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LeaF - Calamity Fortune [Taiko]
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Topic Starter
Hi~ from my queue 
d= small don
D= big don
K= big katsu
k= small katsu
[General]
Disable countdown
[A A T U's Oni]
00:02:790 (12) - k
00:04:590 (25) - K, sounds better
00:07:290 (41) - d
00:07:590 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - ctrl + g
00:19:140 (121) - delete finish bc its unnecessary
00:47:490 (320,321,322,323) - ^
01:33:390 (202) - K
01:44:190 (18) - k
00:49:590 (356,357,358,359) - delete finish
01:52:590 (48) - k
01:52:890 (50) - d
[Inner Oni]
00:04:590 (27) - add K
00:14:790 (91) - K
00:15:390 (96) - K
00:19:140 (133) - delete finish bc its unnecessary
00:39:390 (285) - K
00:49:590 (356,357,358,359) - delete finish
d= small don
D= big don
K= big katsu
k= small katsu
[General]
Disable countdown
[A A T U's Oni]
00:02:790 (12) - k
00:04:590 (25) - K, sounds better
00:07:290 (41) - d
00:07:590 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - ctrl + g
00:19:140 (121) - delete finish bc its unnecessary
00:47:490 (320,321,322,323) - ^
01:33:390 (202) - K
01:44:190 (18) - k
00:49:590 (356,357,358,359) - delete finish
01:52:590 (48) - k
01:52:890 (50) - d
[Inner Oni]
00:04:590 (27) - add K
00:14:790 (91) - K
00:15:390 (96) - K
00:19:140 (133) - delete finish bc its unnecessary
00:39:390 (285) - K
00:49:590 (356,357,358,359) - delete finish
Topic Starter
00:49:590 (356,357,358,359) - delete finish
Uh wut
can't find it
Uh wut
can't find it
Topic Starter
00:04:590 (27) - add K
Where?
Where?
Topic Starter
00:47:490 (320,321,322,323) - ^
00:15:390 (96) - ^
???
00:15:390 (96) - ^
???
Topic Starter
00:19:140 (133) - delete finish bc its unnecessary
There is no finish
There is no finish
Sorry for the other mod, uhh ... to make up for it, I've mod the other difficulties, not much because there are not many errors, so I hope this serves.
[Futsuu]
01:02:490 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - this combo is too long for a futsuu, try to shorten it a bit
02:08:490 (101,1) - here is a slider and a spinner crossed ... http://puu.sh/w6AEe/e2dd97711c.jpg
[Muzukashii]
00:57:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - this combo is too hard to muzu
[Inner Oni]
00:07:590 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - swap ?
the kantan is fine
[Futsuu]
01:02:490 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - this combo is too long for a futsuu, try to shorten it a bit
02:08:490 (101,1) - here is a slider and a spinner crossed ... http://puu.sh/w6AEe/e2dd97711c.jpg
[Muzukashii]
00:57:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - this combo is too hard to muzu
[Inner Oni]
00:07:590 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - swap ?
the kantan is fine
Topic Starter
tksMelanie wrote:
Sorry for the other mod, uhh ... to make up for it, I've mod the other difficulties, not much because there are not many errors, so I hope this serves.
[Futsuu]
01:02:490 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - this combo is too long for a futsuu, try to shorten it a bit
02:08:490 (101,1) - here is a slider and a spinner crossed ... http://puu.sh/w6AEe/e2dd97711c.jpg
[Muzukashii]
00:57:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - this combo is too hard to muzu
[Inner Oni]
00:07:590 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - swap ?
the kantan is fine
Hello from my queue:
[General]
Please copy all of the information from here and add A A T U to the tags
Disable countdown as well
[Kantan]
00:16:290: Add d to emphasize better
00:21:090: Same but add k
00:34:890: Change to d since it's a low pitch
00:42:090 (18, 19): Ctrl + G?
[Inner Oni]
00:02:340: Add k since there's a vocal there
00:07:140: Change to ddd to fit the pitch
00:09:690: Don't understand why you put triplets here, do like https://puu.sh/wCG2Q/d7ba64cb45.png
00:20:190: Don't understand why you put Drum hitsounds here, consider removing it
00:21:390: You missed a note K here
00:30:690: Add k
00:35:115: Add a note here and delete this 00:34:965
00:38:640: This should be ddd
Okay so like this, I think the placement of notes is very messy, and you put Drum hitsounds everywhere
At least Muzu, Futsuu and Oni is okay.
Sorry for short mod but I hope my mod you make this map better soon
GL on ranking, I like the song
[General]
Please copy all of the information from here and add A A T U to the tags
Disable countdown as well
[Kantan]
00:16:290: Add d to emphasize better
00:21:090: Same but add k
00:34:890: Change to d since it's a low pitch
00:42:090 (18, 19): Ctrl + G?
[Inner Oni]
00:02:340: Add k since there's a vocal there
00:07:140: Change to ddd to fit the pitch
00:09:690: Don't understand why you put triplets here, do like https://puu.sh/wCG2Q/d7ba64cb45.png
00:20:190: Don't understand why you put Drum hitsounds here, consider removing it
00:21:390: You missed a note K here
00:30:690: Add k
00:35:115: Add a note here and delete this 00:34:965
00:38:640: This should be ddd
Okay so like this, I think the placement of notes is very messy, and you put Drum hitsounds everywhere
At least Muzu, Futsuu and Oni is okay.
Sorry for short mod but I hope my mod you make this map better soon
GL on ranking, I like the song
Topic Starter
can you help me fix the streams?davidminh0111 wrote:
Hello from my queue:
[General]
Please copy all of the information from here and add A A T U to the tags
Disable countdown as well
[Kantan]
00:16:290: Add d to emphasize better
00:21:090: Same but add k
00:34:890: Change to d since it's a low pitch
00:42:090 (18, 19): Ctrl + G?
[Inner Oni]
00:02:340: Add k since there's a vocal there
00:07:140: Change to ddd to fit the pitch
00:09:690: Don't understand why you put triplets here, do like https://puu.sh/wCG2Q/d7ba64cb45.png
00:20:190: Don't understand why you put Drum hitsounds here, consider removing it
00:21:390: You missed a note K here
00:30:690: Add k
00:35:115: Add a note here and delete this 00:34:965
00:38:640: This should be ddd
Okay so like this, I think the placement of notes is very messy, and you put Drum hitsounds everywhere
At least Muzu, Futsuu and Oni is okay.
Sorry for short mod but I hope my mod you make this map better soon
GL on ranking, I like the song
OwO :3JarvisGaming YT wrote:
can you help me fix the streams?
you have 3 I (Insane) icon, that would be some problem
why you use Soft Hitsound ?
Disable Countdown
Muzu
-HP drain 4/5
00:01:740 - you can del this, its begining, so you doesnt need to put long pattern there
00:03:690 - change to k and del 00:03:840 (12) - same reason ^, its not a strong sound, so you can ignore that
00:04:140 - del, same reason^
00:06:090 (20,21,22,23,24) - kdkdk
00:07:290 - to d, you should not use ddk and follow it with long pattern
00:11:490 - to k, for consistency
00:13:440 - del
00:13:890 (56,57,58) - same reason with 00:07:290 - change it, or del (or you can add k in the red tick)
00:15:690 - to d
00:17:640 - to k, to follow the sound\
00:18:090 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - is this the reverse version of this 00:16:890 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ? if yes, you should change your pattern, it lil bit different
00:19:290 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101) - i think this is too long, del some note could be better
00:21:990 - change to k
00:22:140 - del
00:24:390 - to k
00:24:540 - del
you slider should end here 00:27:390 -
00:30:840 - too long, idk if you can make it shorter, it would be nice, its muzu right, even i can play oni, i feel lil bit exhausted at this part maybe its cuz im noob xD
00:33:540 - del
00:34:140 - ^
00:36:690 - to k
00:41:040 - change to d and drag it to 00:41:115 - for better sound, and follow the flow (imo)
01:00:090 - to d
01:08:490 - ^ for consistency
01:09:690 - ^
01:12:090 - ^
01:13:290 - ^
01:14:490 - ^
01:16:140 - to k, be consistent :3
01:16:440 - to d
01:42:090 - pls give some break xD, maybe you can follow my suggestion
, if you wont its ok, but you have to give some break
01:43:515 - drag to red tick ?, try to hear that at 75~50% playback same with all note in kai, and change 01:43:515 - to k, for consistency
01:44:715 - ^
01:47:115 - ^ and change to k
01:48:315 - ^
01:51:915 - ^
01:53:115 - ^
01:54:315 - ^
01:56:790 - ^
01:57:990 - ^
01:59:190 - ^
02:00:390 - ^
02:09:690 - del spiner and add or incrase the lenght your slider
suggestion about this diff
dont make long pattern, maybe some new player who want to try muzu play this diff, they will exhausted xD decrase the SR(note), and consider your pattern
you dont have to place note for all sound you hear, you can ignore some sound to make a break/rest
00:01:740 - you can del this, its begining, so you doesnt need to put long pattern there
00:03:690 - change to k and del 00:03:840 (12) - same reason ^, its not a strong sound, so you can ignore that
00:04:140 - del, same reason^
00:06:090 (20,21,22,23,24) - kdkdk
00:07:290 - to d, you should not use ddk and follow it with long pattern
00:11:490 - to k, for consistency
00:13:440 - del
00:13:890 (56,57,58) - same reason with 00:07:290 - change it, or del (or you can add k in the red tick)
00:15:690 - to d
00:17:640 - to k, to follow the sound\
00:18:090 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - is this the reverse version of this 00:16:890 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ? if yes, you should change your pattern, it lil bit different
00:19:290 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101) - i think this is too long, del some note could be better
00:21:990 - change to k
00:22:140 - del
00:24:390 - to k
00:24:540 - del
you slider should end here 00:27:390 -
00:30:840 - too long, idk if you can make it shorter, it would be nice, its muzu right, even i can play oni, i feel lil bit exhausted at this part maybe its cuz im noob xD
00:33:540 - del
00:34:140 - ^
00:36:690 - to k
00:41:040 - change to d and drag it to 00:41:115 - for better sound, and follow the flow (imo)
01:00:090 - to d
01:08:490 - ^ for consistency
01:09:690 - ^
01:12:090 - ^
01:13:290 - ^
01:14:490 - ^
01:16:140 - to k, be consistent :3
01:16:440 - to d
01:42:090 - pls give some break xD, maybe you can follow my suggestion
01:43:515 - drag to red tick ?, try to hear that at 75~50% playback same with all note in kai, and change 01:43:515 - to k, for consistency
01:44:715 - ^
01:47:115 - ^ and change to k
01:48:315 - ^
01:51:915 - ^
01:53:115 - ^
01:54:315 - ^
01:56:790 - ^
01:57:990 - ^
01:59:190 - ^
02:00:390 - ^
02:09:690 - del spiner and add or incrase the lenght your slider
suggestion about this diff
dont make long pattern, maybe some new player who want to try muzu play this diff, they will exhausted xD decrase the SR(note), and consider your pattern
you dont have to place note for all sound you hear, you can ignore some sound to make a break/rest
Futshoe
change the slider velocity to 1.20, its 200BPM :3
00:03:990 - to k
00:04:590 - missing note ? i think its a importand sound, its too dominant to ignore, consider it
00:05:490 - to d
00:06:690 - k for consistency
00:10:290 - d
00:16:590 - del
00:16:890 - to k, its a reverse pattern, and pls be consistent
00:21:690 - to d
00:22:290 - ^
00:25:890 - to d
00:26:190 - k
00:30:390 - to d
00:30:690 - k
00:30:990 - del, its too long
00:36:690 - to k, be consistent
00:40:890 (35,36,37) - kkd
00:42:990 - del this ? hmm
00:45:690 (48,49,50,51,52) - kkkkd ?
00:56:190 - d
00:56:490 - to k
00:57:690 - to d,i know you try to use reverse pattern but sometime you use k for that sound and use d again, pls be consistent
01:00:090 - to d
01:11:190 - ^
01:15:390 - you use d in muzu
01:15:540 - change to d, better sound
01:16:440 - try d
01:16:890 - big D
01:19:290 - d
01:26:790 - k
01:27:390 - del this one ? i think its too long
01:28:590 - ^
at your kai, it seems like muzukashii, you add too much triplet :3 and long pattern that should be not use at futsuu diff
maybe you can remap your kai, it just my opinion
im sorry i skip your kai xD im really confusing and i have too much to say about this diff
00:03:990 - to k
00:04:590 - missing note ? i think its a importand sound, its too dominant to ignore, consider it
00:05:490 - to d
00:06:690 - k for consistency
00:10:290 - d
00:16:590 - del
00:16:890 - to k, its a reverse pattern, and pls be consistent
00:21:690 - to d
00:22:290 - ^
00:25:890 - to d
00:26:190 - k
00:30:390 - to d
00:30:690 - k
00:30:990 - del, its too long
00:36:690 - to k, be consistent
00:40:890 (35,36,37) - kkd
00:42:990 - del this ? hmm
00:45:690 (48,49,50,51,52) - kkkkd ?
00:56:190 - d
00:56:490 - to k
00:57:690 - to d,i know you try to use reverse pattern but sometime you use k for that sound and use d again, pls be consistent
01:00:090 - to d
01:11:190 - ^
01:15:390 - you use d in muzu
01:15:540 - change to d, better sound
01:16:440 - try d
01:16:890 - big D
01:19:290 - d
01:26:790 - k
01:27:390 - del this one ? i think its too long
01:28:590 - ^
at your kai, it seems like muzukashii, you add too much triplet :3 and long pattern that should be not use at futsuu diff
maybe you can remap your kai, it just my opinion
im sorry i skip your kai xD im really confusing and i have too much to say about this diff
kantan
slider velocity to 1.20
00:10:890 (10,11) - to k be consistent
01:16:290 - disaster!!!!
01:38:490 (1) - end this at 01:41:790 -
and add note at 01:42:090 -
maybe you should not use SV at kantan and futsuu, do you see it ? the overlap, how can new player handle it ? :3
and i think your kai is over again, like in futsuu, hope you can re map kai, or use anoter pattern and make it playable for new player
00:10:890 (10,11) - to k be consistent
01:16:290 - disaster!!!!
01:38:490 (1) - end this at 01:41:790 -
and add note at 01:42:090 -
maybe you should not use SV at kantan and futsuu, do you see it ? the overlap, how can new player handle it ? :3
and i think your kai is over again, like in futsuu, hope you can re map kai, or use anoter pattern and make it playable for new player
:3 sorry for skiping your oni and inner oni
i hope this will help you
Topic Starter
PoPoii wrote:
M4M
you have 3 I (Insane) icon, that would be some problem
why you use Soft Hitsound ?
Disable CountdownMuzu-HP drain 4/5
00:01:740 - you can del this, its begining, so you doesnt need to put long pattern there It's fine,just 7 notes
00:03:690 - change to k and del 00:03:840 (12) - same reason ^, its not a strong sound, so you can ignore that
00:04:140 - del, same reason^
00:06:090 (20,21,22,23,24) - kdkdk
00:07:290 - to d, you should not use ddk and follow it with long pattern
00:11:490 - to k, for consistency
00:13:440 - del
00:13:890 (56,57,58) - same reason with 00:07:290 - change it, or del (or you can add k in the red tick) chnged to dkdkddk
00:15:690 - to d
00:17:640 - to k, to follow the sound\
00:18:090 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - is this the reverse version of this 00:16:890 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ? if yes, you should change your pattern, it lil bit different no
00:19:290 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101) - i think this is too long, del some note could be better
00:21:990 - change to k
00:22:140 - del
00:24:390 - to k
00:24:540 - del
you slider should end here 00:27:390 -
00:30:840 - too long, idk if you can make it shorter, it would be nice, its muzu right, even i can play oni, i feel lil bit exhausted at this part maybe its cuz im noob xD your just noob xD
00:33:540 - del
00:34:140 - ^
00:36:690 - to k
00:41:040 - change to d and drag it to 00:41:115 - for better sound, and follow the flow (imo) changed to 2 doubles
01:00:090 - to d
01:08:490 - ^ for consistency
01:09:690 - ^
01:12:090 - ^
01:13:290 - ^
01:14:490 - ^
01:16:140 - to k, be consistent :3 changed to DKKD
01:16:440 - to d changed to DKKD
01:42:090 - pls give some break xD, maybe you can follow my suggestion
01:43:515 - drag to red tick ?, try to hear that at 75~50% playback same with all note in kai, and change 01:43:515 - to k, for consistency messed around with chorus,now there's short breaks,so I can't rlly change much,also the sound is 1/4th beat late
01:44:715 - ^ ^ to everything below,but i changed them all to k
01:47:115 - ^ and change to k
01:48:315 - ^
01:51:915 - ^
01:53:115 - ^
01:54:315 - ^
01:56:790 - ^
01:57:990 - ^
01:59:190 - ^
02:00:390 - ^ wut
02:09:690 - del spiner and add or incrase the lenght your slider pushed the slider length
suggestion about this diff
dont make long pattern, maybe some new player who want to try muzu play this diff, they will exhausted xD decrase the SR(note), and consider your pattern
you dont have to place note for all sound you hear, you can ignore some sound to make a break/restFutshoechange the slider velocity to 1.20, its 200BPM :3 lol futshoe,that's the diff name now xD
00:03:990 - to k
00:04:590 - missing note ? i think its a importand sound, its too dominant to ignore, consider it
00:05:490 - to d
00:06:690 - k for consistency
00:10:290 - d
00:16:590 - del pretty important sound,but pattern changed to dkddk
00:16:890 - to k, its a reverse pattern, and pls be consistent ^
00:21:690 - to d
00:22:290 - ^
00:25:890 - to d changed to kdK
00:26:190 - k ^
00:30:390 - to d
00:30:690 - k
00:30:990 - del, its too long
00:36:690 - to k, be consistent
00:40:890 (35,36,37) - kkd
00:42:990 - del this ? hmm hmm no
00:45:690 (48,49,50,51,52) - kkkkd ?
00:56:190 - d high pitch
00:56:490 - to k https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8585926 :thinking:
00:57:690 - to d,i know you try to use reverse pattern but sometime you use k for that sound and use d again, pls be consistent
01:00:090 - to d
01:11:190 - ^
01:15:390 - you use d in muzu
01:15:540 - change to d, better sound
01:16:440 - try d
01:16:890 - big D
01:19:290 - d
01:26:790 - k
01:27:390 - del this one ? i think its too long nah,but changed to d
01:28:590 - ^ nah
at your kai, it seems like muzukashii, you add too much triplet :3 and long pattern that should be not use at futsuu diff
maybe you can remap your kai, it just my opinion nerfed kai by a bit
im sorry i skip your kai xD im really confusing and i have too much to say about this diff its for difficulty,like how I made a 5* with a 39 sec song XDDDD I have no lifekantanslider velocity to 1.20
00:10:890 (10,11) - to k be consistent KK d
01:16:290 - disaster!!!!
01:38:490 (1) - end this at 01:41:790 -
and add note at 01:42:090 -
maybe you should use SV at kantan and futsuu, do you see it ? the overlap, how can new player handle it ? :3
and i think your kai is over again, like in futsuu, hope you can re map kai, or use anoter pattern and make it playable for new player nerfed chorus
:3 sorry for skiping your oni and inner oni
i hope this will help you sorta
:'v why you change futsuu to futshoe ?
It just a joke lol xD
It just a joke lol xD
Topic Starter
Just for lolz xDPoPoii wrote:
:'v why you change futsuu to futshoe ?
It just a joke lol xD
Cause why not xD
Demmm foot shoe XD sir...
footshoe so demSurono wrote:
Demmm foot shoe XD sir...
Topic Starter
FUTSHOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
[General]
BG res 1366x768 ok
metadata from https://osu.ppy.sh/b/260349
add 'Touhou' (original game series) to source
add 'BMS' (original game platform) to tag
add '少女が見た日本の原風景' (original song name) to tag
Disable 'Countdown' on Futshoe and A A T U's Loli
Enable 'Widescreen Support' on Katana
Increase SliderMultiplier:1.2999999666214 -> 1.4 on A A T U's Loli
Increase HP 2 -> 7 on Katana because it has few notes
Increase HP 2 -> 6 on Futshoe
Increase HP 4 -> 5 on other diffs
Decrease ACC 6 -> 5 on Moozukashii
[Katana]
00:57:690 (38,39,40,41) - shorten for 1/2
first one ends at 00:59:790
second one ends at 01:02:190
third one ends at 01:04:590
last one ends at 01:06:990
[Futshoe]
00:36:990 (25) - remove Finish
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove
01:15:390 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - D D _ K _ K K _ k
01:46:590 (19) - delete.
01:51:390 (38) - delete.
01:51:990 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - d _ k d k d k
01:53:190 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - k _ d k d k d
01:56:190 (61) - delete.
02:00:390 (77,78,79,80) - remove Finish
02:08:490 (87) - resnap the slider
[Moozukashii]
00:01:440 (2) - delete.
00:09:915 (35) - delete.
00:17:115 (73) - delete.
00:18:315 (80) - delete.
00:19:515 (87) - delete.
00:29:190 (131) - delete.
00:30:390 (137) - delete.
00:35:190 (163) - delete.
00:44:490 (201) - ends at 00:45:390
00:51:690 (13) - ends at 00:52:590
00:52:890 (14) - ends at 00:53:790
01:29:490 (11,12,13,14) - d _ k d k (drum sound)
01:30:690 (15,16,17,18) - k k d _ k (drum sound)
01:36:090 (26) - ends at 01:36:390
01:37:290 (28) - ends at 01:38:190
at least kiai part is good
02:08:565 (128) - starts at 02:08:640
BG res 1366x768 ok
metadata from https://osu.ppy.sh/b/260349
add 'Touhou' (original game series) to source
add 'BMS' (original game platform) to tag
add '少女が見た日本の原風景' (original song name) to tag
Disable 'Countdown' on Futshoe and A A T U's Loli
Enable 'Widescreen Support' on Katana
Increase SliderMultiplier:1.2999999666214 -> 1.4 on A A T U's Loli
Increase HP 2 -> 7 on Katana because it has few notes
Increase HP 2 -> 6 on Futshoe
Increase HP 4 -> 5 on other diffs
Decrease ACC 6 -> 5 on Moozukashii
[Katana]
00:57:690 (38,39,40,41) - shorten for 1/2
first one ends at 00:59:790
second one ends at 01:02:190
third one ends at 01:04:590
last one ends at 01:06:990
[Futshoe]
00:36:990 (25) - remove Finish
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove
01:15:390 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - D D _ K _ K K _ k
01:46:590 (19) - delete.
01:51:390 (38) - delete.
01:51:990 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - d _ k d k d k
01:53:190 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - k _ d k d k d
01:56:190 (61) - delete.
02:00:390 (77,78,79,80) - remove Finish
02:08:490 (87) - resnap the slider
[Moozukashii]
00:01:440 (2) - delete.
00:09:915 (35) - delete.
00:17:115 (73) - delete.
00:18:315 (80) - delete.
00:19:515 (87) - delete.
00:29:190 (131) - delete.
00:30:390 (137) - delete.
00:35:190 (163) - delete.
00:44:490 (201) - ends at 00:45:390
00:51:690 (13) - ends at 00:52:590
00:52:890 (14) - ends at 00:53:790
01:29:490 (11,12,13,14) - d _ k d k (drum sound)
01:30:690 (15,16,17,18) - k k d _ k (drum sound)
01:36:090 (26) - ends at 01:36:390
01:37:290 (28) - ends at 01:38:190
at least kiai part is good
02:08:565 (128) - starts at 02:08:640
From your queue, maybe overmodded on Dinner loli.
I observed high similarities of the two diffs below, please, make it not the case anymore by creating a more reasonable spread difference of the hardest diff(dinner loli)
[A A T U's loli]
00:20:190 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - overuse of finishes (big ones)
01:24:990 (143,144) - ctrl+g
00:33:690 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - What? Change them, really
00:36:690 (250) - change to k
00:47:690 (321,322) - wrong snap of notes! change 00:47:690 (321) - to 00:47:715 - and 00:47:890 (322) - to 00:47:940 -
01:01:590 (45,46) - considering the style you map on this part, make this a triple
01:15:165 (74) - change to d
01:27:090 (163,164,165,166) - There's five sounds here actually!
01:36:465 (232) - move forwards a 1/4
01:37:065 (236) - ^
01:38:490 (1) - I don't suggest this spinner
02:06:090 (148) - (The ending of the song) I don't suggest spinners being too frequently appeared given that this part of the song is calm
[Dinner loli]
Please change the sample to Normal, not Soft: custom 1
I suggest that you look on my mods below, then really look into the diff and rethink about various places if you want it to be rankable.
You'll probably need a 50% remap on this diff, but don't be discouraged! You will make a better map when you gain more experience to map a more legit map.
00:02:115 (8) - add a d here for following the song.
00:13:290 (78,79) - 00:14:590 (89,90) - 00:18:690 (130,131) - 01:27:090 (7,8) - these 1/3 quadruples don't have sounds backed up by the song. BNs would not agree with this. I'll suggest you remove them and change to other stuffs, really.
00:26:190 (180) - this doesn't snap to the sound, you move it to 00:26:152 - or you just remove it
00:39:390 (286) - ^
01:18:990 (220) - ^
00:29:190 (211,212,213) - change to kdk
00:30:315 - This contains a rather strong sound here
01:30:765 (41) - ^
00:46:440 (339) - move to 00:46:515 -
00:54:690 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403) - If you decide to keep this long stream change these into ks
00:57:240 - These two 1/4 spaces should be mapped
01:36:090 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - They don't have back-up sounds remove them
I'll not go over more of these issues (sounds that the songs has/ hasn't)
if you want this map to follow the song as nicely and at the same time as the hardest diff, here are the suggestions:
01:21:540 (235) - add 1/8 quintuple here
00:21:240 (149) - change to K
00:21:690 (150) - change to D
00:22:515 (158) - change to d
00:56:190 (4) - change to K
01:34:590 (62) - change to k
Starting from kiai part, it is unnecessary to make long streams like 01:42:090 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183) - Map the sounds of what they can be.
You have some good patterns like 00:26:490 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - Which makes perfect sense with the d,k choices
gl with the map!
I observed high similarities of the two diffs below, please, make it not the case anymore by creating a more reasonable spread difference of the hardest diff(dinner loli)
[A A T U's loli]
00:20:190 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - overuse of finishes (big ones)
01:24:990 (143,144) - ctrl+g
00:33:690 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - What? Change them, really
00:36:690 (250) - change to k
00:47:690 (321,322) - wrong snap of notes! change 00:47:690 (321) - to 00:47:715 - and 00:47:890 (322) - to 00:47:940 -
01:01:590 (45,46) - considering the style you map on this part, make this a triple
01:15:165 (74) - change to d
01:27:090 (163,164,165,166) - There's five sounds here actually!
01:36:465 (232) - move forwards a 1/4
01:37:065 (236) - ^
01:38:490 (1) - I don't suggest this spinner
02:06:090 (148) - (The ending of the song) I don't suggest spinners being too frequently appeared given that this part of the song is calm
[Dinner loli]
Please change the sample to Normal, not Soft: custom 1
I suggest that you look on my mods below, then really look into the diff and rethink about various places if you want it to be rankable.
You'll probably need a 50% remap on this diff, but don't be discouraged! You will make a better map when you gain more experience to map a more legit map.
00:02:115 (8) - add a d here for following the song.
00:13:290 (78,79) - 00:14:590 (89,90) - 00:18:690 (130,131) - 01:27:090 (7,8) - these 1/3 quadruples don't have sounds backed up by the song. BNs would not agree with this. I'll suggest you remove them and change to other stuffs, really.
00:26:190 (180) - this doesn't snap to the sound, you move it to 00:26:152 - or you just remove it
00:39:390 (286) - ^
01:18:990 (220) - ^
00:29:190 (211,212,213) - change to kdk
00:30:315 - This contains a rather strong sound here
01:30:765 (41) - ^
00:46:440 (339) - move to 00:46:515 -
00:54:690 (395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403) - If you decide to keep this long stream change these into ks
00:57:240 - These two 1/4 spaces should be mapped
01:36:090 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - They don't have back-up sounds remove them
I'll not go over more of these issues (sounds that the songs has/ hasn't)
if you want this map to follow the song as nicely and at the same time as the hardest diff, here are the suggestions:
01:21:540 (235) - add 1/8 quintuple here
00:21:240 (149) - change to K
00:21:690 (150) - change to D
00:22:515 (158) - change to d
00:56:190 (4) - change to K
01:34:590 (62) - change to k
Starting from kiai part, it is unnecessary to make long streams like 01:42:090 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183) - Map the sounds of what they can be.
You have some good patterns like 00:26:490 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - Which makes perfect sense with the d,k choices
gl with the map!
no,don't open it
[Dinner Loli]
00:02:190 (9) - should be K for higher pitch
00:06:090 (38,39,40,41,42) - KDKKK for same pitch
00:10:590 (58,59) - dd,if you want add D plz add at 00:10:290 (57) - 00:09:690 (53) -
00:12:690 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871480 and same pattern to others.
00:15:690 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871474
00:17:340 (120,121) - k d
00:17:565 (122) - mov to 00:17:640 -
...I'm thinking if I should talk about how to make taiko maps?instead of modding
00:18:690 (131,132,133,134) - k at higher pitch than d,so please add k at music's higher pitch and d at lower pitch.
00:20:340 (145,146) - D an K should use at strong place so plz swap them,
00:23:565 - 00:23:640 - and fit music is important,don't do any non-snapped partten with out muisc's support
00:25:290 - you avoid the piano her but you 00:25:890 (181) - followed this with a D?so???
00:28:140 (203) - so why not k?
00:42:090 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - d&k totaly wrong...Why r u so diao.
00:46:365 (343,344) - swap to make this pattern better.
00:50:490 (359) - k
00:51:690 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871565 fit music instead plz.
00:55:890 (3,4) - ...
00:56:490 (5,6,7) - ddk
00:56:940 (8,9,10,11,12) - kkdkd
01:01:290 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ....check about all your streams your self plz.
01:07:290 - I have no idea about why you use this pattern
01:16:140 (200,201) - KD
01:20:040 - oh,my god,this should be 1/8!
I refuse to continue modding this map.
[A A T U's Loli]
00:10:590 (53,54) - think about finisher's fitness,and remove simillar finishers.
00:06:540 (36) - K
00:04:140 (20,21,22,23,24) - kkdkd
00:13:140 (68) - k
00:13:890 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - plz do stream more complex.
....no
00:02:190 (9) - should be K for higher pitch
00:06:090 (38,39,40,41,42) - KDKKK for same pitch
00:10:590 (58,59) - dd,if you want add D plz add at 00:10:290 (57) - 00:09:690 (53) -
00:12:690 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871480 and same pattern to others.
00:15:690 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871474
00:17:340 (120,121) - k d
00:17:565 (122) - mov to 00:17:640 -
...I'm thinking if I should talk about how to make taiko maps?instead of modding
00:18:690 (131,132,133,134) - k at higher pitch than d,so please add k at music's higher pitch and d at lower pitch.
00:20:340 (145,146) - D an K should use at strong place so plz swap them,
00:23:565 - 00:23:640 - and fit music is important,don't do any non-snapped partten with out muisc's support
00:25:290 - you avoid the piano her but you 00:25:890 (181) - followed this with a D?so???
00:28:140 (203) - so why not k?
00:42:090 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - d&k totaly wrong...Why r u so diao.
00:46:365 (343,344) - swap to make this pattern better.
00:50:490 (359) - k
00:51:690 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8871565 fit music instead plz.
00:55:890 (3,4) - ...
00:56:490 (5,6,7) - ddk
00:56:940 (8,9,10,11,12) - kkdkd
01:01:290 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ....check about all your streams your self plz.
01:07:290 - I have no idea about why you use this pattern
01:16:140 (200,201) - KD
01:20:040 - oh,my god,this should be 1/8!
I refuse to continue modding this map.
[A A T U's Loli]
00:10:590 (53,54) - think about finisher's fitness,and remove simillar finishers.
00:06:540 (36) - K
00:04:140 (20,21,22,23,24) - kkdkd
00:13:140 (68) - k
00:13:890 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - plz do stream more complex.
....no
请认真思考谱面与音乐的联系！！！照这个节奏摸完这特么都变成我的图了！！！
Well I guess it cant be helped, I did not make it clear that I mean to mod my map's whole set. Modding Inner Oni only.
General
- I am sure any BN/QATs will go against the names you used for each E/N/H/I/X diff.
Disable Widescreen support for ALL DIFFS, it's unrankable.
Inner Oni
Sorry but I have to say this diff is mapped inconsistently and weird emphasizing. I am pointing out major obvious issues only.
- 00:02:190 (9) - delete 10, 9 add finisher. 00:02:190 (9,10,11) - emphasis 00:02:190 (9,10,11) - are clearly different fragments of the music
00:06:990 - I am sure you missed some sound effects here.
00:07:290 (45) - I don't think the density after this fits the song well. You should buff the part after.
00:12:090 (68) - and 00:16:890 (116) - are identical parts. Map consistently please.
00:21:690 (152,171) - Can be mapped identically. It gives out similar emphasizing to the song.
00:27:690 (200) - & 00:32:490 (245) - ^^
00:37:290 (282,293) - ^
00:42:390 (315,316,317) - buff this part. Makes density contrast to 00:43:290 (318,319,320,321) -
00:51:690 (361) - Are you serious? imo this is awfully overmapped. The mood of the song at that time snap does not fits a stream.
00:57:690 (14) - map consistently with each bar. And the streams does not make sense either.
01:18:090 (215,218,221) - inconsistent emphasizing compared to 01:20:490 (233,234,235) -
01:21:690 (238) - I am sure this part allows 1/2+1/4 mapping. The mood of the song isn't that calm.
01:27:690 (12) -Notlikethis
01:28:890 (28) - you might want to make this part consistent compared with 00:46:890 (348) -
01:37:290 (79) - ^^
01:39:690 (104) - the stream is so boring, make some variation please. Of course you need to make sure it emphasize the music well.
Pretty much you need to remap kiai. The 9plets 1/4s and 1/6 usage ruined the map.
02:01:290 (10) - inconsistent emphasizing with 02:06:090 (39) - ; Moreover this should be the time where kiai ends.
02:08:490 (53) - yes there are 1/4 fxs in the music, yet it does not mean you can map 1/4 here. The song's mood clearly does not fit any streams here.
This map still needs a lot of work before it gets ranked. imo this song isn't suitable for newbie mappers to map with. You might want to try map with a better stand-out rhythm song instead. GL on improving your mapping skill!ts8zs wrote:
请认真思考谱面与音乐的联系！！！照这个节奏摸完这特么都变成我的图了！！！
wrong chat ps
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