hello 4:40 drain x 5
[Extra]
- 00:02:639 (4,5,6) - Would do 2 1/2 sliders here instead for piano this filler rhythm doesn't really fit much here imo.
- 00:05:276 (4,6) - ee idk if I like how this looks like but i guess it's fine
- 00:05:771 (7) - No glissandro slider? 1/8 buzz maybe?
- 00:06:100 (1,2) - 1/2 sliders would work on the whites since 00:06:595 - is super filler. For 00:07:913 (3) - https://i.imgur.com/OCdbYOL.png try this there's a lot of filler rhythm here holy. But hey at 00:08:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - this works idk why you varied the rhythm like 3 times in in succession though..
- 00:11:045 (6,7,1) - 1 is way stronger than 6 or 7 but it has almost no emphasis with how you patterned this. Moving it further away would be nice. // 00:14:012 (1) -
- 00:15:826 (4,5) - Stack like 00:14:507 (4,5,1,2) - ?
- 00:16:650 - So much filler rhythm, this is a calm part so lowering density would represent that well by making stuff like https://i.imgur.com/oASY6aa.png instead of 00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cuz there's so many circles here. 00:17:474 - even lands on a pretty strong vocal.
- 00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All circles but there are vocals you can map with sliders this is calm part :l
- 00:20:935 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Half of these circles aren't even mapped to anything in particular..
- 00:27:529 (2,3) - Why skip the red tick with this slider? Vocal seems mappable if you just shortened 2 to end on red? 00:30:166 (2) - etcetc
- 00:38:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - again filler rhythm with 00:38:738 (6,7) - at least make 6 a slider if you're going for drums? If you're going for vocals there should be a lot more sliders on the reds.
- 01:10:056 (3) - 01:13:353 (1) - Why map these double kicks as a slider when before you had them as circles? 01:04:782 (3,4) - 01:59:507 (1) - problem repeats everywhere
- 01:26:210 (5) - If following vocals this end should be clickable since 01:26:540 (1,2) - is following vocals right?
- 01:47:639 (1,2) - No contrast between this spacing and 01:46:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the triangle pattern is already high spacing. Try to nerf it so that 1,2 gets more emphasis.
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - Now these drums are like a mixture of active and passive so the emphasis is muddle completely and 01:48:957 - gets skipped where usually it's mapped. Try: https://i.imgur.com/eCkK4ol.png 01:51:430 (1,2) - etc
- 01:52:913 (1,2) - More contrast again
- 02:07:913 (6,7,8) - This is the only audible 1/4 the rest of this stream is just 1/2..
- 02:10:716 (5,6,7) - Doesn't show the piano stopping at all, it's as if you just ignored the piano completely. Try to make a flow change or lower spacing or even just a reverse slider to show some difference
- 02:56:210 (1,3,5) - I like these sliders but 02:57:694 (2) - doesn't have a slider and 03:00:331 (2,3) - should be ctrl+g to keep the piano in focus?
- 03:04:946 (5,6) - Slider for piano tooooo or stack the circles for emphasis through movementtt
- 03:11:375 - This note is too late, timing needs to be checked here.
- 04:16:484 (3,4,5,6) - I don't really get what these back and forths are emphasizing there's nothing really in the song that these can make stand out imo
Overall the thing this diff suffers most from is rhythm. Try to be more focused with your rhythm by keeping a certain layer on sliderheads (piano etc) that will make it so that it is much more clear what you follow. 02:56:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Does a good job of that but fails at 02:57:529 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:00:166 (1,2,3) -. 02:46:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4,5 should also be a slider but you use filler circles so 02:48:298 (1,2) - loses emphasis since they are also circles. Your entire map confuses me rhythmically. This stuff happens consistently and I really recommend you stop using so much filler rhythm and actually start using more sliders and more focused rhythm to map the layer of the song you want and not combine them like you are in the places I mention in my mod.
You should also work on contrast and emphasis since I also pointed out many places where you don't make notes stand out at all they just kinda blend in with the rest of the patterning.
[Insane]
- 00:03:133 (4) - More filler you can delete.
- 00:11:869 (4,5,6,1) - This isn't consistent with the spacing used at 00:14:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - they shouldn't be stacked like that imo if you don't do a stacking thing for the second one.
- 00:17:309 (4,5,6,7) - more filler circles make 00:17:474 - a slider or something // 00:19:782 (3,4) -
- 01:02:639 (7) - More contrast, more emphasis! 01:02:474 (6) - is weaker in the song but has the same emphasis as 7 :l
- For your whole kiai https://i.imgur.com/cf1vo4g.jpg is much better than 01:05:441 (1,2,3,4) - your whole rhythm in the kiai just makes no sense you should consistently follow one layer with sliderheads + circles to make it clear what you're following. This problem repeats with all kiais.
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - The end of 1 is really strong so it would be nice to have that clickable for all of them.
- 02:58:518 (5,6) - Slider for piano? Consistent layering with 02:57:694 (2,4,1) - // 03:02:968 (2,3) -
- 03:15:166 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can tidy this pattern: https://i.imgur.com/bdYbSiC.png
- 03:55:550 (3) - Random reverse you never used before? Would change this to be circle/circle/slider.
Yeah same issue with Extra, too much filler rhythm that makes it too difficult to understand what layer you're following. Vocals? Drums? Piano? Nothing? The map doesn't tell me that since you don't use sliders to properly prioritize your rhythm. Sliderhead = what you're following, tail = everything else.
[Hard]
- 00:03:133 (3) - Circle here to show the piano stopped already? Or you can just delete it entirely.
- 00:29:836 - Would prefer strong notes like this clickable since in the song they're emphasized quite a lot.
- 01:50:276 (1,2) - You used spacing emphasis for other notes like these so why not here too?
- 02:07:584 (2) - only 1/4 i hear is on 02:07:913 - so maybe continue using 1/2 and try a triple there?
- 03:08:243 (1,2,3) - idk how readable this is on a hard diff, would probably avoid personally
Much less issues in Hard regarding rhythm but.. yeah.. that's cuz you're kinda forced not to use so much filler rhythm.
[Normal]
- 00:28:353 - This note is pretty strong, maybe you could make it clickable? You kinda did for 00:30:990 - ?
I think it's not that bad I'm just not a fan of the patterning that much personally.
[Easy]
- 00:29:836 - These are pretty strong, maybe make them clickable? Two circles?
Yea same as Normal.
[ ]
Overall I really think you need to work on your rhythm for the top diffs they are really hard to follow. Use more sliders to put your layers in focus and be consistent with it, avoid filler rhythm if you can since it just dilutes the actual layers of the song into something that doesn't have as much focus.
Good luck!
[Extra]
- 00:02:639 (4,5,6) - Would do 2 1/2 sliders here instead for piano this filler rhythm doesn't really fit much here imo.
- 00:05:276 (4,6) - ee idk if I like how this looks like but i guess it's fine
- 00:05:771 (7) - No glissandro slider? 1/8 buzz maybe?
- 00:06:100 (1,2) - 1/2 sliders would work on the whites since 00:06:595 - is super filler. For 00:07:913 (3) - https://i.imgur.com/OCdbYOL.png try this there's a lot of filler rhythm here holy. But hey at 00:08:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - this works idk why you varied the rhythm like 3 times in in succession though..
- 00:11:045 (6,7,1) - 1 is way stronger than 6 or 7 but it has almost no emphasis with how you patterned this. Moving it further away would be nice. // 00:14:012 (1) -
- 00:15:826 (4,5) - Stack like 00:14:507 (4,5,1,2) - ?
- 00:16:650 - So much filler rhythm, this is a calm part so lowering density would represent that well by making stuff like https://i.imgur.com/oASY6aa.png instead of 00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cuz there's so many circles here. 00:17:474 - even lands on a pretty strong vocal.
- 00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All circles but there are vocals you can map with sliders this is calm part :l
- 00:20:935 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Half of these circles aren't even mapped to anything in particular..
- 00:27:529 (2,3) - Why skip the red tick with this slider? Vocal seems mappable if you just shortened 2 to end on red? 00:30:166 (2) - etcetc
- 00:38:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - again filler rhythm with 00:38:738 (6,7) - at least make 6 a slider if you're going for drums? If you're going for vocals there should be a lot more sliders on the reds.
- 01:10:056 (3) - 01:13:353 (1) - Why map these double kicks as a slider when before you had them as circles? 01:04:782 (3,4) - 01:59:507 (1) - problem repeats everywhere
- 01:26:210 (5) - If following vocals this end should be clickable since 01:26:540 (1,2) - is following vocals right?
- 01:47:639 (1,2) - No contrast between this spacing and 01:46:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the triangle pattern is already high spacing. Try to nerf it so that 1,2 gets more emphasis.
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - Now these drums are like a mixture of active and passive so the emphasis is muddle completely and 01:48:957 - gets skipped where usually it's mapped. Try: https://i.imgur.com/eCkK4ol.png 01:51:430 (1,2) - etc
- 01:52:913 (1,2) - More contrast again
- 02:07:913 (6,7,8) - This is the only audible 1/4 the rest of this stream is just 1/2..
- 02:10:716 (5,6,7) - Doesn't show the piano stopping at all, it's as if you just ignored the piano completely. Try to make a flow change or lower spacing or even just a reverse slider to show some difference
- 02:56:210 (1,3,5) - I like these sliders but 02:57:694 (2) - doesn't have a slider and 03:00:331 (2,3) - should be ctrl+g to keep the piano in focus?
- 03:04:946 (5,6) - Slider for piano tooooo or stack the circles for emphasis through movementtt
- 03:11:375 - This note is too late, timing needs to be checked here.
- 04:16:484 (3,4,5,6) - I don't really get what these back and forths are emphasizing there's nothing really in the song that these can make stand out imo
Overall the thing this diff suffers most from is rhythm. Try to be more focused with your rhythm by keeping a certain layer on sliderheads (piano etc) that will make it so that it is much more clear what you follow. 02:56:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Does a good job of that but fails at 02:57:529 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:00:166 (1,2,3) -. 02:46:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4,5 should also be a slider but you use filler circles so 02:48:298 (1,2) - loses emphasis since they are also circles. Your entire map confuses me rhythmically. This stuff happens consistently and I really recommend you stop using so much filler rhythm and actually start using more sliders and more focused rhythm to map the layer of the song you want and not combine them like you are in the places I mention in my mod.
You should also work on contrast and emphasis since I also pointed out many places where you don't make notes stand out at all they just kinda blend in with the rest of the patterning.
[Insane]
- 00:03:133 (4) - More filler you can delete.
- 00:11:869 (4,5,6,1) - This isn't consistent with the spacing used at 00:14:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - they shouldn't be stacked like that imo if you don't do a stacking thing for the second one.
- 00:17:309 (4,5,6,7) - more filler circles make 00:17:474 - a slider or something // 00:19:782 (3,4) -
- 01:02:639 (7) - More contrast, more emphasis! 01:02:474 (6) - is weaker in the song but has the same emphasis as 7 :l
- For your whole kiai https://i.imgur.com/cf1vo4g.jpg is much better than 01:05:441 (1,2,3,4) - your whole rhythm in the kiai just makes no sense you should consistently follow one layer with sliderheads + circles to make it clear what you're following. This problem repeats with all kiais.
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - The end of 1 is really strong so it would be nice to have that clickable for all of them.
- 02:58:518 (5,6) - Slider for piano? Consistent layering with 02:57:694 (2,4,1) - // 03:02:968 (2,3) -
- 03:15:166 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can tidy this pattern: https://i.imgur.com/bdYbSiC.png
- 03:55:550 (3) - Random reverse you never used before? Would change this to be circle/circle/slider.
Yeah same issue with Extra, too much filler rhythm that makes it too difficult to understand what layer you're following. Vocals? Drums? Piano? Nothing? The map doesn't tell me that since you don't use sliders to properly prioritize your rhythm. Sliderhead = what you're following, tail = everything else.
[Hard]
- 00:03:133 (3) - Circle here to show the piano stopped already? Or you can just delete it entirely.
- 00:29:836 - Would prefer strong notes like this clickable since in the song they're emphasized quite a lot.
- 01:50:276 (1,2) - You used spacing emphasis for other notes like these so why not here too?
- 02:07:584 (2) - only 1/4 i hear is on 02:07:913 - so maybe continue using 1/2 and try a triple there?
- 03:08:243 (1,2,3) - idk how readable this is on a hard diff, would probably avoid personally
Much less issues in Hard regarding rhythm but.. yeah.. that's cuz you're kinda forced not to use so much filler rhythm.
[Normal]
- 00:28:353 - This note is pretty strong, maybe you could make it clickable? You kinda did for 00:30:990 - ?
I think it's not that bad I'm just not a fan of the patterning that much personally.
[Easy]
- 00:29:836 - These are pretty strong, maybe make them clickable? Two circles?
Yea same as Normal.
[ ]
Overall I really think you need to work on your rhythm for the top diffs they are really hard to follow. Use more sliders to put your layers in focus and be consistent with it, avoid filler rhythm if you can since it just dilutes the actual layers of the song into something that doesn't have as much focus.
Good luck!