Azzy Approves!
thank you for the mod!Kradfiz wrote:
I suck at modding and your map is good so I'm gonna have some trouble finding stuff to point out. In any case,
[Dream]
00:53:552 (2,3) - Going from .8x SV to 1.5x SV seems a bit high here.
01:01:850 (1,1) - ^ maybe try to introduce faster speeds more gradually? i feel what youre saying, but i like the speeds at which they are at atm
01:22:116 (1) - Sorry if I'm missing something but this slider shape seems a bit out of place. hmm... you might be right, but i wanted to use different sliders all over the place
01:38:393 (5,1) - Would feel like the slider would look better if it were overlapping this circle. ill have to check this out, thanks!
02:52:434 (6,1) - Idk if you were trying to get these sliders to be vertical reflections, but if you were, the first slider is slightly too far from the center. no they werent supposed to be identical, but youve got a good eye!
03:30:573 (1,2) - I feel like these 2 circles shouldn't be part of the same combo color, otherwise the player might try to hit the second one on the red tick instead of the white tick. youre right! fixed
04:10:626 (1) - You use these kinds of sliders a few times, but they just seem a bit less pretty than the rest of them, even though they're clearly blanketing circles and stuff. Probably a personal issue, but I feel like a better shape would fit, or at least one that's more balanced, like 04:43:817 (1) - fixed!
Basically that's all that I can find, so sorry that I cannot help much. Good luck with your map anyhow!
Sotarks wrote:
[mada mada mada]
00:10:148 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - would be better if you make those a not so low spacing stream, it doesn't play so good... i think it plays fine!
and i did the small circular stream cause of the instrument here, i think it emphasizes it pretty well!
00:13:659 (1) - space this one more ofr rhythm sake you right, fixed!
00:13:978 (1) - ^ fixed
00:41:265 (5) - make this 2 circles ahh yes i see, fixed!
01:04:084 (1) - space stuff like this more pls! got it boss
01:35:361 (1,1,1) - tbh you don't need to spam nc here hmm im not sure... i must see with time
01:47:808 (1) - low the spacing pls its not that high though!
03:14:615 (1) - ^ but i really like this!
01:50:839 (1,2) - hitsounds??? sorry sometimes i delete notes and i forget they have hitsounds on them!
01:52:595 (7,9,10) - ^ ^
02:56:264 (2,3,4) - unusual flow you are usuing here, try avoid this linear flow..
02:58:817 (2,3,4) - ^ the point of this weird decreasing linear flow is to follow the string sound that is lowering pitch
03:30:573 (1) - space this more pls!! fixed!
03:32:328 (1) - ugly slider imo xd just because my slider has a pimple you... think its ugly?? WOW
03:58:977 (7,1) - really low spacing true... but i kind of like it that way!
rly good map dude!!
gl
thanks!Time Capsule wrote:
hs update
https://puu.sh/wiCNr/405baeac1d.osu
(copy paste from "Timing Points" section until end)
2017-06-13 20:40 Meg: offset -7~-10
2017-06-13 20:41 Meg: you should change, it will be better
2017-06-13 20:41 SkinnyJommy: yeah, probably
2017-06-13 20:42 Meg: also so late on editor for me lol
2017-06-13 20:42 SkinnyJommy: really? it sounds fine to me
2017-06-13 20:43 Meg: not fine xd
2017-06-13 20:44 Meg: just there is thing that can prove in playing
2017-06-13 20:45 Meg: the map has no big issues
2017-06-13 20:45 SkinnyJommy: hmm... very strange
2017-06-13 20:45 Meg: i have some suggestions
2017-06-13 20:46 SkinnyJommy: okay!
2017-06-13 20:46 Meg: 02:09:370 (1,2) - how about change to a 1/2 slider
2017-06-13 20:47 Meg: you can follow music more
2017-06-13 20:47 Meg: and i felt weird a bit in playing
2017-06-13 20:48 SkinnyJommy: hmm i shall look at it
2017-06-13 20:49 Meg: 02:20:380 - 02:20:699 - add finish like 00:53:572 (2,3) -
2017-06-13 20:49 SkinnyJommy: yeah dont pay attention to the hitsounds right now, whenever i edit the map i tend to delete notes and forget to re add the hitsounds lol
2017-06-13 20:50 Meg: isee lol
2017-06-13 20:50 Meg: 02:36:258 (1,2) - swap nc? i coudn't read 1/4
2017-06-13 20:51 SkinnyJommy: hmm okay!
2017-06-13 20:52 Meg: we can read easily with [http://puu.sh/wiPuF.jpg this]
2017-06-13 20:53 SkinnyJommy: hmm i think youre right
2017-06-13 20:55 Meg: 03:14:635 (1) - looks not clean the shape, you can make better blanket
2017-06-13 20:56 Meg: http://puu.sh/wiPCt.jpg
2017-06-13 20:56 SkinnyJommy: yes i see
2017-06-13 20:56 SkinnyJommy: i shall
2017-06-13 20:56 Meg: 03:30:752 - add note? there is drum sound
2017-06-13 20:58 SkinnyJommy: i thought about skipping that to add emphasis to the string sounds
2017-06-13 20:58 SkinnyJommy: but idk
2017-06-13 20:59 Meg: that's all
16:01 Einja: yo
16:01 Einja: let's ir
16:01 Einja: irc*
16:02 SkinnyJommy: okay! im down
16:03 Einja: ok
16:03 Einja: your sv changes are really big in your map
16:04 Einja: 00:33:139 (3,4) - sv increases here a lot when the song has little increase in intensity
16:04 Einja: 00:42:234 (3,3) - uneven overlap;
16:04 Einja: ;w;
16:05 SkinnyJommy: ahh i see
16:05 SkinnyJommy: fixed that!
16:05 SkinnyJommy: about the sv changes, i really like them
16:05 Einja: 00:41:596 (1,2,3) - here as well
16:05 Einja: but the song has little/no rhythm intensity change
16:06 SkinnyJommy: i mean i hear it really loudly!
16:06 SkinnyJommy: the strings get a lot louder
16:06 Einja: i guess your right for that part of sv change
16:06 Einja: but the other one i mentioned should change imo
16:07 Einja: 00:50:851 (2,1) - blanket if you want btw
16:07 SkinnyJommy: hmm, i shall think about it!
16:07 SkinnyJommy: yea i didnt intend to blanket that circle
16:07 Einja: ok
16:08 Einja: 01:33:139 (1,3) - uneven overlap
16:09 SkinnyJommy: okay! fixed that
16:10 Einja: 02:20:372 (1,2) - another big sv change
16:10 Einja: you can increase the sv, but not too big
16:12 Einja: 03:03:936 (4,1) - imperfect overlap
16:12 SkinnyJommy: im an overlap god it seems
16:13 Einja: same
16:16 Einja: 03:41:117 (4,5,1) - what's with the sudden flow change
16:17 SkinnyJommy: im not sure
16:17 SkinnyJommy: its just what i wanted to do!
16:18 Einja: since you already use a lot of jump streams in the 2nd half of the map
16:19 Einja: this is something i would've done if i kept mapping jumpstreams http://prntscr.com/fjepbg
16:20 SkinnyJommy: hmm maybe youre right
16:20 Einja: 04:27:074 (4,5,1) - unseen pattern
16:22 SkinnyJommy: really?? it seems readable to me
16:22 Einja: no that's not what i mean
16:22 Einja: meant*
16:22 Einja: you haven't used this pattern at all except for now
16:23 SkinnyJommy: well therse a change in the rhythm
16:24 SkinnyJommy: thats why i used that
16:24 Einja: 01:50:373 (1,2,3,4) - you should use this pattern instead
16:24 Einja: 04:27:074 (4,5,1) - with this
16:26 SkinnyJommy: i think its fine the way it is
16:26 Einja: ok
16:26 SkinnyJommy: but if anyone mentions it in the future, ill look more into it!
16:26 Einja: oh wait
16:26 Einja: check aimod
16:26 Einja: unsnapped stuff
16:28 SkinnyJommy: you right!
16:28 SkinnyJommy: fixed those
16:29 Einja: 04:56:646 (1) - wouldn't it be better for this spinner to end at 05:00:602?
16:29 Einja: it's a 1/8 tick but that's where the violin ends
16:30 SkinnyJommy: technically its right to end it there, but it just doesnt feel right
16:30 SkinnyJommy: thats why i made the spinner end a little sooner
16:30 SkinnyJommy: if you just watch and hear it, it feel soff
16:31 Einja: and maybe silence the spinner overtime
16:31 SkinnyJommy: 05:00:499 - i think this is a better spot actually
16:31 Einja: would be better
16:32 SkinnyJommy: the song itself isnt actualyl decreasing in volume
16:32 SkinnyJommy: so is it a good idea to make the spinner volume go down?
16:32 Einja: or just silence the spinner end
16:32 SkinnyJommy: yea, thats a good idea
16:33 Einja: alright
16:33 Einja: that's all i found and all i could suggest
16:33 SkinnyJommy: sweet! thanks man
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thank you for the mod!WISPG_G wrote:
H E L L O T H E R E
here is m4m
Dreamthats it from me, overall you should use little move emphasizing for jumps imo
- I listen few more times and made little timing fixes for you okay, ill try this!
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232530,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
232610,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
232690,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
232770,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,50,0,0
233009,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,5,0,0
233089,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,0
233169,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
233248,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
233887,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
234046,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
267876,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
269950,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
272982,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
275057,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
280163,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
281520,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,5,0,1
281599,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
281679,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,5,0,1
281759,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
282397,-50,4,2,2,70,0,1
282637,-100,4,2,1,5,0,1
282716,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,0
295498,319.148936170213,4,2,1,70,1,0
295857,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
296002,368.098159509202,4,2,1,70,1,0
296370,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
296556,410.958904109589,4,2,1,70,1,0
300511,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0- 00:09:038 (5,6,1) - thats early, too huge jumps imo even for this strong part i think it fits well
- 00:10:792 - more emphasize for this jumps please, for example: following music here 00:10:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - you can decreasing spacing, but for this 00:11:751 (3,4) - two notes bigger jumps, 00:12:068 - I could leave this sound empty like its pretty weak with rest of them, but you also can stack it with prev note, here 00:12:707 - same too i like this the way it is!
- 00:18:293 (5,1) - sharper angle for this jump please fixed!
- 00:22:920 - another weak sound xd
- 00:25:324 (4) - this slider should finishing prev reverse jumps, try place it around this 00:25:005 (2) - circle or may be farther like new part i like it the way it is tbh
- 00:32:984 (1,2,3) - just stack them feels better imo i dont like them stacked here D:
- 00:33:463 (4,2) - imo thats hard to notice this circle under slider it plays fine to me!
- 00:44:633 (3,4,1) - thats not comfortable movement, moving up here 00:45:112 (4,1) - plays better imo
- 01:57:957 (4,1) - meh, this 1/4 jump unnecessary or at least set it in opposite direction please its not necessary, but i like it
- 02:01:388 (4,5,6,1) - uncomfotable movement it feels okay to me!
- 03:09:365 (1) - ctrl+Ged this slider plays better imo, may be rework a little this pattern? hm.. i shall think about it
- 03:17:026 (7,8,1) - just stack them please i dont really like them stacked here
- 03:24:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - actually this cross screen stream looks weaird xd may be make very small spaced stream instead? i love this stream!
- 04:47:663 (8,9,1) - stack them please xd i like the non stack triples after the stacked ones!
- 04:53:887 (7,5) - stack? youre right! fixed
nice map =w=b
good luck!
thanks for the mod!Yohanes wrote:
Hello!
Here are some of my personal opinion regarding to the maps, feel free to respond it whichever you may find fits
Dream
- In general, I believe you can do better job to decide the rhytmical usage of the diff. As I find there're overmapping that I don't think fits, section that will plays better with slider instead of circle, and vice versa. Your milage may vary though :thinking:
- 00:08:079 (6) - to make this notes more comfortable to hit, how about placing them around 448|91? That way, it'll also make the jump to the next slider to have sharper angle and possibly gave it more emphasis good idea!
- 00:11:908 (4,1) - and 00:12:547 (4,1) - I will personally change this into 1/2 slider because those synth melody (not drum) that used to create the jump pattern doesn't exist on both of the white tick i like the jumps here!
- 00:20:366 (3,5) - how about crtl+g these two? It will make the pattern have gradual spacing increase & avoid those (way too) extreme sharp jump on 00:20:047 (2,3,4) - fixed!
- 00:22:281 (1,2,3) - after such constant triangular jump, I don't think diagonal back and forth jump are that flowy to play. If you still want to keep back and forth jump, this placement is more sensible to me http://puu.sh/wnhyH/3149c6ae87.jpg Or you can just simply remake those particular jump to make them more flowy i like what i currently have!
- 00:25:163 (3) - move around 480|254 to emphasize the vocal more? http://puu.sh/wnhBx/22d7b257b9.jpg not really feeling that tbh
- 00:41:121 (4,5) - how about something like this instead? because here 00:41:280 - you literally mapped to nothing, and it seems more correct to have white tick to be the clickable one http://puu.sh/wnhGJ/b8ce9df3d2.jpg i mapped to the vocals here
- 00:47:663 (5,1) - what do you think of this? imo it can bring more emphasis, and 5 is more natural to hit this way http://puu.sh/wnhQp/82677c3f8d.jpg i like what i have currently!
- 00:52:131 (2,3) - To me, it seems like you arrange this pattern the way it is now to compensate the lack of rhythm on the 00:52:450 -. If I were you, I would do something like this instead http://puu.sh/wnhZN/c8c463aeb6.jpg indeed vocal are less emphasized, but there'll be no ghost rhythm anymore lol no rhythm??? the piano is playing here
- 01:02:983 (4,1) - I'd rather have this as a 1/2 slider to be honest. 01:03:143 (1) - is unjustifiable to me because of lack of dominant instrument on them no thanks!
- 01:35:058 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I have a hard time justifying this pattern, NC, and general spacing on this part. Since there're no obvious increase of song intensity nor 1/2 drum sound. I think you should at least make the spacing less dramatic, and change them into a unified jumjpy pattern (eg:octagonal), rather than one-two type of jumps i think that its plenty intsense for this pattern and nc, due to the increase in volume in the vocals, not necessarily the instruments
- 01:47:185 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - personal opinion, I'm not very fond of this style of "break" stream since they literally break the flow. but your mileage may vary
- 02:05:536 (5) - how about 292|203? More of thriangular kind of jump will be better here i like the feel of this flow currently!
- 02:45:589 (2) - change into 2 circle? It would fits better for me i like the slider
- 02:53:567 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same
- 02:56:121 (1,2,3,4) - This is really unexpected. Because you use sharp jumps almost all the time, people would not expect "flowy" 1/2 circle on this mapthey wouldnt expect it, which is why i love it!
- 02:58:674 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as above. ^
- 03:01:865 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I like pattern on these section better here compared to your first and third kiai owo
- 03:03:142 - Can't say that I'm agree with this lol. I personally would reverse the stream direction of 03:03:302 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to play i think it plays fine
- 03:16:387 (3,4,5) - any reason why you use triplets here? Because I think 1/2 slider + circle will represent music better because i want to
- 03:28:195 - NC? fixed!
- 03:30:270 (3) - change this into 1/2 slider? i dont like that
- 03:47:823 - to be honest I hink you can make some jump pattern that is more creative than just increasing star pattern. As you can hear, the music is not constant or similar all the way through this section. Some point like 03:48:461 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:49:578 (4,1,2,3) - needs to be different because they have other sound in the foreground that begs to be differentiated from the others. Just my thought here, hope you can understand what I meant & consider it. i like stars
- 04:12:078 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing as the first kiai
- 05:00:665 - You need to end the spinner at least here to met 5 minutes drain time requirement for approval map okay!
As for the hitsound, there're several things that I think can be improved, I'll just mention some of it as it's pretty much the same thing all the way
- 01:28:833 -, 01:31:387 -, 01:49:259 -, and so on. You'd be better of putting the clap in the next white tick, as the drum sound is there. (and you can place whistle in the place it left off to make it sounds fuller)
- 02:10:802 - from here till 02:19:419 - I can't hear clap sound in the usual place
I think thats it! I hope this could help you a little bit
Good luck!
thanks for the mod!Tari wrote:
m4m
[Dream]
- 00:04:563 (1,2,3,1,2) - For the progression of the background instrument, I would love if you could slowly increase the spacing of each note starting at 1 to 2. good idea!
- 00:12:063 (1) - I want to know why there is a jump here since the sounds around here are much stronger than this one. because im following the instruments and there is sound there
- 00:21:478 (4,1) - A new combo belongs at 4 instead of 1? Most of the time you put NCs to violin. fixed!
- 00:35:680 (5) - Readability of this whole part would be improved if you added a NC here. i dont see a reason to nc that
- 00:38:074 (3,4) - Why is these not parallel to each other? they arent supposed to be!
- 00:46:850 (2,3,4) - You probably wanted a different pattern here but your emphasis on 2 should still be there so you should increase the spacing between 1 and 2. i think its fine
- 01:08:233 (1,2) - NC should be at 2 if you followed your NC patterning at 01:05:999 (1) - they are completely different parts, the 2nd part is not the same as the first so it doesnt call for a nc
- 01:15:095 (1) - ^ Add NC to follow patterning at 01:14:616 (1) -
- 01:09:430 (1,2) - The spacing between these is way too huge. I almost got it confused with 1/2 wat
- 01:17:488 (2,3) - Rhythm interpretation for this would best be represented with back and forth circle jumps i dont think so
- 01:22:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^.
- 01:47:492 (1) - I don't think this is the best stream transition even if nc makes it more readable. yes but i like it!
- 01:54:514 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Pentagon shape here could be improved.
- 01:57:067 (3) - Definitely needs a NC because the 1/4 jump is quite sudden. i dont like that
- 01:57:705 (1,2,3,4) - I want to know the reason behind the sudden decrease of stream spacing when compared to 01:47:492 (1,2,3,4) - because i just wanted to lol, thats it
- 01:44:620 (1) - NC is inconsistent with the first half of the kiai. fixed!
- 01:59:620 (2,3) - Why aren't these parallel? because i do not want them to be
- 02:05:524 (5,1) - I'd prefer you add a note between 5 and 1 and stack them all with the slider 1. It would emphasize trumpet more. no thanks!
- 02:13:981 (1) - Wrong NC placement when compared to 00:26:748 (4) - ???? fixed!
- 00:33:131 (3) - Add NC here or remove from 02:20:364 (1) - fixed!
ty for the mod!Yasaija 714 wrote:
Hi
[General]
- 02:10:802 - This timing point is meaningless
- Let's fix Artist Title Source Tag
[Mada Mada Mada]Good luck!
- 00:10:792 - It is good to use the sound of soft-hitwhistle 2 here hm.. ill think about it
- 00:21:164 (2,3) - stack miss? fixed!
- 00:33:142 - I think that SV1.5 is early
1.3 × is better i really like it!- 00:52:131 (2,3) - I think it is very close. intended
I think that (3) should be located at (4)- 00:53:568 - 00:33:142 - same
- 01:02:983 (4) - Add NC 01:03:143 (1) - remove NC
01:03:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can understand using NC to make star type.
However, NC in a place where there is no big sound and the SV does not change is very mysterious fixed!- 01:06:015 (1,2,3) - The flow is strange it feels good to me
01:06:015 (1,2) - Ctrl+H 01:06:015 (1,3) - stack
I think this way is also good- 01:17:504 (2) - I think that circle is better all
01:22:611 (2,3) - just like here i dont like circles all everywhere- 02:17:663 (2,3) - I think this is too far away i tihnk its okay
- 02:41:360 (7,1) - Why did you shorten the distance? because i wanted to!
- 02:44:312 (2) - 01:17:504 (2) - same
- 02:49:419 (2,3) - ^
- 02:50:216 (5,1,2) - That's weird whats so weird??
01:20:855 (1,2) - this is better- 03:03:780 (3) - Add NC is better fixed!
- 04:31:865 (1) - Add NC fixed!
thanks for the mod!Zero__wind wrote:
M4M from my queue
Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix
Dream
00:00:909 (3) - stack back to 00:00:590 (1) - will match with the music better and it'll also explain your NC usage here fixed!
00:01:866 (3) - ^ stack to 00:01:547 (1) - fixed!
00:48:621 (3,4,1) - doesn't flow really nice imo, maybe try to place 1 on the left of 3 to make a more anti-clockwise flow i think it flows pretty nice actually
01:01:387 (4,5,1) - flow feels kinda forced here, maybe move 5 a bit lower? dont really wanna change this!
01:03:143 (2) - don't think this beat deserve such big jump here, currently it makes the downbeat on 01:02:983 (1) - seem so under-emphasized fixed
01:20:217 (4,6) - blanket better fixed
01:28:833 (2) - clap should be at end instead of on head according to the music, same for 01:31:387 (2) - and the similar ones in later kiais
01:47:743 (4,1) - why spacing so inconsistent with 01:27:318 (4,1) - just wanted to do something different
02:01:547 (6,1) - a bigger spacing between them is preferred, should really be bigger than that between 02:01:228 (3,4) - ill think about it!
02:29:950 (2) - same as 01:03:143 (2) - fixed
03:07:929 (6) - move this more to the right to make the flow of 03:07:610 (5,6,1) - more natural fixed!
03:23:408 (1,2,3) - spacing so small compared to last kiai hmm...
03:24:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what's this whistle spam?
03:36:174 (1) - really need finish on head fixed
03:59:153 (1,2,3) - spacing so uncomfortable, the drum on should deserve a much bigger spacing than that to 3 fixed!
04:15:589 (6) - move it down to around (116,84) for better flow to 04:15:748 (1) - fixed
04:24:525 (5,6) - inconsistent with all those streams in former kiais
04:27:078 (4,5,1) - the first and the only time you use this kind of spacing for a triple iirc, pretty confusing and inconsistent I'd say, better change that fixed!
that's all, good luck