Full version and Full spread? I see that you are a man of culture as well. 2 minute cut doesn't do music any justice.
00:08:078 (4) - imo, it's better to click both of the sounds instead of one. Why not just make them 2 circles and change 00:08:408 (5,6) - to slider instead? wow great!
00:13:518 (5) - why not stack this under 4? It's a 1/1 gap when 00:14:012 (1) - is a 1/2 gap. Can be misleading for the players because both have almost the same spacing. hmm, keep it.
00:19:452 (2) - this note is given almost the same emphasis as other notes (00:19:287 (1,3,4) - ) when the there is really not much to support the (2) circle.
Why not just make the (1) object in the combo a slider instead? yeah, Change it.
00:42:694 (6) - this overlap doesn't look good It moved a little
00:46:155 (3,4) - should change this to a triplet to emphasize the vocal. ok, Changed with around notes.
01:18:957 (2,3) - why not a slider to emphasize the vocal? I make a different pattern to first verse with second verse.
02:07:584 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the stream looks a bit unnatural for the map that looks pretty natural. Could make the stream less curvy and flow more naturally. ok, changed to more less curv.
00:48:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is this different from 02:08:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
The former you didn't map the piano but the second one did. same as above
02:56:210 - this section I think it's better to focus on the new instrument my take on this: http://i.imgur.com/qgnlOEC.png
basically every piano sounds start on a slider ok
03:43:352 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the spacing is extremely huge for a 1/4 gap reduce it a bit I consider it
03:49:451 (9) - this overlap doesn't look too good ok
04:40:880 (7) - NC for final note? hmm..keep it
00:24:562 (1) - the overlap doesn't look good ok
02:38:408 (3,1) - a little too close? no problem because there is (4).
02:38:408 (3,1) - so on the Insane diff you did what I suggested on the Extra, but please nudge those 2 sliders at 02:58:023 (4,5) - forward to a white tick and just move the circle somewhere else. ok! really good!
Good luck with your mapset! and I look forward to HRing the Insane diff once it's ranked
Thanks you for modding!!