[Overall]

20 lead in time is kinda big anyway you could cut it?

[easy]
00:28:651 (4) - Could you possibly mov this so it isn't touching the notes before it.

00:30:079 (1) - ^ Same this is slightly touching the other slider border possibly shift it a tad?

01:18:651 (1) - This one is just grazing it but moving it makes it look better as a whole.

01:22:937 (4) - New combo

01:45:794 (5) - New combo

01:47:222 (1) - Remove new combo

01:54:365 (1) - This looks ugly hitting 01:52:937 (1).

02:04:365 (1) - This one is overlapping the slider at 02:05:794 (1).

02:07:937 (4) - this one touches the slider at 02:07:937 (4) but I can live with that.

02:11:508 (3,4) - make these semetric please.

02:15:794 (1) - no really what is this D: so ugly.

02:20:079 (4) - new combo

02:23:294 (1) - I hat underlaps like this.

over all not to bad really messy and I think needs a bit more tlc before getting thrown into ranking.

[Normal]
01:56:508 (5) - think you could move this to make more of a cricle shape with the other lslider before it it plays really nicely if you do that.

01:59:365 (5) - ^

wow that was soooo much better than easy wth man why you no try on easy <3 still love you

[Hyper]
00:45:794 (1) - Remove new combo.

01:02:401 (3) - That anti jump really breaks up the flow.

01:09:901 (4,2) - These kinda patterns play really bad with snaking sliders off some times you mistake the end for a hit circle when covered like that.

01:30:079 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these not stacked

01:31:508 (1) - Remove new combo

01:49:365 (3) - stack this please.

01:49:365 (3) - same thing here. stacks

01:49:008 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - stacks in this section are borked.

02:14:365 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try making this pattern a little bit less scrunched.

02:15:794 (1,2,3,4) - that is kinda confusing for a hard.

[Another]

Nothing really that offsets me a few nitpicks but they are little issues like the ones in the earlier diffs.

Ohh never mind the jump in ar over though the map set is a bit unblanced imo

Good job on this set personally I think you can tighten it up a bit more before going for ranking.

Call me back and I will rebubble.

ztrot wrote:

SPOILER

[Overall]

20 lead in time is kinda big anyway you could cut it?

[easy]
00:28:651 (4) - Could you possibly mov this so it isn't touching the notes before it.

00:30:079 (1) - ^ Same this is slightly touching the other slider border possibly shift it a tad?

01:18:651 (1) - This one is just grazing it but moving it makes it look better as a whole.

01:22:937 (4) - New combo

01:45:794 (5) - New combo

01:47:222 (1) - Remove new combo

01:54:365 (1) - This looks ugly hitting 01:52:937 (1).

02:04:365 (1) - This one is overlapping the slider at 02:05:794 (1).

02:07:937 (4) - this one touches the slider at 02:07:937 (4) but I can live with that.

02:11:508 (3,4) - make these semetric please.

02:15:794 (1) - no really what is this D: so ugly.

02:20:079 (4) - new combo

02:23:294 (1) - I hat underlaps like this.

over all not to bad really messy and I think needs a bit more tlc before getting thrown into ranking.

[Normal]
01:56:508 (5) - think you could move this to make more of a cricle shape with the other lslider before it it plays really nicely if you do that.

01:59:365 (5) - ^

wow that was soooo much better than easy wth man why you no try on easy <3 still love you

[Hyper]
00:45:794 (1) - Remove new combo.

01:02:401 (3) - That anti jump really breaks up the flow.

01:09:901 (4,2) - These kinda patterns play really bad with snaking sliders off some times you mistake the end for a hit circle when covered like that.

01:30:079 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these not stacked

01:31:508 (1) - Remove new combo

01:49:365 (3) - stack this please.

01:49:365 (3) - same thing here. stacks

01:49:008 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - stacks in this section are borked.

02:14:365 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try making this pattern a little bit less scrunched.

02:15:794 (1,2,3,4) - that is kinda confusing for a hard.

[Another]

Nothing really that offsets me a few nitpicks but they are little issues like the ones in the earlier diffs.

Ohh never mind the jump in ar over though the map set is a bit unblanced imo

Good job on this set personally I think you can tighten it up a bit more before going for ranking.

Call me back and I will rebubble.

stuff, mainly involving why nonstacked stuff are nonstacked and lowering another AR to 8

Well this is better than it was before I'm happy keep up the good work and the nice song choices!

-It would be nice if you could include at least 1 spinner on each difficulty to avoid scores being tied (and there are some spinners that fit nicely on Normal so it shouldn't be too hard to do)

Another:
01:46:508 (3,1) - space these out more

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I will rank

stuff

inb4rank

Spinner discussion shown on log above, seeing as the maps shouldn't result in many tied scores and Shiirn really doesn't want to add any more spinners I can let that go

Everything else looks good
Ranked~

Here we go again.

lol at people who create multiaccounts just to rate your map 1

Nice speedrank, bro *shot*

Hurray!
That was fast.

my god

as in

holy crap

Congratulations, man.

natsumerin and bd jelly incoming

congrats mr siirn

dNextGen wrote:

bd jelly

wait what

do you really know shit about me lol

not sure if know \:D/

I'm a Speed Rank flamer.

and not a single fuck was given that day

dNextGen wrote:

natsumerin and bd jelly incoming

congrats mr siirn

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Another map Shiirn?

Shit bro :3 Gratz \:D/

Blue Dragon wrote:

Here we go again.

lol at people who create multiaccounts just to rate your map 1

I dont see that one as a multi. Nothing suspicious to be classified as multi