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GiNa

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello! Recheck! Sorry for taking so long

SB:
- Uh you might want to change the username you use with your current one Oki, sure

Easy:
- 00:55:029 (1,2) >> Make the formation like this http://puu.sh/hIwX instead, some players might get confused with the current formation Fixed
- 01:22:273 (2,1,2,3) >> Move the (1,2,3) formation so it's closer to where previous slider (2) ends, with this the player makes a smoother transition so is easier to play Fixed
- 02:33:066 >> New combo Fixed
- 02:46:945 >> Finish ? Fixed

Normal:
- 02:38:492 (3,4,5,6) >> Very inconsistent spacing, if you can do something that doesn't change the spacing so much it would be better Fixed
- 02:46:945 >> Finish ? Done
- 02:49:921 >> Isn't this a little short for a Normal ? Fixed

Collab Hard:
- 02:46:945 >> Finish ? Sure

winber1's Insane:
- Fine

* Ok, call me back once again
Thank you again
SakiK

lovhin456 wrote:

Collab Hard:
- 00:19:729 >> The reverse arrow gets a bit covered by a previous note hitburst I think
00:18:729 (3) - Probably here's revers arrow?fix
thx for modding!

Download: Soraru - Ama no Jaku (GiNa) [Collab Hard].osu
lovhin456
Everything looks fine
Bubbled
Topic Starter
GiNa

lovhin456 wrote:

Everything looks fine
Bubbled
Thank you <3333
winber1
:o!! gratz on bubble :3

gogo rank :D
Garven
Did some IRC modding for GiNa's mapping. I'll mod the rest later when my head doesn't feel like it's going to explode.

SPOILER
15:12 <Garven> : That blue combo color is hard to see
15:13 <GiNa> : the third one ?
15:13 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/oLvu
15:13 <Garven> : I also recommend tick rate 2 for all difficulties
15:13 <Garven> : Fits the song better
15:15 <GiNa> : that's purple actually
15:15 <GiNa> : I think 2 is too much for Easy T-T
15:15 <Garven> : Ah, so it is purple
15:15 <GiNa> : yes, purple T^T
15:16 <Garven> : aaah fast SV with really low DS ;_;
15:18 <GiNa> : for which diff T-T ?
15:18 <Garven> : Easy
15:18 <Garven> : 00:24:129 (1) - this... feels awkward
15:18 <Garven> : Especially where it ends
15:18 <Garven> : It's not really resolving anything
15:19 <Garven> : It's just some offbeat in the next phrase
15:19 <Garven> : though it's amusing hearing all the extra slider ticks with tick rate 2 on, haha
15:20 <Garven> : 00:53:229 (2) - After seeing this nice slider, 00:50:229 (1,2,3) - were kinda ugly in comparison.
15:20 <Garven> : 01:01:029 (2,3) - These don't feel like they represent the music well.
15:21 <Garven> : It' sjust continuing the beat that just took a drastic change
15:21 <GiNa> : 00:24:129 (1) - I followed the vocal, I take off clap for now
15:22 <Garven> : 01:45:760 (1,2,3) - feels like you're filling in a lot of beats that aren't really that strong in the music
15:22 <Garven> : It's more of a flat-line with the guitars there
15:22 <Garven> : And the player is just happily goign with the beat bam bam bam bam bam
15:24 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (2) - finish on the end of this feels out of place
15:25 <Garven> : whistle felt better
15:25 <Garven> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - same thing about hitting the beat while the rest of the song is taking a break
15:27 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (1) - finish?
15:27 <Garven> : 02:59:445 (4) - ^
15:27 <GiNa> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - for these, can I just replace sliders with circles ?
15:28 <Garven> : I think it would have better effect if you deleted 02:24:241 (2,3,4) -
15:28 <Garven> : Since you follow the drums so much in this map
15:28 <Garven> : It helps reflect that there is a lack of percussion during that part
15:29 <Garven> : Normal:
15:29 <Garven> : 00:16:629 (1) - aaah whistle on slider slide sounds horrible ;p
15:29 <GiNa> : do I need to insert a break time there ? (Easy)
15:29 <Garven> : You can if you want
15:29 <Garven> : I feel that it gives a better impact without one though
15:30 <GiNa> : Yea, it's better without it :3
15:30 <Garven> : 01:09:376 (5,1) - this overlap is pretty ugly
15:31 <Garven> : 01:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - hey hey hey now
15:31 <Garven> : Going from that rhythm to 01:12:596 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty cruel, don't you think?
15:34 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (1) - this curve could look better. http://puu.sh/oLIr
15:34 <GiNa> : changed them to this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287522
15:34 <Garven> : mm
15:35 <Garven> : I think it's more that you used the 1.5 beat rhythm for the first part of the phrase
15:35 <Garven> : Then go back to 1/1/1/1/1/1 in the same phrase
15:35 <Garven> : It's confusing and I'm not sure what you're trying to follow anymore
15:36 <Garven> : 02:24:241 (2,3,4,5) - same comment from easy
15:36 <Garven> : see at 02:35:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you keep it consistent
15:36 <Garven> : It' sjust that first chorus where it's weird
15:37 <Garven> : 02:48:731 (1) - this spinner is awkward. I'd map through it.
15:37 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (3) - new comb
15:37 <Garven> : o
15:38 <Garven> : 03:04:207 (1,2) - using claps here sticks out baaaad
15:39 <Garven> : I'll just mod your parts in the collab
15:39 <Garven> : 00:42:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what's going on with the spacing here?
15:41 <Garven> : 02:33:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You really should consider redesigning this pattern to feature the first 6 notes instead of the 8 notes together
15:41 <Garven> : the 6 notes represent the vocalist's phrase and to continue the pattern on after the vocalist is done makes it feel like the pattern isn't
15:41 <Garven> : following the correct instrument or something
15:42 <Garven> : It's just.. awkward right now
15:42 <Garven> : 03:06:290 (1,2) - What's the point of not mapping the rest of the guitar during the end here?
15:47 <Garven> : Anyway, there's a few things I noticed. q:
15:48 <Garven> : This headache is geting pretty bad though, so I'm going to go to bed.
15:48 <Garven> : Hopefully I can do a full mod soon
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding for GiNa's mapping. I'll mod the rest later when my head doesn't feel like it's going to explode.

SPOILER
15:12 <Garven> : That blue combo color is hard to see
15:13 <GiNa> : the third one ?
15:13 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/oLvu
15:13 <Garven> : I also recommend tick rate 2 for all difficulties
15:13 <Garven> : Fits the song better
15:15 <GiNa> : that's purple actually
15:15 <GiNa> : I think 2 is too much for Easy T-T
15:15 <Garven> : Ah, so it is purple
15:15 <GiNa> : yes, purple T^T
15:16 <Garven> : aaah fast SV with really low DS ;_;
15:18 <GiNa> : for which diff T-T ?
15:18 <Garven> : Easy
15:18 <Garven> : 00:24:129 (1) - this... feels awkward
15:18 <Garven> : Especially where it ends
15:18 <Garven> : It's not really resolving anything
15:19 <Garven> : It's just some offbeat in the next phrase
15:19 <Garven> : though it's amusing hearing all the extra slider ticks with tick rate 2 on, haha
15:20 <Garven> : 00:53:229 (2) - After seeing this nice slider, 00:50:229 (1,2,3) - were kinda ugly in comparison.
15:20 <Garven> : 01:01:029 (2,3) - These don't feel like they represent the music well.
15:21 <Garven> : It' sjust continuing the beat that just took a drastic change
15:21 <GiNa> : 00:24:129 (1) - I followed the vocal, I take off clap for now
15:22 <Garven> : 01:45:760 (1,2,3) - feels like you're filling in a lot of beats that aren't really that strong in the music
15:22 <Garven> : It's more of a flat-line with the guitars there
15:22 <Garven> : And the player is just happily goign with the beat bam bam bam bam bam
15:24 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (2) - finish on the end of this feels out of place
15:25 <Garven> : whistle felt better
15:25 <Garven> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - same thing about hitting the beat while the rest of the song is taking a break
15:27 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (1) - finish?
15:27 <Garven> : 02:59:445 (4) - ^
15:27 <GiNa> : 02:23:941 (1,2,3,4) - for these, can I just replace sliders with circles ?
15:28 <Garven> : I think it would have better effect if you deleted 02:24:241 (2,3,4) -
15:28 <Garven> : Since you follow the drums so much in this map
15:28 <Garven> : It helps reflect that there is a lack of percussion during that part
15:29 <Garven> : Normal:
15:29 <Garven> : 00:16:629 (1) - aaah whistle on slider slide sounds horrible ;p
15:29 <GiNa> : do I need to insert a break time there ? (Easy)
15:29 <Garven> : You can if you want
15:29 <Garven> : I feel that it gives a better impact without one though
15:30 <GiNa> : Yea, it's better without it :3
15:30 <Garven> : 01:09:376 (5,1) - this overlap is pretty ugly
15:31 <Garven> : 01:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - hey hey hey now
15:31 <Garven> : Going from that rhythm to 01:12:596 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty cruel, don't you think?
15:34 <Garven> : 02:04:808 (1) - this curve could look better. http://puu.sh/oLIr
15:34 <GiNa> : changed them to this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287522
15:34 <Garven> : mm
15:35 <Garven> : I think it's more that you used the 1.5 beat rhythm for the first part of the phrase
15:35 <Garven> : Then go back to 1/1/1/1/1/1 in the same phrase
15:35 <Garven> : It's confusing and I'm not sure what you're trying to follow anymore
15:36 <Garven> : 02:24:241 (2,3,4,5) - same comment from easy
15:36 <Garven> : see at 02:35:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you keep it consistent
15:36 <Garven> : It' sjust that first chorus where it's weird
15:37 <Garven> : 02:48:731 (1) - this spinner is awkward. I'd map through it.
15:37 <Garven> : 02:54:683 (3) - new comb
15:37 <Garven> : o
15:38 <Garven> : 03:04:207 (1,2) - using claps here sticks out baaaad
15:39 <Garven> : I'll just mod your parts in the collab
15:39 <Garven> : 00:42:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what's going on with the spacing here?
15:41 <Garven> : 02:33:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You really should consider redesigning this pattern to feature the first 6 notes instead of the 8 notes together
15:41 <Garven> : the 6 notes represent the vocalist's phrase and to continue the pattern on after the vocalist is done makes it feel like the pattern isn't
15:41 <Garven> : following the correct instrument or something
15:42 <Garven> : It's just.. awkward right now
15:42 <Garven> : 03:06:290 (1,2) - What's the point of not mapping the rest of the guitar during the end here?
15:47 <Garven> : Anyway, there's a few things I noticed. q:
15:48 <Garven> : This headache is geting pretty bad though, so I'm going to go to bed.
15:48 <Garven> : Hopefully I can do a full mod soon
Fixed everything
Thank you :3 !
Goodbye my oldest bubble ever xD
Garven
Here's the mod for the rest of the maps then:

[Collab]

[SakiK]
00:08:529 (5) - eew whistle on slider slide. Sounds awful.
00:15:729 (7,8) - Plays strange as a stack after all the parts prior
01:19:047 (1) - Really ugly curve on this slider


[Evil_Twilight]
01:00:879 (5,6) - This stack kills your flow and plays strange.
01:03:279 (2) - This should be snapped to 1/3 at 01:03:329 (2) -
01:09:669 - Feels empty here without any hit objects
01:26:415 (10,11,1) - This feels so wrong since Soraru is so off-time here. The clap on 11 feels like it's too late and makes me feel off time, plus the beginning of the 1 slider, then it matching with the vocal, then going off again to the back rhythm just make the entire part feel off. I suggest you rethink this part.
01:27:903 (1) - This slow slider... doesn't really fit.
01:51:415 (3) - No finish?
01:54:391 (4) - Strange that this isn't stacked
01:58:260 (2,3,4,5) - This rhythm... doesn't really fit what's going on in the music. There's a lot going on in the music here that you can follow that would play much better than this.

[kevinli111]
02:08:383 (1) - rem new combo
02:08:980 (2) - new combo
02:10:472 (1) - r nc
02:11:368 (2) - nc
02:12:860 (1) - r nc
02:14:054 (4) - nc
02:18:241 (1) - r nc
02:18:541 (2) - nc
02:25:441 (1) - r nc
02:25:741 (2) - nc
02:26:341 (1) - r nc

[Gina]
02:42:183 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend following the vocals so closely here considering he's so off time. I keep clicking early ><

[Winber1's Insane]
01:03:279 (3,4,5) - This part of the song is in swing, so 1/4 rhythms are completely wrong. Use 1/3 snap for this section.
02:45:755 (3,1) - erm, I could barely see the 1 slider here since by the time the slider fully extended, I wasn't looking there anymore due to the face-paced nature of this map.
03:04:802 - Same comment from the collab: Why leave so much empty space after following the guitar so much? That and the HP drain makes this really stupid to have at the end.
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

Here's the mod for the rest of the maps then:

[Collab]
[kevinli111]
02:08:383 (1) - rem new combo
02:08:980 (2) - new combo
02:10:472 (1) - r nc
02:11:368 (2) - nc
02:12:860 (1) - r nc
02:14:054 (4) - nc
02:18:241 (1) - r nc
02:18:541 (2) - nc
02:25:441 (1) - r nc
02:25:741 (2) - nc
02:26:341 (1) - r nc

[Gina]
02:42:183 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend following the vocals so closely here considering he's so off time. I keep clicking early ><
Fixed my and kevin's parts because he couldn't go to the edit right now (his own computer problem) Orz
Thank you again :3

EDIT:

Garven wrote:

[SakiK]
00:08:529 (5) - eew whistle on slider slide. Sounds awful.
00:15:729 (7,8) - Plays strange as a stack after all the parts prior
01:19:047 (1) - Really ugly curve on this slider
Fixed SakiK's part too, heard that his pc was broken by the earthquake lol
For Evil_Twilight's, he fixed something by himself, but I didn't what exactly was it, just let you know that he did follow your mod.
winber1
fixed all.

some reason the space just feels like it fits imo. But whatever, mapping it or not I don't mind.

Download: Soraru - Ama no Jaku (GiNa) [Winber1's Insane].osu
Garven
Just a couple more things, I guess.

[Normal]
02:07:189 - Extend beginning of break to here

[Collab]

[Evil-Twilight]
01:26:613 (11) - Hrm, this doesn't play well at all. Maybe just delete 01:26:415 (10,11) - ?
01:27:159 (2) - Snap this to the red tick and adjust the length too.
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

Just a couple more things, I guess.

[Normal]
02:07:189 - Extend beginning of break to here
Thanks Garven-san :D
Evil_Twilight
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

[Collab]

[Evil-Twilight]
01:27:159 (2) - Snap this to the red tick and adjust the length too.
Sorry, but I have to change this slider for you.
那條slider尾端有一個tick在玩時不會顯示出來,開其他mod的時候很容易斷combo(其實不開也很容易miss)
然後這歌擺在藍線上有點奇怪Orz,所以我移到紅線上然後結束在白線上←這樣也剛好解決的尾短看不到tick的問題

All updated ^-^
Garven
Lookin' good. Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

Lookin' good. Rebubbled!
Thank you <3
Beuchi
Hi old bubble! :)

[Easy]
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better.
02:45:159 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:47:540 , sounds way better.

[Normal]
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better.

[Collab]
00:21:129 - Add a note here? Or maybe another repeat to the slider, it sounds empty right now >:
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better.
01:01:329 (1) - I'd add a repeat to this slider too, the guitar doesn't stop until the next red tick (that would mean rotating the slider too, the jump it would make right now doesn't look so good imo xp)
02:28:668 (1) - Unstack this note, I think it breaks the flow on this part :c
02:48:731 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack these as well? I suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/324633

[Winber1's Insane]
01:01:729 (2,4) - Snap to 1/3.
01:02:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - I think this whole part needs to be resnapped to 1/3, something like this:
fits way better with the song.

Call me back for a recheck, popping the bubble for now >.<
Topic Starter
GiNa

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi old bubble! :)

[Easy]
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better. Fixed
02:45:159 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:47:540 , sounds way better. I follow vocal here, so no change, sorry >_< EDIT: Perhaps the next circle will be too soon to appear after the spinner, I think beginners can't handle it very well.

[Normal]
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better. Fixed

[Collab]
00:24:129 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:26:529 , sounds way better. Fixed
02:28:668 (1) - Unstack this note, I think it breaks the flow on this part :c Fixed
02:48:731 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack these as well? I suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/324633 Fixed

Call me back for a recheck, popping the bubble for now >.< Okay, thanks <3
winber1
SakiK
my part is all finished thx!

Download: Soraru - Ama no Jaku (GiNa) [Collab].osu
Beuchi
Nice! :) Sorry for the wait~

RE-BUBBLED!!
Topic Starter
GiNa

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Nice! :) Sorry for the wait~

RE-BUBBLED!!
Thank you >_< !
Garven
Did a couple hit sound changes on the spinners that were extended and added one note in the Collab.

We're good to go here. Ranked!
Topic Starter
GiNa

Garven wrote:

And ranked!
Arigato :D
SakiK
so looong yeah congratz!
suzutsukikanade
Grats!
winber1
OMG GRATZ! :D
YTYuyu
OMG about time this got ranked D:. congratz on the rank ;)
EmPao
恭喜呀~ :D
Topic Starter
GiNa
Thanks everyone <3
kevinli111
gratz ;o 觸爆了
Rein
:)
Nichiyouki
Congratz~
Topic Starter
GiNa
Thanks ^-^
Meowcenaries
finally gina, congrats!
Topic Starter
GiNa

MeowcenariesJP wrote:

finally gina, congrats!
I remember you :3
Thank you <3
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