nice hanzer-lite, i like it
Loneliness
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this. I really REALLY like this. Stacking is super nice. Good shit.
00:28:514 (4) - Not really any sounds warranting a 1/8th slider here, change into a normal hitcircle.
01:00:446 (1) - Fairly certain this shouldn't be a clap hitsound, sounds pretty awkward with 00:59:764 (6) - (you probably wanted it on 01:00:900 (2) - ;w;)
01:01:696 (8) - I think this note adds too much to the stream and makes the clap hitsound at the end of the stream less impactful, I feel like the 5 note stack and THEN the clap hitsound by itself would fit better with the music: https://puu.sh/vQQDt/c6473ab499.png
01:04:536 (2) - Again, there aren't really 1/8th sounds in the music to justify this repeat, I feel like another 5 note stack to parallel my last suggestion would fit pretty well and keep things consistent: https://puu.sh/vQQQw/901942247a.png
02:33:627 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - While I do enjoy these kind of back and forths, I feel like it's pretty bland and boring here, I feel like there's more potential here for interesting patterns if you rotated some of these.
03:08:627 (1,1,1,1) - The effect would feel way better if it started small and got larger, instead of the other way around.
03:17:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think this spacing is way too drastic of a change considering the rest of the streams in this section and there being no real change in the music to warrant such an increase.
03:34:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as before, tons of potential here.
04:15:446 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - etc
05:14:877 (4,1) - This is PRETTY DAMN EXTREME of a jump to be making here, i'd say its several times as big as any other 1/4 jump in this map, and considering it comes right after some pretty spaced notes (05:14:536 (1,2,3) -) I would really consider nerfing this, even if it is in the (2nd) last kiai.
Pretty nice. Good luck!
Loneliness
00:00:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this. I really REALLY like this. Stacking is super nice. Good shit.
00:28:514 (4) - Not really any sounds warranting a 1/8th slider here, change into a normal hitcircle.
01:00:446 (1) - Fairly certain this shouldn't be a clap hitsound, sounds pretty awkward with 00:59:764 (6) - (you probably wanted it on 01:00:900 (2) - ;w;)
01:01:696 (8) - I think this note adds too much to the stream and makes the clap hitsound at the end of the stream less impactful, I feel like the 5 note stack and THEN the clap hitsound by itself would fit better with the music: https://puu.sh/vQQDt/c6473ab499.png
01:04:536 (2) - Again, there aren't really 1/8th sounds in the music to justify this repeat, I feel like another 5 note stack to parallel my last suggestion would fit pretty well and keep things consistent: https://puu.sh/vQQQw/901942247a.png
02:33:627 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - While I do enjoy these kind of back and forths, I feel like it's pretty bland and boring here, I feel like there's more potential here for interesting patterns if you rotated some of these.
03:08:627 (1,1,1,1) - The effect would feel way better if it started small and got larger, instead of the other way around.
03:17:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think this spacing is way too drastic of a change considering the rest of the streams in this section and there being no real change in the music to warrant such an increase.
03:34:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as before, tons of potential here.
04:15:446 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - etc
05:14:877 (4,1) - This is PRETTY DAMN EXTREME of a jump to be making here, i'd say its several times as big as any other 1/4 jump in this map, and considering it comes right after some pretty spaced notes (05:14:536 (1,2,3) -) I would really consider nerfing this, even if it is in the (2nd) last kiai.
Pretty nice. Good luck!