15:12 <Garven> : That blue combo color is hard to see
15:13 <GiNa> : the third one ?
15:13 <Garven> :
http://puu.sh/oLvu15:13 <Garven> : I also recommend tick rate 2 for all difficulties
15:13 <Garven> : Fits the song better
15:15 <GiNa> : that's purple actually
15:15 <GiNa> : I think 2 is too much for Easy T-T
15:15 <Garven> : Ah, so it is purple
15:15 <GiNa> : yes, purple T^T
15:16 <Garven> : aaah fast SV with really low DS ;_;
15:18 <GiNa> : for which diff T-T ?
15:18 <Garven> : Easy
15:18 <Garven> : 00:24:129 (1) - this... feels awkward
15:18 <Garven> : Especially where it ends
15:18 <Garven> : It's not really resolving anything
15:19 <Garven> : It's just some offbeat in the next phrase
15:19 <Garven> : though it's amusing hearing all the extra slider ticks with tick rate 2 on, haha
15:20 <Garven> : 00:53:229 (2) - After seeing this nice slider, 00:50:229 (1,2,3) - were kinda ugly in comparison.
15:20 <Garven> : 01:01:029 (2,3) - These don't feel like they represent the music well.
15:21 <Garven> : It' sjust continuing the beat that just took a drastic change
15:21 <GiNa> : 00:24:129 (1) - I followed the vocal, I take off clap for now
15:22 <Garven> : 01:45:760 (1,2,3) - feels like you're filling in a lot of beats that aren't really that strong in the music
15:22 <Garven> : It's more of a flat-line with the guitars there
15:22 <Garven> : And the player is just happily goign with the beat bam bam bam bam bam
15:24 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (2) - finish on the end of this feels out of place
15:25 <Garven> : whistle felt better
15:25 <Garven> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - same thing about hitting the beat while the rest of the song is taking a break
15:27 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (1) - finish?
15:27 <Garven> : 02:59:445 (4) - ^
15:27 <GiNa> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - for these, can I just replace sliders with circles ?
15:28 <Garven> : I think it would have better effect if you deleted 02:24:241 (2,3,4) -
15:28 <Garven> : Since you follow the drums so much in this map
15:28 <Garven> : It helps reflect that there is a lack of percussion during that part
15:29 <Garven> : Normal:
15:29 <Garven> : 00:16:629 (1) - aaah whistle on slider slide sounds horrible ;p
15:29 <GiNa> : do I need to insert a break time there ? (Easy)
15:29 <Garven> : You can if you want
15:29 <Garven> : I feel that it gives a better impact without one though
15:30 <GiNa> : Yea, it's better without it :3
15:30 <Garven> : 01:09:376 (5,1) - this overlap is pretty ugly
15:31 <Garven> : 01:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - hey hey hey now
15:31 <Garven> : Going from that rhythm to 01:12:596 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty cruel, don't you think?
15:34 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (1) - this curve could look better.
http://puu.sh/oLIr15:34 <GiNa> : changed them to this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/28752215:34 <Garven> : mm
15:35 <Garven> : I think it's more that you used the 1.5 beat rhythm for the first part of the phrase
15:35 <Garven> : Then go back to 1/1/1/1/1/1 in the same phrase
15:35 <Garven> : It's confusing and I'm not sure what you're trying to follow anymore
15:36 <Garven> : 02:24:241 (2,3,4,5) - same comment from easy
15:36 <Garven> : see at 02:35:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you keep it consistent
15:36 <Garven> : It' sjust that first chorus where it's weird
15:37 <Garven> : 02:48:731 (1) - this spinner is awkward. I'd map through it.
15:37 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (3) - new comb
15:37 <Garven> : o
15:38 <Garven> : 03:04:207 (1,2) - using claps here sticks out baaaad
15:39 <Garven> : I'll just mod your parts in the collab
15:39 <Garven> : 00:42:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what's going on with the spacing here?
15:41 <Garven> : 02:33:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You really should consider redesigning this pattern to feature the first 6 notes instead of the 8 notes together
15:41 <Garven> : the 6 notes represent the vocalist's phrase and to continue the pattern on after the vocalist is done makes it feel like the pattern isn't
15:41 <Garven> : following the correct instrument or something
15:42 <Garven> : It's just.. awkward right now
15:42 <Garven> : 03:06:290 (1,2) - What's the point of not mapping the rest of the guitar during the end here?
15:47 <Garven> : Anyway, there's a few things I noticed. q:
15:48 <Garven> : This headache is geting pretty bad though, so I'm going to go to bed.
15:48 <Garven> : Hopefully I can do a full mod soon