00:07:607 - You already know I hate slowjam, but I think .7 is a bit drastic, .75 or .8 would be better imo
00:53:893 - Sounds like there should be a note here
00:56:636 - Same as before, the LN's prior to these two are fine with no note on the end, because it seems that the sound was only added at the 53:893 note.
01:00:921 (60921|2,61007|3,61007|1,61093|2,61093|3,61093|0) - I think changing this pattern (and it's mirrored version after it) to look like this could enhance the sound, as it's more akin to a staircase than the one you currently have is
01:14:207 (74207|3,74207|2,74207|1) - I know that the triples are overmapped for better impact, but the sound is the same as the doubles, so I would make it so the triples aren't compacted like this one (as in, instead of a 1,2,3 pattern, it's a 1,3,4 type pattern) kind of like you did at 01:15:064 (75064|3,75064|0,75064|2)
01:51:664 (111664|2,111750|1) - Space these like you did the sound at 01:29:721 (89721|0,89807|3)
02:32:978 - Should be a sound here
02:35:378 (155378|3,155378|0,155378|1,155550|1,155550|3,155550|0) - These as triples seems a bit too intense this early on in the section, I would just make them doubles
02:39:836 (159836|3,159836|2) - Make this a triple
02:52:607 (172607|1) - Can't hear a sound that corresponds to this single
02:53:293 (173293|2) - Same for this one
03:01:521 (181521|2,181607|1) - Move each 1 lane to the left, emphasizes how the jack part gets drowned out
03:02:036 (182036|2) - This seems slightly mistimed, I would try the yellow tick
03:06:578 (186578|1) - This entire section is pretty over mapped but it seems fine, also this single should be a double
03:17:550 (197550|2) - Same as before
03:20:293 (200293|1,200293|0,200293|2,200293|3) - I think this would further emphasize the sound if it was a double rather than a quad, because the piano sound on the note is very tame in comparison to the sounds used before it, though that's just flavor, I think the quad still works
03:47:550 (227550|1) - Release timings on these in the section are kind of weird, I would give it a look (I'm not qualified enough with LN's to tell you much except that I think it's off putting)
04:00:321 (240321|3) - Release timing on this should be snapped to the other LN
04:00:771 (240771|1,240771|2) - Snap this to the white tick
04:01:457 (241457|1,241457|0) - Same as before
04:03:514 (243514|2) - I see what you were going for by unsnapping these, but the sound does start on the tick, and you did this a lot throughout the section, so I would go through and look at it and re snap things accordingly.
04:33:921 (273921|1,273921|3) - Make a single
05:05:378 (305378|1,305378|3,305378|0) - Changing the triples here to doubles would help emphasize the intensity of the section (as it's less intense than the previous one)
05:08:978 - To help further emphasize the sound, I would make this section like this
05:19:950 - As there's a small break in the sound here, I would suggest making the LN's into a small staircase style section to match the intensity
05:25:436 - Same as before
05:30:964 - Missing some notes here
05:33:707 - Same as before
06:22:693 - Yeah the section up to this is really long and easy, but I think it would still be nice to map it imo, and if you were to do that I would suggest ending it here.

2018-04-03 19:43 Chrubble: yo toaph i'd like to make a request for dans la mer before it eventually gets loved
2018-04-03 19:43 TheToaphster: uhh
2018-04-03 19:43 TheToaphster: ok
2018-04-03 19:43 TheToaphster: i dont actually know if its getting loved tho
2018-04-03 19:43 TheToaphster: theres a possibility but idk
2018-04-03 19:43 Chrubble: uhh it might but idk
2018-04-03 19:44 TheToaphster: i need to fix shit in it anyway tho so shoot ur suggestion
2018-04-03 19:44 Chrubble: i just wanted to ask if you could change the mp3 to a higher quality one
2018-04-03 19:44 TheToaphster: u got a higher quality one
2018-04-03 19:44 TheToaphster: if so i gotchu fam
2018-04-03 19:44 TheToaphster: actually jinjin's probably has a higher quality one
2018-04-03 19:44 Chrubble: jinjin's map is much higher quality
2018-04-03 19:44 Chrubble: yeah
2018-04-03 19:44 TheToaphster: and/or the ranked standard one
2018-04-03 19:45 Chrubble: it's a very noticable difference and it's been bothering me a bit
2018-04-03 19:45 TheToaphster: i seem to do that a lot
2018-04-03 19:45 TheToaphster: idk
2018-04-03 19:46 Chrubble: it's alright
2018-04-03 19:46 Chrubble: lots of others seem to do that too
2018-04-03 19:46 Chrubble: but it's a simple fix i think?
2018-04-03 19:47 Chrubble: just shifting offset of the SVs and notes to fit the new mp3 right?
2018-04-03 19:47 TheToaphster: yeah it should be fine
2018-04-03 19:47 TheToaphster: my computer may or may not have an aneurism in the process
2018-04-03 19:47 TheToaphster: but we'll get there lmao
2018-04-03 19:47 Chrubble: lmao cool cool B)
2018-04-03 19:54 TheToaphster: ok it should be fixed
2018-04-03 19:54 TheToaphster: gonna ungraveyard and update it real quick
2018-04-03 19:55 Chrubble: oo nice
2018-04-03 19:56 TheToaphster: any other suggestions u have
2018-04-03 19:56 TheToaphster: since ill be changing the map up anyways
2018-04-03 19:57 Chrubble: uhh i think i might have some but don't remember much
2018-04-03 19:57 Chrubble: gonna have to play it again to see
2018-04-03 20:00 TheToaphster: ok its updated
2018-04-03 20:00 TheToaphster: u can re-download now for gud mp3
2018-04-03 20:06 Chrubble: mmmm yeS
2018-04-03 20:06 Chrubble: spicy mp3
2018-04-03 20:06 Chrubble: thanks <3
2018-04-03 20:06 TheToaphster: woo just 98'd with almost no warmup
2018-04-03 20:06 TheToaphster: wew
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: ok so just so you know
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: the parts im already planning on changing are:
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: most of the jump-jack transitions
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: 02:41:070 -
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: this part
2018-04-03 20:07 TheToaphster: 03:03:013 (183013|0,183184|3,183184|2,183270|1,183270|3,183356|2,183356|0,183441|1,183441|0,183527|2,183527|3,183613|1,183613|3,183699|2,183699|1,183699|0) -
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: these glut patterns
2018-04-03 20:08 Chrubble: ln slowjam still kills me lmao
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: 03:03:013 (183013|0,183184|2,183184|3,183270|3,183270|1,183356|0,183356|2,183441|0,183441|1,183527|3,183527|2,183613|3,183613|1,183699|0,183699|1,183699|2) -
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: 03:24:956 -
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: sorry
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: this
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: im changing this inverse transition a bit because the end of it is garbage
2018-04-03 20:08 TheToaphster: i think those are the big ones
2018-04-03 20:09 Chrubble: yeah i agree with those
2018-04-03 20:10 Chrubble: that first one was pretty difficult to get
2018-04-03 20:10 Chrubble: also 03:01:041 (181041|3) - i think you could put some notes in place of the LN
2018-04-03 20:10 TheToaphster: uhh
2018-04-03 20:10 TheToaphster: i had that before
2018-04-03 20:10 TheToaphster: and uhh
2018-04-03 20:10 TheToaphster: no
2018-04-03 20:10 TheToaphster: the sounds are so out of whack there
2018-04-03 20:11 TheToaphster: what i think ill do actually is maybe put a constant 1/4 stream?
2018-04-03 20:12 Chrubble: yeah i think that could work
2018-04-03 20:12 Chrubble: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10630551 something liket his
2018-04-03 20:12 Chrubble: this*
2018-04-03 20:13 TheToaphster: yeye
2018-04-03 20:13 TheToaphster: im also changing the SVs there to be a bit more readable and less annoying
2018-04-03 20:13 Chrubble: that's good
2018-04-03 20:15 Chrubble: also 03:01:899 (181899|2) - should probably shift this LN down a 1/4th beat to match with the melody
2018-04-03 20:16 Chrubble: i found myself hitting that part much earlier cause that part is only mapped to the drum
2018-04-03 20:16 TheToaphster: oh that was part of the stream
2018-04-03 20:16 TheToaphster: im doing the piano at that point now
2018-04-03 20:16 TheToaphster: because its easier to pinpoint and the SVs will handle the other sounds
2018-04-03 20:18 Chrubble: wait did i copy the wrong thing
2018-04-03 20:18 Chrubble: where do you hear the piano
2018-04-03 20:18 Chrubble: 03:01:984 (181984|2) -
2018-04-03 20:18 TheToaphster: you can hear it in the background
2018-04-03 20:18 TheToaphster: theres a descending piano
2018-04-03 20:18 TheToaphster: or something
2018-04-03 20:18 TheToaphster: 01:47:841 -
2018-04-03 20:18 TheToaphster: same kinda sound as here
2018-04-03 20:19 Chrubble: ahh i hear it now
2018-04-03 20:20 Chrubble: i still wanna leave that suggestion open though
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: yeye thats fine
2018-04-03 20:20 Chrubble: that hand is very hard to hit on time
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: we'll see how everything goes
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: well
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: like i said
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: its not there anymore
2018-04-03 20:20 TheToaphster: its just a 1/4 stream
2018-04-03 20:21 Chrubble: ohhh gotchu
2018-04-03 20:21 Chrubble: might've misread earlier sorry
2018-04-03 20:23 Chrubble: 03:01:984 (181984|2) - transition into this pattern could be better I feel
2018-04-03 20:24 TheToaphster: did u link the wrong thing
2018-04-03 20:24 Chrubble: yes
2018-04-03 20:24 Chrubble: gotta find it again whoops
2018-04-03 20:24 Chrubble: 04:32:327 (272327|0,272413|1,272499|2,272584|1,272670|0) - there we go
2018-04-03 20:25 Chrubble: i'd suggest changing this pattern so that it alternates hands a bit more
2018-04-03 20:25 TheToaphster: ok fixed
2018-04-03 20:26 TheToaphster: god im so fucking gay dude
2018-04-03 20:26 Chrubble: cool owo
2018-04-03 20:26 TheToaphster: that section right after the first kiai had some ln play right
2018-04-03 20:26 TheToaphster: with the minijacks and whatnot
2018-04-03 20:26 TheToaphster: the minijacks are gone but now its got really gay lns
2018-04-03 20:27 Chrubble: oof
2018-04-03 20:27 Chrubble: wonder how that looks
2018-04-03 20:27 Chrubble: but anyways, those were the big things that stood out the most to me
2018-04-03 20:27 Chrubble: i don't think i have much else to say?
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: schweeeeet
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: uhh
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: ill probs be workin with this
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: after i finish this section ill update
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: and you can take a look
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: then ill probably ask for suggestions on the jumpjack transitions
2018-04-03 20:28 TheToaphster: because they are so annoying to me
2018-04-03 20:28 Chrubble: sure stuff
2018-04-03 20:29 TheToaphster: owob
2018-04-03 20:31 TheToaphster: ok its done
2018-04-03 20:31 TheToaphster: not as gay as i thought
2018-04-03 20:31 TheToaphster: hmmm
2018-04-03 20:31 Chrubble: that was p fast
2018-04-03 20:33 TheToaphster: ok updated
2018-04-03 20:33 TheToaphster: was just the one section
2018-04-03 20:33 Chrubble: it's actually pretty comfy
2018-04-03 20:33 Chrubble: yeah that's not gay at all
2018-04-03 20:33 TheToaphster: still have other stuff to do
2018-04-03 20:33 TheToaphster: wait what how did u get that
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: i just got it updated
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: w/e ill keep it
2018-04-03 20:34 Chrubble: i can go into the future
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: lmao
2018-04-03 20:34 Chrubble: you probably had submission window open
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: yeah probably
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: w/e
2018-04-03 20:34 TheToaphster: onto the next fix
2018-04-03 20:34 Chrubble: it submits while it's open and not when you click the thingy
2018-04-03 20:35 TheToaphster: 03:03:184 -
2018-04-03 20:35 TheToaphster: haha
2018-04-03 20:35 TheToaphster: lol
2018-04-03 20:35 TheToaphster: how do i do this
2018-04-03 20:35 TheToaphster: without making it just like the second part
2018-04-03 20:35 Chrubble: uhhhh
2018-04-03 20:41 Chrubble: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10630680 how bout this
2018-04-03 20:41 Chrubble: i think it plays alright
2018-04-03 20:43 TheToaphster: ok i think i got something slightly different that works a bit better
2018-04-03 20:45 Chrubble: ooooooo alrighty
2018-04-03 20:45 TheToaphster: also taking out those LNs
2018-04-03 20:45 TheToaphster: cuz they suck
2018-04-03 20:47 TheToaphster: ok updated
2018-04-03 20:47 Chrubble: owo
2018-04-03 20:48 TheToaphster: if this works it just the ln inverse thing and then the jump jacks
2018-04-03 20:49 Chrubble: there we go
2018-04-03 20:49 Chrubble: that's perf
2018-04-03 20:49 TheToaphster: yeet
2018-04-03 20:53 TheToaphster: ok fixed
2018-04-03 20:53 TheToaphster: mostly
2018-04-03 20:53 TheToaphster: it seems better
2018-04-03 20:53 TheToaphster: for sure
2018-04-03 20:53 Chrubble: the inverse section?
2018-04-03 20:53 TheToaphster: mmhmm
2018-04-03 20:54 Chrubble: :eyes:
2018-04-03 20:54 TheToaphster: god my comp is bad at submitting beatmaps
2018-04-03 20:55 Chrubble: is it?
2018-04-03 20:55 Chrubble: i feel like thats more of a bancho thing
2018-04-03 20:55 TheToaphster: well its taking like 2 minutes to update
2018-04-03 20:55 TheToaphster: but maybe its bancho idk
2018-04-03 20:55 TheToaphster: updated
2018-04-03 20:56 Chrubble: it takes really long for me to update sometimes too
2018-04-03 20:56 Chrubble: and i have a decent computer
2018-04-03 20:56 Chrubble: now lets see this section
2018-04-03 20:58 Chrubble: i think it plays well?
2018-04-03 20:59 Chrubble: i can't gauge it accurately rn cuase i'm absoultely garbo at LNs currently
2018-04-03 20:59 Chrubble: absolutely*
2018-04-03 21:00 Chrubble: but it does play better than the previous version of it from what I can remember
2018-04-03 21:00 Chrubble: kinda forgot what it looked like before lmao
2018-04-03 21:00 TheToaphster: lmao
2018-04-03 21:00 TheToaphster: thats gucci then for now
2018-04-03 21:00 TheToaphster: just gonna work on the transitions
2018-04-03 21:00 Chrubble: coolio
2018-04-03 21:01 Chrubble: i'm gonna be heading off for now though
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: alrighty
2018-04-03 21:01 Chrubble: i'll take a look later on
2018-04-03 21:01 Chrubble: if you've updated more
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: sounds coolio
2018-04-03 21:01 Chrubble: cya later o/
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: ill be done with the transitions in a few minutes probably
2018-04-03 21:01 Chrubble: stay fuego
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: so yeah you'll be able to
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: and cya famerino
2018-04-03 21:01 TheToaphster: o/