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YokesPai
From my modding queue! ~
  • Kegare
  1. 00:02:340 (7) - Move to x:334 y:148 for better triangle.
  2. 00:02:721 (8) - Move to x:254 y:280 ^
  3. 00:03:102 (9) - Move to x:179 y:147 ^
  4. 00:16:959 (6,7) - Why aren't these the same as 00:13:908 (6,7) when 00:07:806 (6,7) are the same as 00:10:857 (6,7) ?
  • Tarrasky's Insane
  1. 00:07:171 (2) - Why not blanket?
  2. 00:06:789 - to 00:18:993 - First you start out with sliders, then a mix of both sliders, circles and reverses. Your rhythm choices seem random, the music repeats the same rhythm, so why does your map vary so much? Small variation is okay, as long as they're consistent, but here it isn't. (For more explaination watch this: https://youtu.be/Z7IY0gDwSQo?t=5m33s to 7m 53s) Unless you intentionally meant everything in which case can you explain?
  3. 00:32:721 (4) - Blanket 00:32:975 (5) with it?
  4. 00:57:636 (6,7,8) - What are you trying to do? I think you should just make it into a slider like 00:56:365 (1,2,3,4,5) .
  • LwL's Insane
  1. 00:09:077 (3,4,5) - Why is this spacing so different from 00:07:552 (3,4,5) and 00:10:603 (3,4,5) ?

Hope this helps! :)
Topic Starter
Net0

YokesPai wrote:

From my modding queue! ~
  • Kegare
  1. 00:02:340 (7) - Move to x:334 y:148 for better triangle.
  2. 00:02:721 (8) - Move to x:254 y:280 ^
  3. 00:03:102 (9) - Move to x:179 y:147 ^Improved the triangle geometry
  4. 00:16:959 (6,7) - Why aren't these the same as 00:13:908 (6,7) when 00:07:806 (6,7) are the same as 00:10:857 (6,7) ?Because I repeated the pattern 3 times in row 00:07:806 (6,7,1) -
    /00:09:077 (5,6,7) - /00:10:857 (6,7,1) - so players could fully grab rhythm sense in order to start variations 00:13:908 (6,7,1) - / 00:15:179 (5,6,7,1) -


Hope this helps! :)Sure, thanks a lot :)
LwL

LittleEndu wrote:

LwL's Insane
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00:58:653 (4) - Next white tick is more important. Agree but I don't wanna overcomplicate it with spacing changes for the 3/4 sliders since it's 4* and all, and don't really wanna nc it either for reading clarity
Overall I don't agree with putting hitcircle where the slider ends. Doesn't really fit with the speed of this song. Sorry but I don't really know what you mean by that
[quote="YokesPai"]From my modding queue! ~
  • LwL's Insane
  1. 00:09:077 (3,4,5) - Why is this spacing so different from 00:07:552 (3,4,5) and 00:10:603 (3,4,5) ? lower pitch

Thanks! :)
Bluekrait
3 diff mod for Net0
Message me in game or through forum PM for any questions regarding my mod!


[General]
  1. Unused hitsound: normal-sliderslide1.wav


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:315 (3,4) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:15:942 (1) - Consider bowing in the other direction:
  3. 00:17:467 (3,4) - Fix blanket
  4. 00:21:281 (2) - Off screen objects are unrankable
  5. 00:27:383 (2) - heh of course you would Ctrl ,/. 00:25:857 (1,2,3,4) - twice
  6. 00:33:484 (1,3) - Move NC to 3
  7. 00:32:975 (2) - Sounds the same as 00:34:501 (4)
  8. 00:37:552 (5) - Would consider turning this into a 1/2 slider.
  9. 00:52:552 (5,1,2,3,4) - wow so lazy lol.
  10. 01:02:467 (1,2,3) - ^
  11. 01:08:314 (6,1,2,3) - Wonder where I've seen this before...
  12. So I think you can do with a couple more unique patterns, but if you don't want to that's fine. It's not unrankable to copy paste and rotate half the map, it just looks like low effort.


[Advanced]
  1. 00:04:247 (2,3,1) - Try making the visual distance the same between these three notes. Notice how the gap between 1 an 3 is smaller than the gap between 2 and 3.
  2. 00:06:027 (3,1) - Blanket?
  3. 00:24:332 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:26:874 (3,1) - Increase gap spacing by possibly bowing 1 in the other direction.
  5. Choose ONE of the following suggestions for combos between 00:19:755 (1) - and beginning of first kiai:
    1. Match combo length as you've been doing: 00:24:332 (3) - NC 00:28:908 (4) - NC 00:31:196 (4) - NC
    2. Increase combo length for this relatively slower tempo part: 00:21:281 (1) - Remove NC 00:27:383 (1,4) - Move NC to 4
  6. 00:34:120 (3) - I'm not feeling the justification of a double here and in all instances of this case throughout the kiai: 00:35:644 (3) - 00:38:696 (3) - 00:40:222 (3) - Advanced is still a low difficulty and these doubles make it a bit hard to read, just my opinion.
  7. 00:36:535 (5) - NC
  8. 00:42:891 (1) - ^
  9. 00:45:687 (2) - ^
  10. 00:47:594 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern should be remapped to the vocals since this is where they are most prominent in the song. Here are a few example suggestions you can use for this tempo:


  11. 00:50:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  12. 00:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  13. 00:56:365 (1,2) - Blanket around slider body instead of slider head.
  14. Choose ONE of the following NC suggestions between here and final kiai:
    1. Decrease NC lengths: 01:03:992 (5) - NC 01:10:094 (5) - NC
    2. Increase NC lengths: 01:00:942 (1) - Remove NC 01:07:044 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 01:06:027 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lazy mapping >.>
  16. 01:17:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  17. 01:20:772 (8) - NC
  18. Honestly when I see long patterns repeated like that, it just makes me want to stop playing the map :/


[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:07:298 (3) - This reverse slider doesn't fit. You're mapping the bass, then suddenly you switch to a different instrument. Try something like this:

    2 in the picture is 00:07:171 (2) - for reference.
  2. 00:08:824 (3,3) - ^
  3. 00:11:746 (2,3) - Ctrl G on timeline
  4. 00:12:382 (4,5,1) - Visual DS gaps are a bit too close and uneven.
  5. 00:13:272 (2,3) - This combo is a little better, but not by much. You have a slider ending on a main drum beat which may feel a bit awkward to play. I recommend going with the above aforementioned suggestion for this tempo or Ctrl G'ing 00:13:272 (2,3) - on the timeline.
  6. 00:14:797 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:16:323 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:36:535 (6) - NC
  9. 00:54:840 (1) - Remove NC
  10. 01:10:857 (1) - ^
  11. 01:21:535 (1) - ^
Kalindraz

Bluekrait wrote:

Mod stuff about "lazy things"..
About the repetition in the lower diffs: my dear if you read the critéria, the principal idea is that the rhythm is repetitive for novice players to have perception and easier to hit the notes and not to leave them confused with random rhythms.
It's not lazy .. It's the rules.
It should be for this reason that you don't have a ranked map, because you probably can't read them.
MaridiuS
Mod from my queue

[Kegare]

Hitsounding is a bit whacky, i'll just point out few examples, I don't agree with using clap where there is no snare.
00:07:171 (3) - why is this clapped when its clearly a kick
00:08:315 (1) - where's the clap here
00:14:797 (3,3) - ugh claps etc all (3) should just be normal-hitnormal, not clap wah.
00:09:077 (5) - no finish?
00:10:604 (5) - add a finish.
00:11:365 (1) - clap etc. See for yourself.
00:20:518 (3) - delete clap
00:22:806 (1) - add clap
00:33:357 (7) - why are you trying to make the song different than it is? Clearly there's no snare in the song here. ;v
00:36:535 (1) - it is a bit problematic to overhitsound the map, when you plan to give 0 emphasis to the same hitsound you use on beats that it doesnt exist. Here it ends on that hitsound, as the player didn't click it, he will be unsatisfied, at least that's how i've felt on testplay.
01:00:179 (4) - i suggest getting a new clap hitsound for this, current one is too loud for this calm section.

Some concepts; mostly you used consistent DS, this limits your creativity patterning could use some tweaks.
00:06:789 - this section is boring. Reason being consistent spacing is being used throughout, however there are things that could be emphasized making it more fun. And it will offer more creativity and more interesting patterning. Here is what is the problem. 00:07:171 (3,5) - should be ctrl+g'd individually, that way you get interactive flow and more enjoyment 00:08:697 (3) - 00:10:221 (3,5) - etc. It is too bland in its current state. That's my opinion.
00:03:738 - rhythm is broken imo. 00:03:993 - 00:04:374 - 00:05:518 - 00:05:899 - should be sliders, you even hitsounded the following notes, yet you gave them 0 emphasis. 00:04:247 (4) - has no intensity, yet 00:04:374 - its ending has the highest pitch on the guitar meaning it should be the slider.


Moderation
00:06:789 (1) - I say give this more emphasis, compared to previous section its really intense, and opens a new section, meaning it needs more contrast, increase spacing please.
00:22:806 (1) - ugh either make the flow comfy from the slider or reduce spacing, i broke here, feels like a chore to play.
00:39:968 (3) - this jump is too wide, bringing in the fact that it has lower intensity than 00:33:484 (1) - or 00:39:585 (1) -
00:41:365 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ugh do some sharp angles, 00:43:018 (3) - has lower intensity than 00:42:891 (2) - etc and it all has same spacing http://i.imgur.com/CSnihDd.jpg something like this for example, or do some back and forths increase spacing etc, really disagreeing with this pattern tbh.
00:42:891 (2) - ^
00:45:687 (1,1,1) - this is just way too intense and the SV is really low, like, double the sv xd
00:47:848 (4) - make the slider start here 00:47:975 please. In the section all slider started are on mwhite ticks.
LwL
Did something with LittleEndu's suggestion after all since it was kinda bugging me that it wasn't emphasized any more than the others, hopefully it's a bit emphasized through flow now.

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Topic Starter
Net0

Bluekrait wrote:

3 diff mod for Net0
Message me in game or through forum PM for any questions regarding my mod!


[General]
  1. Unused hitsound: normal-sliderslide1.wavFixed


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:315 (3,4) - Fix blanketI don't see what's there to fix
  2. 00:15:942 (1) - Consider bowing in the other direction:This suggestion means you didn't quite got the concept of the diffs
  3. 00:17:467 (3,4) - Fix blanket Improved
  4. 00:21:281 (2) - Off screen objects are unrankablewe'll see
  5. 00:27:383 (2) - heh of course you would Ctrl ,/. 00:25:857 (1,2,3,4) - twiceI don't get it
  6. 00:33:484 (1,3) - Move NC to 3Sure!
  7. 00:32:975 (2) - Sounds the same as 00:34:501 (4)Yeah it does, so?
  8. 00:37:552 (5) - Would consider turning this into a 1/2 slider.Why would I end start a slider here 00:37:552 - and end it here 00:37:679 - if the next strong sound is also on the big white tick 00:37:806 - ???
  9. 00:52:552 (5,1,2,3,4) - wow so lazy lol.
  10. 01:02:467 (1,2,3) - ^
  11. 01:08:314 (6,1,2,3) - Wonder where I've seen this before...
  12. So I think you can do with a couple more unique patterns, but if you don't want to that's fine. It's not unrankable to copy paste and rotate half the map, it just looks like low effort.You're funny. Have you ever mapped easy/normal before? Actually, have you ever played any old maps? It's just a way to structure around copy paste and rotate, nothing bad about it, since this is for new players who just started with the game, repetition imo is the best way to go.


[Advanced]
  1. 00:04:247 (2,3,1) - Try making the visual distance the same between these three notes. Notice how the gap between 1 an 3 is smaller than the gap between 2 and 3.Not a major difference
  2. 00:06:027 (3,1) - Blanket?Sure
  3. 00:24:332 (3,4) - ^Improved
  4. 00:26:874 (3,1) - Increase gap spacing by possibly bowing 1 in the other direction.Nope, already mentioned why I won't change that in the reply of previous diff
  5. Choose ONE of the following suggestions for combos between 00:19:755 (1) - and beginning of first kiai:I did NC here 00:28:908 (1) - , and it seems really well organized 00:19:755 (1,2,3) - /00:21:281 (1,2,3) - /00:22:806 (1,2,3,4) - followed by 00:25:857 (1,2,3) - /00:27:383 (1,2,3) - /00:28:908 (1,2,3,4,5) -
    1. Match combo length as you've been doing: 00:24:332 (3) - NC 00:28:908 (4) - NC 00:31:196 (4) - NC
    2. Increase combo length for this relatively slower tempo part: 00:21:281 (1) - Remove NC 00:27:383 (1,4) - Move NC to 4
  6. 00:34:120 (3) - I'm not feeling the justification of a double here and in all instances of this case throughout the kiai: 00:35:644 (3) - 00:38:696 (3) - 00:40:222 (3) - Advanced is still a low difficulty and these doubles make it a bit hard to read, just my opinion.Yeah I'll change rhythm here to make it fit spread better, currently I'll keep the 1/2 gaps but mapped with 1/1 slider in the entire first kiai section
  7. 00:36:535 (5) - NC
  8. 00:42:891 (1) - ^
  9. 00:45:687 (2) - ^All applied
  10. 00:47:594 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern should be remapped to the vocals since this is where they are most prominent in the song. Here are a few example suggestions you can use for this tempo:



    Cool suggestions, I'll remap this section using your rhythm but I don't want to use reverse in this part of the song. This is the most emphatic and I really want to keep it linear all the time to get the motion intended
  11. 00:50:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  12. 00:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^Remapped
  13. 00:56:365 (1,2) - Blanket around slider body instead of slider head.Sure
  14. Choose ONE of the following NC suggestions between here and final kiai:Applied NC here 01:03:992 (1) - and 01:10:094 (1) -
    1. Decrease NC lengths: 01:03:992 (5) - NC 01:10:094 (5) - NC
    2. Increase NC lengths: 01:00:942 (1) - Remove NC 01:07:044 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 01:06:027 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lazy mapping >.>Lazy analysis
  16. 01:17:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
  17. 01:20:772 (8) - NCFixed
  18. Honestly when I see long patterns repeated like that, it just makes me want to stop playing the map :/Honestly I couldn't care less if you want or not to stop playing the map. :/


[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:07:298 (3) - This reverse slider doesn't fit. You're mapping the bass, then suddenly you switch to a different instrument. Try something like this:

    2 in the picture is 00:07:171 (2) - for reference.Changed rhythm and remapped
  2. 00:08:824 (3,3) - ^
  3. 00:11:746 (2,3) - Ctrl G on timeline
  4. 00:12:382 (4,5,1) - Visual DS gaps are a bit too close and uneven.
  5. 00:13:272 (2,3) - This combo is a little better, but not by much. You have a slider ending on a main drum beat which may feel a bit awkward to play. I recommend going with the above aforementioned suggestion for this tempo or Ctrl G'ing 00:13:272 (2,3) - on the timeline.
  6. 00:14:797 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:16:323 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:36:535 (6) - NCFixed
  9. 00:54:840 (1) - Remove NCFixed
  10. 01:10:857 (1) - ^Fixed
  11. 01:21:535 (1) - ^Fixed
Thx mod
Idealism
cuidado mano eu levei silence de 42 horas por falar "pornô" no disqus :^)
Topic Starter
Net0

Idealism wrote:

cuidado mano eu levei silence de 42 horas por falar "pornô" no disqus :^)
O nome do mapa é P.O.R.N.O não porno :^)
Marianna
i'm in love with this mapset omg
send hi to brazil
we love u (but we hate kalindraz, kalindraz o mundo te abomina)
Gokateigo
hi from ANH q
  1. high spacing here 00:07:552 (3,4,5) - and low spacing here 00:09:077 (3,4,5) - Why ?
  2. 00:43:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps are better for 1/2 even if it's 230bpm, or it shouldn't look like a stream
  3. 00:45:687 (1,2,3,4) - avoid squares in insane diffs
  4. 00:51:789 (1) - ctrl+g and redo the pattern after the slider
  1. 00:36:535 (1,2,3) - the 2 is too close of the 3, the spacing should be equal
  2. 01:08:950 (2,3,4) - all the things like that in this part are straight lines or wide angles but not this one, change it
  1. 00:02:340 (7) - nc
  2. 00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,5) + 00:56:874 (5,1) - uncomfotable

Really good map :) (the last diff is really fun to play)
LwL

Gokateigo wrote:

hi from ANH q
  1. high spacing here 00:07:552 (3,4,5) - and low spacing here 00:09:077 (3,4,5) - Why ? pitch
  2. 00:43:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps are better for 1/2 even if it's 230bpm, or it shouldn't look like a stream Don't really agree since I've had similarly spaced 1/2 notes before, mightl change it tho if more people complain, but it wouldn't really fit with the emphasis
  3. 00:45:687 (1,2,3,4) - avoid squares in insane diffs It's 115 bpm jumps should be straightforward enough. Lowered the spacing a bit tho.
  4. 00:51:789 (1) - ctrl+g and redo the pattern after the slider nah flow change is intentional
Thanks!

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239,234,67806,6,0,P|303:280|337:209,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,270,68314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,358,68569,6,0,P|403:331|456:218,1,180
453,249,68950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,140,69077,2,0,P|352:172|328:240,1,90
216,336,69331,2,0,P|168:296|132:176,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,9,69840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,257,70094,6,0,P|341:285|226:248,1,180
211,193,70476,2,0,P|267:184|318:216,1,90
251,264,70730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,263,70857,6,0,P|135:219|137:158,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,53,71111,2,0,P|257:97|255:158,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,108,71365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
133,24,71492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,53,71620,6,0,B|311:62|380:47|380:47|416:52|455:90,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,70,72001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,196,72128,2,0,P|329:178|297:124,1,107.999996704102
453,152,72382,2,0,P|464:207|321:250,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,267,72764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,139,72891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
57,257,73145,6,0,P|96:302|267:340,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,346,73526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,267,73653,2,0,P|384:306|390:368,1,107.999996704102
257,264,73907,2,0,P|259:178|118:132,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,119,74289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,248,74416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,42,74670,6,0,P|363:51|494:115,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,109,75052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,233,75179,2,0,P|355:192|335:122,1,107.999996704102
500,210,75433,2,0,P|493:279|365:328,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,329,75814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,215,75942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,112,76196,6,0,P|30:189|97:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,319,76577,2,0,P|179:274|132:228,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,304,76831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,319,76958,2,0,P|219:293|235:230,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,77213,6,0,P|161:82|224:66,1,107.999996704102
348,143,77467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,304,77721,6,0,P|35:217|21:107,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,111,78103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,127,78230,2,0,P|171:187|106:247,1,107.999996704102
99,51,78484,2,0,P|168:24|274:132,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,103,78865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,225,78992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,328,79247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
370,241,79374,2,0,P|336:281|333:363,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,334,79628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,237,79755,2,0,P|452:187|382:143,1,107.999996704102
260,155,80009,2,0,P|264:102|401:2,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,2,80391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,152,80518,1,8,0:0:0:0:
93,31,80772,6,0,P|66:101|130:263,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,354,81281,2,0,P|445:284|381:122,1,215.999993408203,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,155,82043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
191,336,82297,5,0,0:0:0:0:
111,236,82425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,105,82552,2,0,P|270:149|284:233,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,236,82806,2,0,P|70:192|56:108,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,26,83060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,149,83187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,26,83314,2,0,L|159:179,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,59,83569,2,0,L|337:212,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Trynna
2017-06-25 21:07 Net0: se vc quiser fazer mod irc depois me avisa
2017-06-25 21:07 Net0: vo comer alguma coisa
2017-06-25 21:08 Trynna: opa
2017-06-25 21:08 Trynna: ok perai
2017-06-25 21:22 Trynna: ta vamo la
2017-06-25 21:22 Net0: manda ai
2017-06-25 21:23 Trynna: hm
2017-06-25 21:23 Trynna: a primeira coisa que eu estranhei foi logo na pattern inicial
2017-06-25 21:23 Trynna: por que optou por ignorar a mudança de som?
2017-06-25 21:23 Trynna: 00:01:450 (3) - e 00:02:086 (6) -
2017-06-25 21:23 Net0: onde?
2017-06-25 21:24 Trynna: 00:01:704 - 00:02:213 -
2017-06-25 21:24 Trynna: mais precisamente
2017-06-25 21:24 Trynna: 00:03:738 - nessa seção você conseguiu seguir a mudança sem afetar muito
2017-06-25 21:24 Net0: provavelmente foi pra fazer o patterning
2017-06-25 21:24 Trynna: sim, digo
2017-06-25 21:24 Net0: inicial
2017-06-25 21:24 Trynna: mas a pattern indica algo diferente
2017-06-25 21:25 Net0: tem alguma sugestão sem aumentar o ritmo demais?
2017-06-25 21:25 Net0: tipo não quero uma densidade assim 00:03:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2017-06-25 21:25 Net0: Por isso usei reverse
2017-06-25 21:25 Trynna: hm tipo
2017-06-25 21:25 Net0: pra tipo o cara não se assustar com 1 segundo de mapa
2017-06-25 21:25 Trynna: você pode fazer 00:01:450 (3) - um slider 1/2 e deixar o som que difere clicável
2017-06-25 21:26 Trynna: o mesmo pro outro slider que eu indiquei
2017-06-25 21:26 Net0: slider 1/2 00:01:450 (3) -
2017-06-25 21:26 Net0: okay
2017-06-25 21:26 Trynna: você também tem que considerar que 00:02:340 (8) -
2017-06-25 21:26 Trynna: você começou a pattern que tinha feito anteriormente
2017-06-25 21:26 Trynna: mas em outro local
2017-06-25 21:26 Trynna: não foi no downbeat
2017-06-25 21:27 Trynna: o que estranhou ainda mais in-game
2017-06-25 21:27 Net0: pera
2017-06-25 21:28 Net0: vc ta falando deu não ter iniciado a repetição do pattern aqui 00:02:213 - e no lugar eu iniciei aqui 00:02:340 - no tick vermelhor certo?
2017-06-25 21:28 Trynna: yep
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: porque o som da guitarra inicial
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: 00:03:102 (9) - 00:00:688 -
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: merda
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: ESSE AQUI ----> 00:00:688 -
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: ele nao coincide
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: 00:02:213 -
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: aqui
2017-06-25 21:29 Net0: a diferença é bem sutil e acho que se repetir não dá problema
2017-06-25 21:30 Net0: mas quando eu fiz o mapa acho que foi isso que eu percebi
2017-06-25 21:30 Trynna: mesmo que seja diferente (apesar de eu não ouvir nada diferente ali) isso causa uma bagunça no teu ritmo
2017-06-25 21:30 Net0: mas acho que vou mudar :/
2017-06-25 21:31 Trynna: 00:02:340 - e 00:02:467 - são similares mas 00:02:594 - não
2017-06-25 21:31 Trynna: e o mesmo acontece no próximo slider etc
2017-06-25 21:31 Trynna: 00:13:908 (6,7) - o spacing foi intencional? parece grande demais comparado ao imposto anteriormente
2017-06-25 21:32 Trynna: digo, mesmo pros padrões da quebra de seção
2017-06-25 21:32 Net0: arrumei o ritmo
2017-06-25 21:32 Trynna: quando comparado com 00:15:179 (5,6,7) - 00:16:959 (6,7) -
2017-06-25 21:32 Net0: agora tá padronizado
2017-06-25 21:32 Net0: 00:00:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2017-06-25 21:33 Net0: ok próximo ponto
2017-06-25 21:33 Net0: 00:13:908 (6,7) -
2017-06-25 21:34 Net0: 700:13:654 (5,6) - eu fiz a distancia da tail desses dois ser similar com esse 00:13:908 (6,7) - pra dificultar um pouco a leitura
2017-06-25 21:34 Net0: já que o ritmo é o mesmo dos patterns anteriores já dá pra "prever" saca
2017-06-25 21:34 Net0: mesmo o pattern tendo um spacing um pouco diferente
2017-06-25 21:34 Trynna: hm da pra entender tho
2017-06-25 21:34 Trynna: mas de qualquer forma
2017-06-25 21:34 Trynna: vamos dividir a seção em duas como eu havia dito
2017-06-25 21:35 Trynna: 00:06:789 - e 00:12:891 -
2017-06-25 21:35 Trynna: já que você optou por usar um spacing maior nessas patterns
2017-06-25 21:35 Trynna: acho meio aleatório manter 00:16:959 (6,7) - como da seção anterior
2017-06-25 21:35 Trynna: optar por algo mais espaçoso parece mais sensato ao menos
2017-06-25 21:36 Net0: talvez espaçar mais esse próprio pattern?
2017-06-25 21:36 Trynna: yep
2017-06-25 21:38 Trynna: voltei fui pegar comida
2017-06-25 21:38 Trynna: 00:20:518 (3,4,5) - e 00:22:043 (3,4,5) -, considerando a importância que deu a guitarra, acha mesmo bom manter "consistente"?
2017-06-25 21:38 Trynna: eu vejo uma diferença bem grandinha entre eles
2017-06-25 21:38 Trynna: apesar do background sound ser o mesmo
2017-06-25 21:39 Net0: eu não vejo mt diferenã tbh
2017-06-25 21:39 Net0: pra mim tá a mesma frase da guitarra
2017-06-25 21:40 Trynna: se liga
2017-06-25 21:40 Trynna: é que 00:20:518 (3) - difere bastante de 00:20:772 (4,5) -
2017-06-25 21:40 Trynna: mas já aqui 00:22:043 (3,4,5) -
2017-06-25 21:40 Trynna: é quase o mesmo som
2017-06-25 21:40 Trynna: talvez isso possa ser melhor representado na pattern
2017-06-25 21:41 Net0: vc está dizendo que 00:20:518 (3) - é bem diferente de 00:22:043 (3) -
2017-06-25 21:41 Net0: ?
2017-06-25 21:41 Trynna: em certa parte
2017-06-25 21:42 Trynna: posso estar enganado tho
2017-06-25 21:42 Trynna: pelo menos foi a impressão que eu tive
2017-06-25 21:42 Net0: não sei se vale a pena mudar isso, porque a mudança é mt sutil e por o pattern ser simétrico
2017-06-25 21:42 Net0: vai dar bo de consistência
2017-06-25 21:42 Trynna: hm your choice
2017-06-25 21:43 Trynna: agora se tem algo que eu não fui muito fã foi a mudança repentina de seguir a guitarra pra vocal
2017-06-25 21:43 Trynna: ficou bem estranho e não esperado
2017-06-25 21:43 Net0: eu fui naquilo que mais me chamou a atenção
2017-06-25 21:43 Net0: o vocal distorcido pra mim
2017-06-25 21:43 Net0: é o que mais se destaca na música nessa parte
2017-06-25 21:44 Trynna: claro, o vocal fica mais forte
2017-06-25 21:44 Trynna: mas não deixa de ser meio confusa a aplicação
2017-06-25 21:44 Net0: sem falar que ele é único na música
2017-06-25 21:45 Trynna: 00:25:857 - aqui já existem indicios de algo murmurando, mas não seguiu algo parecido
2017-06-25 21:45 Net0: eu vi a diff do Tarrasky e simplesmente não engoli mapear outra coisa além do vocal nessa parte, foi mt visão pessoal mesmo
2017-06-25 21:45 Net0: eu to ligado que tá undermap demais
2017-06-25 21:45 Net0: segui sim poh
2017-06-25 21:45 Net0: vc viu sliders com essa shape em outra parte do mapa?
2017-06-25 21:46 Net0: o mapa com a Miku cantando só tem slider curvado
2017-06-25 21:46 Net0: só teve uma exceção 00:45:687 (1,1,1,1,1) -
2017-06-25 21:46 Net0: miku não poh, Gumi
2017-06-25 21:46 Net0: lol
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: o meu ponto é o undermap
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: apesar dela cantar de fundo
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: os sons seguidos são os da guitarra
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: a partir de 00:22:806 (1) - a guitarra some
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: e você segue cegamente o vocal
2017-06-25 21:47 Trynna: isso é um sistema implementado meio do nada
2017-06-25 21:47 Net0: cegamente não cara
2017-06-25 21:47 Net0: eu falei ali em cima que to ligado no undermap
2017-06-25 21:48 Trynna: ikr
2017-06-25 21:48 Net0: é como eu falei, essa parte da música é única
2017-06-25 21:48 Net0: não existe esse vocal distorcido dessa forma em nenhum outro momento
2017-06-25 21:49 Net0: eu optei por fazer a pattern única também
2017-06-25 21:49 Net0: eu meio que adiantei sliders mais retos e tortos aqui
2017-06-25 21:49 Net0: 00:19:755 - ~ 00:22:552 -
2017-06-25 21:49 Trynna: os shapes não importam tanto, eles tão bem lol
2017-06-25 21:49 Net0: mas não quis distorcer demais pra não exagerar
2017-06-25 21:51 Trynna: esse flow 00:32:975 (5,6) - ficou meio estranho, seria preferível algo como 00:34:500 (5,6) -, já que seu movimento implica num vai e vem
2017-06-25 21:52 Net0: mas do jeito que está é um zigue-zage
2017-06-25 21:52 Trynna: não joga como um nem de perto
2017-06-25 21:53 Trynna: é provável que o player não chegue nem na metade do slider
2017-06-25 21:53 Net0: mas se não jogar como um vc perde o combo lol
2017-06-25 21:53 Trynna: não, ele é bem ok pra ficar na head
2017-06-25 21:53 Trynna: se você por exemplo der ctrl g aqui 00:33:230 (6,7) - aí sim o jogador vai "jogar como deveria"
2017-06-25 21:54 Trynna: caso contrário o movimento é bem z
2017-06-25 21:55 Net0: vai ficar linear no ctrol+g
2017-06-25 21:55 Net0: a conexão dos dois circles com o próximo slider
2017-06-25 21:55 Net0: e não vai dar a quebra de sentido
2017-06-25 21:55 Net0: tipo sério pode até não parecer mas é zigue zague
2017-06-25 21:56 Net0: coloca em 0,25 e dá play https://youtu.be/LE4I74Fzv9o?t=34
2017-06-25 21:56 Net0: o King jogou do jeito do jeito certinho que é pra ser o pattern
2017-06-25 21:56 Net0: eu abusei bastante da lenicency aqui 00:32:975 (5) -
2017-06-25 21:57 Net0: mas isso é o tema do mapa
2017-06-25 21:57 Net0: faz "parte" das ideias centrais pelo menos
2017-06-25 21:58 Trynna: 00:43:653 (8,9,10) - talvez seria legal quebrar um pouco da pattern anterior 00:42:891 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2017-06-25 21:58 Trynna: como feito em 00:42:255 (9,10) - por exemplo
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: SIM
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: eu concordo
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: eu tentei várias coisas
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: e todas eu achei merda
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: por isso tá assim ainda
2017-06-25 21:58 Net0: tanto é que o hitsound desses 3 tá mais intenso
2017-06-25 21:59 Net0: :'(
2017-06-25 21:59 Net0: oq vc sugere?
2017-06-25 21:59 Trynna: você pode só rotacionar um pouco e descolar, já vai dar um efeito melhor eu acho
2017-06-25 22:00 Net0: descolar vc fala o spacing aqui
2017-06-25 22:00 Net0: 00:43:526 (7,8) -
2017-06-25 22:00 Net0: ?
2017-06-25 22:00 Trynna: sim sim
2017-06-25 22:00 Net0: separar esses dois e rotacionar 00:43:653 (8,9,10) -
2017-06-25 22:00 Trynna: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8439697 algo do tipo]
2017-06-25 22:02 Trynna: 00:47:848 (4,5) - trocar eles de lugar não seria muito melhor? isso intensifica muito o vocal em 00:47:975 - que começa uma espécie de grito
2017-06-25 22:02 Net0: fiz
2017-06-25 22:02 Net0: a mudança :)
2017-06-25 22:03 Net0: trocar eles de lugar com relação a posição?
2017-06-25 22:03 Net0: ou ritmo?
2017-06-25 22:03 Trynna: timeline only
2017-06-25 22:03 Net0: okay eu mudei
2017-06-25 22:03 Net0: flow ficou no mínimo curioso agora
2017-06-25 22:03 Net0: xD
2017-06-25 22:04 Trynna: você pode ajustar, é que eu só tava falando do ritmo no caso
2017-06-25 22:04 Trynna: GIUAEHGIUAEHULGE
2017-06-25 22:04 Net0: kkkkk
2017-06-25 22:04 Net0: só confere aqui pra mim o ritmo
2017-06-25 22:04 Net0: pera uma hora o puush vai
2017-06-25 22:04 Net0: https://puu.sh/wujnU.jpg
2017-06-25 22:04 Trynna: 00:54:840 (1) - aw única parte da section que não usa curvas
2017-06-25 22:05 Trynna: sim sim isso mesmo
2017-06-25 22:05 Net0: eu queria fazer flow linear
2017-06-25 22:05 Net0: 00:54:840 (1,2,3) -
2017-06-25 22:05 Net0: sem quebrar demais a estética
2017-06-25 22:05 Net0: acho que foi por isso
2017-06-25 22:05 Net0: ou então era pra conectar com o circulo central
2017-06-25 22:06 Net0: ficou muito weird?
2017-06-25 22:06 Trynna: um tanto, prejudicou a estética que foi dada a seção
2017-06-25 22:07 Trynna: 00:57:001 (1) - a
2017-06-25 22:09 Net0: eu forço um blanket com 00:53:569 (2) -
2017-06-25 22:09 Net0: ?
2017-06-25 22:09 Net0: essa era a minha ideia inicial
2017-06-25 22:10 Trynna: mas por que nessa nota tho?
2017-06-25 22:10 Trynna: não faz tanto sentido, a nota que supostamente deveria receber ênfase é 00:57:128 (2) -
2017-06-25 22:11 Trynna: 00:58:908 (1,1) - durante sua diff todos os teus blankets foram beeem espaçados, creio que fazer o mesmo aqui contribuiria um tanto pra sua estética
2017-06-25 22:14 Net0: para a consistência da estética concordo, mas fazer ele colado valoriza a inconsistência da seção de transição pra dar contraste com o kiai
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: btw a respeito disso aqui 00:57:128 (2) -
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: eu concordo contigo
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: eu to pensando em fazer esse objeto
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: 00:57:001 (1) -
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: vir para aqui 00:57:128 -
2017-06-25 22:15 Net0: pera
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: sim tá certo é isso mesmo
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: daí eu faço um stack aqui
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: 00:56:874 (5) - com 2 objetos 1/2
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: deleto esse 00:57:764 (7) -
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: e dou fix no pattern
2017-06-25 22:16 Net0: o que acha?
2017-06-25 22:17 Trynna: deve funcionar
2017-06-25 22:19 Trynna: no mais é isso
2017-06-25 22:21 Net0: beleza
2017-06-25 22:22 Net0: valeu
2017-06-25 22:22 Net0: post lá pra pegar os doces

modding 1 diff is unfair
Mini Gaunt
From my queue
This is a little difficult to mod xd I don't usually see bpm higher than 210
00:06:789 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - As the ranking criteria says, avoid slider only sections. Maybe add in a couple circles during this
00:32:975 (2,3) - Fix distance snap
Overall Difficulty should be between 5 and 7.
00:35:771 (3) - This object's end isnt snapped
01:19:754 (6) - ^ Same here
00:40:601 (4) - This object isnt snapped
01:18:484 (4,1) - Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing. Spacing variation through jumps on points of emphasis are encouraged, but only if these jumps are recognizably different from 1/1 gaps.
Looks good!
01:13:145 (1,2,3,4) - This is awkward to play
00:13:908 (1,2) - I don't think this spacing fits at all
00:15:687 (3,1) - At least make this 1/4 gap overlap or stack, as it is this is a little too large a gap for 1/4 236bpm after the previous 1/4 gaps were stacked
00:16:959 (1,2) - I don't think this spacing fits either. To explain, both times the sounds are mostly the same as they were earlier in the map but both times the spacing jumps a lot. There is no reason for it to be that large spacing compared to the other parts of the same music.
00:33:357 (6,1,2,3) - Bad flow, I realize it represents the music, but it needs to be somewhat playable
01:21:535 (1) - You gotta put a warning in the beatmap desc if you want to use a really slow slider right after how fast the mapping gets.
00:02:213 (7) - NC

Very well done diff Ill give a kudosu just for that

Good luck with the mapset!
Topic Starter
Net0

Mini Gaunt wrote:

From my queue
This is a little difficult to mod xd I don't usually see bpm higher than 210
00:06:789 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - As the ranking criteria says, avoid slider only sections. Maybe add in a couple circles during this
00:32:975 (2,3) - Fix distance snap
Overall Difficulty should be between 5 and 7.
00:35:771 (3) - This object's end isnt snapped
01:19:754 (6) - ^ Same here
00:40:601 (4) - This object isnt snapped
01:18:484 (4,1) - Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing. Spacing variation through jumps on points of emphasis are encouraged, but only if these jumps are recognizably different from 1/1 gaps.
Looks good!
00:02:213 (7) - NC

Very well done diff Ill give a kudosu just for that

Good luck with the mapset!
I'll reply in this post as soon as I can update the map, I'm not home yet, but I'll change some stuff mentioned so that's why I already kudosu :3
-AsrieLx-
Wuwuwuw. On Kegare, try not to stack so many notes ;v; I broke my combo in a total of 12 times Kmn. This is my own opinion, so you don't have to do it.

Good Luck! :)
Shunao
hello!

  • general
  1. remove widecreen in all diffs
  2. combo color 1 is too similar as combo color 2 (grey) can you change on of them to make pattern more attractive and readable
  • normal
  1. 00:03:738 (5) - nc for increase of the music
  2. 00:09:839 (1) - maybe in the other way for a better fluidity (flow) https://puu.sh/wvW0V/6f3362e6f9.jpg
  3. 00:44:162 (2,1) - stack should be better imo
  4. 00:49:247 (4) - should be like this for follow notes better https://puu.sh/wvWaR/361acc2f59.jpg
  • advanced
  1. 00:31:450 (5) - touch the drain bar http://i.imgur.com/U1egCKg.jpg?1
  2. 00:36:535 (1,2) - should be better for consistency to overlap them (follow the vocals) like you did before http://i.imgur.com/qAsZSZ0.jpg?1
  • collab hard
  1. 00:13:654 (1) - and 00:15:179 (1) - remove nc for consistence with 00:06:789 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:08:315 (1,2,3,4)
  2. 00:48:738 (7) - and 00:51:789 (7) - nc for vocals
  3. 00:40:601 (4,5) - maybe stack them it's more readable
  4. 00:47:213 (1) - why 2nd kiai part is similar to the 1st kiai time? you can make a better appearance for to make the map funny to play
  5. 00:48:738 (7) - and 00:51:789 (7) - nc for vocals
  6. 00:57:128 (2,5) - stack them, overlap doesn't look good
  7. 01:05:009 (7,8) - don't do this :o make same spacing as 01:06:027 (2,3)
  • collab light insane
  1. 00:05:264 (1) - inconsistent nc, suggest to add nc here 00:02:213 (5) - or remove nc 00:05:264 (1)
  2. 00:33:484 (7) - 00:36:535 (6) - and 00:39:586 (7) - nc?
  3. 00:45:687 (2) - ^
  4. 00:47:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can remove 2 sldiers 1/2 and replace them by some notes for make it more difficult because this is kiai part
  5. 00:50:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:56:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 01:04:755 (1,2,3) - unstack them and try something like this (3 is stack on 1) https://puu.sh/wvXxD/1902b6601b.jpg
  7. 01:07:806 (4,5,6) - ^ (try something else)
  8. 01:10:857 (1,2,3,4) - remove nc for consistency with 01:07:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  9. 01:20:264 (1) - remove nc, no reason to put it


gl!
LwL

Mini Gaunt wrote:

01:13:145 (1,2,3,4) - This is awkward to play made the angles a little nicer, should play better now. Thanks!
Also fixed some hitsound stuff I overlooked.

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199,293,50264,6,0,P|214:229|273:180,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,365,50518,2,0,P|191:384|119:357,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,191,50772,2,0,P|200:171|272:198,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,283,51026,2,0,P|48:238|35:162,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,84,51281,2,0,P|241:126|257:186,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,180,51535,2,0,P|45:118|89:74,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,297,51789,6,0,P|327:271|333:114,1,251.999992309571
194,84,52170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,265,52297,2,0,P|90:289|19:259,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,94,52552,2,0,P|144:70|215:100,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,59,52933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,287,53187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,159,53314,6,0,B|358:108|358:108|280:19,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,94,53569,2,0,B|80:145|80:145|158:234,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,211,53823,2,0,B|359:160|359:160|281:71,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,146,54078,2,0,B|81:197|81:197|159:286,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,263,54331,2,0,B|360:212|360:212|282:123,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,253,54586,2,0,B|176:275|176:275|292:251,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,18,54840,6,0,P|268:12|172:146,1,251.999992309571
249,260,55221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,96,55348,2,0,P|445:90|506:137,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,280,55603,2,0,P|293:285|232:238,2,125.999996154785,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,185,55984,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,53,56111,2,0,P|210:47|149:94,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,56365,6,0,P|311:241|301:164,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,208,56620,2,0,P|74:266|84:343,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,162,56874,2,0,P|210:98|139:68,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,286,57128,2,0,P|210:349|281:379,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,238,57382,2,0,P|346:233|284:280,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,330,57636,2,0,L|521:256,2,62.9999980773926,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,259,57891,5,4,0:0:0:0:
221,4,58145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,64,58399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,259,58653,1,4,0:0:0:0:
300,259,58908,6,0,P|231:201|156:200,1,135
143,200,59162,2,2,P|159:111|123:45,1,135,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,81,59416,2,0,P|275:84|397:61,1,180
121,0,59925,2,0,P|75:43|75:98,1,90
146,212,60179,6,0,P|112:283|54:207,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,155,60687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,350,60942,2,0,P|466:276|507:159,1,180
267,327,61450,2,0,P|203:338|157:304,1,90
205,179,61704,6,0,P|239:108|297:184,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,214,62213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,17,62467,6,0,P|226:7|383:43,1,180
351,26,62848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,137,62975,2,0,P|303:135|265:101,1,90
176,17,63230,2,0,P|118:60|58:167,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,308,63738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,50,63992,6,0,P|473:130|436:245,1,180
381,260,64374,2,0,P|372:204|404:153,1,90
452,220,64628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,301,64755,2,0,P|407:336|346:334,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,65009,6,0,P|244:237|196:170,1,135
244,174,65264,2,0,P|255:116|221:40,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,73,65518,2,0,P|120:84|16:59,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,10,66026,2,0,P|326:55|333:108,1,90
208,197,66281,6,0,P|242:268|300:192,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,155,66789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,363,67043,2,0,P|251:378|359:350,1,180
256,101,67552,2,0,P|211:94|138:113,1,90
239,234,67806,6,0,P|303:280|337:209,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,270,68314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,358,68569,6,0,P|403:331|456:218,1,180
453,249,68950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,140,69077,2,0,P|352:172|328:240,1,90
216,336,69331,2,0,P|168:296|132:176,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,9,69840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,257,70094,6,0,P|341:285|226:248,1,180
211,193,70476,2,0,P|267:184|318:216,1,90
251,264,70730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,263,70857,6,0,P|135:219|137:158,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,53,71111,2,0,P|257:97|255:158,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,108,71365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
133,24,71492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,53,71620,6,0,B|311:62|380:47|380:47|416:52|455:90,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,70,72001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,196,72128,2,0,P|329:178|297:124,1,107.999996704102
453,152,72382,2,0,P|464:207|321:250,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,267,72764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,139,72891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
57,257,73145,6,0,P|96:302|267:340,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,346,73526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,267,73653,2,0,P|376:312|371:374,1,107.999996704102
256,253,73908,2,0,P|228:164|95:115,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,112,74289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,248,74416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,42,74670,6,0,P|363:51|494:115,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,109,75052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,233,75179,2,0,P|355:192|335:122,1,107.999996704102
500,210,75433,2,0,P|493:279|365:328,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,329,75814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,215,75942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,112,76196,6,0,P|30:189|97:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,319,76577,2,0,P|179:274|132:228,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,304,76831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,319,76958,2,0,P|219:293|235:230,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,77213,6,0,P|161:82|224:66,1,107.999996704102
348,143,77467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,304,77721,6,0,P|35:217|21:107,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,111,78103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,127,78230,2,0,P|171:187|106:247,1,107.999996704102
99,51,78484,2,0,P|168:24|274:132,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,103,78865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,225,78992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,328,79247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
370,241,79374,2,0,P|336:281|333:363,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,334,79628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,237,79755,2,0,P|452:187|382:143,1,107.999996704102
260,155,80009,2,0,P|264:102|401:2,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,2,80391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,152,80518,1,8,0:0:0:0:
93,31,80772,6,0,P|66:101|130:263,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,354,81281,2,0,P|445:284|381:122,1,215.999993408203,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,155,82043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
191,336,82297,5,0,0:0:0:0:
111,236,82425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,105,82552,2,0,P|270:149|284:233,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,236,82806,2,0,P|70:192|56:108,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,26,83060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,149,83187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,26,83314,2,0,L|159:179,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,59,83569,2,0,L|337:212,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
CyberX
00:13:654 (5,6,7,1) - avoid overlap like this (this apply to the rest of the map)
00:22:806 (1,1) - distance them a bit further, and avoid using to many unnecessary red anchor, they are ugly
00:27:763 (2) - Ctrl+g for better spacing
00:43:526 (7,8) - weird spacing
00:47:594 (2,3,4) - over-mapped
00:56:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - be a bit consistent with your slider, this is over-mapped, and doesn't have a good flow
01:00:687 (6) - Ctrl+g
01:01:577 (3) - looks boring, do a curve
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