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Aisha
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ghm12
M4M ~

[General]
Preview in 01:07:012 - works better. In the current one you can hear the instrument stopping, with this one you only hear the voice.
Don't know if I'm deaf, but your greenlines are a bit low compared to the song. Maybe turn them a bit higher?

[Kantan]
00:16:012 - katsu here. it's a strong sound, gives emphasis to the next one and consistency with previous pattern
00:51:712 - k k d sounds cool here. sound is getting lower, and it's the opposite colours of the last notes.
01:26:062 - consider deleting this one. you put it there because of the last sounds, sure, but it doesn't really follow anything.
01:34:012 - katsu? same than 00:16:012 -
check if your greenlines are really doing something. since it's the same than other diffs, there's a high chance one of them isn't doing anything

[Futsuu]
00:22:012 - this one works cool as katsu
00:37:612 - d k, the strong sound is definitely on the second note.
00:47:212 - k k k here? all of them are strong sounds
00:52:312 - d can work cool, since sound is getting lower
01:01:612 - put the sliderend in the white tick, it feels so weird how it is right now ):
01:24:112 - turn this d k like the others, it's the same sound going all over. if yes, maybe 01:23:812 - can be katsu to give emphasis to the next notes
check greenlines here too

[Muzukashii]
00:11:212 - I would turn this kkd or kdk. I think kdd feels weird.
00:17:212 - ^
00:24:412 - ^
00:13:912 - ddk in muzukashii is pretty hard, specially at this bpm. Maybe use ddd
00:23:512 - if ddk is hard, dkd sounds even worse. ddd too?
00:25:612 - d d k feels great here.
00:37:612 - d k d k here? strong sound is on the second note
00:40:012 - don't you think k k d d k works better?
00:55:612 - 00:56:212 - put a don here, it's weird to leave it empty
01:08:812 - katsu works better for vocals/bass sound
01:32:812 - 01:40:012 - 01:35:212 - k k d matches the melody better

[Inner Oni]
00:18:862 - 00:28:462 - 01:36:862 - 01:46:462 - kkk sounds better in those
00:20:512 - 01:38:512 - kkd feels better than kdd, also consistency with the rest of the map
00:22:912 - 01:40:912 - maybe kkddk? consistency with 00:13:312 -
00:25:762 - 01:43:762 - dkk here sounds weird, use ddk like you did before
00:28:762 - 01:46:762 - I really would suggest using kkd here, but you probably would need to remove the finisher. up to you though.
00:43:312 - 00:48:262 - consider deleting one note on this part? it may be an inner oni, but you still need breaks.
00:50:362 - 00:52:762 - turn this one katsu, gives a good emphasis to the next note
01:01:612 - you are using a wrong snap here. use something like this


Maybe I can mod Skylish's Oni when it's ready
good luck ~
Topic Starter
Aisha

ghm12 wrote:

M4M ~

[General]
Preview in 01:07:012 - works better. In the current one you can hear the instrument stopping, with this one you only hear the voice.
Don't know if I'm deaf, but your greenlines are a bit low compared to the song. Maybe turn them a bit higher?
I pref using 01:06:862 - instead 01:06:712 - current one :P
And about volumes I just increased Kiai to 90%


[Kantan]
00:16:012 - katsu here. it's a strong sound, gives emphasis to the next one and consistency with previous pattern
Well I don't want to use the same as 00:11:212 (14) - so I'm holding it for now
00:51:712 - k k d sounds cool here. sound is getting lower, and it's the opposite colours of the last notes.
Yeah you're right, changed
01:26:062 - consider deleting this one. you put it there because of the last sounds, sure, but it doesn't really follow anything.
Fixed!
01:34:012 - katsu? same than 00:16:012 -
Same comment
check if your greenlines are really doing something. since it's the same than other diffs, there's a high chance one of them isn't doing anything
They're currently only volume changes :P

[Futsuu]
00:22:012 - this one works cool as katsu
I don't think there's a real reason to change to k considering it's not a real descendant sound, also current k d d is enough imo :3
00:37:612 - d k, the strong sound is definitely on the second note.
Completely right, fixed
00:47:212 - k k k here? all of them are strong sounds
fixed
00:52:312 - d can work cool, since sound is getting lower
fixed
01:01:612 - put the sliderend in the white tick, it feels so weird how it is right now ):
sounds weird but it's completely right and there shouldn't be a problem for futsuu players to follow a slider :p
01:24:112 - turn this d k like the others, it's the same sound going all over. if yes, maybe 01:23:812 - can be katsu to give emphasis to the next notes
I think they're kind of different. Even I didn't put big note on all of them so I'm holding for now ^^
check greenlines here too
Same as above

[Muzukashii]
00:11:212 - I would turn this kkd or kdk. I think kdd feels weird.
I think it's good enough, descendant sound with and middle note doesn't deserve a kat honestly
00:17:212 - ^
Made k d k cuz ascendant one
00:24:412 - ^
Same as first answer
00:13:912 - ddk in muzukashii is pretty hard, specially at this bpm. Maybe use ddd

00:23:512 - if ddk is hard, dkd sounds even worse. ddd too?
Fixed both my bad xD
00:25:612 - d d k feels great here.
Completely right changed :p
00:37:612 - d k d k here? strong sound is on the second note
Fixed aswell
00:40:012 - don't you think k k d d k works better?
Hmmm there's descendant one so I think current d k d k d is better
00:55:612 - 00:56:212 - put a don here, it's weird to leave it empty
I think isn't neccesary, not any strong sound deserves that and break is currently good imo
01:08:812 - katsu works better for vocals/bass sound
Agree
01:32:812 - 01:40:012 - 01:35:212 - k k d matches the melody better
k d k is better imo :P

[Inner Oni]
00:18:862 - 00:28:462 - 01:36:862 - 01:46:462 - kkk sounds better in those
I agree only with first one. It's way different about making descendant / ascendant emphasis notes so third and fourth one are more exact than using kkk imo. Also second one is being deleted acording to some change
00:20:512 - 01:38:512 - kkd feels better than kdd, also consistency with the rest of the map
fixed
00:22:912 - 01:40:912 - maybe kkddk? consistency with 00:13:312 -
I pref dinamicity more than consistency about using same notes. Main pitches are first and last kat so I'm holding them :D
00:25:762 - 01:43:762 - dkk here sounds weird, use ddk like you did before
Kind of same reason as above
00:28:762 - 01:46:762 - I really would suggest using kkd here, but you probably would need to remove the finisher. up to you though.
I agree with you :p made ddk tho
00:43:312 - 00:48:262 - consider deleting one note on this part? it may be an inner oni, but you still need breaks.
Deleted first one but second I think with this 00:50:512 (308) - is enough :p
00:50:362 - 00:52:762 - turn this one katsu, gives a good emphasis to the next note
fixed
01:01:612 - you are using a wrong snap here. use something like this

Fixed aswell :P
Maybe I can mod Skylish's Oni when it's ready
good luck ~
That would be awesome : )
Wow didn't expect a mod here tbh xD but really thanks for coming. Also answered your mod already : D helpful mod!
Skylish
From in-game invitation of GD request, sorry for being so late due to busy real life activities.

Skylish's Oni: https://puu.sh/wdzce/a99dc1d500.rar

The spread between Muzukashii --- Oni --- Inner Oni should be fine and acceptable, let's wait for modders' opinion there.

Is ghm going to mod my Oni as well? Thanks in advance :>
katacheh
in game chat M4M
mod
  1. futsuu
    01:23:212 (237) - move to 01:23:512 -
  1. muzukashii
    00:51:712 (210) - missed finisher?
    01:01:312 (258) - ^
    01:01:612 (259,260,261) - change to k k (1/2)
  1. inner oni
    00:28:012 - sounds like k
    00:28:462 (163,164) - sounds like triplet?
    00:47:062 (278,279,280) - kkk? i think kkk is more suitable
    00:51:712 (317) - K add finisher?
    01:11:512 (451,452,453,454,455,456) - d ddk d , triplet at here to be more smooth?
    01:13:912 (475,476,477,478,479,480) - d kkk d or something like this,^
    01:22:387 - move to 01:22:537 - ^
    01:23:512 (574,575,576,577) - change to d ddk, ^
    01:23:662 - change to d
    01:36:862 (676,677,678) - kkk

Good luck!
Ozu
[ Kantan ]

00:01:012 (2,5) - you can delete here to emphasize 00:05:812 (8) , cause here has more sound.


[ Futsuu ]

00:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is same with muzu and even oni. you can use more easy and fit pattern like dddd kkkk.

01:12:712 (201,202,203,204,205,206) - ddk dkk or dkk dkk. 01:11:812 (199,202,205) - this is the high-rised melody and this patch is going higher.


[ Muzukashii ]

00:11:812 (33,55,78,100) - remove for the rest time. the full-spread circles that has no rest in this part.

01:01:612 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - so long 1/3 stream. how about disconnect some part?

kiai part seems little bored, cause of repetitive pattern that 1 1 1 3 1 1 or 1 1 3 1 1 1 . you have many option that like connect, remove, change.


[Skylish's Oni ]

00:01:762 (5,6) - little confused circle cause here doesn't have any sound.

00:28:537 (27,30) - both one k? this two part has strong drum snare sound(kat sound) so that can't ignore.
01:46:537 (27,30) - ^

01:26:812 (2) - add circle to emphasize the silent part between 01:27:412 (7,1) .


[ Inner Oni ]

00:04:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - little strange that this has same pattern with before part. added drum sound and bass, so how about add some circles so that player can feel the difference?

00:08:512 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - two melody repetitive, kkkkkk seems simple to me.

00:12:112 (36,110) - finisher. i know that these place don't have crush sound, but little awkward cause other part has finisher.

00:18:712 (87,88,89,90) - even 00:18:112 (81,82,83,84,85) - 5 stream. 1 1 1 7 1 ? just my greedy modding :)

00:28:537 (164) - definitely strong k in here and 00:28:837 (166) - here has circle. for consistency, unify remove it or add?

from 00:28:837 (166) to 00:37:312 (195) - this is not futsuu. this is Oni. the example, 00:29:212 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - you can add k in any empty place with vocal.


from 00:38:512 (205) to 00:42:262 (236) - it seems little bored, cause it has almost same pattern. the based pattern in this part is d k ddk, so you can use so many other pattern in here.

01:02:212 (395,396) - dd? kkkddd to me, so kdkddd.


mafumafu <3
GL~
Topic Starter
Aisha

katacheh wrote:

in game chat M4M
hi kata o/
mod
  1. futsuu
    01:23:212 (237) - move to 01:23:512 -
    fixed
  1. muzukashii
    00:51:712 (210) - missed finisher?
    fixed
    01:01:312 (258) - ^
    fixed
    01:01:612 (259,260,261) - change to k k (1/2)
    I don't want to use kats, it's a little hard for Muzu imo :p
  1. inner oni
    00:28:012 - sounds like k
    I think highest sound is on 00:27:712 (156,157) -
    00:28:462 (163,164) - sounds like triplet?
    totally agree, fixed
    00:47:062 (278,279,280) - kkk? i think kkk is more suitable
    ^
    00:51:712 (317) - K add finisher?
    ^
    01:11:512 (451,452,453,454,455,456) - d ddk d , triplet at here to be more smooth?
    I pref holding this according to vocal increase rhythm
    01:13:912 (475,476,477,478,479,480) - d kkk d or something like this,^
    Same reason as above :p
    01:22:387 - move to 01:22:537 - ^
    Same according to vocals I would prefer to hold it ^^
    01:23:512 (574,575,576,577) - change to d ddk, ^
    Well to be honest both sounds fine but I'll change because vocals pause is on 01:23:587 -
    01:23:662 - change to d
    Did above xD
    01:36:862 (676,677,678) - kkk
    Not totally sure tbh. I feel like current ddk is fine so I'll take a relook if someone else comments about it

Good luck!
Thanks for modding katazin ^^

404 AccNotFound wrote:

[ Kantan ]

00:01:012 (2,5) - you can delete here to emphasize 00:05:812 (8) , cause here has more sound.
I prefer holding to don't make excesive bored the beggining :p

[ Futsuu ]

00:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is same with muzu and even oni. you can use more easy and fit pattern like dddd kkkk.
tbh I don't get your dddd kkkk point ;; but anyways I want to hold the piano follow ^^
01:12:712 (201,202,203,204,205,206) - ddk dkk or dkk dkk. 01:11:812 (199,202,205) - this is the high-rised melody and this patch is going higher.
Agree just with second point: 01:12:712 (115,116) - added d d

[ Muzukashii ]

00:11:812 (33,55,78,100) - remove for the rest time. the full-spread circles that has no rest in this part.
You're right, there's not any break lol fixed
01:01:612 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - so long 1/3 stream. how about disconnect some part?
Yeah I forgot to fix it after I noticed there isn't any 1/3 sound on 01:01:612 (255,256,257) -
kiai part seems little bored, cause of repetitive pattern that 1 1 1 3 1 1 or 1 1 3 1 1 1 . you have many option that like connect, remove, change.
I'll take this comment when I could take a review about it ^^

[ Inner Oni ]

00:04:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - little strange that this has same pattern with before part. added drum sound and bass, so how about add some circles so that player can feel the difference?
Yeah I totally agree with this... I'll add some notes since it's more fast than first one
00:08:512 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - two melody repetitive, kkkkkk seems simple to me.
But the rin calls for it ;;
00:12:112 (36,110) - finisher. i know that these place don't have crush sound, but little awkward cause other part has finisher.
Uhmmm I was thinking a lot about that... I should wait a little about that... You got the point lol but I'll hold it for now
00:18:712 (87,88,89,90) - even 00:18:112 (81,82,83,84,85) - 5 stream. 1 1 1 7 1 ? just my greedy modding :)
Hahah being greedy is fine :p. I don't want to use 7streams on this section tbh and save them for Kiai :p
00:28:537 (164) - definitely strong k in here and 00:28:837 (166) - here has circle. for consistency, unify remove it or add?
Made on kata mod :3
from 00:28:837 (166) to 00:37:312 (195) - this is not futsuu. this is Oni. the example, 00:29:212 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - you can add k in any empty place with vocal.
Hmmm it would be a little overmapped imo. Anyways added some notes to focus ascendant or descendant sounds ^^
from 00:38:512 (205) to 00:42:262 (236) - it seems little bored, cause it has almost same pattern. the based pattern in this part is d k ddk, so you can use so many other pattern in here.
Yeah I got it's a little repetitive but I feel like the only way to map it well is following the current triple place. Also I don't get what did you mean with second comment ; ;
01:02:212 (395,396) - dd? kkkddd to me, so kdkddd.
I think current one is fine by hearing it on every playback rates tho :3

mafumafu <3
GL~
Thanks for modding! Also ty you both for wishing me luck :D
Skylish

404 AccNotFound wrote:

[Skylish's Oni ]

00:01:762 (5,6) - little confused circle cause here doesn't have any sound.

> They are the setting ups for 00:04:012 (11,12,13) - . Meanwhile, their existence can fill up the gap to match the rhythm there.

00:28:537 (27,30) - both one k? this two part has strong drum snare sound(kat sound) so that can't ignore.

> 00:28:537 - / 00:28:837 - are on relatively weak beats, 00:28:612 - / 00:28:912 - are more impt. So dons are put in front of strong beat kats to emphasize the latter.

01:46:537 (27,30) - ^

> same then

01:26:812 (2) - add circle to emphasize the silent part between 01:27:412 (7,1) .

> vocal solo part starts at 01:26:962 - , wanna focus on it rather than the little drum hit at 01:26:812 - .

mafumafu <3
GL~
Thanks for modding. I did some self-mods as well to reduce the density and colours. of course the SR increases as well

Skylish's Oni: https://puu.sh/wlfmT/baac851c43.rar
Ladies Night

SΞCTOR #712

IRC NM Request / Taiko

General Suggestions
  • Tags
  1. I don't really do Metadata anymore but you can add 明鏡止水 and Meikyou Shisui in tags, since that's the album where the song came from.
  2. Add THE VOC@LOID M@STER or VOM@S and ボーマス in tags, this is the event where the album was released at.
    Audio
  3. Minor thing but, your current MP3 file has a bit rate of 184kbps. If you can find a 192kbps version to replace the current then that would be even better audio wise. Make sure to take in account for the Short/Cut version if you're doing that as well.
    Inconsistent Values
  4. Turn off Widescreen Support for Kantan since the rest of the mapset has it turned off already and plus, I don't think you have a storyboard to warrant this option being on.
    Background Image
  5. Make sure to credit the source somewhere in the map's description. The link should have a higher resolution of the current BG you're using, if you want to replace the BG that is.
Kantan
  1. 01:21:112 - Add a k, represents the vocalist and the drumroll here and it continues the 1/1 rhythm, considering it's the Kiai section.
Futsuu
  1. 01:24:262 (240) - There should be a finisher here from the crash cymbal I'm hearing, like what you did for the next few notes.
Muzukashii
  1. 01:06:412 (272) - Change to K Finisher, sounds better than a Don Finisher and contrasts the finisher before it nicely, since it's a different sound than usual.
Skylish's Oni
  1. 00:02:212 (6) - I must be going deaf or something but any reason for this note being here? Couldn't hear anything that would support this note, other than the rhythm structure you're using.
Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:112 (29) - Change to d, kinda emphasizes that the ringing sound stops here and is also supported with the percussion instrument here.
  2. 01:05:512 (417) - Change to k, seems more suited as a Kat since it fits the vocals better despite the lack of snares here to support this.
Final Thoughts
  1. I feel that it would've been better to follow the vocals at 00:29:212 for Futsuu, Muzukashii, and Inner Oni, since the vocalist seem to be the main focus for the most part and it seems more of an interesting rhythm to follow, compared to the consistent instruments playing in the background.
Nishizumi
yo bud o/ this is my mods as you wish.

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:04:912 - add a greenline with 50% volume. here is louder than previous
  2. 00:07:312 - unused greenline, delete.
  3. 00:09:262 - maybe you can increase this sv change to 1.3x to give more emphasize to the drum
  4. 00:09:562 - this volume should be louder since, current hitsounds is kinda inaudible. maybe you can increase to 90% or even 100%
  5. 00:28:012 - this should be kat to follow the snare
  6. 00:37:537 - this note is unnecessary to make a triplet here. this is clearly quiet sound
  7. 00:37:312 - if you delete above, this greenline should deleted too, so you can get increase sv from 00:37:612 -
  8. 00:37:612 - if you apply above, better to change the sv to 0.95x. makes more smoother imo
  9. 00:38:512 - same as 00:09:562 - increase to 90% or even 100%
  10. 00:40:687 (237,238) - this should be kat for better structure of triplet. so you'll get kkd-d-d-kkd-d-d-kkk-d-d-kkk-d-d (tl;dr you get the same triplet like kkd)
  11. 00:44:212 (268,269) - change to k to follow the snare
  12. 00:57:112 - 00:57:862 - same as 00:09:562 -
  13. 01:01:062 - this doesn't need to give a different volume imo, sounds same as previous greenline. delete this.
  14. 01:01:912 - to get better flow, i think this should be k-k-k-d-d-d instead. also it more fit to the drum
  15. 01:04:912 - same as 01:01:062 -
  16. 01:06:112 - same as 00:09:262 - increase to 90% or even 100%
  17. 01:16:762 - better to change to k to emphasize the next don on (d)kkkd
  18. 01:27:712 - same as 00:09:262 -
  19. 01:46:012 - this should be kat because snare sound


[Skylish's Oni]
  1. 00:00:112 - better to start with 0.75x? because the slider increased pretty slow. so might be better to make it a little faster
  2. 00:02:212 - i don't know what are you following here. better to delete this
  3. 00:18:112 - this kick sounds similar with (21), so better to change to don instead
  4. 00:27:712 - same as above
  5. 00:28:162 - inconsistent ? 00:18:562 - has a kat. if you wanted to make a variation, you just copied all from previous part.
  6. 00:44:062 - to 00:48:112 - this is too long, also the gap to muzu is pretty huge. this needs to be nerfed especially for the triplets
  7. 00:52:312 - make quintuplet here instead of 7plet. this is so hard for oni.
  8. 00:56:137 - delete this, even inner doesn't have quintuplet here
  9. 00:58:012 - to 01:00:112 - if you compare to inner, this is harder than inner lmao. give a little break on 1/2 and nerf the usage of triplet, especially on quintuplet
  10. 01:00:412 - same as above
  11. 01:01:912 - for simpler and easier, better to change to k-k-k-d-d-d. it's much more easier for oni
  12. 01:05:212 - again and again, this is harder than inner. nerf this pattern
  13. 01:10:012 - please minimize usage of quintuplet like this. also for closer gap to muzu
  14. 01:13:987 - change to don here? for simpler quintuplet
  15. 01:14:512 - same as 01:10:012 -
  16. 01:17:212 - well this is too long for oni although this is in kiai time. should be nerfed here
  17. 01:21:187 - this doesn't need to be 7 plet, i think kkddk-d is enough for oni
  18. 01:22:012 - this stream is harder than oni, nerf to quintuplet or triplet
  19. 01:23:212 - nerf this. for closer gap to muzu
  20. 01:36:112 - change to don, same as the beginning.
  21. 01:45:712 - same as above
  22. 01:46:162 - inconsistent, same as the beginning.

[Muzukashii]

  1. HP6 would be better, like common Muzukashii
  2. about volume, you can see my mod on inner^^
  3. 00:08:587 - wtf asdfkjslfdskl, this is quite hard for muzu on 200bpm
  4. 00:11:812 - this is okay to add a kat here
  5. 00:16:612 - same as above
  6. 00:19:162 - why do you let this blank although the drum sound is strong here? try adding don here
  7. 00:21:112 - inconsistent pattern here. on the previous like this, this pattern is k-k-d---k---k---kdd and this ended with kdk
  8. 00:24:412 - same as above, inconsistent issue. try k-k-d---k---k---k-k-d for consistent pattern (try consistent pattern on lower diffs)
  9. 00:27:862 - change to don for consistency
  10. 00:28:762 - same as 00:19:162
  11. 00:40:012 - maybe try k-k-d-d-k for better flow?
  12. 00:41:212 - try k-k-k-d-k for better structure ? since the first you did d-k-d-d-k, and if you apply above, it's k-k-d-d-k and the next k-k-k-d-k (tl;dr d-k-d-d-k > k-k-d-d-k > k-k-k-d-k)
  13. 00:42:412 - try to avoid to using kkd/ddk frequently especially on high bpm. this goes better with ddd and easier tho
  14. 00:43:612 - to 00:46:612 - use pattern of 00:38:812 - to 00:41:812 - for consistency? it might be better
  15. 00:48:712 - as i said at 00:42:412 - better to change to d-k(1/2 snap) or be k-d-ddd-k
  16. 00:51:112 - same as above.
  17. 00:54:713 - ^
  18. 01:01:612 (255,256) - better to use contrast color with 1/3 to emphasize them (1/3 pattern)
  19. 01:05:887 - this looks similar as inner, delete this. also make closer gap here. delete 01:05:362 - too
  20. 01:15:562 - make longer for this part by adding a don here, since this is peak of this part.
  21. 01:16:162 - delete this slider. better to change to some notes to fit the drum specifically (like 01:16:312 - add d-kkk
  22. 01:26:512 - make longer spinner until 01:27:412 - ?
  23. 01:27:712 - try to make consistent pattern with the beginning until the end.

[Futsuu]

  1. HP 7 would be better like common futsuu
  2. change back to 1.4 sv please, it's unnecessary to decrease it on futsuu although it's high bpm
  3. about volume, you can see my mod on inner^^
  4. 00:11:662 - move this to 00:11:512 - instead for easier to hit
  5. 00:16:462 - move to 00:16:312
  6. 00:21:262 - move to 00:21:112
  7. 00:25:612 - inconsistent with 00:20:812 -, this should be don
  8. 00:26:062 - move to 00:25:912
  9. 00:37:312 - why don't you add a kat here ?
  10. 00:48:112 - did you forget to add finish ?
  11. 00:52:912 - ^
  12. 01:00:112 - ^
  13. 01:01:612 - since this is high bpm, better to replace this to spinner until 01:02:512
  14. 01:08:062 - move to 01:07:912 - and change to kat to follow the vocal
  15. 01:08:212 - if you apply above, move this to 01:08:362 - that would be better flow.
  16. 01:09:412 - delete? see the reason on below
  17. 01:10:462 (9,10) - move these to 01:10:312 - to follow the vocal, so you'll get k-k-kk (1/2 snap) and why deleted above because to avoid long pattern until here.
  18. 01:15:262 - unnecessary note here?
  19. 01:17:662 - move to 01:17:512 - and change to kat like 01:08:062
  20. 01:17:812 - move to 01:17:962 - like 01:08:212
  21. 01:20:212 - move this to 01:19:912 -
  22. 01:24:562 - these dK dK dK is hard af for futsuu. delete those dons so it's only d-k-kd--K--K--K (1/2 snap)
  23. 01:26:512 - replace this to spinner until 01:27:412 - like you did on muzu
  24. 01:27:712 - do the same like you did on the beginning for consistency until the end.

[Kantan]

  1. about volume, see on inner mods ^^
  2. HP 8 would be better, like common Kantan
  3. i think SV 1.3 is enough if you want to make slower than normally
  4. 00:08:512 - would be better if replace this to spinner, that would be easier for kantan
  5. 01:01:312 - ^
  6. good diff :3

will do the rest later, i'm still busy .w. yeah i'm done. hope it helps you. good luck :D
Topic Starter
Aisha

Voyage wrote:

SΞCTOR #712

IRC NM Request / Taiko


Hi Voy! Thanks for coming boy :3

General Suggestions
  • Tags
  1. I don't really do Metadata anymore but you can add 明鏡止水 and Meikyou Shisui in tags, since that's the album where the song came from.
  2. Add THE VOC@LOID M@STER or VOM@S and ボーマス in tags, this is the event where the album was released at.
    I added all of them. Added both on your second suggestion since they're different (specially when searching on forum)
    Audio
  3. Minor thing but, your current MP3 file has a bit rate of 184kbps. If you can find a 192kbps version to replace the current then that would be even better audio wise. Make sure to take in account for the Short/Cut version if you're doing that as well.
    Yeah I was about to fix this. Thanks for remembering :p. Fixed offset aswell
    Inconsistent Values
  4. Turn off Widescreen Support for Kantan since the rest of the mapset has it turned off already and plus, I don't think you have a storyboard to warrant this option being on.
    Lol I was sure I've did this. Fixed
    Background Image
  5. Make sure to credit the source somewhere in the map's description. The link should have a higher resolution of the current BG you're using, if you want to replace the BG that is.
    Ok! will do!
Kantan
  1. 01:21:112 - Add a k, represents the vocalist and the drumroll here and it continues the 1/1 rhythm, considering it's the Kiai section.
    I would like to hold it to have consistency with 01:12:168 - this break :P
Futsuu
  1. 01:24:262 (240) - There should be a finisher here from the crash cymbal I'm hearing, like what you did for the next few notes.
    Agree! Fixed
Muzukashii
  1. 01:06:412 (272) - Change to K Finisher, sounds better than a Don Finisher and contrasts the finisher before it nicely, since it's a different sound than usual.
    I'd 'prefer to let this since 01:06:168 (271,272) - both sounds at the same pitch and it makes a great emphasis to next Kiai starting with a kat note
Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:112 (29) - Change to d, kinda emphasizes that the ringing sound stops here and is also supported with the percussion instrument here.
    I would pref to hold current one even the ring stop at all on 00:09:018 - because that could create a unnecesary complex pattern imo :p
  2. 01:05:512 (417) - Change to k, seems more suited as a Kat since it fits the vocals better despite the lack of snares here to support this.
    Agree! Made it even triple k d
Final Thoughts
  1. I feel that it would've been better to follow the vocals at 00:29:212 for Futsuu, Muzukashii, and Inner Oni, since the vocalist seem to be the main focus for the most part and it seems more of an interesting rhythm to follow, compared to the consistent instruments playing in the background.
    Yeah I got it's more interesting but I'd prefer to don't overmap this. It's a 200bpm song so making it dense (specially at futsuu and muzu) isn't the best way.
    It's like an unofficial 'break' for the fast part :p
Thanks for helping boy! Your mods are always helpful so ty specially at metadata stuff :)

Nishizumi wrote:

yo bud o/ this is my mods as you wish. Heyy friend. Thanks for coming <3

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:04:912 - add a greenline with 50% volume. here is louder than previous
    Right! Fixed
  2. 00:07:312 - unused greenline, delete.
    Lol I keep wondering why is that here, fixed ~
  3. 00:09:262 - maybe you can increase this sv change to 1.3x to give more emphasize to the drum
    I think by using 1,3x could overlap the next K and that's clearly not the best way here. Using 1,1 is currently fine and readable according to 200 bpm (1,3 could like 260bpm velocity D:)
  4. 00:09:562 - this volume should be louder since, current hitsounds is kinda inaudible. maybe you can increase to 90% or even 100%
    fixed to 90 ~
  5. 00:28:012 - this should be kat to follow the snare
    fixed ~
  6. 00:37:537 - this note is unnecessary to make a triplet here. this is clearly quiet sound
    I'd like to hold it just to emphatise section change. Also I would like to follow the current little drum shake here (and helps to emphatise 00:38:118 (216,217,218) - )
  7. 00:37:312 - if you delete above, this greenline should deleted too, so you can get increase sv from 00:37:612 -
    I'd pref to delete this istead 00:37:668 - tbh (not making SV change, only volume change)
  8. 00:37:612 - if you apply above, better to change the sv to 0.95x. makes more smoother imo
    I used some +0.02 SV changes ^^
  9. 00:38:512 - same as 00:09:562 - increase to 90% or even 100%
    I'm gonna hold this. If you hear they're not even on same pitch. Maybe I can increase to 80% but for now I'll hold to 70%
  10. 00:40:687 (237,238) - this should be kat for better structure of triplet. so you'll get kkd-d-d-kkd-d-d-kkk-d-d-kkk-d-d (tl;dr you get the same triplet like kkd)
    Yeah I agree. It didn't have a good consistency at all xD
  11. 00:44:212 (268,269) - change to k to follow the snare
    fixed ~
  12. 00:57:112 - 00:57:862 - same as 00:09:562 -
    I like the current one. Doesn't overlap at all and it's easy to read (I've tried with everymods)
  13. 01:01:062 - this doesn't need to give a different volume imo, sounds same as previous greenline. delete this.
    But... there isn't any volume change xD
  14. 01:01:912 - to get better flow, i think this should be k-k-k-d-d-d instead. also it more fit to the drum
    Well I feel like the real strong sounds are 01:01:962 (407,412) - so I would need to focus them. By using kkkddd last note lose the emphasis of being the low pitch sound so I'll hold cause 01:02:162 (409,410,411) - as kat are well and smooth to play :p
  15. 01:04:912 - same as 01:01:062 -
    01:04:962 - I think this feels really slightly stronger than 01:01:662 - so increasing by 10% should be fine imo
  16. 01:06:112 - same as 00:09:262 - increase to 90% or even 100%
    Used 90 to let 100 for Kiai time :p
  17. 01:16:762 - better to change to k to emphasize the next don on (d)kkkd
    Yeah it's fine talking about next note emphasis but there's not a real kick that deserves to be mapped. Also there's not a strong descendant rhythm that really deserves to be mapped as k d imo
  18. 01:27:712 - same as 00:09:262 -
    Same comment ^^
  19. 01:46:012 - this should be kat because snare sound
    fixed~

[Muzukashii]

  1. HP6 would be better, like common Muzukashii
    I'd pref to hold HP 5 even it's a short song so it's nice for 200 bpm to make a good equilibrium (also I think it's more common for muzu o:)
  2. about volume, you can see my mod on inner^^
    Yup I've did ^^
  3. 00:08:587 - wtf asdfkjslfdskl, this is quite hard for muzu on 200bpm
    Is that really hard? :o I changed to slider anyways!
  4. 00:11:812 - this is okay to add a kat here
    Well I just deleted it from AccNotFound's mod. I think letting some breaks for the first section shouldn't be that bad... but I'll think about it according to mods
  5. 00:16:612 - same as above
    ^
  6. 00:19:162 - why do you let this blank although the drum sound is strong here? try adding don here
    That wouldn't make this pattern a little hard? Even it's a section change it's way too hard for 200bpm imo. I think i'll delete this 00:18:612 (56) - then add the don
  7. 00:21:112 - inconsistent pattern here. on the previous like this, this pattern is k-k-d---k---k---kdd and this ended with kdk
    fixed ~
  8. 00:24:412 - same as above, inconsistent issue. try k-k-d---k---k---k-k-d for consistent pattern (try consistent pattern on lower diffs)
    Well I'm threating kkd and kdd kind of similar since they both emphatises a descendant rhythm so on the first one I'm using kdd and kkd on the second half of this section :p
  9. 00:27:862 - change to don for consistency
    fixed~
  10. 00:28:762 - same as 00:19:162
    Same comment
  11. 00:40:012 - maybe try k-k-d-d-k for better flow?
    I know d k d k d isn't that usual but fills better according to what I'm focusing on (descendant rhythm on 2nd and 4th per section)
  12. 00:41:212 - try k-k-k-d-k for better structure ? since the first you did d-k-d-d-k, and if you apply above, it's k-k-d-d-k and the next k-k-k-d-k (tl;dr d-k-d-d-k
    > k-k-d-d-k > k-k-k-d-k)
    I wouldn't like to use kkkdk. I'm not a big fan of these kind of patterns and as I've explained before still is fine according to rhythm
  13. 00:42:412 - try to avoid to using kkd/ddk frequently especially on high bpm. this goes better with ddd and easier tho
    fixed my bad lol
  14. 00:43:612 - to 00:46:612 - use pattern of 00:38:812 - to 00:41:812 - for consistency? it might be better
    Hmmm I would hold the current one according to same reason I've explained above. Main note is 5th imo
  15. 00:48:712 - as i said at 00:42:412 - better to change to d-k(1/2 snap) or be k-d-ddd-k
  16. 00:51:112 - same as above.
  17. 00:54:713 - ^
    Fixed them ^^
  18. 01:01:612 (255,256) - better to use contrast color with 1/3 to emphasize them (1/3 pattern)
    I don't want to make it complex. I want to save it for Oni/Inner :p
  19. 01:05:887 - this looks similar as inner, delete this. also make closer gap here. delete 01:05:362 - too
    But there's a section change right before Kiai. Also by using 3/1 break after this is enough for players to don't get the density here. Also it's currently stucked according to Muzu diff so I'd pref to hold it ^^
  20. 01:15:562 - make longer for this part by adding a don here, since this is peak of this part.
    I'll do it for now! But not totally sure since it creates a giaaant chain of notes D:
  21. 01:16:162 - delete this slider. better to change to some notes to fit the drum specifically (like 01:16:312 - add d-kkk
    I think current one is fine because there's a stream that needs to be mapped and I don't want to make a large stream for Muzu (of course it's not allowed aswell)
  22. 01:26:512 - make longer spinner until 01:27:412 - ?
    Done!
  23. 01:27:712 - try to make consistent pattern with the beginning until the end.
    Fixed!

[Futsuu]
  1. HP 7 would be better like common futsuu
    Same as Muzu :c
  2. change back to 1.4 sv please, it's unnecessary to decrease it on futsuu although it's high bpm
    Hmmm not totally sure about this. I think Kantan and Futsuu should have the same SV because they're the getting-in-game difficulties imo. I would wait for another comment about this :p
  3. about volume, you can see my mod on inner^^
    Alright!
  4. 00:11:662 - move this to 00:11:512 - instead for easier to hit
  5. 00:16:462 - move to 00:16:312
  6. 00:21:262 - move to 00:21:112
    Fixed them three above
  7. 00:25:612 - inconsistent with 00:20:812 -, this should be don
    fixed ~
  8. 00:26:062 - move to 00:25:912
    ^
  9. 00:37:312 - why don't you add a kat here ?
    Well it was because I felt it a little hard but now I tried and isn't that since there's a break after it :p
  10. 00:48:112 - did you forget to add finish ?
  11. 00:52:912 - ^
  12. 01:00:112 - ^
    yup forget on them fixed
  13. 01:01:612 - since this is high bpm, better to replace this to spinner until 01:02:512
    I pref using this for the same reason as Kantan one. There's a 1/3 stream that can't be followed easily for Futsuu or Kantan players imo so slider is the best way instead spinner (according to stream)
  14. 01:08:062 - move to 01:07:912 - and change to kat to follow the vocal
  15. 01:08:212 - if you apply above, move this to 01:08:362 - that would be better flow.
    Well I made some changes using you suggestions in mind :p
  16. 01:09:412 - delete? see the reason on below
    Fixed
  17. 01:10:462 (9,10) - move these to 01:10:312 - to follow the vocal, so you'll get k-k-kk (1/2 snap) and why deleted above because to avoid long pattern
    until here.
    Yeah I agree with that according to vocal :p
  18. 01:15:262 - unnecessary note here?
    I used to emphatise section change and ascendant sound so according to drums this should be fine
  19. 01:17:662 - move to 01:17:512 - and change to kat like 01:08:062
  20. 01:17:812 - move to 01:17:962 - like 01:08:212
  21. 01:20:212 - move this to 01:19:912 -
    I made some changes on here aswell :p
  22. 01:24:562 - these dK dK dK is hard af for futsuu. delete those dons so it's only d-k-kd--K--K--K (1/2 snap)
    Yeah I was about to recheck this lol ty
  23. 01:26:512 - replace this to spinner until 01:27:412 - like you did on muzu
    I would pref to hold the current one. They musn't to be the same so I would pref to make something different here (also follows vocal well)
  24. 01:27:712 - do the same like you did on the beginning for consistency until the end.
    fixed ~

[Kantan]

  1. about volume, see on inner mods ^^
    Yup fixing
  2. HP 8 would be better, like common Kantan
    I pref holding at 7. Same reason as Muzu
  3. i think SV 1.3 is enough if you want to make slower than normally
    I would pref using 1.2 since it starts around at 1.5* so it would be a little 'hard' compared to other mapset for newer players ^^
  4. 00:08:512 - would be better if replace this to spinner, that would be easier for kantan
    But I think there's an stream sound so if I use spinner this doesn't match at all
  5. 01:01:312 - ^
    same as above
  6. good diff :3
    thanks! :3

will do the rest later, i'm still busy .w. yeah i'm done. hope it helps you. good luck :D
Really thanks for the helpful mod as always Nish! Updated mine and Skylish's Oni. It helped a lot :DD
Skylish

Voyage wrote:

Skylish's Oni[/b][list][*]00:02:212 (6) - I must be going deaf or something but any reason for this note being here? Couldn't hear anything that would support this note, other than the rhythm structure you're using.

> That 3/2 patterns are used in void for representing an expected rhythm flow. Leaving them blank seems weird (breaking the connection with the music)[/list]

Nishizumi wrote:

yo bud o/ this is my mods as you wish.

[Skylish's Oni]
[list][*]00:00:112 - better to start with 0.75x? because the slider increased pretty slow. so might be better to make it a little faster

> good suggestion, fixed.
[*]00:02:212 - i don't know what are you following here. better to delete this

> The pattern there represents the same 3/2 rhythm which appears in last bar.


[*]00:18:112 - this kick sounds similar with (21), so better to change to don instead

> variation purpose and showing the melody flow better at 00:18:162 -

[*]00:27:712 - same as above

> same then
[*]00:28:162 - inconsistent ? 00:18:562 - has a kat. if you wanted to make a variation, you just copied all from previous part.

> There are different accompaniments at the background. At 00:18:612 - , there's a high pitch melody, there's nothing at 00:28:212 - though. Hence, having these timings mapped as kat and don respectively.


[*]00:44:062 - to 00:48:112 - this is too long, also the gap to muzu is pretty huge. this needs to be nerfed especially for the triplets

> removed some notes to leave enough spacing

[*]00:52:312 - make quintuplet here instead of 7plet. this is so hard for oni.

> It's an easy and common ddkkddk 7-plet. I think it'd be fine as there're only TWO 7-plets in the whole Oni.


[*]00:56:137 - delete this, even inner doesn't have quintuplet here

> not really going to delete this triplet since I want to maintain the overall density high while isolating 00:56:862 - for building upcoming emphasizing patterns.

[*]00:58:012 - to 01:00:112 - if you compare to inner, this is harder than inner lmao. give a little break on 1/2 and nerf the usage of triplet, especially on quintuplet

> The difficulty spread within a single diff. is also considered. The progression of patterns from 00:48:162 - to 01:01:362 - is pretty clear. Based on the intensed instrumental part there, my overall flow and density spread should be fine above.

[*]01:00:412 - same as above

> same, the intensity continues.

[*]01:01:912 - for simpler and easier, better to change to k-k-k-d-d-d. it's much more easier for oni

> Oni needs not to be too easy though. I altered the pattern, however.

[*]01:05:212 - again and again, this is harder than inner. nerf this pattern

> why don't you pointing out that Inner Oni needs to be buffed then? :thinking:

[*]01:10:012 - please minimize usage of quintuplet like this. also for closer gap to muzu

> altered triplets' positions a bit
[*]01:13:987 - change to don here? for simpler quintuplet

> nope, monochrome sounds pretty boring

[*]01:14:512 - same as 01:10:012 -

> same case, 5-plets is acceptable.

[*]01:17:212 - well this is too long for oni although this is in kiai time. should be nerfed here

> changed some structures here too.

[*]01:21:187 - this doesn't need to be 7 plet, i think kkddk-d is enough for oni

> nerfed too
[*]01:22:012 - this stream is harder than oni, nerf to quintuplet or triplet


> it'd a new repetitive pattern, same as 01:21:012 -
[*]01:23:212 - nerf this. for closer gap to muzu

> the current pattern makes much sense to Oni itself.... no change
[*]01:36:112 - change to don, same as the beginning.
[*]01:45:712 - same as above

> same cases then
[*]01:46:162 - inconsistent, same as the beginning.

> umm it's completely the same with the patterns in the beginning, what do you mean...? [/list]


will do the rest later, i'm still busy .w. yeah i'm done. hope it helps you. good luck :D
Thanks for modding, Voyage and Nishi.

Updated Skylish's Oni: https://puu.sh/wnBuk/5bedc8eb97.rar
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I'm not the best taiok modder but here goes ~

Skylish
  1. at least OD 6 for an oni at 200 bpm imho. Also the OD is currently the same as the OD as muzu
  2. 00:02:262 (6) - I feel like deleting this kat would give more emphasis to 00:02:562 (7)
  3. 00:28:362 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - This is a really tricky pattern imo. Changing 00:28:812 (29) to a d would make it a lot easier to me and it would fit the music too, what do you think?
  4. I know you wanted to focus on the vocals for the verse but the big breaks between 00:30:312 (5,6) and 00:32:412 (11,12) feel really empty. I think adding notes in between would make it feel more smoother to play. If so how about a don at 00:30:762 . And then another don at 00:32:862 and a kat 00:33:162 ?
  5. 00:51:912 (24) - delete this? This would make 00:51:762 (23,25) play like 00:50:562 (15,16)
  6. 00:57:162 (5,6,1) - D K D? (or K D D like muzu?). The guitar chords are lower at 00:57:762 (1) than they are at 00:57:462 (6) so I feel like it would be more fitting if 00:57:762 (1) was a D .

Futsuu
  1. 00:12:162 (28,29,30) - I feel like this should be the k d k like 00:09:762 (21,22,23) since its the same sound. Also all the other patterns in the section start with k d k.
  2. 01:01:662 (176) - This slider doesn't play like 1/3. If you change your slidertickrate to 3 it should fix this
  3. 01:15:312 (208) - delete? I feel like this is too overwhelming for this diff
  4. 01:27:162 (246) - Changing this to a d puts more emphasis on the kat at 01:27:762 (247) imo
  5. 01:30:162 (254,255,256) - same as 00:12:162 (28,29,30)
  6. 01:46:962 (307) - perhaps move this to 01:46:812 (307) and delete the finish? The sound at 01:46:812 is stronger than 01:46:962 and ending a map on a hard pattern can be fun for the players

Kantan
  1. I think hp 8 might work better for this diff
  2. Having the slider at 01:01:662 (91) play as 1/3 feels like it would be terrible for beginner players. My suggestion would be to delete it and add a don at 01:02:562 .
    I know 01:02:562 is empty in other difficulties but actually retaining a relative balanced density is more important than comparing consistency across the set
[]Couldn't find anything in muzu. I haven't modded taiko in about a year :p

I hope this mod was useful to you at all, GL!
Skylish

Kisses wrote:

I'm not the best taiok modder but here goes ~

Skylish
  1. at least OD 6 for an oni at 200 bpm imho. Also the OD is currently the same as the OD as muzu

    > As Inner Oni used OD=6, Oni's OD setting should be compromised. Imo OD=5 is enough.
  2. 00:02:262 (6) - I feel like deleting this kat would give more emphasis to 00:02:562 (7)

    > again and again, this kat is used for showing the rhythmic flow there.
  3. 00:28:362 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - This is a really tricky pattern imo. Changing 00:28:812 (29) to a d would make it a lot easier to me and it would fit the music too, what do you think?

    > 00:28:362 - ddkdk kdk is exactly how the music goes. 00:28:812 - there's a relatively weak, but still notice-worthy drum kick , hence no change.
  4. I know you wanted to focus on the vocals for the verse but the big breaks between 00:30:312 (5,6) and 00:32:412 (11,12) feel really empty. I think adding notes in between would make it feel more smoother to play. If so how about a don at 00:30:762 . And then another don at 00:32:862 and a kat 00:33:162 ?

    > I really want to keep the vocal solo part very clean until 00:35:862 - when the patterns start building up along with the joining of drum set.
  5. 00:51:912 (24) - delete this? This would make 00:51:762 (23,25) play like 00:50:562 (15,16)

    > 00:51:912 - there's a guitar sound (?) here, while 00:50:712 - does not have. A don is put to show the existence of that sound at 00:51:912 -
  6. 00:57:162 (5,6,1) - D K D? (or K D D like muzu?). The guitar chords are lower at 00:57:762 (1) than they are at 00:57:462 (6) so I feel like it would be more fitting if 00:57:762 (1) was a D .

    > I will go for K D D here.

I hope this mod was useful to you at all, GL!
Thanks for modding, and long time no see. :D

@frac Please help me fix the blue words. Thanks
Topic Starter
Aisha

Kisses wrote:

I'm not the best taiok modder but here goes ~ Hi boy! Don't worry, thanks!

Futsuu
  1. 00:12:162 (28,29,30) - I feel like this should be the k d k like 00:09:762 (21,22,23) since its the same sound. Also all the other patterns in the section start with k d k.
    Agree, fixed~
  2. 01:01:662 (176) - This slider doesn't play like 1/3. If you change your slidertickrate to 3 it should fix this
    Well not sure what are you exactly talking about but I think it's currently playing and filling good at 1/3 slider
  3. 01:15:312 (208) - delete? I feel like this is too overwhelming for this diff
    Uhhh I'm not totally sure. I think it's great because it focus on section change so for now I'll let it. Also there's not a real complexity about ddd patterns. Next kkd is currently playable aswell imo
  4. 01:27:162 (246) - Changing this to a d puts more emphasis on the kat at 01:27:762 (247) imo
    Fixed~
  5. 01:30:162 (254,255,256) - same as 00:12:162 (28,29,30)
    Fixed~
  6. 01:46:962 (307) - perhaps move this to 01:46:812 (307) and delete the finish? The sound at 01:46:812 is stronger than 01:46:962 and ending a map on a hard pattern can be fun for the players
    I'll let it be. I got you point about stronger sound but I would pref to don't make a hard pattern in the end. Also I pref the idea of finishing with a big note on this diff. Is like using a kkd on 01:46:812 - but without the kat's since it'd be so hard.

Kantan
  1. I think hp 8 might work better for this diff
    I'd prefer current HP 7 cause isn't that hard for a Kantan diff talking about SR (with hard I mean 1.7-2*) so it's passable for most of newbie players :p
  2. Having the slider at 01:01:662 (91) play as 1/3 feels like it would be terrible for beginner players. My suggestion would be to delete it and add a don at 01:02:562 .
    Hmmm I'd pref to keep current slider cause it focuses on stream. Isn't hard talking about playability since it's alone and it's a good introduction for new players to get how slider works.
    I know 01:02:562 is empty in other difficulties but actually retaining a relative balanced density is more important than comparing consistency across the set
    I'd keep this one because I like the current 8/1 break right before Kiai. Isn't neccesary to make same stuff through the diffs imo so I think it fills great for Kantan diff
[]Couldn't find anything in muzu. I haven't modded taiko in about a year :p

I hope this mod was useful to you at all, GL!
Really thanks for coming! Even you said you haven't modded Taiko on a while it was useful : D

EDIT: Also updated Skylish's Oni
Melanie
Hola, perdón por la tardanza ;;

[General]
sobre el fondo, para que se vea mejor ^^
abre el archivo en bloc de notas y ve a la parte que dice
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
y cámbiala por:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,80



[Muzukashii]
01:21:762 (360) - cambia por K, sonido de platillo
01:39:462 (55,56) - intercambia las notas
no hay mucho que corregir, está muy bien hecho el mapa :lol:

[Skylish's Oni]
00:17:487 (16) - change to k
00:50:562 (15) - add k, sounds better
01:12:162 (1) - ^
01:32:562 (1) - add k, there is a cymbal sound
well, in sounds like 01:34:962 (13) - those, try to change them by K, I think they sound better because it clings more to the rhythm of the song than with D, it's just a suggestion
Skylish

Melanie wrote:

Hola, perdón por la tardanza ;;

> I guess you are suggesting shifting down the position of BG, as I do not understand Spanish, I will leave it to Frac.


[Skylish's Oni]
00:17:487 (16) - change to k

> 00:17:412 - variated kdd comparing with 00:12:612 - .

00:50:562 (15) - add k, sounds better

> add/change? There's already a D.

01:12:162 (1) - ^

> same case. D is a greater contrast and emphasis comparing to k, anyway.

01:32:562 (1) - add k, there is a cymbal sound

> ?_?

well, in sounds like 01:34:962 (13) - those, try to change them by K, I think they sound better because it clings more to the rhythm of the song than with D, it's just a suggestion

> My common mapping method for Finisher on metronome would be using D as the main theme except extra musical elements appear, such as triangle/ glitch move. This song is not one of these cases.
Thanks for your modding though.
Topic Starter
Aisha

Melanie wrote:

Hola, perdón por la tardanza ;;
No te preocupes, gracias por venir :P

[General]
sobre el fondo, para que se vea mejor ^^
abre el archivo en bloc de notas y ve a la parte que dice
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
y cámbiala por:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,80


Hecho esto, quería hacerlo pero se me había olvidado, thanks!

[Muzukashii]
01:21:762 (360) - cambia por K, sonido de platillo
Mmmm no siento como que realmente necesite una big note, lo dejo como está
01:39:462 (55,56) - intercambia las notas
01:39:762 (56) - pero esta nota merece kat a mi gusto y el anterior don le da un buen énfasis a esta nota
no hay mucho que corregir, está muy bien hecho el mapa :lol:
jaja que bueno es leer eso : ' )
Thanks for modding! :)
Lama Poluna

Hello, from metadata help queue.

Your meta is ok, but add in tags: Vocaloid 蒼姫ラピス The Vocaloid Master 24 VoMas Bright Mirror Stop Water Clear Mirror Still Water ラピス
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Topic Starter
Aisha

Lama Poluna wrote:


Hello, from metadata help queue.

Your meta is ok, but add in tags: Vocaloid 蒼姫ラピス The Vocaloid Master 24 VoMas Bright Mirror Stop Water Clear Mirror Still Water ラピス
All sources
Thanks for comming! All added ~
davidminh0111
Hello from my queue:
Thanks for requesting again, I like modding

[Kantan]
00:23:862: Add a note here to make a unity in 00:18:762

00:39:762: Change to k since there's a high pitch

[Futsuu]
00:03:012: I think here would be k it will emphasize better. Also, it will make consistancy in Sky's Oni

00:21:762: You forgot Drum hitsound

[Muzukashii]
Fine! Good Muzu ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Skylish's Oni]
I think this will work better. 1st, remove this note at 00:28:887 and then change this to big K in 00:28:962 It will emphasize better Imo

[Inner Oni]
00:03:012: Same, change to k

00:05:112: Does this note do anything, I think it doesn't, consider removing it

00:28:362: Change to k to flow better and fit the pitch

01:01:962: I think kddkdk will be better.

Imo, this mapset is very good,
osu! need more mafumafu

GL on ranking :k_hand:
Topic Starter
Aisha

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my queue:
Thanks for requesting again, I like modding
Heey david, thanks for coming :DD

[Kantan]
00:23:862: Add a note here to make a unity in 00:18:762
I made other changes since I felt this part a little dense compared to the rest (even harder than Kiai) so thanks for noticing
00:39:762: Change to k since there's a high pitch
I pref holding this one since it makes a good mirror with 00:41:562 (63,64,65) -
[Futsuu]
00:03:012: I think here would be k it will emphasize better. Also, it will make consistancy in Sky's Oni
Well both sounds really fine, it's totally subjective, but I think 00:03:012 (6,7) - are more similar than other notes so I pref using both as don
00:21:762: You forgot Drum hitsound
I guess you're talking about big note so no, here isn't the high cymbal that I'm following to use big notes
[Muzukashii]
Fine! Good Muzu ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Nice :3

[Inner Oni]
00:03:012: Same, change to k
Same comment ^.^
00:05:112: Does this note do anything, I think it doesn't, consider removing it
Yeah, I made other changes on this section too
00:28:362: Change to k to flow better and fit the pitch
But that could rest importance of next kkk pattern imo, would pref not to make long chains of same notes
01:01:962: I think kddkdk will be better.
Changed to kddkkd, it needs to finish on don tho but current kdkkkd was a little high
Imo, this mapset is very good,
osu! need more mafumafu

~ it needs :3

GL on ranking :ok_hand:
Finishing asap! Thanks for modding david!!
Nyan
[General]

Resized BG (1920x1200)
Resized BG (1366x768)

[Kantan]

01:01:662 (100) - slider ticks are 1/4 and slider ends on 1/3. better snap slider end to 01:02:562

[Futsuu]

00:09:462 (20) - remove Finish
01:01:662 (176) - same as Kantan, better snap slider end to 01:02:562
01:15:162 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214) -


[Skylish's Oni]

01:14:562 (1) - remove Finish
01:24:162 (1) - remove Finish
Topic Starter
Aisha

Nyan wrote:

[General]

Resized BG (1920x1200)
Resized BG (1366x768)
Oh I was pretty sure I had 1920x1200, so using for one ^^

[Kantan]

01:01:662 (100) - slider ticks are 1/4 and slider ends on 1/3. better snap slider end to 01:02:562
Well not pretty sure about it, following totally the rhythm it's finishing on 1/3 note but I'll wait for another comment, because playability, but shouldn't hard to read for Kantan players
[Futsuu]

00:09:462 (20) - remove Finish
Fixed ~
01:01:662 (176) - same as Kantan, better snap slider end to 01:02:562
Same comment~
01:15:162 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214) -

Applied!
Thanks for mod! :)
DeletedUser_4212641

Futsuu

00:55:812 (157) - move to 00:55:662 (157) - and Ctrl G 00:55:662 (157,158) -
- 00:56:412 (159) - move to 00:56:262 (159) -

01:46:512 (305) - change to k
- 01:46:962 (307) - delete

Muzukashii

00:48:462 (180,181) - Ctrl G

Skylish's Oni

00:40:362 (9) - change to d
Topic Starter
Aisha

Vyiuri wrote:

Futsuu

00:55:812 (157) - move to 00:55:662 (157) - and Ctrl G 00:55:662 (157,158) -
- 00:56:412 (159) - move to 00:56:262 (159) -
It can create a bored pattern and doubles are fine according to vocals (what I'm following here)
01:46:512 (305) - change to k
I like current ddk since 01:46:362 (304,305) - it's pretty low tone. So it makes a good emphasis on next kat (which emphatises final D note). If I make it dkk it's also way hard for Futsuu players considering the bpm
- 01:46:962 (307) - delete
Uhh not pretty sure, I'll wait for another comment on this, I think it's not a real big note but I'd pref to make it since it's the last note in the song (and I like finisher as last note xD)

Muzukashii

00:48:462 (180,181) - Ctrl G
Why? Current k d pattern is great for starting sections D:
Thanks for modding! I think you should explain why you suggest comments, I'm note pretty sure why suggestin ctrl+g somewhere :3
yuzu__rinrin
hi~ from my queue.
thanks M4M ~ ><

[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:062 (2) - delete
  2. 00:03:462 (5) - delete
    To show 00:04:962 (7,8,9) - as an evolutionary form

  3. 00:28:362 (43) - delete.
    The five-tuplet of BPM 200 may be tough...
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.

  4. 00:43:062 (66) - delete.
    It can be independent and stand out. And I think we can also simplify the rhythm.

  5. 00:47:262 (73) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    and You can follow the prominent part of the guitar.

  6. 00:56:562 (90) - change d, 00:56:862 (91) - delete.
    To make the cymbal stand out triplet( 00:57:162 (92,93,94) - ) is better


    :!: 01:15:162 (118,119,120,121,122) -
    By narrowing down the five-tuplet here it will be a map where the difficulty difference is born throughout the map. :3

  7. 01:17:562 (124) - delete.
    A big break after five-tuplet.

  8. 01:31:662 (149,150) - ctrl+g, 01:32:262 (151) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    and To adjust to the sound ctrl+g

  9. 01:36:462 (158) - delete.
  10. 01:41:862 (169) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.


    :!: 01:45:762 (175,176,177,178,179) -
    Here also you can express the last excitement by using the five-tuplet as the end of the song.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:36:762 (95) - delete.
    I want a break.

    pattern good .
[Muzukahsii]
  1. 00:52:512 (204) - delete.
    Since the previous pattern is a little difficult, it is somewhat simplified.

  2. 00:57:012 (227) - delete.
    A vocal break. Make the next note stand out.00:57:162 (228) -

    Kiai received a slightly difficult impression.
    It may be okay to reduce triplet a bit.
[Skylish's Oni]
  1. 00:01:812 (5,6) - delete
    The first sound is small.
    focus Piano's sound will make you map better.

  2. 00:04:062 (11,12,13) - delete
    same as ^

  3. 00:09:462 (1,2) - ctrl+g (color)
    It seems preferable to pick up the intense kick with d.
    And since the next big cymbal sounds, I think K is right.

  4. 01:24:987 (8) - change k?
    I want to express it because the pitch behind it is different.
[Inner Oni]
  • a few suggestion.
    00:38:562 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251) -
    I thought it was too monotonous.

    Examples I thought
    256,192,38562,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,256,39387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,128,39612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,64,39912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,128,40212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,160,40287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,40812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,40887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,224,41487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,192,41562,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,41937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,224,42012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,192,42087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,42162,1,0,0:0:0:0:


    Since there are many patterns of xxx-x-x-, it will be better if you can successfully change it. -w-/
I think spread is okay.

Good luck. :3
Etsu
Hello!

Taiko NM from Animu Modding Queue. (sorry for the delay is busy irl) I did not know about college work xd

[General]
  1. -
[Kantan]
  1. 00:00:612 - creo que es mejor poner nota por ese piano claro xd
  2. 00:03:012 - o podrías dejar un break esa sección de piano solo y comenzar primera nota en 00:04:962 - imo
  3. 00:09:762 (12) - comenzaría bien con don finish imo
  4. 00:28:062 (42) - delete? pienso que esta nota esta demás
  5. 00:40:362 - agregar nota?
  6. 00:51:162 - ^ combina para la voz :>
  7. 00:58:362 - ^
  8. 01:00:762 - ^
  9. 01:05:562 - ^ mejoraría el spread de las diff y se siente vació xd
  10. 01:15:462 (120) - creo que no tendría sentido por 01:15:762 (121,122) - so delete?
  11. 01:18:462 (126,127) - control + g por consistencia?
  12. 01:19:362 (128,129) - control + g
  13. 01:31:662 (149) - siento mejor un kat ahí por el ritmo de drums clap 1/1 como todas las diff
  14. 01:34:062 (154) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:00:612 (2) - idk escucho similar como 00:01:062 (3) - con kat
  2. 00:31:362 (85,86,87) - aquí igual para variar por la voz también imo
  3. 00:35:562 (93,94,95) - don?
  4. 00:40:062 (105,106) - control + g? o mejor un kat las 3 notas 00:40:062 (105,106,107) - como 00:42:462 (113,114,115) - que esta en don xd
  5. 00:57:462 (163) - kat finish como la diff kantan?
  6. 01:10:362 (193) - don?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:11:862 - siento que falta nota aquí xd
  2. 00:13:062 (31) - aquí podrías hacer un don un poco balance por esta nota 00:12:762 (30) - y por lo que sigues ese sonido de esas 3 notas anteriores
  3. 00:22:662 (74,75,76) - incluso se siente extraño con kat esta sección imo xd
  4. 00:40:062 (135,136) - control + g para variar con 00:41:262 (141,142) - ?
  5. 00:47:712 - missing note?
  6. 01:28:662 (5) - don?
  7. 01:45:462 (82) - ^
[Skylish's Oni]
  1. 00:01:812 (5,6) - control + g? felt something strange k in 00:02:262 (6) - for next note k is same.. considering like 00:04:662 (13) -
  2. 00:28:812 (29) - prefer don here sound is similar in 00:28:887 (30) - is better imo
  3. 00:34:662 (16,17) - control + g the voice varies kinda
  4. 00:57:462 (6) - i think is better k finish there felt like i lost the rhythm for that sound cymbal is high 00:57:162 (5) - imo
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:05:862 (12,13) - control + g?
  2. 00:19:212 (104) - esto debería ser kat es similar sonido que el triple anterior imo
  3. 00:47:412 (297,298) - control + g?
  4. 01:37:212 (695) - prefiero el kat ahí xd
No mas que decir es un buen mapa GL owo
Skylish
I am too busy to reply them one by one, but I did read through the mods suggested by all modders.

Thanks for your mods, no change though.
D o t
hi from my m4m q
[Kantan]
00:14:262 (19) - move to 00:13:662 - it should be the same as 00:10:962 (13,14,15) -
00:19:062 (27) - move to 00:18:462 - ^
00:23:862 (35) - move to 00:23:262 - ^
00:45:162 - add a note would be better
00:46:362 - ^
01:01:662 (100) - here can simply use circles to instead.
01:32:262 (151) - delete
01:37:062 (160) - ^
01:41:862 (169) - ^
01:46:662 (178) - ^

[Futsuu]
01:01:662 (176) - same as kantan
01:10:962 (195) - move to 01:10:812 - follow vocal
01:20:562 (227) - move to 01:20:412 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:55:662 - and 00:56:262 - add a note?
01:01:962 (251,252,253,254,255,256) - 1/3 stream should not appear in muzu. just put 1/1 notes is better imo

[Inner Oni]
00:09:162 (29) - d is better i think
00:09:462 (30,31) - ctrl+G

That's all. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Aisha

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi~ from my queue.
thanks M4M ~ ><

[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:062 (2) - delete
  2. 00:03:462 (5) - delete
    To show 00:04:962 (7,8,9) - as an evolutionary form
    Sounds great, applied ~
  3. 00:28:362 (43) - delete.
    The five-tuplet of BPM 200 may be tough...
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    I think by deleting 00:28:662 (42) - is better cause consistency :p

  4. 00:43:062 (66) - delete.
    It can be independent and stand out. And I think we can also simplify the rhythm.
    Applied~

  5. 00:47:262 (73) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    and You can follow the prominent part of the guitar.
    I think this one is different than the first one. Now players are more familiarized and since I'm using 1,2 SV shouldn't be that hard to read. Emphatising this section change with quintuple isn't that impossible for Kantan players. Also I had 2 4/1 breaks before it so reading it isn't that hard.
  6. 00:56:562 (90) - change d, 00:56:862 (91) - delete.
    To make the cymbal stand out triplet( 00:57:162 (92,93,94) - ) is better
    But I think 00:56:562 (86,87) - is really a descendant rhythm and melody so if I make d d it wil lose real emphasis

    :!: 01:15:162 (118,119,120,121,122) -
    By narrowing down the five-tuplet here it will be a map where the difficulty difference is born throughout the map. :3
    Fixed it ~
  7. 01:17:562 (124) - delete.
    A big break after five-tuplet.
    Fixed aswell
  8. 01:31:662 (149,150) - ctrl+g, 01:32:262 (151) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    and To adjust to the sound ctrl+g
    Fixed, follows great melody

  9. 01:36:462 (158) - delete.
  10. 01:41:862 (169) - delete.
    If you use it, you can create a spread of difficulty by narrowing down the place.
    Fixed both~

    :!: 01:45:762 (175,176,177,178,179) -
    Here also you can express the last excitement by using the five-tuplet as the end of the song.
    Yeah I made that for the same reason :P
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:36:762 (95) - delete.
    I want a break.
    Yeahh sounds great :p

    pattern good .
[Muzukahsii]
  1. 00:52:512 (204) - delete.
    Since the previous pattern is a little difficult, it is somewhat simplified.
    I think this break a lot the current melody. That break makes it a little empty so I'll hold it
  2. 00:57:012 (227) - delete.
    A vocal break. Make the next note stand out.00:57:162 (228) -
    Yup, done~

    Kiai received a slightly difficult impression.
    It may be okay to reduce triplet a bit.
    Deleted some :p
[Inner Oni]
  • a few suggestion.
    00:38:562 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251) -
    I thought it was too monotonous.

    Examples I thought
    256,192,38562,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,38937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,256,39387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,128,39612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,39762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,64,39912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,128,40212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,160,40287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,40812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,40887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,40962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,224,41487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,192,41562,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,41862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,192,41937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    320,224,42012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,192,42087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,42162,1,0,0:0:0:0:


    Since there are many patterns of xxx-x-x-, it will be better if you can successfully change it. -w-/
    Well I got your point about repetitive pattern but I think it's pretty neccesary to follow the drum triple really well. Also kkd and kkk are fine imo :)
I think spread is okay.

Good luck. :3

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

Taiko NM from Animu Modding Queue. (sorry for the delay is busy irl) I did not know about college work xd

[General]
  1. -
[Kantan]
  1. 00:00:612 - creo que es mejor poner nota por ese piano claro xd
  2. 00:03:012 - o podrías dejar un break esa sección de piano solo y comenzar primera nota en 00:04:962 - imo
  3. 00:09:762 (12) - comenzaría bien con don finish imo
  4. 00:28:062 (42) - delete? pienso que esta nota esta demás
  5. 00:40:362 - agregar nota?
  6. 00:51:162 - ^ combina para la voz :>
  7. 00:58:362 - ^
  8. 01:00:762 - ^
  9. 01:05:562 - ^ mejoraría el spread de las diff y se siente vació xd
  10. 01:15:462 (120) - creo que no tendría sentido por 01:15:762 (121,122) - so delete?
  11. 01:18:462 (126,127) - control + g por consistencia?
  12. 01:19:362 (128,129) - control + g
  13. 01:31:662 (149) - siento mejor un kat ahí por el ritmo de drums clap 1/1 como todas las diff
  14. 01:34:062 (154) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:00:612 (2) - idk escucho similar como 00:01:062 (3) - con kat
  2. 00:31:362 (85,86,87) - aquí igual para variar por la voz también imo
  3. 00:35:562 (93,94,95) - don?
  4. 00:40:062 (105,106) - control + g? o mejor un kat las 3 notas 00:40:062 (105,106,107) - como 00:42:462 (113,114,115) - que esta en don xd
  5. 00:57:462 (163) - kat finish como la diff kantan?
  6. 01:10:362 (193) - don?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:11:862 - siento que falta nota aquí xd
  2. 00:13:062 (31) - aquí podrías hacer un don un poco balance por esta nota 00:12:762 (30) - y por lo que sigues ese sonido de esas 3 notas anteriores
  3. 00:22:662 (74,75,76) - incluso se siente extraño con kat esta sección imo xd
  4. 00:40:062 (135,136) - control + g para variar con 00:41:262 (141,142) - ?
  5. 00:47:712 - missing note?
  6. 01:28:662 (5) - don?
  7. 01:45:462 (82) - ^
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:05:862 (12,13) - control + g?
  2. 00:19:212 (104) - esto debería ser kat es similar sonido que el triple anterior imo
  3. 00:47:412 (297,298) - control + g?
  4. 01:37:212 (695) - prefiero el kat ahí xd
No mas que decir es un buen mapa GL owo

D o t wrote:

hi from my m4m q
[Kantan]
00:14:262 (19) - move to 00:13:662 - it should be the same as 00:10:962 (13,14,15) -
00:19:062 (27) - move to 00:18:462 - ^
00:23:862 (35) - move to 00:23:262 - ^
00:45:162 - add a note would be better
00:46:362 - ^
01:01:662 (100) - here can simply use circles to instead.
01:32:262 (151) - delete
01:37:062 (160) - ^
01:41:862 (169) - ^
01:46:662 (178) - ^

[Futsuu]
01:01:662 (176) - same as kantan
01:10:962 (195) - move to 01:10:812 - follow vocal
01:20:562 (227) - move to 01:20:412 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:55:662 - and 00:56:262 - add a note?
01:01:962 (251,252,253,254,255,256) - 1/3 stream should not appear in muzu. just put 1/1 notes is better imo

[Inner Oni]
00:09:162 (29) - d is better i think
00:09:462 (30,31) - ctrl+G

That's all. Good luck!
strickluke
redeeming myself

Kantan:
  1. 01:01:662 (100) - Slider is broken
  2. 01:13:962 (115,116,117) - Maybe change this to d d K
  3. 01:24:312 (136) - D for readability
  4. 01:46:362 (177) - You could make this d
Futsuu:
  1. 00:37:662 (97,98,99,100) - I feel like you should stick to dd for these patterns just for the sake of simplicity. Plus, it gives variation to the section
  2. 00:57:162 (162,163,164) - K K D sounds better because on the last note a guitar-like instrument starts to play
  3. 01:01:662 (176) - imo extend this slider to reach the white tick, because it looks weird
  4. 01:07:362 (183) - Change to D for variation from the last pattern (K K)
  5. 01:24:162 (238) - delete this note, and maybe change 01:23:862 (237) - to a d
  6. 01:36:612 (274) - move this note to 01:36:912 (276) - for consistency in rhythm
Muzukashii:
  1. 00:11:262 (24,25,26) - maybe Ctrl+g this, sounds way better imo
  2. 00:16:062 (45,46,47) - similar to last suggestion, not sure how i feel about that repeating triplet in the same pattern!!
  3. pretty much i would personally make the colors vary more when they are in the same pattern instead of repeating the same triplet twice
  4. 00:35:862 (118) - doesn't make sense to have this be a d when everything else is a k, even if you are mapping to the vocals (which would be inconsistent for this section)
  5. 00:59:262 (236,237,238,239,240) - kkddk sounds better to me (plus ddkkk or kkddd patterns are gross :p)
  6. 01:01:962 (250,251,252,253,254,255) - please dear god not in a Muzukashii
  7. same thing for the outro as the third suggestion :/
Alwaysyukaz
hi! req modding from my queue *sorry for being late frac ;; I'm so busy with my school's exam

[kantan]

00:07:812 - add kat? i think this part is so empty and have a long gap

00:22:962 (31) - change to don? i hear some different sounds here and its better than monoton kat in 00:21:762 (30) - lol

01:01:362 (95) - kat + finish? i think its have similiar sound with 01:00:162 (94) -

01:01:662 (96) - hhhhhmmm..... i think its better to make the end of slider in 01:02:562 -

01:25:662 (134) - change to kat + finish? same as my reason before that note have similiar sound with 01:24:312 (131,132,133) -

[Futsuu]

00:40:062 (104,105,106) - its better to change in kkd/ddk? seems like its pretty hard for Futsuu's Player doing this part lol

01:01:662 (175) - same as the Kantan's problem

[Muzukashii]

00:47:712 - add kat? seems like this is no reason to put gap here because in muzukashii's diff its not really hard in 1/2 note i believe

01:16:212 (323) - its better to use a note than slider

01:21:612 - put some 1/4 more better i think,because all about 1/4 in this note exactly in kiai time the 1/4 isn't in right place

01:26:562 (1) - spinner seriously? i think you can use some note in beginning from 01:27:012 -

[Inner Oni]

00:38:412 (219) - better to use triplet here

01:21:687 - add note here and delete 01:21:837 (574) -

Good Luck! :D
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