Lolinator2000 wrote:

Hi from your mod queue
hope you mod my map
Thanks! I will!

Easy

I could have sworn I hitsounded this diff, oh well
00:00:479 (1) Remove slider and start slider at 00:00:267 and end at 00:00:901
Fixed!
00:01:324 (2) NC this and set as finish hitsound
Fixed!
00:01:746 (3,5) set as clap hitsound
Fixed!
00:03:014 (6) Slider end is off pitch you should fix it
Fixed!
00:04:704 (1) set as finish hitsound
Fixed!
00:05:126 (2,3,4) Move (2) note at x:192 y:128 and move (3) note at x:272 y:192 and set as clap hitsound to (2 and 4)
Fixed!
00:08:084 (1) set as finish hitsound
Fixed!
00:08:507 (2,4) set as clap hitsound
Fixed!
00:09:774 (1,3) same as above
Fixed!
00:11:042 (3) Change slider into a note
Fixed!
00:13:155 (5) Set as finish hitsound
Fixed!
00:14:845 (1,2,4) Same as i said
Fixed!
00:18:225 (1,2,4) ^
Fixed!
00:21:605 (1,2,4) ^ agian
Fixed!
00:23:295 (4) slider should end here and at finish hitsound at the end of the slider
Fixed!
00:23:718 (5,7) NC and Set as clap hitsound
Fixed!
00:24:986 (8) Set finish hitsound at start if slider and make it good
Fixed!
00:26:676 (9,10) Set Finish hitsound in all the notes and make last slider[ a 1/1 slider
Fixed!
00:28:366 Set last note and make it a finish hitsound
Fixed!

Pyross01 wrote:

Hello, coming from your modding queue for a M4M
Will do!
Easy

• 00:03:014 (6) - The slider's end is outside the play area.
  Fixed!
  00:03:014 (6) - The slider is too long, it should end on the white tick.
  Fixed!
  00:05:126 (2) - I would put the circle one box down for the aesthetic.
  Fixed!

That's it for the mod, good luck Thanks!

Sinon Asada wrote:

Hello! come from your M4M queue!
Ill get right on that!

General
different tags between the diffs. You forget to change the tags in Easy and Rose's Hard
Fixed!
Easy
00:03:014 (6) - unsnapped slidertail, it should be 1/4 earlier
Fixed!
00:26:676 (8) - I think it is neither follow the music nor the vocal
Fixed!
00:28:472 (1) - I wonder if the spinner can start at 1/4 lines (if it is acceptable, ignore this)
I am pretty sure it does, sliders aren't quite like a normal hit object



4-Leaf Clover
00:04:281 (1) - I think there is no need for NC
Fixed!
00:17:169 (1) - Change it as 00:20:549 (1,1) - ?
Eh, the note is held more clearly at 00:17:169

Good Luck~
Thanks!

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que
Thanks for the mod!

[General]

• BG should be 1360x768 or 1920xs1080-1200
  Fixed!
  Pls start bpm here 00:01:324 -
  Fixed!

[4-Leaf Clover]

• 00:02:169 (5) - Do curve slider
  Fixed!
  00:03:648 (1) - remove nc
  Fixed!
  00:04:281 (7) - ^
  Fixed!
  00:05:549 (2,3,1,2) - you broke flow. You can do something like this
  Fixed as suggested. I also used dropoff flow on the slider here
  00:11:042 (1) - wtf slider? Remap by music
  Fixed!
  In general, your complexity is very monotonous, I'm not saying that repetition of patterns is bad, but you use it all over the map. I'll give you a couple of links with guides, read them.
  Ill look into this more overtime, I want to get this update out though xd
  
  t/86329
  https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
  and check this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

it's all, good luck
Thanks a lot for the mod, it was exactly what I was looking for, I knew this diff could be a lot better, and it still can. Thanks!

All updates have been applied!

SakuraKaminari wrote:

EASY
00:03:014 (5,2) - blanket
Fixed as best I could with distance snap
00:11:464 (4,5) - sort of blanket
Fixed for distance snap with minor overlap

4-Leaf Clover
Ok I feel like an idiot because this is the only one I found mistakes in then again its a 30 second map with 3 pages of mods
00:03:648 (6) - where is this going. doest fit the flow
I gave the slider a little curve, it is really just linear flow though, and at a slower slider, it is more natural.
00:11:253 (7,1) - dont overlap these it looks not very aesthetic
It isn't A E S T H E T I C but it has nice flow http://imgur.com/D3UnDzf
00:15:690 (4,5,1,2) - this flow is as extremely awkward shift because it is a complete shift from jumping on x axis to y with no rest inbetweenFixed
00:18:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this patterning is probably unrankable. BNs dont like squares.
Err, 00:18:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) are triangles xd The square is at 00:19:704 (1,2,3,4)
00:24:141 (1,2,3) - here again
Squares are totally rankable my dude
honestly this top diff feels very uninspired and i know it's a "4 leaf clover" but it feels like a 2012 map and will probably make the other 3 diffs which are amazing unrankable. I would redo completely or drop.
Since when is having an insane diff with justified spacing unrankable. Yeah, it's a little boring, but the squares as clovers make it unique from the other insane Harumachi diffs. I disagree.


rest of the set is super nice. good luck!
Thanks!

- Drummer- wrote:

hello, m4m

mod

[General]
uhhhhh Normal and Hard have different offsets from the other difficulties. maybe make them consistent.
Ok, thanks for mentioning
Normal is the only difficulty with combo colors. pls fix and put combo colors to the rest of the difficulties too
Where in the .osu file are the custom combo colors because I could just cope paste

[Easy]
00:28:366 (7,1) - here is absolutely no time for the player to prepare for the spinner. Beginners really need it. I would recommend just removing the spinner. if you don't, then make the spinner end silent, but allow some time to prepare.
I didn't think spinners needed prep time? It is long enough and the only guideline is about recovery time. I also want it on the easy diff so the leaderboards (if ranked) aren't stagnant.

[4-Leaf Clover]
00:01:747 (3,5) - blanket
Ok fixed
00:03:648 (6) - this timing change is quite unexpected, consider changing that. i suggest make a better and distinguishable shape for it. also, rotate it by 45° place
It IS a look little unexpected, but thanks to slider leniency they will understand the pattern without losing accuracy for it. Because of the slow slider it gives time to break the flow and start a new flow section.
00:04:281 (7) - somewhere under it, flows better
Sure, fixed
00:07:028 (1) - same slider thing as before
This one already has good flow though, as well as the SV change
00:11:253 (7) - improve the shape a little, looks rough. maybe also make it just a bit slower
Sure I'll make it slower, how do you suggest I improve the shape?
00:14:634 (1) - remove nc and place it on 00:14:845 (3)
Sure
00:15:056 (1), 00:16:112 (1) - remove nc
Sure
00:16:535 (3) - nc
ok...
00:17:169 (1) - again, make better shape so it can stand out
00:20:549 (1), 00:23:084 (2), 00:24:774 (1), 00:25:831 (4) - same as before
00:22:450 (4) - make slider velocity bigger on this slider
I'll change it on this one, this one would do better to be higher SV
00:28:154 (2,3,4) - this is too much i think. don't space them out that much
Will lower spacing, but I hang to keep the cursor movement even during the end section
00:28:472 (1) - spinner end is loud, turn the volume down
I fix xddd

good luck!
Thank you!!!

General

1. inconsistent timing offsets in your diffs, change them so they all match xd
2. The hitsounding in your diffs is not really reflective of the music imo, plus 2 of your diffs are using a Normal sampleset which is not consistent with the other diffs. At least change the samplesets to match xd

Easy

1. 00:00:267 (1) - I would not recommend starting the song with this slider. For one, it doesnt represent the vocals that well and new players will start the song on a red tick which is kinda unusual. I would just recommend removing it altogether so the song start on the downbeat. It'd be more suitable if the higher diffs started on that red tick instead (starting time doesnt need to be consistent)
2. There is little variation in the diff which is kind of a shame as this 00:04:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - is rhythmically repeated throughout most of the 30 seconds. The use of a huge slider here 00:06:394 (5) - which is an entire measure long also is a bit lackluster in terms of mapping the most significant sounds the song has to offer. Consider changing the rhythm by mapping more objects altogether, since it feels like a Beginner diff.
3. 00:11:464 (4,5) - I appreciate the blanket attempt here, but the sliders are overlapping still
4. 00:24:986 (4) - The shape of the slider can be polished by just using one white anchor instead of two. Using two will kick in the old sliderpath algorhythm resulting in a oddly shaped arch instead of a perfect one.

Rocket's Normal (who's Happy :^))

1. 00:03:014 (3,4,5) - HS where xd
2. 00:04:704 (1,2,3) - HS dont really match what you did here 00:01:324 (1,2) -
3. also the beginning is missing claps so it was kinda strange to suddenly hear claps on 00:06:394 (4) -
4. 00:25:408 (2,3) - i dont think a pattern like this looks that nice bc of the overlap, even though you blanketed it properly xd
5. The diff is fine for the most part tho

Rose's Hard

1. 00:00:267 (1,2,3) - I'd recommend removing all hitsounds here since there are only vocals on this pattern. Hitsounds should reflect what the song is doing after all. Imo Soft Whistles would still be okay to represent the vocals.
2. 00:10:197 (3) - this slider is actually the only object thats this highly spaced, the rest of the diff is mostly just Distance Snapped. Tbh I would recommend you to incorporate spacing like this throughout your diff to emphasize significant sounds, instead of having the vast majority of objects be distance snapped. For example every downbeat is worthy of at least a slightly larger spacing for emphasis etc.
3. 00:21:605 (1) - after this point you started adding a lot of claps for no particular reason. To me, it sounds like you used claps on both the vocals and the actual percussion, try and replace the vocal sounds with things like a soft whistle instead of a clap

4-Leaf Clover

1. Volume is too loud imo, consider replicating the volume settings from Rocket's diff, imo its more balanced there, also please dont use the normal sampleset in the beginning when its only the vocals xd
2. The use of finish hitsounds in your diff is also a bit excessive, so it overpowers the music a lot, try and only put finishes where necessary
3. the diff itself is sadly devoid of any proper emphasis since all the beats are highly spaced giving little opportunity to properly respresent the music

Kaitjuh wrote:

late NM from queue

General

1. inconsistent timing offsets in your diffs, change them so they all match xd
   Fixing!
2. The hitsounding in your diffs is not really reflective of the music imo, plus 2 of your diffs are using a Normal sampleset which is not consistent with the other diffs. At least change the samplesets to match xd
   Will fix!

Easy

1. 00:00:267 (1) - I would not recommend starting the song with this slider. For one, it doesnt represent the vocals that well and new players will start the song on a red tick which is kinda unusual. I would just recommend removing it altogether so the song start on the downbeat. It'd be more suitable if the higher diffs started on that red tick instead (starting time doesnt need to be consistent)
   Fixed!
2. There is little variation in the diff which is kind of a shame as this 00:04:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - is rhythmically repeated throughout most of the 30 seconds. The use of a huge slider here 00:06:394 (5) - which is an entire measure long also is a bit lackluster in terms of mapping the most significant sounds the song has to offer. Consider changing the rhythm by mapping more objects altogether, since it feels like a Beginner diff.
   It kinda is already xdd, this "Easy" almost has the star rating of a normal, but it is still an easy. I don't know how much I want to change in terms of rhythm choices on a 30 second Easy diff.
3. 00:11:464 (4,5) - I appreciate the blanket attempt here, but the sliders are overlapping still
   The attempt previously was to make it look good with distance snap, but I found a way to make the blanket almost perfect with distance snap
4. 00:24:986 (4) - The shape of the slider can be polished by just using one white anchor instead of two. Using two will kick in the old sliderpath algorhythm resulting in a oddly shaped arch instead of a perfect one.
   The slider got better

4-Leaf Clover

1. Volume is too loud imo, consider replicating the volume settings from Rocket's diff, imo its more balanced there, also please dont use the normal sampleset in the beginning when its only the vocals xd
   Lowered, and sampleset changed
2. The use of finish hitsounds in your diff is also a bit excessive, so it overpowers the music a lot, try and only put finishes where necessary
   Ok, now I finish less
3. the diff itself is sadly devoid of any proper emphasis since all the beats are highly spaced giving little opportunity to properly respresent the music
   Where to lower spacing?
   

Sorry if I sounded rude, but Good Luck o/
Oh, its fine! I know my stuff needs criticism and I don't mind how it sounds. xdd

Thanks for the mod!

My Angel Kanan wrote:

hi hi

General

1. The Offsets are not consistent make the offset from all diff like the one from happy's diff
   Will fix, its my fault xddd whoops. I fixed the placement of the uninherited timing point and forgot to keep it consistent across all diffs

Easy

1. The rhythm the placement and other stuff on this diff dosen't make sense (wow.. that hears rude af)
   It's ok if it sounds rude, if you didn't mean to be rude xddd
2. 4 circles and than a huge slider is a concept which is poor
   ok
   
3. 00:01:324 (2,3,4) - something like this one should have more 1/1 slider as example
   I was thinking about this myself, I am adding in sliders for variation now
   
4. for noobs it's hard to play this diff because of the points i mentioned
   Raising circle size as well

okay Gl
Thanks for the mod!

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que

[Rose's Hard]

• 00:09:986 (2) - maybe x:162 y:118? No i will keep this
  00:11:464 (1) - maybe so? Godd idea !
  00:11:464 (1) - remove nc ok
  00:12:732 (2) - nc ^
  00:16:535 (1,2,3) - It might be better to do so? 00:16:535 (1,2,3) - Just this slider look very bad I change it to another shape ..
  00:24:141 (1,2) - Do blanket Done
  00:23:718 (8) - nc ok
  00:24:141 (1) - remove nc ^
  00:25:197 (1) - nc ^

it's all, good luck

SakuraKaminari wrote:

Rose's Hard
00:03:014 (1) - this slider skips a lot of sounds I will keep it cause i followed the vocal
00:09:986 (2,3) - strange CV change tbh I didn't your idea .. sorry but i will keep this part ..

rest of the set is super nice. good luck!

- Drummer- wrote:

hello, m4m

mod

[Hard]
00:00:901 (3,1) - blanket these ok
00:02:591 (5,1) - this blanket can be improved too I can't see anything wrong with it
00:04:070 (2,3,4) - gonna be honest here these hitsounds hurt my ears a little. maybe turn the volume down a little for the hitsound I like it that way !
00:09:986 (2,3) - this kind of spacing doesn't happen anywhere else in the map. maybe shorten it ok fixed it
00:24:774 (2) - put this to x182 y263 No i will keep it
00:28:472 (1) - move the inherited timing point to exactly the end of the spinner. seems awkward when it's just 1/4 before the end ok


good luck!

Kaitjuh wrote:

late NM from queue

Rose's Hard

1. 00:00:267 (1,2,3) - I'd recommend removing all hitsounds here since there are only vocals on this pattern. Hitsounds should reflect what the song is doing after all. Imo Soft Whistles would still be okay to represent the vocals. ok that's right !
2. 00:10:197 (3) - this slider is actually the only object thats this highly spaced, the rest of the diff is mostly just Distance Snapped. Tbh I would recommend you to incorporate spacing like this throughout your diff to emphasize significant sounds, instead of having the vast majority of objects be distance snapped. For example every downbeat is worthy of at least a slightly larger spacing for emphasis etc. I fixed this part and made it not highly distance
3. 00:21:605 (1) - after this point you started adding a lot of claps for no particular reason. To me, it sounds like you used claps on both the vocals and the actual percussion, try and replace the vocal sounds with things like a soft whistle instead of a clap No i will keep it cause i followed the strong beat on the background .. and it giving it more impact ..

Sorry if I sounded rude, but Good Luck o/

Thank you guys for the mod !

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 0
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Harumachi Clover
TitleUnicode:春待ちクローバー
Artist:Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O)
ArtistUnicode:花坂結衣(CV：Ｍ・Ａ・Ｏ)
Creator:Mini Gaunt
Version:Rose's Hard
Source:OneRoom
Tags:harumachi clover short HappyRocket88 Rose_Melody
BeatmapID:1305672
BeatmapSetID:616530

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg2.JPEG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,167,79
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1. inherited point to Timing Section is not qualified on ranking system. I guess moving Timing Section to -366

1. Fix your AiMod
2. If i where you, 00:00:267 (1,1) - this patterns shoudnt be the same. I agree with ds 1-4, but on 5 is low ds
   Try Star Pattern or etc?
3. 00:03:859 - important beat, than the vocal though, even my maps says beat is stronger than vocal, so I highly suggest to use 1/2 slider or 2 circle. If not, since you lower the sv, nc?
4. 00:04:704 - this should be nc'ed not the red tick imo
5. 00:05:338 (1,2) - chance nc! its weird >.>
6. 00:06:394 (3) - since this is the high vocal, also the beat is here, so nc this and remove 00:05:972 -
7. 00:07:028 (1) - oh nice you nc'ed it =w=)/
8. 00:07:874 - saem as ^
9. 00:08:930 (2,3) - and yeaa i agree with the spacing, 00:09:352 (4,5) - but i cant agree with this
10. 00:07:978 (2) - circle
11. 00:09:986 (1,2,3,4) - this is just intense jump even the vocal and the music are still the same :/
12. 00:11:253 - to 00:14:845 - this is my suggestion on ur awesome diff https://puu.sh/w8Ecb/2e67745b07.png
13. 00:09:774 - is stronger than the vocal :"o
14. 00:14:845 - same as the nc same as 00:01:324 - part
15. 00:22:873 (5,1) - switch nc
16. 00:26:042 - red tick has beat on it
17. 00:28:049 - circle this

1. your hitsound is reversed, clap should be second white tick, and 4th white tick and so on..
2. 00:03:225 - and 00:03:647 - are you really sure to ignore the vocal?
3. 00:06:394 (1) - saem as ^
4. 00:13:155 (4,1) - switch nc
5. 00:14:211 (3) - blue tick has beat
6. 00:23:084 (5,1) - switch nc
7. 00:24:774 - this should be 1/1 slider and nc dou just like you did on 00:26:464 (1) - =w=/

1. Check Your AiMod: Distance Snap

1. Check Your AiMod: Distance Snap
2. since you nc 00:09:774 (1) - this part why not 00:11:464 - nc this part too
3. 00:28:788 (1) - spinner should be white tick. easy is an chill diff. dont make circle and next is blue tick :"(

Easy

w

try this

Happy's Normal

w

w

Rose's Hard

w

Zallies wrote:

hi late m4m
doing family stuff sor bout dat

this is just my opinion, as a modder though
ill do my best to mod ur awesome map :0

[general]

1. inherited point to Timing Section is not qualified on ranking system. I guess moving Timing Section to -366

Will ask about this, I moved it FROM -366 as per request.

[Hardest]

1. Fix your AiMod
   Those notes ARE snapped, just to the upcoming inherited timing point
2. If i where you, 00:00:267 (1,1) - this patterns shoudnt be the same. I agree with ds 1-4, but on 5 is low ds
   Try Star Pattern or etc?
   Fixed!
3. 00:03:859 - important beat, than the vocal though, even my maps says beat is stronger than vocal, so I highly suggest to use 1/2 slider or 2 circle. If not, since you lower the sv, nc?
   Fixed!
4. 00:04:704 - this should be nc'ed not the red tick imo
   The singer starts on the red tick, and I am NCing the singer's new line
5. 00:05:338 (1,2) - chance nc! its weird >.>
   NC shows the gradual change to annother pattern
6. 00:06:394 (3) - since this is the high vocal, also the beat is here, so nc this and remove 00:05:972 -
   I definitely need follow points for these
7. 00:07:028 (1) - oh nice you nc'ed it =w=)/
   Thanks!
8. 00:07:874 - saem as ^
   Ehhhh, the singer starts here.
9. 00:08:930 (2,3) - and yeaa i agree with the spacing, 00:09:352 (4,5) - but i cant agree with this
   Fixed!
10. 00:07:978 (2) - circle
    ?
11. 00:09:986 (1,2,3,4) - this is just intense jump even the vocal and the music are still the same :/
    Very much disagree, this section is the highest pitch for the singer, and that pitch and spacing is only done twice.
12. 00:11:253 - to 00:14:845 - this is my suggestion on ur awesome diff https://puu.sh/w8Ecb/2e67745b07.png
    I can't view the image
13. 00:09:774 - is stronger than the vocal :"o
    No, its equal, and keeping with my theme, that is better as a slider
14. 00:14:845 - same as the nc same as 00:01:324 - part
    The singer starts there xddd
15. 00:22:873 (5,1) - switch ncI prefer to NC the climax of sections
16. 00:26:042 - red tick has beat on it
    I know it does, it felt better as a slider, undermapping is not a problem on a diff like this
17. 00:28:049 - circle this
    Leaving it as is, I don't want an ending stream

need more mods! if you want to rank map >.<)/
Yep!
fix the volume i guess
Where??

[easy]

1. Check Your AiMod: Distance Snap
   Fixed!
2. since you nc 00:09:774 (1) - this part why not 00:11:464 - nc this part too
   Fixed!
3. 00:28:788 (1) - spinner should be white tick. easy is an chill diff. dont make circle and next is blue tick :"(
   Changed to red tick

sorry i really dont understand mapping easy
Its OK!

Overall Hitsound should be working and Volume needs work!
Could you point out these? thanks!

GL~!
Thanks!

deadpon3 wrote:

Hey, from my queue :3

Easy

Okay so first of all, you don't always keep the distance snap consistency, sometimes it really is random. And because it is easy diff you have to keep the DS clean.
Fixed!

Like 00:02:169 (3) - it's prev: 0,9x and next: 1,1x. If you map 1,0x through the whole song, you can't randomly increase or decrease it. Fix all DS issues. Fixed!

00:03:014 (4) - I feel like you skip a very important beat here on 00:03:859 - how about you end the slider on that beat and place a circle on 00:04:281 (5) - ?

w

I would, except I don't want new players to have a sharp angle that isn't supported by slider leniency

00:06:394 (5) - Just like above ^
Fixed!

00:11:464 (4,5) - It doesn't look good at all, Distance Snap won't let you make a blanket here, so all you can do is just a overlap, but you could change the shape into something else, it's too common and forced atm.

try this

Fixed!

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

4 leaf clover:

00:00:690 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing
Fixed!

00:04:493 (1,2,3,4) - very odd flow in this section, might need rework
It's good

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Here ya go

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Sorry, I am not looking for annother difficulty!

Zallies wrote:

hi late m4m
doing family stuff sor bout dat

this is just my opinion, as a modder though
ill do my best to mod ur awesome map :0

[general]

1. inherited point to Timing Section is not qualified on ranking system. I guess moving Timing Section to -366

[hard]

1. your hitsound is reversed, clap should be second white tick, and 4th white tick and so on.. No i like my hit sounds like that
2. 00:03:225 - and 00:03:647 - are you really sure to ignore the vocal? Yes i will keep it like this ..
3. 00:06:394 (1) - saem as ^ ^
4. 00:13:155 (4,1) - switch nc Ok
5. 00:14:211 (3) - blue tick has beat hm ?
6. 00:23:084 (5,1) - switch nc Ok
7. 00:24:774 - this should be 1/1 slider and nc dou just like you did on 00:26:464 (1) - =w=/ Here i'm following the strong drum so i will keep it

you should continue fixing the hitsounds Again i like the way i did and i feel like it suit the song



Overall Hitsound should be working and Volume needs work!
GL~!

Thanks for your mod

deadpon3 wrote:

Hey, from my queue :3

Rose's Hard

00:27:098 (2,3,4,5) - Too many stacks I think, consider unstacking 00:27:098 (2,3) - to make the transition into 00:27:732 (4,5) - easier Yeah i fixed that ..

w

`

00:03:648 (6) - NC would be good to emphasize the sudden SV decrease, also you can think about some better shape i NC this part i think it would be good


00:11:253 (7) - I don't think it anyhow fits to the map overall, it was pure jump and suddenly you map vocals into boring, long slider with repeater. Please remap this part. Also if you make circles on 00:12:309 - and 00:12:521 - it really helps to go for 00:12:732 (1) - without any consistency issues. First i make it like that cause the vocal and beside the there is no need to put circles here .. it's not suit the song .. sorry

00:17:169 (1,1) - That jump makes the gameplay really bad because of the slider's velocity here, jumping so far for a note right after such a slow slider is very unenjoyable No jumping here .. i already fixed that ..

Gl m8

Thanks for your mod

Chriz wrote:

Rose's Hard

-uff, little to improve tbh, good diff Thanks
-Higher the OD maybe to something like 5.5, if Mini Gaunt changes his OD aswell I will keep it like this
-00:24:140 (3) - the slidershape is not perfect, ctrl c + v 00:23:084 (5) - , rotate by 180° and place both sliderheads onto eachother, and youll see, its shape is not perfect I rotate this slider
-00:24:774 (4,1) - this break threw me off soooo hard, please change The reason why i made it like that is because this 00:24:985 - have nothing and it follows the drum i feel like it's good like that

Thats already it

Thanks for your mod !

Update

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Chriz wrote:

4-Leaf Clover

-Higher the OD to something like 7 please =)
Fixed!
-Fix your AiMod, change the timing point to the beginning of the map, e.g. first circle or earlier
Fixed this whole debate on that timing point by now having two!
-00:02:169 (5,1,2,3) - you could stack sliderend of 5 and 3 and rotate your pattern a bit, would look better
Fixed! Looks and plays much better now
-00:03:436 (5,1) - they dont line up properly ( would be easy to change with ^ )
I am unsure of what you mean here, do you mean the slider body and (5) or what, because it is supposed to be like that
-00:06:817 (5,1) - they dont line up properly ( not as big of a mistake as the one above tho )
Unsure of what you mean
-00:09:563 (5) - make this the same shape as before please :v
This is different in shape and placement so that it is clearly not like the other sliders (which are slow) and this one is normal speed
-00:10:831 (5) - NC ( if you change the next, you have to adjust NC aswell, since you dont want to have more than 6 circles as a whole combo )Eh, I think for this specific part in the song it is ok for this combo to be 7 long, there is no CLEAR place that an NC should go.
-00:11:042 (6,7) - they dont line up properly, also 00:11:253 (7) - sounds wrong, make the repeat on the red tick before, so you have a 1/1 repeat slider and add some circles to the blank timing partUnsure of lining up, and if it were to end on the red tick, it would have the repeat on the blue tick even though there is nothing there, it would be worse
-00:16:957 (4) - for this, ctrl c + v 00:16:324 (1,2,3) - , turn them by 180°, place 1 and 3 onto each other and make the 2 you have as the new circle you place, so that it lies under the previous 6 basically https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8340735
That is what it used to be, the flow was bad though, so I made the distance spacing consistent on (1,2,3) but made a sharper angle.
-00:17:169 (1) - if you change ^this or not, you have to adjust this slider, they dont line up properly
Unsure
-00:22:239 (2,3,4) - dont use claps here, sounds meeh
I turned down the hitsound volume a LITTLE bit, but if you listen it is about right
-00:22:873 (1,2) - dont line up properly
Unsure

Easy

-hm this diff doesnt look as good, but i think it plays well, just some minor things to adjust
-00:02:169 (3,4) - this line up is bad, not in playing, but how it looks :v
Fixed!
-00:09:774 (1,2) - ^
Fixed!
-00:19:493 (4,5) - this looks weird in the pattern itself ( if you consider the whole combo ), the placement of 5 doesnt make any sense aswell
Fixed!
-00:24:140 (2,3,4) - this is mapped wrong the slider has to begin 1 white tick earlier, its mapped onto nothing you wanna map in easy diffs
Fits the rest of the map better through this slider, I don't want more than a measure long slider
-00:26:676 (5,6,7) - i like this end
Thank you!

Thanks for the mod!

_MasterTSP wrote:

Heyo, this is.. a mod? I don't even know if this is a mod tbh, the diff is well made ^^
Thanks!

I just got this observation:


00:07:873 (1,3) - Maybe a note or reverse between those two notes? It sounds better IMO -;
I am not quite sure how to make that work, I tried to have the back and forth motion from the jumps here just like a reverse slider because it totally does have a repeated sound.

This one I actually don't know, because there's no sound to follow, but... it sounds great with a note/reverse there

00:18:014 (1,2) -
hmmmmm, maybe, still not sure of how to make things work

Well, like I said, I don't even know if this is a mod, or if this is worth kudosu, well, i just wanted to say that :p
Ill give kudosu because I am looking around for places to have some more variation!
GL!
Thanks for the mod!

Kurogami wrote:

M4M/NM

4-Leaf Clover

00:11:253 (7) - Maybe 0.5x sv and normal slider instead of repeat?
I want to map both the held singing pitch and the strong sound from the music so this works better. The held pitch is also higher than the other slow sliders.
00:14:000 (1) - Curve this slider a little bit so it'll be easier to follow into stream.
Fixed!
00:14:000 (1,2) - Spacing from slider to first circle is different than spacing betweend circles in stream. I would change it so they would be the same.
00:23:084 (2) - Something like this maybe?
Fixed! I reduced spacing here instead of exactly following!

I couldn't find anything more in this and other diffs. Good luck!
Thanks!

1. making 00:04:704 (1,2) - and 00:05:549 (3,4) - paralleled for more cleanness
2. make curves like 00:18:647 (2,3,4,5) - more regular
3. get rid of unnecessary ambiguous flow like 00:14:845 (3,4,5) -
4. spacing irregularities like 00:16:535 (6,1) -
5. 00:21:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ok this though XD uuh try this rhythm idk. It's a bit more complex but at least it doesn't skip the important beats on the red lines.

1. 00:01:324 (1,2,3) - call ezek for perfect symmetry
2. 00:08:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this part is kinda less dense than the adjacent parts lol. Should be the other way around
3. o and btw is this spacing increase intentional 00:13:155 (1,2,3,4) -. It fits but this is normal so idk
4. 00:00:267 (1,2,3,1) - also this uuh it doesn't make sense in terms of relative density, so maybe something like this or any rhythm elsewhere in the map
5. 00:25:408 (2,3) - not a fan of this but i have no idea either lmao. Pretty decent actually

1. re nc this. compare 00:03:013 (6) - and 00:16:535 (1) -
2. 00:24:774 (5) - maybe it's just me but imo this should be a 1/1 slider cuz this is pretty much the same to 00:23:084 (1) - and 00:26:464 (1) -
3. 00:15:690 (3,4) - shouldn't these be blanketing like 1 and 2
   that's all lol I'm too lazy to be picky

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Rose's Hard]

1. re nc this. compare 00:03:013 (6) - and 00:16:535 (1) - Ok i fix this NC issue and made the other's like this
2. 00:24:774 (5) - maybe it's just me but imo this should be a 1/1 slider cuz this is pretty much the same to 00:23:084 (1) - and 00:26:464 (1) - No i will keep it .. cause here 00:25:197 - is another note and i don't want make it unclickable .. so i made it like that to make it more fun to play ..
3. 00:15:690 (3,4) - shouldn't these be blanketing like 1 and 2 ok i made it blanked now ..
   that's all lol I'm too lazy to be picky

That's all o/ GL GL

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CrystilonZ wrote:

I did this half way through and realised i forgot to pm you so eeh
Oh! Ill get to your map probably today or tomorrow, I have a small backlog!

Easy looks pretty okay besides it being too simplistic lol
xd I guess its a really easy easy
Anyway there are stuff you should try doing yourself like

1. making 00:04:704 (1,2) - and 00:05:549 (3,4) - paralleled for more cleanness
   Fixed!
2. make curves like 00:18:647 (2,3,4,5) - more regular
   I fixed up (2,3,4) but I will leave the angle to (5)
3. get rid of unnecessary ambiguous flow like 00:14:845 (3,4,5) -
   Not quite sure what to do about this
4. spacing irregularities like 00:16:535 (6,1) -
   I see what you mean and will fix it, but the distance spacing is correct.
5. 00:21:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ok this though XD uuh try this rhythm idk. It's a bit more complex but at least it doesn't skip the important beats on the red lines.
   Fixed!

[4-Leaf Clover]
Not gonna pinpoint stuff on this one. Imo the biggest problem is the spacing. The map is full of full screen geometry yet there are stuff like 00:11:253 (7) - 00:23:084 (2) - which don't make sense at all speaking about intensity-spacing correlation. Ideally these important intense beats should have higher spacings. Also I don't understand the logic behind the SV manipulation here really well but if you have a reasonable explanation behind it, it's probably fine.
Ok, heres what I have done:
I changed spacing all around, specifically I made the beginning less and the middle more and making the end less absurd.
As for the SV changes through the map it is to represent the background music's volume. You will notice on the slow sliders in the map that the singer is holding a pitch and the music quiets. I fixed the SV changes at the end though to be more consistent with this.

If you see specific places where the difficulty could be lowered or increased I could change those too! For now though what I have changed should reflect the intensity better!



That's all o/ GL GL
Thanks!

-AsrieLx- wrote:

I really couldn't find anything wrong, and as for the M4M, my beatmap is still in progress, so I need a lot of things fixed, but you can still mod it, it is a W.I.P
I mean, maybe? I need to get through all of my stuff and M4M's are the only extra thing I will take on. You may not get a mod because I don't have the time to do a NM right now.


Here is my Cruddy Beatmap https://osu.ppy.sh/s/622996

Good Luck! I hope this gets ranked!
Thanks!

Plaudible wrote:

who do you think you are