Shawn Wasabi wrote:

Hello!
A Stamina map huh, well good thing I have no stamina xd
Not much bad to say about this map

The one and only diff

Bursts through the whole map are lacking originality [they seem copy-pasted, maybe try a different kind of burst?] If you are referring to the ones that are supposed to be for the piano, then yes, i was thinking of changing them and instead following the louder sound (i dont know its name)
03:54:802 - these jacks are a no no Sorry but those jacks are a yes yes :p
uhh, anything else I can say about this map is just me nit-picking so I guess that it?

Very short mod but I don't want to bombard you with how i think a section should work if it works the way you have it now

genkicho wrote:

NM From My Mod Que

Col 1 2 3 4

Dis

01:41:343 (101343|1,101505|1) - different sound, i suggest different col Done
01:46:532 (106532|1,106694|1) - ^
01:51:397 (111397|0,111559|0,111721|0) - 01:51:721 (111721|1,111884|1,112046|1) - looks weird and dont fit the songg >.> Changed
02:07:046 (127046|3,127046|2,127127|2,127127|3) - theyre different sound, 02:07:127 (127127|3,127127|2) - is same as 02:07:289 (127289|2,127289|1) - If someone else recommend the same thing i will change it
02:33:721 (153721|3,153884|3,154046|3) - i suggest avoid this, cuz theyre 1/2 snaps Changed
02:34:694 (154694|1,154857|1,155019|1) - ^
03:18:640 (198640|1,198640|0,198721|2,198721|3,198802|1,198802|0,198884|3,198884|2,198965|0,198965|1) - i suggest change to 14 and 23, cuz looks repetitive Done
03:46:694 (226694|3,226857|3,227019|3,227181|3,227343|3) - rearrange (?) Done

i think thats all.. bad at this kind of pattern >.> Dont worry, it was a good mod xD

Incendent wrote:

03:21:727(0321717|3,0321884|2,0322046|1) And So on, I'm not to big of a fan on these long notes. They are too short in my opinion (You probably already are aware of this and intend to keep it though.). To be honest, im still not sure if i will keep them because it could be annoying for a lot of players, but for the moment ill keep them xD
Other than that, You have a solid map! Thanks xD

Sorry I couldn't help too much (If at all), but you have earned my first star!

Thanks for the star

Another Lie wrote:

clearing req from my queue. Normally, i don't take above 3 minutes pianos are exception

Mod

00:48:296 (48296|0,48392|2,48489|1,48586|2,48683|1,48780|3) - try this https://puu.sh/wx2pO.jpg
00:52:650 - add LN to 3rd col? end at 00:53:830 -
01:22:532 (82532|0,82532|1,82857|1,82857|2) - i don't think those are drum sound, maybe delete each 1 of them
01:23:775 (83775|2,83775|1,83884|1,83884|0,84100|2,84100|1,84208|0,84208|1,84397|1,84397|0,84478|2,84478|3,84721|1,84721|2) - re-arrange, also delete each 1 of them. unless you're using double as specific reason like 01:14:911 (74911|3,74911|2,74992|0,74992|1,75073|2,75073|3,75154|1,75154|0,75235|3,75235|2,75316|0,75316|1,75397|3,75397|2) - etc
01:34:370 - add note to 2nd col?
01:34:694 - add note to 3rd col? then move 01:34:775 (94775|2) - to 2nd col
01:35:343 (95343|0) - (optional) consider reduce it length to 01:36:154 -
01:36:235 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
02:27:343 (147343|1,147343|3,147451|0,147451|2) - aren't they supossed to be at 1/4? (also 1 notes if possible)
02:27:667 (147667|2,147667|3,147775|1,147775|0) - (also 1 notes if possible)
for 03:10:046 - and 03:10:208 - are you intentionally ignored those sound?
04:01:938 (241938|0) - (optional) reduce length to 04:02:586 -
04:02:667 - & 04:02:829 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
04:35:829 - sound here
04:47:586 - sound 04:47:748 - sound 04:47:992 - sound 04:48:073 - sound
04:57:884 - sound

Good luck, tbh i'm a bit dissapointed no SV T_T

Civilization wrote:

Here is your mod

Reverse

01:11:992 (71992|1,71992|2,72073|0,72154|2,72235|0,72316|3,72397|1,72478|3,72559|1,72640|3,72721|2,72802|1,72884|0,72965|3,73046|2,73127|1,73208|0,73289|1,73289|3) - Repeating this pattern makes it feel like the entire segment is repeating itself Its basically because of the melody and the pitch,and as you can hear it, its very repetitive so no thanks.
01:56:424 (116424|3,116424|2) - Theres a fast piano noise here Yeah but in other mods they told me that it will be better if i just focus on the burst sounds on those sections.
03:09:965 (189965|1) - Should probably be a jump after this note Done
03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - Please dont use LNs like this aha I know XD, still need some ideas for that section xd
03:54:802 (234802|1,234802|3,234802|0,234911|3,234911|0,235019|0,235019|3,235127|3,235127|0,235235|3,235235|0,235343|0,235343|3,235451|2,235451|3,235451|0) - This is too difficult You are the 3rd person to told me that, so i will re arrange it xD

Good luck on ranking

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

clearing req from my queue. Normally, i don't take above 3 minutes pianos are exception

Mod

00:48:296 (48296|0,48392|2,48489|1,48586|2,48683|1,48780|3) - try this https://puu.sh/wx2pO.jpg Used another pattern but thanks for the idea.
00:52:650 - add LN to 3rd col? end at 00:53:830 - Nope, sorry
01:22:532 (82532|0,82532|1,82857|1,82857|2) - i don't think those are drum sound, maybe delete each 1 of them I was not putting doubles to the drums in that section, i was putting them to the synthesizer
01:23:775 (83775|2,83775|1,83884|1,83884|0,84100|2,84100|1,84208|0,84208|1,84397|1,84397|0,84478|2,84478|3,84721|1,84721|2) - re-arrange, also delete each 1 of them. unless you're using double as specific reason like 01:14:911 (74911|3,74911|2,74992|0,74992|1,75073|2,75073|3,75154|1,75154|0,75235|3,75235|2,75316|0,75316|1,75397|3,75397|2) - etc
01:34:370 - add note to 2nd col? Re arranged all that section, thanks.
01:34:694 - add note to 3rd col? then move 01:34:775 (94775|2) - to 2nd col
01:35:343 (95343|0) - (optional) consider reduce it length to 01:36:154 -
01:36:235 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
02:27:343 (147343|1,147343|3,147451|0,147451|2) - aren't they supossed to be at 1/4? (also 1 notes if possible) Nope,
listen at 25%
02:27:667 (147667|2,147667|3,147775|1,147775|0) - (also 1 notes if possible)
for 03:10:046 - and 03:10:208 - are you intentionally ignored those sound? Yep, because of the lack of piano in those sections, those blanks spaces are intentional.
04:01:938 (241938|0) - (optional) reduce length to 04:02:586 -
04:02:667 - & 04:02:829 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
04:35:829 - sound here
04:47:586 - sound 04:47:748 - sound 04:47:992 - sound 04:48:073 - sound
04:57:884 - sound

Good luck, tbh i'm a bit dissapointed no SV T_T

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Akuma

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. There's some issue about delay hitsounds file soft-hitfinish.wav, ask BN to fix Okay
2. Hei.. i can't find where's notes you're put Whistle (W). I only see Finish (F) I will try to fix that xD

Reverse

OD : 8,7
HP : 8,7

1. 01:12:721 (72721|2,72884|0) - try to put same collum for pitch relevancy piano like 01:11:992 (71992|2,72154|2,72316|3,72478|3) - DONE
2. 01:23:100 (83100|1,83262|1,83424|0) - do you forgot to emphasizing piano like 01:22:370 82370|0,82370|1,82532|1,82532|0,82694|2,82694|1,82857|1,82857|2) - I put emphasis to the high pitched piano in that litle section, but if more people suggest that i will change it
3. 01:34:370 - there's cymbal, add F. Also here 01:34:694 - I dont think there should be a triple after a burst =/
4. 01:37:613 - add a note, missing 2nd piano here like 01:36:802 -
5. 02:05:748 (125748|2,125911|1,126073|1) - how about it to put same collum for pitch relevancy, also here: DONE
   04:11:748 (251748|2,251911|0,252073|2) - DONE
6. 02:07:046 (127046|2,127046|3,127127|3,127127|2) - i'am pretty sure both is different pitch, and i think here 02:07:127 DONE
   (127127|2,127127|3,127289|2,127289|1) - mostly same pitch DONE
7. 02:17:829 - missing F for cymbal, also: Most of these suggestions are triples after a burst, or after a double and that would make some really unnecesary and anoying minijacks that does not respond to any sound at all so most of them are a no, sorry
   02:36:965 -
   02:48:316 -
   02:48:965 -
   03:09:397 -
   03:19:451 -
   03:19:775 -
   04:23:667 -
   04:35:019 -
8. 03:32:100 - i think there's still piano sound which it used 1/8 LN, or maybe it as purpose? I dont really know if i should keep this idea of the miniholds, they are so akward to press, so for the moment i will reject this xD
9. 03:57:559 (237559|0,237721|0,237884|0,238046|0,238208|0) - considering to avoid this achor DONE
10. 04:13:046 (253046|2,253127|1,253370|2,253451|1) - Ctrl+G for variety? DONE

Notes : I like pattern on 2nd kiai section, good job

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

86,75

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

BloowXv2 wrote:

Hey bro! esta divertido tu mapa y parece que lo intentas rankear asi que te dejare un random mod xD

lo estaba jugando y me di cuenta de algo y es que estos espacios sin notas rompen la secuencia del patrón con la música 03:10:046 - 03:10:208 -
tal vez aquí también 03:10:289 - A mi parecer el vacio hace que se genere un contraste bonito en esa parte, pero hay quienes le gusta y otros a los que no, tendria que decirlo mas gente para que lo cambie o un BN quiza, de momento lo mantendre pero tendre en cuenta tu recomendacion.

y creo que las LNs como estas 03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - que están en 1/8 dificultan tomarlas con una acc constante debido al corto tiempo que necesitas para soltar la LN... en otro caso no se si los BNs la pasen para ranked pero lo que te recomiendo es ponerlas en 1/4, asi da tiempo para presionarlas y tomar buena acc y no sientes que estas picando el teclado demasiado rápido para no agarrarlas mal o con un 200 intencional xD
(recuerda que el mapa no es una dificultad Xtreme asi que no es necesario provocar un aumento de dificultad repentino en la jugabilidad)
Honestamente no me gusta para nada esa parte, pero como que no le encuentro muchas otra opciones para esa parte xD Igual gracias por el comentario, de momento lo dejare con el 1/4 que dices pero vere si puedo cambiar totalmente esa parte.

ah por cierto, tal vez quieras colocar una LN aqui 00:52:650 - en la columna 3 hasta aqui 00:53:830 - y asi evitar el aviso de ''No se permiten descansos en mapas osu!mania'' Eso es un problema del cliente, porque a mi no me gustaria ponerle una ln ahi porque me parece que queda mas chido con el vacio, como que marca mucho mas fuerte el final de esa seccion

bueno ahi dejo eso. suerte esta bueno el map

1. 01:36:154 - i think single enough here, since 01:36:235 - same here
2. 01:39:884 - why double ? remove all, u can ignore since the sound quite low 01:40:532 - same
3. 02:26:748 - 02:27:073 - double too
4. 02:33:802 - why not map 1/4 too and make a stream ? more intens so is good for this part
5. 03:00:154 (180154|0) - move col 3
6. 03:04:694 (184694|1,184857|2,184938|1,185019|2,185100|1) - ctrl h more better
7. 03:10:046 - why empty here ? add note n 03:10:208 - add double note
8. 04:02:586 (242586|3,242748|3) - remove this or 04:02:667 (242667|1,242829|1) - remove this
9. 04:35:829 - add note owo
10. 04:46:370 (286370|0,286694|1,287019|1) - hmm =w= single all or double all cuz cymbal
11. 04:47:343 - till 04:48:640 - i think it 1/3 1/6 *triplet owo
12. 04:57:884 - add note feels empty owo
13. 05:09:235 (309235|0) - move col 2

Syadow- wrote:

Marked owo will mod around this week or next week due school event

sorry for late mod ;w;

[Reverse]

1. 01:36:154 - i think single enough here, since 01:36:235 - same here Its because of the ln, if more people suggest the same thing i will change it
2. 01:39:884 - why double ? remove all, u can ignore since the sound quite low 01:40:532 - same No, i think the piano is quite strong there
3. 02:26:748 - 02:27:073 - double too The sound is not strong enough there
4. 02:33:802 - why not map 1/4 too and make a stream ? more intens so is good for this part I completely miss that sound, thanks xD
5. 03:00:154 (180154|0) - move col 3 Ok
6. 03:04:694 (184694|1,184857|2,184938|1,185019|2,185100|1) - ctrl h more better Ok
7. 03:10:046 - why empty here ? add note n 03:10:208 - add double note Kinda make it xD
8. 04:02:586 (242586|3,242748|3) - remove this or 04:02:667 (242667|1,242829|1) - remove this Same as above
9. 04:35:829 - add note owo Done
10. 04:46:370 (286370|0,286694|1,287019|1) - hmm =w= single all or double all cuz cymbal That will be too much i think
11. 04:47:343 - till 04:48:640 - i think it 1/3 1/6 *triplet owo I dont think so xD
12. 04:57:884 - add note feels empty owo Ok
13. 05:09:235 (309235|0) - move col 2 Done

thats all
really solid but need more variation i guess
good luck o//

Acnos wrote:

From my queue

0|1|2|3

General :

1. Good Song!

 Insane :

1. 00:25:650 (25650|2,25941|2,26231|2,26425|2) - aqui como se usa mucho el dedo indice derecho mas que el izquierdo, talvez 00:25:941 (25941|2,26038|1) - ctrl+h La cosa es que no quiero extender el trill de 4343 para que se sienta mas los agudos del piano, y si, por eso mismo toda esa seccion esta mucho mas cargada a la mano derecha que a la izquiera, pero creo que le va bien al mapa
2. 01:06:073 (66073|0,66154|3,66235|0,66316|3) - porque diferente a patron aqui?, creo que en todos tienen esta parte hechas en un stair, imo deberias cambiarlo a stair como los demas Si, se me paso, arreglado xD
3. 01:14:992 (74992|0,74992|1) - un double no suena bien aqui imo, porque no hay sonido como el previas notas y las siguientes notas, talvez cambiarlo a solo una nota? Suena bajo, pero prefiero mantenerlo como doble para que los trills tengan la misma cantidad de notas en esa seccion
4. 01:16:289 (76289|2,76289|3) - ^
5. 01:16:370 (76370|0,76370|1) - ^
6. 01:17:586 (77586|1,77586|2) - ^ (puedes checkear que no hay sonido fuerte bajando la playback rate a 25%) emm, a partir de ahi el sonido se hace mucho mas notorio, incluso en 25%
7. 01:31:370 - aca tiene que ser un double por el sonido fuerte que tiene No me gusta hacer jacks innecesarios para finalizar los trills, varios mapas hacen lo mismo btw
8. 01:36:235 (96235|1) - talvez un double? Quedaria terrible como patron, seria como jackhammer de 3 seguido de un burst xD
9. 01:39:721 (99721|3) - ^
10. 01:40:370 (100370|3) - ^ (seria bueno cambiarlo a doubles para que resalte esos sonidos) Prefiero marcar el piano de fondo con dobles, esos sonidos al ser agudos simplemente los coloco en la parte derecha
11. 01:40:532 (100532|2,100532|1) - borrar una nota
12. 02:04:857 (124857|1) - hacer un double por que sigues los sonidos de cada beat Hecho
13. 02:04:938 (124938|2) - (si haces caso al anterior dicho) mover ala column 3 Hecho de manera parecida
14. 02:05:019 (125019|3) - (si haces caso al anterior dicho x2) mover ala column 2 Hecho de manera parecida
15. 02:59:992 - hasta 03:01:938 - te dejas muchos beats con solo una nota como el de aqui 03:00:316 (180316|2) - , cambiarlo a double pls En esa seccion se trata de enfatizar el sintetizador, no es necesario siempre ir por los beats creo yo xD
16. 03:53:343 (233343|2,233424|1,233505|2) - ctrl+h, se siente mejor asi al jugar imo Lo siento, parece que no marcaste bien lo que querias seleccionar xD
17. 04:01:938 (241938|0) - este LN deberia acabar aqui 04:01:938 (241938|0) - por que el sonido acaba aqui u.u Es por el burst jeje

Eso es todo, toma una estrella
Buena Suerte!

error_exe777 wrote:

sorry for the delay, here is your full mod!

General

Difficulties: marathon
Spread: marathon
Hitsounds: done i think. they look basic but borderline so its fine
Metadata: add some tags if you can
AiMod: breaktime is not suggested in mania. maybe add an LN or something to fill the gap
Other: nothing

good!

Reverse

01:34:127 - there is a sound here I know but i am kinda ignoring the synthesizer in that section so no

01:36:640 (96640|2,96802|2) - intended? if not please change Changed

01:49:613 - from this section onwards, please make all singles doubles since there is a drum there I am putting just single notes to all the drums for the section, even in the stream part

01:56:424 - ooo you missed the piano for the other 1/8 roll thing. i don't recommend this, since you're skipping half a beat with sounds there. if you map the piano then i would be happy tbh Me too, but when i asked to a BN he told me that people may think that that is lazy and just to raise up the SR, maybe if another BN suggest me the same i will re do it

01:56:748 - and, there is still a piano, maybe add the 1/8 as there is a sound Same

02:00:640 (120640|2,120721|1,120802|2,120884|1,120965|2) - this isn't correct if it was mapped to PR Changed

02:06:478 - this whole next bit with the doubles is very left hand heavy. move some around to balance it out Yeah, but is because of the pitch so for now no

02:14:586 - first column is ignored for two and a half beats. Fixed

02:17:667 (137667|0,137708|1,137748|2,137789|3,137992|0,138032|1,138073|2,138113|3) - why are these the same pattern when all the others are different to eachother? Because of the 2 jumps after the first burst, the only way to change the direction of the second burst is to make some weird minijakcs in that section and i dont want to do that

03:54:802 - oo SV potential here ; )))) Kinda tried to do somenthing xD

04:06:478 - make this a double since thats how you charted the rest of the section Done

04:18:640 - add a note for the drum Done

04:23:992 (263992|3,263992|0,264046|1,264100|2,264154|3,264208|0,264262|1,264316|2,264370|3,264424|0,264478|1,264532|2,264586|3,264640|0,264681|1,264721|2,264762|3,264802|0,264843|1,264884|2,264924|3,264965|0,265005|1,265046|2,265086|3,265127|0,265167|1,265208|2,265248|3) - these are WAY to much. when you listen as 25% its not even close to these snaps. if you want to carry on mapping that sound its 1/4. Maybe the first part is not but the second part is 1/8 for sure, i am going to wait a BN to told me what to do there xD

04:35:829 - add a note here, there is a sound Done

04:57:884 - ^^ Done

05:09:073 - more SV potential oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Kinda do something again xD

wow. the map is very consistent, the themes used fit and are suited to the song, the chart is great. honest;y, nice map. if i were BN id be straight on this.

well, good luck!

error_exe777 wrote:

ahaaaaaa those SVs not strong enough

rather than a 0.5 - 1.5 pattern, use a 0.2 - 1.8 pattern for both section. it looks alot better and it already normalised.

again good luck!