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EastNewSound - Hiiro Gekka Kyousai no Zetsu [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

K o g u r e wrote:

3.24
i hope this is enough and thanks for help
It's OK to me, I wonder that the BATs are gonna think about that, though.

Upped.
Garven
I'm wary of that star rating, honestly.

And the Normal is still mostly just 1/1 rhythms, despite the remap. That's why your star rating is so high.
The map itself is fine though - I'd just nazi sliders for the most part.
Try varying things up like you did at 03:12:092 (1) - instead of relying on the 1/1/1/1 so much.
Kogure

Garven wrote:

I'm wary of that star rating, honestly.

And the Normal is still mostly just 1/1 rhythms, despite the remap. That's why your star rating is so high.
The map itself is fine though - I'd just nazi sliders for the most part.
Try varying things up like you did at 03:12:092 (1) - instead of relying on the 1/1/1/1 so much.
Well, i tried doing a lot of other patterns, but i forgot that this was the easiest difficulty, and the rating had to be lower. So i had to remove a lot of these leaving 1/1 rhythms in their place. Dunno what else can i do without increasing the star rating.
TicClick
I like it, haven't heard EastNewSound for a long time.

General
  1. Nothing, but I keep reading kite.png as "late", lol.
Kogure's Normal
AR +1. It will make some patterns nicer and good-looking, for example, 02:34:892 (3,4,5,6,7)
  1. 00:26:092 (1,2) - bad overlap, space them out a little to avoid it; the same goes for 00:27:692 (3,4)
  2. 00:56:492 (3) - ehh, why would you "skip" downbeat? I'd like to hit a note with finish rather than sliding it (I'm talking about 00:57:692)
  3. 01:10:492 (1) - I don't like how it looks here, because it overlaps slider's end
  4. 01:14:692 (2,3) - be careful with this, I see you don't use this rhythm later, so people might fail at hitting 01:20:892 (2) thinking it follows the same rhythm as your slider I just linked above
  5. 02:59:692 (2,3,4) - looks awful to me because of this part: http://puu.sh/vCtb
  6. 03:21:692 (1) - looks too simple after those central slidersi
Hard
  1. 00:07:692 (1,2,3,1) - you can use finish from (S) sampleset here and add them for these four notes
  2. 00:11:692 (1,1,1) - ultimate laziness. What if you map through them?
  3. 00:17:692 (1) - finish
  4. 00:20:892 (3,4,5) - why do you need overlaps? Increase spacing by 0.1 here and it will save tha situation. The same goes for 00:22:892 (7,8,9) and other similar things
  5. 00:51:292 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern looks (mostly of (1))
  6. 01:14:692 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - let's be honest, I failed to read it correctly from the first time
  7. 01:16:692 (6) - I don't think you need this slow slider here, it's better to hit something at 01:16:892 than "skip" it (as on Normal)
  8. 01:23:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - straight linesssss oh no
  9. 01:28:692 (7) - unbalanced, its top looks bigger than the bottom
  10. 01:31:492 (7) - NC? Again, I wouldn't skip downbeat at 01:31:292 because of rhythm and other stuff
  11. 01:48:492 (7) - what I suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/320777
  12. 01:54:392 - add a note (according to voice)?
  13. 03:16:892 (6) - unbalanced; move central anchorpoint up a bit
  14. 03:31:092 (1) - remove nc from this note and add it to the slider after it
I'd say you needed to pay some attention to patterns, not only to the rhythm. Anyway, you still have time to fix all these things.

Collab
  1. Kite
    1. 00:08:892 (8) - add NC
    2. 00:12:892 (8) - the same, add NC? Just to denote finishes, the same goes for all the similar moments
  1. lolcubes
    1. Nothing!
  1. Tenshi-nyan
    1. 00:54:492 (3) - long sliders like this one look much better if you use two waypoints instead of one to make them curvy. Please, fix it
    2. 04:37:492 (3,4) - don't just copy. Move them elsewhere, even few pixels down & to the center wold make them better (if you disagree, then mark this pair of sliders with NC)
    3. 04:41:892 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - lack of imagination, huh? I wouldn't put so many straight lines in a row
    4. 05:12:092 - I'd add kiai fountain here
  1. Moonshade
    1. Nothing!
  1. Magicphoenix
    1. 01:39:292 (5) - why don't you add NC here, according to lyrics?
    2. 01:48:892 (4) - the same, NC looks better here than three notes back
    3. 02:00:692 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ahahahahahahaha~
    4. 02:43:492 (1,2,3,4) - I see you're trying to balance the slider; not sure if necessary
    5. 04:04:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - its beginning looks strange. Re-space it please
04:54:492 (1) - it scares me, you know why.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
@ TicClick, thanks for the mod. I informed Kogure about the mod.

I chose to ignore most of your suggestions for Hard, but made almost all changes in the Collab. I also reworked that part with the many stupid straight jump sliders.

Enjoy your kudosu.
Kogure
Did some changes and did TicClick's mod except:

TicClick wrote:

Kogure's Normal
  1. 00:56:492 (3) - ehh, why would you "skip" downbeat? I'd like to hit a note with finish rather than sliding it (I'm talking about 00:57:692)
  2. 03:21:692 (1) - looks too simple after those central slidersi
Thanks for le mod :D

Download: EastNewSound - Hiiro Gekka Kyousai no Zetsu (Tenshi-nyan) [Kogure's Normal].osu
Diasios
[General]

  • Tags: Add "Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor"
    Audio Lead-In: 1
    Why don't you make an Easy difficulty? Normal is kinda too "hard" for being the easier difficulty, and it has more than 3-star difficulty level, too.

[Kogure's Normal]

  • 01:37:692 (4,5) - Delete (5). Extend (4) by 1/4.
    01:50:492 (3,4) - Delete (4). Extend (3) by 1/4.

[Hard]

  • 02:58:892 (x) - Add a circle.

[Collab]

  • 01:10:092 (x) - Add a circle.
    04:33:692 (green timing section) - Remove Kiai.

Nice map, good job~ :)
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • Tags: Add "Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor"
    Audio Lead-In: 1
    Why don't you make an Easy difficulty? Normal is kinda too "hard" for being the easier difficulty, and it has more than 3-star difficulty level, too.

[Kogure's Normal]

  • 01:37:692 (4,5) - Delete (5). Extend (4) by 1/4.
    01:50:492 (3,4) - Delete (4). Extend (3) by 1/4.

[Hard]

  • 02:58:892 (x) - Add a circle.

[Collab]

  • 01:10:092 (x) - Add a circle.
    04:33:692 (green timing section) - Remove Kiai.

Nice map, good job~ :)
Kudosu for the tags. Changed nothing besides that.
those
[Normal]
  1. 02:00:092 (1) - Remove the new combo from this spinner since it appears to be part of the previous combo.
  2. 02:59:692 (2) - Surely you can make this work out a bit more so that (3) doesn't look so awkward. Apply changes to (4).
  3. 03:48:892 (1) - Remove the new combo from this spinner since it appears to be part of the previous combo.
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:692 (1) - Should be a kickback slider. The 5/4 section is made up of 4 groupings of 2 mirroring melodies, so you should map it like that. The last three spinners are fine.
  2. 01:16:692 (6) - Very misleading. In addition, a slider/object should be starting at 01:16:892 - .
Will the Taiko be ranked or approved?
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

those wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 02:00:092 (1) - Remove the new combo from this spinner since it appears to be part of the previous combo.
  2. 02:59:692 (2) - Surely you can make this work out a bit more so that (3) doesn't look so awkward. Apply changes to (4).
  3. 03:48:892 (1) - Remove the new combo from this spinner since it appears to be part of the previous combo.
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:692 (1) - Should be a kickback slider. The 5/4 section is made up of 4 groupings of 2 mirroring melodies, so you should map it like that. The last three spinners are fine.
  2. 01:16:692 (6) - Very misleading. In addition, a slider/object should be starting at 01:16:892 - . Added fast sliders instead of slow ones. Dunno if that's better, but oh well.
Will the Taiko be ranked or approved?
Fixed all, including the stuff from the Normal since it's minor stuff only.
Taiko will go for ranked AFAIK, but I'm not quite familiar with the ruleset for Taiko diffs...
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Tenshi-nyan ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting a AudioLeadIn 500 please.

[Collab]


  1. 00:10:892 (13) - You are forgot add new combo to here.
  2. 01:45:692 (1,2) - Try perfect stack.
  3. 02:00:792 (6) - Remove this circle sound much better.

[Taiko]


  1. Please +2ms offset same as other diff.

[Hard]



  1. 00:15:192 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  2. 00:17:192 (1) - ^

[Kogure's Normal]


  1. 00:26:892 (2,3) - Too close and wrong spacing.
  2. 02:00:092 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  3. 03:48:892 (1) - ^

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Thanks for modding this, Rika.

Fixed everything.

You think you can bubble this? Been waiting for ages.
Leorda
Oh hi there

[General]
* Inconsistent red timing section. You have to make it consistent

AIBat v2.0 wrote:

Timing Sections
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [Collab]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:692, BPM of 150.000
00:17:692, BPM of 150.000
03:50:492, BPM of 150.000
04:08:092, BPM of 150.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:692, BPM of 150.000
00:17:692, BPM of 150.000
03:50:492, BPM of 150.000
04:08:092, BPM of 150.000

- [Kogure's Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:692, BPM of 150.000
00:17:692, BPM of 150.000
03:50:492, BPM of 150.000
04:08:092, BPM of 150.000

- [Ono's Taiko Oni]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:690, BPM of 150.000 <- it should be 00:01:692
00:17:690, BPM of 150.000 <- it should be 00:17:692
03:50:490, BPM of 150.000
04:08:090, BPM of 150.000
* Inconsistent tags, make sure the tags is not have an extra space. Also, add "lyrical crimson" into tags, since this song is come from that album

AIBat v2.0 wrote:

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Collab] : Magicphoenix Kite lolcubes onosakihito MoonShade nayuta haduki nano u.n. owen was her kogure Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor
- [Hard] : Magicphoenix Kite lolcubes onosakihito MoonShade nayuta haduki nano u.n. owen was her kogure Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor
- [Kogure's Normal] : Magicphoenix Kite lolcubes onosakihito MoonShade nayuta haduki nano u.n. owen was her kogure Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor
- [Ono's Taiko Oni] : Magicphoenix Kite lolcubes onosakihito MoonShade nayuta haduki nano u.n. owen was her kogure Embodiment of Scarlet Devil EoSD TH6 Extra Stage Boss Sacred Factor

[Kogure's Normal]
00:30:892 (3) - Whistle at end slider?
01:03:692 (4) - Add clap at head slider
01:58:492 (1) - A bit overlapped by slider, which it seems I don't like it D:


[Hard]
00:17:192 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be blend the spinner. Do colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/355135
00:19:692 (1) - ^
00:48:892 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
01:32:092 - Add note here with whistle
01:39:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It doesn't looks like a triangle pattern....
02:57:692 (5,6) - These jumps are intentional?


Once you done, forum PM me
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Updated.


Didn't change 01:32:092 - and 02:57:692 (5,6) - in the Hard because I intend it to be this way.
Leorda
IRC Modding
* (Kogure's Normal) - Add clap at head slider in 01:03:692 (4)
* (Hard) - Add a hitsound for 01:13:692 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) and next similar part

Bubble #1
UnderminE
Yess bubble bubble! O/
/late
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
BATs/MATs

Y U NO check this map?
lolcubes
Some are a part of the collab. ;)
OnosakiHito

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

BATs/MATs

Y U NO check this map?
I lol'd.

I will check the taiko one more time to be sure everything is allright.
Bilko_old
I would put this BG ^_^
http://puu.sh/Qbyv
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Been waiting for 2 months now.

What the fuck is wrong with this community? Seriously?
Garven
You already know my thoughts on the normal. *shrug*
OnosakiHito
I will post tomorrow my update.

Edit: Okay, I will do it this weekend lol
Garven

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

You could at least still mod it.
It's outrageous that I have to wait for months for my map to be even looked at by someone qualified to bubble/rank it.

Garven wrote:

I'm wary of that star rating, honestly.

And the Normal is still mostly just 1/1 rhythms, despite the remap. That's why your star rating is so high.

Try varying things up like you did at 03:12:092 (1) - instead of relying on the 1/1/1/1 so much.
You don't have to be hitting the beat every single moment. You can leave gaps. Leave them in groups of two. Lower the star rating a bit or make an easy. Also raise OD by at least +2.
OnosakiHito
Updated!

Download: http://puu.sh/10Kwe
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Uploaded the update for the Taiko diff, now waiting for rebub.
Kite
Since new rule you can let the collab diff be ranked now instead
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Kite wrote:

Since new rule you can let the collab diff be ranked now instead
This was submissed before that "awesome" (who the fuck came up with that horrible idea?) idea came to existence, so what the fuck.

Ah, never mind, I misread it.
Kite
Actually I am not quite sure, since you recieved a bubble before the new rule was announced.
I guess you are free to choose wether the Collab diff goes for approval or ranked? I am confused xD
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Reviving this, maybe something will happen.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
I'm back (semi-active?) and I'm gonna try to get this map finished and maybe even ranked.
It might take a while, though.

Also, let me apologize for my behaviour from back then. I was... quite angry, and by the looks of it, not much has changed since back then, except for one thing: my patience. So let's get this rolling.
OnosakiHito
Oh, look. What a surprise. lol
Nardoxyribonucleic

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I'm back (semi-active?) and I'm gonna try to get this map finished and maybe even ranked.
It might take a while, though.

Also, let me apologize for my behaviour from back then. I was... quite angry, and by the looks of it, not much has changed since back then, except for one thing: my patience. So let's get this rolling.
May I make a Muzukashii to complete the Taiko spread?
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
I don't know a thing about taiko, but if you want to do then why not?
If anyone else wants to contribute, go right ahead.
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