Some of the combos go up to 19 while some stop at 6, maybe shorten some of the combos?
Maybe space out the notes at the start of the song? they feel kind of under mapped.
00:04:154 (3,5) - ugly over lap? change maybe : /
00:08:105 (1,3) - try to over lap the end of slider 3 onto the head of 1
00:10:008 (6,7,8) - try to blanket or over lap ends
00:23:032 (4,6) - touching?
00:25:227 (13,14,2) - ^
00:30:349 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - maybe position the stream abit more to the right so i doesnt over lap with the slider
00:30:349 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - the heads of 8 and 15 can overlap so look nice maybe
00:37:374 (2,5) - ugly overlap move abit
00:40:447 (11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4) - 2 over laps with the stream and 4 over laps 2, to make some nicer looking over laps
00:48:642 (9,10,11,12) - 12 and 9 can have a nice over lap by the heads of the sliders
01:08:983 (6,7) - these 2 could use a nicer blanket
01:13:520 (2,5) - just move a little bit to over lap the heads
01:20:691 (7,11) - ^
01:23:471 (2,4) - ^
01:24:203 (4,6) - these are the overlaps that are nice =w=
01:39:422 (6,8) - these should over lap the heads
01:57:422 (2,3,5) - use a nice blanket
02:08:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this look symmetrical?
02:09:715 (7,1) - too big spacing?
02:10:008 (1,5) - overlap nicely pls!
02:25:959 (8,13) - ^
02:29:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe arrange this nicer, so that there is less weird overlaps
02:34:447 (1,2) - try changing the shape of the slider so that i looks flowy
02:36:349 (1,3) - move 3 abit more upwards so there is not much over lap
02:42:642 (1,2) - this could use a nicer blanket
02:46:154 (1,2) - ^
03:04:154 (3,4,5) - weird over laps
03:08:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rearrage abit, maybe try something like back and forth
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8286914 something like this maybe
03:20:105 (1,2) - weird overlap
03:20:544 (2,7) - can over lap nicely
03:21:569 (8,9,10) - maybe put closer to each other so they look like a nice pattern
03:23:617 (15,16) - can use a better blanket
03:25:374 (4,7) - over lap heads pls
03:26:544 (8,9) - use a better blanket
03:27:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks a bit wierd im sure you can make it look abit neater
03:35:764 (7,8,9,10) - suddenly change flow abit wierd
03:39:569 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - looks very messy when highlighted
03:43:520 (1,2,3,4) - use this to make a nice triangle slider looking pattern
03:47:471 (3,4) - space out abit more? can be quite confusing when people think its a 1/4 jump
03:47:764 (1,2,3,4) - make it look symmetrical at an angle.
i feel like there was a lot or random slider shapes. maybe try to use more simple shapes next time?
i think the map is interesting but maybe it still needs quite abit more work for it to be ranked! :3 GL!