this song sounds almost exactly like chrono diver just with vocals
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitwhistle99.wav
soft-hitclap11.wav
soft-hitfinish10.wav
turning your bg into a jpeg would save lots of filesize
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Guideline: Try to keep osz files under 10MB, or 30MB if you include a video/storyboard. Videos and storyboards can generally be decreased in size by lowering the quality of the video or trimming/resizing storyboard elements.
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- 00:01:584 - skipping this consistently is very weird because it's the only drum sound in the phrase you skip and you map pretty much every other one
come to think of it density is pretty high here, did you consider maybe using 1/4 sliders/reverses instead of 5 note streams? it is the intro after all
- 00:10:635 (3,4,5,6) - this feels no different from the previous section even tho the music changes here, maybe lower spacing?
- 00:14:428 (2,3) - angle, flow, and spacing for most of these streams in the section feel too harsh especially considering the streams are mapped to
barely audible sounds, i recommend changing it to like
http://i.imgur.com/Z4haXNL.png or soemthing // 00:18:566 (2,3) - spacing too high etc
- 00:29:773 (3,4,5,6,7) - why stacked after all spaced out streams?
- 00:46:497 (5,6,7) - personally flows a bit weirdly linear and i'd expect the snare to have more emphasis but the kick has more of it
- 00:52:359 (8,1) - not intuitively readable as a 1/4 gap especially after spacing like 00:49:601 (8,1) -
- 00:54:945 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - aw so overmapped
stream ends here 00:55:118 - so you can add a note at 00:54:859 - and delete after then?
- 01:22:359 (1,2,3,4) - could make a neater star
- 01:38:222 (2,3,4) - 01:32:704 (2,3,4) - consistency in distance
- 01:40:635 (5,1) - almost no emphasis due to slider leniency and and distance, might as well not move for this and anti-jumps haven't been a theme so far so
- 01:42:359 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - honestly i liked the stacking of the circles under the sliders tails more, they had more emphasis than this
- 01:45:808 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - consider increasing stack distance like this maybe cuz the intensity is increasing too
http://i.imgur.com/3tm1g6c.jpg- continuation -
- 01:54:084 (1) - can symmetry?
- 01:57:877 (1,1) - would look better if purple 1 was just parallel tbh the slight tilt looks off compared to the big 1
- 01:59:256 (1) - can also symmetry?
- 02:01:325 (8) - NC for transition stream?
- 02:03:566 (1,2,3,1) - maybe have the 1 continue the pattern with the head?
http://i.imgur.com/G9Ru8i2.png (better than this obviously i suck at mapping)
- 02:04:256 - a this drum skipped sounds weird, would do
http://i.imgur.com/vm6P8nZ.png instead personally
- 02:05:118 (1) - only 1/4th 1.8x sv what are you a wimp go hard or go home 2x sv 1/8 this bitch
http://i.imgur.com/XBVdeh3.png (im kidding it's just up to you lol) // 02:10:635 (1) -
- 02:09:601 (3,4) - too similar to 02:09:256 (1,2) - but sounds are super different, at least change the slider shapes a bit
- 02:18:911 (3) - nazi but can symmetry this too?
- 02:22:532 (2,3) - ^ but placement wise something like
http://i.imgur.com/1lV4j7s.png- 02:34:084 (1) - no sv change for the different sound and atmosphere? just a slight slowdown'd be cool
- 02:56:497 (3,4) - might be way cooler as a slow slider instead of circles to capture the bass and the song winding down
- 02:57:532 (3,4) - a bit surprising distance for 1/4 gap and 02:58:911 (3,4) - even more so, seems a bit too much distance for the song here imo plus keep more control over your 1/4 distances cuz 03:04:946 (1,2,3,4) - has weird snapping for the distances from the slider like 1,2 is 1/2 but is lower spacing that 3,4 which are 1/4 gaps
- 03:25:118 (3) - seems out of place as the only curved slider maybe curve 03:25:463 (4) - too?
- 03:29:946 (1,2) - overlaps like
http://i.imgur.com/CU5Send.png usually look nicer
- 03:34:084 (1,2,3,1) - 03:36:842 (1,2,3) - consistency again
- for kiai same as last kiai ye
- 04:07:187 (1,1,1) - same 1/8 with higher sv would be way cooler but this is really nice as it is
- 04:24:601 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - noooooo overmapped stream
it's just 1/2
04:36:153 - i'd lower overall spacing here, after the kiai this place just seems relatively similar spacing so the kiai and the section prior to this stand out a lot less imo
- 04:55:808 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is the only sliderend stream you in the whole of both of these sections beginning and end and this could tilt people not prepared for one, so maybe use 04:54:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm instead
- 05:03:222 (4) - cooler note but less emphasis than 05:03:394 (5) - (idk maybe you wanted to follow snare more but i'd show off that piano thing personally)