This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24. april 2012 at 09:12:45

Artist: Veronica Maggio
Title: Jag Kommer
Source: Satan I Gatan
Tags: pop sweedish svensk listepop
BPM: 151
Filesize: 7934kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:

1. Agka's Normal (3,41 stars, 199 notes)
2. Enkel (2,9 stars, 157 notes)
3. Kompliserat (4,88 stars, 410 notes)

Download: Veronica Maggio - Jag Kommer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm coming, I'm coming, even in the stairs!

starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr<3

i hate this thing


new mp3 given in pm

@_@ I thought she sang: acoma acoma acoma but it was Jag kommer, jag kommer, jag kommer xD
HOW CAN I PUT STARS FOR STAR ;;

So, this is the first formal mod I have made to you, Danzai.
For this, I'll throw in care and every idea I can think of for your map; that is, you know what to take or leave.

Try to find a better quality mp3 if possible.

[Lite]
00:18:135 (5) - Align vertically with 00:16:546 (3) -
00:46:347 - You added breaks in the other two "empty spaces", why not add one here as well, or remove the other two for consistency?
00:48:731 (3,4) - see 00:42:374 (3,4) - and compare
00:49:923 (4) - clap at beginning of slider
00:59:857 - move kiai time to here
00:58:665 (1) - this lack of repeat slider on lyrics, can be compensated by making the spinner longer and ending on 00:59:857 -
01:04:625 (1) - finish?
01:22:109 (5) - Not a bad slider, but not delicious, consider a classic slider, S, V, wriggle or blanket.
01:28:466 (1,3) - A bit of an overlap if you notice. It's not a problem, but that's for you if you want it this way.
01:49:129 (3) - end on 01:50:718 - if possible
02:08:201 (3) - This spiral needs a bit more work; aim for perfection. 3 points besides beginning/end is too little.
02:09:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move all these to the right so that 02:12:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitcircles are aligned to the center of the play area.
02:58:268 (1,2) - whistle
02:59:062 (3) - finish at start of slider

[Ryu's Normal]
There's a few timing sections that ain't snapped; check them out, noticed the first when in my mod post I added one.
And it lacks a bit of polish; try to see for yourself.
00:28:466 (2) - clap
00:30:850 (2) - ^
00:34:427 (2) - clap end of slider
(you'll be noticing we're setting up a clap pattern; keep this one up)
00:56:281 (6) - Make a sexy slider, man.
01:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - pretty long combo for a normal
01:25:089 - hey, that timing section ain't snapped.
02:09:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - long combo
03:00:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yeah

[Kompliserat]
00:08:996 (1,3,5,7) - Consistently align horizontally
00:09:393 (2,4,6,8) - Inconsistent spacing ;9
00:27:672 (10,11,12,13) - make a compressed stream, people love those.
00:44:460 - that empty space again
01:24:095 (4) - square much? redo it round?
01:48:930 (6) - redo as a big circle! don't worry a jump to 01:50:718 (1) - makes sense

that's pretty much it. (star as a token of good luck ;p)

dkun wrote:

Ryu's Normal

1. 00:56:281 (6) - what is this slider I don't even
2. otherwise great diff!

OMGthx;w; glad tohear!(problemswithspacelol)


And Danzai I lovechuuumilk~ :3

Agkaemon wrote:

[Ryu's Normal]
There's a few timing sections that ain't snapped; check them out, noticed the first when in my mod post I added one.
And it lacks a bit of polish; try to see for yourself.
00:28:466 (2) - clap
00:30:850 (2) - ^
00:34:427 (2) - clap end of slider
(you'll be noticing we're setting up a clap pattern; keep this one up)
00:56:281 (6) - Make a sexy slider, man.
01:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - pretty long combo for a normal
01:25:089 - hey, that timing section ain't snapped.
02:09:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - long combo
03:00:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yeah

Ilold x3

Thanks a bunch dkun and Agkaemon <3

[General]
Maybe use tick rate 2 on this song. It fits better especially on the hardest difficulty.

[Lite]

1. Shouldn't this be called Latt, simpelt or something like that.
2. The HUGE amount of claps in the chorus is really annoying. Having more than two claps 1/2 close to each other without any backing is pretty much always an bad idea.. If you want something similar to that just use normal sample set.
3. I think that 01:23:698 - 01:28:466 and 02:16:148 - 02:51:910 is the only breaks you need. Also the 02:16:148 - 02:51:910 is WAAAY to long. 02:28:864 - 02:41:579 is the best break placement.
4. The 1/2 long sliders with one repeat is REALLY boring, especially with this low slider speed and you use it so much.. having just 1/1 long slider or having one or two circles is more fun imo.

[Ryu's Normal]

1. Complete lack of hitsounds. You NEED to add more.
2. The jump in volume in the choruses is waaay to much, 10% 20% is all you need.
3. The low SV combined with the low DS makes this pretty awkward to play.
4. I would really prefer that you had the same break times (Or at least one break as there is none right now) and end time as the other difficulties.

01:22:506 (10,11,12) - These circles feel out of place considering they don't follow the lyrics like the rest. I think it would be better if you remove the circles made a 2/1 long slider here instead
01:24:095 (14,15,16) - ^
02:13:367 (10,11,12) - ^
02:14:956 (14,15,16) - ^?
03:04:228 (10,11,12) - ^
03:05:817 (14,15,16) - ^

[Kompliserat]

1. Shouldn't the difficulity name be called Komplicerat?
2. I have the same problem with the overuse of claps and breaks as with Lite.

00:32:638 (1) - Remove combo
00:59:559 (2) - This would play so much better if it wasn't stacked like the other other circles after this.
01:06:016 (5) - Add combo
01:12:572 (9) - ^
01:22:109 (1) - Sounds better as just 1/2 long.
01:56:877 (5) - Add combo
02:04:824 (1) - Remove combo
02:05:619 (1) - ^
02:09:592 (6) - Add combo

Kompliserat was pretty fun, It feels like the other difficulties could be a lot better though..

rename Agka's normal into Agka's Normal

thumbs up take a star!
lookin' better.

Insane:
00:05:619 (6) - NC
00:12:175 (9) - ^
00:19:923 (9) - ^
00:23:301 (7) - ^
00:37:890 - </3
00:44:162 - ^
00:53:897 (6) - NC
00:59:857 - Start kiai here~
01:22:506 (11) - NC
01:48:930 (6) - ^
02:41:579 - Start kiai here

Normal:
For stuff like 00:42:374 (3), I don't like them, because it's kinda uncreative to have that many repeats when the music doesn't really call for it </3

Easy:
moe

CDFA wrote:

Insane:
00:05:619 (6) - NC
00:12:175 (9) - ^
00:19:923 (9) - ^
00:23:301 (7) - ^
00:37:890 - </3
00:44:162 - ^
00:53:897 (6) - NC
00:59:857 - Start kiai here~ nope
01:22:506 (11) - NC
01:48:930 (6) - ^
02:41:579 - Start kiai here nope

Normal:
For stuff like 00:42:374 (3), I don't like them, because it's kinda uncreative to have that many repeats when the music doesn't really call for it </3

Easy:
moe

Thanks for mod! Changed everything except the kiai, I personally thinks it's best as it is uguu <3

why is it called kompliserat?
it's suppose to be komplicerat. the song is swedish, ain't it?

Alright I'll stop feeling like shit and actually mod this song !

General

As I told you many times already, I think some parts of mapping focus too much on the singing rather than the music itself, leaving gaps here and there in your maps. It's okay, it's not illegal, but it's not elegant either.

The breaks in all difficulty is RIDICULOUSLY LONG ! I'd suggest to start the break at 02:28:864 - and end it at 02:41:182 - in all difficulties. It's okay to have such break at the intro of the song I guess, but it's annoying when you have to wait 25 seconds before playing again.

Enkel

- This difficuty seems like... It has been let down compared to the others. It just doesn't have a good taste to it. I'll try to point parts that will help revitalize your easy a bit.
- Since it's an easy, try to not use overlaps too much. They are the devil to beginners.

00:14:956 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:27:672 - Adding a note here would make sense.
00:58:665 (1) - I'm sure there's a better location to put that spinner so the chorus has notes of it's own (and not having a spinner that starts before the chorus and end where the chorus already begins). For insistance, I would see 00:56:678 - as really the ideal place to place that spinner (same length or one white tick longer) with a slider or something to start the next part.
01:00:453 (1,2,3) -
01:06:016 (1,2,3,4) -
01:12:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - These could start on the NEXT white tick instead of red tick. I know what you'll say ! "BUT IT FOLLOWS THE LYRICS THAT WAY". Well that's one of the parts I say you gotta find the balance between the lyrics and the song where it plays AND sounds good! I just think it sounds better when it follows the actual music. Besides, that's how they are arranged at the beginning of the song...
01:33:235 (4) - Here it stops at a red tick, but if I could give you an advice, it's to make sure the whole part is included in a slider. If it stops in the middle leaving a gap where you would expect a note to be (as in 01:34:029 - in this case), it sounds rather strange. I would advise you to make the slider longer so it joins to 01:34:029 - .
01:34:427 (5) - That slider looks like.... I'm not even gonna say it. There is kids in these forums!
01:49:129 (3) - It'll be better if this slider ends on a white tick with a short bouncing slider coming after it.
01:51:513 (1,2,3) -
01:56:877 (1,2,3,4) -
02:03:235 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:16:347 - This break is ridiculously long. Please map 02:41:579 - an onward like in all other difficulties...
03:07:009 - Totally optional, but a note maybe? Though I understand why you don't put any notes here.

Agka's Normal

- WAY WAY WAY too many sliders. Sliders should be there to link notes together and be used occasionally. I don't think the use of sliders is proper here. I'd suggest to replace some with notes.
- Try to replace all sliders that bounces twice with some kind of note patters (and a slider if really needed). I think this will help a lot.

00:24:890 (1) - I think this could be a good start to include a note. Instead of the last slider bounce, put a note... so it looks like "start-bounce-end note start-bounce-end note".
00:39:195 (3) - Here you could replace this slider with 3 notes, following a slider (yes, that ends where the slider (1) normally begins) then put a note.
00:42:374 (3) - Slider note note instead ?
01:44:360 (1,2) - I don't think long sliders belong there.
01:51:115 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Why do you start following the song on red ticks at THAT specific part ?
02:47:937 (1,2,3) - You could probably continue the note patterns you previously used here. That will remove a bunch of sliders lol.
The rest of the song after these parts are okay .

I didn't point ALL occasions you can replace some sliders with notes, but I'd say try and see if you can make this difficulty so it's about a ratio at least 60% notes, 40% sliders. (More notes never hurts, more sliders meh).

Kompliserat

- Now this difficulty is decently done! The uses of the red ticks in the chorus is more appropriate and feels less chunky than in the easy difficulty since there's a flow with it.
- You're using some weird sliders there sir. I'm not really fond of them actually (especially the zigzaging ones), but I will let that go since it's more of personal taste rather than an ACTUAL important point of modding.

01:08:003 - Add a note here PLEASE !!!! Do it for me. I'll give you a rose or something lol.
01:13:168 (3,4,5) - It would be cool to put notes between the sliders ... but then you do it in the following part. You may as well ignore this.
01:56:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The space between the triplets could be filled to keep consistancy with the previous chorus section which, at this part, they were filled.
02:43:367 - A note here perhaps...

I think this difficulty is going in the right direction though. It just needs a little tweak here and there to make it less chunky and it would be good. Less triplets, more continuity.

Old map but I don't care, the song genre and language then you search for the map is "Unspecified (Other)". Its a easy fix then updating the map but it makes it easier to find the map then searching, booth if you know what you are searching for and not.

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