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I will make it short because it would be repetitive
Pretty much it's all about spacing and object choice:
00:03:728 (1,2) - Try to make it fit the vocals more, she doesn't sing one note through these two sliders
00:10:765 (2) - ^
00:14:283 (1,2,1,2) - Personal thing, decrease the spacing because the song isn't that intense
00:15:950 (1,2,3) - Spacing, make 2 super close to 3, stack even if you want to
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - New combo pls, reduce spacing cuz its overmapped
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:22:358 (1,2) - This spacing will be more proper for 00:20:962 (1,2)
00:23:055 (1,2,3) - Repeat the same pattern from 00:21:660 (1,2,3) and the spacing
00:24:451 (1,2) - Spacing
00:25:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bit overmapped in my opinion
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - Look at 00:23:055 (1,2,3), the same sound represented differently
And I could on and on with the same stuff, try to reduce the spacing, represent the same sounds with the same or similar object choice and dont overmap too much. Also it kinda seems random to me, the jumps on 00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) seem random, for overall looks of the map you can use blankets, like, abuse them
00:03:728 (1,2) - Try to make it fit the vocals more, she doesn't sing one note through these two sliders
00:10:765 (2) - ^
00:14:283 (1,2,1,2) - Personal thing, decrease the spacing because the song isn't that intense
00:15:950 (1,2,3) - Spacing, make 2 super close to 3, stack even if you want to
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - New combo pls, reduce spacing cuz its overmapped
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:22:358 (1,2) - This spacing will be more proper for 00:20:962 (1,2)
00:23:055 (1,2,3) - Repeat the same pattern from 00:21:660 (1,2,3) and the spacing
00:24:451 (1,2) - Spacing
00:25:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bit overmapped in my opinion
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - Look at 00:23:055 (1,2,3), the same sound represented differently
And I could on and on with the same stuff, try to reduce the spacing, represent the same sounds with the same or similar object choice and dont overmap too much. Also it kinda seems random to me, the jumps on 00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) seem random, for overall looks of the map you can use blankets, like, abuse them
Isla's Last Day
00:03:728 (1) - I'm confused at what you are trying to map, The vocals or background music. Personally, I would start the slider at the white tick before that red one.
00:06:691 (2) - (same as the last one)
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These are all 1/2 gaps and they are spaced very differently + very uncomfortable to play
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Odd pattern, They are all 1/2 gaps but they are spaced VERY differently. Very uncomfortable to play.
00:23:055 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue
00:25:497 (3,4) - There is a sudden bigger jump here which is pretty hard to follow.
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:637 (1,2,3) - Once again, All 1/2 gaps but its not spaced appropriately
00:31:253 (1) - This one slider should either be spaced further away to avoid confusion since they arent all 1/2 gaps. The new combo kinda gives it away, But not everyone pays attention to this. Which again, Ends in confusion.
00:32:125 (3,4,5,6) - Whoa there cowboy! These are some fast jumps for a slow map. This ruins flow completely as well! Might want to change this.
00:35:962 (5,6,7) - I know you are going for the whole isometric pattern thing, But it wont work unless you space things properly. Both circles are the same amount of distance from the slider, Except that one is a 1/2 gap and one is not.
(I think you get it. Not gonna point out the other weird spacing that the map has, Should be obvious when you look into it)
00:47:997 (1,1) - The start of vocals should be clickable,
Makes the map a lot more playable
00:57:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Some of these jumps look very random and not spaced very well either.
01:00:032 (1) - A very confusing slider. The player has to slow down after the jumps, Which will be confusing and EXTREMELY uncomfortable.
At this point, I don't see a reason to continue. Its the same mistakes over and over again.
I'm gonna give you some word of advice, Make the more apparent sounds clickable. You start a lot of sliders on red ticks, And some of them end where the vocals start. Which is just confusing.
Jumps are very confusing as well, And not very comfortable. Try sharper angles
Difficult jumps at calm parts of the song.
The beginning should probably be a mix between the background music and the vocals. Since its possible. But focus on the vocals mainly, I believe that will make the map way better.
00:03:728 (1) - I'm confused at what you are trying to map, The vocals or background music. Personally, I would start the slider at the white tick before that red one.
00:06:691 (2) - (same as the last one)
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These are all 1/2 gaps and they are spaced very differently + very uncomfortable to play
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Odd pattern, They are all 1/2 gaps but they are spaced VERY differently. Very uncomfortable to play.
00:23:055 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue
00:25:497 (3,4) - There is a sudden bigger jump here which is pretty hard to follow.
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:637 (1,2,3) - Once again, All 1/2 gaps but its not spaced appropriately
00:31:253 (1) - This one slider should either be spaced further away to avoid confusion since they arent all 1/2 gaps. The new combo kinda gives it away, But not everyone pays attention to this. Which again, Ends in confusion.
00:32:125 (3,4,5,6) - Whoa there cowboy! These are some fast jumps for a slow map. This ruins flow completely as well! Might want to change this.
00:35:962 (5,6,7) - I know you are going for the whole isometric pattern thing, But it wont work unless you space things properly. Both circles are the same amount of distance from the slider, Except that one is a 1/2 gap and one is not.
(I think you get it. Not gonna point out the other weird spacing that the map has, Should be obvious when you look into it)
00:47:997 (1,1) - The start of vocals should be clickable,
Makes the map a lot more playable00:57:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Some of these jumps look very random and not spaced very well either.
01:00:032 (1) - A very confusing slider. The player has to slow down after the jumps, Which will be confusing and EXTREMELY uncomfortable.
At this point, I don't see a reason to continue. Its the same mistakes over and over again.
I'm gonna give you some word of advice, Make the more apparent sounds clickable. You start a lot of sliders on red ticks, And some of them end where the vocals start. Which is just confusing.
Jumps are very confusing as well, And not very comfortable. Try sharper angles
Difficult jumps at calm parts of the song.
The beginning should probably be a mix between the background music and the vocals. Since its possible. But focus on the vocals mainly, I believe that will make the map way better.
Topic Starter
my replies will be highlighted with a color in your quote.Barely Ari wrote:
Pretty much it's all about spacing and object choice:
00:03:728 (1,2) - Try to make it fit the vocals more, she doesn't sing one note through these two sliders
00:10:765 (2) - ^ slow part of the song, trying to fit the whole sentence in a slider
00:14:283 (1,2,1,2) - Personal thing, decrease the spacing because the song isn't that intense all circles are placed within isometric grid, i like the spacing this way
00:15:950 (1,2,3) - Spacing, make 2 super close to 3, stack even if you want to don't wanna touch placements there so i just started 2 with a new combo
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - New combo pls, reduce spacing cuz its overmapped hey i'm not making a 3 star here. replaced some circles with kicksliders
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Spacing i like it the way it is
00:22:358 (1,2) - This spacing will be more proper for 00:20:962 (1,2) ok
00:23:055 (1,2,3) - Repeat the same pattern from 00:21:660 (1,2,3) and the spacing i like it the way it is
00:24:451 (1,2) - Spacing i like it the way it is
00:25:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bit overmapped in my opinion ever single object is snapped to a sound in the song
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - Look at 00:23:055 (1,2,3), the same sound represented differently i like it the way it is
And I could on and on with the same stuff, try to reduce the spacing, I'm not making a 3 star here
represent the same sounds with the same or similar object choice and dont overmap too much. Also it kinda seems random to me, the jumps on 00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) seem random, for overall looks of the map you can use blankets, like, abuse them
I'm sorry you had to go though modding my map and getting most changes rejected.
Topic Starter
all replies are highlighted with a color.Lunar Eclipse wrote:
Isla's Last Day
00:03:728 (1) - I'm confused at what you are trying to map, The vocals or background music. Personally, I would start the slider at the white tick before that red one. vocals, just one sentence/line at a time
00:06:691 (2) - (same as the last one) ugh
00:18:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These are all 1/2 gaps and they are spaced very differently + very uncomfortable to play I'm not making a 3 star here
00:21:660 (1,2,3) - Odd pattern, They are all 1/2 gaps but they are spaced VERY differently. Very uncomfortable to play.I'm not making a 3 star here
00:23:055 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue I'm not making a 3 star here
00:25:497 (3,4) - There is a sudden bigger jump here which is pretty hard to follow. I'm not making a 3 star here
00:27:241 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:637 (1,2,3) - Once again, All 1/2 gaps but its not spaced appropriately I'm not making a 3 star here
00:31:253 (1) - This one slider should either be spaced further away to avoid confusion since they arent all 1/2 gaps. The new combo kinda gives it away, But not everyone pays attention to this. Which again, Ends in confusion.
00:32:125 (3,4,5,6) - Whoa there cowboy! These are some fast jumps for a slow map. This ruins flow completely as well! Might want to change this. done
00:35:962 (5,6,7) - I know you are going for the whole isometric pattern thing, But it wont work unless you space things properly. Both circles are the same amount of distance from the slider, Except that one is a 1/2 gap and one is not. done
(I think you get it. Not gonna point out the other weird spacing that the map has, Should be obvious when you look into it)
00:47:997 (1,1) - The start of vocals should be clickable,
00:57:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Some of these jumps look very random and not spaced very well either. I'm not making a 3 star here
01:00:032 (1) - A very confusing slider. The player has to slow down after the jumps, Which will be confusing and EXTREMELY uncomfortable. I'm bad at slider art. and there is a long sound. have to think of something.
At this point, I don't see a reason to continue. Its the same mistakes over and over again.
I'm gonna give you some word of advice, Make the more apparent sounds clickable. You start a lot of sliders on red ticks, And some of them end where the vocals start. Which is just confusing. noted
Jumps are very confusing as well, And not very comfortable. Try sharper angles I'm not making a 3 star here
Difficult jumps at calm parts of the song. I'm not making a 3 star here
The beginning should probably be a mix between the background music and the vocals. Since its possible. But focus on the vocals mainly, I believe that will make the map way better. not touching the beginning
Here, have your first kudosu.
Topic Starter
Update.
I took some of these suggestions and nerfed Isla's First Day difficulty instead.
I took some of these suggestions and nerfed Isla's First Day difficulty instead.
hello not from my q :^)
Isla's Last Day
00:08:357 (6) - I'd split this into two repeating sliders, it fits with the music better imo https://i.imgur.com/6JyLiAh.png
00:14:469 (2,1) - I think turning these two circles into a 1/2 beat slider works better
00:46:078 (1) - Rotate this 10 degrees so it flows better with the previous slider maybe?
01:00:032 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just a suggestion but I think it emphasises the music better while still having a nice pattern if you ctrl+g each of these sliders (separately ofc)
01:04:567 (1) - I'd say increase the slider velocity here, it's a bit too small ;c
02:17:125 (1) - ^
01:16:253 (3) - Reduce the curvature of this slider, and you can blanket it quite nicely with the circles https://i.imgur.com/J2aM7LI.png
01:20:265 (3,1) - I feel like it'd work nice to stack these two, emphasises that little break in the music (not too sure how to explain) and then bring 01:20:788 (2) - closer since you wouldn't want spacing to be too large
01:23:753 (4,5,6,7) - You know that pishifat video where he said straight sliders rotated over 5 degrees doesnt look as nice or something along those lines? Maybe adjust the straight sliders on the map idk
03:03:171 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why the nc spam here
03:24:102 (7) - nc (I generally put NCs on new measures instead of just where I feel like sounds right. Usually the new measures are where it sounds right tho)
Ok I'll conclude mod here, going to sleep now c:
gl
Isla's Last Day
00:08:357 (6) - I'd split this into two repeating sliders, it fits with the music better imo https://i.imgur.com/6JyLiAh.png
00:14:469 (2,1) - I think turning these two circles into a 1/2 beat slider works better
00:46:078 (1) - Rotate this 10 degrees so it flows better with the previous slider maybe?
01:00:032 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just a suggestion but I think it emphasises the music better while still having a nice pattern if you ctrl+g each of these sliders (separately ofc)
01:04:567 (1) - I'd say increase the slider velocity here, it's a bit too small ;c
02:17:125 (1) - ^
01:16:253 (3) - Reduce the curvature of this slider, and you can blanket it quite nicely with the circles https://i.imgur.com/J2aM7LI.png
01:20:265 (3,1) - I feel like it'd work nice to stack these two, emphasises that little break in the music (not too sure how to explain) and then bring 01:20:788 (2) - closer since you wouldn't want spacing to be too large
01:23:753 (4,5,6,7) - You know that pishifat video where he said straight sliders rotated over 5 degrees doesnt look as nice or something along those lines? Maybe adjust the straight sliders on the map idk
03:03:171 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why the nc spam here
03:24:102 (7) - nc (I generally put NCs on new measures instead of just where I feel like sounds right. Usually the new measures are where it sounds right tho)
Ok I'll conclude mod here, going to sleep now c:
gl
Topic Starter
my replied are highlighted with red. thanks for modding.hypercyte wrote:
hello not from my q :^)
Isla's Last Day
00:08:357 (6) - I'd split this into two repeating sliders, it fits with the music better imo https://i.imgur.com/6JyLiAh.png Done
00:14:469 (2,1) - I think turning these two circles into a 1/2 beat slider works better Don't wanna touch that
00:46:078 (1) - Rotate this 10 degrees so it flows better with the previous slider maybe? Done
01:00:032 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just a suggestion but I think it emphasises the music better while still having a nice pattern if you ctrl+g each of these sliders (separately ofc) Done
01:04:567 (1) - I'd say increase the slider velocity here, it's a bit too small ;c
02:17:125 (1) - ^ might if it's unrankable but i like those this way
01:16:253 (3) - Reduce the curvature of this slider, and you can blanket it quite nicely with the circles https://i.imgur.com/J2aM7LI.png Done
01:20:265 (3,1) - I feel like it'd work nice to stack these two, emphasises that little break in the music (not too sure how to explain) and then bring 01:20:788 (2) - closer since you wouldn't want spacing to be too large Done
01:23:753 (4,5,6,7) - You know that pishifat video where he said straight sliders rotated over 5 degrees doesnt look as nice or something along those lines? Maybe adjust the straight sliders on the map idk I bent the sliders instead
03:03:171 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why the nc spam here Because I wanted to express that part of the song better. Gonna change it up I guess
03:24:102 (7) - nc (I generally put NCs on new measures instead of just where I feel like sounds right. Usually the new measures are where it sounds right tho) Done
Ok I'll conclude mod here, going to sleep now c:
gl
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