I'm so busy with work everyday... so crazy...
I checking it little by little...
I checking it little by little...
I could not understand what the filler rhythm after all... but i saw some documets...Mir wrote:
hello 4:40 drain x 5
[Extra]
- 00:02:639 (4,5,6) - Would do 2 1/2 sliders here instead for piano this filler rhythm doesn't really fit much here imo. there is bass drum sound at here, so i feel strange to be on slider tail.
- 00:05:276 (4,6) - ee idk if I like how this looks like but i guess it's fine Probably okay ...
- 00:05:771 (7) - No glissandro slider? 1/8 buzz maybe? annoyed sound of slider tail will remain, so i think it is good with circle.
- 00:06:100 (1,2) - 1/2 sliders would work on the whites since 00:06:595 - is super filler. For 00:07:913 (3) - https://i.imgur.com/OCdbYOL.png try this there's a lot of filler rhythm here holy. But hey at 00:08:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - this works idk why you varied the rhythm like 3 times in in succession though.. I intended to make like become lively. we will feel monotonous that same pattern succession.
- 00:11:045 (6,7,1) - 1 is way stronger than 6 or 7 but it has almost no emphasis with how you patterned this. Moving it further away would be nice. // 00:14:012 (1) - ok
- 00:15:826 (4,5) - Stack like 00:14:507 (4,5,1,2) - ? ok
- 00:16:650 - So much filler rhythm, this is a calm part so lowering density would represent that well by making stuff like https://i.imgur.com/oASY6aa.png instead of 00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cuz there's so many circles here. 00:17:474 - even lands on a pretty strong vocal. ok
- 00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All circles but there are vocals you can map with sliders this is calm part :l ok
- 00:20:935 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Half of these circles aren't even mapped to anything in particular.. vocals follow..
- 00:27:529 (2,3) - Why skip the red tick with this slider? Vocal seems mappable if you just shortened 2 to end on red? 00:30:166 (2) - etcetc It was expressive there is drum sounds in blue line and feel like songs will hop.
- 00:38:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - again filler rhythm with 00:38:738 (6,7) - at least make 6 a slider if you're going for drums? If you're going for vocals there should be a lot more sliders on the reds. (1)make as slider. following to piano.
- 01:10:056 (3) - 01:13:353 (1) - Why map these double kicks as a slider when before you had them as circles? 01:04:782 (3,4) - 01:59:507 (1) - problem repeats everywhere I use the slider when there is sound prolongation. there is sound of vocals, guiter prolongation on the double kick, so I prioritized it. I think it changes every on lines and don't need consistency
- 01:26:210 (5) - If following vocals this end should be clickable since 01:26:540 (1,2) - is following vocals right? ok
- 01:47:639 (1,2) - No contrast between this spacing and 01:46:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the triangle pattern is already high spacing. Try to nerf it so that 1,2 gets more emphasis. ok
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - Now these drums are like a mixture of active and passive so the emphasis is muddle completely and 01:48:957 - gets skipped where usually it's mapped. Try: https://i.imgur.com/eCkK4ol.png 01:51:430 (1,2) - etc most emphasized sounds is piano and snare drum in here. matching bass drum sound would be monotonous impression pattern.
- 01:52:913 (1,2) - More contrast again ok
- 02:07:913 (6,7,8) - This is the only audible 1/4 the rest of this stream is just 1/2.. Fixed in my feeling. It is hard to hear the sound...
- 02:10:716 (5,6,7) - Doesn't show the piano stopping at all, it's as if you just ignored the piano completely. Try to make a flow change or lower spacing or even just a reverse slider to show some difference not only piano, should include also drum in pattern. both have sound at almost same timing, I think it is not necessary to mapping separately.
- 02:56:210 (1,3,5) - I like these sliders but 02:57:694 (2) - doesn't have a slider and 03:00:331 (2,3) - should be ctrl+g to keep the piano in focus? i feel Strange, changed at around pattern.
- 03:04:946 (5,6) - Slider for piano tooooo or stack the circles for emphasis through movementtt ok
- 03:11:375 - This note is too late, timing needs to be checked here. hmm ... I wonder this is unacceptable. adjusting timing for this only it, so obstructive to playing...?
- 04:16:484 (3,4,5,6) - I don't really get what these back and forths are emphasizing there's nothing really in the song that these can make stand out imo changed more vocal follow.
Overall the thing this diff suffers most from is rhythm. Try to be more focused with your rhythm by keeping a certain layer on sliderheads (piano etc) that will make it so that it is much more clear what you follow. 02:56:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Does a good job of that but fails at 02:57:529 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:00:166 (1,2,3) -. 02:46:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4,5 should also be a slider but you use filler circles so 02:48:298 (1,2) - loses emphasis since they are also circles. Your entire map confuses me rhythmically. This stuff happens consistently and I really recommend you stop using so much filler rhythm and actually start using more sliders and more focused rhythm to map the layer of the song you want and not combine them like you are in the places I mention in my mod.
You should also work on contrast and emphasis since I also pointed out many places where you don't make notes stand out at all they just kinda blend in with the rest of the patterning.
[Insane]
- 00:03:133 (4) - More filler you can delete. drum sound exist
- 00:11:869 (4,5,6,1) - This isn't consistent with the spacing used at 00:14:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - they shouldn't be stacked like that imo if you don't do a stacking thing for the second one. sound is completely different between the first and second one. in secondly, besides piano there is drum at different timing, which is a completely different pattern from the first one.
- 00:17:309 (4,5,6,7) - more filler circles make 00:17:474 - a slider or something // 00:19:782 (3,4) - ok
- 01:02:639 (7) - More contrast, more emphasis! 01:02:474 (6) - is weaker in the song but has the same emphasis as 7 :l That’s true...
- For your whole kiai https://i.imgur.com/cf1vo4g.jpg is much better than 01:05:441 (1,2,3,4) - your whole rhythm in the kiai just makes no sense you should consistently follow one layer with sliderheads + circles to make it clear what you're following. This problem repeats with all kiais. Does this follow a vocal? I feel it looks like trying to forced follow..
- 01:48:793 (1,2) - The end of 1 is really strong so it would be nice to have that clickable for all of them. Because it is same sound here, I express it with a slider. I placed circles because It is the next sound that should be most emphasized.
- 02:58:518 (5,6) - Slider for piano? Consistent layering with 02:57:694 (2,4,1) - // 03:02:968 (2,3) - ok
- 03:15:166 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can tidy this pattern: https://i.imgur.com/bdYbSiC.png yeah.
- 03:55:550 (3) - Random reverse you never used before? Would change this to be circle/circle/slider. ok
Yeah same issue with Extra, too much filler rhythm that makes it too difficult to understand what layer you're following. Vocals? Drums? Piano? Nothing? The map doesn't tell me that since you don't use sliders to properly prioritize your rhythm. Sliderhead = what you're following, tail = everything else.
[Hard]
- 00:03:133 (3) - Circle here to show the piano stopped already? Or you can just delete it entirely. keep it as a support for drum sound that exist 00:03:298
- 00:29:836 - Would prefer strong notes like this clickable since in the song they're emphasized quite a lot. as long vocal sound with "shita", it can express with one slider.
- 01:50:276 (1,2) - You used spacing emphasis for other notes like these so why not here too? thats right
- 02:07:584 (2) - only 1/4 i hear is on 02:07:913 - so maybe continue using 1/2 and try a triple there? ok
- 03:08:243 (1,2,3) - idk how readable this is on a hard diff, would probably avoid personally ok
Much less issues in Hard regarding rhythm but.. yeah.. that's cuz you're kinda forced not to use so much filler rhythm.
[Normal]
- 00:28:353 - This note is pretty strong, maybe you could make it clickable? You kinda did for 00:30:990 - ? ok
I think it's not that bad I'm just not a fan of the patterning that much personally.
[Easy]
- 00:29:836 - These are pretty strong, maybe make them clickable? Two circles? same as hard diff
Yea same as Normal.
[ ]
Overall I really think you need to work on your rhythm for the top diffs they are really hard to follow. Use more sliders to put your layers in focus and be consistent with it, avoid filler rhythm if you can since it just dilutes the actual layers of the song into something that doesn't have as much focus.
Good luck!
you are right...!!Gaia wrote:
nice mapu & sb!! (。>◡<)
edit: for extra
03:28:517 (1) - make this pink so your effects match with your colours at 03:33:792 (1) - and 04:35:770 (1) - ?
Thank you for modding!!Wishkey wrote:
Heyo! From queue
ExtraHard
- 00:03:133 (5,6) - kinda sounds a bit overmapped here for the soft intro, would consinsider deleting these so you follow the piano for the intro to have a little less dense rhythm drum sound exist in backsound.
- 00:11:375 (1) - could use some more emphasis like you do for the other cymbals in this section, currently really low spacing and in the flow of (5,6,7) still ok
- 00:24:232 (5) - would be nice if this was a bit differnt then the rest of this section so that unique cymbal crash stands out a bit ok
- 00:30:166 (2) - bit weird extended slider here when theres a really strong vocal on the red tick, those extended sliders would fit better at 00:28:847 (2,3,4) - imo when theres nothing really on the red tick, could maybe swap the rhythms here changed pattern at 00:28:847 (2,3,4)
- 00:50:276 (5,6,7) - feel you could make these drums stand out a bit more pattern wise since its kinda identical to the rest, maybe stack (6) under00:49:946 (3) - for instance to show a difference and a more break feeling same like similar stuff at 02:10:716 (5,6,7) - too close? I will keep it now.
- 00:56:210 (1,1,1) - would be cool if those storyboard circles were matched with the circle placement same for similar hmm. keep it
- 01:03:133 (1,2,3) - kinda hard to read with the same ds yet differeny rhythm gaps and no NC, would maybe stack the 1/1 gap like you did with the others or atleast NC (2) I think that it is allowable level in this deff because there is an interval between 1 and 2.
- 01:56:540 (5,6) - would reduce the ds here thats a similar jump like the next notes yet the music has no intensity here at all ok
- 03:15:826 (6) - would be a really good spot for a bit of slider art, kinda feels a bit empty now with the waiting for the break i don't want to use slider art...
- 04:13:187 (1,2,3) - NC on (3) instead of (1) would be nice here for consistency and having a follow point for that huge jump keep
- 04:35:770 (1,2,3,4) - similar spacing increase like 00:00:826 (1,2,3,4) - would make for a nice callback nice!
- 04:40:880 (7) - could put this on the head of that slider you're stacking with to emphasize it a bit more ok
Good luck with the set!
- 00:01:815 (3,2) - Stack a bit off ok
- 00:06:760 (3) - control + h on the spot would make this flow smoother and reduces that jump a bit which is a bit high in compared to the rest of the section, could control + h 00:07:089 (4) - afterwards too if you want keep
- 00:13:188 (2,3) - would (semi-) stack 3 under 2 here bc you got a bit of awkward angle at 00:13:518 (3,4) - and also removes that overlap with 00:14:012 (1) - that looks a bit bad hmm... keep it...
- 00:27:529 (2) - piano and vocals have 3 strong beats here compared to 00:28:353 (1,2) - so wouldn't make it the same rhythm wise, 2 sliders for 00:27:529 (2,3) - would fit nicely I think i think emphasized piano sounds has been caught.
- 01:09:067 (4,1) - could use a bit of a jump since you do it for the rest of the downbeats in the kiai where these vocals gain intensity ok
- 01:29:672 (2) - also really strong here so increase the spacing a bit more 1.1 seems really low here ok
- 02:16:320 (4,2) - sliderborders touching doesn't look that great, increase ds a bit ok
- 01:01:485 (1,2,3) - 02:21:925 (1,2,3) - bit inconsistent trip stacking ds wise ok
- 02:35:112 (1) - 02:29:837 (1) - and similar second kiai, you kinda emphasiszed these in the first kiai but then went full basic consistent ds for the next 2 kiais a lot of times, the music and vocals really shine here so I'd consider doing something more spacing wise to for these 2 kiais ok
- 04:37:583 (2,3) - increase spacing a bit to compensate for the stacking ds shift so its the same as 04:39:726 (1,2) - like the borders not touching
Thank you for modding!!ShogunMoon wrote:
NM from Q
- Easy
- 01:21:265 (2,1) - make a better blanket please xd ok
- 02:08:408 - add a note for emphasize piano imo ok
- 02:07:748 (2,1) - make them similar is should be more attractive i think move a bit
- 02:13:683 (1) - remove nc for the consistence with 00:50:935 (1,2,3) obviously the sound is different. i think there is no consistency
- 02:52:254 (2,3) - problem of consistence why this isn't a slider renverse like 01:31:815 (4) - tbh i prefer slider renverse because that's given the diff more understandable for the new players and plus that it have no gap drum sound is different.
- 04:09:396 (2) - here too ^
- 03:32:803 (3,2) - avoid this kind of overlap, it doesn't look good ok
- 04:03:791 (2) - move it to x:221 y:313 for a better continuity of the flow ok
- Normal
- open aimod for DS maybe ok?
- 00:16:155 (5) - you don't need to make a 1/1 slider tbh there is no special sound on the tail, just put a circle here 00:16:155 - it's fine imo ok
- 00:22:584 (2,1) - stack them ok
- 02:06:430 - add clap ok
- 02:28:518 (4) - move to x:335 y:52 it's better like this i find keep
- 02:32:144 (5,3) - stack them, doesn't look attractive right now :/ ok
- 03:15:826 (4) - continue to follow flow, move it to x:75 y:156 hmmm.. ok
- Hard
- 00:01:815 (3,2) - imperfect stack ok
- 00:30:826 (4,1) - can you overlap these notes a little more so that we can see more the difference because we really cannot knowledge what is this. There are 2 possibilities, you can try this https://puu.sh/xYaJP/ee85b44174.jpg (if you fix the first suggestion you need to move circle to x:488 y:243) or this https://puu.sh/xYaQZ/eef5d5ceea.jpg ok overlapped
- 01:11:293 - should be cool to have a triplet here for emphasize piano (similar for the others kiai parts) feel like rhythm is difficult
- Insane
- 03:39:561 (6) - add nc
nice diff!
- Extra
gl!~
- 00:34:122 (2) - ctrl+g should be nice at this moment for emphasize a little more the vocals keep
- 00:41:375 (7) - should be 2 notes like you did 00:38:738 (6,7) - and these notes 00:41:705 (1,2) - should be a 1/2 slider it's more logic lol
i think i shouldn't used consistency because each sounds is different.- 01:18:463 (5,1) - why spacing is more higher that 01:16:979 (6,1) - density is more lower than 01:16:979 (6,1) move a bit
- 01:49:287 (2,3,4) - these notes are kinda out of place, something like this should work better tbh https://puu.sh/xYca2/482407e2e7.png or you can make like you did before 00:18:298 (2,3,4) it don't have long sound to use the slider in here.
- 01:54:562 (2,3,4) - ^
- 02:19:946 (4) - add nc hm... remove nc 02:21:265 (3)
- 03:27:858 - fix the break https://puu.sh/xYcy8/227a2d4ad1.png ok
- 03:42:033 (1) - the tail of this slider shoud be on the blue tick like the insane diff oh.... ok
Thank you for modding!Sinnoh wrote:
#modreqs still exists right #modreq is my house
General
Your offset is early in quite a few places. Ask someone who's good at timing to help, as it often switches between early and just right.
01:03:793 (4) - This could probably have a more interesting hitsound, you could probably use that hitsound on the tail of 01:25:221 (1) -
In hard, there's a lot of tricky patterns and high spacing. You need an advanced diff for a proper spread between normal and hard . I could say nerf hard or buff normal, but I don't think it's possible to still have a good spread from hard -> insane while nerfing it. Adding an advanced diff is the best option.
Extra
00:24:397 (6) - Very quiet sound here, try 50, 150 for less emphasis ok
00:48:298 (1) - 02:08:737 (1) - Change your NC patterns so that they follow the piano, do 123 or 123456 ok
01:09:891 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of rhythm here, but I really prefer following vocal. I'd make 01:09:891 (2,4) - sliders but you don't follow it too much ok
01:34:452 (1) - Can use a more interesting slider shape so it's clear this is low sv I don't like slider art...
01:46:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Scale distance down a bit for much lower intensity of just piano ok
01:55:551 (1) - Use a 1/8 repeat slider? Also need to place it on a early weird snap A little discomfort... I don't have to catch the sound
04:08:737 (4) - Inconsistent rhythm with 02:51:595 (5) - ok
04:23:902 (1,3,5) - First one follows stream but second is stacked? correct place
04:31:814 (1,2,3,4) - https://twitter.com/lasse_osu/status/923126406212673537 use 1/3 streams here hmm..? 04:33:462 (2,3,4) ?
Insane
00:06:760 (3,4,5) - Jump to 4 is pretty big considering 3 is the same but much smaller jump. ok, position moved.
00:07:749 (2) - hitsound oh...ok
00:09:067 (2) - uh just double check hitsounds for me ok ^
00:30:990 (1,2,3) - Increase distance of 1,2 decrease 2,3 since that triple is pretty hard to change direction ok
01:47:639 (1,2) - This jump is too big for directly after break, use 2.3x distance. Be sure to keep 01:52:913 (1,2) - consistent if changed ok
03:33:215 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This would be easier if it had low spacing instead of being stacked. I can't count how many objects are in the stream, so it's a bit hard to go into the jump section next hmm.. ok low spacing
04:22:995 (2) - I cannot do this accelerating stream at all would suggest to keep one speed since that's really hard for insane You're right...
04:33:132 (1) - Can start using 1/3 streams here instead of sliders not exist sound in reverse position
Hard
00:47:309 (2,3,4) - Can you make this stack less ugly, looks really bad on my skin hmm I don't think so.
02:06:924 (3,4,1,2) - That's really hard to read, can you change the pattern to avoid the overlap ok
02:15:661 (2,3) - spacing is much smaller than it was on the previous pattern for this ok
03:11:375 (1) - Haven't seen any slider shape like this, quite out of place it can expressed a drum pattern
03:33:215 (3,4) - ok do not use kick sliders with different amount of repeats like this. Rotate 03:33:462 (4) - 100 degrees and move 03:33:792 (1) - under the tail. It will make it clear there is a difference between the two ok
04:23:902 (1,2,3,4) - This one's also hard to read, overlaps + distance spacing shouldn't be used together ok
Easy
01:21:265 (2,3) - *dabs* oh...ok
Lower two diffs are amazing
Call me back once you have an advanced diff and the timing is fixed!
Chirony wrote:
Extra
04:31:814 (1,2,3,4) - https://twitter.com/lasse_osu/status/923126406212673537 use 1/3 streams here hmm..? 04:33:462 (2,3,4) ?
Lost in translation, I meant try this, timeline is at 04:31:814 (1) - https://puu.sh/y8YDg/a3142954ea.png
Same for insane
i tried to made Hard a little easier.
Is spread fine? yes
Yes please, can you also do it for the mania set, it cuts directly after the first kiai https://osu.ppy.sh/s/629560pimpG wrote:
yes the timing needs some fixing. i will be working on it soon (unless someone is already working on it)
Sinnoh wrote:
Chirony wrote:
Extra
04:31:814 (1,2,3,4) - https://twitter.com/lasse_osu/status/923126406212673537 use 1/3 streams here hmm..? 04:33:462 (2,3,4) ?
Lost in translation, I meant try this, timeline is at 04:31:814 (1) - https://puu.sh/y8YDg/a3142954ea.png
Same for insane
I fixed only a part of Extra.
I’d rather not use 1/3 stream because I don't play well...
i tried to made Hard a little easier.
Is spread fine? yes
relieved...
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really really thanks...!!pimpG wrote:
this is the timing i sent to ChironySPOILERi'll be available for timing assistance anytime you need it826,329.67032967033,4,2,1,45,1,0
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Sinnoh wrote:
storyboard could probably use a mod or two
bg-kiai.jpg is really low quality reedited, it should have been improved.
the letterbox effect goes wayyy offscreen I don't understand it because it does not reproduce in my environment. Probably, because "_ Scale" and "_Vector Scale" coexisted, I think caused the problem.
not good with sb, have irl stuff so will get back to this later. Ask someone else to check the storyboard first
Thanks, updatedSinnoh wrote:
recheck
General
03:13:022 (5) - i can't figure out what hitsounds should be here since it's done in 3 different ways whistl+finish?
Combo colour 1 is lumosity 240, "Avoid using combo colors with ~220 luminosity or higher during kiai times." ok, change to green
AI bat is telling me there's a tonne of unused storyboard files, can you confirm if this is correct or not? I could not find it ...not exist already?
Easy
ai mod ok
Normal
02:04:533 (3) - 02:10:220 (4) - snaps were broken with timing oh...ok
Hard
00:51:430 (2) - hitsound ok
04:07:748 (4,2,3) - messed up stacking, do a manual stack changed placement
Insane
00:19:782 (3) - Wrong hitsound ok
00:48:793 (3,4,5,6,7) - hitsound inconsistent with extra ok
Extra
ai mod ok
01:26:045 (4) - Hitsound tail ok
Thank you for modding!!Zero__wind wrote:
as promised trust
General
fine
Easy
00:52:419 (2) - missing clap on head ok
01:13:353 (2) - don't really know what's this following to, I think you should have a circle at 01:13:353 - and then start a 1/1 reverse slider from 01:13:682 - to follow vocal i tried changing pattern
01:26:540 (3) - similar to above, maybe change to a 2/1 slider and a circle at 01:27:528 -^
Normal
00:58:847 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
01:31:815 (3) - missing two claps
01:54:562 (6) - missing whistle at end
02:06:099 (1) - missing whistle on head
02:07:417 (4) - missing clap at end
02:19:285 (1,2) - missing clap at their ends
03:06:759 (1,1) - ^
04:33:792 (3) - missing whistle on head
all fixed
Hard
00:04:782 (1) - clap at the reversing point? yes
00:04:782 (1,2,3) - maybe you can turn up the speed from 00:04:782 (1) - instead of from 00:05:441 (3) - as I feel that will fit the music, also you can use equal spacing between 00:04:782 (1,2,3) - so it'll vissualy look better ok
00:30:826 (4) - don't know what's this circle following, I think simply removing it will make the rhythm better, kinda similar to 00:27:529 (2,3,1) - ok
00:33:463 (4) - ^ or maybe you can choose to change it to a 1/2 slider slider here
00:54:891 (1,3) - why not making them parallel? just like 00:55:221 (2,4) - oh..miss
01:08:573 (2,3) - I think this jump is unreasonably big, 3 is not a really strong beat and I don't think there shold be such a big jump, better keep common spacing between 01:08:573 (2,3) - , the slider jump between 01:08:738 (3,4) - is totally fine ok
01:47:804 (2,3) - 01:50:441 (2,3) - similar to above, I think these two jumps are too big and don't fit the music well, better make them consistent with 01:53:078 (2,3) - which is more appropriateok, placement moved
02:22:417 (4,5,6) - why are they totally different with 01:01:993 (3,4,5,6) - while the music is the same? I hope you can make them consistent hm, it is certainly the same...
03:08:242 (1) - missing clap on head and whistle at end ok
04:09:561 (2) - missing clap on head ok
Insane
00:07:419 (1) - missing whistle on head ok
00:13:188 (3) - missing clap at end ok
01:03:793 (2) - why using a default clap here instead of the snaredrum? it's inconsistent with Easy Normal and Hard miss...
01:46:892 - you don't have a reason to drag the break time here, plz better make it back to natural ok
02:49:121 (4) - missing whistle ok
02:53:077 (5) - missing clap on head ok
04:00:165 (1) - tbh this slider shape looks really out of place along with the other ones, this might be the only time you drew a slider like this in the whole diff ok
04:03:297 (2) - I think a circle is totally ok, there's no important sound on the blue tick to follow ok
04:06:429 (5) - missing clap ok
Extra
01:03:792 (4) - same as Insane ok
01:26:045 (4) - should use a clap at end instead of whistle ok
02:21:264 (3,4) - I don't think there are still 1/3 piano sounds to follow, change these to two 1/2 sliders to follow the drums should be more appropriate exist 1/3 piano sounds
02:35:934 (4,5,6,1) - this flow is not really comfortable imo, you'd better try CTRL+G for 02:36:099 (5,6) - or rework in other ways changed it to a slider
02:56:209 (1) - need finish on head like other diffs ok
03:00:330 (2) - the whistle on head should be moved to the end to match with the drum ok
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