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Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora

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Chewin
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Chewin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 3 ottobre 2011 at 00:57:31

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Hishoku no Sora
Source: Shakugan no Shana
Tags: Opening
BPM: 169
Filesize: 6780kb
Play Time: 03:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,76 stars, 451 notes)
  2. Insane (4,96 stars, 636 notes)
  3. Normal (2,97 stars, 269 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Normal: Completed!
Hard: Completed!
Insane: Completed!

Ready for mods! :3

Thx for mod:
- CracK 12/07
- -kevincela- 12/07
- Raging Bull 15/07
- KayeSara 15/07
- Breeze 17/07
- HakuNoKaemi 17-18/07
- Odaril 18-19/07
- OzzyOzrock 19/07
- akrolsmir 20/07
- The 08 team_Bourdon 22/07
- Megurine Luka 24/07
- Wiinter 27/07
- Nyquill 27/07
- L_P 29/07
- BounceBabe 06/08
- Behonkiss 09/08
- Breeze's Recheck 12/08
- Card N'Force
- Sakura Hana
Last edited by Chewin , edited 48 times in total.
Brunoh
20 posts
Joined January 2011
Brunoh
star! :)
lovvo la hard *-*
buona fortuna per il ranking bià
Jordan
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Joined December 2010
Jordan
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question. <- Star ;)
Leader
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Joined January 2011
Leader
Star :)
my message is too short, do not post messages like star hurrdurr
Charliiest
27 posts
Joined April 2010
Charliiest
Bellissima *-*
Star <3
e il mio messaggio è troppo corto
Kira Gaoow
12 posts
Joined December 2010
Kira Gaoow
Star, e che palle con sto msg corto uffa. E quanto deve essere lungo.
penodav
23 posts
Joined March 2011
penodav
"messaggio corto o meno la starro lo stesso xD" Star Star Star
Firstbones
4 posts
Joined November 2010
Firstbones
Che bravo biagino starro subito anche se devo ancora scaricarla *_*
EmpressDemon272
EmpressDemon272
EPICNESS. Grande chewin, mappa veramente ben fatta! Mi piace molto la tag hard anche a me spero venga fatta ranked!
Chriis_old
1 post
Joined May 2010
Chriis_old
Fantastica *-*
Star <3
Cmq la hard non riesco ancora a farla .-.
Messaggio troppo corto, lo so.
Pego_old
38 posts
Joined September 2010
Pego_old
bella bella bella mi piace un sacco belle le posizioni e il ritmo complimenti!
Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[General]
Delete all the tags, because shakugan no shana is in the source and you don't need to put your own nickname there
New rules say that there must be a difficulty with less than 3 star rating. It will be very good if you could map an Easy. All 4 diffs from the one and only creator is rare to see

[Insane]
I really don't like totally copypasted parts =\ And it seems like you did this not only with chorus parts.. Don't be lazy and do something new everytime!
00:44:500 (1) - Remove new combo
00:50:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't feel that stream, I mean I don't expect it here at all and it doesn't fit. Maybe you can map something else here?
02:01:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]
00:59:766 (9) - New combo
00:59:944 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:269 (X) - I would place a note here
01:13:435 (X) - And here too. Just start the spinner at the big white tick
01:16:630 (X) - A note~
01:59:411 (9,1) - Same as above ^^^^
03:07:400 (X) - Note
03:15:565 (X) - ^
aaand the same as for the previous chorus
But I strongly advice you to map some new things here!

[Normal]
02:37:755 - Maybe a spinner here. Because a simple note feels weird later
And copy-paste again...

Everything is pretty solid and nice and looks cute, I liked it. But the copypaste is really.. the thing that hurts the quality of your map in my eyes
Star anyway!
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
Done, thank you very much..
I'll follow your advice next time, this is my first map ^^ Thanks again ~
CMP
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Joined April 2011
CMP
good~!~!











!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




my pending map -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31388
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,795 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Irc modded,here's the log:

SPOILER
16.34 <Chewin> : ehm ciao :3 disturbo? xD
16.34 <-kevincela-> : dimmi
16.35 <Chewin> : mi hanno detto di chiedere a te che sei bravo xD
16.35 <Chewin> : potresti moddarmi una map?
16.35 <-kevincela-> : scusa,ma in questo momento mis to prendendo una pausa dal modding
16.35 <-kevincela-> : ma linkami comunque la mappa
16.35 <Chewin> : capitano tutte a me :°D
16.35 <-kevincela-> : lol
16.35 <Chewin> : ok xD
16.36 <Chewin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34853
16.36 <Chewin> : ti ringrazierò a vita se me la moddi :°
16.38 <-kevincela-> : ok
16.38 <-kevincela-> : ti farò un irc mod
16.38 <-kevincela-> : contento?
16.38 <-kevincela-> : L0L
16.38 <Chewin> : cos'è? *-* cioè me la moddi in chat?
16.39 <-kevincela-> : si
16.39 <Chewin> : oddio
16.39 <Chewin> : Grazieee ç_ç ti devo un favore chiedi se hai bisogno di qualcosa
16.39 <Chewin> : *-*
16.39 <-kevincela-> : ok
16.40 <-kevincela-> : 00:35:092 - qui ci starebbe bene una nota
16.40 <Chewin> : normal?
16.40 <-kevincela-> : 00:40:950 - anche qui,se magari la metti silenziata ci sta bene
16.40 <-kevincela-> : si
16.42 <-kevincela-> : 01:07:577 (7) - mettila come nell'immagine
16.42 <-kevincela-> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129495
16.42 <-kevincela-> : dopo fixa lo spacing con la nota successiva
16.43 <-kevincela-> : 01:14:323 - Magari mettere una tripletta di 1/2?
16.43 <-kevincela-> : per far cambiare un po' il ritmo
16.43 <Chewin> : sto facendo direttamente quindi non ti rispondo u.u
16.43 <-kevincela-> : k
16.44 <-kevincela-> : 01:51:956 - anche qui aggiungi una nota magari silenziata
16.45 <-kevincela-> : 03:16:453 - stessa cosa di prima per la tripletta
16.46 <-kevincela-> : 03:39:175 - ^
16.46 <-kevincela-> : ok
16.46 <-kevincela-> : come normal è buona
16.46 <-kevincela-> : forse un po' troppoo noiosa
16.46 <-kevincela-> : visto il ritmo sempre costante
16.46 <-kevincela-> : ma vabbè
16.46 <Chewin> : rofl è la prima, caipscimi <3
16.46 <-kevincela-> : sisi
16.46 <-kevincela-> : ora con la hard
16.47 <Chewin> : bene io finisco di modificare le ultime cose qui
16.47 <Chewin> : madonna grazie xD
16.47 <-kevincela-> : 00:08:642 (6) - dovresti modificare questa forma per renderla migliore :O
16.47 <-kevincela-> : 00:13:258 (7) - non è ben allineata con la fine dello slider 5
16.49 <Chewin> : mh non ho capito l'ultimo
16.49 <Chewin> : cosa non va bene dello slider?
16.49 <-kevincela-> : non è lo slider
16.49 <-kevincela-> : ma la nota
16.49 <-kevincela-> : non è messa bene sotto la fine
16.49 <-kevincela-> : dello slider
16.49 <Chewin> : done <3
16.50 <-kevincela-> : 02:25:684 (8) - non ci sta bene il finish alla fine dello slider
16.50 <-kevincela-> : ti suggerisco di metterlo all'inizio dello slider 02:26:039 (1) -
16.51 <Chewin> : faccio, con gli hitsounds non sono bravo
16.51 <-kevincela-> : 02:37:045 (8) - stessa cosa
16.51 <-kevincela-> : 02:47:163 (5,6) - wut,fixa lo spacing
16.52 <-kevincela-> : per il resto è ok
16.52 <Chewin> : omg fatto tutto
16.52 <-kevincela-> : ora
16.52 <-kevincela-> : la insane
16.52 <-kevincela-> : 00:17:518 - aggiungi una nota con clap
16.53 <Chewin> : con custom?
16.53 <-kevincela-> : 00:31:009 (8) - sposta il waypoint dello slider 1 grid a sinistra
16.53 <-kevincela-> : 00:50:802 (1) - elimina a nota
16.54 <-kevincela-> : 00:50:802 (1) - 1 grid a destra
16.55 <-kevincela-> : 02:01:808 (1) - elimina
16.55 <-kevincela-> : 02:01:897 (2) - 1 grid sotto
16.55 <-kevincela-> : 02:02:252 (6) - 1 grid sopra
16.57 <-kevincela-> : 02:59:589 (8) - rimuovi clap e aggiungilo alla nota 9
16.57 <-kevincela-> : snzi no
16.57 <-kevincela-> : 02:59:766 (9) - e 02:59:944 (10) - aggiungi finish
16.57 <Chewin> : done :3
16.57 <-kevincela-> : ok fatto
16.58 <Chewin> : grandissimo, grazie infinite
16.58 <-kevincela-> : adesso posto nel topic
16.58 <-kevincela-> : e mi dai il kudosu
16.58 <-kevincela-> : ok?xD
16.58 <Chewin> : yea *-*

The map is quite good and solid,it has still some things that need to be fixed but that's good.
Star~
Chewin
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Chewin
Grazie mille Kevin *-*

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PedoDarK
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PedoDarK
star (:
Ti lovvo <3
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Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Hi.

General:
You have 2 .osb. Delete both of them and FULL submit.
Use tickrate 2 as it sounds a lot better.
http://puu.sh/2963
Map a difficulty that is under 3 stars. Map won't be able to rank unless you map an easier difficulty or tone down normal.
Combo colors 1 and 2 are rather similar (because of BG) Change 2 into a different color to like green or another color.
Remove Shakugan No Shana Chewin from tags. Shakugan No Shana is in the source. You don't need your name.

Normal:
OD is too high. -3 OD please. -2 AR also.
I think SV is quite high. (Since you have no lower diff :L) Maybe tone it down to .80x? You will need to readjust all sliders though.
I don't really recommend starting the first note with a kiai time. Remove the timing section.
00:34:559 (5,6,7) - A tricky spacy on normal Don't do this. 5,6 are spaced correctly. 6,7 is spaced wrong and it will give the impression that is it 1/1 and not 1/2. Move 7 so that it is in the middle of 6,8.
00:40:950 (8) - Silent note Unrankable. The only thing you can silence are slider ends or spinner. Raise the volume to maybe 30%?
00:48:405 (1) - End your spinner here 00:51:601. It gives recovery time for beginners after a spinner to hit the next note.
01:00:121 (1) - ^ but end it at 01:02:962
01:15:033 (1) - Maybe add finish to slider beginning? Sounds empty when kiai starts again here.
01:25:329 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234.
01:51:956 (8) - Silent note. Raise to 30% at least
01:59:411 (1) - End it at 02:02:607 instead.
02:11:127 (1) - End it at 02:13:968 instead.
02:38:820 (1,1) - What?...Why would you even do this for a normal? Spinner then a note 1/2 beat later on a normal. >_> Remove note and extend spinner to where note was. Add finish on spinner.
02:50:181 (1) - Map up to here on normal for consistency in breaks.
03:02:252 (1) - Mhmm. Reduce spinner to 03:05:092
03:17:164 (1) - Finish on slider start.
03:25:684 (1) - Reduce spinner to 03:27:814
03:39:885 (1) - Finish on slider start.
03:50:181 (1) - Extend spinner to 03:54:086.
Map to the end like hard.

Hard:
-1 OD +2 HP.
00:06:867 (1) - Don't like starting with kiai, remove timing section.
00:39:352 (1) - Touches HP bar. I recommend you move it lower. Just vertical flip 00:38:465 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) and you should be okay. Works surprisingly well lol.
01:05:447 (2) - Remove whistle sound from slider body. (Not end or beginning but the body itself)
01:16:630 (2,4) - ^
01:20:713 (5,8) - ^
01:23:553 (3) - ^ It's just me. It sounds way too loud and doesn't fit. Up to you to remove or not. There's actually quite a few more but I won't list them since I don't know if it's intentional.
01:26:216 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234.
02:41:482 (4,5) - Make a better blanket for 5? Something like this or so.
03:15:743 (1) - This spinner doesn't seem to fit for me. Map it?
03:38:287 (1) - ^
Feels like a borderline insane.

Insane:
Eh maybe +1 OD.
00:06:867 (1) - Yea beginning kiai time again. Remove it please.
00:17:518 (x) - Add a note so stream ends at downbeat (big white tick)
Yeah, slider bodies have whistles. It'd be nice to remove them too.
01:15:033 (1) - orz copy paste combo. Have a little variation please.
01:26:216 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234.
02:52:311 (1) - Eh personally I would delete this whole section here and make a break to keep it consistent with the other diffs. It's copy paste combo, but it's up to you if you want to or not.
03:05:802 (1) - Copy paste combo. Variation please.
03:17:163 (1) - And now you just flipped it horizontally >_>
03:28:524 (1) - Now it's vertical.
03:39:885 (1) - And yea.
Try to come up with some new ideas!

Can't star because Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
So I'll kudos star.
Nice song.
Fix normal OR map easy.
KayeSara
KayeSara
As your mod4mod on my queue~
Time for modding~All of them just a suggestion.
[General]
  1. Delate the osb file if you don't need :)
  2. offset 1196
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:101 (7) - DS should be fix~
  2. 00:48:414 (1) - Spin from 00:48:414 to 00:51:610 maybe should be easier for beginner :)
  3. 00:59:775 (7) - remove and let the spinner from 00:59:775 to 01:02:971 ;)
  4. The finish in 01:10:071 (2) and 01:11:491 is a little long time :( Anyway, this is not a big problem, and I can't fix it, sorry. Same as 01:19:657 (9) and 01:21:432 (2)
  5. 01:14:687 (3) - add a clap
  6. 01:48:059 - add a clap
  7. 01:48:414 - remove the clap
  8. 01:48:769 - add a clap
  9. 01:49:124 - remove the clap (and so on, as you konw how to do that :) )
  10. 02:40:249 (1) - Too hard :( Especially for Normal (This the easiest difficulty in your map) I suggest you the spinner can let it from 02:38:829 to 02:40:249 and add finish in the end of the spinner
  11. 03:16:817 (3) - add a clap
  12. 03:22:497 - change the finish in clap~
  13. 03:39:539 (3) - clap ( :( I don't konw why you miss this clap)
    That's for Normal

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:110 (5) - change the way of this slider :) maybe feel better when playing
    Like this
  2. 00:08:642 (6) - New Combo
  3. 00:11:127 (1) - Remove New Combo
  4. 00:11:837 (4) - New Combo
  5. 00:13:080 (6,7,8) - Make it like this just for feeling well
    Example
  6. 01:03:672 - kiai time use the whistle...em..a little jarring :cry:
  7. 01:06:334 (3) - Remove (Just suit for your rhythm XD)
  8. 02:29:944 (5) - Change it like this~
    Example
    That's all~

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:305 (9) - New Combo
  2. 00:42:459 (8) - Remove
  3. 02:24:263 (1) - New Combo
  4. 02:35:624 (5) - ^
  5. Insane makes some repetitive structure...just change some, makes it better, a example 03:12:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
OK, that's all~ good luck ☆~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Thank you, i deleted an OSB.
Used tickrate 2x (just for normal). For colours i pass xD
SPOILER
Normal:
OD is too high. -3 OD please. -2 AR also.
I think SV is quite high. (Since you have no lower diff :L) Maybe tone it down to .80x? You will need to readjust all sliders though.
I don't really recommend starting the first note with a kiai time. Remove the timing section.
00:34:559 (5,6,7) - A tricky spacy on normal Don't do this. 5,6 are spaced correctly. 6,7 is spaced wrong and it will give the impression that is it 1/1 and not 1/2. Move 7 so that it is in the middle of 6,8.
00:40:950 (8) - Silent note Unrankable. The only thing you can silence are slider ends or spinner. Raise the volume to maybe 30%?
00:48:405 (1) - End your spinner here 00:51:601. It gives recovery time for beginners after a spinner to hit the next note.
01:00:121 (1) - ^ but end it at 01:02:962
01:15:033 (1) - Maybe add finish to slider beginning? Sounds empty when kiai starts again here.
01:25:329 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234.
01:51:956 (8) - Silent note. Raise to 30% at least
01:59:411 (1) - End it at 02:02:607 instead.
02:11:127 (1) - End it at 02:13:968 instead.
02:38:820 (1,1) - What?...Why would you even do this for a normal? Spinner then a note 1/2 beat later on a normal. >_> Remove note and extend spinner to where note was. Add finish on spinner.
02:50:181 (1) - Map up to here on normal for consistency in breaks.
03:02:252 (1) - Mhmm. Reduce spinner to 03:05:092
03:17:164 (1) - Finish on slider start.
03:25:684 (1) - Reduce spinner to 03:27:814
03:39:885 (1) - Finish on slider start.
03:50:181 (1) - Extend spinner to 03:54:086.

Finished. Why silent note are unrankable? D:
I think sv is ok.. if someone else tell me, i'll fix it. ty

Hard:
-1 OD +2 HP.
00:06:867 (1) - Don't like starting with kiai, remove timing section.
00:39:352 (1) - Touches HP bar. I recommend you move it lower. Just vertical flip 00:38:465 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) and you should be okay. Works surprisingly well lol.
01:05:447 (2) - Remove whistle sound from slider body. (Not end or beginning but the body itself)
01:16:630 (2,4) - ^
01:20:713 (5,8) - ^
01:23:553 (3) - ^ It's just me. It sounds way too loud and doesn't fit. Up to you to remove or not. There's actually quite a few more but I won't list them since I don't know if it's intentional. (Not all are intentional)
01:26:216 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234. (I don't like it :P, the same for normal diff)
02:41:482 (4,5) - Make a better blanket for 5? Something like this or so.
03:15:743 (1) - This spinner doesn't seem to fit for me. Map it? (nope D:)
03:38:287 (1) - ^
Feels like a borderline insane.

Insane:
Eh maybe +1 OD.
00:06:867 (1) - Yea beginning kiai time again. Remove it please.
00:17:518 (x) - Add a note so stream ends at downbeat (big white tick)
Yeah, slider bodies have whistles. It'd be nice to remove them too.
01:15:033 (1) - orz copy paste combo. Have a little variation please.
01:26:216 (1) - I would extend slider to here 01:29:234. (nope again xD)
02:52:311 (1) - Eh personally I would delete this whole section here and make a break to keep it consistent with the other diffs. It's copy paste combo, but it's up to you if you want to or not.
03:05:802 (1) - Copy paste combo. Variation please.
03:17:163 (1) - And now you just flipped it horizontally >_>
03:28:524 (1) - Now it's vertical.
03:39:885 (1) - And yea.
Try to come up with some new ideas!
I'll follow your advice next time, this is my first map ^^ Thanks again ~
Can't star because Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
So I'll kudos star.
Nice song.
Fix normal OR map easy.
Done, kudos and thank you ~

KayeSara wrote:

As your mod4mod on my queue~
Time for modding~All of them just a suggestion.
SPOILER
[General]
  1. Delate the osb file if you don't need :)
  2. offset 1196
(Why? D It's good lol)
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:101 (7) - DS should be fix~
  2. 00:48:414 (1) - Spin from 00:48:414 to 00:51:610 maybe should be easier for beginner :)
  3. 00:59:775 (7) - remove and let the spinner from 00:59:775 to 01:02:971 ;) (fixed)
  4. The finish in 01:10:071 (2) and 01:11:491 is a little long time :( Anyway, this is not a big problem, and I can't fix it, sorry. Same as 01:19:657 (9) and 01:21:432 (2) (Nah, i think it's ok)
  5. 01:14:687 (3) - add a clap
  6. 01:48:059 - add a clap
  7. 01:48:414 - remove the clap
  8. 01:48:769 - add a clap
  9. 01:49:124 - remove the clap (and so on, as you konw how to do that :) )
  10. 02:40:249 (1) - Too hard :( Especially for Normal (This the easiest difficulty in your map) I suggest you the spinner can let it from 02:38:829 to 02:40:249 and add finish in the end of the spinner
  11. 03:16:817 (3) - add a clap
  12. 03:22:497 - change the finish in clap~
  13. 03:39:539 (3) - clap ( :( I don't konw why you miss this clap) (Lol yes, idk :°D Thank you, fixed all hit sounds ~)
    That's for Normal

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:110 (5) - change the way of this slider :) maybe feel better when playing (I don't like xD)
    Like this
  2. 00:08:642 (6) - New Combo
  3. 00:11:127 (1) - Remove New Combo
  4. 00:11:837 (4) - New Combo
  5. 00:13:080 (6,7,8) - Make it like this just for feeling well
    Example
  6. 01:03:672 - kiai time use the whistle...em..a little jarring :cry:
  7. 01:06:334 (3) - Remove (Just suit for your rhythm XD)
  8. 02:29:944 (5) - Change it like this~
    Example
    That's all~

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:305 (9) - New Combo
  2. 00:42:459 (8) - Remove
  3. 02:24:263 (1) - New Combo
  4. 02:35:624 (5) - ^
  5. Insane makes some repetitive structure...just change some, makes it better, a example 03:12:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
OK, that's all~ good luck ☆~
Thanks for mod ~
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Use tickrate 2 for all diffs. Not just one. ._. Sooner or later someone else is gonna point that out for consistency.
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin
Done ~

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Ok.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Hi there

[General]
  1. RemoveShakugan No Shana Chewin from tag of [Hard] diff.
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:453 spinner - starts here seems better
  2. 00:51:246 spinner - ends here
  3. 01:29:234 KIAI ends here
  4. 02:02:429 spinner - ends here
  5. 02:14:323 spinner - ends here sounds nice, but it's not good for a normal diff. that a note appear after a spinner so quick, so now it's fine enough IMO
  6. 03:05:092 - Use only 1 spinner and ends here since it's the easiest diff., that should be more easy for a noobie player
  7. 03:54:086 - KIAI ends here
    Some hitsound suggestion blow
  8. 00:18:228 spinner - Use normal finish with 60% volume
  9. 00:52:311 (1) - Add finish
  10. 00:55:151 (5) - ^
  11. 00:57:991 (3) - ^
  12. 01:03:672 (1) - ^
  13. 01:19:648 (1) - Remove finish
  14. 01:49:115 (2) - Add finish
  15. 01:51:956 (8) - Add finish with 80% - 90% volume
  16. 02:03:317 (10 - Add finish
  17. 02:04:382 (1) - Add clap
  18. 02:06:157 (5) - Add finish
  19. 02:08:997 (3) - ^
  20. 02:10:772 (7) - Remove clap
  21. 02:26:039 (1) - Add finish
  22. 02:34:559 (1) - ^
  23. 02:57:281 (2) - ^
  24. 02:52:311, 02:53:731, 02:55:151, 02:56:571, 02:57:991 - Add whistle or clap with 50%-60% volume
  25. 03:05:802 (1) - Add finish
  26. 03:21:778 (9) - Remove finish, finish and custom clap mixed sounds bad
  27. 03:28:524 (1) - Add finish
  28. 03:44:500 (9) - Remove finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:547 (1) - Add finish
  2. 00:15:388 (4) - Add finish
  3. 00:36:689 (7) - Remove finish
  4. 00:38:110 (3) - Add finish
  5. 00:40:595 (3) - No clap or finish, remove one
  6. 00:52:311 (4) - Add finish
  7. 01:29:234 - KIAI ends here
  8. 01:49:116 (3) - Addfinish
  9. 01:51:956 (4) - ^
  10. 02:00:121 (5) - ^
  11. 02:01:897 (9) - ^
  12. 02:03:317 (5) - ^
  13. 02:08:997 (5) - ^
  14. 03:51:424 spinner - Ends here with soft finish (60% volume is fine)
  15. 03:54:086 (1) - Add finish
  16. 03:56:926 (1) - ^
  17. 03:59:766 (1) - ^
  18. 04:02:607 (1) - ^
  19. 04:02:252 (8) - Remove finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:867 (1) - Add finish
  2. 00:16:808 (5) - Remove finish
  3. 00:29:589 (1) - Add finish
  4. 00:35:624 (3-10) - Horrible lol, use soft hitsound with no clap is just fine, even though you wanna add clap, lower hitsound to 60% - 70% would be better
  5. 00:38:110 (3) - Add finish
  6. 00:40:950 (1) - ^
  7. 00:48:050 (12) - Remove finish
  8. 01:03:672 (1) - Use finish instead
  9. 01:29:234 - KIAU ends here
  10. 01:40:595 (1) - Add finish
  11. 01:46:630(3-10) - Same to 00:35:624 (3-10)
  12. 01:49:115 (2) - Add finish
  13. 02:00:477 (2) - ^
  14. 02:01:897 (1,5) - Add finish to 1, remove finish of 5
  15. 02:03:317 - Add finish
  16. 02:06:157 (1) - ^
  17. 02:26:039 (1) - ^
  18. 02:34:559 (1) - ^
Take what you like in my suggestion then do the change, just ignored what you dislike
nice map ;)
Chewin
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Yay thank you for the hitsounds mod, i really needed it xD
Kud ~
HakuNoKaemi
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[Kiai]
Ti consiglio di aggiungere il kiai da 00:06:867 a 00:18:228 o anche solo una fontana

[Normal]
Ti serve una difficoltà < 3,00 e questa è a 3,07 quindi... facciamola diventare meno di 3 :D
Modifichiamo anche il ritmo utilizzando meno 1/1 ed un ritmo più misto ( che segue anche la voce in parte )
Usa Combo più corte nelle Normal :3
00:08:642 (1) - New Combo
00:11:127 (5) - Sposta a 00:10:950
00:11:482 (6) - Cancella
00:11:837 (1) - New Combo
00:13:258 (5) - Cancella
00:13:613 (1) - New Combo
00:14:678 (3) - Cancella
00:15:033 (3) - New Combo
( difficoltà = 3,03 )
00:31:364 (4,5) - Sposta entrambi a 00:31:187
00:32:429 (1) - Fallo iniziare a 00:32:252 e allungalo fino al tick bianco
00:33:849 (4) - Fallo finire a 00:34:027
00:34:559 (5) - Sposta a 00:34:382
00:34:914 (6) - Sposta a 00:34:737
00:38:820 (4) - Sposta a 00:38:642
00:39:175 (5) - New Combo
00:40:950 (4) - Puoi mappare la parte dopo questo?
00:54:441 (4) - Cancella e metti un Hit Circle su 00:54:796 (x) con Clap e New Combo
00:56:571 (5) - Fallo Iniziare su 00:56:394 e allungalo fino al tick bianco
00:59:411 (6) - Puoi anche cancellarlo :3
01:05:092 (3) - Sposta a 01:04:914
01:05:447 (4) - New Combo
01:07:577 (4) - Accorcialo fino al tick rosso precendente
01:10:417 (3) - New Combo
01:11:837 (2) - ^
01:13:258 (5) - Sostituisci con questo
01:16:453 (4) - Cancella
01:16:808 (4) - New Combo
01:21:778 (3) - ^
01:23:198 (2) - ^
01:42:725 (5) - Sposta a 01:42:547
01:45:388 (5,6,7) - fai così
01:49:826 (4) - Sposta a 01:49:648
01:50:181 (1) - New Combo
01:51:956 (4) - Mappa la parte dopo?
02:04:737 (2) - Sposta a 02:04:559 (2)
02:05:092 (3,4) - Cancella e aggiungi hit su 02:05:802 (s) con New Combo e Clap
(phew, 2,99 di Difficoltà)
02:07:577 (5) - Sposta su 02:07:400 (5) e allunga fino al bianco
02:08:287 (1,2,3) - Sostituisci con un singolo slider che part da (1) e finisce in (3) con Finish alla fine <- facilitazione
dovrai applicarli insieme
SPOILER
03:05:803 (1) - Cancella
02:59:411 (1) - Spostalo su 02:59:944 e fallo finire su 03:05:803 con un Finish.
02:59:056 (x) - Aggiungi Circle
02:59:411 (x) - ^ con Whistle
è più facile ma è meglio :sisi:
03:07:578 (3) - New Combo
03:09:708 (4) - Accorcialo fino al tick rosso precendente
03:12:548 (3) - New Combo
03:13:968 (2) - ^
03:18:939 (5) - ^
03:17:873 (2) - Sposta su 03:17:695
03:18:939 (5) - New Combo
03:20:359 (4) - Un repeat meno e
03:21:246 (x) - Aggiungi hit circle qui
03:23:908 (3) - New Combo
03:29:234 (2) - Fallo iniziare da 03:29:056 (2) e allungalo fino al tick bianco
03:30:299 (4) - New Combo
03:32:429 (4) - Accorcialo fino al tick rosso precendente
03:35:269 (3) - New Combo
03:36:689 (2) - ^
03:39:885 (1) - Finish all'inizio
03:41:660 (5) - New Combo
03:46:630 (3) - ^
03:48:050 (2) - ^

Mi sa che la Hard la faccio nel prossimo :3

Spero li farai questi cambi :sisi: te la fanno diventare ritmicamente migliore e fanno diventare il set rankabile :3, non avevo pensate di aver scritto tanto XD...
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Chewin
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zomg grazie, ho modificato il 90% di quello che mi hai moddato :°D
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
[Hitsound]
Aumenta il volume degli hitsound durante il kiai.

[Hard]
A me piaceva di più con gli Hitsound Soft il kiai.
Ti sei dimenticato di utlizzare il Soft Finish in varie parti, e me ne sono accorto dopo un pò... all'inizio di 01:51:956 (4) - è un esempio di dove potresti metterlo
01:20:536 (4,5) - Sostituisci con questo e fai un Semi Whirlwind
01:23:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sistemali così in modo da non usare un overlap.
01:24:973 (1) - Metti un Finish alla fine
01:26:216 (1) - Allungalo fino a 01:29:234 e metti un Finish
01:41:837 (6) - Potresti considerarlo nazi, ma aggiusta il blanket, così
01:46:098 (2) - Fallo diventare un blanket così
02:07:044 (2,3,4,5,6) - Non è tanto facile da leggere ora come ora... priva a ordinarli così? ( puoì anche lasciare il salto, è sempre una hard...
02:35:092 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Allunga (8) fino al tick bianco mettendo un Finish alla fine e ordina così
02:38:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - più simmetrico è meglio, utilizza Ctrl +H o J per fare qualcosa del genere
da 02:40:950 (1) - a fine combo migliora le curvature 02:41:482 (4) - 02:42:370 (5) - [url]02:43:613 (8) -[/url]
02:45:210 (1) - Meno un repeat
02:46:453 (x) - Aggiungi Hit
02:46:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fallo diventà così :sisi:
03:03:672 (1) - Fallo finire su 03:05:802 ( cancellando l'hit già presente )
03:14:322 (3) - più curvato è meglio così
03:15:743 (1) - Allungalo fino a 03:17:163 (1) - ( e cancella il circle )
03:25:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fallo diventare così?
03:27:103 (1) - Finisce sempre in un punto diverso ... finiscilo a 03:28:524 (cancella la nota già presente)
03:37:044 (3,4,5) - Ordinali così?
03:38:287 (1) - Dovresti intuirlo Allungalo fino al prossimo tick bianco e cancella l'hit circle presente
03:48:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sistemali così
03:50:181 (1) - Finish alla fine

per il kiai al ritornello iniziale, mettilo per consistenza
Chewin
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Non ho modificato tutto specialmente gli ultimi pezzi, vanno bene come sono secondo me (:
Grazie ancora xD
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
non vuoi metterci amore nel farli diventare più precisi e nel fargli seguire meglio la musica?
SPOILER
Your message is too short. out of question.
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Chewin
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La musica la seguono comunque che sono slider lawl
Devo modificarne solo la forma, ma così imho vanno bene, poi vedo u.u

EDIT: Intendevi gli spinner modificati :°D
Shiro
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As per your request~

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game. :)

General
  1. Title should be "Hishoku no Sora" (n being uncapitalized). I'm also pretty sure this is the full version - in which case you have to add "(Full Ver.)" to the title. Here's a guide to help you change the title of your map without duplicating it.
  2. Since this is the opening of the anime, add "opening" to the tags of all difficulties.
Normal
  1. The comboing is quite inconsistent through the diff. For a Normal, I expected lots of 1/1 rhythms and some 1/2 and 2/1, so I expected something like a new combo every big white tick, but that's not I found and it felt quite weird to me. Usually, to know when to combo, I listen to the song, and add new combos where I think the phrase in the song changes, or when I switch from an instrument to another, etc... In this case, adding a new combo every new measure would be the best course of action, since you went for a "metronome diff", that is a diff that focuses on the basic 1/1 rhythm (the drums), so it should at least follow it. Basically, that would mean adding a new combo every big white tick (that is every fourth 1/1 tick) when you're following the drums. This diff actually needs a more complicated comboing due to the way it's mapped though... Some of the sliders prevent the comboing from being consistent. D: Come ask me in PM in-game for a full combo mod !
  2. Why didn't you switch to the Normal sampleset on kiai like in the other diffs ?
  3. 00:11:482 - Adding a note here with a clap would sound a lot better imo. Right now, the missing clap breaks the 1/1 rhythm and pattern you were using, and it would make more sense for the whole diff because it's focused on drums.
  4. 01:53:908 (3) - Why is this so far from the previous note when you've been following a rather strict spacing so far ? o.o
  5. 00:40:950 (1) - Due to the 30% timing section+the soft sampleset, this note can't be hear at all, which is a problem because all notes are supposed to give a sound, and not hearing anything from a note is disturbing. Also, it has the same "value" in the song as the other notes you mapped on, so why silence it (especially when you didn't silence 00:43:790 (1) - and 01:51:956 (1,1) - either) ?
  6. 00:48:405 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/2 so that it ends on the beginning of the vocals ? It will be more consistent with 01:59:411 (1) -
  7. 00:56:394 (5) - Missing clap on this slider's end.
  8. 01:13:258 (5) - Missing clap on this slider's beginning.
  9. 01:57:104 (4) - The break after this note is useless (and looks weird - the warning arrows appear even before hitting this slider)
  10. 02:05:092 - Here again and for the same reasons, I really think there should be a note with a clap here.
  11. 02:34:914 (2,3,4) - This is quite nazi of me but it caught me eye while playing... Space them evenly ?
  12. 02:38:820 (1) - To make it longer (thus less difficult) and fit the song better, I think this spinner should start 1/1 after the previous note - that is, at 02:37:755 -
  13. 03:20:359 (4) - Missing claps on the first and last beat of this slider...
  14. 03:21:779 (6) - ... and on this.
Hard
  1. HUGE gap in difficulty and score compared to Normal. To make the spread (a lot) better, this needs to be easier. To acheive that you'll need to remove some (lots) of the added 1/2 beats. Right now, Hard and Insane are pretty much the same diff with different settings and patterns. :/
  2. The second break isn't the same as in Normal (and Insane) - for consistency, make them the same. :/
  3. Stack leniency is really low... I'd greatly dvice to make it higher.
  4. 01:15:210 (1) - and 03:17:340 (1) - and 03:28:524 (1) - and 03:40:062 (1) - all come way too soon after the spinner. It's all the more confusing because they're very far from the center of the screen, and some players judge the spacing starting from it, and you used very similar placement between them for beats 1/1 after spinners.
  5. 02:00:121 (5) - Missing clap on the first beat.
  6. 03:09:707 (6) - Why does this slider have a whistle ? o.o It was quite surprising knowing you never used any whistle in the whole diff.
Insane
  • The only problem I have with this is the added 1/4 which absolutely doesn't fit. Also, the stack leniency is extremely low, I think it'd be better to make it higher.
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
[General]
Your Stack Leniency is 2. It's recommended to be at least 3.

[Normal]
01:15:033 (4) - No new combo?
02:55:861 (8) - New combo
02:56:571 (1) - Remove new combo

ok your combos confuse me
but it's ok ok ok! not really!

but moe!!
[Hard]
Hnnng I can't ever mod these diffs.

THREE POINTED SLIDERS AAAH
[Insane]
00:50:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spaced wrong... lol

ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ Ok it's fine...
Chewin
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Odaril wrote:

As per your request~

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game. :)

General
  1. Title should be "Hishoku no Sora" (n being uncapitalized). Done ~

    I'm also pretty sure this is the full version - in which case you have to add "(Full Ver.)" to the title. Here's a guide to help you change the title of your map without duplicating it.
  2. Since this is the opening of the anime, add "opening" to the tags of all difficulties. Done ~


Normal
  1. The comboing is quite inconsistent through the diff. For a Normal, I expected lots of 1/1 rhythms and some 1/2 and 2/1, so I expected something like a new combo every big white tick, but that's not I found and it felt quite weird to me. Usually, to know when to combo, I listen to the song, and add new combos where I think the phrase in the song changes, or when I switch from an instrument to another, etc... In this case, adding a new combo every new measure would be the best course of action, since you went for a "metronome diff", that is a diff that focuses on the basic 1/1 rhythm (the drums), so it should at least follow it. Basically, that would mean adding a new combo every big white tick (that is every fourth 1/1 tick) when you're following the drums. This diff actually needs a more complicated comboing due to the way it's mapped though... Some of the sliders prevent the comboing from being consistent. D: Come ask me in PM in-game for a full combo mod !
  2. Why didn't you switch to the Normal sampleset on kiai like in the other diffs ? It's ok now i think..
  3. 00:11:482 - Adding a note here with a clap would sound a lot better imo. Right now, the missing clap breaks the 1/1 rhythm and pattern you were using, and it would make more sense for the whole diff because it's focused on drums. Fixed.
  4. 01:53:908 (3) - Why is this so far from the previous note when you've been following a rather strict spacing so far ? o.o Fixed.
  5. 00:40:950 (1) - Due to the 30% timing section+the soft sampleset, this note can't be hear at all, which is a problem because all notes are supposed to give a sound, and not hearing anything from a note is disturbing. Also, it has the same "value" in the song as the other notes you mapped on, so why silence it (especially when you didn't silence 00:43:790 (1) - and 01:51:956 (1,1) - either) ? Fixed.
  6. 00:48:405 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/2 so that it ends on the beginning of the vocals ? It will be more consistent with 01:59:411 (1) - Fixed.
  7. 00:56:394 (5) - Missing clap on this slider's end. Fixed.
  8. 01:13:258 (5) - Missing clap on this slider's beginning. Fixed.
  9. 01:57:104 (4) - The break after this note is useless (and looks weird - the warning arrows appear even before hitting this slider) Fixed.
  10. 02:05:092 - Here again and for the same reasons, I really think there should be a note with a clap here. Fixed.
  11. 02:34:914 (2,3,4) - This is quite nazi of me but it caught me eye while playing... Space them evenly ? Fixed.
  12. 02:38:820 (1) - To make it longer (thus less difficult) and fit the song better, I think this spinner should start 1/1 after the previous note - that is, at 02:37:755 - Fixed.
  13. 03:20:359 (4) - Missing claps on the first and last beat of this slider... Fixed.
  14. 03:21:779 (6) - ... and on this. Fixed.
Hard
  1. HUGE gap in difficulty and score compared to Normal. To make the spread (a lot) better, this needs to be easier. To acheive that you'll need to remove some (lots) of the added 1/2 beats. Right now, Hard and Insane are pretty much the same diff with different settings and patterns. :/ I revised the map, update and tell me if it's good now. Pratically i re-done the map :°D
  2. The second break isn't the same as in Normal (and Insane) - for consistency, make them the same. :/ Fixed.
  3. Stack leniency is really low... I'd greatly dvice to make it higher. 7 Now.
  4. 01:15:210 (1) - and 03:17:340 (1) - and 03:28:524 (1) - and 03:40:062 (1) - all come way too soon after the spinner. It's all the more confusing because they're very far from the center of the screen, and some players judge the spacing starting from it, and you used very similar placement between them for beats 1/1 after spinners. Fixed.
  5. 02:00:121 (5) - Missing clap on the first beat. Fixed.
  6. 03:09:707 (6) - Why does this slider have a whistle ? o.o It was quite surprising knowing you never used any whistle in the whole diff. lol forgot it, before i used the whistle. Fixed.
Insane
  • The only problem I have with this is the added 1/4 which absolutely doesn't fit. Why? You mean 1:49:471 (4) - 1:49:648 (6) for example?

    Also, the stack leniency is extremely low, I think it'd be better to make it higher. Fixed. 8 Now.
Chewin
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OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Insane]
00:50:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spaced wrong... lol

ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ Ok it's fine...
Wee ozzy *w*
Fixed this lol

I changed many parts in the hard diff.. (Mod it now if you want xD)

I'll fix Combo of the normal diff tomorrow ~
Shiro
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Shiro
(very big) help for comboing Normal in-game. The map needs some more polishing before getting a bubble though - get some more mods !

in-game mod log
19:51 <Chewin> : yo 666 ranked! xD hi odaril
19:51 <Odaril> : hi
19:51 <Chewin> : Odaril*
19:51 <Chewin> : lawl
19:51 <Chewin> : i fixed all of my map (but not combo in nomal diff)
19:52 <Chewin> : can you help me with it? when you want/can ;D
19:52 <Odaril> : okay
19:53 <Chewin> : ty *-* best mat evah
19:53 <Chewin> : xD
19:53 <Odaril> : huh no
19:53 <Odaril> : Oh...
19:53 <Odaril> : np your map
19:53 <Odaril> : I have to redownload
19:53 <Chewin> : yeah i changed title xD
19:54 <Chewin> : anyways i have an answer (i'm not expert in mapping field)
19:54 <Odaril> : (link your map D:)
19:54 <Chewin> : sorry http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34853
19:54 <Chewin> : xD
19:55 <Chewin> : what have I do for have my map bubbled?
19:55 <Odaril> : Ask MATs and BATs for mods.
19:55 <Odaril> : If your map is ready, they will bubble it.
19:55 <Odaril> : Okay, let's start.
19:55 <Chewin> : i have re-make the hard diff
19:55 <Chewin> : yeah
19:56 <Chewin> : i'm ready lawl
19:56 <Odaril> : Do you have in mind that huge block of text I wrote ?
19:56 <Chewin> : yes
19:56 <Chewin> : of normal diff?
19:56 <Odaril> : yes
19:57 <Chewin> : mh i don't remember good now
19:57 <Odaril> : Okay
19:57 <Chewin> : what should i do?
19:57 <Chewin> : only combos?
19:57 <Odaril> : I'll just list a bunch of comboing errors
19:57 <Odaril> : And parts when the slider placement breaks the comboing
19:57 <Odaril> : If you need explanations, don't be afraid to ask
19:57 <Odaril> : The point is that you understand how to do that comboing
19:57 <Chewin> : aw thanks <3
19:58 <Chewin> : yes
19:58 <Odaril> : 00:08:287 (3,1) - swap new combos
19:58 <Odaril> : 00:09:707 (3) - new combo
19:59 <Chewin> : you can write i'm doing it xD
19:59 <Odaril> : then
19:59 <Odaril> : explain why I told you to do that comboing
20:00 <Chewin> : because it's a normal? xD
20:00 *Odaril sighs
20:00 <Odaril> : This is going to be hard
20:00 <Odaril> : Do you understand why I suggested these two changes ?
20:01 <Chewin> : nope..
20:01 <Odaril> : Why didn't you ask
20:01 *Odaril axes Chewin dead*
20:01 <Odaril> : >:(
20:01 <Chewin> : sorry ._.
20:01 <Chewin> : i didn't to bother you again..
20:02 <Odaril> : D:
20:02 <Odaril> : no
20:02 <Chewin> : then explain me.. xD
20:03 <Odaril> : In this case, adding a new combo every new measure would be the best course of action, since you went for a "metronome diff", that is a diff that focuses
20:03 <Odaril> : on the basic 1/1 rhythm (the drums), so it should at least follow it.
20:03 <Odaril> : 00:08:287 - There's a big white tick here - that is a new measure
20:04 <Odaril> : 00:09:707 - same
20:04 <Chewin> : aaah
20:04 <Chewin> : okay then
20:05 <Chewin> : 00:33:849 here then
20:05 <Odaril> : but the map has... weird mapping, somehow
20:06 <Odaril> : which makes the comboing difficult
20:06 <Odaril> : which is why I asked you to come to PM
20:06 <Chewin> : then what would i do now?..
20:07 <Odaril> : I'm going to help you with that
20:07 <Odaril> : keep in mind I'm only suggesting things
20:07 <Odaril> : you can refuse
20:07 <Chewin> : you're a mat i prefer to do things xD
20:07 <Chewin> : i'm noob in mapping, i'm at beginning..
20:07 <Odaril> : That's why I'm helping !
20:08 <Odaril> : I was a noob when I started, too !
20:08 <Chewin> : We were all noobs :°D
20:08 <Chewin> : anywayz thanks again
20:08 <Odaril> : 00:10:417 (3,4) - you suddenly switch to the vocals here
20:09 <Chewin> : yes
20:10 <Odaril> : so
20:10 <Odaril> : 00:11:482 (1,2) - switch the new combo
20:10 <Odaril> : s
20:10 <Odaril> : that way
20:10 <Odaril> : 00:09:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - will be the drums
20:10 <Odaril> : And after it, the comboing will follow the vocals
20:10 <Chewin> : ww..wait
20:11 <Chewin> : i don't understand.. in 00:10:417 i have to do new combo?
20:11 <Odaril> : no
20:12 <Odaril> : currently the new combo is on 00:11:482 - right
20:12 <Chewin> : okkè
20:13 <Chewin> : 00:11:837 new combo here too?
20:13 <Chewin> : vocal starts
20:13 <Odaril> : yes
20:13 <Odaril> : and remove the previous one
20:14 <Chewin> : which
20:14 <Odaril> : On the note 1/1 before
20:14 <Chewin> : 00:11_482?
20:14 <Chewin> : remove new combo or the beat? o.o
20:14 <Odaril> : the new combo
20:14 <Chewin> : then ok
20:14 <Chewin> : 1-2-3-4-5 and 1-2-3-4
20:15 <Odaril> : yes
20:15 <Odaril> : 00:34:737 (6) - Then add a new combo here
20:15 <Chewin> : done
20:15 <Odaril> : do you understand why
20:16 <Chewin> : mh yes
20:16 <Odaril> : why ?
20:16 <Chewin> : it's hard to explain rofl, because "new" vocals
20:16 <Odaril> : Yes
20:16 <Odaril> : exactly !
20:16 <Odaril> : good
20:17 <Chewin> : yea
20:17 <Odaril> : Then try guessing what the next new combo is !
20:17 <Chewin> : okay
20:17 <Chewin> : 00:46:098
20:18 <Odaril> : yep !
20:18 <Chewin> : aww
20:18 <Odaril> : nice
20:18 <Odaril> : Then ?
20:19 <Chewin> : maybe, i'm not sure 00:56:216?
20:19 <Odaril> : no !
20:19 <Odaril> : D:
20:19 <Chewin> : efyebwfpewib *rage*
20:19 <Odaril> : The vocals are stll in the same sentence
20:19 <Odaril> : 01:08:287 (5) - this
20:19 <Odaril> : 01:08:642 (1) - and remove this
20:19 <Chewin> : i said "i'm not sure" u.u
20:20 <Chewin> : done
20:20 <Odaril> : 01:03:672 (1,2,3) - for symmetry with this
20:20 <Chewin> : 01:10:417
20:20 <Odaril> : not exactly
20:20 <Odaril> : this is a tricky part
20:21 <Odaril> : The sliders here prevent the comboing from working
20:21 <Chewin> : mh
20:22 <Odaril> : This part can be considered fine though
20:22 <Chewin> : yes
20:23 <Odaril> : 01:13:968 (6) - missing clap btw
20:23 <Chewin> : 01:45:743 here?
20:23 *Chewin runs away
20:23 <Chewin> : added
20:23 <Odaril> : you missed one !
20:23 <Odaril> : actually, it's fine
20:24 <Chewin> : 01:57:104
20:24 <Odaril> : 01:45:743 (6) - yes, this one !
20:24 <Chewin> : done
20:24 <Odaril> : 01:57:104 (4) - this too
20:24 <Chewin> : yes
20:25 <Odaril> : next one ?
20:25 <Chewin> : 02:09:352?
20:25 <Chewin> : there is a "new rythm"
20:25 <Odaril> : hm, no
20:25 <Chewin> : <.<
20:25 <Chewin> : i'm trying.. xD
20:25 <Odaril> : your previous pattern (before the first kiai) prevent a combo here, so don't add this one
20:25 <Odaril> : haha
20:26 <Odaril> : it's important to make mistakes :o
20:26 <Odaril> : Next one ?
20:26 <Chewin> : yea wait
20:27 <Chewin> : 02:16:453? /run
20:27 <Odaril> : almost
20:28 <Odaril> : previous note
20:28 <Chewin> : ah no
20:28 <Odaril> : Why did you want to add it there ?
20:28 <Chewin> : 02:16:098*
20:28 <Chewin> : ehm change of sound
20:28 <Odaril> : you went for 1/1 rhythms there, so follow the drum comboing :o
20:29 <Chewin> : then no new combo at (3)?
20:29 <Odaril> : yes
20:29 *Chewin kill himself
20:29 <Odaril> : why would you kill yourself D:
20:30 <Chewin> : because i'm bothering you, and not a bit.. xD
20:30 <Chewin> : thanks for your time Odaril <.<
20:30 <Odaril> : you aren't
20:30 <Odaril> : o_O
20:30 <Chewin> : ehm ok i'm this kind of person xD
20:30 <Chewin> : i think i bother people when they do something for me xD
20:30 <Odaril> : Don't worry haha
20:31 <Odaril> : I used to think the same way >.>
20:31 <Chewin> : lawl <.<
20:31 <Odaril> : alright, next one ?
20:31 <Chewin> : i'm searching u.u
20:32 <Chewin> : 02:24:264
20:32 <Odaril> : There's one before :o
20:32 <Chewin> : wait
20:33 <Chewin> : idk <.< maybe 02:21:423
20:34 <Odaril> : 02:18:938 (4) -
20:34 <Chewin> : at 02:21:423 too then o.o
20:35 <Odaril> : o.o why there ?
20:35 <Odaril> : the big white tick is on 02:21:778 (4) -
20:35 <Chewin> : for the same of 02:18:938? <.<
20:35 <Chewin> : ah yes S:
20:35 <Chewin> : i forgot it xD
20:36 <Chewin> : then it can be new combo at 02:21:778?
20:36 <Odaril> : 02:21:778 (4) - this is a case when the slider prevents the comboing
20:36 <Odaril> : yes
20:36 <Chewin> : (how can i do for write the note in the chat lol)
20:36 <Odaril> : click the note
20:36 <Odaril> : then ctrl+c
20:36 <Odaril> : and ctrl+v in chat
20:36 <Chewin> : aah ok ty xD
20:36 <Chewin> : oke
20:37 <Odaril> : 02:24:263 (4) - add a new combo on this - this slider could be mapped on the sudden... huh, instrument
20:37 <Chewin> : but i could be obtuse
20:37 <Chewin> : but i think here02:16:098 (3) - maybe new combo
20:38 <Chewin> : big white tick too
20:38 <Odaril> : yes
20:38 <Chewin> : then new combo?
20:39 <Chewin> : 02:27:459 (4) -
20:39 <Chewin> : 02:30:299 (4) -
20:39 <Odaril> : yes and yes
20:39 <Odaril> : 02:24:263 - did you add this one
20:39 <Chewin> : yea
20:40 <Chewin> : i wrote it before than you u.u
20:40 <Chewin> : 02:33:139 (5) - ?
20:40 <Odaril> : yes
20:40 <Chewin> : i'm not sure maybe here 02:36:689 (5) -
20:40 <Odaril> : not here
20:41 <Odaril> : 02:35:624 (4) - on this one
20:41 <Chewin> : true.. xD
20:41 <Odaril> : 02:37:400 (7) - and this too
20:41 <Chewin> : done
20:41 <Chewin> : i thought it too xD
20:42 <Chewin> : 02:55:506 (7) - ?
20:42 <Odaril> : 02:54:441 (5) - this
20:43 <Chewin> : 02:55:861 (4) - here too?
20:43 <Odaril> : yes
20:43 <Odaril> : then
20:43 <Odaril> : 02:56:926 (2) - you'll need to change this
20:44 <Chewin> : because the white tick is in the slider?
20:44 <Odaril> : yes
20:45 <Chewin> : then then
20:45 <Chewin> : 02:56:571 (1) - no new combo here
20:45 <Chewin> : and add a new combo here 02:57:281 -
20:45 <Odaril> : yes
20:46 <Chewin> : 02:58:701 (4) -
20:47 <Odaril> : yes
20:48 <Chewin> : help me with the spinner 02:59:944 (1) -
20:48 <Chewin> : where i can finish it?
20:48 <Chewin> : when*
20:49 <Chewin> : and it's betted if i start it on big white tick?
20:49 <Odaril> : 03:04:914 - try finishing it here
20:50 <Chewin> : 03:00:121 (1) - here it's better imho
20:50 <Odaril> : no
20:50 <Odaril> : you'd make it go through the kiai
20:50 <Odaril> : and it would be inconsistent with the first kiai
20:50 <Chewin> : yes i know
20:51 <Chewin> : 03:05:802 - add a note here?
20:52 <Chewin> : aw i think the sounds in the kiai time isn't the same of the hard and insane
20:52 <Chewin> : i have to change with normal custom and not soft
20:53 <Odaril> : Did you read all my mod post ? D:
20:53 <Chewin> : lol i haven't read it sorry
20:54 <Odaril> : >:(
20:54 <Chewin> : forgive me..
20:54 <Odaril> : NEVER
20:54 <Odaril> : AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
20:54 <Chewin> : sigh
20:54 <Odaril> : *evil face*
20:54 <Chewin> : *OKAY FACE*
20:54 <Odaril> : hm...
20:54 <Odaril> : update your diff
20:54 <Odaril> : so I can update it too
20:54 <Chewin> : wait i'm fixing kiai
20:56 <Chewin> : with combos is ok?
20:57 <Odaril> : not exactly
20:57 <Chewin> : submitted
20:57 <Odaril> : I need the update to keep on going
20:57 <Chewin> : done
20:57 <Chewin> : can you see the hard too after?
20:57 <Odaril> : whoops
20:57 <Odaril> : of course
20:57 <Odaril> : 03:00:121 (1) - extend by 1/2 ><
20:57 <Chewin> : really? *-*
20:58 <Odaril> : I misheard
20:58 <Chewin> : mh 1/2? you mean 03:05:092 - ?
20:58 <Odaril> : yes
20:58 <Chewin> : done xD
20:59 <Chewin> : updated again
20:59 <Odaril> : hm...
20:59 <Odaril> : 03:00:121 (1) - replace this with a repeat slider + a circle
20:59 <Odaril> : so that the comboing is consistent
20:59 <Chewin> : ehm 3,03 stars.. D:
21:00 <Odaril> : Don't worry
21:00 <Odaril> : it plays like a Normal
21:03 <Chewin> : http://puu.sh/4xXt so?
21:04 <Odaril> : oups
21:04 <Odaril> : I didn't link the right thing
21:04 <Odaril> : 03:07:577 (1) - I meant this
21:04 <Chewin> : ewbfiupewfb
21:04 <Odaril> : god
21:04 <Chewin> : rotfl
21:04 <Odaril> : I'm too tired
21:04 <Chewin> : naaah don't sorry <33
21:05 <Chewin> : and new combo?
21:05 <Odaril> : 03:07:223 (4) -
21:05 <Odaril> : 03:08:642 -
21:05 <Odaril> : 03:15:389 (5) -
21:05 <Odaril> : 03:20:004 (3) -
21:06 <Chewin> : just a second
21:06 <Chewin> : i'm fixing the space without the repeat of the slider
21:06 <Odaril> : 03:28:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - you can recombo this yourself now too :p
21:07 <Chewin> : okay done with the spacing
21:07 <Chewin> : now the combos
21:08 <Chewin> : 03:29:944 (3) - new combo here
21:08 <Chewin> : 03:30:299 (1) - no new combo here
21:08 <Odaril> : Just do it, then update
21:08 <Odaril> : :o
21:08 <Chewin> : okay
21:08 <Odaril> : I'm busy denying kudo
21:08 <Chewin> : waa oka
21:18 <Chewin> : finished!
21:19 <Odaril> : comboing is still meh in the last section
21:19 <Odaril> : because of sliders
21:19 <Chewin> : for example?
21:19 <Odaril> : 03:44:855 (1,1) -
21:20 <Chewin> : yes now i fix xD
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin
Thanks for your time Odaril >.<

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
akrolsmir
606 posts
Joined November 2010
akrolsmir
Can't wait for Shana S3. Meanwhile:

AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.
[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 116,72,230
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,146,47
Combo4 : 255,251,74

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 117,44,252
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,142,17
Combo4 : 255,250,51

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 117,44,252
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,142,17
Combo4 : 255,250,51

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:14:855
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:17:163, ends on 02:17:340
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:985
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:28:346
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:39:885
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:40:062, ends on 03:54:086

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:13:968
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:098
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:28:169
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:38:820
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:39:885, ends on 03:54:086

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:06:867, ends on 00:06:956
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:13:968
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:098
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:27:814
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:38:820
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:39:885, ends on 03:54:086


[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
03:05:902

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:40:062, ends on 03:54:086


[Difficulty: Insane]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:43:786
01:51:701
Holy cow that is a lot of kiai times. I understand that most of them are to be used for fountain toggles, which I don't mind, but try and get them consistent. Also, make all the combo colors consistent; there's no reason to have differing ones here.

Normal:
00:08:642 (2) - Throughout the map you have sliders that are angled like this, with 3 points forming an "L" for a quarter-circle. This shape does work, and will be symmetric, but it also turns out kind of angular- for a more smooth curve try using 4 or 5 points:

00:10:950 (4) - Make it aligned with (3), or hide it under?
00:32:252 (1) - Start this 1/2 beat later, on the long white tick b/c that's where the emphasis is, despite the vocals.
00:56:394 (5) - I don't like this shape- asymmetric and seems purposeless
01:04:914 (3) - I don't see why you need a circle here, move 1/2 beat back to long white tick?
01:13:968 (6) - Make collinear with (5)?
02:57:281 (1,2) - Space farther apart, please

Definitely replace all the "L" curves like 00:08:642 (2). You can even work on just one perfect one and copy+paste+rotate for all the others. Other than that, I thought this difficulty wasn't bad, and I liked how almost all the sliders were deliciously symmetric!

Hard:
00:08:642 (1) - This is similar to those L-curves I was talking about earlier- try forming with more points for better arc.
00:10:595 (3) -^, also move 1 grid right.

In general, try to establish a consistent spacing between sliderpaths. For example, 00:13:613 (1,2) - looks close, while 00:15:388 (3,4) - looks spaced farther apart.

00:32:074- Add a note?
00:49:471 (2,3,4) - Leaving aside the fact that (2) is a little misshapen, the fact that (3,4) stacks looks okay in editor but like this while playing:
SPOILER
completely eliminating the wrap effect and just making it look ugly-overlapping. Consider moving (3,4) in reference to this.
02:00:477 (2,3,4,5) - ^, seeing as it's a copy of the above.
02:30:299 (6) - Asymmetric

In here, the sliders weren't as neat as the last diff. I noticed a lot of copy-pasting, which is good for individual sliders but generally discouraged for whole patterns. I really enjoyed some of the patterns here, though, like 00:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Insane:
00:16:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I disliked this stream since it seems like overmapping (plus I can't stream it just by moving my mouse in 1 straight path, maybe reduce the amount of zig-zag?)
02:21:068 (4,5) - Kind of like in Hard, the stacking makes the spacing in here a lot larger than it seems in Editor.

I liked how you managed to use some sliders bent at sharp angles intermixed with normal ones on this map; it but rarely seemed out of place.

Good map, you're doing a lot of things right for a more novice mapper, keep it up!
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin

akrolsmir wrote:

Can't wait for Shana S3. Meanwhile:

AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.
[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 116,72,230
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,146,47
Combo4 : 255,251,74

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 117,44,252
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,142,17
Combo4 : 255,250,51

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 117,44,252
Combo2 : 244,0,6
Combo3 : 255,142,17
Combo4 : 255,250,51

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:14:855
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:17:163, ends on 02:17:340
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:985
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:28:346
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:39:885
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:40:062, ends on 03:54:086

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:13:968
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:098
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:28:169
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:38:820
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:39:885, ends on 03:54:086

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:06:867, ends on 00:06:956
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:03:672, ends on 01:13:968
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:15:033, ends on 01:29:234
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:40:240, ends on 02:40:329
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:05:802, ends on 03:16:098
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:17:163, ends on 03:27:814
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:28:524, ends on 03:38:820
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:39:885, ends on 03:54:086


[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
03:05:902

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #8: Starts on 03:40:062, ends on 03:54:086


[Difficulty: Insane]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:43:786
01:51:701
Holy cow that is a lot of kiai times. I understand that most of them are to be used for fountain toggles, which I don't mind, but try and get them consistent. Also, make all the combo colors consistent; there's no reason to have differing ones here.

Normal:
00:08:642 (2) - Throughout the map you have sliders that are angled like this, with 3 points forming an "L" for a quarter-circle. This shape does work, and will be symmetric, but it also turns out kind of angular- for a more smooth curve try using 4 or 5 points:
I know, but they are 1/2 and i think that they are symmetric now :)
00:10:950 (4) - Make it aligned with (3), or hide it under? (Mh, i modified the position, i don't like aligned with (3) or hide it D:)
00:32:252 (1) - Start this 1/2 beat later, on the long white tick b/c that's where the emphasis is, despite the vocals. Fixed
00:56:394 (5) - I don't like this shape- asymmetric and seems purposeless Yeah. fixed :D
01:04:914 (3) - I don't see why you need a circle here, move 1/2 beat back to long white tick? Fixed.
01:13:968 (6) - Make collinear with (5)? Nah :\
02:57:281 (1,2) - Space farther apart, please Fixed with distance snap.

Definitely replace all the "L" curves like 00:08:642 (2). You can even work on just one perfect one and copy+paste+rotate for all the others. Other than that, I thought this difficulty wasn't bad, and I liked how almost all the sliders were deliciously symmetric! (Read above^)

Hard:
00:08:642 (1) - This is similar to those L-curves I was talking about earlier- try forming with more points for better arc. Fixed.
00:10:595 (3) -^, also move 1 grid right.

In general, try to establish a consistent spacing between sliderpaths. For example, 00:13:613 (1,2) - looks close, while 00:15:388 (3,4) - looks spaced farther apart. I think it's ok :\

00:32:074- Add a note? Done
00:49:471 (2,3,4) - Leaving aside the fact that (2) is a little misshapen, the fact that (3,4) stacks looks okay in editor but like this while playing: Fixed >.<
SPOILER
completely eliminating the wrap effect and just making it look ugly-overlapping. Consider moving (3,4) in reference to this.
02:00:477 (2,3,4,5) - ^, seeing as it's a copy of the above. Fixed.
02:30:299 (6) - Asymmetric Fixed.

In here, the sliders weren't as neat as the last diff. I noticed a lot of copy-pasting, which is good for individual sliders but generally discouraged for whole patterns. I really enjoyed some of the patterns here, though, like 00:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Insane:
00:16:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I disliked this stream since it seems like overmapping (plus I can't stream it just by moving my mouse in 1 straight path, maybe reduce the amount of zig-zag?) Okay see now xD
02:21:068 (4,5) - Kind of like in Hard, the stacking makes the spacing in here a lot larger than it seems in Editor. Yes D: And fixed.

I liked how you managed to use some sliders bent at sharp angles intermixed with normal ones on this map; it but rarely seemed out of place.

Good map, you're doing a lot of things right for a more novice mapper, keep it up!
Thank you very much *-*
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hello~ :3

Normal
  1. HP Drain +2
00:06:867 (1) - i suggest, delete this KIAI time~
00:12:902 (4) - down+right 5 grid? x:336 y:240
00:35:269 (3) - change to a slider end at 00:35:979?
00:43:790 (1) - make it more beautiful~
00:46:098 (1) - change to a 1/2 repeating slider?
00:48:405 (1) - this spinner end at 00:51:246 - ?
01:45:388 (5) - delete this circle?
01:59:411 (1) - spinner end at 02:02:252 - ?
02:04:559 (3) - delete it
02:10:772 (7) - delete it, and the next spinner start at here?
02:33:139 (1) - delete New Combo
02:37:400 (1) - ^
02:40:240 - delete this KIAI Time = =
03:17:695 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider do a repeat.

Hard
00:06:867 (1) - same as NORMAL, delete this kiai time
00:10:595 (3) - delete it, and 00:10:772 - add a Circle?
00:33:849 (7) - why dont start the New Combo at here?
00:42:370 (6) - add a New Combo
00:45:210 (6) - ^
00:53:376 (5) - ^
01:06:512 (4) - ^
01:15:033 (4) - ^
01:17:873 (4) - ^
01:24:973 (1) - delete this spinner, at 01:25:329 - add a slider and do three of 1/2 repeating? or add 5 circle at there
01:41:837 (6) - add a New Combo
01:44:855 (6) - ^
01:50:713 (5) - ^
01:57:991 (4) - are you forgot to add a clap??
02:00:477 (2) - at beginning add a finish
02:04:382 (5) - add a New Combo
02:04:559 (6) - add a finish
02:05:802 (1) - at the repeating add a finish
02:07:400 (4) - add a finish
02:08:997 (4) - ^
02:19:115 (7) - add a New Combo
02:19:826 (x) - add a circle?
02:21:423 (4) - add a New Combo?
02:25:329 (5) - ^
02:26:039 (1) - at beginning add a finish
02:27:636 (7) - add a New Combo
02:29:944 (4) - ^
02:34:559 (1) - at beginning add a finish
02:40:240 (5) - delete this small KIAI time = =
02:48:050 (7) - add a New Combo
03:20:891 (5) - ^
03:32:252 (5) - ^
03:39:885 (4) - ^
03:43:613 (5) - ^
03:50:181 (1) - delete this spinner, at 03:50:181 add a slider to 03:50:358, then at 03:50:536 to 03:50:713 and do a 1/2 repeating.
03:51:424 (1) - start at 03:51:246 - ?

Insane
00:06:867 (1) - same as NORMAL, delete this small KIAI time = =
00:10:772 (7) - add a New Combo
00:15:033 (7) - ^
00:30:831 (7,8) - left 1 grid? x:352 y:264
00:33:849 (7) - add a New Combo
00:35:624 (3) - ^
00:36:334 (7) - ^
00:43:258 (11) - ^
00:45:210 (6) - ^
00:46:985 (4) - ^
00:50:003 (6) - ^
00:54:796 (1) - at the repeating add a finish
00:56:394 (4) - at beginning add a finish
00:57:814 (4) - ^
00:58:701 (6) - add a New Combo
01:00:831 (3) - ^
01:01:897 (14) - ^
01:07:400 (4) - ^
01:11:837 (6) - ^
01:13:080 (1) - too short of this spinner, maybe change to a slider is better then spinner?
01:20:891 (5) - add a New Combo
01:23:198 (6) - ^
01:25:151 (1) - same as 'HARD"
01:26:216 (1) - end at 01:29:234
01:44:678 (7) - add a New Combo
01:46:630 (3) - ^
01:47:340 (7) - ^
01:53:198 (6) - ^
01:56:216 (6) - ^
01:57:991 (4) - ^
02:03:139 (3) - down + right 3 grid? x:480 y:288
02:03:317 (4) - down+right 1 grid? x:416 y:240
02:09:707 (6) - add a New Combo
02:11:837 (3) - ^
02:12:903 (14) - ^
02:13:258 (1) - change to a slider
02:36:690 (4) - add a new Combo
02:40:240 (5) - delete this small KIAI time - -
02:43:080 (7) - add a New Combo
02:47:340 (5) - add a finish
02:54:441 (7) - add a New Combo
02:58:701 (5) - add a finish
02:59:411 (7) - add a New Combo
03:00:121 (1) - end at 03:01:897 - ?
03:11:660 (5) - add a New Combo
03:13:967 (6) - ^
03:15:210 (1) - change to a slider
03:23:021 (5) - add a new Combo
03:25:328 (6) - ^
03:34:382 (5) - ^
03:36:689 (6) - ^
03:37:932 (1) - change to a slider
03:45:743 (5) - add a New Combo
03:48:050 (6) - ^
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hello~ :3

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  1. HP Drain +2
Can't, the diff has to be less then 3 stars...
00:06:867 (1) - i suggest, delete this KIAI time~ Nah, i like it xD
00:12:902 (4) - down+right 5 grid? x:336 y:240 Done ~
00:35:269 (3) - change to a slider end at 00:35:979? Nah
00:43:790 (1) - make it more beautiful~ It's good D:
00:46:098 (1) - change to a 1/2 repeating slider? Mh Done
00:48:405 (1) - this spinner end at 00:51:246 - ? Yup, done.
01:45:388 (5) - delete this circle? Nope, there are vocal "TAH" (rofl)
01:59:411 (1) - spinner end at 02:02:252 - ? Nah
02:04:559 (3) - delete it Nah
02:10:772 (7) - delete it, and the next spinner start at here? Done
02:33:139 (1) - delete New Combo Nah
02:37:400 (1) - ^ ^
02:40:240 - delete this KIAI Time = = Lol fixed.
03:17:695 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider do a repeat. Nah

Hard
00:06:867 (1) - same as NORMAL, delete this kiai time Same as normal ^
00:10:595 (3) - delete it, and 00:10:772 - add a Circle? Nah
00:33:849 (7) - why dont start the New Combo at here? Done.
00:42:370 (6) - add a New Combo Done.
00:45:210 (6) - ^ Done.
00:53:376 (5) - ^ Nah,00:52:311 here yes.
01:06:512 (4) - ^ Done.
01:15:033 (4) - ^ Done.
01:17:873 (4) - ^ Done.
01:24:973 (1) - delete this spinner, at 01:25:329 - add a slider and do three of 1/2 repeating? or add 5 circle at there Nah, it's an hard.
01:41:837 (6) - add a New Combo Nah
01:44:855 (6) - ^ Done.
01:50:713 (5) - ^ Nah
01:57:991 (4) - are you forgot to add a clap?? No :\
02:00:477 (2) - at beginning add a finish Mh yes.
02:04:382 (5) - add a New Combo Nah
02:04:559 (6) - add a finish Nah :\
02:05:802 (1) - at the repeating add a finish Okei
02:07:400 (4) - add a finish Nah
02:08:997 (4) - ^ Okay
02:19:115 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
02:19:826 (x) - add a circle? Nah
02:21:423 (4) - add a New Combo? Nah
02:25:329 (5) - ^ Done.
02:26:039 (1) - at beginning add a finish Done.
02:27:636 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
02:29:944 (4) - ^ Nah, added to the slider
02:34:559 (1) - at beginning add a finish Done.
02:40:240 (5) - delete this small KIAI time = = nah
02:48:050 (7) - add a New Combo Nah.. Added to (6)
03:20:891 (5) - ^ Fixed combo as above ^
03:32:252 (5) - ^ ^
03:39:885 (4) - ^ Done.
03:43:613 (5) - ^ Fixed combo as above ^
03:50:181 (1) - delete this spinner, at 03:50:181 add a slider to 03:50:358, then at 03:50:536 to 03:50:713 and do a 1/2 repeating. Nah :\
03:51:424 (1) - start at 03:51:246 - ? ^

Insane
00:06:867 (1) - same as NORMAL, delete this small KIAI time = = ^
00:10:772 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
00:15:033 (7) - ^ Done.
00:30:831 (7,8) - left 1 grid? x:352 y:264 Nah
00:33:849 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
00:35:624 (3) - ^ Done.
00:36:334 (7) - ^ Nah
00:43:258 (11) - ^ Done.
00:45:210 (6) - ^ Done.
00:46:985 (4) - ^ Done.
00:50:003 (6) - ^ Nah
00:54:796 (1) - at the repeating add a finish yes
00:56:394 (4) - at beginning add a finish Nah
00:57:814 (4) - ^ Done.
00:58:701 (6) - add a New Combo Done.
01:00:831 (3) - ^ Done.
01:01:897 (14) - ^ Done.
01:07:400 (4) - ^ Added at 01:06:512
01:11:837 (6) - ^ Added at]01:11:837
01:13:080 (1) - too short of this spinner, maybe change to a slider is better then spinner? No, it's an insane.
01:20:891 (5) - add a New Combo Nah
01:23:198 (6) - ^ Done.
01:25:151 (1) - same as 'HARD" Same as hard ^
01:26:216 (1) - end at 01:29:234 Done.
01:44:678 (7) - add a New Combo Done at (8).
01:46:630 (3) - ^ Done.
01:47:340 (7) - ^ Nah
01:53:198 (6) - ^ Done at (7).
01:56:216 (6) - ^ Done.
01:57:991 (4) - ^ Done.
02:03:139 (3) - down + right 3 grid? x:480 y:288 Nah
02:03:317 (4) - down+right 1 grid? x:416 y:240 Nah
02:09:707 (6) - add a New Combo Done.
02:11:837 (3) - ^ Done.
02:12:903 (14) - ^ Done.
02:13:258 (1) - change to a slider Nope
02:36:690 (4) - add a new Combo Added a circle and added new combo with finish
02:40:240 (5) - delete this small KIAI time - - The same of hard/normal ^
02:43:080 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
02:47:340 (5) - add a finish Done.
02:54:441 (7) - add a New Combo Done.
02:58:701 (5) - add a finish Done.
02:59:411 (7) - add a New Combo Added at 02:58:701
03:00:121 (1) - end at 03:01:897 - ? Done.
03:11:660 (5) - add a New Combo
03:13:967 (6) - ^
03:15:210 (1) - change to a slider Nah
03:23:021 (5) - add a new Combo Done at 03:08:642.
03:25:328 (6) - ^ Done.
03:34:382 (5) - ^ Nah
03:36:689 (6) - ^ Done.
03:37:932 (1) - change to a slider No
03:45:743 (5) - add a New Combo Nah
03:48:050 (6) - ^ Done.
Thanks <3
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
Hi. Mod time.

[General]
The purple combo do not fit._. del it.

[Normal]
HP+2~3 (Try to make other changes to decrease the difficulty. For example, I think your SV is too high. HP0 is not a good choice)
00:11:482 (5) - 2 grid down
01:21:778 (1) - del NC
01:57:636 - add notes in this part
02:37:400 (1) - del NC
02:52:311 (1) - ^
03:16:453 (1,2,3) - too difficult for NM(You also need to consider since it is the easiest map in your mapset).
03:39:175 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
AR-1~2
Nice map overall

[Insane]
HP+1
01:12:192 (3) - NC
01:17:873 (3) - del the slider whisper
02:16:098 (7) - this slider is too flat. make it into curve
02:27:459 (7) - ^
02:43:613 (3) - ^ or maybe you can change SV in this part (02:40:950 - 02:59:944)
03:08:642 (1) - del the slider whisper
03:14:333 (3) - NC
03:25:683 (8) - ^
03:37:044 (3) - ^
03:42:725 (1) - del NC

Hope these will help
Good Luck. :)
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
Thanks ~

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Nyquill
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1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
At a starbucks atm, hopefully I can do this mod before power runs out :3

Mod post reserved~
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Heya :)

General
Souce should be Shakugan no Shana :v (don't forget to change it in all diffs)
also, white combo colour kills eyes on kiai time ;~; consider changing it
for all diffs, i thiink it'd sound better if you reduced the volume on this pars:
00:40:950 (1) ~ 00:45:743 (4)
01:40:595 (1) ~ 01:51:601 (11)
02:40:950 (1) ~ 02:50:003 (4)
- for this part, go increasing it on 02:52:311 (1) ~ 02:59:944 (6) - there set the volume back to normal
buut yeah, that's totally up to you x3

[Normal]
01:42:370 (4) - move this note to 01:42:192? (if so, remove the clap on it)
01:50:181 (1) - shouldn't this slider end at 01:50:536?
01:50:891 (2) - same as above, but ending at 01:51:246
02:21:778 (1) - unecessary new combo
02:33:139 (1) - ^
02:37:400 (1) - ^

[Hard]
02:21:778 (1) - unecessary new combo
02:30:299 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Consider removing finish hitsound on:
00:11:305 (3) -
00:13:258 (7) -
00:14:678 (6) -
well.. generally, the way this diff was hitsounded sounds reeally different in relation to the previous diffs -such as the normal whistles on chorus- i'd really suggest to make them as they're on others, sounds better, imo.

That's all D: Hope it's useful for you~
Nyquill
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1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
Wow I lost the more or less finished mod I wrote for this when my computer died from battery loss :/

Blegh, was a bit late on this mod :/
Well then, I'm gonna have to find a new set of problems xD. Rewriting this entire mod.

[Normal]
You have a lot of combos that have different lengths. I see some mapped to be 1 measure long and some 2 measures long within the same section (the first kiai time)
00:34:071 (4) - Any particular reason why this slider ends slightly later? Its an inconsistancy in the beat as well as not on the vocal, as the vocals does actually have the note on :027 :/
//The following I suggest you consider, but also keep in mind that the section has both measure long combos and double measure long combos.
01:08:287 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better as (1,2,1,2) instead I believe. Since you had it like this with 3:22:133
01:19:648 (1,2,3,1) - ^
03:33:139 (5,1,2,1,2,1) - ^

[Hard]
01:53:731 (4,1) You had a clap on 2,4,2,4. Now you have it on 1,3. I guess its because you're missing a beat on 4. But maybe you should try doing this with a different Soundset/Rhythm then? Or you might be able to get away with no hitsounds on this part at all. It just sounds odd to me to have 1,3 after 2,4

I don't have any other problems with this diff.

[Insane]
Insane looks great. I guess this will be the first insane diff I modded where I can't find anything to complain about :/
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
Thanks, i'll fix it :D

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L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
[easy]
10,950 spacing and i do think that: 13,258 14,678 16,098 must add notes, i think that way is more comfortable ( personal opinion )
31,187 spacing
32,252 add note : whatever you are mapping on, the lyrics or the beats, this note is needed
34,914 add note : listen to the 'tsu' sound
46,098 slider make a return at 46,275 ( next white tick ) and end at 46,453 : suit the lyric
and add a short break there
54,441 add note
115,388 add return
120,003 too many "2 return" pattern here, make it two sliders
143,080 add note
145,388 spacing
150,181 why are the sliders ending after the white tick
227,991 why not like this : too many similar rhythm
310,240 why not like this

[hard]
213,968 add slider > end 214,323
spinner start at 214,678
322,666 become two sliders
325,151 add note
345,388 become two sliders

[insane]
109,352 add note
114,855 add note (stack)
238,820 delete those notes and add a break : finger cramp
245,210 no better pattern? i think that the sliders are ugly
250,181 add break
325,684 spinner begins here, dont need slider
334,204 add note

hm... thats all i could see, i think you need to find a MAT from now on

i hold my star for now because you dont even follow my L_P's que instruction
you can chose to mod mine or not, but please look at it
anyway im willing to give the star
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Ew. I would just remove (Full ver.) from the name. All songs are full versions unless noted otherwise I assume. But it's up to you to remove or not.
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
k thx I'll fix it..

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