bakabaka wrote:

mod in irc

nice map :>>

LKs wrote:

BG
BG不错 但男主的脸太大了吧 违和

Sweet

[00:15:734] 45都向右1格 我把3往左移，距離就一樣了
[00:47:039] 向右1 OK

其他难度都没问题 找泡吧 真的可以！？

另外真不用这么多难度 都你做导致风格趋同 之前我有聽過類似的話lol
难度变化也不大 反而我期望中的那种难度没做出来 嘛，整體就是太簡單了是吧？我不太會做觸圖lol

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

• 01:01:480 (T) - change volume to 50%?
  01:07:163 (1) - new combo when kiai starts?
  01:25:051 (6,7,1) - rhythm suggest: http://puu.sh/8E7a
  02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - fix spacing between these sliders
  
  
  Sweet
  [list:8135f]- 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

Pokie wrote:

-Gamu-'s
[list:50733]01:01:480 (T) - 改成50%音量? 40>60音量差距稍大 fixed
01:07:163 (1) - kiai再開始new combo比較適合, 取消new combo fixed
01:07:536 (2) - new combo fixed
01:22:442 ~ 01:31:014 - 節奏突然變的密集, 建議: http://puu.sh/8E7a fixed
- 01:25:424 (7) - 改成2/1拍slider
- 01:26:169 (1) - 刪
- 01:26:914 (x) - 加circle, new combo
02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - 4個slider中間的間距最好相同 fixed

單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

-Gamu- wrote:

Chinese 0.0

Mod Thank you~

____________________

To DarknessAngel

My diff. Please update

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

唔，我就是要留！lol


Sweet

• - 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

太切中核心，我無話可說lol
00:55:610 ~ 01:00:082 - 這一段的clap不太需要, 可以考慮刪掉 fixed
02:09:958 (2) - 結尾漏了個clap麼 XD? 02:11:449 (4) - 這裡有下呢 fixed
02:44:430 (1,2,3) - (1)跟(2)都是跟著vocal, 個人認為(3)會造成誤導而早按了, 把(3)往下移如何? fixed



Heart

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

又中了...
00:25:796 (1) - 縮短1/1拍 fixed
00:27:660 (1,1) - 前移/起始點前移1/1拍? 目前的方式和歌曲不搭 fixed
00:44:989 (x) - 這個位置需要一個空檔呢, 刪掉這位置的note? 這裡是跳專用:3
00:51:697 (3) - 第一拍加上whistle? fixed
00:59:337 (3) - ^ fixed
01:00:082 (5) - 第一拍可以考慮加whistle/finish fixed
01:10:517 (6) - 跳設置的比較突然, 建議下移一些(大概4個grid) fixed
02:25:424 (4,5) - spacing錯誤? 左移1 grid fixed
02:31:014 (7) - 同01:10:517 (6), 左移4 grid? fixed
02:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - 希望能換個排列, AR6下這類型來回方式的排列並不適合 我想留著lol，話說AR是7。:3
02:49:647 (4) - slider第一拍加whistle fixed
02:50:206 (2) - whistle fixed



Kiss

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

有被這樣說過lol
00:25:610 (7) - 結尾finish效果似乎還不錯XD 同感ww
00:39:399 (6,7) - spacing fixed
00:41:076 (3) - new combo或者往左上微移, 分辦不出這位置還有一個slider fixed
00:55:610 (6) - new combo fixed
01:00:641 (7) - ^ fixed
01:03:436 (1) - 關掉grid snap後移成這樣比較美觀: http://puu.sh/8EaU
fixed
01:04:927 (6) - 結尾上移: http://puu.sh/8EaY
fixed
01:08:467 (x) - 加一個circle, 或是把01:08:095 (4) 改成1/2 slider 唔，我想保留這個...
02:05:113 (1,2,3) - 這裡只出現一次反而突兀, 最好把break後的整段都補上同樣的效果 好吧我把他刪了



TsuyoKiss

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

因為我對這歌很熟悉lol，還能接受嗎？我感覺很多地方能跳的lol


===
單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

Firce777 wrote:

我來mod小車車太鼓了~

SPOILER

嘛~萌車車的排列實在是中規中矩 沒什麼可挑的
01:37:815 ~ 01:38:747 這裡的變速建議還是稍微調降一些 0.15x會讓人反應不過 尤其是開了mod 0.10x如何:3?
02:59:363 ~ 02:59:363 同上

不錯的譜 快RANK吧:3

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

Sweet
01:09:399 (1,2,3) - Consider removing (they're quite close to the spinner) and make the second spinner earlier. fixed
01:30:641 (5,6) - Move one step down, grid level 3 fixed
01:39:213 (6,7) - Move one step left, grid level 3 fixed
02:19:461 (1) - Remove this?
02:20:952 (1) - Too close to following beats, shorten/remove?
02:30:827 (1) - ^
02:41:449 - 02:42:939: same as previous spinners.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - Move one step right on grid level 3

All fixed

Heart
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - These just don't look square... fixed
02:15:548 (4,5) - 4 a bit to the right and 5 a bit more to the right? No
02:17:411 (5) - Down to the left for symmetry with 2,3,4. If you want symmetry. No
02:54:492 (1) - A bit downwards? No

Kiss
I almost passed it *proud* 0.0
00:46:293 (5) - I step to the right, grid level 3...or not? No
01:31:386 (1) - 01:35:859 (4) - I want a clap or two somewhere in here. No
01:52:442 (2) - 1 step down , Grid level 3. Grid level now abbreviated GL. No
01:53:933 (2) - I suppose here too. fixed
02:25:610 (5) - 1 step down ,still GL3. fixed
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4) - Not a square/rectangle/paralello-something. yeah~

Tsuyokiss
Too hard for me, but I tried...
00:33:809 (3,4,5) - Should these be a straight line? No
01:15:548 (3) - Little bit to the left? fixed
02:19:554 (2) - Sounds too short. Make longer?fixed

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

-Gamu-'s Relaxing
01:56:355 (3) - slider isn't symmetrical e... I think I have become symmetrical
01:57:473 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:00:082 (1) - You could skip this beat, or place it 1/4 later. no fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here

[Relaxing]
00:34:741 (5) - if you want to make a semicircle, place a note and follow the approach circle. This one is not perfect. ok fixed
02:09:399 (1) - ^ ^
others are fine...

bossandy wrote:

[size=150]Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~

-Gamu-'s Relaxing:

SPOILER

00:55:610 (1,2,3) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
00:58:219 (4) - remove finish and add clap start, remove clap and add finish end finish add (end)
00:59:337 (1,2) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
01:06:790 (7) - add clap fixed
01:07:536 (1) - add finish start fixed
01:34:368 (1) - add clap start fixed
02:04:182 (1) - remove whistle and add finish fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here


[Sweet]
00:28:778 (3) - it's not straight, a bit surprising :O
02:39:958 (1,1) - As it's a Normal, don't place notes immediately after a spinner. The new players (um?) need some time to find their cursor after it. I had fixed it... :O
02:48:902 (2) - add clap on 1st reverse? fixed

[Heart]
00:16:852 (1) - +1 reverse? No
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not necessary to use a star formation here... yeah~Why not?:D

[Kiss]
00:39:958 (1,3) - overlapped and I failed to read fixed
00:35:672 (4) - wrong finish? yes,it is
00:39:958 (1) - remove head clap? OK
02:18:343 (7) - this?

002.jpg

[attachment=0:ca6ef]screenshot002.JPG[/attachment:ca6ef]

Maybe wrong link?
02:42:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure you want to use this here? = = OK I change the style...

[Tsuyokiss]
00:25:051 (2,4) - clap on 4 instead? fixed
00:41:449 (3) - add finish on head?No
01:08:654 (1,2,3) - um, spacing right? yes, it is
01:14:430 (3) - wrong clap? fixed
01:27:101 (4) - feels strange in some way... change 3 to slider and/or remove finish? fixed
02:06:418 (2,3,4) - 2sliders / 1slider + 2circle? sorry= =
02:15:921 (6) - use louder sound as well fixed
02:35:672 (2) - finish on 1 end? No
02:36:977 (8,3) - finish? No
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle all? it sounds better than the current one I think the last clap is good... :O

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~


Sweet:

SPOILER

00:50:952 (5) - 醜 噗！我改好了= =
01:07:536 (1) - 不建議用spinner帶過
01:10:517 (1) - ^
01:31:014 (6) - 這間距變大了一點...
02:30:827 (1) - 不建議這樣帶過...
02:39:958 (1) - ^
02:42:939 (1) - ^ 請原諒我這個不聽話的小孩...SPINNER我要留著orz

Heart:

SPOILER

不錯!

可能是mod已經很多的關係 找不到很多了
加油吧!! Good luck~!!

wmfchris wrote:

[小轟轟taiko]
00:43:126 - 要突出vocal的高音用d k 決定改前面的凸顯背景音，順便後面的也改了
01:58:964 - k ddd K 這...容我三思:P
基本上沒問題了 個人不讚成連續加速不過up to you
8/10

wmfchris wrote:

都第baka頁了都一堆mod o_o 是啊，因為在第5頁的時候又remap了一次

[General]
Tag littlecar3370 in [Relaxing]. fixed

[Tsuyokiss]
00:52:070 (4) - left 1 grid lv4 fixed
01:08:467 - feel empty as an insane here. try xxx x x here? (remove the next 1/4 note on blue tick) 我改了另一種形式
01:14:244 (1,5) - remove finish, you may finish on (5) fixed
01:23:049 (4) - up 1~2 grid lv4 fixed
01:58:778 (2) - Try to rotate the direction of slider a bit so that it looks parallel to (4), it looks a bit better fixed

[Kiss]
00:16:392 (3) - remove whistle fixed
00:17:411 (2,5) - left+up 1 grid fixed
00:22:256 (1~5) - uneven spacing where?
00:26:542 (2,4) - remove whistle may fit the vocal better? fixed
01:08:095 (4) - feeling empty, make the slider 1 beat long or add a 1/2 notes No,it is this diff's style
01:17:225 (6) - may look better if down 1 grid fixed
01:34:182 (8) - remove whistle? fixed
01:38:840 (9) - a finish to end the sentence will be cool yeah,so cool~
02:28:964 - same as 01:08 fixed

我覺得這個圖diff spread是E H H+ H+ I 這樣有點偏重於難的diff
其實[Heart], [Kiss] 化為一個diff應該不成問題 不過毀掉自己心血也是事實

做了都做了，我不會刪的！ˋˊ

加油 ._. 果然到第9頁還是要mod 謝謝你的提醒...

kenny012012 wrote:

:)

DarkRingSystem wrote:

;) 来 搓b mod来了
娇蛮之吻 我记得好像是我刚上高中的时候的事了 很怀念啊 XXD
废话有点多 看不爽可以 skip 要改你說的東西好麻煩呀lol，我盡量...Orz

[General]
TAG:hentai eroge game 恶趣味 orz..
在我有限的记忆中 这好像不是一款18x 变态 黄色 游戏 而且这个op是PS2平台上的主题曲 PC版的的確是18X，不過這首是從FOXY載到的，我後來才知道:O

[Tsuyokiss]

SPOILER

这不是第一pc 一般我觉得miss 比 100多 那么 map中肯定存在着一些排版不太合理的地方
而且这个图 日本味十足 质量上升空间很大 有些地方看似很好玩 其实还是有些不太合理的地方

00:44:430 (1) - 比如这个跳得很大 跟前面同样节奏的排版 感觉来说 奇怪了不少 唔，這個我保留一下lol
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳跃 意义不太明了 就是副歌固定的跳躍啊... 0.0
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个也是 也许把他们间距弄小点 手感会好好些 恩 換了形式...
01:25:051 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里 读图 按道理应该是 4 5 完了之后 1 2 3 4 跳跃 是两段节奏比较合理 這裡我不太懂，能不能說詳細一點，或是給個圖說明一下？
但是这里很容易跟音乐 读成 一段节奏 那么 4 5 1 2 3 4 突然从1开始跳 就感觉不太好 建议 改变一下排版
让节奏 好读一点

整体不错

[Kiss]
很重的一股copy味 我本身不反对 但是有些pattern 不要滥用 Copy什麼的...我只是排出我喜歡的樣子而已啊lol
00:30:455 (1,2,3,4) - 这个就不是很好
01:08:467 (X) -加个点
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 再考虑下 orz

其他还好 XD


這些都改了

[Heart]
00:25:796 (1,1,1,1) - 这个很诡异
尝试一下 这样 OK

SPOILER

后面还好
我觉得这个难度跟[kiss]相当 都是hard 唔，經你這麼一說的確是


[Sweet]
01:07:536 (1,1,1) - 这个节奏不好 都进入kiai了 还转圈混节奏? 加的节奏 连贯一些 我改了一點...
02:22:070 (X) - 这里加个note 别怕 就是會怕= =，有人說反應時間太短了(對新手來說)
02:30:827 (1) - 这里 先把 02:30:082 (6) - 加一个回转 然后 这个spinner 在02:31:014开始 02:32:132结束 OK
02:32:505 (X) -这里加个note 要是你觉得有点快 那么久用slider来代替 同樣反應時間lol


断网 That's all good luck!!! and starrrrrrrr

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

skip 1st & 2nd diff

[heart]
00:15:175 (4) - 去掉finish或者减点音量。有点吵 還好吧o.o
00:47:970 (4) - 去finish 恩
01:07:536 (1) - finish 恩
01:14:244 (1,2) - 感觉容易被挑 不至於吧..
01:24:492 (1) - 去NC OK
02:13:126 (3) - finish换whistle fixed
02:28:032 (1) - ^ fixed

[Kiss]
00:20:206 (2) - 减个折返换circle No
00:26:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 考虑调下音量然后换normal 保留..
01:01:200 (3) - spacing ？？
02:17:598 (5) - 减个折返换circle No
02:56:355 (1) - NC好像不太对劲 我刪了..

[Tsuyokiss]
00:48:902 (1) - 删NC 這是為了標明跳的NC，不能刪
01:24:492 (3) - 别重叠 為啥？
02:11:449 (1) - 删NC。下个note NC fixed
02:42:008 (6) - NC fixed

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please.
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs?

• looking fine~

1. 00:18:529 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
2. 01:10:331 (5,6) - Hmm, this jump is awkward for me... try changing normal spacing?
3. 02:30:827 (6,7) - ^

1. 00:43:685 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:19:647 (2) - move 2 grid left (grid lv4)
3. 01:30:268 (3) - move 3 grid down & 2 grid left
4. 01:36:790 (2) - remove whistle on the silder's body
5. 01:53:001 (3,1) - switch new combo?
6. 02:04:182 (2) - add finish?
7. 02:35:859 (4,5,1) - move 2 grid left
8. 02:56:355 (5) - remove whistle on the silder's body

1. HP +1 or OD +1 will be better for score spread.
2. 00:36:045 (6) - move 2 grid right (grid lv4)
3. 00:43:126 (5,6,7) - make triangle jump?
4. 01:23:001 (4) - move 1 grid left
5. 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - make parallel
6. 02:32:877 (3,4) - move 1 grid right

banvi wrote:

[-Gamu-]

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please. ok fixed
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs? あ、気づきませんでした　fixed!

Oh, almost nazi mod xD
Good map & good luck~

banvi wrote:

[-Gamu-]

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please.
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs?

[Sweet]

• looking fine~

[Heart]

1. 00:18:529 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
2. 01:10:331 (5,6) - Hmm, this jump is awkward for me... try changing normal spacing?
3. 02:30:827 (6,7) - ^ All Done~

[Kiss]

1. 00:43:685 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:19:647 (2) - move 2 grid left (grid lv4)
3. 01:30:268 (3) - move 3 grid down & 2 grid left
4. 01:36:790 (2) - remove whistle on the silder's body
5. 01:53:001 (3,1) - switch new combo?
6. 02:04:182 (2) - add finish?
7. 02:35:859 (4,5,1) - move 2 grid left
8. 02:56:355 (5) - remove whistle on the silder's body

All fixed~

[Tsuyokiss]

1. HP +1 or OD +1 will be better for score spread.
2. 00:36:045 (6) - move 2 grid right (grid lv4)
3. 00:43:126 (5,6,7) - make triangle jump?
4. 01:23:001 (4) - move 1 grid left
5. 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - make parallel
6. 02:32:877 (3,4) - move 1 grid right

All Done~

Oh, almost nazi mod xD
Good map & good luck~

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Hi :3

[-Gamu-'s Relaxing]

01:55:237 (1) - 2 grid left would be better

01:58:964 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left

02:22:070 (1) - 1 grid left

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Hi :3

真抱歉之前很忙所以拖很久才mod ~"~ 的確有點久了...嘛，沒關係

[General]

>>BG不修下嗎o.o 規格是要約4:3 你的是5:4 你能幫我修麼T.T，我家沒軟體

>>tag怎麼是打 打？



[Sweet]

00:31:759 (1) - 和00:29:523 (4)的頭重疊吧? 距離會錯掉

02:02:691 (2,3,4,5) - 感覺好像和前面(1)尾巴往右歪一格的感覺 fixed

02:38:095 (2,3,4,5) - 同上 往上歪一格o.o fixed

[Heart]

01:10:517 (6) - spacing? 建議重捏slider 耶？為啥？

恩...其他diff看起來都不錯了

大致上沒啥問題:3

1. Delete .osb and full submit

termerys wrote:

As your service.

Overall :

1. Delete .osb and full submit

OK


Sweet : Good pattern, but sometimes they would be boring when overuse it.
00:49:461 (2) - Move it right under (1)? :O
01:12:380 (x) - Add note here? (If you want to follow this, apply it to all the alike pattern.) No
01:15:921 (1) - DNC fixed
01:16:480 (2) - NC fixed
02:02:691 (2,3,4,5) - Move it right under (1)? fixed

Heart : Wow... this diff is flawless!

Tsuyokiss : Almost flawless!!
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange this star I think it is not a star,it's nothing. XD

Decent mapset

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

>>tag怎麼是打 "Gamu而不是-Gamu-"

SPOILER

1. 00:34:741 (4) - I think slider is not symtrerical. It's better to change it into symetrical shape. Well, first make a symetrical shape like this > http://puu.sh/9BAs. Then rotate it by 120'-125' (You can do this by ctrl+shift r). And see the result : http://puu.sh/9BB3. More better right?
2. 00:54:119 (3) - I think it's best to move finish sound here to 00:55:610 (1) - since the circle is on the downbeat. And it's more better to hear and will make consistent with the finish sound after this.
3. 01:10:517 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is litlle awkward. I think it's more better to remove it.
4. 01:17:598 (2) - Not symetrical slider shape here. Like before make a slider like this first > http://puu.sh/9BCw. Rotate it by 50' then place it your pattern. Final result : http://puu.sh/9BCX
5. 01:19:461 (4) - Move finish sound from endpoint to startpoint. It follow the beat more better.
6. 01:37:349 (1) - Not symetrical slider shape again? I assume you can fix it by yourself.
7. 01:57:473 (1) - A finish sound at the startpoint is not good imo. Well, there are 2 options to fix this, remove it, or adding a finish again at the startpoint of 01:58:964 (2) -
8. 02:09:399 (1) - Not symtrical slider shape again.
9. 02:13:126 (3) - Since the combo here is long, how about adding a new combo here?
10. 02:16:107 (1) - Same reason as before, it's better to add finish here at the startpoint. If you follow this you should add finish here 02:19:088 (1) - at the startpoint.
11. 02:34:741 (3) - I think you forgot to add a finish here at the startpoint. Since in your previous chorus, there are a finish sound at this rythim.
12. 02:39:585 (1) - Same as before, you should move a finish sound here to the startpoint of 02:39:958 (2) -
13. 02:47:784 (2) - A little awkward finish sound again. I think you should remove it.
14. 02:51:883 (1) - How about add a finish at the startpoint? since it's the begining of new rythim.

1. Overall nice diff
2. 00:31:759 (1) - How about adding a finish here? I think it's more better to hear.
3. 01:01:573 (1) - Same reason as above, add a finish here at the startpoint.
4. 01:31:386 (1) - ^ at the startpoint.
5. 02:04:182 (2) - In your previous rythim there are a finish sound here. I think you must forgot.

1. Nice diff too.
2. 00:31:759 (1) - add a finish here for a finishing touch of the rythim.
3. 00:41:076 (1) - Emm, make it stack properly with the 00:39:958 (1) - . It's more better to see imo.?
4. 01:16:480 (4) - Adding a finish sound at the startpoint is nice. And it will be a finishing touch for the finish rythim you added before this.
5. 01:35:859 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is a little awkward. You can remove it or change it into whistle.
6. 02:18:343 (6) - Move the second point to x:312 y:268 since it's not't blanket properly.