Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~

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Miya
the design is not bad, it's good imo :D
But that part makes me confused ;_; especially when you encounter it for the first time.
Well, let's see if you can come up with something new :)
Hinsvar
Hi there.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there.
  2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag?


>marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^


>Normal
  1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs?
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool.


>Hard
  1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them?
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange.


Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way ;)
marshallracer

Hinsvar wrote:

marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^
left the kiai flashes since they make some parts look epic and are cool (as long as CXu agrees with me)

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
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CXu

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. - Hya ~~ Time to finally fix this mod. Sorry it took so long xD

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there. - It's the full song though, so does this still have to be in the source?
  2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag? - ^


>marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^


>Normal
  1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs? - Well, I just like it for no reason xD
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool. - <3


>Hard
  1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them? - Because I like it :D Well it's mostly for HP recovery before the long slider.
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange. ;_;


Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way ;)
Thanks for modding, Not changing much though. I'll be checking with other people if I have to add Naruto to tags. I want to consider this mapping a Home Made Kazoku song instead of a full version of a Naruto ending :p
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CXu
Posting so the map doesn't randomly go to graveyard because I forget or smth
Leorda
Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap?


Once you done, PM me for recheck
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CXu

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) - Ah, oops. Curved the slider a bit~
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider- Yupp, you're right. Fixed~
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?- I probably had some deep meaning ending the slider there, but I don't remember it now, so changed.
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay - Hmm, I think i got it fixed.


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm - I like this like it is actually. I'm following that long sound in the background xD
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap? - There is a stop here in the lyrics, and I want to add this stop into the mapping, so no changes :D


Once you done, PM me for recheck
Thanks for modding :D
marshallracer

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^ ughh, getting creative and instantly everyone getting picky ... well, ok
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner? because I changed it to one long one x3
Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Leorda
Good job~

Bubbled


To next modder
: the falling star slider is fine, so it's easily to play it
Topic Starter
CXu
Yay \:D/
IceBeam
hi again! :D

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!
marshallracer

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing
whoops ^^''
fixed :3

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
CXu

IceBeam wrote:

hi again! :D

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s - Sure xD

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s - I really want to just follow the vocals here :(

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!
Thanks! \o (Oh right, should I kudosu you for this too? That is, if I should kudosu a recheck/remod thing xD)
IceBeam
ranked! ;)

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre
marshallracer

IceBeam wrote:

ranked! ;)

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre
w-w-wait a second, for real now? o.o'
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CXu
yay \:D/
spboxer3
gratz~
Topic Starter
CXu
Waitwhat just happened
kriers

CXu wrote:

Waitwhat just happened
ninja unrank /o/
Nardoxyribonucleic
The beatmap becomes not approved @@
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