alarm1234 wrote:

;)

Mod4Mod

[General]
don't you use kiai time ? - I do, but I didn't want to use it in this one xD

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - put object
03:04:674 - put object

[Normal]
02:05:312(8) - too close - Oh yeah, right! Fixed
02:08:344(1) - put timing 02:08:504 - This part could be a bit confusing for Normal yeah, but I don't think I want to change it (yet atleast) xP

[Hard]
00:27:493(6) - slider end 00:27:334 ? - Tried it, feels more smooth the way I have it I think.
00:27:653(1) - too far - Jump~~
01:11:536(1) - slider end 01:11:376 ? - Again, flows better like this imo.
01:31:243(7) - streem start 01:31:163 - First note in stream is the sliderend~~
02:30:525(1) - too far - Ah, someone other than Metro complaining about this. Fixed~~
02:52:387(6) - too far ? - Should be fine imo
03:26:855(1) - too far - Jump~~


so Good map
i hope to ranked it - Thank you!~~

IceBeam wrote:

hello ~ Hya \o\

folder and map setting seem fine
add Familia to tags? as it's the album's name - Added

also..shouldn't BPM be 188?
please ask for timing experts' opinion
^Oh it is? I'll ask about it~~

another thing is kiai
it would be better,if kiai sections were similar in all difficulties..
^Well, I guess so in the end Adding them on chorus o/ I hope the few kiai fountains aren't too spammy ;w;~~

[Easy]
00:20:632 - I can't find a good reason to leave a space here..note would fit rhytm,flow and lyrics,so I suggest to add one
00:39:940 (1) - a blue tick after the break in Easy..ahem..could you just add a note to 00:40:419? It'd be totally fine..and finish btw?
01:09:781 (1) - yep it makes sense with the previous sliders,but a note at 01:09:142 perfectly fits..maybe you can make something like this:

SPOILER

it'd follow symmetria and you will have a way to add that note in the new pattern
01:54:461 (1) - shorten this slider to 01:55:100 and make a slider from 01:56:057 to 01:56:376 (3)
otherwise in case of previous rhytm it' plays a bit awkwardly
02:42:972 (1) - add finish hitsound please
03:34:036 (1) - meh..not the best shape honestly..there're lots of mappers who are really good in slider art,they could help you to make a better one

[Normal]
00:12:334 (1) - I don't think blue tick fits well here,as lyrics are a bit after it..so 00:12:334 would be better to start this slider - Hmm, okay
00:17:759 - a note here would fit the lyrics and make it easier to read 00:18:238 (2),cause it's not that obvious honestly - I think this is okay? I'm not changing this for now, but if this really is an issue I'll fix it~~
02:02:121 (1) - ^ same issue,a note at the red tick would be perfect - ^ Though I'll consider this a bit more
02:08:344 (1) - was a bit hard to read it,as it's Normal,maybe make a slider out of 02:08:025 (5,1)? and don't combo spam here anyway - Good idea, changed to slider and removed combospam~~
02:45:525 (2) - again a note at 02:45:844 would be awesome - I'm keeping these patterns for now, but I'll think about them~~
04:07:227 (1,1,1,1) - uhm,well,as a proud combo spammer I'd say it's okay - 8D
04:09:781 (1) - I had some doubts about it,but I asked some people and they said it was ok during gameplay,soo..fine - yay

[Hard]
00:12:174 (2,3) - you should unstack them somehow,there's a little osu! bag,and we were asked to point out such things and force mappers to change it
the problem is that stacking doesn't occur at all,I mean stack leniency is 0 as you can from this screenshot:

SPOILER

yeah,it's major,I'd say it's an unrankable issue so far,so consider to fix it - Ah sure.
00:44:249 (1) - place it a little farther to clear out 1/1 yeah..BPM is definetly halfed..to show 1/2 spacing,cause in case of previous jump 00:41:057 (5,1,2) it looks wrong,and I was about to click earlier - Fixed~~
01:24:302 (1) - do you need this nc? - Well, I probably don't need it, but I thought it was pretty neat so leaving~~ :p
01:48:717 (9,1) - same stacking bug,fix please - Hope that manual stacking worked out~~
02:22:546 (1) - I know this map wasn't aiming to be symmetrical,but you could make this one more neat at least Haha, sure~~
03:49:834 (3) - finish it 1/4 earlier and add a circle to 03:50:312 instead? it'd fit lyrics a bit more - Agreed. I think I changed something similar following Metro the other day :p

really sweet mapset and the song is cool -

first of all,ask someone to check your BPM,just in case that whole Hard mapped on 1/4,it should have been worried you immediatelly lol
also fix that stacking bugs at the very least,everything else isn't that major,so it's up to you to follow my suggestions or not

I'm a bit busy with requests so far,if you'll have a trouble with finding a MAT,bump me for recheck,but a bit later,please
and of course,any additional mods from regular users won't ever hurt any map
^Yeah I'll ask someone. Also, afaik the song is sung in 1/3 (or 1/6) and fartownik is making me an insane difficulty using that, so I'll atleast wait until I get some mods for that before bugging you (or other MATs) again

good luck~ - Thanks

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:20:632 - I can't find a good reason to leave a space here..note would fit rhytm,flow and lyrics,so I suggest to add one ok, Sir
00:39:940 (1) - a blue tick after the break in Easy..ahem..could you just add a note to 00:40:419? It'd be totally fine..and finish btw? ok
01:09:781 (1) - yep it makes sense with the previous sliders,but a note at 01:09:142 perfectly fits..maybe you can make something like this:

SPOILER

it'd follow symmetria and you will have a way to add that note in the new pattern
umm ... well, I can't see a difference in the Screenshot, but I placed one there
01:54:461 (1) - shorten this slider to 01:55:100 and make a slider from 01:56:057 to 01:56:376 (3)
otherwise in case of previous rhytm it' plays a bit awkwardly ok
02:42:972 (1) - add finish hitsound please ok
03:34:036 (1) - meh..not the best shape honestly..there're lots of mappers who are really good in slider art,they could help you to make a better one CXu's gonna help me there

1. Slider Velocity change to 1.50 - 1.60? maybe better then 1.80.
2. Circle Size change to the large?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi ^^
sorry, i'm late to mod this.

marshall_racer's Easy
00:18:717 (3) - at behind add a finish sound? yep
02:02:121 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/828X nah, this would be kinda too big then
02:18:717 (3,4,5) - overlap them? hmm ... I'll leave them like that for now
03:08:504 (1) - i suggest, move to other place, because i will make Beginner confused. ok
03:34:036 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/82an nah, CXu made a nice one which I won't touch anymore <.<
04:03:398 (3) - at behind add a finish sound? ok
04:08:504 (1) - at behind add a whistle sound? dunno if it's just me, but that sounds strange there recheking 3 times, my ears are useless ... done

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi ^^ - Hi
sorry, i'm late to mod this. - np, np~~

marshall_racer's Easy
00:18:717 (3) - at behind add a finish sound?
02:02:121 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/828X
02:18:717 (3,4,5) - overlap them?
03:08:504 (1) - i suggest, move to other place, because i will make Beginner confused.
03:34:036 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/82an
04:03:398 (3) - at behind add a finish sound?
04:08:504 (1) - at behind add a whistle sound?

Normal

1. Slider Velocity change to 1.50 - 1.60? maybe better then 1.80.
2. Circle Size change to the large?

^Let me keep these settings for now. If it's really bad, I'll consider changing though
01:00:046 (4) - a bit hard to hit for NORMAL players, try to use the previous slider end at here? - It is? :<
01:07:706 (4) - same as above, delete this slider and use the previous slider end at here and make a one repeating? if you accept this, then 01:08:185 (4) change to a circle. - Yes, fixed
01:22:227 (2) - change to a circle? - I think this is fine
01:22:706 (3) - this slider start from 01:22:546 ? - ^
02:02:121 (1,2,3) - change them like this? --> http://puu.sh/82cl - Actually, yes!
02:08:025 (5) - delete this slider, and make the previous slider one repeating? - ^
02:10:738 (5) - change to a circle? - Fine imo
02:11:217 (1) - this slider start from 02:11:057 - ? - ^
02:22:546 (1) - this slider at 02:23:185 - add a custom 1 sound? - Thought i'd refrain from using slider-tick sounds :p
02:24:940 (1) - change to a circle at 02:25:100 - ? - I think this is fine
02:26:217 (3) - ^ 02:26:376 - ? - ^
02:29:568 (4) - this slider end at 02:30:206 - ? - Idk, I like it this way better
02:30:525 (5) - change to a two circle? - ^
02:45:366 (1) - delete this circle - Keeping this
02:45:525 (2,3,4) - same as 02:02:121. --> http://puu.sh/82cl - Changed, but not as you suggested~
03:16:961 (3) - delete this circle - Keeping this
03:21:110 (6) - ^ or change to slider to 03:21:270 ? - ^
03:25:259 (1) - delete this circle - ^
03:27:174 (4) - ^ - ^
03:46:642 (1) - change to a circle at 03:46:802 - ? - ^
03:47:919 (3) - ^ 03:48:078 ? - ^
04:09:781 (1) - very ugly of this slider. please, make it beautiful. - Do tell me where the problem is, and I will fix it. I don't see how it is ugly though.

Hard
00:55:419 (4,5,6) - make them a bit curve? - Straight they are and straight they go~~ Leaving as is
00:57:334 (x) - add a circle? - No, it's a pause I want to keep here
01:24:302 (1) - remove this New Combo - Keeping a pattern, so keeping this
01:25:100 (4) - add a New Combo? - ^
01:31:403 (9) - upward 1 grid? x:200 y:324 - Should be fine how it is now imo.
03:17:759 (5) - add a New Combo - Yes, added
04:06:429 (7,8) - overlap at the previous note. - Fixed somehow I think
04:08:823 (1,1) - remove this New Combo - No
04:09:781 (1) - same as NORMAL. make it more beautiful. - As Normal.
@nice difficulty.

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Nice mapset~! Hope can fast to Rank. - Thanks
Good Luck

Barney Stinson wrote:

Easy
Nothing at all. HUHUHUUUUUUUUU (remembering Lazy song. I know, I'm stupid)

Barney Stinson wrote:

YAAAY sorry for delay!

General: Fine everything

Hard
59:568: Remove new combo here and
1:00:206: Here.
Make new combo at: 1:00:884 - No, this should be fine as it is. There is a slight spacing change too, and I think the new combo fits well for this part.
1:24:302: YAH. remove new combo dude.
1:26:536 1:28:770 2:24:781 2:30:046 2:45:366 2:47:759 2:50:472: Same here and other patterns like those ones. - Intentional new combos, which I'm keeping
4:09:781: when I saw that slider my face looked like http://puu.sh/dAGI -

Normal
27:653 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.- Uh? It's nice and fine :p
1:11:057 LOOL. Don't offend, but I think this form is awful. Just try with http://puu.sh/dAHe - Well, it kinda looked good in some other pattern that I changed Changed~
1:25:100 If I were you, I'd remove this "jump". It's slow, but someone could moan- Lol moan. Well I think it's fine so keeping it as it is for now
1:28:929 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.- No
2:02:440 Imo, this clap doesn't fit. Feel free to not follow this suggestion, it's ur map after all xD - Random clap that was supposed to be on the next tick. Fixed, thanks
2:51:908 Dude, spacing <3 - It's cool~~ <3

Easy
Nothing at all. HUHUHUUUUUUUUU (remembering Lazy song. I know, I'm stupid)

Finished here! Hope my mod was helpful, if it wasn't helpful just don't kudosu me.

Metro wrote:

boh

1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh

1. 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
2. 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
3. 00:27:015 (3) - ^
4. 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
5. 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies.
6. 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
7. 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too.

1. 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle.
2. 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim.
3. 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
4. 00:28:211 - ^
5. 00:28:371 - ^
6. 00:28:850 - ^
7. 00:29:009 - ^
8. 00:29:488 - ^
9. 00:29:648 - ^
10. 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot.
11. 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this.
12. 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.<
13. 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot.
14. 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point.
15. 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good.
16. 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern.
17. 03:23:983 - Overused timing point.
18. 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part.

1. 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
2. 03:20:312 (1) - ^
3. 03:23:185 (3) - ^
4. 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it.
5. 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff.

Miya wrote:

Hi, m4m :3

General

1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh

Easy

1. 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
2. 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
3. 00:27:015 (3) - ^
4. 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
5. 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies. nah, it doesn't fit there
6. 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
7. 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too. it IS symmetrical ;_;

Miya wrote:

Hi, m4m :3

General

1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh

- Right, fixed that in Marshall's diff

Normal

1. 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle. - Fixed
2. 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim. - Yes ok.
3. 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
4. 00:28:211 - ^
5. 00:28:371 - ^
6. 00:28:850 - ^
7. 00:29:009 - ^
8. 00:29:488 - ^
9. 00:29:648 - ^ - Good point, fixed all.
10. 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot. - oops, missed that one
11. 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this. - I think this is fine. It's fine to go away from the clap-pattern now and then like this imo.
12. 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.< - yeah, they're from [Hard], which is why they are there xD Deleted~~
13. 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot. - Yes, missed this one too <<
14. 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point. - Boh fixed
15. 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good. - Yes
16. 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern. - Keeping it because I like it xD/b]
17. 03:23:983 - Overused timing point. [b]kiaifountain
18. 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part. - I am going to keep this, because well, I just don't believe this slider is that hard to read.

Hard

1. 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
2. 03:20:312 (1) - ^
3. 03:23:185 (3) - ^ - All of these are intentional. First one is because of the "come on" and all that stuff. 2nd because it kinda leads you from the first combo to the next one, and the last one because it just fits imo :p
4. 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it. - I think it fit's well, so keeping it
5. 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff. - Again, I'd rather not remove this.

Ok, that's all from me.
Good luck~

1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there.
2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag?

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs?
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool.

1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them?
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange.

Hinsvar wrote:

marshall_racer's Easy

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. - Hya ~~ Time to finally fix this mod. Sorry it took so long xD

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there. - It's the full song though, so does this still have to be in the source?
2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag? - ^

>marshall_racer's Easy

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

>Normal

1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs? - Well, I just like it for no reason xD
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool. - <3

>Hard

1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them? - Because I like it Well it's mostly for HP recovery before the long slider.
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange. ;_;

Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) - Ah, oops. Curved the slider a bit~
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider- Yupp, you're right. Fixed~
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?- I probably had some deep meaning ending the slider there, but I don't remember it now, so changed.
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay - Hmm, I think i got it fixed.


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm - I like this like it is actually. I'm following that long sound in the background xD
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap? - There is a stop here in the lyrics, and I want to add this stop into the mapping, so no changes


Once you done, PM me for recheck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^ ughh, getting creative and instantly everyone getting picky ... well, ok
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner? because I changed it to one long one x3

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

IceBeam wrote:

hi again!

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s - Sure xD

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s - I really want to just follow the vocals here

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!

IceBeam wrote:

ranked!

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre

CXu wrote:

Waitwhat just happened