Angela Chang - Aurora · forum

Wikozo

85 posts

Joined March 2016

Wikozo 2017-06-06T18:59:06+00:00

M4M, from your queue

[Easy]

you can do it a little bit hardly and you can add circle on 01:04:508

[Normal]

very good normal

[NeoSL's Hard]

00:17:180 (2) - to make this slider you must have 1/8. why you make slider like this. you have 1/4.
00:28:482 (2) - ^

[Celestial]

i think that you can do ar 8,3

Very good map! Good luck

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-06-11T18:59:24+00:00

as requested

[celestial]

00:38:019 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern might be a little bit hard to hit? since 00:36:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - goes anti-clockwise you would expect it to be the same
00:47:202 (3,4,5,6) - the increase in spacing?? i think it should be brought down a bit, maybe something like 00:42:257 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:15:457 (4,5) - should increase spacing by a bit, usually you have them a bit larger with a clap (horrible suggestion: maybe stack with 5)

[hard]
00:40:491 - i think this sound shouldnt be left blank
01:09:806 (7,8) - is 7 a little more flat than 8? you should copy 8 and paste for 7

[normal]
01:21:108 (4) - consider blanketing 4's head into middle of 3?

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-06-12T04:06:52+00:00

F1r3tar wrote:
check AiMod in every diff

[Easy]
01:21:991 (1) - 1/4 = no changed to 1/2.
[Normal]
01:21:108 (4) - why didn't you continue to rotate this when (3) is pointing left downward? I like the break in flow to indicate the ending of the song.
01:21:991 (1) - Give a 1/2 delay before starting the spinner. Avoid 1/4 in Normal unless absolutely necessary. ok.
[Celestial]
00:37:665 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - Can you make the order of this pattern more coherent? The fact that you're constantly switching between different spacing gets confusing. Just stick with one spacing like how you did 00:36:606 (1,2,3,4,5). I think you can see how the order would get confusing, especially for intermediate players. Changed this pattern.
00:50:204 (4) - Don't indicate 00:50:380 as passive. Both instruments seem equally important, so you should make both clickable. Or you could do this, which effectively covers all three sounds. Changed to two circles.
00:57:091 (5) - NC for clap, and to make the structure of 00:56:384 (1,2,3,4) look logical. I think it looks 'logical' enough, it's a simple enough 5 point polygon.
01:09:982 (3,4) - why do you reduce spacing on these heavier beats when they're more powerful than the clap? you made clap -> heavy beat a large jump, but heavy beat -> heavy beat a relatively close jump Increased spacing.

Wikozo wrote:
M4M, from your queue

[Easy]
you can do it a little bit hardly and you can add circle on 01:04:508 Want to keep rhythm in the Easy diff to 1/1 max.
[Normal]
very good normal Thanks!

[Celestial]
i think that you can do ar 8,3 Low BPM, I think AR8 is fine as is.
Very good map! Good luck

Jennglebells wrote:

as requested

[celestial]
00:38:019 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern might be a little bit hard to hit? since 00:36:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - goes anti-clockwise you would expect it to be the same Changed this in previous mod.
00:47:202 (3,4,5,6) - the increase in spacing?? i think it should be brought down a bit, maybe something like 00:42:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - The Piano is audibly louder during this section, hence the larger spacing.
01:15:457 (4,5) - should increase spacing by a bit, usually you have them a bit larger with a clap (horrible suggestion: maybe stack with 5) I think it's sufficiently spaced here, don't want to go too big.

[normal]
01:21:108 (4) - consider blanketing 4's head into middle of 3? Sure.

Thanks everyone!

Einja

652 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-06-14T22:37:40+00:00

m4m
[general]
ok, the diff spread is pretty weird, normal and easy are only 0.5 stars apart, and hard is only 2.36, while the top diff is 4 stars.

disable widescreen support unless you're gonna use an sb

tags conflict with the hard diff, and so does the countdown.

fix the url in the description where you took the timing and mp3. the "https" part has no "h".

[celestial]
00:24:951 (9,1) - nazi blanket

00:20:536 (3,4) - you should put a note on the blue tick between these notes to emphasize the weird 1/8 or 1/1/2 flute (idk what rhythm it is) because you did it in your previous patterns.
00:31:838 (3,4) - ^

00:25:127 (10,3) - it would look better aesthetically and play better if you stacked these

00:41:550 (3,4) - why is this the only pattern where you don't take advantage of the slider ball's range unlike 00:38:725 (5,6) - and 00:44:376 (5,6) -

00:47:555 (5,2) - don't overlap pls

00:58:504 (3,1) - ^ (maybe stack these though)

[neosl's hard]

00:27:246 (4,1) - bad overlap x.x

00:57:797 (4) - could barely tell that slider was curved

01:08:746 (3,4,5) - this felt awkward to play ;-;, (cuz you haven't used sharp angles in this map, let alone a triangle at all)

01:09:806 (7,8) - uneven sliders, you could copy paste one of the sliders

[normal]
only fixing ds issues

00:39:431 (1,2) - rip ds

01:03:095 (2,3) - 1.43 ds here

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-06-16T04:40:57+00:00

I thought we agreed on 4 diffs for the m4m

will reply later tonight

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,305 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-06-17T10:18:30+00:00

Hi, M4M

[Celestial]
00:18:240 (5,6) - the 5 slider is given the same emphasis as the 6 slider. The 5 slider itself has stronger tail than its head. Should be 2 circles and the blue tick should be emphasized more than the white tick (well like this 01:00:623 (1,2,3) - )
00:29:542 (5,6) - similar issue

00:23:891 (5) - kinda similar issue, the tail is stronger than its head should be 2 circles
00:35:193 (5) - ^

00:24:951 (9,10) - 9-10 should have a bit more distance because it's stronger than 7-8

00:38:019 (1) - is this NC necessary?

01:04:508 (5) - should be a slider since the vocal is still holding her voice there
01:09:099 (1) - shouldn't use a slider there, the blue tick is noticeably louder. I suggest you put a circle on the white tick and then a slider on the blue tick.

[NeoSL's Hard]
00:18:240 (4,5) - the 5 circle is clickable when it's the weakest sound of the bunch. I suggest this http://i.imgur.com/wF6mKm9.png switch their position on the timeline
00:29:542 (4,5) - ^ similar issue

00:23:891 (3) - kind of similar the on the blue tick is stronger than its sliderhead. switch the note position on the timeline at 00:23:891 (3,4) - work as well in this case
00:35:193 (3) - ^

00:24:951 (6) - should be 2 circles to emphasize the intensity

00:57:444 - add a note here, the gap is too long

00:57:797 (4) - should end on a red tick not blue. and you can even add a reverse there as well

[Normal]
01:21:108 (4) - this slider looks weird. maybe you should copy the 3 slider and rotate it a bit like 30 degrees.

this difficulty is a bit too easy considering that your BPM is less than half what the guideline is and there is no 1/4 rhythm on the map.
01:00:623 (2) - convert this to circles to add difficulty maybe? the intro is harder than the kiai at this point lol
01:06:274 (2) - ^

well it's up to you, that or add 1/4 rhythms.

Good luck with your mapset

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2017-06-23T04:38:00+00:00

Heyaa nice song--I think I heard this before

[Easy]

00:30:955 (1,2) - not a good flow for easy...something Noah would point out. 00:25:304 (1,2) - this one is a bit like that too.
01:03:448 (4,5) - 01:09:099 (4,5) - 01:20:401 (4,5,1) - this flow could confuse newbies. They might not know which one to hit first.

[Normal]

00:40:844 (2,3,1) - fix DS for this part! Aimod says so

[NeoSL's Hard]

Tags and countdown conflicts with other difficiuties.
00:25:304 (1,2) - these don't look symmetrical. Rotating 00:25:304 (1) - by 2 degrees (keep at 196,236) and move 00:26:010 (2) - to 90,158 to fix?
00:40:138 - 00:45:789 - 00:50:204 - I would map these parts, since you are following the instrument.

[Celestial]

00:35:899 (7,8,9,10) - antiflow compared to 00:24:597 (7,8,9,10) - and 00:58:504 (3,4,5,6) - . Ctrl+G 00:35:899 (7,8) - ?
00:18:946 (7,8,9) - and 00:30:248 (7,8,9) - the distance looks inconsistent here
00:48:967 - add notes, since you did so in 00:50:204 (4,5) - ?
01:24:640 - maybe lower the volume to 30% and add finish?
Nazi stacking mod:00:36:076 (8) - 01:08:216 (2) -

Good luck!

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-06-23T07:06:10+00:00

F1r3tar wrote:
[Hard]
01:08:216 (2) - You have an important sound passing through the body on white tick, something that (1) doesn't have, so mapping these both as 1/2s don't work. How about this instead? It follows the rhythm and plays intuitively.Not so important sound, I think.
]

Wikozo wrote:
[NeoSL's Hard]00:17:180 (2) - to make this slider you must have 1/8. why you make slider like this. you have 1/4.00:28:482 (2) - ^I doesn't matter using 1/8 rhythm since this song has really low bpm.

Jennglebells wrote:
00:40:491 - i think this sound shouldnt be left blankdoesn't have any sound.
01:09:806 (7,8) - is 7 a little more flat than 8? you should copy 8 and paste for 7

Einja wrote:
[neosl's hard]00:27:246 (4,1) - bad overlap x.xI think this overlap is not so bad.
00:57:797 (4) - could barely tell that slider was curvedI don't like curves slider tbh.
01:08:746 (3,4,5) - this felt awkward to play ;-;, (cuz you haven't used sharp angles in this map, let alone a triangle at all)well, doesn't matter imo.
01:09:806 (7,8) - uneven sliders, you could copy paste one of the sliders

timemon wrote:
[NeoSL's Hard]00:18:240 (4,5) - the 5 circle is clickable when it's the weakest sound of the bunch. I suggest this http://i.imgur.com/wF6mKm9.png switch their position on the timelineNo. I think this part looks not so bad,
00:29:542 (4,5) - ^ similar issueNo. I think this part looks not so bad,
00:23:891 (3) - kind of similar the on the blue tick is stronger than its sliderhead. switch the note position on the timeline at 00:23:891 (3,4) - work as well in this caseNo. I think this part looks not so bad,
00:35:193 (3) - ^No. I think this part looks not so bad,
00:24:951 (6) - should be 2 circles to emphasize the intensityNo
00:57:444 - add a note here, the gap is too longI think this doesn't matter, imo
00:57:797 (4) - should end on a red tick not blue. and you can even add a reverse there as wellwell, I'll thinsk about that.

aigoh wrote:
[NeoSL's Hard] Tags and countdown conflicts with other difficiuties.
00:25:304 (1,2) - these don't look symmetrical. Rotating 00:25:304 (1) - by 2 degrees (keep at 196,236) and move 00:26:010 (2) - to 90,158 to fix? I didn't intended symmetry and current pattern looks okay.
00:40:138 - 00:45:789 - 00:50:204 - I would map these parts, since you are following the instrument.Nope.

No reply=fixed
Thanks for mod!

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Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2017-07-17T14:42:37+00:00

timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M

[Celestial]
00:18:240 (5,6) - the 5 slider is given the same emphasis as the 6 slider. The 5 slider itself has stronger tail than its head. Should be 2 circles and the blue tick should be emphasized more than the white tick (well like this 01:00:623 (1,2,3) - )
00:29:542 (5,6) - similar issue

00:23:891 (5) - kinda similar issue, the tail is stronger than its head should be 2 circles followin violin
00:35:193 (5) - ^ ^

00:24:951 (9,10) - 9-10 should have a bit more distance because it's stronger than 7-8

00:38:019 (1) - is this NC necessary? yip, new piano sequence

01:04:508 (5) - should be a slider since the vocal is still holding her voice there no clear instrument on that tick
01:09:099 (1) - shouldn't use a slider there, the blue tick is noticeably louder. I suggest you put a circle on the white tick and then a slider on the blue tick.

[Normal]
01:21:108 (4) - this slider looks weird. maybe you should copy the 3 slider and rotate it a bit like 30 degrees.

this difficulty is a bit too easy considering that your BPM is less than half what the guideline is and there is no 1/4 rhythm on the map.
01:00:623 (2) - convert this to circles to add difficulty maybe? the intro is harder than the kiai at this point lol changed to 1/4 repeat slider
01:06:274 (2) - ^ ^

well it's up to you, that or add 1/4 rhythms.

Good luck with your mapset

aigoh wrote:
Heyaa nice song--I think I heard this before

[Easy]
00:30:955 (1,2) - not a good flow for easy...something Noah would point out. 00:25:304 (1,2) - this one is a bit like that too.
01:03:448 (4,5) - 01:09:099 (4,5) - 01:20:401 (4,5,1) - this flow could confuse newbies. They might not know which one to hit first.
[Normal]
00:40:844 (2,3,1) - fix DS for this part! Aimod says so
[Celestial]
00:35:899 (7,8,9,10) - antiflow compared to 00:24:597 (7,8,9,10) - and 00:58:504 (3,4,5,6) - . Ctrl+G 00:35:899 (7,8) - ? isn't there antiflow here already? .-.
00:18:946 (7,8,9) - and 00:30:248 (7,8,9) - the distance looks inconsistent here
00:48:967 - add notes, since you did so in 00:50:204 (4,5) - ? different set of isntruments (bass at that point which I don't normally map whereas the compared time has percussion)
01:24:640 - maybe lower the volume to 30% and add finish? not a fan of using finishes when there are no cymbals in the music
Nazi stacking mod:00:36:076 (8) - 01:08:216 (2) -
Good luck!

thanks for the mods! (no reply = applied)

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-07-18T00:17:33+00:00

Celestial

00:18:240 (5,6,7) - This can be a bit confusing the first time you play it. Do something like this instead:

~

00:35:899 (7,8) - I would Ctrl+G. Makes it easier to read since it allows more time between slider 6 finishing (and the combo burst fading) before seeing the next circle underneath. Helps improve readability.
01:00:976 (3,4) - Emphasis doesn't look too good here. Maybe try this:

~

01:14:750 (1,2) - Better to fill in the rhythm imo. You usually only map these 1/1 spacings to new combos. Idea:

~

NeoSL's Hard

00:23:538 (2,5) - They seem a bit too close together for your structure
00:26:010 (2,5) - Maybe curve them the same, or take slider 2 and rotate it 90 degrees and use that for slider 5 instead? So the shapes are more consistent within the combo.
01:21:461 (4,1) - Doesn't look that nice structurally. Here, try this: It will fit your structure and still help emphasize the last note. The jump is pretty easy since you can use slider-leniency, but it still feels like a jump.

~

Normal

01:11:925 (2,3) - I don't really like the visual flow here, because 2's repeat causes players to kind of want to go upward but slider 3's head is down. Also the next slider (1) is already visible so it misleads players at this level imo. (You should also consider that even tho this is a Normal, people playing this will likely be Easy players too due to the bpm/difficulties, so I wouldn't take as many liberties with flowbreaks compared to Normals with higher bpms).

Easy

Fine

[]

Okay thats all, confirm metadata for me if you have it and call me back

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-07-22T03:02:01+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
NeoSL's Hard

00:23:538 (2,5) - They seem a bit too close together for your structure
00:26:010 (2,5) - Maybe curve them the same, or take slider 2 and rotate it 90 degrees and use that for slider 5 instead? So the shapes are more consistent within the combo.looks little bit minor issue, anyway fixed,
01:21:461 (4,1) - Doesn't look that nice structurally. Here, try this: It will fit your structure and still help emphasize the last note. The jump is pretty easy since you can use slider-leniency, but it still feels like a jump.fixed another way,
~

no r=fixed
THanks for mod!

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Rizen

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Rizen 2017-07-22T19:52:02+00:00

applied everything except for last point in insane. I believe a circle highlights the peak in chorus better (1/1). It's also not the only 1/1 within a combo, I use it shortly after at 01:08:393 (3,4) - , 01:09:276 (2,3) - , etc. (Dramatic pause)

thanks monstrata!

now just waiting on metadata check

Rizen

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Joined August 2013

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Rizen 2017-07-27T06:38:58+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Unicode Title: 歐若拉
Romanised Title: Aurora
Unicode Artist: 張韶涵
Romanised Artist: Angela Chang or Angela Zhang

References:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dmwJaG-R1iM
https://www.facebook.com/Angela.ChangShaoHan/

Thanks IamKwaN!!