So, this is the first formal mod I have made to you, Danzai.
For this, I'll throw in care and every idea I can think of for your map; that is, you know what to take or leave.
Try to find a better quality mp3 if possible.
[Lite]
00:18:135 (5) - Align vertically with 00:16:546 (3) -
00:46:347 - You added breaks in the other two "empty spaces", why not add one here as well, or remove the other two for consistency?
00:48:731 (3,4) - see 00:42:374 (3,4) - and compare
00:49:923 (4) - clap at beginning of slider
00:59:857 - move kiai time to here
00:58:665 (1) - this lack of repeat slider on lyrics, can be compensated by making the spinner longer and ending on 00:59:857 -
01:04:625 (1) - finish?
01:22:109 (5) - Not a bad slider, but not delicious, consider a classic slider, S, V, wriggle or blanket.
01:28:466 (1,3) - A bit of an overlap if you notice. It's not a problem, but that's for you if you want it this way.
01:49:129 (3) - end on 01:50:718 - if possible
02:08:201 (3) - This spiral needs a bit more work; aim for perfection. 3 points besides beginning/end is too little.
02:09:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move all these to the right so that 02:12:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitcircles are aligned to the center of the play area.
02:58:268 (1,2) - whistle
02:59:062 (3) - finish at start of slider
[Ryu's Normal]
There's a few timing sections that ain't snapped; check them out, noticed the first when in my mod post I added one.
And it lacks a bit of polish; try to see for yourself.
00:28:466 (2) - clap
00:30:850 (2) - ^
00:34:427 (2) - clap end of slider
(you'll be noticing we're setting up a clap pattern; keep this one up)
00:56:281 (6) - Make a sexy slider, man.
01:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - pretty long combo for a normal
01:25:089 - hey, that timing section ain't snapped.
02:09:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - long combo
03:00:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yeah
[Kompliserat]
00:08:996 (1,3,5,7) - Consistently align horizontally
00:09:393 (2,4,6,8) - Inconsistent spacing ;9
00:27:672 (10,11,12,13) - make a compressed stream, people love those.
00:44:460 - that empty space again
01:24:095 (4) - square much? redo it round?
01:48:930 (6) - redo as a big circle!
don't worry a jump to 01:50:718 (1) - makes sense
that's pretty much it. (star as a token of good luck ;p)