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don't kudosu, btw
hey

[general.]
  1. finland and helsinki are hardly a good tag to describe the song itself. Let's just remove them, perhaps.


[easy.]
  1. 00:14:760 (3) - this would feel better as two circles to stress the piano beats. it would match with the rhythm you follow better.
  2. 00:32:321 (3,4,5) - the back and forth movement with the stack is uncommon or a relaxing and simple difficulties. besides, it stands out in a way that makes it feel somewhat unintentional. can we avoid the stack somehow?

    i see that you don't exactly intend to have perfect visuals, but there is literally no connection between 00:11:833 (1,2) - or 00:17:687 (1,2) - or at least not that I can see/understand clearly. oh, and 00:49:882 (3) - this one overlaps with the score-metre thingy, so it can be placed a little higher. probably you could focus more on that, since the rest is ok


[myself.]
  1. 00:10:370 (7,1) - are these different on purpose? looks like you were trying to show the same style of sliders, but decided not to copypaste it for some reason
  2. 00:19:150 (3,4) - they seem to follow the same instrument, why not make them parallel?
  3. 00:22:809 (8,1) - the overlap on its own is good, but it feels sort of out of context as this is the only one of a kind in the difficulty.


;et's just work a bit more on the visuals and give it a try.
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Bakari wrote:

don't kudosu, btw
hey

[general.]
  1. finland and helsinki are hardly a good tag to describe the song itself. Let's just remove them, perhaps. tomppabeats is an artist from finland. technically you can put this under "finnish" music.though i will remove helsinki, i agree it's a bit misleading.
    I know you shouldn't use other maps as justification, but this map does the same incase you really disagree with me keeping finland in the tags. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/552732


[easy.]
  1. 00:14:760 (3) - this would feel better as two circles to stress the piano beats. it would match with the rhythm you follow better. yea,
    i do use 2 circles and 2/1 reverse sliders for variation, but this seems a bit off, fixed.
  2. 00:32:321 (3,4,5) - the back and forth movement with the stack is uncommon or a relaxing and simple difficulties. besides, it stands out in a way that makes it feel somewhat unintentional. can we avoid the stack somehow? i went for a simpler approach

    i see that you don't exactly intend to have perfect visuals, but there is literally no connection between 00:11:833 (1,2) - or 00:17:687 (1,2) - or at least not that I can see/understand clearly. oh, and 00:49:882 (3) - this one overlaps with the score-metre thingy, so it can be placed a little higher. probably you could focus more on that, since the rest is okI decided to fix the 2nd optionthough i think the first one is fine,
    it's mainly a different type of flow and are the same slider. making everything symmetrical is not what i intend to do.
    also the score-metre one was fixed


[myself.]
  1. 00:10:370 (7,1) - are these different on purpose? looks like you were trying to show the same style of sliders, but decided not to copypaste it for some reason 7 is expressing a vocal, and 1 is expressing..whatever that instrument is. I decided 7 should be smoother to better express the vocal ,and 1 should be more curved.
  2. 00:19:150 (3,4) - they seem to follow the same instrument, why not make them parallel? p much same concern expressed by oko,
    fixed
  3. 00:22:809 (8,1) - the overlap on its own is good, but it feels sort of out of context as this is the only one of a kind in the difficulty. this was a concern in oko's mod, fixed


;et's just work a bit more on the visuals and give it a try.
also, @oko after playing around with a few hitsounds to try and match the piano, i decided not to go through with your suggestion due to the fact that I feel that it would take away from the "mellow" type of tone from the song, and the drum samples do a good job at that.

should be good to go
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The BG is way heavier than the mp3 itself. Also, the hitsound file has a slight delay.

https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/vvv4L5aT.zip here's a quick fix in case you need it
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thanks for the trojans
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tune in next time, we'll be sending aids.exe

bubbled
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sorry, let's fix metadata real quick

https://tomppabeats.bandcamp.com/track/ ... ne-in-love
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maybe also set the preview point to something that isn't looping the last 10 seconds into a fadeout in song select

while you're at it and stuff
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this is not kpop, oko
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Based on the tags for the map, seems like skrub took the metadata from the tyttö ep, where the song title is not capitalized https://tomppabeats.bandcamp.com/album/tytt-ep
https://tomppabeats.bandcamp.com/track/like-someone-in-love-2

So since it appears with both capitalized and uncapitalized, either are okay. But since the song appears in the Harbor lp that should probably be added in the tags
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we figured that out, so that's cool. my apologies for being rather quick with popping it. but yeah, consider the stuff Oko mentioned and we'll roll the bubble back
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everything seems to be sorted out, here's your bubble back

rebubbled
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go go go :D
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as requested

hitsounding
00:09:638 (5) - 00:15:492 (5) - 00:21:345 (5) - etc. spots like these would be great with whistles for melody like before imo, no problem stacking whistle+clap
00:56:467 - volume decrease should start from here
01:01:589 - i'd remove hs from spinnerend cause you can't really hear the song anyways and even 5% seems to loud

rsz_by_myself_waifu2x_art_scale_tta_1 (1).jpg
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/foSA0UFT.jpg wouldve been nice to see some better playfield usage, as the map is noticeable center heavy, most of your patterns go just back there all the time :c
00:19:150 (3,4,5,6,7) - this looks so out of place with all your other patterns, the perfectly horizontal stuff and all
00:56:467 (5,6,7) - would gradually lower sv cause song is fading out

"better playfield usage than top diff" diff
seems to lack some 1/2 rhythms with top diff using so many 1/4s, but the song is kinda lol for these so I guess it's alright
00:13:297 (2) - would flip and rotate a bit more nicer visual movement for beginners
00:20:614 - 15% ds difference is quite noticeable and looks really off
00:22:077 - similar to ^ // 00:35:248 (1) - not even top diff uses ds changes to :eyes:
00:25:004 (2) - why does this have to be so unnatural movement wise, could just http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9yieuHkd.jpg


should be fine after that
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Lasse wrote:

as requested

hitsounding
00:09:638 (5) - 00:15:492 (5) - 00:21:345 (5) - etc. spots like these would be great with whistles for melody like before imo, no problem stacking whistle+clap ur write.
00:56:467 - volume decrease should start from here hecK
01:01:589 - i'd remove hs from spinnerend cause you can't really hear the song anyways and even 5% seems to loud i guess

rsz_by_myself_waifu2x_art_scale_tta_1 (1).jpg this really triggered me so i legit changed the name of the file
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/foSA0UFT.jpg wouldve been nice to see some better playfield usage, as the map is noticeable center heavy, most of your patterns go just back there all the time :c :((
00:19:150 (3,4,5,6,7) - this looks so out of place with all your other patterns, the perfectly horizontal stuff and all tilted it a little bit
00:56:467 (5,6,7) - would gradually lower sv cause song is fading out i did 0.8x

"better playfield usage than top diff" diff
seems to lack some 1/2 rhythms with top diff using so many 1/4s, but the song is kinda lol for these so I guess it's alright i didn't use as much 1/2 rhythms due to the fact that the diffs would be too similar in sr and in general
00:13:297 (2) - would flip and rotate a bit more nicer visual movement for beginners i decided to ctrl + j the slider instead because i think it flows even better than what you suggested
00:20:614 - 15% ds difference is quite noticeable and looks really off i am retarded,
00:22:077 - similar to ^ // 00:35:248 (1) - not even top diff uses ds changes to :eyes: i prolly forgot to adjust ds on a previous mod LMAO
00:25:004 (2) - why does this have to be so unnatural movement wise, could just http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9yieuHkd.jpg fixed


should be fine after that
thank you lasse!
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qualified
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Congratulations Noah!!
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Today I Give My Congratulations To An Amazing Cutie. This Cutie Has Finally Managed To Get A Qualified Beatmap And I Couldn't Be More Proud Of Her. Here's To Many More Maps In The Qualified Section By You Owo
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Today I Give My Congratulations To An Amazing Cutie. This Cutie Has Finally Managed To Get A Qualified Beatmap And I Couldn't Be More Proud Of Her. Here's To Many More Maps In The Qualified Section By You Owo
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Today I Give My Congratulations To An Amazing Cutie. This Cutie Has Finally Managed To Get A Qualified Beatmap And I Couldn't Be More Proud Of Her. Here's To Many More Maps In The Qualified Section By You Owo
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