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phoon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月2日 at 23:23:19

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.)
Source: Reitetsu Reisei Shikashite XXX!!
Tags: visual novel opening Chien flatps Melophobia ikari_kyon
BPM: 170
Filesize: 19308kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. flatps' Hard (4.97 stars, 261 notes)
  2. i_k's Taiko (4.83 stars, 645 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 311 notes)
  4. Melo's Normal (3.05 stars, 128 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ぴぴるぴー
Mapset:
Normal - Done : Create by Melophobia
Hard - Done : Create by flatps
Insane - Done
i_k's Taiko - Done : Create by ikari_kyon

#1
2012/6/17 Remap
SPOILER
初Rank…ども…

俺みたいな中3でRankしてる腐れ野郎、他に、いますかっていねーか、はは
今日の#Japaneseの会話
CookieziのDTヤバすぎwww とか こいつの譜面おもしれえwww とか
ま、それが普通ですわな

かたや俺はPendingでハートが割れてる譜面を見て、呟くんすわ
やべえ1msズレてる...チェックミス?それ、誉め言葉ね。

好きな音楽 ave;new プロジェクト
尊敬する人間 佐倉紗織(電波ソングはNO)

なんつってる間にUnrankっすよ(笑) あ~あ、newbie mapperの辛いとこね、これ
grvyd
ave;new project!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





自信ない部分結構あるので適当に修正お願いします><

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (phoon) [Infinity].osu
Topic Starter
phoon

flatps wrote:

ave;new project!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





自信ない部分結構あるので適当に修正お願いします><
ゲストありがとう!
Melophobia
完成!

Download: Diff+hitsound.rar


そういえばこれShort Ver.だと思うのです ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Topic Starter
phoon

Melophobia wrote:

完成!

[attachment=0:0dec9]Diff+hitsound.rar[/attachment:0dec9]


そういえばこれShort Ver.だと思うのです ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
thx!
タイトルに(Short Ver.)つけました
Elly-chan
taken from #modreqs, remilia-- helped me translate, if you don't get something look at the english mod

English Mod
(General)
  1. LOVERS.mp3 is 320 kbps. This is Unrankable. Please Re-encode it to 192 kbps (Or Something Between 192 and 128).
  2. Please Keep a Consistency In Tags. Add all tags that are in the insane diff (Chien flatps Melophobia) To The Other Two Diffs.
There Is a Big Gap In Hardness Between Normal and Infinity (Not a Solid Diff Spread). Please tone Infinity down some. (If You Don't Believe me, Look At Each Diff's Star Rating. Normal's is 2.94 and infinity's is 4.98.)

(Normal)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - Add a Finish
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - New Combo.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - Add a whistle.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - New Combo?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - New Combo.

(一般)
  1. LOVERS.mp3は320 kbpsです。これはUnrankableです。再エンコードに192 kbpsの(または192と128の間に何か)にしてください。
  2. タグに一貫性を維持してください。その他の2つの差分には非常識な差分(建flatps音楽恐怖症)にあるすべてのタグを追加する。
ノーマルと無限(非固体差分の拡散)の間の硬さでビッグなギャップがあります。トーンのInfinityをいくつか下にしてください。(あなたは私を信じていない場合、各差分のランクで見てください。正常なのは2.94であり、無限大のは4.98です。)

(ノーマル)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - 新しいコンボ.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - 新しいコンボ.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - 仕上げを追加する.
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - 新しいコンボ.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - 笛を追加する.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - 新しいコンボ?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - 新しいコンボ.
sorry i could not have been much of help, i don't speak jap and i want to stop bothering Remilia~ >w<

Normal looks decent. Good Job. If I ever Bother Her Again, i'll Mod Your Other Diffs~ ;w;
Melophobia
Topic Starter
phoon

Elly-chan wrote:

taken from #modreqs, remilia-- helped me translate, if you don't get something look at the english mod

English Mod
(General)
  1. LOVERS.mp3 is 320 kbps. This is Unrankable. Please Re-encode it to 192 kbps (Or Something Between 192 and 128).
  2. Please Keep a Consistency In Tags. Add all tags that are in the insane diff (Chien flatps Melophobia) To The Other Two Diffs.
There Is a Big Gap In Hardness Between Normal and Infinity (Not a Solid Diff Spread). Please tone Infinity down some. (If You Don't Believe me, Look At Each Diff's Star Rating. Normal's is 2.94 and infinity's is 4.98.)

(Normal)
  1. 00:23:641 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:29:640 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:45:695 (3) - Add a Finish
  4. 00:52:223 (3) - New Combo.
  5. 00:52:752 (3) - Add a whistle.
  6. 00:58:221 (4) - New Combo?
  7. 01:10:571 (3) - New Combo.

(一般)
  1. LOVERS.mp3は320 kbpsです。これはUnrankableです。再エンコードに192 kbpsの(または192と128の間に何か)にしてください。mp3 file was changed.
  2. タグに一貫性を維持してください。その他の2つの差分には非常識な差分(建flatps音楽恐怖症)にあるすべてのタグを追加する。
fixed
ノーマルと無限(非固体差分の拡散)の間の硬さでビッグなギャップがあります。トーンのInfinityをいくつか下にしてください。(あなたは私を信じていない場合、各差分のランクで見てください。正常なのは2.94であり、無限大のは4.98です。)It suspends now,It refers also to the opinion in the direction of others

sorry i could not have been much of help, i don't speak jap and i want to stop bothering Remilia~ >w<

Normal looks decent. Good Job. If I ever Bother Her Again, i'll Mod Your Other Diffs~ ;w;
thx mod!
NewRulerNA
[Insane]

00:07:586 (3) - 1grid up
00:07:939 (5) - ^
00:08:468 (9) - nc (newcombo)
00:18:701 (2) - 00:18:172 (1)とスタック
00:21:877 (4) - DS
00:37:579 (8) - nc
01:04:925 (7) - DS
01:35:977 (1) - 01:35:271 (7)とスタックさせるor被らないような位置、形にする

[Infinity]

00:05:116 (4,5) - DS
00:23:288 (1) - rnc(remove newcombo)
00:33:697 (6) - 00:32:815 (2)と被せないようにすると見栄えが良くなると思います
00:53:987 (3) - 00:53:105 (6,7)とスタックさせるか、被らないような配置にする
01:06:866 (3,4,5,6) - DS
01:21:333 (4) - rnc
01:21:863 (1) - nc

配置において目立った問題点もなくいい譜面だと思います :)
Topic Starter
phoon

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Insane]

00:07:586 (3) - 1grid up fixed
00:07:939 (5) - ^ fixed
00:08:468 (9) - nc (newcombo) no!
00:18:701 (2) - 00:18:172 (1)とスタック fixed
00:21:877 (4) - DS fixed
00:37:579 (8) - nc fixed
01:04:925 (7) - DS fixed
01:35:977 (1) - 01:35:271 (7)とスタックさせるor被らないような位置、形にする fixed
thx mod!
No_Gu
request from my queue

[normal]
Please snap all notes
I use unsnap timing to mod
01:04:220 (4) - ctrl+H from 1 then fix spacing
01:22:568 (4) - 1 grid left

[hard]
01:40:741 (4,1) - too ugly

[insane]
01:33:544 0.75x green line should be here
Melophobia
Topic Starter
phoon

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue


[hard]
01:40:741 (4,1) - too ugly The difficulty of Hard is Remap now.sorry :cry:

[insane]
01:33:544 0.75x green line should be here fixed
thx mod!
grvyd
some fix and remap.
And changed diffname.(->"Hard")

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (phoon) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
phoon
update!
jossieP
Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
Topic Starter
phoon

ikari_kyon wrote:

Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
fixed!
Miya
Hi, request taken from #modreqs :)

General
  1. Why are you using BG that size is 640x480? The resolution is too low for Osu and will result in blured image if played in bigger resolution. I suggest you find the BG that has more resolution.
  2. Every difficulty has different BPM. Fix that. :( It seems you have fix this when i mod your map. o.o
  3. You should place kiai time on chorus section imo. I think the real chorus begin at 01:02:118-01:27:545. My suggestion is to move kiai time into that time, and delete first and seconde kiai time.
  4. Is Normal diff a guest diff? Then the name should be Melaphobia's Normal.
  5. Hmm, i see Hard is a guest diff too. Then the name should be flatps's Hard
Normal
  1. 00:00:897 (1,1) - How about adding a finish rythim at the start at the song. When i listen it carefully, that part seems epic and need a finish sound to maximize that epic part. So add a finish sound at the spinner, and startpoint of the slider 1.
  2. 00:38:123 (1) - Because in the previous part there is a finish rythim, how about adding a finish here at the startpoint since it can becoming a closing part for that finish rythim. I think it will be more good to hear.
  3. 01:07:058 (3) - I think you can place a finish sound at the startpoint the make the hitsound pattern more consistent.
  4. 01:15:526 (4) - No finish part at repeat point? In your previous rythim there's a finish part. You should place a finish part there to make hitsound consistent.
  5. 01:27:545 (1) - Since it's an opening part of new rythim, and the background music support it, i think you should place a finish sound at the startpoint of the sldier.
  6. 01:38:660 (1) - It seems you forgot to add finish at the startpoint. In your previous ryhtim there's a finish here.
Hard
  1. 00:04:250 (1) - How about adding a finish at the startpoint of the slider? It's have same reason with easy.
  2. 00:15:367 (3) - If you follow my suggestion above, you should place a finish sound here too at the startpoint.
  3. 00:29:309 (3) - Why this note doesn't have a finish sound? Your next rythim has finish sound at this point. You should add it too here to make consistent.
  4. 01:02:132 (1) - It's opening of chorus, so it will be good if you add a finish sound here. Since opening of chorus begin with some epic part.
  5. 01:07:603 (5) - Well, inconsistent clap pattern at the endpoint of slider. Your pattern is 'ta ta', but in this case you have 'ta' only. So change whistle here into clap.
  6. 01:27:545 (1) - Well, just like the begining of the song, you should place a finish sound here too in the startpoint.
  7. 01:38:662 (3) - Don't forget to add finish here too at the startpoint if you follow my suggestion above.
Infinity
  1. Well, i'm quite disagree if you're using whistle in the chorus part. I barely hear the whistle at all. I suggest you change it into another hitsound, like clap.
  2. 00:04:243 (1) - Well, just like other two diff, i suggest you add a finish here at the startpoint.
  3. 00:15:360 (1) - Don't forget to add finish here too if you follow suggestion above.
  4. 00:37:596 (1,2,1,2) - This pattern need to restack properly since some note is not stacked properly. Here is my suggestion :
    1. Move 00:37:596 (1,2) - 1 grid up
    2. 00:38:125 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down
  5. 01:02:125 (1) - This part definetely need a finish sound. So add a finish sound at the startpoint. You can hear "Bang" sound if you hear it carefully.
  6. 01:13:419 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above, don't forget add finish here too.
  7. 01:27:545 (1) - Same as other diff, i suggest you add a finish sound here at the startpoint.
  8. 01:38:661 (1) - Add finish sound here too if you follow my suggestion above.
  9. 01:47:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is kind of tricky and really can break the flow. I suggest you move the stack into other place to fix that problem.
  10. 01:50:130 (1) - A finish sound at end of this spinner will be great imo.
Well, that's all from me. :) I like ave;new and this map is also good, so i will throw a star to you. :)
Bye and Good Luck ^^
jossieP

phoon wrote:

ikari_kyon wrote:

Timing~
seriously, use this unique red timing line, this type of songs never gonna use a bpm reset

BPM: 170,000
Offset: 1420
fixed!
you already have that red timing on 87545 >: delete it please >3<
Melophobia
grvyd

Miya wrote:

General
  1. Hmm, i see Hard is a guest diff too. Then the name should be flatps's Hard This problem is not important.
Hard
  1. 00:04:250 (1) - How about adding a finish at the startpoint of the slider? It's have same reason with easy. no
  2. 00:15:367 (3) - If you follow my suggestion above, you should place a finish sound here too at the startpoint.
  3. 00:29:309 (3) - Why this note doesn't have a finish sound? Your next rythim has finish sound at this point. You should add it too here to make consistent.
    The next rhythm is not same now rhythm point.Next rhythm point is liven up than now rhythm point. ...Sorry,I cannot explain well. English is so hard to me...
  4. 01:02:132 (1) - It's opening of chorus, so it will be good if you add a finish sound here. Since opening of chorus begin with some epic part. fixed.
  5. 01:07:603 (5) - Well, inconsistent clap pattern at the endpoint of slider. Your pattern is 'ta ta', but in this case you have 'ta' only. So change whistle here into clap. fixed.
  6. 01:27:545 (1) - Well, just like the begining of the song, you should place a finish sound here too in the startpoint. no
  7. 01:38:662 (3) - Don't forget to add finish here too at the startpoint if you follow my suggestion above.
thx~

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (phoon) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
phoon

Miya wrote:

Hi, request taken from #modreqs :)

General
  1. Why are you using BG that size is 640x480? The resolution is too low for Osu and will result in blured image if played in bigger resolution. I suggest you find the BG that has more resolution. fixed
  2. Every difficulty has different BPM. Fix that. :( It seems you have fix this when i mod your map. o.o fixed
  3. You should place kiai time on chorus section imo. I think the real chorus begin at 01:02:118-01:27:545. My suggestion is to move kiai time into that time, and delete first and seconde kiai time. 
    Since he wanted to set to KIAI time the place where a music tone rises, a change was not made T_T
  4. Is Normal diff a guest diff? Then the name should be Melaphobia's Normal.
  5. Hmm, i see Hard is a guest diff too. Then the name should be flatps's Hard
fixed,However, it was made for a diff name not to increase too much.
Normal -> Melophobia
Hard -> flatps

Infinity
  1. Well, i'm quite disagree if you're using whistle in the chorus part. I barely hear the whistle at all. I suggest you change it into another hitsound, like clap.
  2. 00:04:243 (1) - Well, just like other two diff, i suggest you add a finish here at the startpoint.
  3. 00:15:360 (1) - Don't forget to add finish here too if you follow suggestion above.
  4. 00:37:596 (1,2,1,2) - This pattern need to restack properly since some note is not stacked properly. Here is my suggestion :
    1. Move 00:37:596 (1,2) - 1 grid up
    2. 00:38:125 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down
  5. 01:02:125 (1) - This part definetely need a finish sound. So add a finish sound at the startpoint. You can hear "Bang" sound if you hear it carefully.
  6. 01:13:419 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above, don't forget add finish here too.
  7. 01:27:545 (1) - Same as other diff, i suggest you add a finish sound here at the startpoint.
  8. 01:38:661 (1) - Add finish sound here too if you follow my suggestion above.
  9. 01:47:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is kind of tricky and really can break the flow. I suggest you move the stack into other place to fix that problem.
  10. 01:50:130 (1) - A finish sound at end of this spinner will be great imo.
All fixed

Well, that's all from me. :) I like ave;new and this map is also good, so i will throw a star to you. :)
Bye and Good Luck ^^
thx mod and star!
Topic Starter
phoon

ikari_kyon wrote:

you already have that red timing on 87545 >: delete it please >3<
Sorry,Since it shifted after erasing this offset, it did not erase :?
jossieP
that timing still there D: and on your diff is at 170,020 BPM
please please ;_; delete it or make it on an inherited timing
can I make a taiko diff D:?
Topic Starter
phoon

ikari_kyon wrote:

that timing still there D: and on your diff is at 170,020 BPM
please please ;_; delete it or make it on an inherited timing
can I make a taiko diff D:?
It refers also to the opinion in the direction of others, and BPM and offset should make it decided...
It is a big welcome when it is Guest of taiko diff :D
kanpakyin
I have tested the map and finalliy get the timing.

1. Offset: 18ms BPM: 170.00

Please remove all red line and try this offset .
Set the offset to 18 to prevent any notes (including spinner) in front of the red line.Don't worry,this offset is on the accent beat and fit the druk sound.
Topic Starter
phoon

kanpakyin wrote:

I have tested the map and finalliy get the timing.

1. Offset: 18ms BPM: 170.00

Please remove all red line and try this offset .
Set the offset to 18 to prevent any notes (including spinner) in front of the red line.Don't worry,this offset is on the accent beat and fit the druk sound.
ok fixed.
jossieP
Topic Starter
phoon
add taiko diff.
thanks ikari_kyon!!
kanpakyin
:p ignore this post please
jossieP

kanpakyin wrote:

:p ignore this post please
:d
Suzully
modリクエストどうもですー。

[Mormal : Creat by Melophobia]
  1. 00:26:841 (1,2) - (2)を消して(1)を折り返した方が初心者には優しいかなーと。
  2. 00:28:253 (3,4) - ^
[flatps]
  1. 00:19:782 (1,2) - あまりこうやってスライダーが重なるのは美しくないです。下のくらい離しちゃってもいいと思いますが、こういう配置にするならもうちょっとスライダーの形を整えた方が綺麗です。
  2. 00:55:429 (2) - 00:54:018 (3)と重ねたいなーと思いました。
  3. 01:16:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+H,+Jしてはどうでしょうか?(1)が01:16:429 (1,2)と近づきて、この単発2つがちょっと浮いてます。
  4. 01:21:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全体を3gridsくらい下に。あまり重ならない方がいいです。
[Infinity]

  • 単発の連続パターンが多いので、もう少し連打を入れたり工夫をするとメリハリが出てより良くなると思います。
  1. 00:11:929 (x) - こういうところにノートを加えて連打にするといいかも?
  2. 00:17:841 (8,1) - 1grid右に移動させて、00:18:723 (2)も1grid右、00:19:429 (4)を1grid左に移動させた方が、綺麗に重なって見栄えがいいです。ちょうど対称配置にもなります。
  3. 00:29:488 (6,1,2,3,4) - ちょっと流れが悪いのでこんな感じのはどうですか?((4)は(1)に、(5)は(2)にスタックしてる)
  4. 00:41:665 (5) - New combo。
  5. 00:48:547 (8) - 終端にwhistleを入れた方がイイ感じです。
  6. 01:14:665 (x) - ここにもノートが欲しいかなーと思います。
ふぁいと(ノ)・ω・(ヾ)
Melophobia

Suzully wrote:

[Mormal : Creat by Melophobia] warota
  1. 00:26:841 (1,2) - (2)を消して(1)を折り返した方が初心者には優しいかなーと。 fixed
  2. 00:28:253 (3,4) - ^ fixed
いつもありがとうすずりー先生
Done.

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Mugendai LOVERS (Short Ver.) (phoon) [Melophobia].osu
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