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Thanks for mod.[-TSG-] wrote:
Great Song, Hopfully this mod is fine :3
00:38:523 (271,272) - Ctrl+G to Keep the rhythm I remapped this part under fantazy's mod
02:05:484 Move Spinner to red tick and add a Don here No, a spinner start is enough to emphasis that part.
[Optional] 01:36:366 You can add a Don Here and Here 01:36:464 imo lost emphasis on 01:36:661 (119) -
yea ik its short, i never modded this style of mapping so its kinda hard for me xd
sorry i couldn't help much ;-;
Smallwu wrote:
Whoops thats a little awkward
[General][Universe]
- What HP and OD mean? (5.2, 6.3) >Ignore it lul
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- 00:22:837 (151) - k更好? 我不清楚你是不是故意這樣放 因為它音色比(150)高 而且你在後面也用了相同的樣式
- 00:27:347 (186) - 移除 並將(185)改為k - 你原本就放得不錯 可是我覺得那個特別響亮的東西還是凸顯比較好 so awkward to be played
- 01:04:308 (436) - k 這裡畢竟是整段的音高最高處awa? The stream I used does not fit k as beginning
- 01:10:582 (483) - k 後面另外四顆跟著做改動也比較適合, kdkkd kddkd or kkdkd - 因為上述 :3 Changed in my own way
- 01:27:543 - 01:27:739 - Add k 因為有鼓聲 >lost emphasis on other notes
- 01:30:876 (85,86) - Ctrl+G 因為最後那響亮的"叮" 雖然前面沒跟 但那畢竟是在串內 不太會注意, 最後的總是比較明顯 d is to emphasis every start of the bar tho
- 01:31:268 (87,88,89) - kd k 跟隨"叮" it is just reverse of the current pattern. This is ok imo
- 01:34:896 (109,110,111,112) - Ctrl+G ^ ^
- 01:36:072 (117,118) - Ctrl+G ^ ^
- 01:36:464 - 01:37:053 - 我覺得直接變七連打來弄做你在跟鼓聲比較好
01:40:386 - 01:52:935 - 感覺鼓聲可以全跟 因為這裡音效很少 每顆都很突兀 像是:- 01:41:563 (4) - 移動至 01:41:759 - 這裡不會造成玩家困擾 也能正確的跟隨音效 感覺這樣擺比較(後面相同)
- 01:42:249 - Add k follow鼓聲 不過我倒是覺得這個還好:3 (後面相同)
^ fixed in my own way- 02:00:778 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - D k d k d d k k 玩些花樣 >I dont want to choke players on calm parts
- 02:05:190 (92,93,94) - d (或是93, 94) 不確定你是否有跟隨那個逐漸降低的音效 如果有就這樣改唄:3 the spinner supposed to be a d, so I use k to emphasis the different of pitch.
- 02:53:915 (200) - k fx has a low pitch
- 03:46:857 (45,46) - D K 或是變為ddk 比較推薦後者 因為你可能比較想要突出後面的D used 1/6 instead
- 03:47:445 - 03:50:582 - 大改一下吧&W&? I think it fits as it is
- 03:50:974 - Kiai 開頭移到這似乎比較合適 因為 03:50:582 - 03:50:974 - 幾乎沒聲音 Not consistent with 1st kiai
- 04:09:112 - Add k? 和前面的變成七連打是差不多的效果 只不過ˋ這邊不能七連 就改用五連 d instead
有點久沒摸了 可能質量會差些:3
GL! p.s. 動感些吧>W<
Vulkin wrote:
pp
-Universe-
00:01:563 - isnt intro too dense to be an intro? less than a sec and already 1/8 lol >This belongs to extra diff so its k
00:15:092 - to 00:53:327 - , no 1/1 break O_O, could add them or nah?, also it repeats alot through the song so not putting it over and over again because i dont want to annoy ya ;_; ^
00:53:621 - i hear those dk d as a dk dd, could follow those missing notes as well fix'd
01:29:406 (71) - why not k?, higher pitch than 01:28:621 (65) - >consistency
02:24:308 - I think you could add a bit more variety to the notes here, the chiptune sound is too clear here to be ignored imo >added some notes
02:54:308 - i can already smell the pp here :^), feels a bit weird to me to play though
05:01:366 - ^ The 1/8s I used is to fit that short fxs.
05:15:288 - k overdose, too many >.<'' >What would you expect here =w=
cant find that many issue
good luck!!
Below: No comment to fixed.yuzu__rinrin wrote:
game-in req M4M
[universe]I do not think it's bad. Just my style is different.
- 00:15:419 (98,99,100) - ddK You can see that a high-pitched sound is ringing. >The notes are emphasizing different instruments so its ok.
- 00:29:798 (204) - k
00:30:386 (208) - k
00:31:366 (216) - k
00:31:954 (220) - k
00:32:249 (222) - d
00:33:523 (230) - k
You can follow the sound of the high range.
>Following the fx pitch 100% makes the map feels dull in overall.- 00:42:347 (295) - k
00:42:935 (299) - k
00:43:915 (307) - k
00:44:503 (311) - k
00:44:798 (313) - d
00:46:072 (321) - k
00:48:621 (339) - k
00:49:210 (343) - k
^same
^- 00:53:915 (383) - move to 00:54:013 - drum. Perhaps it was arranged considering the player's side, but it is unpleasant because it does not match the sound.
- 00:55:484 (390) - move to 00:55:582 - ^
- 00:57:053 (399) - move to 00:57:151 - ^
- 00:58:621 (406) - move to 00:58:719 - ^
- 01:00:190 (417) - move to 01:00:288 - ^
- 01:01:759 (425) - move to 01:01:857 - ^
- 01:03:327 (433) - move to 01:03:425 - ^
>This was done in Vulkin's mod- 01:30:876 (85,86) - ctrl+g Subjectivity >Not consistent with 01:18:425 (1) -
- 01:53:621 - add d I think that can step up from here as well
- 01:56:759 - add d ^
^Fixed- 02:30:582 (31,41,45,53,57) - k
02:34:798 (60,61) - ctrl+g
02:35:876 (67) - k
>Unchanged, Reason given- 02:44:700 (134,138,146,150) - k
02:47:347 (153,154) - ctrl+g
02:48:425 (160,178,182,189) - k
02:52:347 (188) - d
>^- 03:46:955 - add d. drum sound is ddk >1/6 already
- 03:52:347 (77) - move to 03:52:249 -
03:52:543 (78,79) - move to 03:52:445 - and kd
I think 2-4 pattern is better.
>Song doesn't call out 2-4 pattern- 03:59:504 - add d
03:59:667 - add k
03:59:732 - add k
drum sound.
>This is right but I think it is too quiet to be heard at full speed.- 04:04:112 (165) - move to 04:04:210 -
4-4 pattern. >I made it 4-2-1
I think that it is a good method to ask modder who is good at Instrumental.
good luck.
sing216 wrote:
wai la dalao
[Universe]
- 01:09:210 (474,475,476) - kkd
01:09:602 (477,478) - dk
跟番前面先kkd之後ddk
- 01:29:210 (69) - change to d
01:29:406 (71) - change to k
唔同聲但相同pattern感覺上好似冇咁好, 而且呢part三串都係用dkdkkd >This part I fixed in my own way
- 01:36:464 (119) - add d
03:00:974 (230) - add d >Why?
03:49:112 (60) - add d 加呢粒音感覺上轉折個下會自然啲 >I know this is strange to heard with, but I dont think this solution worked well too.
- 03:52:347 (80) - change to d
03:52:935 (84,85,86,87) - change to kd dk
藍音跟番節奏既聲 >But the kd is used to emphasis the pitch drop of that part.
新手唔識mod圖, 希望以上幫到您
good luck !!
16:00 Chocola_2287: ye
16:00 iloveyou4ever: 01:27:892 - 01:27:408 - 01:28:053 - 01:28:537 -
16:00 iloveyou4ever: I can only hear sound for these four timestamps ;w;
16:00 iloveyou4ever: 01:27:247 (367,368,369) - these too
16:01 iloveyou4ever: but you put too much here lol
16:01 Chocola_2287: those are pitch change
16:01 iloveyou4ever: 01:29:343 - and transition from drum to vocal are too weird
16:01 iloveyou4ever: are you sure????
16:01 iloveyou4ever: I cant judge much tho...
16:01 Chocola_2287: 01:29:585 (389) - remove this la
16:02 Chocola_2287: 00:25:069 (74) - this too for consistency
16:02 Chocola_2287: 3q
16:02 iloveyou4ever: 01:29:989 - this part is good
16:02 Chocola_2287: this part is hard to map ga
16:02 iloveyou4ever: 01:40:311 -
16:02 iloveyou4ever: this is fucking weird
16:02 Chocola_2287: so calm, need make my own patterns to fit song
16:03 iloveyou4ever: yes your patterns fit the song
16:03 Chocola_2287: 01:40:150 (10) - finisher?
16:03 iloveyou4ever: and some parts I dont understand what you're mapping for
16:03 iloveyou4ever: some parts are very clear
16:03 iloveyou4ever: so weird ;w;
16:03 iloveyou4ever: up to you :D
16:03 Chocola_2287: sad
16:03 iloveyou4ever: mind self mod first?
16:04 iloveyou4ever: let me decide should this be uploaded :thinking:
16:04 Chocola_2287: see see sin
16:04 Chocola_2287: by that I can assume it is not going to be in the set
16:04 iloveyou4ever: or just put link in map description?
16:04 iloveyou4ever: emm I will think about it...
16:04 Chocola_2287: edged
16:04 Chocola_2287: your set, your choice la
16:04 iloveyou4ever: more difficulties in fact is good
16:05 iloveyou4ever: but so hard to manage...
16:05 iloveyou4ever: nardo+skylish+charlotte already 3 GDers
16:05 iloveyou4ever: I am fucking done zz
16:05 iloveyou4ever: give me sometime to decide
16:05 Chocola_2287: ok
16:06 iloveyou4ever: mod your map first sin
16:07 Chocola_2287: hm?
16:07 Chocola_2287: oh
16:07 Chocola_2287: thanks
16:07 Chocola_2287: I can IRC if you could
16:07 Chocola_2287: I don't prefer it but I can
16:08 iloveyou4ever: emm I prefer IRC
16:08 iloveyou4ever: I hate typing in forum in fact w
16:09 Chocola_2287: sad
16:09 Chocola_2287: you like la then, but dont forget to savelog for kds
16:10 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:10 iloveyou4ever: I dont care kudos lol
16:10 iloveyou4ever: useless piece of shit
16:10 Chocola_2287: welp
16:11 Chocola_2287: actually 7 mods already
16:11 Chocola_2287: gg
16:11 iloveyou4ever: 00:14:700 -
16:11 iloveyou4ever: K
16:11 iloveyou4ever: high pitch
16:11 Chocola_2287: overemphasis the pitch actually make the flow weird
16:11 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:12 Chocola_2287: moreover they are same instrument so -> nochange
16:12 iloveyou4ever: seems you are mapping to the bass most of the time
16:13 iloveyou4ever: 00:27:151 - change to K 00:27:347 - change to D 00:27:445 - remove 00:27:543 - add a note here
16:14 Chocola_2287: 00:27:151. reason similar to above
16:14 Chocola_2287: wait
16:14 Chocola_2287: is your version not updated
16:15 Chocola_2287: 00:27:347 D = unrankable
16:15 iloveyou4ever: so I told you to remove 00:27:445 -
16:15 Chocola_2287: i
16:15 Chocola_2287: nvm
16:16 iloveyou4ever: normal notes with same colour is so bored
16:16 iloveyou4ever: with main beat
16:16 iloveyou4ever: finishers should be put
16:16 iloveyou4ever: 00:27:445 - and in fact no melody here
16:16 iloveyou4ever: 00:27:543 - and drum lies here
16:16 Chocola_2287: if 00:27:347 - D , reject 00:27:543 (applying skylish formula)
16:17 Chocola_2287: D should be able to cover that part
16:17 iloveyou4ever: oh ok up to you
16:17 Chocola_2287: if others mention again then prob add
16:17 iloveyou4ever: giving a break would be good too
16:17 Chocola_2287: for now I apply almighty skylish formula
16:18 iloveyou4ever: skylish formula??
16:18 iloveyou4ever: 1/16 = 32th note?
16:19 iloveyou4ever: emm the notes later on are so ''repetitive'' (not in -ve meaning)
16:19 Chocola_2287: he said D = long-lasting voice
16:19 iloveyou4ever: Lo
16:19 iloveyou4ever: :o
16:19 Chocola_2287: repectitive = good in overall structure
16:19 iloveyou4ever: ye
16:19 iloveyou4ever: so I will skip that
16:19 Chocola_2287: = what BN/QAT want
16:19 Chocola_2287: ok
16:20 iloveyou4ever: 01:05:092 -
16:20 iloveyou4ever: 1/6 is on here
16:21 Chocola_2287: oversimplification here
16:21 Chocola_2287: copy nishit pattern
16:21 iloveyou4ever: I agree but no
16:21 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8457088
16:21 iloveyou4ever: at least I will change like this ;w;
16:21 Chocola_2287: it is not obvious to hear the difference wor
16:21 Chocola_2287: very contradicted, I will think about it
16:22 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:22 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:151 -
16:22 iloveyou4ever: D?
16:22 iloveyou4ever: main beat?
16:22 iloveyou4ever: d doesnt fit
16:23 Chocola_2287: 01:05:876 (455) - this no D, for consistency 497 shouldn't be D either
16:23 Chocola_2287: but well
16:23 iloveyou4ever: 01:06:268 - consistent with this
16:23 iloveyou4ever: not this 01:05:876 -
16:23 Chocola_2287: ok then
16:23 iloveyou4ever: main beat
16:23 Chocola_2287: fixed
16:23 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:24 iloveyou4ever: 01:21:072 -
16:24 iloveyou4ever: d
16:24 iloveyou4ever: for variation
16:25 Chocola_2287: 01:21:170 (18) - pitch drop here wor
16:25 Chocola_2287: also the next 2-2 pattern I have variation already
16:25 Chocola_2287: 01:22:347 (25,26,27,28) -
16:26 iloveyou4ever: oh ok valid reason
16:27 iloveyou4ever: 01:34:896 -
16:27 iloveyou4ever: high pitch k?
16:27 Chocola_2287: ok geh
16:27 Chocola_2287: changed
16:28 iloveyou4ever: if I were you I'd add finisher on the kiai time ;w;
16:28 iloveyou4ever: 01:42:249 - add note cuz the bass
16:29 Chocola_2287: it is not strong enough to be emphasized tho
16:30 Chocola_2287: also this is a calm part, I would like to reduce unnecessery fx emphasizing
16:30 iloveyou4ever: 01:40:386 ~ 01:43:523 I'd consider this as one phrase(two bars)
16:30 iloveyou4ever: and you should link them together
16:30 iloveyou4ever: ehhh ok then
16:31 iloveyou4ever: ye calm part
16:31 iloveyou4ever: also to develop spread
16:32 iloveyou4ever: emm the later part is similar and nothing noticable
16:32 iloveyou4ever: 02:29:602 - but here you should add a note
16:33 Chocola_2287: I moved the next note to that spot
16:33 iloveyou4ever: oh ok sounds good too
16:33 iloveyou4ever: and next part is just repeat XD
16:34 Chocola_2287: ye
16:34 Chocola_2287: so just skip is ok
16:34 iloveyou4ever: 02:54:308 -
16:34 iloveyou4ever: WHAT THE FUCK DUDE
16:34 iloveyou4ever: emm I am not going to ask you to change that
16:35 iloveyou4ever: just move on~
16:35 Chocola_2287: every 1/8 is emphasis the same fxs wor so I dont think it is a problem
16:35 iloveyou4ever: 02:59:504 - 02:59:602 - add note
16:35 iloveyou4ever: the 1/4 sfx is quite obvious
16:36 Chocola_2287: I can only hear a fx there
16:36 Chocola_2287: cant 1/4
16:36 iloveyou4ever: similar fx like 02:57:053 -
16:37 Chocola_2287: no
16:37 Chocola_2287: they are different
16:37 iloveyou4ever: 03:00:386 - oppositely no sound effect here
16:37 iloveyou4ever: at least the sound effect(musical element) are the same
16:37 Chocola_2287: I can't hear any pitch change at all
16:38 iloveyou4ever: nvm there'll be modders asking you to change that :^>
16:38 Chocola_2287: even if your statement is true, but it is too weak to be emphasized
16:39 iloveyou4ever: emm ok
16:40 iloveyou4ever: 03:49:798 - I'd make a 1/4 stream here
16:40 iloveyou4ever: becuz the music is getting more intense here
16:40 iloveyou4ever: emm but if you want to be consistent then just ignore it
16:41 Chocola_2287: I would like to be consistent
16:41 iloveyou4ever: 03:51:170 - idk what are you mapping to here ;w;
16:41 iloveyou4ever: the ddd
16:42 Chocola_2287: it was dkd but I want to make a pattern flow
16:43 Chocola_2287: if both dkd = strange
16:43 iloveyou4ever: oh ok
16:43 iloveyou4ever: ye
16:43 iloveyou4ever: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8457163
16:43 iloveyou4ever: 03:59:406 -
16:43 iloveyou4ever: map like this pls
16:44 Chocola_2287: lost impact on the patterns afterward because density
16:45 iloveyou4ever: oh yes density
16:45 iloveyou4ever: ok
16:46 iloveyou4ever: 04:25:288 -
16:46 iloveyou4ever: I am sure BN let this ranked dude
16:47 Chocola_2287: similar to weave only wor
16:47 iloveyou4ever: the intensity of the music dont support the stream
16:47 iloveyou4ever: weave intensity is high
16:47 iloveyou4ever: it's quite calm here
16:47 iloveyou4ever: yes similar to weave pattern ;w;
16:48 Chocola_2287: it is epilogue of the kiai tho
16:48 iloveyou4ever: if you insist on keeping this then ok
16:48 iloveyou4ever: nothing to do with the stream
16:49 iloveyou4ever: 04:40:778 -
16:49 iloveyou4ever: so strange to have two bars empty with no break time...
16:50 Chocola_2287: act as a buffer part
16:50 iloveyou4ever: the remaining parts are well developed I think
16:51 Chocola_2287: o
16:51 iloveyou4ever: 04:56:072 -
16:51 iloveyou4ever: change to kdkkd
16:51 iloveyou4ever: 04:49:798 -
16:51 iloveyou4ever: consistent with this
16:52 Chocola_2287: ye
16:52 Chocola_2287: changed
16:53 iloveyou4ever: 05:08:621 -
16:53 iloveyou4ever: this too
16:53 Chocola_2287: did
16:54 iloveyou4ever: 05:19:994 -
16:54 iloveyou4ever: kkkk kk kkkk kk?
16:54 iloveyou4ever: quite subjective tho
16:54 Chocola_2287: same as prev, if other mention as well then I change
16:55 iloveyou4ever: emm nothing else
16:55 Chocola_2287: ok thanks for mod
16:56 iloveyou4ever: and idk should you add ''Dangerous Universe EP'' as tag
16:56 iloveyou4ever: source : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3S0ean3573s
16:56 iloveyou4ever: see the description
16:56 iloveyou4ever: will post thread soon
16:57 Chocola_2287: LOL I thought it is a non-source song