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The fabled mod
[ General]
[ easy.]
[ myself.]
Good Luck!~ If you need any help, you know where to find me
The fabled mod
[ General]
- add "lo-fi" to tags
- Using the drum sampleset for the beats in the map is pretty unpractical, so here is a hitsound that better fits the drums in the song . Make sure to rename should you need too.
[ easy.]
- 00:05:980 (1,2) - Not a fan of this angle. The synth is really mellow so having such a snappy movement from the get go is a bit sudden. A possible suggestion would be to ctrl H and ctrl G 00:07:443 (2) - and reposition to x:295|y:88 . since this kinda screws over your DS consistency I'm going to tie this over with my next suggestion. 00:08:906 (3) - Turn this into 2 1/1 sliders to better emphasize the synth that pretty prominent in both ticks ( not having one clickable is a bit offputting ) and turn this into 00:10:370 (4,5) - a 1/1 slider to better emphasize the vocal hold thats apparent here. Kinda what you did here 00:20:614 (3,4,5) -
- 00:14:760 (3,4,5) - the synth is a bit tamer here so 2 1/1 sliders arranged in this manner, with ticker starting on 00:14:760 - would better represent this synth, since having a sliderend on this tick 00:16:223 - is not recommended, cause of the prominent vocal
- 00:30:858 (2,3) - Could be expressed better visually, maybe with a direct blanket of (2) to (3), will also help the pathing
- 00:35:248 (1,2) - Symmetry could work wonders here, having a consistent sound be so differentiated in terms of slider shaping is a bit questionable
- 00:39:638 - Also try to make this clickable, as the synth is pretty strong, and for consistency with previous measures
- 00:46:955 (1,2) - A bit of symmetry here could have sufficed
- Generally the rhythm is simple as expected of an easy diff. I always refrain from pointing out aesthetics but some simple practices like symmetry will do the trick just nicely for this diff. Due to the sheer BPM and note density, having a visually appealing map would go a long way to leaving a good impression to the one playing it
[ myself.]
- 00:13:114 (2) - Should have been a drum sampleset to be consistent with the other notes you use the drum sampleset on ( Should you use the hitsound i gave you, then a whistle is missing here )
- 00:11:833 (1) - Pretty subjective, but I am against the idea of sharp shapes in mellow songs. The feel the slider eminates doesnt really compliment the song, which is pretty mellow in its own right. Thus, try going for a curve, and also try to tie it together with the following pattern as the current one utilizes a rather sharp angle
- 00:19:150 (3) - Similar point here ^ . Could have been so much more if it was utilized as a wave slider
- 00:20:614 (4) - Missing Drum sampleset ( Whistle )
- 00:22:077 (7,8) - Vocal hold pretty prominent here, a 1/1 slider would express it better. Also its the only instance thus far that a 1/1 clickable gap between circles has been used
- 00:23:540 (1) - Optional Suggestion; make the curves of this slider a bit less sharp. It feels like it was stretched more than needed
- 00:29:394 (1) - Similar point here ^
- 00:33:053 (5) - I would go for the pattern consistency here, not only for the actual consistency, but mainly for the fact that the rhythm utilized in this way 00:27:199 (5,6,7) - for example is more interesting
- 00:42:382 (2) - Wrong sampleset used ( aka add whistle )
- 00:45:492 (7,1) - How about making these symmetrical, pretty easy without ruining DS and will give that added aesthetic touch
- 00:52:809 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical, it really shows that they arent and ruins the whole idea of the pattern for me ( i know im dumb )
- 00:58:662 (1) - I dont think 2 points only can express the gradual descrease of the volume , i would add maybe another one for 15% . Or you could bump the base volume to 25% and add 4 points with a 5% volume decrease per point
Good Luck!~ If you need any help, you know where to find me