hello mania mod here
thank god this is old modding because modding v2 makes me want to neck myself
overall, i feel like the concepts you used aren't applied consistently between the map. and considering the song itself is repetitive blaming this on variation just doesnt work since in a map like this consistency > variation. though, i feel like if all these were fixed it would be rankable.
good luck!
04:04:215 - daisuki
thank god this is old modding because modding v2 makes me want to neck myself
General - All Mappers Open
Difficulties: cool hybrid
Spread: marathon
Hitsounds: ooo i guess they're done. they feel off in some places but that could just be me
Metadata: remove "星蓮船" "undefined" "fantastic" and "object" from the tags since they're in the title
AiMod: nothing in mania. some letterbox'ing things though, may want to check it out
Other: nothing
Spread: marathon
Hitsounds: ooo i guess they're done. they feel off in some places but that could just be me
Metadata: remove "星蓮船" "undefined" "fantastic" and "object" from the tags since they're in the title
AiMod: nothing in mania. some letterbox'ing things though, may want to check it out
Other: nothing
box
00:17:881 (17881|3,18381|2,18715|0) - would be cool to stack these since they are all for the same snare drum thingy
00:19:548 (19548|3,19631|2,19715|1,19881|3,20048|2,20215|1) - the flow is all in the same direction which is pretty boring and doesnt help with the 1/4 to 1/2 transition. i would move some tbh
00:21:381 (21381|2,21381|1) - first of all this should be a triple but i feel an LN ontop with be cool since there is a shhhhhh sound there
00:32:048 (32048|0,32048|2,32048|3) - i think a triple is too much. to be honest, i think this whole section from 00:31:715 - could be better. here is a recommendation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9499742
00:35:881 (35881|1) - shouldn't this be a double? everything else around it is
speaking of which, i feel like all of them in this section should be the same. for instance 00:23:715 (23715|3,23715|1,23881|0) - 00:29:048 (29048|0,29048|3,29215|2) - arent so fix these
00:56:215 (56215|2,56215|1,56215|3,56548|3,56548|1,56548|0) - some LNs would be nice
01:12:048 (72048|3) - why is this one LN when the vocal has two different sounds?
01:32:715 (92715|1,92715|2,92715|0,93048|1,93048|0,93381|1,93381|2) - these should all be the same since they are the same sound
01:44:381 (104381|3,104381|2,104381|0,104381|1) - woahhhhh quad is too much
02:03:715 (123715|0,123715|1,123881|1) - missing more. make sure you include ALL of these in the map. i wont mention any further
02:05:215 - missing a double because you've done the same before eg somewhere i cba to find
02:13:715 (133715|0,133881|0) - in these sections there are also lots of weird jacks which are there sometimes and not at other times. thought id mention it
03:06:048 (186048|2,186048|3,186048|1,186381|2,186381|3,186715|2,186715|1) - again should be the same
03:15:548 (195548|3,195631|2,195715|1,195881|3,196048|2,196215|1) - same problems as before
04:26:965 (266965|2) - ghost note
04:27:548 (267548|1,268548|2,271215|1) - i cant here any sound behind these LNs and they are very random and dont suit the very to-the-book style of map if you know what i mean.
05:17:715 (317715|0) - this ends at 05:20:048 -
05:20:381 (320381|2) - ghost note
alot of what i said can be applied elsewhere in the map. i didnt repeat myself to one save my sanity and two not make the box too big
00:19:548 (19548|3,19631|2,19715|1,19881|3,20048|2,20215|1) - the flow is all in the same direction which is pretty boring and doesnt help with the 1/4 to 1/2 transition. i would move some tbh
00:21:381 (21381|2,21381|1) - first of all this should be a triple but i feel an LN ontop with be cool since there is a shhhhhh sound there
00:32:048 (32048|0,32048|2,32048|3) - i think a triple is too much. to be honest, i think this whole section from 00:31:715 - could be better. here is a recommendation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9499742
00:35:881 (35881|1) - shouldn't this be a double? everything else around it is
speaking of which, i feel like all of them in this section should be the same. for instance 00:23:715 (23715|3,23715|1,23881|0) - 00:29:048 (29048|0,29048|3,29215|2) - arent so fix these
00:56:215 (56215|2,56215|1,56215|3,56548|3,56548|1,56548|0) - some LNs would be nice
01:12:048 (72048|3) - why is this one LN when the vocal has two different sounds?
01:32:715 (92715|1,92715|2,92715|0,93048|1,93048|0,93381|1,93381|2) - these should all be the same since they are the same sound
01:44:381 (104381|3,104381|2,104381|0,104381|1) - woahhhhh quad is too much
02:03:715 (123715|0,123715|1,123881|1) - missing more. make sure you include ALL of these in the map. i wont mention any further
02:05:215 - missing a double because you've done the same before eg somewhere i cba to find
02:13:715 (133715|0,133881|0) - in these sections there are also lots of weird jacks which are there sometimes and not at other times. thought id mention it
03:06:048 (186048|2,186048|3,186048|1,186381|2,186381|3,186715|2,186715|1) - again should be the same
03:15:548 (195548|3,195631|2,195715|1,195881|3,196048|2,196215|1) - same problems as before
04:26:965 (266965|2) - ghost note
04:27:548 (267548|1,268548|2,271215|1) - i cant here any sound behind these LNs and they are very random and dont suit the very to-the-book style of map if you know what i mean.
05:17:715 (317715|0) - this ends at 05:20:048 -
05:20:381 (320381|2) - ghost note
alot of what i said can be applied elsewhere in the map. i didnt repeat myself to one save my sanity and two not make the box too big
overall, i feel like the concepts you used aren't applied consistently between the map. and considering the song itself is repetitive blaming this on variation just doesnt work since in a map like this consistency > variation. though, i feel like if all these were fixed it would be rankable.
good luck!
04:04:215 - daisuki