Behonkiss wrote:

Normal:
- 00:48:405 (Spinner): Maybe end this at 00:51:334 on the 1/4s? Ended at 00:50:891, it's better.
- 01:13:968 (Timing point): Soft timing point here is weird and ill-fitting, especially since Hard & Insane use Normal sounds here. Fixed.
- 01:24:973 feels empty. Try putting a 5 circle somewhere right before the spinner.True. But I added a note at 01:24:796
- 02:14:678 (1): Consider changing this to a long slider to go better with the long lyric here. Done
- 03:16:098 (Timing point): Again, out of place Soft sounds that aren't in the other difficulties. Fixed

Hard:
- The slider speed here might work for an Insane, but it's waaaaaay too fast for a Hard. I like it so D:
- 01:15:033 (1): Consider adding a finish hitsound here. Done.

Insane:
- 00:11:305 (3,4): Stacking these two close together but on top of a previous circle that is farther away might disorient people. Stack them somewhere else. I moved these, but I always stacked with the next note. I like it so ^^
- 02:37:400 (1): No reason for this to be a new combo. Omg when did I set new combo here? xD Thank you, fixed.
- 02:50:003 (4): Empty space after this is weird. Add a spinner there or something. Done, added spinner.

1. There are 2 osb file in your folder, I think you should delete Kawada Mami - Hishoku No Sora (Chewin).osb or delete them all and do a full-submit

1. 00:56:394 (5) - Add finish
2. 03:17:164 (1) - ^

1. 00:38:110 (3) - Add finish
2. 00:40:595 (5) - Remove finish, add finish to 00:40:950 (1)
3. 00:52:311 (1) - ^
4. 01:49:116 (1) - ^
5. 01:51:956 (1) - ^
6. 02:03:317 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:482 (4) - Remove clap, normal hitsound with soft finish sounds bad, really
2. 00:17:518 x - Add a note here, ends at white tick seems better
3. 00:52:311 (4) - Add finish
4. 01:44:855 (1) - Remove finish
5. 01:51:956 (1) - Add finish
6. 03:16:098 - Why here use soft hitsound, sounds a bit odd
   

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. There are 2 osb file in your folder, I think you should delete Kawada Mami - Hishoku No Sora (Chewin).osb or delete them all and do a full-submit

[Normal]

1. 00:56:394 (5) - Add finish
2. 03:17:164 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:38:110 (3) - Add finish
2. 00:40:595 (5) - Remove finish, add finish to 00:40:950 (1)
3. 00:52:311 (1) - ^
4. 01:49:116 (1) - ^
5. 01:51:956 (1) - ^
6. 02:03:317 (1) - ^

[Insane]
oh wow, easily to get 17 million score

1. 00:11:482 (4) - Remove clap, normal hitsound with soft finish sounds bad, really
2. 00:17:518 x - Add a note here, ends at white tick seems better
3. 00:52:311 (4) - Add finish
4. 01:44:855 (1) - Remove finish
5. 01:51:956 (1) - Add finish
6. 03:16:098 - Why here use soft hitsound, sounds a bit odd
   

Others are fine
let me know when you done changes, forum or in-game PM

Chewin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Ew. I would just remove (Full ver.) from the name. All songs are full versions unless noted otherwise I assume. But it's up to you to remove or not.

No, there is a TV size too.
Anyways updated ~

Raging Bull wrote:

Just curious, but why are breaks inconsistent? ._.

If I were you, I would follow what normal has, which is a break at 02:40:240 to 02:51:601. Normally this won't bother me but hard and normal just has two different breaks. Insane...well I suppose you can keep that if you want.


Oh and this is awkward but....delete the 2 osb in your folder and full submit.

Raging Bull wrote:

Oh and this is awkward but....delete the 2 osb in your folder and full submit.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Oh and this is awkward but....delete the 2 osb in your folder and full submit.

even if there were some osb's they weren't worth a pop.
They do not occupy space plus peppy even said it's not obligatory to delete them.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Oh and this is awkward but....delete the 2 osb in your folder and full submit.

even if there were some osb's they weren't worth a pop.
They do not occupy space plus peppy even said it's not obligatory to delete them.

• Le sezioni copy-pastate, perché non le ribalti orizzontalmente? Ad esempio, da 02:08:287 nella Hard si vede tantissimo che è copiata da una pattern uguale poco prima, ma almeno ribaltandola dà più distribuzione sul campo di gioco.
  Direi anche di levare il letterboxing, la testa di Shana è quasi tagliata a metà... :/
  Ma perché lo sliderslide silenziato, dai D: Posso capire usarlo nella sezione lenta (lì sono d'accordo), ma nel resto della mappa no, dai. Se vuoi fare così, mettilo come custom 2 e lo usi per 00:40:950 - 00:52:311 e 02:40:240 - 02:51:601

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   AR +1. E dato che è una Normal direi anche +1 OD e +2 HP drain come minimo.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:46:098 (1) - rimuovi nuova combo e la ripetizione.
   00:51:423 - aggiungi slider facendolo finire a 00:51:956. Oppure fai lo spinner come questo 01:59:411 (1), che finisce proprio su quella tacchetta rossa.
   00:54:441 - non vedo il motivo del buco qui.
   01:45:743 (1) - veramente questo dovrebbe durare 1/2 in più
   01:57:636 (5) - suona strano, meglio senza.
   01:59:411 (1) - applica la stessa scelta che hai usato a 00:51:423
   02:10:772 (1) - credo sia meglio farlo finire 1/2 prima, soprattutto se quei due spinner di prima li hai fatti finire sul rosso.
   02:13:968 (1) - fallo finire a 02:16:808
   03:49:648 - aggiungi nota

SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright Let's go~

Nyquill wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright Let's go~

I honestly had no idea that you can go from a popped bubble directly to ranked

Grats btw o/

Mitiai wrote:

Shanaaaa *O*
<3

Tsuna2142 wrote:

Star