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Hareimu

611 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-08-19T23:28:05+00:00

mod

[Our Red Thread of Fate]

00:13:394 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - For some reason I felt that this whole section left the left side of the playfield empty, and now I see why. Not really a suggestion per se, just pointing that out, this section is fine mapping-wise.
00:46:924 (4,1) - hard dash D: (not really an edgedash, but still hard, maybe reduce distance a bit?)
00:54:688 (2) - Move to x:327 to properly emphasize 00:55:041 (3) - with a hdash
01:22:747 (3,4) - Move to x:306 and move 01:23:630 (5) - to x:395? Plays better and also emphasizes (5) correctly.
02:01:394 (3) - Don't know exactly why this one is 3/4 long other than to emphasize 02:01:747 (4) - with an hdash, thing that you can also do moving 02:01:747 (4) - to x:48 while keeping 02:01:394 (3) - as a 1/2 slider.
03:40:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels exactly like the beginning's first patterns. Maybe another layout of the sliders could work as well so that it doesn't feel copypasted.

There wasn't much other things I could find, it's really well crafted, gotta love rib! <3

Good luck!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-08-22T09:24:46+00:00

Literally a lazy modding.

Our Red Thread of Fate

00:08:806 (4) - Just to emphasize move this note to x:176
00:42:159 (3,4) - Kinda a tricky jump in my opinion. Move these notes to x:176
00:45:512 (6) - Ctrl+G (?). For emphasize also.
00:47:277 (1) - x:112. This (4) note behing isn't hyperdashed whitch is unrankable for osu!catch specifics maps.
00:50:983 (2) - Should be reduced to x:272
00:55:041 (3) - Unrankable again as in 00:47:277. You know what to do :>
01:04:394 (2) - Reduce the distance. It'll be some dangerous movement. x:176
01:12:159 (5) - I guess it's also a tricky part. x:240
01:16:394 (6) - Make slider like this to reduce the distance.
01:19:394 (4) - Reduce some distance. x:80
01:20:453 (3,4,5) - Same thing. Move all these notes to x:176
01:33:159 (3) - Again, x:176
01:51:865 (4) - x:72
01:54:159 (3) - x:272
02:55:394 (7) - Move this end slider to the left.
02:58:924 (2) - x:168

Can't find some points anymore so I'll finish here.

Sorry for this super long wait. I got very stressed out from modding. Good luck with ranking!

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-08-22T20:38:36+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
mod

mod

Our Red Thread of Fate
00:13:394 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4)- For some reason I felt that this whole section left the left side of the playfield empty, and now I see why. Not really a suggestion per se, just pointing that out, this section is fine mapping-wise. ( I'm aware but here isn't much I can do about it so rip ;-; )
00:46:924 (4,1)- hard dash D: (not really an edgedash, but still hard, maybe reduce distance a bit?) ( Reduced a pixel or two but otherwise it should be fine )
00:54:688 (2)- Move to x:327 to properly emphasize 00:55:041 (3)- with a hdash ( Done )
01:22:747 (3,4)- Move to x:306 and move 01:23:630 (5)- to x:395? Plays better and also emphasizes (5) correctly. ( Done )
02:01:394 (3)- Don't know exactly why this one is 3/4 long other than to emphasize 02:01:747 (4)- with an hdash, thing that you can also do moving 02:01:747 (4)- to x:48 while keeping 02:01:394 (3)- as a 1/2 slider. ( it was to emphasize the vocal but yours works too )
03:40:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- This feels exactly like the beginning's first patterns. Maybe another layout of the sliders could work as well so that it doesn't feel copypasted. ( It's on purpose because the slider speed is a bit fast, I want it to feel familiar to the beginning. )

There wasn't much other things I could find, it's really well crafted, gotta love rib! <3

Good luck! ( Thank you fam!)

Nelly wrote:
Literally a lazy modding.

Our Red Thread of Fate
00:08:806 (4) - Just to emphasize move this note to x:176 ( Moved a little farther but not that far )
00:42:159 (3,4) - Kinda a tricky jump in my opinion. Move these notes to x:176 ( Done )
00:45:512 (6) - Ctrl+G (?). For emphasize also. ( Nice PP increase )
00:47:277 (1) - x:112. This (4) note behing isn't hyperdashed whitch is unrankable for osu!catch specifics maps. ( Fixed in Hareimu's mod but noted)
00:50:983 (2) - Should be reduced to x:272 ( Done )
00:55:041 (3) - Unrankable again as in 00:47:277. You know what to do :> ( I think I did it )
01:04:394 (2) - Reduce the distance. It'll be some dangerous movement. x:176 ( Reduced to X=192)
01:12:159 (5) - I guess it's also a tricky part. x:240 ( I think it's fine )
01:16:394 (6) - Make slider like this to reduce the distance. ( reduced distance another way so i wouldnt mess up flow)
01:19:394 (4) - Reduce some distance. x:80 ( Reduced slightly )
01:20:453 (3,4,5) - Same thing. Move all these notes to x:176
01:33:159 (3) - Again, x:176 Reduced slightly
01:51:865 (4) - x:72 ( reduced )
01:54:159 (3) - x:272 (Reduced )
02:55:394 (7) - Move this end slider to the left. ( Done )
02:58:924 (2) - x:168 ( reduced )

Can't find some points anymore so I'll finish here.

Sorry for this super long wait. I got very stressed out from modding. Good luck with ranking! (Thank you so much)

Thank you for the mods!!

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-09-06T17:29:03+00:00

Probably a bit late but I guess better late than never????

General

Hitsounds Issues: I don't understand why you would silence the slidertick? If you wanted it silenced in some parts I might understand but it's silenced through all of the map and then you might as well use STR1 and just get rid of it
Other: Maybe credit what parts is mapped by Ascendance in the description

Our Red Thread of Fate

Just an overall “issue” or something I wanna adress before spilling out my mod, the calmer parts have a lot more hyperdash usages than kiai, idk if that’s intentional or not but I personally don't like it. Kiai is the most intense part of the song and the difficulty should also compensate to that. I don’t think the calmer parts call for double hypers like 00:36:865 (4,5,1) - 00:39:336 (3,4,1) - especially when the kiai consist of merely single hypers on the the downbeats. So yeah would be cool if you could balance it out a bit better.
00:02:100 - I think you can remove this timing point, the soft sampleset fits better in the intro sliders, also to make them sound the same as 00:00:689 (1,2) - which uses soft sampleset.
00:06:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't fit well to build up the intensity of the song, I'd try making distance gradually increase or something, also 00:08:100 (2) - Remove finisher? I mean, there is a finisher in the song but that also applies to all the previous 1/2 sliderheads which you haven't emphasised so this one seems rather random
00:09:159 (1) - Try ending the slider 00:09:865 - ? 00:10:130 (2,3) - is a double, not a triplet. Sounds are similar to 01:07:041 (1,2) -
00:11:277 (9) - nc pls
00:22:041 (1,2,3) - could at least have a dash between 2,3? ):
00:50:100 (1,2) - I feel this slider is missing out on a couple beats plus 2 starting on a red tick feels weird to me, try removing the repeat, add a note at 00:50:630 - and move 00:50:983 (2) - 1/2 back and add a repeat to that instead.
01:00:688 (3) - fits better as 1 / 2 slider to hit the drums
01:20:983 (6,1) - switch nc here and add one here 01:22:394 (2) -
01:29:630 (1,2) - really weird that this is the only extended slider in the whole kiai
01:35:630 (2,3) - try increasing the distance her to a small dash?
01:37:924 (1) - 01:40:747 (1) - i think maybe finishers missing considering these have finishers 00:11:806 (1) - 00:14:630 (1) -
02:03:865 (2,3) - really uncomfortable spacing due to the sliders being longer than the distance between them which makes an awkward flow stop. try increasing the distance or something
02:06:688 (2,3) - kinda same here but this one isn't as bad as the above but i still think it would benefit from a tiny bit more distance
02:08:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - can you explain to me as to why you placed a hyper between 2,3 and 4,5? I think the music is way more distinct on 4 and 6, both with drums and guitar hitting it so consider making a hyper to that instead.
02:16:041 - missing guitar if u wanna map it
02:23:100 (4,1) - swap nc here and also here 02:24:512 (3,1) -
02:24:953 (4) - can't say i hear any beat for this note
02:27:159 (4) - this is very very close to the wall, please place it a bit further into the playfield
02:43:394 (2,3) - wew not fitting hyper on blue tick, strong beat is here 02:43:747 - so try to make a hyper to that instead.
02:58:571 (1) - 02:59:983 (1) - I don't think these fit at all as extended sliders, especially with the strong beat on the red ticks
03:29:100 (4,5,6,7) - again i feel like the hypers are placed on the wrong beats, you should wanna highlight 6 and slider end on 7, that's where the music is most intense
04:01:218 (3,4,5,6) - weak beats that don't deserve hypers, nowhere near as strong as 00:20:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet has same distance
04:50:806 (3,4,5) - maybe try a more zig zaggy pattern, i think that would suit well with the music!

that's all from me, good luck with this!

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-06T21:50:07+00:00

Benny- wrote:
Probably a bit late but I guess better late than never????

General
Hitsounds Issues: I don't understand why you would silence the slidertick? If you wanted it silenced in some parts I might understand but it's silenced through all of the map and then you might as well use STR1 and just get rid of it Removed since the purpose was stupid to begin with
Other: Maybe credit what parts is mapped by Ascendance in the description Added

Our Red Thread of Fate
Just an overall “issue” or something I wanna adress before spilling out my mod, the calmer parts have a lot more hyperdash usages than kiai, idk if that’s intentional or not but I personally don't like it. Kiai is the most intense part of the song and the difficulty should also compensate to that. I don’t think the calmer parts call for double hypers like 00:36:865 (4,5,1) - 00:39:336 (3,4,1) - especially when the kiai consist of merely single hypers on the the downbeats. So yeah would be cool if you could balance it out a bit better. ( reduced some of those patterns to work around the vocal better instead of downbeats. I don't think the players are gonna like the dash patterns tho )
00:02:100 - I think you can remove this timing point, the soft sampleset fits better in the intro sliders, also to make them sound the same as 00:00:689 (1,2) - which uses soft sampleset. Done
00:06:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't fit well to build up the intensity of the song, I'd try making distance gradually increase or something, also 00:08:100 (2) - Remove finisher? I mean, there is a finisher in the song but that also applies to all the previous 1/2 sliderheads which you haven't emphasised so this one seems rather random Blame Monstrata's Hitsounind, removed and I tried to make the increase more gradual
00:09:159 (1) - Try ending the slider 00:09:865 - ? 00:10:130 (2,3) - is a double, not a triplet. Sounds are similar to 01:07:041 (1,2) - True, fixed but it looks weird now
00:11:277 (9) - nc pls Done
00:22:041 (1,2,3) - could at least have a dash between 2,3? ): Fine but it plays weird now
00:50:100 (1,2) - I feel this slider is missing out on a couple beats plus 2 starting on a red tick feels weird to me, try removing the repeat, add a note at 00:50:630 - and move 00:50:983 (2) - 1/2 back and add a repeat to that instead. I don't hear it but I made it two sliders instead
01:00:688 (3) - fits better as 1 / 2 slider to hit the drums Done
01:20:983 (6,1) - switch nc here and add one here 01:22:394 (2) - Done
01:29:630 (1,2) - really weird that this is the only extended slider in the whole kiai How so?
01:35:630 (2,3) - try increasing the distance her to a small dash? Fine but i dont like it
01:37:924 (1) - 01:40:747 (1) - i think maybe finishers missing considering these have finishers 00:11:806 (1) - 00:14:630 (1) - Added one finisher I could hear
02:03:865 (2,3) - really uncomfortable spacing due to the sliders being longer than the distance between them which makes an awkward flow stop. try increasing the distance or something Increased to 1.00x
02:06:688 (2,3) - kinda same here but this one isn't as bad as the above but i still think it would benefit from a tiny bit more distance Increased to 1.00x
02:08:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - can you explain to me as to why you placed a hyper between 2,3 and 4,5? I think the music is way more distinct on 4 and 6, both with drums and guitar hitting it so consider making a hyper to that instead. it sounds different than what you hear there to me but changed anyway
02:16:041 - missing guitar if u wanna map it Done
02:23:100 (4,1) - swap nc here and also here 02:24:512 (3,1) - Done
02:24:953 (4) - can't say i hear any beat for this note Removed
02:27:159 (4) - this is very very close to the wall, please place it a bit further into the playfield Moved closer by a pixel or two but otherwise it's fine
02:43:394 (2,3) - wew not fitting hyper on blue tick, strong beat is here 02:43:747 - so try to make a hyper to that instead. Fixed
02:58:571 (1) - 02:59:983 (1) - I don't think these fit at all as extended sliders, especially with the strong beat on the red ticks I'mma go for a hard no for this one because i can hear sounds when i play back at 25%. The ending are soft but they give emphasis that needed to the notes they represent
03:29:100 (4,5,6,7) - again i feel like the hypers are placed on the wrong beats, you should wanna highlight 6 and slider end on 7, that's where the music is most intense
04:01:218 (3,4,5,6) - weak beats that don't deserve hypers, nowhere near as strong as 00:20:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet has same distance How are these weak beats? They're literally the main part of the song and the first hyper has a finisher on it and match the first pattern it was used, so no change
04:50:806 (3,4,5) - maybe try a more zig zaggy pattern, i think that would suit well with the music!
that's all from me, good luck with this!

Thanks for the mod

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-09-06T22:30:40+00:00

Benny- wrote:
Probably a bit late but I guess better late than never????

Our Red Thread of Fate
04:50:806 (3,4,5) - maybe try a more zig zaggy pattern, i think that would suit well with the music! I kinda like it how it is

that's all from me, good luck with this!

Thanks

-rage

425 posts

Joined August 2013

-rage 2017-09-09T22:01:37+00:00

m4m for niggastrife

00:06:336 (1) - you hit the wall when you hit this slider, maybe move a little bit away from it.
00:08:453 (3) - this one is way more noticable when you hit the wall on the right, should move away from it.
00:09:159 (1) - same as above, the droplets make you hug the wall.
00:34:394 (1) - ^
00:36:336 (2,3,4,5) - almost feels a little weird to hit, the (3) is a little too close to end of slider (2) so it makes for a short little stop, could probably ctrl-H the (4) for better movement.
01:01:394 (1) - slider should be more horizontal, sortof stops the flow of the notes.
01:25:218 (1,2) - could be Hdashed, or reduce distance a little biut, this feels far.
03:40:924 - avoid copy-pasta ;_; noticed that immediatly, makes for repetetive paterns.
04:58:218 (1) - remove NC
04:58:571 - copy-pasta stream from roseus lol. should maybe re-map this stream cuz i noticed that right away.
05:04:571 (1) - remove NC

very good flow, hope this goes to ranked. good luck

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-10T00:26:32+00:00

lulu lemon wrote:
m4m for niggastrife

00:06:336 (1) - you hit the wall when you hit this slider, maybe move a little bit away from it. (Done)
00:08:453 (3) - this one is way more noticable when you hit the wall on the right, should move away from it. ( moved a few pixels )
00:09:159 (1) - same as above, the droplets make you hug the wall. Fixed
00:34:394 (1) - ^ Done
00:36:336 (2,3,4,5) - almost feels a little weird to hit, the (3) is a little too close to end of slider (2) so it makes for a short little stop, could probably ctrl-H the (4) for better movement. I tried moving it around a bit and hopefully it plays better
01:01:394 (1) - slider should be more horizontal, sort of stops the flow of the notes. Mostly on purpose, but tried to make it a bit more horizontal
01:25:218 (1,2) - could be Hdashed, or reduce distance a little biut, this feels far. Done
03:40:924 - avoid copy-pasta ;_; noticed that immediately, makes for repetitive patterns. ( Changed some patterns around so i hope it's less pasty )
04:58:218 (1) - remove NC Done
04:58:571 - copy-pasta stream from roseus lol. should maybe re-map this stream cuz i noticed that right away. Slightly changed
05:04:571 (1) - remove NC Done
very good flow, hope this goes to ranked. good luck

Applied, thank you so much

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-09-18T18:59:58+00:00

From my modding queue

Kudosu only when helpful!

RoseusJaeger

00:07:747 (1,2,3,4) - The angles of these sliders are questionable - 1 and 3 have the same angle, 2 is a bit more horizontal and 4 is the most horizontal. I would tilt 3 more to the right so that you get a nice build-up for the angles of the sliders from 1-2-3-4.
00:25:571 (4,1) - This is a hyperdash into flow and 00:37:041 (5,1) - is a normal dash into antiflow which is inconsistent for me. I would make them even.
00:28:571 (4,1) - is an antiflow pattern but 00:31:394 (5,1) - not. I think it would be better rhythm-wise to make the second one antiflow too.
01:33:865 (1,2) - I would reduce that jump slightly since it is quiet easy to shitmiss when you don't expect it.
00:22:041 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:45:336 (1,2) - are inconsistent, having the hyperdashes on different sounds. They should be even imo.
01:58:924 (4,1) - I think these two should be a bit closer to each other - the movement speed atm doesn't really catch the flow of the section.
03:35:277 (1) - Feels somehow not emphasized when using the same slidershape and movement like 03:34:924 (8) - . Can you change it up a bit so that this slider isn't 100% even to the previous one?
03:42:336 (3,4) - Since 03:42:336 (3) - ends pretty far left I would expect as a player the next slider on the right side, but 03:43:042 (4) - comes on the left side. Can you try to change up the sliders a bit so that 03:42:336 (3) - ends not so far left? An ending position like 03:47:983 (3) - would be only just ok imo.
04:00:688 (1,2) - I would make this one a hyperdash because the background sounds stop just after this, so it would better emphasize the music imo.
04:02:983 (2) - I would make this a curved stream with really slow movement instead because it fits the curved streams you used beforehand to emphasize the building up background noise.

Ascendance

04:28:218 (3,4,5,1) - This is a bit harder than the rest of the section, it would be better to make 04:28:571 (5,1) - a flow pattern instead of an antiflow pattern to match the difficulty of patterns like 04:33:865 (4,5,6,1) - .

Since I delayed your mod I will give your next request in my queue a high priority (but it may be that you need to remind me of it)!

Good Luck!

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-09-18T22:17:57+00:00

Here with a mod for you as requested! I'm a bit ill so that will be my excuse for any poor suggestions and nonsense written below

[

General]

Background: 1366x768 is old news, try this upscaled to 1920x1080 version

[

Our Red Thread of Fate]

00:00:689 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Absolutely nothing wrong with these as they are but have you tried extending them all 1/2 a beat to the red tick? I think it works really well and would allow you a bit more freedom with the couple of hyperjumps in this bit
00:08:453 (3) - Feels just a little too close to the wall, moving it in just a bit would be nice
00:13:394 (1) - Stronger hyper to this would work well I think. Right now it's hyper strength doesn't stand out as it's the same as jumps like 00:12:688 (3,4) - and I think it deserves more emphasis, try getting the spacing up to around 2.70x ds
Same would go for 00:14:630 (1) - and 00:17:453 (1) -
00:56:806 (6,1) - This jump feels too weak, especially considering some of the distances used just before it being higher. If you move 00:56:806 (6) - to about x:176 and 00:56:983 (1) - to about x:472, as close to the wall as you dare go really, and then maybe increase the strength of the antiflow on 00:56:983 (1) - then we end up with the emphasis this note deserves
00:59:100 (3) - Walking this feels too weak, try making this a light dash moving it to around x:304
01:01:394 (1) - Again the hyper to this is weaker than some jumps just before it like 01:00:688 (3,4) - aswell as the slider shape being a little awkward to play. Try making this a C shaped slider, if you keep the tail in the same place then it should result in a noticeably increased distance
01:06:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm feels a bit ambiguous here, doesn't seem to follow either instrumentals or vocals too well, there's little movement and strong sounds like 01:06:688 (5) - are not well represented. For vocals I'd have a 1/1 slider starting on 01:06:159 - and a 1/2 slider at 01:06:688 - with dashes to each. As for instrumentals I'd suggest a 1/2 slider starting at 01:06:159 (2) - and repeating once and then a 1/2 slider at 01:06:688 - with dashes to each. Either timeline is already incredibly similar but the emphasis should be better placed and less ambiguous
01:08:100 (2,1,2) - I think using hypers like this here takes away from the jump going in to the Kiai. Try making a gradual curve out of these notes with a dash or weak hyper to 01:09:159 (8) - . I feel the lack of movement here really helps to contrast and emphasis the explosive start of the Kiai
01:15:865 (5) - Distance to this feels a little low, possible to bring up to around 1.20x ds?
01:33:865 (1,2) - This could be the illness but I've missed this note a few times due to not expecting a dash here. Due to the full beat gap between these notes it's easy to not notice until it's too late so it would be great if you could reduce this distance a bit for sick and diseased plebs like myself
02:12:336 (2) - Walk feels a little weak here, it's a bit easy to move too fast and miss droplets on this. Try moving it a tiny bit, x:56 or so
02:28:041 (2) - Vocal and drum here, this certainly feels deserving of at least a dash
02:41:100 (2) - As a player with the way you've been using sliders in this difficulty I'd expect this note to come in on the right of the screen following the curve of 02:40:571 (1) - so it's a little awkward and unexpected as is. It would be great if you could find a way to have the slider to the right of 02:40:571 (1) -
02:50:806 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty shallow distancing here, upping it a little would be nice. Try moving 02:50:983 (4,5) - a little further out to x:360
03:11:806 (3) - Try having this slider pointing to the right instead, I feel the extra movements here really fits this energetic part of the song
03:13:394 (3) - Again this part is really energetic and I think a dash would be fitting here
03:25:747 (2) - Nice movement here but it would be nice to have a little something to distinguish this note a bit more with it's higher pitched vocal compared to 03:25:394 (1) -. Distance is tight here but you could tilt this to the left some just to make it stand out a bit
03:40:924 - Hey look it's the intro! Same would apply here about extending the sliders half a beat if you did so earlier

Ascendance

04:41:100 (4) - This certainly doesn't seem worthy of such a strong hyper, or even a hyper. I think you want to reduce distance to this and hyper to 04:41:277 (5) - instead
04:52:924 (5) - I'm not really hearing anything that calls for this repeater. A 1/2 slider here instead and a 1/1 slider at 04:53:277 - sounds more proper to me. Also looks like there should be an NC here

Hope this helps and I pray it makes some sense

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-29T22:32:14+00:00

RoseusJaeger

00:07:747 (1,2,3,4)- The angles of these sliders are questionable - 1 and 3 have the same angle, 2 is a bit more horizontal and 4 is the most horizontal. I would tilt 3 more to the right so that you get a nice build-up for the angles of the sliders from 1-2-3-4. ( Tilted a couple pixels )

00:25:571 (4,1)- This is a hyperdash into flow and 00:37:041 (5,1)- is a normal dash into antiflow which is inconsistent for me. I would make them even. ( I honestly have no idea what you're talking about here. Unless you're saying they should both be hypers, I disagree because I'm following the vocal for the most part of the song and the vocal is lower there )

00:28:571 (4,1)- is an antiflow pattern but 00:31:394 (5,1)- not. I think it would be better rhythm-wise to make the second one antiflow too. ( Makes no difference. Vocal rises on the second pattern so I made it match )

01:33:865 (1,2)- I would reduce that jump slightly since it is quiet easy to shitmiss when you don't expect it. ( reduced slightly )

00:22:041 (1,2,3,4)- and 01:45:336 (1,2)- are inconsistent, having the hyperdashes on different sounds. They should be even imo. (True , forgot to fix before )

01:58:924 (4,1)- I think these two should be a bit closer to each other - the movement speed atm doesn't really catch the flow of the section. ( Only moved a pixel closer )

03:35:277 (1)- Feels somehow not emphasized when using the same slidershape and movement like 03:34:924 (8)- . Can you change it up a bit so that this slider isn't 100% even to the previous one? ( I don't see the issue, it still gets emphasis because it's horizontal )

03:42:336 (3,4)- Since 03:42:336 (3)- ends pretty far left I would expect as a player the next slider on the right side, but 03:43:042 (4)- comes on the left side. Can you try to change up the sliders a bit so that 03:42:336 (3)- ends not so far left? An ending position like 03:47:983 (3)- would be only just ok imo. ( I don't feel the same when I play the pattern. )

04:00:688 (1,2)- I would make this one a hyperdash because the background sounds stop just after this, so it would better emphasize the music imo. ( Yeah true )

04:02:983 (2)- I would make this a curved stream with really slow movement instead because it fits the curved streams you used beforehand to emphasize the building up background noise. ( The slider to stream tool won't do 1/12 snaps, so I couldn't apply even if I wanted to )

00:00:689 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- Absolutely nothing wrong with these as they are but have you tried extending them all 1/2 a beat to the red tick? I think it works really well and would allow you a bit more freedom with the couple of hyperjumps in this bit ( I don't think extended rhythms feels right for this song but thanks for the suggestion )
00:08:453 (3)- Feels just a little too close to the wall, moving it in just a bit would be nice ( reduce two pixels otherwise it would impede the flow of the pattern )
00:13:394 (1)- Stronger hyper to this would work well I think. Right now it's hyper strength doesn't stand out as it's the same as jumps like 00:12:688 (3,4)- and I think it deserves more emphasis, try getting the spacing up to around 2.70x ds
Same would go for 00:14:630 (1)- and 00:17:453 (1)- ( Agreed )

00:56:806 (6,1)- This jump feels too weak, especially considering some of the distances used just before it being higher. If you move 00:56:806 (6)- to about x:176 and 00:56:983 (1)- to about x:472, as close to the wall as you dare go really, and then maybe increase the strength of the antiflow on 00:56:983 (1)- then we end up with the emphasis this note deserves ( Applied but didn't affect antiflow very much because I wanna follow softness of vocal )
00:59:100 (3)- Walking this feels too weak, try making this a light dash moving it to around x:304 ( Ok )
01:01:394 (1)- Again the hyper to this is weaker than some jumps just before it like 01:00:688 (3,4)- aswell as the slider shape being a little awkward to play. Try making this a C shaped slider, if you keep the tail in the same place then it should result in a noticeably increased distance ( Changed slider shape but I think the emphasis is okay )
01:06:159 (2,3,4,5,6)- Rhythm feels a bit ambiguous here, doesn't seem to follow either instrumentals or vocals too well, there's little movement and strong sounds like 01:06:688 (5)- are not well represented. For vocals I'd have a 1/1 slider starting on 01:06:159- and a 1/2 slider at 01:06:688- with dashes to each. As for instrumentals I'd suggest a 1/2 slider starting at 01:06:159 (2)- and repeating once and then a 1/2 slider at 01:06:688- with dashes to each. Either timeline is already incredibly similar but the emphasis should be better placed and less ambiguous ( I prefer ambiguous tbh, since neither rhythm sounds defined )

01:08:100 (2,1,2)- I think using hypers like this here takes away from the jump going in to the Kiai. Try making a gradual curve out of these notes with a dash or weak hyper to 01:09:159 (8)- . I feel the lack of movement here really helps to contrast and emphasis the explosive start of the Kiai ( Weakened the hypers/slider pattern so the hyper gives more emphasis )
01:15:865 (5)- Distance to this feels a little low, possible to bring up to around 1.20x ds? ( Increased to 1.00x )
01:33:865 (1,2)- This could be the illness but I've missed this note a few times due to not expecting a dash here. Due to the full beat gap between these notes it's easy to not notice until it's too late so it would be great if you could reduce this distance a bit for sick and diseased plebs like myself ( reduce because even I dont even know what I was thinking with that )

02:12:336 (2)- Walk feels a little weak here, it's a bit easy to move too fast and miss droplets on this. Try moving it a tiny bit, x:56 or so ( Done )
02:28:041 (2)- Vocal and drum here, this certainly feels deserving of at least a dash ( Added dash )
02:41:100 (2)- As a player with the way you've been using sliders in this difficulty I'd expect this note to come in on the right of the screen following the curve of 02:40:571 (1)- so it's a little awkward and unexpected as is. It would be great if you could find a way to have the slider to the right of 02:40:571 (1)- ( true, adjusted )
02:50:806 (3,4,5,6)- Pretty shallow distancing here, upping it a little would be nice. Try moving 02:50:983 (4,5)- a little further out to x:360 ( oops, done )
03:11:806 (3)- Try having this slider pointing to the right instead, I feel the extra movements here really fits this energetic part of the song ( Agreed )
03:13:394 (3)- Again this part is really energetic and I think a dash would be fitting here ( Done )
03:25:747 (2)- Nice movement here but it would be nice to have a little something to distinguish this note a bit more with it's higher pitched vocal compared to 03:25:394 (1)-. Distance is tight here but you could tilt this to the left some just to make it stand out a bit ( Done )
03:40:924- Hey look it's the intro! Same would apply here about extending the sliders half a beat if you did so earlier ( Same reason, I dont feel it fits the song )

Thank you for the mods, i appreciate it

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-09-29T22:59:50+00:00

04:41:100 (4) - fixed only this, the other two seem okay to me

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DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-29T23:08:21+00:00

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WildOne94

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WildOne94 2017-10-28T16:25:51+00:00

Heyooooo.

Here for my part of the m4m. Although as to you in pm I am not the best at Overdoses.

Our Red Thread of Fate
Eeeeeeee so much anti-flow

RoseusJaeger's part

00:10:130 (2,3) - I find this hyper is a bit too big of a distance for the closed hat sound in the song. I would either reduce the hyper to it's minimum distance by moving 00:10:130 (2) - to x:232 or maybe even not having a hyper at all. Just sounds too quiet for a hyper that big of distanced.

00:14:100 (3,4) - It be cool is (3)'s slider end was also a hyper making it a double hyper here as it fits with the music and it's difficult. Like this
https://puu.sh/ya0Aa/faef28b11d.jpg

00:19:571 (4,5) - Hyper here ? Due to (5) having a slightly more heavier drum sound.

00:25:218 (3) - Maybe move to x:280 for the strongish vocal ?

00:27:512 (1,2,3) - ^ Maybe 00:27:512 (1,2) - to x:440 ?

00:59:100 (3) - ^ maybe x:208 ?

01:07:041 (1,2) - I don't think this needs a hyper here at all. It's so quiet. At least reduce the distance

. Infact I don't think these should have hypers either but that's just my opinion 01:08:100 (2,1,2) -. (this might emphasis the kiai more https://puu.sh/ya0VA/f9301c0113.jpg)

01:22:747 (2) - I found this nicer if it was CTRL + H'ed and put into the centre.

01:38:453 (2,3) - Weird how most of this section requires a dash but then this was normal distanced.

01:41:277 (2,3) - ^

01:45:865 (4,5,6) - Felt it had smoother flow if you did this. (6) is behind (4). https://puu.sh/ya17C/2865b48a67.jpg

01:51:336 (3) - At least a dash maybe ? I know I suggested something similar but hyper before at 00:59:100 (3) - but this was not as intense.

02:20:806 (2,3) - Sounds like a good place for a vocal hyper again. Move 02:21:159 (3) - to x:312 ?

02:39:159 (2,3) - ^ this sounds similar to 02:38:453 (4,1) -

02:40:218 (6,1) - ^

03:28:924 (3) - placing this at x:136 makes a nice hyper to the drum stream on 03:29:100 (4,5,6,7,8) -.

04:00:688 (1,2) - Before didn't you hyper these to get to the next note ? Like at 00:20:453 (1,2) - ?

Ascendance's Part

04:26:453 (2,3) - Maybe a hyper here ? The vocal is quite intense when it hits (3).

04:28:571 (5,1) - Okay this is by far the biggest anti-flow jump I have seen in the entire mapset. This is soooooo hard to catch. Please try slant 04:28:747 (1) - up more for it to be a little bit more easier. Had to mention this one ;w;

04:29:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - It seems the hypers are really empty here and stop for a little bit of time. Maybe add 1 or 2 in place like 04:29:629 (5,6) - or 04:30:159 (7,1) - or 04:30:336 (1,2) -.

04:32:100 (2,3) - As said to Roseus. This could make a nice hyper jump into the stream you have. EDIT: Just noticed that 04:32:541 (4,6) - aren't even mapped to anything. Maybe you should take a look at yours too RoseusJaeger

04:33:865 (4,5) - Does not make sense that (4)'s tail end is not a hyper but the rest are. I would hyper all of these like RoseusJaeger's.

04:45:865 (1) - Please slant this one to the right

. With those 1/4 hypers before this it's so hard to try catch the droplet with this. BIG ANTI-FLOW AHHH.

04:51:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - As before could use a hyper in here somewhere like.

04:52:924 (5) - NC ?

04:58:218 (1) - Can't have that as a NC on it's own ;w;.

05:04:571 (1) - ^

Well hope this helps out

Sorry most of it was just hyper suggestions but as said before I ain't brilliant at overdoses in modding.

Good luck

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-11-17T23:33:31+00:00

00:10:130 (2,3)- I find this hyper is a bit too big of a distance for the closed hat sound in the song. I would either reduce the hyper to it's minimum distance by moving 00:10:130 (2)- to x:232 or maybe even not having a hyper at all. Just sounds too quiet for a hyper that big of distanced. ( I reduced the distance but I think the hyper is needed )

00:14:100 (3,4)- It be cool is (3)'s slider end was also a hyper making it a double hyper here as it fits with the music and it's difficult. Like this
https://puu.sh/ya0Aa/faef28b11d.jpg ( I think you have the wrong screenshot because that doesn't make sense there, and I don't believe the sound is strong enough for a hyper )

00:19:571 (4,5)- Hyper here ? Due to (5) having a slightly more heavier drum sound. ( I think a dash is fine )

00:25:218 (3)- Maybe move to x:280 for the strongish vocal ? ( I was told in a previous mod not to do that because vocal isn't strong enough )

00:27:512 (1,2,3)- ^ Maybe 00:27:512 (1,2)- to x:440 ? ( Again, vocal isn't strong enough )

00:59:100 (3)- ^ maybe x:208 ? ( The recovery for the hyper is needed so I'm not gonna add a dash )

01:07:041 (1,2)- I don't think this needs a hyper here at all. It's so quiet. At least reduce the distance . Infact I don't think these should have hypers either but that's just my opinion 01:08:100 (2,1,2)-. (this might emphasis the kiai more https://puu.sh/ya0VA/f9301c0113.jpg) ( I think you're missing the chime sounds I'm emphasizing. )

01:22:747 (2)- I found this nicer if it was CTRL + H'ed and put into the centre. ( I flipped it )

01:38:453 (2,3)- Weird how most of this section requires a dash but then this was normal distanced. ( I'm pretty sure the sound is soft there :thinking: )

01:41:277 (2,3)- ^ ( Again, I don't see the problem )

01:45:865 (4,5,6)- Felt it had smoother flow if you did this. (6) is behind (4). https://puu.sh/ya17C/2865b48a67.jpg ( Done )

01:51:336 (3)- At least a dash maybe ? I know I suggested something similar but hyper before at 00:59:100 (3)- but this was not as intense. ( Still need recovery for the hyper )

02:20:806 (2,3)- Sounds like a good place for a vocal hyper again. Move 02:21:159 (3)- to x:312 ? (I'm mapping vocal and drums together, so vocal gets less priority )

02:39:159 (2,3)- ^ this sounds similar to 02:38:453 (4,1)- ( Same )

02:40:218 (6,1)- ^ ( Same )

03:28:924 (3)- placing this at x:136 makes a nice hyper to the drum stream on 03:29:100 (4,5,6,7,8)-. ( Agreed )

04:00:688 (1,2)- Before didn't you hyper these to get to the next note ? Like at 00:20:453 (1,2)- ? ( Benny said they were softer than the previous parts so I took her advice and nerfed them )

Ascendance's Part
04:26:453 (2,3)- Maybe a hyper here ? The vocal is quite intense when it hits (3). (Added )

04:28:571 (5,1)- Okay this is by far the biggest anti-flow jump I have seen in the entire mapset. This is soooooo hard to catch. Please try slant 04:28:747 (1)- up more for it to be a little bit more easier. Had to mention this one ;w; ( Slanted because the distance to the next hyper needed easing too )

04:29:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3)- It seems the hypers are really empty here and stop for a little bit of time. Maybe add 1 or 2 in place like 04:29:629 (5,6)- or 04:30:159 (7,1)- or 04:30:336 (1,2)-. ( I didn't add hypers because vocal is soft but I did add dashes )

04:32:100 (2,3)- As said to Roseus. This could make a nice hyper jump into the stream you have. EDIT: Just noticed that 04:32:541 (4,6)- aren't even mapped to anything. Maybe you should take a look at yours too RoseusJaeger ( Made it a dash and my streams have drum sounds attached. )

04:33:865 (4,5)- Does not make sense that (4)'s tail end is not a hyper but the rest are. I would hyper all of these like RoseusJaeger's. ( It's a softer stream but I did balance the distancing )

04:45:865 (1)- Please slant this one to the right . With those 1/4 hypers before this it's so hard to try catch the droplet with this. BIG ANTI-FLOW AHHH. ( This is just Ascendance's style so I'm not gonna change it. He does this all the time )

04:51:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- As before could use a hyper in here somewhere like. Naw

04:52:924 (5)- NC ? Ok

04:58:218 (1)- Can't have that as a NC on it's own ;w;. Fixed

05:04:571 (1)- ^ Fixed

Well hope this helps out Sorry most of it was just hyper suggestions but as said before I ain't brilliant at overdoses in modding.

Good luck ( Thank you for the mod, it was a little bit helpful now I hope to push this set to rank! )

I applied for Ascendance since he messed the map up by accident last time. Thank you for the mod

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2018-03-12T22:31:47+00:00

recheck i guess lule

Our Red Thread of Faith

00:24:688 (1,2,3) - When you try emphasizing everything you end up emphasizing nothing. I'd suggest making (1) a repeat slider and remove (2). From there you can have a hyper between these two sliders to emphasize the vocal better which is what you tried doing with the dash. Also the current pattern looks ugliiiii.
00:50:630 (2,3) - the hitsounds seem to reflect the music pretty well but the pattern, not so much. What about changing these into single notes with dashes between or something
00:54:159 - 00:56:983 - In the song, the strength of the finishers are the same but you chose to use the lower finisher hitsound, why? In fact, I think the lower finisher hitsound is way too low, it's almost impossible to hear because it blends into the music too well. 01:05:630 (1) - here also it's impossible to hear the finisher hitsound. I'd stick to one finisher hitsound tbh.
01:16:747 (7,1) - Should be a 1/1 slider, you didn't emphasize 01:16:924 - previously with either a note nor a hyper.
01:24:688 (3,4,1) - I don't see this double hyper fitting, it removes the effect of 01:23:277 (3,4,1) - which has a pretty strong vocal and is also emphasized with a finisher.
01:25:747 (2) - remove one repeat, add note 01:25:747 - and move the slider to 01:25:924 - for emphasizing the vocals properly
01:29:630 (1) - As I explained in my mod 6 months ago, it's weird to have this as an extended slider when 02:52:924 (1) - and 04:41:630 (1) - are 1/1 sliders, bringing this up again because you asked "how so?" in your mod reply.
01:37:924 (1) - 01:40:747 (1) - finisher?
02:15:512 (3,4) - works better as 1/1 slider for the vocals, also consistency
02:25:394 (3,4,5) - Not sure how I feel about these hypers, I'd probably stick to only having hyper between 02:25:747 (4,5) - for vocals and 02:25:924 (5,1) - for downbeat. There isn't really much on 02:25:394 (3,4) -
02:27:159 (4) - I think the slider body is a tiny bit too close to the edge of the playfield
02:30:336 (1) - a this too, I know it's 16x away from the playfield but you still hit the wall when playing which isn't nice :<
02:58:571 (1) - 02:59:983 (1) - Still don't think this fits as an extended slider because of the strong beat on the red tick
03:22:571 - 03:35:277 - Really think this section here can be nerfed quite a bit in terms of hdashes. Currently, it got more hdashes than the most intense parts of the map while this is the calmest part. I'd keep the hyperdashes to the downbeats, mostly for this part. And then I mean stuff like;
1. 03:17:453 (4,5) - can be dashes, those beats aren't THAT strong.
2. 03:22:394 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is just overdone with hyperdashes,
3. 03:26:806 (1) - should be 1/2 to hit the strong beat on the red tick, a 1/4 hyperdash isn't fitting
03:36:688 (1) - You've placed dashes on claps all along but here suddenly not? Better to be consistent and have dash between 03:36:159 (4,5) - and make (5) repeated once and a note 03:36:865 - instead with a dash from (5)
03:37:041 (2,3,4) - Doesn't fit as hypers, hyper should be here as you emphazised with the finisher 03:37:571 (4,5) -
03:29:541 - there's a vocal here if you wanna map it, you could make 03:29:453 (8) - a 1/4 slider instead

ok call me back and I'll icon I think

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2018-03-13T02:39:42+00:00

Benny- wrote:
recheck i guess lule

Our Red Thread of Faith
00:24:688 (1,2,3) - When you try emphasizing everything you end up emphasizing nothing. I'd suggest making (1) a repeat slider and remove (2). From there you can have a hyper between these two sliders to emphasize the vocal better which is what you tried doing with the dash. Also the current pattern looks ugliiiii. (Hopefully this looks better)
00:50:630 (2,3) - the hitsounds seem to reflect the music pretty well but the pattern, not so much. What about changing these into single notes with dashes between or something ( did a new pattern )
00:54:159 - 00:56:983 - In the song, the strength of the finishers are the same but you chose to use the lower finisher hitsound, why? In fact, I think the lower finisher hitsound is way too low, it's almost impossible to hear because it blends into the music too well. 01:05:630 (1) - here also it's impossible to hear the finisher hitsound. I'd stick to one finisher hitsound tbh. ( I used the hitsounding from Monstrata's ranked map and I think it sounds fine )
01:16:747 (7,1) - Should be a 1/1 slider, you didn't emphasize 01:16:924 - previously with either a note nor a hyper. ( ok )
01:24:688 (3,4,1) - I don't see this double hyper fitting, it removes the effect of 01:23:277 (3,4,1) - which has a pretty strong vocal and is also emphasized with a finisher. (removed a hyper )
01:25:747 (2) - remove one repeat, add note 01:25:747 - and move the slider to 01:25:924 - for emphasizing the vocals properly ( ok )
01:29:630 (1) - As I explained in my mod 6 months ago, it's weird to have this as an extended slider when 02:52:924 (1) - and 04:41:630 (1) - are 1/1 sliders, bringing this up again because you asked "how so?" in your mod reply. (Made it 1/2)
01:37:924 (1) - 01:40:747 (1) - finisher? (Ok, fixed )
02:15:512 (3,4) - works better as 1/1 slider for the vocals, also consistency (ok)
02:25:394 (3,4,5) - Not sure how I feel about these hypers, I'd probably stick to only having hyper between 02:25:747 (4,5) - for vocals and 02:25:924 (5,1) - for downbeat. There isn't really much on 02:25:394 (3,4) - ( applied but im not so sure on it either )
02:27:159 (4) - I think the slider body is a tiny bit too close to the edge of the playfield ( i tried moving it a pixel or two )
02:30:336 (1) - a this too, I know it's 16x away from the playfield but you still hit the wall when playing which isn't nice :< ( moved a few pixels )
02:58:571 (1) - 02:59:983 (1) - Still don't think this fits as an extended slider because of the strong beat on the red tick (ok )
03:22:571 - 03:35:277 - Really think this section here can be nerfed quite a bit in terms of hdashes. Currently, it got more hdashes than the most intense parts of the map while this is the calmest part. I'd keep the hyperdashes to the downbeats, mostly for this part. And then I mean stuff like;
03:17:453 (4,5) - can be dashes, those beats aren't THAT strong. fixed
03:22:394 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is just overdone with hyperdashes, repatterned
03:26:806 (1) - should be 1/2 to hit the strong beat on the red tick, a 1/4 hyperdash isn't fitting ( done )
(If there's anything else i should fix in this section, let me know because i probably didn't catch it all)
03:36:688 (1) - You've placed dashes on claps all along but here suddenly not? Better to be consistent and have dash between 03:36:159 (4,5) - and make (5) repeated once and a note 03:36:865 - instead with a dash from (5) (Idk lets see if what i did works )
03:37:041 (2,3,4) - Doesn't fit as hypers, hyper should be here as you emphazised with the finisher 03:37:571 (4,5) - ( ok )
03:29:541 - there's a vocal here if you wanna map it, you could make 03:29:453 (8) - a 1/4 slider instead ( Done )

ok call me back and I'll icon I think

If there's anything I need to change, be very specific on what I should do because Im not that smart. Thank you

Sorceress

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Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2018-03-13T06:26:11+00:00

Ping me once Benny bubbles

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2018-03-14T19:34:43+00:00

rank akaito

~~Benny already got kudosu for this btw, so I denied it.~~

benny cried so i gave her her kd back

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2018-03-15T20:04:01+00:00

Benny had me fix hitsounding in discord DMs, the hitsounds should be fixed now

Benita

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Joined February 2014

Benita 2018-03-15T20:54:18+00:00

yea we just fixed an issue I had with the finisher (:

Sorceress

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Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2018-03-17T21:46:49+00:00

Qwuawified

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Deif 2018-03-22T17:30:47+00:00

Hi there!

I'm almost sure 03:40:218 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - should be snapped in 1/3, taking into account that the most prominent instrument in there are the drums.

Additionally:

Video offset should be set to more or less -200ms. Check out the transitions at 00:11:806 - or any of the lyrics, the current offset is waaaay to late.
04:00:865 (2) - That Finish is probably out of place, or at least it shouldn't be so loud.
04:02:983 (2) - From 1/4 stream to a 1/12 kickslider there's a huge gap. The most natural snap for it would be 1/8 instead at most.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2018-03-22T18:14:50+00:00

Agree with Deif, that stream should definitely be 1/3 for the drum rhythm and the video offset speaks for itself.

For the additional points, your soft finish fits better on the previous note 04:00:688 (1) -, and 04:02:983 (2) - is kinda ambiguous for that cymbal roll - given everything prior is in 1/4 though, 1/8 is a more logical choice of snap.

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2018-03-24T21:44:15+00:00

Deif wrote:
Hi there!

I'm almost sure 03:40:218 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - should be snapped in 1/3, taking into account that the most prominent instrument in there are the drums. Changed to fit by resnapping and the pattern is now half-curves

Additionally:
Video offset should be set to more or less -200ms. Check out the transitions at 00:11:806 - or any of the lyrics, the current offset is waaaay to late. Sure why not
04:00:865 (2) - That Finish is probably out of place, or at least it shouldn't be so loud. Lowered to 70% but i still want it loud for emphasis
04:02:983 (2) - From 1/4 stream to a 1/12 kickslider there's a huge gap. The most natural snap for it would be 1/8 instead at most. Arguably this is to match the buzz sound but i guess 1/8 works for the same sound, it just isn't as natural at 1/8

JBHyperion wrote:
Agree with Deif, that stream should definitely be 1/3 for the drum rhythm and the video offset speaks for itself.

For the additional points, your soft finish fits better on the previous note 04:00:688 (1) -, and 04:02:983 (2) - is kinda ambiguous for that cymbal roll - given everything prior is in 1/4 though, 1/8 is a more logical choice of snap. Changed because i dont care anymore

Fixed, will HL everyone involved in Discord

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2018-04-02T20:06:05+00:00

One missing clap made me recheck all hitsounds lol

[RoseusJaeger]

00:07:041 - why is this 25%? Change to 50% for better build up in volume lol
01:25:747 (2) - this note is missing a clap
02:15:512 (3) - finisher here
03:40:924 - 03:55:041 - the hs is extremely low, please increase it to at least 50%, the 35% ones give almost 0 feedback to the player so yeah, increase pls

[Ascendance]
04:21:865 (1) - shouldn't the stream start here? At least to stay consistent with roseus' part 02:31:747 - and even your own part 04:58:571 - !!!!!

Sorry for the delay, was away for the easter >///<

DeletedUser_6709840

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_6709840 2018-04-03T20:47:17+00:00

Benny- wrote:
One missing clap made me recheck all hitsounds lol

[RoseusJaeger]
00:07:041 - why is this 25%? Change to 50% for better build up in volume lol
01:25:747 (2) - this note is missing a clap
02:15:512 (3) - finisher here
03:40:924 - 03:55:041 - the hs is extremely low, please increase it to at least 50%, the 35% ones give almost 0 feedback to the player so yeah, increase pls

[Ascendance]
04:21:865 (1) - shouldn't the stream start here? At least to stay consistent with roseus' part 02:31:747 - and even your own part 04:58:571 - !!!!! Fam, this is my part too. I was trying to emphasize the vocal but i guess I can make the stream longer as long as it doesn't DQ me again
Sorry for the delay, was away for the easter >///<

Thank you for the fixes, all that weren't responded to were applied.

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2018-04-06T20:14:36+00:00

rebubbled

also, my bad, I just assumed it was assdancer's part xd

Sorceress

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Sorceress 2018-04-09T19:48:40+00:00

Choo choo we're back on track

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