00:05:233 (5,1) - should be higher spaced, 1 is rly deemphasized this way even though it's way stronger than most of what comes before it
00:14:386 (4,5) - think it might be nice if this broke the flow instead of being that mini-jump in the same direction as the slider (my initial idea was just placing the slider where the slider now ends, and the circle where the slider previously was, or just stacking the circle on the slider), seems like it's prominent enough to deserve some emphasis that way
Done00:15:403 (3,5,2) - move (5) so it's spaced equally between the end of (3) and (2), looks way nicer. I feel like there's a lot of random overlaps of this sort in the map tbh
This note placement is intentional as (5) follows the same rotation as sliders (3) and (4) before it. It is also the start of a semi octagonal jump pattern which is why it does not perfectly line up with (2)00:16:081 (5,6,1,2) - 5 and 6 are way stronger than 1 and 2, spacing should reflect that. Maybe also make (6) a slider since the sound on (1) isn't all that prominent anyway and (6) is on a held sound
I dont hear how they are stronger. This jump pattern is being used as a filler rhythm in between the vocals that i was stressing with sliders so i don't really see the need to increase the spacing within the pattern00:17:437 (5,6,1,2) - same thing about the emphasis, just that 5 and 1 are the strong ones
same as above00:19:386 (2) - am I deaf or is there nothing here
I was using this as a transitional thing in to come out of the 1/1 slider but i see your point and will consider removing if it becomes a problem00:20:488 (1) - might be better as a slider since it's a held sound, would emphasize it nicely and the sound on 00:20:658 (2) is barely relevant anyway
I am using sliders to emphasize the vocals mostly and i do not think that the sound on one is strong enough to require more than a NC00:24:047 (7,1) - stack with sliderend
fixed, slightly messes up the perfect geometrical pattern (7) is in but i dont think its noticeable enough00:26:589 (3,1) - ^
Don't actually know how i missed that tbh00:25:064 (3) - Sound on the sliderend is kinda stronger than on the start, also the held sound ends at the red tick. Think this would be better if it was a
1/2 slider + circle or maybe two sliders
I liked the idea of repeating the flow of slider (1) but I will look into ways to change the second slider00:29:640 (5,6) - nothing really changed compared to the previous sliders, suddenly emphasizing 6 like this feels wrong, I think just continuing the pattern of 00:28:962 (3,4) - for this would fit really well
circles replaced with a slider00:32:352 (5,6) - ^
^00:42:860 (5,6) - All 4 sounds here are pretty strong vocals, so making them all into circles would fit better imo (and then have a larger jump to the next slider than between the circles), something like you used at 00:17:437 (5,6,1,2) feels far more appropriate here than where you used it imo.
Replaced sliders with circles in a trapezoidal shape00:47:267 (7,3) - stack
I ended up stacking (3) on the slider end of slider (6) and moving (2) to correct for equal spacing00:49:810 (6) - Sound on sliderend is much stronger than on sliderstart, I'd suggest making 00:49:640 (5) - into a 1/2 slider and then another 1/2 slider where (6) ends now.
I replaced (5) with a 1/2 slider and then placed a circle on the slider end of (2)01:01:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I like the gradually increasing spacing, but given just how much the sounds on the NCs stand out, I don't think a regular triangle is really the right pattern choice for this, as it feels like they should stand out far more.
maybe something like this, just an idea I usually like to avoid obtuse angles like that, but this is an interesting idea. I will experiment with it01:08:793 (5) - this is actually on the blue tick after it, just make 01:08:623 (4) - a 3/4 slider so you don't end up with some super confusing rhythm
I chose to make (5) a 1/2 kick slider thingy that points at (6)01:09:301 (1,2) - I think this (and most of the other 1/1 vocal sliders like this in the kiai) would fit better as 1/2 slider+ circle, as the vocals are all pretty intense, so they all deserve a click imo, plus the vocal you currently start on always either ends on the red tick (if it started on a white one) or there's a beat in the middle of the slider afterwards, so making them 1/2 would fit the actual length of the vocal or not skip the beat, respectively.
The 1/1 sliders are kind of like a gimmick in this map. I wanted to really emphasize a flow-y and circular motion on the vocals which i felt was best used through 1/1 sliders Seems like the map flows rly well btw
