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h3oCharles
is the storyboard sounds only?

Also, so close to 100 stars ;_;
hehe

squirrelpascals wrote:

• 03:13:698 (4,5,1) - This change in spacing is very uncomfortable to play in general and

• 03:19:076 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:21:340 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - don't really understand many of your mapping choices here. how do your changes in spacing relate to the music? 1324

• 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - Don't see how these notes stand out in anyway for them to be special enough for 1/16 sliders and ncs. Again it doesn't really feel like this correlates to anything toms
Mint
dunois:
01:46:309 (2,1) - not without breaking all the blankets lo l

anxient:
01:45:743 (5,1) - uhh idk tho my spacing is p large at so many times so this is ez ez koi yuki
01:51:969 (1) - that build up tho (and its really easy to catch/read too bc its the body is close)
02:10:507 (4) - its just stack pattern with back and forth which is pretty standard so keepin thi s

xchorse:
02:10:507 (4) - i like the gfap as a sort transitino into slow part

bor:
02:04:988 (1,1,1,1,1) - i can agree but i did this to b consistent with the last kiais since i finished my part as one of thje last (lol i suk) ill see what the rest does and adjust accordingly bc i dont mind with or without ncs
02:14:603 (1) - this reading can still b a little tricky (actually move for me lolol i suk)

realazy:
01:51:969 (1) - sv change

squirrelPa:
01:45:743 (5,2) - well uhh i tried and i suck at blankets so its prob still not perfect but in game play its not that noticeable tbh bc these objects are far apart in timelin e
02:03:856 (1,2) - almost same as 02:03:573 (4,5) - so i think stack = appropriate
02:07:818 (3,4) - transition explained somewhere ^

winnie:
ily

no mention is fix thanks!!
Asphyxia
@Anxient I tested that part like 10 times and still feels fine to me but if more people say it's bad then I'll change it!

@borborygmos Not sure what you mean with 04:40:656 (1) - assuming this is for me...

@squirrelpascals Fixed

@F1r3tar Fixed

Thank you! :)
ShiraKai

Anxient wrote:

ShiraKai
01:09:375 (3,4) - this rhythm is feels way off. i think you meant to do this? http://puu.sh/vY2KO/12170b5926.jpg, or if its intentional, pls explain why ><

01:09:445 - or ya could map this 1/8, just like you did with 01:17:724 (2,3,4) -
please hear music

01:14:044 (4) - i think ctrl g would make the map move better/naturally with the upcoming objects. 01:14:044 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/vY2NR/f36789a5a0.jpg
nope i like this style

01:27:912 (3) - woah im regressing to my 2013 modding style lmao, ctrl g this? it plays more smoothly imo
no it's consistency

01:32:158 (2) - same here.
^

01:37:393 - are you sure you should be ignoring this?
^

01:42:063 (5) - aaaand here. same: ctrl g thing
^

xChorse wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Already really nice so can't help much so have this garbage mod:

ShiraKai

01:17:936 (3) - doesn't really follow anything (there's a sound on 01:17:901 - ) and having it as filler rhythm is kinda questionable since it's the only one like this and things like 01:20:200 - are ignored
remove this

idk if i messed up the timestamps with the names but idk, good luck!

borborygmos wrote:

Gift



01:17:936 (3) - I don't think you should have this note, also I think the vocal is snapped to the 1/6. also you don't really map vocals like 01:18:478 - so mapping this one seems a bit out of place imo remove this

Realazy wrote:

returning m4m

[ShiraKai]

01:17:936 (3) - yeah as bor said this isn't necessary, vocal ending on 1/6 should be enough fixed

pretty good

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M!

In an earlier thread (https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6029023) Sing pointed out that the girl in the bg is more visible if you flip the bg. I actually recommend this lol, because otherwise the song in song select doesnt have character

• 01:10:365 (6,1) - This can easily be mistaken as a 1/4 because of the spacing at 01:11:497 (3,4) - and the perfect 1/8 overlap at 01:08:384 (1,2) - . Be consistent with your 1/4 and 1/8 spacing here somehow stack it :3

• 01:17:936 (3,4) - The same as above applies here too, but I would strongly advise against this rhythm overall. People will perceive the second vocal note to be at 01:17:868 - ,even if it is at the 1/8. This doesn't really play naturally because of this. remove (3)

good luch guys! this is an awesome birthday present
thank you for modding :D

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Topic Starter
Haruto
updated all

new addition :
- the thinking fam collab insane (featuring kalibe, akitoshi, sotarks, pentori, doormat, kroytz, haruto and toybot)

SB soon(tm)

lets get this thing ranked boisss
Len
- _--
h3oCharles
Gift
ProBox(?): 05:05:491 (1,1,1,2) slider direction is unclear, pretty sure this is mentioned in criteria
Jemzuu
god i love sayuri's voice aaaaaa
good song good map good mappers alright good for rank
rank this ! ! <333
KittyAdventure
Issues tag? "RLCmikazuki no koukai album"
Narcissu
fix and remap some //

@appleeaterx: maybe you want to move 02:15:863 (2) - , you stack it in my slider but my slider moved :P

@Haruto: help me readd NC .. look like you skip some colours, but i deleted other part then remap, so NC boom ....

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307,274,149477,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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256,156,150588,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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252,184,152949,85,0,3:0:0:0:
256,156,153088,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,128,153227,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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420,232,153505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,264,153783,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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152,32,154755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,160,154894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,155033,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,60,155171,6,0,L|336:56,1,85.0080001297119,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,155449,2,0,L|264:204,1,85.0080001297119
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348,244,155866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,204,156283,5,0,1:0:0:0:
456,88,156421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,156560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,216,157116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,136,157255,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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88,224,158296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,158366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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356,4,159199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,164,159338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,104,159477,54,0,P|241:88|163:119,1,170.016000259424,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
131,368,159894,2,0,P|155:332|164:291,1,85.0080001297119,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,66,160171,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,296,160310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,66,160449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,296,160588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,220,161838,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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318,93,162046,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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183,264,168517,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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354,218,169079,1,0,3:0:0:0:
Milan-
iunsaen thinkf coalb
-00:23:101 (1,2,3,4) - so triggered that it breaks all the patterns you do before. try something like http://puu.sh/xLDVR/6c5e20e2d7.jpg maybe, or something that you find more fitting with the rest of the patterns
-02:06:120 (1,2,1,2) - would be cool if these were increasing in distance or sv, to make it somewhat familiar with what you did before here 02:01:026 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , which is cool
-04:28:132 (1,2,1,2) - so weird that you do these doubles thingy when the first two are so different to the others 2. if it was like http://puu.sh/xLEnU/fa9c854117.jpg , it'd fit much better imo

i tried
blueloniess
what a nice map!
rank or love this map pls!
iYiyo
This is nice.
iYiyo
  • [Gift]
  1. 00:25:931 (2) - Looks like the head of this slider should have Normal Sampleset to match the clap.
  2. 00:27:629 (1) - 00:28:620 (5) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:30:743 (5,7) - Remove the whistles from their slider bodies? Tbh looks like they were placed by mistake cause you don't add them after 00:31:592 -
  3. 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - Any particular reason on why the diff spike here? If compared with 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - it's clearly to see that is way harder on 2nd half on that kiai.
  4. Change 01:26:780 - & 01:27:346 - to S:C1? Those random whistles sounds are just weird and doen't really match with the current hitsounding.
  5. Why the pattern change 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - here but not 03:25:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - here while both are pretty similar while having this drum smash pattern?
  6. 04:08:604 (6,1) - missing hitsounds on these?
  7. 04:11:717 (2,3,1) - What are you exactly following here? Specifically 04:11:858 (3) - this doesn't look to be following vocals nor instrument at all. Would suggest to do something else over here.

    [Thinking Fam Collab Insane]
  8. 00:25:931 - same as other diff.
  9. 00:32:158 (1) - missing hitsound?
  10. 01:26:780 - 01:27:346 - similar to other diff, change those green lines to S:C1.
  11. 02:58:698 (1) - Why you stand out this specific slider with a triangle just here? I'd honestly reserve this shape for the last part.
  12. 04:25:019 - add drum sampleset on tail & 04:25:160 - add clap head? Or just add some hitsounds lol
  13. 04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - similar ^
  14. 04:41:151 - 04:50:208 - missing clap?
  15. 04:42:283 (8) - Add NC to match 04:51:340 (1) - this?


also make sure everyone who's collabing is on tags.
Topic Starter
Haruto

iYiyo wrote:

  • [Gift]
  1. 00:25:931 (2) - Looks like the head of this slider should have Normal Sampleset to match the clap. fixed
  2. 00:27:629 (1) - 00:28:620 (5) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:30:743 (5,7) - Remove the whistles from their slider bodies? Tbh looks like they were placed by mistake cause you don't add them after 00:31:592 - yeah fixed
  3. 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - Any particular reason on why the diff spike here? If compared with 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - it's clearly to see that is way harder on 2nd half on that kiai. i think val did it on purpose, comparing to 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4) - , the beat here isnt as huge as 01:03:290 (1,2,3,4) - so yeah, this should be fine imo
  4. Change 01:26:780 - & 01:27:346 - to S:C1? Those random whistles sounds are just weird and doen't really match with the current hitsounding. fixed
  5. Why the pattern change 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - here but not 03:25:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - here while both are pretty similar while having this drum smash pattern? handsome wanted some pattern variation i think which is creative imo. 03:20:774 (1,1,1,1) - also this one has a drum sound on it so its completely fine imo
  6. 04:08:604 (6,1) - missing hitsounds on these?
  7. 04:11:717 (2,3,1) - What are you exactly following here? Specifically 04:11:858 (3) - this doesn't look to be following vocals nor instrument at all. Would suggest to do something else over here fixed for sing

    [Thinking Fam Collab Insane]
  8. 00:25:931 - same as other diff.
  9. 00:32:158 (1) - missing hitsound?
  10. 01:26:780 - 01:27:346 - similar to other diff, change those green lines to S:C1.
  11. 02:58:698 (1) - Why you stand out this specific slider with a triangle just here? I'd honestly reserve this shape for the last part.
  12. 04:25:019 - add drum sampleset on tail & 04:25:160 - add clap head? Or just add some hitsounds lol
  13. 04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - similar ^
  14. 04:41:151 - 04:50:208 - missing clap?
  15. 04:42:283 (8) - Add NC to match 04:51:340 (1) - this? fixed all


also make sure everyone who's collabing is on tags.
yea, everyone is in the tags
thanks for checking! also fixed the burai slider on probox part
-Sh1n1-

iYiyo wrote:

This is nice.
iYiyo
Both diffs:
From 00:31:592 - to 00:35:695 - looks like you're not using claps which feels kinda empty in terms of hitsounds. Please add some.

Fam:
04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - please remove the whistle on both cause it's causing a hitsound which you don't use on the kiai at all.
Topic Starter
Haruto

iYiyo wrote:

Both diffs:
From 00:31:592 - to 00:35:695 - looks like you're not using claps which feels kinda empty in terms of hitsounds. Please add some.

Fam:
04:32:943 - 04:33:085 - please remove the whistle on both cause it's causing a hitsound which you don't use on the kiai at all.
fixed all!!
iYiyo
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