[Easy]
00:04:763 (4763|1,4763|3,5168|2,5574|0,5979|1) - I rather use the chord 00:04:763 (4763|1,4763|3) - on |2|3| . So rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839732100:20:662 (20662|0,20955|1,21248|0,21540|1) - I prefer this arrange instead for better rest:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839736200:21:979 (21979|2,22272|1) - I rather replace these Longnotes for Notes and/or arrange like this (If you apply above):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839738400:27:101 (27101|3,27101|0,27394|1,27687|2) - I think you can follow the whistles in this part of the music using roll patterns or alternation. In this case, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839742900:28:565 (28565|1,28857|3,29150|2) - Same reason as above, here like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839743800:29:735 (29735|3,30028|2,30321|1,30614|0,30614|2,30906|1,31199|3,31492|2,31784|0,31784|3) - Here following the vocal, i think is better rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839745500:31:784 (31784|0,31784|3,32077|2,32370|1,32662|0,32955|3,32955|1) - Again here for the whistles, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839747300:33:248 (33248|2,33540|0,33833|1,34126|3,34126|2) - Same reason as above:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839749700:35:589 (35589|2,35882|0,36175|1,36467|3,36467|0) - I prefer rearrange like this here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839751300:38:223 (38223|2) - It will fit more on |3| for whistle. Move to |3|.
00:38:809 (38809|2,38809|0,39101|1,39394|3,39687|2) - For vocal again, i rather try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839754700:39:979 (39979|0,39979|1,40272|3,40565|1,40857|2,41150|3,41150|0) - Again as above, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839756200:41:443 (41443|1) - If you apply above, move this to |0|. More spaced for whistle.
00:42:906 (42906|1) - Move to |0|. More spaced for whistle too.
00:43:492 (43492|1,43492|3,43784|2,44077|0,44370|1) - I hear cymbals for those single notes as well, but maybe can be harder. So try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839759800:46:418 (46418|3,46711|0,46711|2,47003|1,47296|2,47589|3,47589|0,47881|2,48174|0,48467|3,48467|1,48759|2,49052|1,49345|3,49345|0) - Is more clear to follow the whistles like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397620 00:49:930 (49930|2,50223|0,50223|3,50515|1,50808|3,51101|2,51101|0,51393|1,51686|2,51979|3,51979|0,52272|1,52564|1,52857|2,52857|0) - I think those drums and whistles are better represented like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839766600:53:149 (53149|3) - Move to |2| if you apply above.
00:57:539 - I rather add those notes for vocals until the Longnote, roll pattern and alternation, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839770900:59:881 (59881|2) - This Longnote should end on 01:01:502 for synth. If you apply above, it will look like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839773001:06:334 (66334|3,66535|0,66938|1,67340|2,67743|1,67944|3,67944|0) - It will fit better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839774501:13:985 (73985|0,74790|0,75193|2,75595|1,75998|0,75998|3,76401|1,76804|2,77206|3,77609|2,77609|0,78012|1,78414|3,78817|2) - That note after the Longnote end can be placed on |1| instead, after that can be rearranged to fit better with the vocal. Like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839776601:25:663 (85663|3,85663|2,86065|1,86065|0,86468|2,86468|3) - The last chord can be like this in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839778201:27:273 (87273|2,87273|3,87676|2,87676|1,88079|1,88079|0,88481|3) - That Longnote have the tail snapped in 1/4, i rather change that. Use 1/2 or 1/1 instead (or more simple, use a note). In my opinion, rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397814 <- Fun/Surprise factor? (After the crash sound on 01:26:468 , you think that the song ends... but not. lol)
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By the way, take care of Storyboard Hitsounds, in my opinion they are good when there are notes to be pressed, not in this case:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397881 <- Easy difficulty (both.) The highlighted SB Hitsounds are played, but there isn't a note. This could be confusing.
This issue is in the Normal diff. too:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398319 <- Normal diff. both. (I think that you are doing the Hitsound-Copy-Process so i notify you instead of the GD.)
In Hard as well:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399114Insane:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399212 But much less because of the amount of notes.
[Amii's Normal]
00:01:722 (1722|1,2026|1,2330|1,2634|1,2938|1) - I like the current arrange, the only thing is this stack. If you like try like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8397937 If not, leave like it is.
00:04:357 (4357|1) - I rather move this to |0| because: 00:03:344 (3344|1,3648|1,3952|1,4357|1,5168|1,5574|1).
00:12:871 (12871|1,13276|3) - I only hear those whistles. Looks odd that you use Longnotes when you before map the whistles with notes. I rather try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839800400:17:229 (17229|0) - I can hear the whistles for this. But you can try adding the note for that *cuack* sound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398046 or
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839805100:18:028 (18028|1,18321|1,18614|2,18906|3,18906|2,19199|3,19492|1,19784|1,20077|2,20370|2,20662|3,20955|3) - Intentional i suppose, i rather like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398067 <- Note that those stacks are |0|->|3|->|1|->|2|,|0|... instead of yours: |1|->|2|->|3|,|1|...
00:21:540 (21540|2,21540|0,21687|1,21687|3) - I think will be better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839808200:21:979 (21979|2,22126|3,22272|1,22418|3,22418|0,22711|1) - I rather try like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398101 00:23:589 (23589|3,23589|2,23735|1,23882|2,24028|1,24175|0,24321|1,24321|3,24467|2,24614|0,24760|1,24760|3) - If you apply above, to the right:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839812100:24:760 (24760|3,24760|1,24906|2,25053|3,25199|0,25345|2,25492|0,25492|1,25638|3,25784|2,25931|1,25931|0) - Again, here i rearrange different:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839814200:29:150 (29150|1) - So, this part is vocal focused. This note for whistle i think fits better on |0|.
00:40:857 (40857|3) - Hm... in |0| doesn't fit better?
00:47:589 (47589|3,47881|2,48174|0,48467|3,48759|1,49052|2,49345|0) - I rather try roll pattern for the whistles here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839820400:49:637 (49637|3,49930|2,50223|1,50515|2) - For the drums, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839821400:57:539 (57539|2,58417|0,58710|3,59296|2,59588|0,59881|1) - Hmmm. To be honest, simple notes would do a better work at following the vocals:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398248 The last three notes are for that Ta-ta-ta vocal, i think is better adding them.
01:24:857 (84857|0,85059|3,85260|2,85260|1) - "And the other way?":
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398277 <- The "trill" in the opposite side.
01:25:663 (85663|0,85663|3,86065|0,86065|2,86468|1,86468|3) - The last chord here is different in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839829301:27:273 (87273|3,87273|0,87676|3,87676|1,88079|0,88079|2,88481|3) - Only chord here? I rather do this for drums:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398302 (...also for fun xD)
[Hard]
00:01:520 - Those doublejacks... for a hard? I don't know honestly, if you still want to use some jacks maybe reduce the amount the notes like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398805 - Or this if you want density (but not jacks):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398816 00:10:641 (10641|2,10742|1,10844|0,10911|1,10979|3,11047|2,11148|1,11249|3,11249|0,11249|2,11351|1,11452|2,11553|3,11655|2,11655|0) - I rather rearrange that staircase, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839885900:17:330 (17330|2,17533|1) - I think is better represented like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839887400:18:175 - I think you can arrange better this part, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398913 and
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398916 <- Note the stack order: |1|->|3|->|0|->|2|,|1|...
00:21:979 (21979|0,22053|1,22126|2,22272|3,22345|2,22418|3,22418|0,22418|1) - Only stairs? Why not trills/alternation?:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839892400:26:370 (26370|2) - I rather move this to |1|, for cymbal sounds different.
From 00:45:833 to 00:52:857 - This part seems somewhat inconsistent, i think you need do hand (triple) for snares and chord for kicks. Try this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398976 and
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839897700:57:100 (57100|1) - I think this too is a whistle, that needs 1/4 Longnote.
00:57:539 (57539|0,58125|1,58417|2,58710|3,59296|0,59588|1) - You are following the vocal and some whistles here? Seems odd, try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8398998 <- Last three chords for the vocals, also the Longnote ends early.
01:13:985 (73985|1,73985|0,74085|2,74085|3,74186|0,74186|1,74287|2,74387|1,74387|0,74387|3) - By the way, i think this stream is 1/6. If you hear closely 01:14:186 - is very clear that is faster than 1/4. Try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839901001:15:797 (75797|1,75897|1) - Ok. But why not on 00:06:182 , 00:07:803 or 01:17:408 too? Also, i think is for variety (Is that? *Thinking*) but this part is different to 00:04:763 when you decide to put chords for vocals and skip the drums...
01:20:226 (80226|1,80327|2,80428|3,80495|2,80562|1,80629|0,80730|1,80830|2,80830|0,80830|3,80931|1,81032|2,81132|3,81233|0,81233|1,81334|2,81434|1,81535|0,81636|1,81636|3) - Like before for that staircase, rearrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399041 01:27:273 (87273|0,87273|1,87273|2,87676|0,87676|3,87676|2,88079|0,88079|1,88079|3,88481|2) - I rather change like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399058 More consistent with the drums.
[Amii's Insane]
00:06:790 (6790|1,6790|2,6891|0,6891|3,6992|0,6992|2,6992|1) - I think you already used that column before: 00:05:269 (5269|0,5371|0) for jack, try like this now:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399125 00:17:330 (17330|1,17533|3) - Try this instead fits more in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399078 00:47:589 (47589|1,47589|3,47662|2,47735|0,47808|1,47881|3,47954|2,48028|0,48101|1,48174|0,48174|2,48174|3,48247|1,48320|3,48393|2,48467|0,48467|1,48540|2,48613|3,48686|2,48759|1,48833|0,48906|1,48979|2,49052|0,49052|1,49052|3,49125|2,49198|0,49272|1,49345|3,49345|2) - Roll instead of that staircase, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399089 <- Fits very well in my opinion.
00:49:637 (49637|1) - Move to |3| if you apply above.
00:50:515 (50515|3) - Move to |0| if you like. (Because that stack part on 00:51:101)
00:53:003 (53003|2,53149|3,53149|2,53296|3) - I think it can be rearranged better...
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839910200:55:783 (55783|0) - No 1/2 Longnote?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839910500:57:539 (57539|0,57832|2,57978|3,58417|1,58710|2,59296|0,59588|1,59881|0,59881|3,60083|2,60286|0,60489|1,60691|2,60894|0,61097|1,61299|2) - I already explain this on Normal... Maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399142 The three last chords again for that vocal.
01:07:743 (67743|0,67743|1,67743|3,67944|0,67944|1) - This one in particular maybe is an issue, because isn't consistent like the others. You can try:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399157 with 1/4 Longnotes ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399159 all 1/2 Longnotes but you lose extra notes... Or this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399165 :3
01:08:146 (68146|3,68347|3,68548|3) - If you apply above (last option in particular),
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399169 01:13:985 (73985|2,73985|3,74085|0,74085|1,74186|2,74186|3,74287|1,74287|0,74387|0,74387|3,74387|2) - I think here is 1/6, if you hear closely at 01:14:186 - is very clear. Try like this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399176 or
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839917801:20:226 (80226|1,80327|2,80428|3,80495|2,80562|1,80629|0,80730|2) - This part is like: 00:10:641 (10641|3,10742|0,10844|2,10844|3,10911|1,10979|0,11047|1,11148|3) - So try to do this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/839918701:26:468 - Add a note on |2|. (Quad)
01:27:273 (87273|0,87273|2,87273|3,87475|1,87575|2,87676|0,87676|3,87676|1,87777|2,87877|0,88079|2,88079|1,88079|3,88481|0) - I think you know what i thinking in this part:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8399199 :3