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JeirYagtama wrote:

Platter

[*]00:16:509 (1) - Imo you can make this into a 1/1 antiflow chain here instead to emphasize 00:16:909 - I don't really get ur advice, could you possibly explain? I mean make it a reverse slide that has antiflow
ohhh, ok
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Update - a few changes in Rain (on my own).
posted
hi late mod from my Q
o man finally some kpop
General
  1. 00:45:309 - 00:49:109 - 01:27:809 - pretty sure these should be soft samples cus it's weird to hear normal hs lol it breaks the consistency some are default hs change them to custom 1
  2. normal-hitfinish2 and soft-slidertick are not used just delete them
  3. the artist name should be lower caps instead of JUN should be Jun like in the Official video and as well as for the title, turn on the caps
  4. add kpop to tags? xd
Rain
  1. 00:14:509 (3,4) - there's a sound on the red tick if u listen on 25% playback. what i'd suggest is short the slider to red tick and add a note on the blue tick like 00:37:109 (2,3,4) -
  2. 00:17:709 (3,4) - kinda edgy to catch imo consider reducing ds
  3. 00:58:909 (2,3) - care to lower the spacing a bit cus i found it hard to catch xd i suggest a 1.9x ds perhaps
  4. 01:05:309 (5,6) - i dont get this direction change tbh it's uncomfortable to catch for me. i suggest either ctrl g (6) or nerf ds
  5. 01:25:309 (5) - maybe make this a 1/2 slider? feels kinda empty even tho there's vocal but just my opinion anyway
  6. 01:28:509 (5,6) - feels pretty awkward to catch cus of the odd spacing maybe make 5 a 1/1 slider instead or just increase spacing
  7. 01:26:809 (2,3) - this hyper is too strong imo, moving (3) to x312 feels better
Platter
  1. 00:04:809 (3,4) - any reason for this antiflow here? i'd make them like this instead
  2. 00:24:409 (10,1) - 1/4 hypers are not allowed on platter make them walkable by moving 00:24:509 (1,2,3) - all together to x280
  3. 00:27:909 (2) - edgy spacing here for platters feels kinda harsh just after coming from a hyper on 00:27:309 (6,1) - i suggest moving the reverse to x216 instead
  4. 00:30:709 (5,1) - same here consider nerfing the ds thx
  5. 00:32:909 (2,3) - yep here too
  6. 00:35:709 (1,2,3) - these movement kinda feels odd imo doesnt follow the music that well tbh. there's a strong sound on 00:36:109 - and i dont see a reason not mapping it, ye im just pointing this out hopefully u change something here
  7. 00:51:209 - i dont think the note here isnt that important there might be a sound but for platters this is pretty unpredictable id just delete it
  8. 00:54:809 (7,1) - same point as 00:24:409 (10,1) -
  9. 00:59:509 (4,1) - hypers with antiflow is unrankable
  10. 01:01:209 (6,1) - same issue before
  11. 01:03:509 (4,5) - same about antiflow hypers
  12. 01:07:109 (5,1) - edgy dashyy here
    [*01:15:309 (3,4,5) - this looks like a dash but it isnt just make them clearly walkable instead the song is calm here
  13. 01:25:309 (5) - this may be a lowkey strong vocal but compared to others, this one's less important for a calm part, i suggest just giving it a normal dash 01:25:309 (5,1) - move this together to x288
  14. 01:29:909 (4) - make this hyper boi for that edgy finish xd move 5 to x432
Salad
  1. 00:16:509 (1) - curve this slider? for more comfy movement
  2. 00:18:909 (6,7) - doesnt look aesthetic to me maybe reduce the density of this and just keep it simple by making them 1/1 sliders insted i'd make it like this tho (i highlighted 2&3) i just noticed u did it for 00:22:909 (1,2,3) - maybe follow this?
  3. 00:20:909 (3,1) - why antiflow ;w; i suggest making a vertical slider instead
  4. 00:36:909 (5,1) - kind of an anti flow here too make 1 a vertical too
  5. 00:52:709 (5,6,1) - again the antiflow novice players wouldn't expect this espcially the uncomfy movement consider changing this part use more vertical sliders perhaps
  6. 00:59:109 (4,5,1) - same here if u want this to be ranked be careful about antiflow ;w; lower diffs shouldnt have much antiflow
  7. 01:00:509 (3,4) - i dont really recommend this back and forth as it is not that predictable for new players, making 4 a vertical helps the issue
  8. 01:04:109 (2) - yea reverse this pls or vertical no reason for this direction change lol
  9. 01:21:109 (2) - i suugest using the same slider as 1 instead for better flow the vocal pitch didnt change at all so i dont see why not just adjust 3 after
  10. 01:30:109 (7) - make this a dash for that fire boi x304
aight das all, long mod cus im late by a week lol. i could see potential in this tho hopefully could be ranked in the future i love it <3, get more mods and you'll get there someday~
GL!
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AJamez wrote:

hi late mod from my Q
o man finally some kpop
General
  1. 00:45:309 - 00:49:109 - 01:27:809 - pretty sure these should be soft samples cus it's weird to hear normal hs lol it breaks the consistency some are default hs change them to custom 1 sure
  2. normal-hitfinish2 and soft-slidertick are not used just delete them normal hitfinish was used at the end lol and slidertick was chosen to simply mute ticks itself.
  3. the artist name should be lower caps instead of JUN should be Jun like in the Official video and as well as for the title, turn on the caps It doesn't really matter cuz if you look for other videos of him, it's written differently, both Jun and JUN are fine. Same with the title, I took it from his album, where LOVE LETTER (I did map the remix, not the original song, but the remix is still on his album) was changed into love letter remix, so yeah.
  4. add kpop to tags? xd yeah why not
Rain
  1. 00:14:509 (3,4) - there's a sound on the red tick if u listen on 25% playback. what i'd suggest is short the slider to red tick and add a note on the blue tick like 00:37:109 (2,3,4) - changed it into a reverse slider
  2. 00:17:709 (3,4) - kinda edgy to catch imo consider reducing ds k
  3. 00:58:909 (2,3) - care to lower the spacing a bit cus i found it hard to catch xd i suggest a 1.9x ds perhaps k
  4. 01:05:309 (5,6) - i dont get this direction change tbh it's uncomfortable to catch for me. i suggest either ctrl g (6) or nerf ds well, fine
  5. 01:25:309 (5) - maybe make this a 1/2 slider? feels kinda empty even tho there's vocal but just my opinion anyway not really, I do not want to overdo it, the current note (short sound) is okay
  6. 01:28:509 (5,6) - feels pretty awkward to catch cus of the odd spacing maybe make 5 a 1/1 slider instead or just increase spacing I made the slider more vertical and changed the general shape
  7. 01:26:809 (2,3) - this hyper is too strong imo, moving (3) to x312 feels better moved to x:320
Platter
  1. 00:04:809 (3,4) - any reason for this antiflow here? i'd make them like this instead it was meant to make a movement so I'll keep it for now
  2. 00:24:409 (10,1) - 1/4 hypers are not allowed on platter make them walkable by moving 00:24:509 (1,2,3) - all together to x280 I've changed the whole pattern a little bit to avoid 1/4 hdashes
  3. 00:27:909 (2) - edgy spacing here for platters feels kinda harsh just after coming from a hyper on 00:27:309 (6,1) - i suggest moving the reverse to x216 instead actually deleted this hdash and placed it here: 00:28:909 (4), overall the pattern is changed
  4. 00:30:709 (5,1) - same here consider nerfing the ds thx ok
  5. 00:32:909 (2,3) - yep here too sure
  6. 00:35:709 (1,2,3) - these movement kinda feels odd imo doesnt follow the music that well tbh. there's a strong sound on 00:36:109 - and i dont see a reason not mapping it, ye im just pointing this out hopefully u change something here ye, you're completely right
  7. 00:51:209 - i dont think the note here isnt that important there might be a sound but for platters this is pretty unpredictable id just delete it descreased the distance
  8. 00:54:809 (7,1) - same point as 00:24:409 (10,1) - yes
  9. 00:59:509 (4,1) - hypers with antiflow is unrankable yes
  10. 01:01:209 (6,1) - same issue before ok
  11. 01:03:509 (4,5) - same about antiflow hypers ok
  12. 01:07:109 (5,1) - edgy dashyy here fixed changing the whole pattern basically xD
    [*01:15:309 (3,4,5) - this looks like a dash but it isnt just make them clearly walkable instead the song is calm here ye
  13. 01:25:309 (5) - this may be a lowkey strong vocal but compared to others, this one's less important for a calm part, i suggest just giving it a normal dash 01:25:309 (5,1) - move this together to x288 ok
  14. 01:29:909 (4) - make this hyper boi for that edgy finish xd move 5 to x432 ye, totally
Salad
  1. 00:16:509 (1) - curve this slider? for more comfy movement I think it's fine
  2. 00:18:909 (6,7) - doesnt look aesthetic to me maybe reduce the density of this and just keep it simple by making them 1/1 sliders insted i'd make it like this tho (i highlighted 2&3) i just noticed u did it for 00:22:909 (1,2,3) - maybe follow this? I like the flow here and it follows the rhythm as it is right know, I'll keep it
  3. 00:20:909 (3,1) - why antiflow ;w; i suggest making a vertical slider instead ok
  4. 00:36:909 (5,1) - kind of an anti flow here too make 1 a vertical too ye
  5. 00:52:709 (5,6,1) - again the antiflow novice players wouldn't expect this espcially the uncomfy movement consider changing this part use more vertical sliders perhaps ye
  6. 00:59:109 (4,5,1) - same here if u want this to be ranked be careful about antiflow ;w; lower diffs shouldnt have much antiflow ye
  7. 01:00:509 (3,4) - i dont really recommend this back and forth as it is not that predictable for new players, making 4 a vertical helps the issue ^
  8. 01:04:109 (2) - yea reverse this pls or vertical no reason for this direction change lol ye
  9. 01:21:109 (2) - i suugest using the same slider as 1 instead for better flow the vocal pitch didnt change at all so i dont see why not just adjust 3 after ye
  10. 01:30:109 (7) - make this a dash for that fire boi x304 ye boi
aight das all, long mod cus im late by a week lol. i could see potential in this tho hopefully could be ranked in the future i love it <3, get more mods and you'll get there someday~
GL!
Actually my mapping style has changed since then (including flow) and I would change a lot of things, so yeah, this mod was veery helpful, it goes in the right direction, thanks. ;)
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Hello from my modding queue :)

Rain
  1. 00:06:109 (3) - I think you can move it for more distance on 00:05:709 (2,3) - . I suggest move it to x:408.
  2. 00:07:309 (1,2) - I think distance is look compress. I suggest move (1) to x:272 for smooth play.
  3. 00:20:509 (2,3) - I think it look far a bit. I suggest move (3) to x:192.
  4. 00:23:609 (3,4) - 00:24:309 (5,1) - I think this both distance look far a bit. I suggest move 00:23:709 (4,5) - to x:352.
  5. 00:35:309 (6,1) - So far Hdash and it's antiflow. Maybe 00:35:709 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+g this to change that Hdash to flow.
  6. 00:36:309 (4,5) - If you change on above^. on this will same as top about distance. so I suggest move 00:36:509 (5,6) - to x:104.
  7. 00:52:109 (2,3) - It's antiflow and far Hdash. Maybe change 00:52:509 (3) - to curve for easier to catch.
  8. 00:55:309 (3,4) - So far Hdash. I suggest move 00:55:509 (4,5,6,7,8) - to x:64 for easier to catch.
  9. 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4) - Look not smooth to play. I suggest move 01:04:809 (2) - to x:128 and 01:05:209 (4) - to x:384.
Platter
  1. 00:23:309 (6,7,8) - I think if (6) is change slider move to right (start) > left (end) and (7) on x:72 It will play smooth.
  2. 00:23:909 (9) - I think slider should end on 00:24:309 and add note on 00:24:409 -.
  3. 00:39:709 (3,4) - I think it look hard for platter with Dash to Hdash. Can you remove dash between this? Maybe you can change slider to oblique.
  4. 00:41:309 (3,4) - Same as above^.
  5. 00:42:909 (2) - Move to x:328. 00:42:109 (1,2) - 00:42:909 (2,3) - I think a bit to far.
  6. 00:46:909 (1) - I think it should more vertical.
  7. 00:48:509 (3,4) - Distance look weird. I suggest change to this.
Salad
  1. 00:22:909 (1,2) - Distance look weird. It will dash or not? I suggest move 00:23:309 (2) - to x:224.
  2. 00:59:109 (4,5) - I think it should not dash and dash on 00:59:309 (5,1) - look it steader.

That's all from me. Good luck and take my star <3
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rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue :)

Rain
  1. 00:06:109 (3) - I think you can move it for more distance on 00:05:709 (2,3) - . I suggest move it to x:408. yes
  2. 00:07:309 (1,2) - I think distance is look compress. I suggest move (1) to x:272 for smooth play. sure
  3. 00:20:509 (2,3) - I think it look far a bit. I suggest move (3) to x:192. ok
  4. 00:23:609 (3,4) - 00:24:309 (5,1) - I think this both distance look far a bit. I suggest move 00:23:709 (4,5) - to x:352. Decreased the distance here
  5. 00:35:309 (6,1) - So far Hdash and it's antiflow. Maybe 00:35:709 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+g this to change that Hdash to flow. yes
  6. 00:36:309 (4,5) - If you change on above^. on this will same as top about distance. so I suggest move 00:36:509 (5,6) - to x:104. I don't get it
  7. 00:52:109 (2,3) - It's antiflow and far Hdash. Maybe change 00:52:509 (3) - to curve for easier to catch. yess
  8. 00:55:309 (3,4) - So far Hdash. I suggest move 00:55:509 (4,5,6,7,8) - to x:64 for easier to catch. omg yes
  9. 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4) - Look not smooth to play. I suggest move 01:04:809 (2) - to x:128 and 01:05:209 (4) - to x:384. Well, it was made like that on purpose, I would like to keep it.
Platter
  1. 00:23:309 (6,7,8) - I think if (6) is change slider move to right (start) > left (end) and (7) on x:72 It will play smooth. I really enjoy playing my pattern, so I would love to keep it.
  2. 00:23:909 (9) - I think slider should end on 00:24:309 and add note on 00:24:409 -. yess
  3. 00:39:709 (3,4) - I think it look hard for platter with Dash to Hdash. Can you remove dash between this? Maybe you can change slider to oblique. It was pretty tough, but I managed it.
  4. 00:41:309 (3,4) - Same as above^. ^
  5. 00:42:909 (2) - Move to x:328. 00:42:109 (1,2) - 00:42:909 (2,3) - I think a bit to far. I slightly decreased the distance here
  6. 00:46:909 (1) - I think it should more vertical. yess
  7. 00:48:509 (3,4) - Distance look weird. I suggest change to this.
looks fine I think
Salad
  1. 00:22:909 (1,2) - Distance look weird. It will dash or not? I suggest move 00:23:309 (2) - to x:224. moved it to 240
  2. 00:59:109 (4,5) - I think it should not dash and dash on 00:59:309 (5,1) - look it steader.ok


That's all from me. Good luck and take my star <3 Thank you. <3
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sorry to very late modding ;w;

Rain

■ 00:07:309 (1,2,3) - this rhythm would be better because 00:07:309 is high pitch but 00:07:709 is low pitch so using same slider wouldnt be good and between 000:08:109 and 00:08:409, it'll be nice if there is dash
■ 00:11:309 (1) - if you want keep this spinner time, add note on 00:12:909 but if you dont want, make 00:10:909 (5) be slider and move spinner to 00:11:709
■ 00:14:509 (3,4) - make more distance. compared with previous patterns, it's too near
■ 00:15:309 (5,6) - ^
■ 00:16:409 - there's lyric so you should add note on here or use slider
■ 00:18:109 (1) - this rhythm would be nice because lyrics are on 00:18:309 and 00:18:509
■ 00:32:909 (2,3) - move the the left to maker more distances
■ 00:36:109 (3,4) - make more distance. it's too near
■ 00:54:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you can change these hitsounds too loud to use at this song
■ 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

good luck!
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_Asriel wrote:

sorry to very late modding ;w;

Rain

■ 00:07:309 (1,2,3) - this rhythm would be better because 00:07:309 is high pitch but 00:07:709 is low pitch so using same slider wouldnt be good and between 000:08:109 and 00:08:409, it'll be nice if there is dash ok
■ 00:11:309 (1) - if you want keep this spinner time, add note on 00:12:909 but if you dont want, make 00:10:909 (5) be slider and move spinner to 00:11:709 added a note
■ 00:14:509 (3,4) - make more distance. compared with previous patterns, it's too near yes
■ 00:15:309 (5,6) - ^ ^
■ 00:16:409 - there's lyric so you should add note on here or use slider I don't think it's that noticeable, the current slider fits here imo
■ 00:18:109 (1) - this rhythm would be nice because lyrics are on 00:18:309 and 00:18:509 I tried to focus on music here, I won't change it
■ 00:32:909 (2,3) - move the the left to maker more distances ok
■ 00:36:109 (3,4) - make more distance. it's too near Made it better
■ 00:54:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you can change these hitsounds too loud to use at this song I think they're fine, I wanted to emphasize the unique sounds here.
■ 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

good luck!
Thanks for the mod!
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Salad and Platter are missing kpop as a tag

[
Salad
]

  1. 00:03:709 (1,2) - 00:04:809 (2,3) - both of these are pretty large distances, and while they are fully walkable they kinda look like dashes. If these are meant to be dashes, buff the distances, if they're supposed to be walks nerf them
  2. 00:07:309 (1,2) - 00:09:709 (2,3) - same as above, these are pretty ambiguous, nerf of buff them depending on if they're walks or dashes
  3. 00:15:909 (7,8) - changing these two notes to a slider would be nice because of the held vocal there
  4. 00:25:309 (4,5) - rhythm here could be better, start by removing 00:25:309 (4) - and moving 00:25:509 (5) - so it start on 00:25:309 - . Going over the vocals on 00:25:709 - doesn't work very well since you've been following them a lot in the map
  5. 00:36:709 (3,4,5) - Since you dash to this could you give it an angle so it's harder to overshoot it?
  6. 00:43:709 (3,1) - The distance between the slider and spinner here is unrankable right now. You'll need to end the slider on 00:44:109 - for it to be alright
  7. 01:26:109 (1,2) - Increase the distance here, distance is a bit ambiguous
  8. 01:28:109 (5,6) - Should be a dash here, 01:29:309 - is just a very strong sound
[
Platter
]

  1. 00:08:009 (2,3) - 00:08:109 (3,4) - make these distances equal cuz it's pretty obvious they're not rn
  2. 00:29:909 (2) - Here the rhythm is kinda weird since the vocals actually land around 00:30:009 - You can change it to have a circle on 00:29:909 (2) - and then a 1/2 slider on 00:30:109 - with a dash to it. See box below
  3. 00:52:309 (4,5) - Should be a dash, due to the strong vocals here
  4. 00:54:909 (1,2,3) - Like in the rain, should ctrl-g this rhythm
  5. 01:01:309 (1,2) - Distance here is wayy too low compared to anything else in the map. With the strong vocals and the instruments here should at least be a dash
[
Rain
]

  1. 00:08:409 (2,3) - Should make this a dash to have progression towards 00:10:009 (2,3) - being an hdash and also the sound on there is stronger
  2. 00:11:309 (1) - Would make the spinner start on 00:11:109 - and end in the same place still because the sound the spinner is following starts earlier
  3. 00:18:809 (2,3) - Should be a hyper or dash imo since the sound on 00:18:909 - is stronger than the one on 00:19:709 - and that has an hdash
  4. 00:43:709 (1) - Having a spinner here doesn't really work, since for this kind of sound you've been using 1/6 streams
  5. 00:45:709 (2) - you'd be better off doing a 1/1 slider here to follow the vocal since it has so much importance in this section of the song, where the other instruments are very quiet
  6. 00:48:509 (4) - NC this note
  7. 00:48:909 (5,6,7) - since there isn't really a sound on 00:49:109 (6) - you could try the rhythm in the box below for this part with a 3/4 slider
  8. 00:55:509 (4,5) - You followed the 1/4 wooshy noise here so you should also follow it on 00:55:009 -. The rhythm for 00:54:909 (1,2,3) - should be ctrl-g'ed to follow the song consistently (actually just doing a ctrl-g also makes the pattern work with the new rhythm so it's best to just do that)
  9. 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4) - these kinda play awkwardly, have them be more like 00:36:509 (4,5) - so you don't have to just stand under them to catch them

Posting now so I don't lose progress, don't reply yet
Gonna go make some food, I'm hungry, brb to mod salad
Gonna finish modding tomorrow


Okay, call me back once you've replied to the stuff
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celerih wrote:

Salad and Platter are missing kpop as a tag fixed

[
Salad
]

  1. 00:03:709 (1,2) - 00:04:809 (2,3) - both of these are pretty large distances, and while they are fully walkable they kinda look like dashes. If these are meant to be dashes, buff the distances, if they're supposed to be walks nerf them done
  2. 00:07:309 (1,2) - 00:09:709 (2,3) - same as above, these are pretty ambiguous, nerf of buff them depending on if they're walks or dashes done
  3. 00:15:909 (7,8) - changing these two notes to a slider would be nice because of the held vocal there ok
  4. 00:25:309 (4,5) - rhythm here could be better, start by removing 00:25:309 (4) - and moving 00:25:509 (5) - so it start on 00:25:309 - . Going over the vocals on 00:25:709 - doesn't work very well since you've been following them a lot in the map done
  5. 00:36:709 (3,4,5) - Since you dash to this could you give it an angle so it's harder to overshoot it? sure, but a little bit different. I just don't want an oblique angle in this case.
  6. 00:43:709 (3,1) - The distance between the slider and spinner here is unrankable right now. You'll need to end the slider on 00:44:109 - for it to be alright okay
  7. 01:26:109 (1,2) - Increase the distance here, distance is a bit ambiguous sure
  8. 01:28:109 (5,6) - Should be a dash here, 01:29:309 - is just a very strong sound done
[
Platter
]

  1. 00:08:009 (2,3) - 00:08:109 (3,4) - make these distances equal cuz it's pretty obvious they're not rn done I guess
  2. 00:29:909 (2) - Here the rhythm is kinda weird since the vocals actually land around 00:30:009 - You can change it to have a circle on 00:29:909 (2) - and then a 1/2 slider on 00:30:109 - with a dash to it. See box below sure
  3. 00:52:309 (4,5) - Should be a dash, due to the strong vocals here yes
  4. 00:54:909 (1,2,3) - Like in the rain, should ctrl-g this rhythm okay
  5. 01:01:309 (1,2) - Distance here is wayy too low compared to anything else in the map. With the strong vocals and the instruments here should at least be a dash Totally forgot about it, you're right
[
Rain
]

  1. 00:08:409 (2,3) - Should make this a dash to have progression towards 00:10:009 (2,3) - being an hdash and also the sound on there is stronger I want to keep it walkable, making a dash makes it worse to play imo.
  2. 00:11:309 (1) - Would make the spinner start on 00:11:109 - and end in the same place still because the sound the spinner is following starts earlier done
  3. 00:18:809 (2,3) - Should be a hyper or dash imo since the sound on 00:18:909 - is stronger than the one on 00:19:709 - and that has an hdash I mainly focused on the vocals here, that's why there's a hdash, I pretty much wanted to highlight the transition from lighter to stronger vocals. Anyways, Increased the distance a little bit.
  4. 00:43:709 (1) - Having a spinner here doesn't really work, since for this kind of sound you've been using 1/6 streams Added a 1/6 slider.
  5. 00:45:709 (2) - you'd be better off doing a 1/1 slider here to follow the vocal since it has so much importance in this section of the song, where the other instruments are very quiet I'd prefer to keep it, I like the rhythm of instruments, they're not that quiet imo.
  6. 00:48:509 (4) - NC this note okay
  7. 00:48:909 (5,6,7) - since there isn't really a sound on 00:49:109 (6) - you could try the rhythm in the box below for this part with a 3/4 slider
    sure
  8. 00:55:509 (4,5) - You followed the 1/4 wooshy noise here so you should also follow it on 00:55:009 -. The rhythm for 00:54:909 (1,2,3) - should be ctrl-g'ed to follow the song consistently (actually just doing a ctrl-g also makes the pattern work with the new rhythm so it's best to just do that)
    ok
  9. 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4) - these kinda play awkwardly, have them be more like 00:36:509 (4,5) - so you don't have to just stand under them to catch them
I really like that pattern, It was meant to be played like that, more personal I guess. I would love to keep it that way. Also, I didn't want to repeat the same thing.


Posting now so I don't lose progress, don't reply yet
Gonna go make some food, I'm hungry, brb to mod salad
Gonna finish modding tomorrow


Okay, call me back once you've replied to the stuff
Thanks for the mod!
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Recheck time!!!! Sorry for the wait, busy with uni all week aaaaaaaaaahhh

Salad:
-00:04:809 (2,3) - Increase distance here, since it's a pretty ambiguous dash right now
-00:25:109 (2,3,4,5) - I absolutely loved what you did with this pattern! :D
-00:43:709 (3,1) - the time between the two here is still unrankable, you'll need to end the slider earlier on 00:44:109 - since you need at least a 1/1 distance between the two
-00:44:509 (1) - also why doesn't this end on 00:45:309 - ?

Platter:
-00:55:909 (5,6,7) - 01:08:709 (8,9,10) - Should be 1/6
-01:02:109 (3,4,5) - Same here. There isn't any sound on the blue tick to justify this being 1/4. 1/6 is the correct snap here

Rain
-00:59:309 (4) - Why not have this be the same as 01:12:109 (1,2) - since those 1/6 sounds are introduced there

Okay, that's gonna be it
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celerih wrote:

Recheck time!!!! Sorry for the wait, busy with uni all week aaaaaaaaaahhh

Salad:
-00:04:809 (2,3) - Increase distance here, since it's a pretty ambiguous dash right now yes
-00:25:109 (2,3,4,5) - I absolutely loved what you did with this pattern! :D<3
-00:43:709 (3,1) - the time between the two here is still unrankable, you'll need to end the slider earlier on 00:44:109 - since you need at least a 1/1 distance between the two done
-00:44:509 (1) - also why doesn't this end on 00:45:309 - ? right, fixed

Platter:
-00:55:909 (5,6,7) - 01:08:709 (8,9,10) - Should be 1/6 yes
-01:02:109 (3,4,5) - Same here. There isn't any sound on the blue tick to justify this being 1/4. 1/6 is the correct snap here fixed

Rain
-00:59:309 (4) - Why not have this be the same as 01:12:109 (1,2) - since those 1/6 sounds are introduced there I wanted to highlight the end of the section with those 1/6 at the end. I want to keep it 1/4, because it fits as well.

Okay, that's gonna be it
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okie dokie, looks ready to me now :3c Sorry again for the wait too long wait for this
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celerih wrote:

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okie dokie, looks ready to me now :3c Sorry again for the wait too long wait for this
Aaa, I'm so grateful, thanks again!
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Rebubbling due to me not checking metadata properly, my bad

Artist was fine, but song title needed to be changed http://2pm.jype.com/discography.asp?idx=14&page=2
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OWO
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JeirYagtama wrote:

OWO
owo
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I think there are a few more Issues on dashes, hitsounds, and NCs before we can move this set forward


General

  1. There is some inconsistenccy in your hs here when 00:26:109 (1) - has a finish hs in platter while salad doesnt have any
Salad



  1. 00:26:109 (5,1) - Ok now this is basically an edge dash with how large distance between these 2 is with 2.77ds so please reduce the ds here until its 2.00ds atleast
  2. 00:26:509 (1,2,3) - Is this meant to be dash between 2 and 3 or no? If not then please make them have equidistance with each other
  3. 00:26:109 (5,1) - NC should in 5 here due to a loud downbeat with a big white tick
  4. 00:31:909 (3,1,2) - Yeah I think the dash here is a bit too harsh. Nerfing it when 00:32:509 (1,2) - is moved at x:91 and 00:32:909 (2) - x:358 will do the trick
  5. 00:37:109 (1) - Ending a slider in a big white tick with a loud downbeat isnt gonna pass for me in this section If you make this into 2 circles and adjust the pattern a bit itll do the trick
  6. 01:01:309 (5,6) - I knoww theres a really loud vocal sound you're mapping here but please keep in mind about the ds of your dashes its sort of an edge dash atm but dw moving 01:01:709 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - this to x:283 can fix it
Platter

  1. 00:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Combo is a bit too long here which I would suggest that you NC 5 to fix it
  2. 00:37:309 (1,2,3,4) - Got some confirmation that this is a hyper following an antiflow pattern which is unrankable in platter. You can fix this by copypasting 00:37:309 (1,2) - then make it a hyper and a little bit of adjusting here 00:38:909 (1,2,3,4) - by moving to x:77 can do the trick
  3. 00:23:309 (6,7,8,9) - The dash here should be swapped to 00:23:309 (6,8) - since 8 is a clear loud downbeat but 1/4 hypers are unrankable at this bpm so I suggest removing 00:23:709 (2) - if that is the case then adjust the pattern to your liking to fix this
  4. 01:26:909 (1) - density in rhythm between salad and platter is a little bit questionable here since you mapped this section in salad with 3 circles yet this one is just one slider. I think you should keep the consistency of your rhythm here as to how it feels off that you didnt map the vocals here
  5. 00:19:709 (4) - There should be a NC here since its a loud downbeat and its on a big white tick


Call me back once you've applied the changes
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JeirYagtama wrote:

(:

I think there are a few more Issues on dashes, hitsounds, and NCs before we can move this set forward


General

  1. There is some inconsistenccy in your hs here when 00:26:109 (1) - has a finish hs in platter while salad doesnt have any
fixed

Salad



  1. 00:26:109 (5,1) - Ok now this is basically an edge dash with how large distance between these 2 is with 2.77ds so please reduce the ds here until its 2.00ds atleast fixed
  2. 00:26:509 (1,2,3) - Is this meant to be dash between 2 and 3 or no? If not then please make them have equidistance with each other made it walkable
  3. 00:26:109 (5,1) - NC should in 5 here due to a loud downbeat with a big white tick yes, that's right
  4. 00:31:909 (3,1,2) - Yeah I think the dash here is a bit too harsh. Nerfing it when 00:32:509 (1,2) - is moved at x:91 and 00:32:909 (2) - x:358 will do the trick yes
  5. 00:37:109 (1) - Ending a slider in a big white tick with a loud downbeat isnt gonna pass for me in this section If you make this into 2 circles and adjust the pattern a bit itll do the trick fixed
  6. 01:01:309 (5,6) - I knoww theres a really loud vocal sound you're mapping here but please keep in mind about the ds of your dashes its sort of an edge dash atm but dw moving 01:01:709 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - this to x:283 can fix it fixed
Platter

  1. 00:21:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Combo is a bit too long here which I would suggest that you NC 5 to fix it
  2. 00:37:309 (1,2,3,4) - Got some confirmation that this is a hyper following an antiflow pattern which is unrankable in platter. You can fix this by copypasting 00:37:309 (1,2) - then make it a hyper and a little bit of adjusting here 00:38:909 (1,2,3,4) - by moving to x:77 can do the trick done
  3. 00:23:309 (6,7,8,9) - The dash here should be swapped to 00:23:309 (6,8) - since 8 is a clear loud downbeat but 1/4 hypers are unrankable at this bpm so I suggest removing 00:23:709 (2) - if that is the case then adjust the pattern to your liking to fix this so basically after conversating, I came up with new ideas. 00:22:909 (1) - It's a hdash, 00:23:709 (4,5) - removed the hdash
  4. 01:26:909 (1) - density in rhythm between salad and platter is a little bit questionable here since you mapped this section in salad with 3 circles yet this one is just one slider. I think you should keep the consistency of your rhythm here as to how it feels off that you didnt map the vocals here changed the pattern is salad
  5. 00:19:709 (4) - There should be a NC here since its a loud downbeat and its on a big white tick
fixed


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