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wajinshu

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00:07:619 (3) - X-248 Y-40
00:07:090 (1) - X-308 Y-192 Так красивее момент смотрится. Мне нравится и мое
00:08:325 (1) - X-204 Y-192 И слайдер ctrl+j Там бланкет с 1
00:12:031 (1,2,3) - на 3-ку whistle сделай 00:12:031 (1,2,3) - а тут на 6-ку , лучше звучит момент. Уши так будет резать
00:12:648 (7,1,2) - тут Clap поставь , созвучно с последующими хлопками. Там ведь есть клап
00:15:913 (2,3,4,5) - Перемести этот момент чуть выше , ибо последняя нота слишком низко , да и по общему спейсингу подойдет.
00:18:031 (4) - Тут 4-ку на X-304 Y-164 Специально поставила оверлап с 1
00:18:207 (5) - А тут 5-ку на X-434 Y-56 - так паттерн круче смотрится и играется приятней ноты тогда не видно и сложнее
00:18:207 (5) - new combo тут не нужно
00:24:207 (1) - new combo есть же
00:35:325 (1) - ctrl+g так покруче и чуть сложнее Там специально стак сделан, отдых от 5)0
00:46:266 (5,6) - На эти два слайдера + clap сделай клап есть
00:55:090 (1) - ctrl+g Не красиво и не удобно
01:00:737 (1) - ctrl+g тоже сделай , а то не смотрится Слишком далеко расположено будет, оставлю свое
01:10:619 (1) - Тут finish сделай , звучит классно , послушай и согласись ) Конечно классно звучит, но там нет отдачи финиша как тут 01:09:207 (1) - или где-то еще (
01:57:207 (1) - ctrl+g и X-340 Y-324 так сложнее и норм играется Там бланкет и 1
А так мапка классная )
Спасибо!
Lasse
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wajinshu:
00:25:266 - don't really get your rhythm in this part, offbeat sliders + skipped drums like 00:24:913 (6,1) - make it pretty clear you follow vocals, but then 00:26:148 (4,5,6,1) - is just bland metronome following/drum ephasis
rhythms like 00:36:560 (6,1) - for example would be much more clear if you just ctrlg them
current is way too unclear in what it is following
happens for a lot of parts actually, I just can't really agree on how you handle rhythm

00:51:384 (1,2,3,4) - these feel so overdone, you use low sv and spacing before but just because some drum spam happens you put these huge jumps? would be more fitting to tone them down
00:53:501 (6,1) - no idea why this is suddenly stacked?

01:09:207 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the red ticks are usually just weak guitars but you keep spamming 1-2 jumps that make it seem much more intense when the song basically has drums focusing on white ticks and some offbeat vocals. following either of these seems much more interesting than bland anime jumps that are barely supported by the song
01:12:031 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is nice though

map also feels pretty unorganized at times due to random inconsistent overlaps like 01:19:266 (2,5) -
or this sudden wide circular movement like 01:16:266 (1,2,3,4,5) -

01:20:060 (6) - doesn't make much sense cause it ends on nothing but skips snare, though I appreciate you at least tried to focus on the 3/4 rhythm. something like https://i.imgur.com/o3zawY5.jpg could work. or you could even do https://i.imgur.com/exKHL8H.jpg which I think would be really cute
01:21:031 (2,3,4) - read what I wrote for komore about filler jumps, your kiais also use them a lot
01:43:619 (4,5,6,7) - why not something like https://i.imgur.com/iv8tfH1.jpg to not ignore vocal starting on white tick
01:52:266 (5) - anime not. idk why you map a star here when 1-4 focus on vocals and this is just whatever

02:02:678 (6,1) - with 01:58:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you already had stacks ending on weak sounds, so now having it end on the much stronger one is just weird


komore
lots of stuff from ^applies for you too, though rhythm seems better in general
02:12:031 (4,5) - basically what I wrote for 01:20:060 (6) -, you also did it right on 02:34:619 (3,4) - lol
02:18:737 (3,4) - should really be less spaced, bascially just forcing people to misread since these things never really happen before
02:47:325 (3,4,5,6) - this just feels really unjustified, mainly because of 02:47:501 (4,6) -
02:50:854 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i too love anime
02:56:854 (1,2,3,4) - only vocals here make sharp angled jump spam feel really unfitting
03:01:707 (5) - same as before -- 03:13:001 (5) -
03:02:678 (2,3,4) - 03:13:972 (2,3,4) - etc. these filler jumps :/ really take away from more fitting jumps like 03:04:090 (2,3,4,5) -
03:25:622 (1) - explained in first half of the mod
04:04:093 (2) - whistles in this part are wayyyyyyy too loud
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pop is for the unrankable stuff, feel free to get it rebubbled but I personally think this really needs more work :/
map has some decent concepts but seems quite lacking overall due things like the examples mentioned
schoolboy

Lasse wrote:

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komore
02:12:031 (4,5) - basically what I wrote for 01:20:060 (6) -, you also did it right on 02:34:619 (3,4) - lol yes, changed all of these
02:18:737 (3,4) - should really be less spaced, bascially just forcing people to misread since these things never really happen before okay
02:47:325 (3,4,5,6) - this just feels really unjustified, mainly because of 02:47:501 (4,6) - decreased the spacing, circles are still there since there are still some sounds that work with them?
02:50:854 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i too love anime tbh these jumps fit really well, dunno why u are so against them lol
02:56:854 (1,2,3,4) - only vocals here make sharp angled jump spam feel really unfitting but spacing is pretty low, so it still kinda works
03:01:707 (5) - same as before -- 03:13:001 (5) - yes, pls tell me if there any more
03:02:678 (2,3,4) - 03:13:972 (2,3,4) - etc. these filler jumps :/ really take away from more fitting jumps like 03:04:090 (2,3,4,5) - but they're there because of vocals?.. i think just sliders will be a bad idea, since music is pretty intense because of vocal and should have some jumps
03:25:622 (1) - explained in first half of the mod ok
04:04:093 (2) - whistles in this part are wayyyyyyy too loud ok
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i think these jump before the choruses are fine, in my opinion, it will be kinda unfitting not to have them since map overall is built on huge spacings and jumps, and since there are really strong drums and pretty noticeable sounds on the red ticks its just lame not to have jumps in these parts :| 03:35:857 - here, tho just 1/1 rhythm works perfectly, but only here..
00:51:384 (1,2,3,4) - also this should be fine as well? since i kinda have the same in my part 02:33:207 (1,2,3) -? they're not too huge and kinda make sense, also they're pretty playable
kinda disagree with a few more things, but let's see what waji thinks
also thanks for mod, im happy with changes i made 8-)

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250,273,230681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,124,230857,2,0,B|69:172|69:172|84:226,1,104.999996795654,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,123,231210,2,0,B|334:70|334:70|316:18,1,104.999996795654,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,110,231563,5,14,0:0:0:0:
316,224,231740,2,0,B|362:238|411:211|411:211|427:225|427:225|473:220|521:253,1,209.999993591309,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,134,232269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,103,232445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,318,232622,2,0,P|296:305|242:304,1,104.999996795654,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,341,232887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,341,232975,5,12,0:0:0:0:
0,190,233151,2,0,P|54:184|104:178,1,104.999996795654,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,302,233504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,180,233681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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201,267,234034,2,0,B|250:285|250:285|300:268,1,104.999996795654,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,100,234387,5,14,0:0:0:0:
253,180,234563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
454,317,234740,2,0,P|460:264|467:212,1,104.999996795654,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,347,235093,2,0,B|124:313|124:313|105:341|83:350,1,157.499995193482,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,268,235445,2,0,B|31:220|31:220|44:165,1,104.999996795654,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,19,235798,5,12,0:0:0:0:
170,236,235975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,112,236151,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,347,236328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,206,236504,5,8,0:0:0:0:
156,116,236681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,286,236857,5,8,0:0:0:0:
512,196,237034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,44,237210,5,8,0:0:0:0:
349,69,237298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,94,237387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
493,301,237563,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,278,237651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,269,237740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,147,237916,5,8,0:0:0:0:
209,144,238004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,141,238093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
281,138,238181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,135,238269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,132,238357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,129,238445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
425,125,238534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,126,238622,6,0,P|466:89|436:31,1,87.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,107,239152,2,0,P|377:150|383:193,1,87.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,254,239681,2,0,P|460:275|456:297,1,43.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,362,240034,5,2,3:0:0:0:
304,284,240210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,256,240387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,281,240563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,231,240740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
123,155,240916,2,0,P|117:179|111:206,1,43.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,320,241269,6,0,P|143:303|200:314,1,87.5,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,238,241798,2,0,P|268:235|242:232,1,43.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,244,244093,1,2,0:0:0:0:
455,161,244269,6,0,P|411:147|368:150,1,87.5,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,127,244798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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95,354,246916,1,2,0:0:0:0:
29,277,247093,6,0,P|25:229|17:186,1,87.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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477,116,248858,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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240,156,249387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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schoolboy
also, waji, pls add two 170bpm points, on 176830 and 177913 because rn vocals before the 2nd kiai are really off
Topic Starter
wajinshu
Fixed all, thanks Lasse!
Lasse
jump before the choruses are fine, in my opinion, it will be kinda unfitting not to have them since map overall is built on huge spacings and jumps
huge jumps are fine if they actually follow something more outstanding than mainly backing guitars, things like 01:26:148 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make sense
but the pre-chorus parts don't really fit with 1/2 click spam
looks better now, though I'm still skeptical of things like the filler rhythm jump spam on spots like 01:21:031 (2,3,4) - but whatever, guess they are okay with the overall intensity of this part :/

04:20:681 - is barely audible, idk why it's 30% volume
similar for things like 03:25:622 - losing so much feedback on streams is ??
schoolboy
yeah, guess i was wrong, w/o jumps it feels better
Topic Starter
wajinshu
Volume +++ updated
Lasse
rip anime jumps
sahuang
I think I missed metadata check last time, has Lasse confirmed about it?

Can you use some soft slider slides so the slider body isn't so annoying when i turned hitsounds on?
01:15:860 (5,6,1) - probably increase 6,1 distance a bit due to the timing change here. Its very confusing and i think you should emphasise the downbeat at 1. OR you can use rhythm 02:56:830 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:23:148 (1,2) - 01:24:736 (1,2) - need blanket
04:51:740 (4,5) - not a good idea to stack here
04:56:504 (1,2) - make it consistent with 04:56:857 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ?

Should be all
Topic Starter
wajinshu
Fixed all!!
sahuang
Good to go!!
Shmiklak
Be the first to shitpost. Grats
Lama Poluna
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Mirash
kaosu ni naru
Namki
owari no nai
Sieg
suki suki daisuki
TheMefisto
/me поздравляет по-украински
--Red Dragon--
good :)
YLNGDI
This map is one of my all time favorites, partly because of the song, but mostly because the map has so many jumps to practice on, and the fact that it actually matches the music. Thanks for making this and I am looking forward to more maps by you!
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