Sayuri - birthday song

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squirrelpascals
M4M!

In an earlier thread (p/6029023) Sing pointed out that the girl in the bg is more visible if you flip the bg. I actually recommend this lol, because otherwise the song in song select doesnt have character

• 00:14:469 (2) - The note under this circle is extremely faint and out of rhythm (the note is actually around 00:14:540 - ) I would suggest removing this circle

thats it
• 00:48:007 (1,2,3) - The notes at 00:48:431 - 00:48:856 - have the same intensity, but the hit objects are spaced differently. I'd suggest spacing 00:48:007 (1,2) - less or spacing 00:48:856 (3) - more (The latter would fit the rest of your part the best)
• 01:10:365 (6,1) - This can easily be mistaken as a 1/4 because of the spacing at 01:11:497 (3,4) - and the perfect 1/8 overlap at 01:08:384 (1,2) - . Be consistent with your 1/4 and 1/8 spacing here somehow

• 01:17:936 (3,4) - The same as above applies here too, but I would strongly advise against this rhythm overall. People will perceive the second vocal note to be at 01:17:868 - ,even if it is at the 1/8. This doesn't really play naturally because of this.
• 01:45:743 (5,2) - faulty blanket is easily noticable here

• 02:03:856 (1,2) - This spacing choice is new, why did you decide to stack this note out of all other notes?

• 02:07:960 - This note feels ignored in the midst of all the other guitar notes you mapped in this part
• 02:21:144 (3,4,5,6) - This combination of spacing and angles here really does not make this pattern play well and makes it feel unnatrual. It would feel a lot better if you used crtl+g on 02:21:421 (5,6) -

• 02:25:310 - Feels weird how you skip this vocal note when 02:25:588 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - revolves around the vocals
• 02:58:557 - Why did you ignore this note? You mapped others like it already (like 02:52:472 (3,4,5) - )

• 02:59:264 (2,3,4) - This is a pretty big jump in spacing compared to what you've already been doing after sliderends
• 03:10:868 (1) - why this drastic sv change on this note above all others? You could have done it here 03:13:132 (2) - here 03:15:396 - etc. but you chose not to for some reason

• 03:13:698 (4,5,1) - This change in spacing is very uncomfortable to play in general

• 03:19:500 (1,2,3) - as far as rhythm goes i cant tell the difference in between this and 03:13:557 (2,3,4) - or 03:25:443 (2,3,4) -

• 03:19:076 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:21:340 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - don't really understand many of your mapping choices here. how do your changes in spacing relate to the music?

• 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - Don't see how these notes stand out in anyway for them to be special enough for 1/16 sliders and ncs. Again it doesn't really feel like this correlates to anything
• 03:34:925 (1,2) - Don't hear anything under those reverse arrows, a 1/2 slider would be more fitting here if you want to use sliders imo.
• 03:56:009 (3) - It sounds like the strong note is on the sliderend here, ctrl+g 03:55:868 (2,3) - would be a better rhythm. Samekind of thing for 04:05:066 (3,4) -

and for your triangle part

05:05:491 (1,1) - Are these triangles really rankable? even if the sliderend isn't visible at all? xp
• 04:30:113 (4,5) - 04:34:641 (4,5) - This spacing reads like a 1/4 gap, compared to 04:28:132 (1,2,3,4) -
• 04:53:038 (4,5) - space these both evenly from the middle slider? would fix up the aesthetics, don't really see a reason not to

good luch guys! this is an awesome birthday present
Winnie
Hello from modding queue for a light mod



[Gift]
Offset feels a little early could double check that
00:31:592 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like it doesn't have to be so intense yet. Could be just http://puu.sh/w3eVW/2732066c51.jpg Definitely the same things as previously but it definitely keeps it nice
00:35:837 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Quite excessive tbh if it's already like this then just from that perspective alone I can tell this map is going to get wild. It feels like you're building intensity based on your hitsounds and not the music themselves.
00:48:007 (1,2) - Goes from 2 sliders with huge spacing to then somehow shrinking the spacing to a measly basic DS pattern 00:48:856 (3,4) - If (3) and (4) were spaced more it'll add more effect and keep your map more consistent in how you're mapping. Also (3) also plays off in transition to her vocals so technically (1)(2) and (3) are both part of her vocal so they should be consistent to one another. Take (3) in this image some place where a different pattern of yours could start really adds a lot of depth in it http://puu.sh/w3fao/de7546c42a.jpg
00:57:063 (1,2,3) - Just like this it's nice
01:03:290 (1,2,3,4,1) - Vintage Val back at it again
01:09:375 (3) - Could be spaced more to add a better spacing differentiation for the timing in the map
Appleeaterx is too clean
Not really much more I can say tbh.
aviaaan
i know im quite late lol, but happy birthday to one of the greatest!!! hope you had a good one monstrata
J_8579
  1. 01:16:309 (1,2) - It'd be nice if you could show that this instrument is more powerful. I'm not really getting that notion since it has low spacing to (2). Maybe stack on (2) slidertail?
  2. 03:52:755 - You could probably indicate the vocalist taking in her breath, since the transition between these parts seem pretty fast.
    I stacked (6) sliderhead on 03:53:462 (2) btw. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8213017
  3. 04:15:962 (2,1) - i mentioned this before, but i don't think it was noticed. this uses the same spacing as the 1/2 jump {04:15:679 (1,2)}. i think it would be more clear to indicate this 1/4 jump through lower spacing since there's a 1/2 jump right before, maybe by stacking (1) on 04:15:113 (1) slidertail?
  4. 04:46:670 (6,7,8,9,10) - structure looks kind of random imo. if you realigned (9) like this, you would get a more organized pair of triangles
  5. 05:04:925 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - ₵ Ɽ Ɇ ₳ ₮ ł V ł ₮Ɏ
h3oCharles
is the storyboard sounds only?

Also, so close to 100 stars ;_;
hehe

squirrelpascals wrote:

• 03:13:698 (4,5,1) - This change in spacing is very uncomfortable to play in general and

• 03:19:076 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:21:340 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - don't really understand many of your mapping choices here. how do your changes in spacing relate to the music? 1324

• 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - Don't see how these notes stand out in anyway for them to be special enough for 1/16 sliders and ncs. Again it doesn't really feel like this correlates to anything toms
Mint
dunois:
01:46:309 (2,1) - not without breaking all the blankets lo l

anxient:
01:45:743 (5,1) - uhh idk tho my spacing is p large at so many times so this is ez ez koi yuki
01:51:969 (1) - that build up tho (and its really easy to catch/read too bc its the body is close)
02:10:507 (4) - its just stack pattern with back and forth which is pretty standard so keepin thi s

xchorse:
02:10:507 (4) - i like the gfap as a sort transitino into slow part

bor:
02:04:988 (1,1,1,1,1) - i can agree but i did this to b consistent with the last kiais since i finished my part as one of thje last (lol i suk) ill see what the rest does and adjust accordingly bc i dont mind with or without ncs
02:14:603 (1) - this reading can still b a little tricky (actually move for me lolol i suk)

realazy:
01:51:969 (1) - sv change

squirrelPa:
01:45:743 (5,2) - well uhh i tried and i suck at blankets so its prob still not perfect but in game play its not that noticeable tbh bc these objects are far apart in timelin e
02:03:856 (1,2) - almost same as 02:03:573 (4,5) - so i think stack = appropriate
02:07:818 (3,4) - transition explained somewhere ^

winnie:
ily

no mention is fix thanks!!
Asphyxia
@Anxient I tested that part like 10 times and still feels fine to me but if more people say it's bad then I'll change it!

@borborygmos Not sure what you mean with 04:40:656 (1) - assuming this is for me...

@squirrelpascals Fixed

@F1r3tar Fixed

Thank you! :)
ShiraKai

Anxient wrote:

ShiraKai
01:09:375 (3,4) - this rhythm is feels way off. i think you meant to do this? http://puu.sh/vY2KO/12170b5926.jpg, or if its intentional, pls explain why ><

01:09:445 - or ya could map this 1/8, just like you did with 01:17:724 (2,3,4) -
please hear music

01:14:044 (4) - i think ctrl g would make the map move better/naturally with the upcoming objects. 01:14:044 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/vY2NR/f36789a5a0.jpg
nope i like this style

01:27:912 (3) - woah im regressing to my 2013 modding style lmao, ctrl g this? it plays more smoothly imo
no it's consistency

01:32:158 (2) - same here.
^

01:37:393 - are you sure you should be ignoring this?
^

01:42:063 (5) - aaaand here. same: ctrl g thing
^

xChorse wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Already really nice so can't help much so have this garbage mod:

ShiraKai

01:17:936 (3) - doesn't really follow anything (there's a sound on 01:17:901 - ) and having it as filler rhythm is kinda questionable since it's the only one like this and things like 01:20:200 - are ignored
remove this

idk if i messed up the timestamps with the names but idk, good luck!

borborygmos wrote:

Gift



01:17:936 (3) - I don't think you should have this note, also I think the vocal is snapped to the 1/6. also you don't really map vocals like 01:18:478 - so mapping this one seems a bit out of place imo remove this

Realazy wrote:

returning m4m

[ShiraKai]

01:17:936 (3) - yeah as bor said this isn't necessary, vocal ending on 1/6 should be enough fixed

pretty good

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M!

In an earlier thread (https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6029023) Sing pointed out that the girl in the bg is more visible if you flip the bg. I actually recommend this lol, because otherwise the song in song select doesnt have character

• 01:10:365 (6,1) - This can easily be mistaken as a 1/4 because of the spacing at 01:11:497 (3,4) - and the perfect 1/8 overlap at 01:08:384 (1,2) - . Be consistent with your 1/4 and 1/8 spacing here somehow stack it :3

• 01:17:936 (3,4) - The same as above applies here too, but I would strongly advise against this rhythm overall. People will perceive the second vocal note to be at 01:17:868 - ,even if it is at the 1/8. This doesn't really play naturally because of this. remove (3)

good luch guys! this is an awesome birthday present
thank you for modding :D

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Topic Starter
Haruto
updated all

new addition :
- the thinking fam collab insane (featuring kalibe, akitoshi, sotarks, pentori, doormat, kroytz, haruto and toybot)

SB soon(tm)

lets get this thing ranked boisss
Len
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h3oCharles
Gift
ProBox(?): 05:05:491 (1,1,1,2) slider direction is unclear, pretty sure this is mentioned in criteria
Jemzuu
god i love sayuri's voice aaaaaa
good song good map good mappers alright good for rank
rank this ! ! <333
KittyAdventure
Issues tag? "RLCmikazuki no koukai album"
Narcissu
fix and remap some //

@appleeaterx: maybe you want to move 02:15:863 (2) - , you stack it in my slider but my slider moved :P

@Haruto: help me readd NC .. look like you skip some colours, but i deleted other part then remap, so NC boom ....

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iunsaen thinkf coalb
-00:23:101 (1,2,3,4) - so triggered that it breaks all the patterns you do before. try something like http://puu.sh/xLDVR/6c5e20e2d7.jpg maybe, or something that you find more fitting with the rest of the patterns
-02:06:120 (1,2,1,2) - would be cool if these were increasing in distance or sv, to make it somewhat familiar with what you did before here 02:01:026 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , which is cool
-04:28:132 (1,2,1,2) - so weird that you do these doubles thingy when the first two are so different to the others 2. if it was like http://puu.sh/xLEnU/fa9c854117.jpg , it'd fit much better imo

i tried
blueloniess
what a nice map!
rank or love this map pls!
iYiyo
This is nice.
iYiyo
  • [Gift]
  1. 00:25:931 (2) - Looks like the head of this slider should have Normal Sampleset to match the clap.
  2. 00:27:629 (1) - 00:28:620 (5) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:30:743 (5,7) - Remove the whistles from their slider bodies? Tbh looks like they were placed by mistake cause you don't add them after 00:31:592 -
  3. 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - Any particular reason on why the diff spike here? If compared with 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - it's clearly to see that is way harder on 2nd half on that kiai.
  4. Change 01:26:780 - & 01:27:346 - to S:C1? Those random whistles sounds are just weird and doen't really match with the current hitsounding.
  5. Why the pattern change 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - here but not 03:25:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - here while both are pretty similar while having this drum smash pattern?
  6. 04:08:604 (6,1) - missing hitsounds on these?
  7. 04:11:717 (2,3,1) - What are you exactly following here? Specifically 04:11:858 (3) - this doesn't look to be following vocals nor instrument at all. Would suggest to do something else over here.

    [Thinking Fam Collab Insane]
  8. 00:25:931 - same as other diff.
  9. 00:32:158 (1) - missing hitsound?
  10. 01:26:780 - 01:27:346 - similar to other diff, change those green lines to S:C1.
  11. 02:58:698 (1) - Why you stand out this specific slider with a triangle just here? I'd honestly reserve this shape for the last part.
  12. 04:25:019 - add drum sampleset on tail & 04:25:160 - add clap head? Or just add some hitsounds lol
  13. 04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - similar ^
  14. 04:41:151 - 04:50:208 - missing clap?
  15. 04:42:283 (8) - Add NC to match 04:51:340 (1) - this?


also make sure everyone who's collabing is on tags.
Topic Starter
Haruto

iYiyo wrote:

  • [Gift]
  1. 00:25:931 (2) - Looks like the head of this slider should have Normal Sampleset to match the clap. fixed
  2. 00:27:629 (1) - 00:28:620 (5) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:30:743 (5,7) - Remove the whistles from their slider bodies? Tbh looks like they were placed by mistake cause you don't add them after 00:31:592 - yeah fixed
  3. 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - Any particular reason on why the diff spike here? If compared with 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - it's clearly to see that is way harder on 2nd half on that kiai. i think val did it on purpose, comparing to 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - , the beat here isnt as huge as 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - so yeah, this should be fine imo
  4. Change 01:26:780 - & 01:27:346 - to S:C1? Those random whistles sounds are just weird and doen't really match with the current hitsounding. fixed
  5. Why the pattern change 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - here but not 03:25:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - here while both are pretty similar while having this drum smash pattern? handsome wanted some pattern variation i think which is creative imo. 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - also this one has a drum sound on it so its completely fine imo
  6. 04:08:604 (6,1) - missing hitsounds on these?
  7. 04:11:717 (2,3,1) - What are you exactly following here? Specifically 04:11:858 (3) - this doesn't look to be following vocals nor instrument at all. Would suggest to do something else over here fixed for sing

    [Thinking Fam Collab Insane]
  8. 00:25:931 - same as other diff.
  9. 00:32:158 (1) - missing hitsound?
  10. 01:26:780 - 01:27:346 - similar to other diff, change those green lines to S:C1.
  11. 02:58:698 (1) - Why you stand out this specific slider with a triangle just here? I'd honestly reserve this shape for the last part.
  12. 04:25:019 - add drum sampleset on tail & 04:25:160 - add clap head? Or just add some hitsounds lol
  13. 04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - similar ^
  14. 04:41:151 - 04:50:208 - missing clap?
  15. 04:42:283 (8) - Add NC to match 04:51:340 (1) - this? fixed all


also make sure everyone who's collabing is on tags.
yea, everyone is in the tags
thanks for checking! also fixed the burai slider on probox part
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