normal difficulty. I would suggest rebalance the distance spacing by 1.1x, which is much preferred, in-between the notes to represent a greater visuals for every rhythms. This isn't the only issue around, there are more further.
00:38:296 (6,7,1) - The structure here seems to be quite linear, and doesn't really indicate the emphasis pretty well. The same issue for the distance spacing counting with 00:37:058 (4,5) -.
00:48:192 (3,4) - I don't mind overlaps, in exceptions of the awkward ones. Just like this one, the tiny bit of overlap between the reverse arrow of the slider tail merely touched the borders of the next circle. You'll probably be needed to split them up to keep them clear and avoid weird issue in aesthetics.

[- -

Hyper - -]

- I didn't want to mention every single distance spacing issues and stuff about it, which is literally everywhere I hover around the set. So, this may be one of the important objectives you'll have later on. Using the tool on your right of the screen, that's called "Distance Snap", is essential for your mapping. You might need to recheck your difficulties for any possible issues, because right now... I'll probably point out other subjective issues.
00:21:801 - Remove this unused inherited green point. There's no point in adding one on an empty section.
00:29:636 (1,2,3) - The sliders here could possibly be a little more polished somehow, like using some rotations maybe? You can really do something like this though.
00:49:430 (1,2) - Well, there isn't any 1/4 notes landing on the same song track, yet. You might still keep up by reusing the rhythm composition you used previously on 00:44:481 (1,2,3) - or 00:46:955 (1,2) - .
01:09:223 (5,1,2,1,2,1) - 01:24:378 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'm pretty sure the new combos here doesn't really look consistent through this section in my point of view. Might swap a few of them, or add a new combo on the long slider (5) and remove the next one. Just... try to start a combo on every strong downbeat. That is all.
01:30:254 (1,2,3) - Probably the same thing for the awkward overlapping as in the previous difficulty.

[- -

Elena - -]

00:08:605 (4) - Well, you've nearly pulled it off. But why not try to make a few tweaks for this slider's slider points and anchors? You might end up with something like this as a sample for you.
00:23:450 (7) - Why is this slider snapped to 1/6? You probably done them on some parts that the song track asked for one, but here... its really out of place. The emphasis isn't really that enough either. So I'd suggest snapping it to 1/4 on tail. It's really doable. And... you haven't done it on 01:35:203 (1) - either.
00:43:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't really understand the structure here, to be honest. The build-up section doesn't seem to be having an increase intensity as the previous track. Which seems to nearly have the same audibility, so it may be that. I would recommend using those circles into something like, a back-and-forth jumps or create a polygon shape with it here. Many ways to improve the placements of the notes here.
00:53:914 (7,9) - Alright, starting from these two... They don't actually follow a beat or something, so this is technically overmapped. You might wanna remove the two circles, or give it another use other than this part.
01:21:595 (1) - Uhmm, any other way to counter this than just adding a single straight slider for a curved flow here? Yeah, maybe just curve the slider for a smoother flowing towards the next few circles. It's not a must-fix suggestion anyways.
01:32:729 (2) - Well, in the middle of that slider, there's this 01:32:883 - treble voice sound that kinda landed on this blue tick. So maybe replacing this slider into a slider kick + circle, or a repeat slider should help land here as well.

Euuugghh, nothing really... You could try looking over the difficulties and find several issues that I mentioned here. They're just actual errors on the set, so the rest will be yours to improve the map in order to be in its quality state. Well, sorry if I couldn't help much... Was having some thoughts you might be able to improve the set yourselves ;p
That should probably be it for now. Best of luck!

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

Topic Starter

davidminh0111 2017-06-24T14:25:23+00:00

Hey, thanks for your mod, didn't have much time to take a look

Mombei wrote:
From my modding queue

[General]
Remove the epilepsy warning for diffs. There are no storybards. Will later
Light Insane shows up not having a background.Re download them. I added

[Lolinator's Easy]
HP drain shouldn't be higher than 3 Fixed
00:12:007 (3) - This isn't really landing on any sound, it should start on a white tick and be fixed up accordinglyFixed
00:21:285 (1) - Use of 1/2 patterns is not recommended for Easy difficultiesFixed
00:39:533 (1,2) - 00:45:718 (3,4) - 00:48:192 (3,4) - etc. ^
Spacing is often inconsistent, or varies between patterns. You should use DS for Easy difficulties.
Object placement is mostly arbitrary and it seems to lack any criteria behind it whatsoever

Basically, this barely looks like an Easy at all rhythm-wise and it's poor in other aspects. tl;dr - remap
[Normal]
Approach rate should be between 4 and 6. 7 is too high.Fixed
00:12:007 (1) - Same as the easy - It makes no sense to skip over 00:11:698 - to map a slider that has a reverse where there's no sound. A possible rhythm choice here would be something like this. It's not great but at least it makes sense.Fixed
00:21:904 (1,2) - Exact. Same.Fixed
00:48:192 (3,4,1) - The overlap between 3 and 4 looks bad and 3 play very poorly into 4 which sort of plays into 1. Flow is all over the placeFixed
01:13:399 (4) - 1/2s in Easies and 1/4s in normals? I advise you take a read at the ranking criteria standard difficulty-specific rules and guidelines.
The map barely changes at all throughout so everything I said so far applies for the rest of the map.Fixed
[Hyper]
This acts as the Hard in the set. It's unintuitive to mix std diff names with BBDX diff names (Advanced,Hyper,Another etc.). I advise you rename it to Hard.
AR should be between 6 and 8
00:16:028 (2) - These claps are random and out of place. Hitsounding doesn't fit this calm section of the map.Fixed
00:21:285 (1,2,3,4) - ^Fixed
00:24:997 (2,3,4) - ^Fixed
00:26:852 (5) - ^Fixed
00:45:718 (4,5,6) - These sounds are not 1/4. They are 1/3. Remap this pattern accordingly Fixed
Same for the rest of the kiaiFixed
01:24:378 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This progression isn't supported by the song's intensity and is too extreme for an Hard difficulty.Fixed
This applies to the second half of the map aswell. Fixed
[Light Insane]
This difficulty has the same SR as the Hyper. Delete either one, since they don't contribute to a well-designed spread.
[Insane]
This difficulty presents the same issues as the Hard and all the other difficulties. Object placement is vague, there is no criteria behind patterns, the 1/3 patterns in the kiai are mapped as 1/4. I honestly don't see the use of pointing out the same mistakes again and time again. Use the other difficulties for reference.

This is actually sort of fine. I don't feel like saying anything.

In general: move on. You won't get this map ranked at a satisfying quality unless you work on other maps and come back to this way later. It's too unpolished, it lacks structure; this is the type of map to get 100+ star priority and still be bad. Even the most basic of basics are missing. You ought to work on other maps and improve as a mapper before you even attempt to rank something.

You should really use this playlist as reference material ; it has helped me greatly and I believe it will help you aswell.
Also, play more. Player experience, while not essential, when combined with a knowledge of mapping theory, can forge great mappers.

Thank you for using my queue!

davidminh0111

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davidminh0111 2017-06-24T14:37:11+00:00

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Cerulean Veyron wrote:
Hello!

Wew, amazing song choice, sir! Here's a free star! It wasn't easy for anyone to make me shoot a star for their maps ;p
[- - General - -]
- Epilepsy warning is not enabled on the Hyper difficulty.
- No plans for adding tags? Or intended?
- The difficulty spread gap, especially on the last three difficulties, is quite concerning and debatable. I'm not absolutely sure about it, but the spread is not really executed properly. Pretty much a spread of 3.46 > 3.91 > 5.1 star rating is not consecutive enough which makes quite a jump though. But I'll leave that to you, if you recall it something else.
- Are you sure you've created a storyboard out of this beatmap? Or is it still WIP? I'm just curious why there isn't any .osb file for the unused storyboard elements and files you have in the beatmap folder. Still in WIP

[- - Normal - -]
00:07:368 (3) - Try polishing this slider a little it, especially on the two curves. Right now, currently they look a bit sloppy which can be improved better somehow.
00:12:007 (1) - This sounds pretty offbeat as the slider head follows up the vocals, but the rest of its body based on the rhythm composition doesn't follow anything. I think a long slider should fit here rather than a repeat slider in my opinion.
00:22:213 (1,2,3,1) - 00:28:399 (4,5,1,2) - The whole distance spacing is really inconsistent, as if it weren't for a normal difficulty. I would suggest rebalance the distance spacing by 1.1x, which is much preferred, in-between the notes to represent a greater visuals for every rhythms. This isn't the only issue around, there are more further.
00:38:296 (6,7,1) - The structure here seems to be quite linear, and doesn't really indicate the emphasis pretty well. The same issue for the distance spacing counting with 00:37:058 (4,5) -.
00:48:192 (3,4) - I don't mind overlaps, in exceptions of the awkward ones. Just like this one, the tiny bit of overlap between the reverse arrow of the slider tail merely touched the borders of the next circle. You'll probably be needed to split them up to keep them clear and avoid weird issue in aesthetics.

[- - Hyper - -]
- I didn't want to mention every single distance spacing issues and stuff about it, which is literally everywhere I hover around the set. So, this may be one of the important objectives you'll have later on. Using the tool on your right of the screen, that's called "Distance Snap", is essential for your mapping. You might need to recheck your difficulties for any possible issues, because right now... I'll probably point out other subjective issues.
00:21:801 - Remove this unused inherited green point. There's no point in adding one on an empty section.
00:29:636 (1,2,3) - The sliders here could possibly be a little more polished somehow, like using some rotations maybe? You can really do something like this though.
00:49:430 (1,2) - Well, there isn't any 1/4 notes landing on the same song track, yet. You might still keep up by reusing the rhythm composition you used previously on 00:44:481 (1,2,3) - or 00:46:955 (1,2) - .I think it should be 1/4 (slow down the songand you will get it)
01:09:223 (5,1,2,1,2,1) - 01:24:378 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'm pretty sure the new combos here doesn't really look consistent through this section in my point of view. Might swap a few of them, or add a new combo on the long slider (5) and remove the next one. Just... try to start a combo on every strong downbeat. That is all.
01:30:254 (1,2,3) - Probably the same thing for the awkward overlapping as in the previous difficulty.

Euuugghh, nothing really... You could try looking over the difficulties and find several issues that I mentioned here. They're just actual errors on the set, so the rest will be yours to improve the map in order to be in its quality state. Well, sorry if I couldn't help much... Was having some thoughts you might be able to improve the set yourselves ;p
That should probably be it for now. Best of luck!

Thanks for your mod

- Frontier -

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- Frontier - 2017-07-15T11:41:37+00:00

LOL. Same SV in whole map (except top diff). Please make some varieties in your map. zzz

Jemzuu

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Jemzuu 2017-07-27T09:19:42+00:00

hello there~ NM cus i like this song uwu

[General]
you might wanna add something in the tags

[Elena's Not Alone]

00:08:605 (4) - remove whistle pls
00:18:502 (6) - ^
00:21:904 (5) - ^
00:24:378 (4) - NC this to give emphasis to new different sound and adjust a bit make it nearer to the notes before it
00:43:708 (4) - maybe move this farther cus the next 2 notes of it will give a high jump too so why not make this farther as well y256 would be good beside 00:44:790 (2) -
00:44:172 (3) - i think it would be better to stack it with 00:44:790 (2) - same as this 00:44:326 (4) - perhaps stack it with 00:43:399 (2) -
01:03:966 (7) - delete this and 01:03:811 - make this part a jump like what u did on 00:53:759 (6,7,8,9,1) - to have consistency. it suits too imo
01:09:842 (2) - perhaps move this note to x272 y216 to be consistent with 01:12:007 (1,2,3) -
01:28:863 (3) - move this to x288 y152 it looks better since it follows 01:30:254 (1,2,3) -
01:36:131 (4,5) - ctrl g these two because the transition to 01:36:285 (5,1) - is not comfortable imo
01:38:605 (6) - adjust this note a bit try lowering it more try x216 y240
01:54:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this jump is pretty good noice
02:02:626 (5,6) - maybe try placing them lower x301 y85 would be good
02:03:657 (1) - i think this note here should be right at x200 y 272
02:05:512 (6) - place this beside 5
02:29:842 (4,5) - these are p far maybe move them closer under (3) x69 y301
02:34:584 (4) - ctrl g for better movement in the next notes
02:35:197 - nc this jump
02:36:131 - perhaps add a spinner here until 02:38:296 -

that's all goodluck~

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