1. PreviewTime要一致，其实主要是hard的时间轴没有对齐

1. 00:26:724 - 多余的绿线
2. 04:45:727 - 加个note？
   没了....找不出什么东西可改...

1. 00:38:300 (2) - 建议换成一个来回然后00:38:929 和 00:39:136 分别放个note
2. 00:51:333 (6) - 也是换成一个来回 00:51:962 处放个note
3. 02:13:462 (6) - OMG这是什么 怕是触手都会断吧
4. 02:57:949 - 歌声从这里开始的 推荐在这加note起步

1. 00:40:791 - 来个NC吧
2. 00:58:169 (8,9,10,1) - 你看这样改怎么样，因为你前面的00:56:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 的节奏而言 我觉得你把00:58:272 (9,10,1) - 删掉，从00:58:375 - 加个note，00:58:479 - 加个note，00:58:582 到 00:58:789 slider，00:58:893 和 00:58:996分别来个note
3. 00:59:203 (14,15,1,2,3,4) - 节奏意义有点不明，我推荐这里的红白时间线上都排上note然后用跳感觉好些
4. 01:01:168 - 加个note
5. 02:12:230 - 多余的绿线

What wrote:

spboxer3 is good mapper <3 think>"< you're pro mapper
my star ~ / thinks your star:3
and good map lol
my Eng is very bad orz
This is my little MOD

[My Think]
Players Doesn't like consecutively Spinner

Like this (http://puu.sh/6Q4n)

can u change other thing if u can ?

[Easy]
02:21:746 (3) - 3 point x:64,y:304 ? sorry

[Hard]
01:27:950 (1) - NC? OK
01:29:191 (3) - remove NC? OK
01:31:260 (1) - NC? OK
02:13:462 (2) - What is this? lol noooo problem XD
02:25:875 (5) - NC? sorry
02:27:116 (1) - remove NC? sorry
02:57:949 - Add note? yes :p
04:02:688 (8) - 1 Grib Up? OK
04:28:547 (3) - delete red point? (http://puu.sh/6Q3w) sorry I can't

[Taiko]
sorry i can't MOD Taiko

[Insane]
Good Map ! :3 :3 :3 :3

Thx

lolcubes wrote:

Hello there! The recheck!
Don't be intimidated by the mod size, it's just minor stuff.

mod

[General]

1. Your brown combo color is too dark in some parts. It makes your map elements blend with the background so much that you don't see the approach circles. This is unrankable. If you don't want to change it (i actually like the color), just use a different combo color for certain combos. I will tell you the spots with a blue color.

[Insane]

1. 00:41:619 (1) - This new combo could use a different color. It starts where the hair is in the vid and it's slightly hard to notice it.
2. 01:37:889 (1) - ^
3. 02:12:644 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I don't like that you reversed your clap patterns here (you put them on first and third white tick). Maybe continue using them on 2nd and 4th white ticks like everywhere else? (start of 02:13:057 (4), 02:13:885 (6), start of 02:14:712 (2), end of 02:15:126 (3))
4. 03:07:259 (4) - New combo? Follows the music a bit better.
5. 03:12:224 - Either remove this timing section, or place it at 03:10:362, because it makes a sudden volume change during spinning like this, and that's bad.
6. 03:42:014 (1,2) - These are a bit too loud, reduce the volume a little please.
7. 04:29:384 (1) - Change the color of this combo, it's nearly unreadable once the video fades to black.
8. 04:37:659 (1) - ^
9. 04:52:657 (1) - Start it on 04:52:554 but keep the end the same. (that's how it should be I think, you have it like this in your hard)
10. 04:55:243 - Move this timing section to 04:55:346.

[Hard]

1. 00:51:549 (7) - New combo here instead of 00:52:376 (1), follows the music better.
2. 00:51:549 (7) - Add a whistle at the end? It sounds good to me to have it there because you have a whistle on 00:53:617 (4) and it makes the hitsounding more consistent. You also used it at 00:58:169 (7).
3. 00:58:169 (7) - Same here, new combo please, remove it from 00:58:996 (1).
4. 01:07:478 - Put this timing section on 01:07:685.
5. 01:51:956 - Put this timing section on 01:51:129, or 01:52:370, so it doesn't "cut off" the spinning sound.
6. 01:56:094 (5) - New combo instead of the next note, follows the music better.
7. 01:58:162 (4) - Whistle? You used it at 01:56:507, this would make it more consistent and sound better imo.
8. 02:15:954 (1) - I suggest that you end this spinner at 02:17:609 and then make a new spinner at 02:17:712 - 02:19:057. Follows the music a bit better imo.
9. 02:33:331 - Remove this timing section please. Or if you want a more silent spinner, move it to 02:32:504.
10. 03:43:457 - In your insane, you used a normal sound hitset here. Maybe use it here as well? Up to you, just a suggestion.
11. 02:58:984 (1) - You have a finish here in your Insane, use it here as well maybe?
12. 03:56:077 (9) - I suggest that you remove this whistle and put it at the end of 03:55:456 (8). I think this sounds better.
13. 04:26:074 - 04:37:245 - You don't have any hitsounds in this area, while you do in your insane. Maybe try putting whistles on every 2nd and 4th white tick for the rhythm? Sounds good imo.
14. 04:39:314 - You used normal hitsounds in your insane, use it here as well? Just a suggestion.
15. 04:52:760 - Remove this timing section. In addition to that, make the timing section at 04:52:554 have 60% volume (like you have in your insane).
16. 04:55:243 - Move it to 04:55:346.

[Normal]

1. 00:39:964 - Move this timing section to 00:39:136 or remove it completely please, it messes up the spinner volume.
2. 00:51:549 (1) - End this spinner at 00:54:031. It's too close to the next note for the easiest diff.
3. 00:54:859 (1) - If possible, start it somewhere closer to the middle of the screen, it's the easiest diff of the mapset so it should be more friendly for the newer players.
4. 00:56:514 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to 00:58:169 (5) please, I think it's better because if you take a look at your combos in this area, it's more consistent.
5. 01:07:478 - Put this timing section to either 01:07:685 or 01:05:202 so it doesn't mess up the spinning volume.
6. 01:20:097 (1,2,3) - I would suggest that you remove 1 and 3 completely because 1 comes too soon after a spinner. Just having a single note at 01:20:511 sounds good for the rhythm.
7. 01:51:129 (1) - You should probably remove this spinner completely, because the next note comes too soon for the easiest difficulty and it's quite short.
8. 01:56:094 (1) - I think it would be best to change the color of this combo, it's possible that some notes in this combo could be overlooked by a newer player due to the background blending.
9. 02:05:610 - Move this timing section to the start or the end of the spinner please.
10. 02:17:609 (1) - This spinner is quite problematic for a normal diff. It's kinda short and the next note comes too soon after it. You should definitely try to change this somehow.
11. 02:33:745 - Raise the volume to 40% on this timing section? So the volume change isn't that drastic.
12. 02:34:572 - I think 100% volume here is too much. Try 80%?
13. 02:43:675 (2) - Whistle?
14. 02:45:330 (2) - ^
15. 03:03:121 (1) - Maybe remove this new combo?
16. 03:05:190 (3) - Move this timing section to the start or the end of the spinner please.
17. 03:05:190 (3) - ^
18. 03:38:497 (1,1) - This could be quite confusing for the easiest diff. First spinner is okay, but the second spinner is usually unexpected, plus its much shorter than the first one, it would be easy for a newbie to fail here. I suggest that you remove both of the spinners as I see no other solution.
19. 03:43:457 - Use 80% volume for this kiai please, 100% is too loud, plus you used 80% in your insane.
20. 03:55:870 - Move this timing section to either start or end of the spinner.
21. 03:56:697 - 80% volume please.
22. 04:10:765 - Maybe remove this timing section? I don't think you need a volume change here.
23. 04:26:074 (1) - Use a different combo color please.
24. 04:37:659 (1) - You should probably remove this spinner completely. It's too short and the next note comes too soon for the easiest diff.
25. 04:52:760 - Remove this timing section. In addition to that, make the timing section at 04:52:554 have 60% volume (like you have in your insane).
26. 04:55:243 - Move it to 04:55:346.

Just some minor issues and minor difficulty adjustment in normal. Quite easy fixes.
Taiko looks okay.
I should be able to bubble this after fixes, but if you want, you can just try to find a MAT instead and then call me once that MAT bubbles. Up to you how you want to do this.

1. 01:51:956 - Remove this timing section.
2. 02:33:331 - ^
3. 03:55:456 (8) - Whistle at the end?
4. 04:39:520 - Is this intentional? Sounds weird having one note using normal sounds, and others soft.

1. 00:54:859 (2) - New combo.
2. 03:38:497 (1,1) - I think you should remove these. They are kinda hard for the easiest diff. Just having nothing seems good enough.

lolcubes wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:51:956 - Remove this timing section.
2. 02:33:331 - ^
3. 03:55:456 (8) - Whistle at the end?
4. 04:39:520 - Is this intentional? Sounds weird having one note using normal sounds, and others soft.

[Normal]

1. 00:54:859 (2) - New combo.
2. 03:38:497 (1,1) - I think you should remove these. They are kinda hard for the easiest diff. Just having nothing seems good enough.

lolcubes wrote:

Yay. Hope I didn't miss something, such a long map hehe.

Bubbled!