General HP should be a 3,4,5,6 spread and yours is a bit low right now.
Cup Looks good to me. Normally, I would be against using .90x spacing, like you did in some sections, but it seems you managed to make it flow well, I'll give you credit for that.
Salad 00:48:250 (1,2) – I'd make this a 1.80x jump since it's a bit anti-flow and needs to be easier to read if it is. It'll also make the next pattern feel like it flows a little better. I put (2) on X=352 to fix. 01:33:850 (1) – I feel like this slider should be tilted for better movement because the “ochi” vocals feel like they need some emphasis. 01:51:650 (2) – Move this to X=128 because it's a bit hard to read and catch right now.