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Crush 40 - What I'm Made Of

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 20 December, 2013 at 4:28:51 PM

Artist: Crush 40
Title: What I'm Made Of
Source: Sonic Heroes
Tags: sega shadow tails knuckles bobo team super sonic the hedgehog
BPM: 178
Filesize: 7493kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bobo's Fast (4.86 stars, 387 notes)
  2. Decent (4.12 stars, 341 notes)
  3. Slow (2.2 stars, 200 notes)
  4. Speed Of Sound (4.88 stars, 501 notes)
Download: Crush 40 - What I'm Made Of
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This shall be my 3rd Ranked Beatmap!
Thanks Krisom for the skin!
Any comment is HELPFUL!!!
Redownload if you have downloaded before 15 December 13 for better bg
Ranking Before (~meow~) - Christmas 2013
Slow (Done) - Normal
Decent (Done) - Normal - Hard
Bobo's Fast (Made by Bobo) (Done) THANKS FOR YOUR DIFF !! RAWR!!! - Hard
Speed Of Sound (Done) (For them crazy ones) :) - Insane
Thanks SiLviA for checking offset!
Thanks Bourdon, Raging Bull, Omega, RobotoRaccoon, Lunatic Neko, Bobo (x2), Daigurenhyourinmaru, Breeze. TheMikeAG, pieguy1372 (x2) , Charles445, SapphireGhost, klubek, HellDawn, mancusojaunmattos, ziin, Byakugan249, Nakagawa-Kanon, Vortex, IceBeam, merchant7, Akemi_Himekaido, Hikekaido, Sync, No_Gu, [CSGA], Kert, wingman_dw, Nagisawa, Doodley, Leorda, Kawayi Rika, Accelerator-kun, Doomsday, RatedNC17, leon134114 for modding!!
Thanks Frozen for the kidangerS! Thanks Astom for the small SB!
Thanks for Modding!!
SiLviA
i think OD is 7 best :) 8 is high too :o

and offset is about 3100 just right ;)

fight~ :oops:
Raging Bull
Hi.

General:
Insert the BG in the other two diffs. (Tales/knuckles)
Needs a better difficulty between Knuckles and Sonic. BADLY Both the score gap and level gap is insanely huge.

Easy:
00:46:246 (1) - This spinner is rather long for the easiest difficulty. It would tire out beginners easily. I would remove it and map this part or add a break.
zzzz I hope you plan on mapping the entire thing for consistency.


Normal:
00:46:246 (1,1) - For a normal (at least I think it's a normal) I wouldn't put a note so close after a spinner. Move the slider back to 00:49:616?
00:50:628 (2) - I suggest removing the repeat and placing a note at 00:51:639 so players can click and kiai happens! :L
00:59:729 (1,1) - Same note as the first comment. I would suggest removing spinner and map it.
01:04:953 (4) - This 1/1 stack could possibly be confusing because you stacked (2,3) and they were 1/2 notes.
01:52:313 (1,1) - Same comment as the first. Move slider back?
01:56:695 (2) - Same as second comment.
02:05:796 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Possibly map it.
02:27:032 (5,6) - Don't like how 5 is overlapped 6. Try to make 6 wrap around 5 instead?
02:39:504 (1) - Pretty long break. Maybe map half of the guitar solo?
03:11:864 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Remove spinner and map it.
03:25:347 (1) - Break during kiai is rather useless. Just map till the end of kiai. Possibly a long slider curvy slider?

Hard Insane:
Somehow this is mapped quite better than the rest. :L
00:50:796 (3) - This is completely unexpected and rather useless increase of slider velocity. Just make it 1x.
00:52:819 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like the overlap. Maybe something like this?
00:58:717 (7,8,9) - ^ But no idea how to change it.
01:56:864 (3) - Same as first comment.
02:48:942 (1,1) - It may be hard/insane but I really don't like a note 1/2 after a spinner especially with such a high AR.
02:57:706 (11) - First comment. I mention these because there's no real indication when a slider slowdown/speed up happens unless it's like after a spinner and is consistent until say a kiai time. Map slider with 1x velocity.
03:18:942 (5) - One grid up? (Nazi)
03:21:976 (11) - This slider could definitely be made better compared to your previous sliders.
03:28:380 - Doubt this break is needed. It's so short.

No star yet sorry.


Here's my map for M4M. Any comment is good!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23138
WubWoofWolf
yay sonic i remind old maps but ofc this is much better xD star ~.~
Topic Starter
Vergence

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Insert the BG in the other two diffs. (Tales/knuckles)
Needs a better difficulty between Knuckles and Sonic. BADLY Both the score gap and level gap is insanely huge.

Easy:
00:46:246 (1) - This spinner is rather long for the easiest difficulty. It would tire out beginners easily. I would remove it and map this part or add a break.
zzzz I hope you plan on mapping the entire thing for consistency. Sure AND DONE


Normal:
00:46:246 (1,1) - For a normal (at least I think it's a normal) I wouldn't put a note so close after a spinner. Move the slider back to 00:49:616?
00:50:628 (2) - I suggest removing the repeat and placing a note at 00:51:639 so players can click and kiai happens! :L
00:59:729 (1,1) - Same note as the first comment. I would suggest removing spinner and map it. No sry :/
01:04:953 (4) - This 1/1 stack could possibly be confusing because you stacked (2,3) and they were 1/2 notes.
01:52:313 (1,1) - Same comment as the first. Move slider back? No sry :/ It follows the rhythm
01:56:695 (2) - Same as second comment.
02:05:796 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Possibly map it.
02:27:032 (5,6) - Don't like how 5 is overlapped 6. Try to make 6 wrap around 5 instead?
02:39:504 (1) - Pretty long break. Maybe map half of the guitar solo?
03:11:864 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Remove spinner and map it. No sry :/
03:25:347 (1) - Break during kiai is rather useless. Just map till the end of kiai. Possibly a long slider curvy slider? ^

Hard Insane:
Somehow this is mapped quite better than the rest. :L
00:50:796 (3) - This is completely unexpected and rather useless increase of slider velocity. Just make it 1x. This is to emphasize the epicness
00:52:819 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like the overlap. Maybe something like this?
00:58:717 (7,8,9) - ^ But no idea how to change it.
01:56:864 (3) - Same as first comment.
02:48:942 (1,1) - It may be hard/insane but I really don't like a note 1/2 after a spinner especially with such a high AR.
02:57:706 (11) - First comment. I mention these because there's no real indication when a slider slowdown/speed up happens unless it's like after a spinner and is consistent until say a kiai time. Map slider with 1x velocity.
03:18:942 (5) - One grid up? (Nazi)
03:21:976 (11) - This slider could definitely be made better compared to your previous sliders.
03:28:380 - Doubt this break is needed. It's so short. It is better than the meter drop

No star yet sorry.


Here's my map for M4M. Any comment is good!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23138
Done ~ Thanks for modding! Some mods that you wrote are still being considered..
WyndII
Supaaaah Sonic

*Le ztar :)



also bonus:

Omega
Okay, test-play on Super Sonic. Modding:
I like how you make the sliders. But you have a few overlaps, I'll point them out:
00:38:830 (2) -
00:59:055 (9) -
01:23:661 (3) -
01:27:032 (2) -
01:42:538 (4) -
01:43:717 (3) -
02:08:156 (1,2,3) -
03:10:852 (9) -

I really think such overlaps are confusing, I'm not sure what you should do, though.
Also, should you make the spinners at 00:43:549 (1,1) - and 01:49:616 (1,1) - end and start at the same second?


In addition, sliders at 00:50:796 (3) - and 01:56:864 (3) - double in velocity unintuitively, this is really confusing. I'm sure it's alright if you don't change them, though.

could you possible reduce the health drain one tick? There are some places where your HP drains quickly without note density to back it up.


Done. No need for any kudosu. Have a star!
rockleejkooo
i don't like slow ARs but the whole map was nice, especially last part of map
star~ and good luck with ranking D:
Topic Starter
Vergence
WyndII is funny as usual ! Haha :) :)
Thanks Omega for these tips... ;) ;) ;)
And rockleejkoooo for the small help! :D :D
taka1235
nice :D                                                      
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o

[Knuckles]
00:43:549 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
01:05:459 (1,2) - Ugly for my taste, maybe make it so it does not intersect the score?
01:22:482 (1) - 1 gird left
01:30:403 (3,4) - Down 1?
01:49:616 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
02:03:099 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping here looks bad

[Super Sonic]
• Slider Tick Rate 2
00:15:740 (6) - Down 1 grid (Level 3)
00:16:414 (8) - ^
00:16:583 (1,2) - That'll cause you to re-space these. No worries though.
00:20:459 (4) - Left 1 grid
01:23:661 (3) - This overlap looks ugly. IMO
01:28:043 (1) - New combo?
02:19:279 (1) - Add Finish
03:18:942 (5) - Up 1 grid
03:34:785 (1) - Make this more symmetrical.


Good map!
Star 8-)
Topic Starter
Vergence

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod :o

[Knuckles]
00:43:549 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
01:05:459 (1,2) - Ugly for my taste, maybe make it so it does not intersect the score?
01:22:482 (1) - 1 gird left
01:30:403 (3,4) - Down 1?
01:49:616 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
02:03:099 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping here looks bad

[Super Sonic]
• Slider Tick Rate 2
00:15:740 (6) - Down 1 grid (Level 3)
00:16:414 (8) - ^
00:16:583 (1,2) - That'll cause you to re-space these. No worries though.
00:20:459 (4) - Left 1 grid
01:23:661 (3) - This overlap looks ugly. IMO
01:28:043 (1) - New combo? Nope
02:19:279 (1) - Add Finish
03:18:942 (5) - Up 1 grid
03:34:785 (1) - Make this more symmetrical.


Good map!
Star 8-)
_________________________
Thanks for modding :D
Kudosu 4 u!
Luneko
Neko Mod Go ~

[Overall]
- You don't seem to use the "BGUnfinished.jpg" and "ASTOMWUZHERE.jpg" so delete them.
- You should try to make better looking sliders.
- Seems like you have some Spacing errors at some parts, try to recheck your spacing.

[Tails]
- HP Drain + 2
00:14:223 (2) - Remove the Last Slider-Point and make it wrap around (1).
00:16:583 (5) - This Slider looks ugly. Make it sexier.
00:22:650 (2) - Make this Slider look something like that ~
00:38:156 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:42:538 (1) - ^
00:51:976 (2) - End this slider at 00:52:482
01:03:605 (3) - Make this Slider look better D: plz
01:23:324 (2) - Remove this and make circles at 01:23:324 and 01:23:661 and add a slider at 01:23:830
01:42:875 - Add Break
02:20:628 - Remove all Timing sections after this since it doesnt look like youre going to map the rest.

[Knuckles]

00:19:111 (2) - ctrl + H , ctrl + R and resnap
01:20:291 (2) - looks weird
01:44:223 (2) - ^
01:56:695 (2) - ^
02:42:201 (1) - Move the 4th Sliderpoint 1 grid to the right
03:19:953 (1) - Weird slider again :P

[Super Sonic]

00:22:482 (4) - Move this above the end of (3)
Also some slider problems here but i was to lazy to point them out =w=


This map needs some work, especially in design so Good Luck!
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hey~ 8-)
i think i just can give some suggestion for you~

Tails
00:41:189 (2) - overlap at 00:41:358 (3) this slider?
01:34:785 (3) - make it more beautiful
01:46:414 (1) - change to a circle?

Knuckles
02:04:111 (3) - up 1 grid
02:27:369 (6) - make it more beautiful
02:35:543 (1) - uh, are you lazy? xD
03:04:953 (5) - make it balance

Super Sonic
- HP -1? too high of HP...
00:13:886 (1) - make it balance
00:50:796 (3) - why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
01:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it can make a circle pattern.
01:09:504 (9) - make it more beautiful
01:39:841 (4,5) - up 1 grid
01:42:538 (4) - left 1 grid
01:56:864 (3) - again. why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
02:01:583 (7,8) - make them look like same.
02:15:908 (11) - make it more beautiful
02:39:841 (1) - start form here... please. make them (stream) close a bit.
03:03:774 (1) - too far from the previous slider. and your previous slider is x1.5 speed, then dont do a jump on the next.
03:21:976 (11) - make it balance

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GoodLuck~~!! 8-)
ugh.. can't shoot a little star, cause being useless :(
Topic Starter
Vergence

Lunatic Neko wrote:

Neko Mod Go ~

[Overall]
- You don't seem to use the "BGUnfinished.jpg" and "ASTOMWUZHERE.jpg" so delete them.
- You should try to make better looking sliders.
- Seems like you have some Spacing errors at some parts, try to recheck your spacing.

[Tails]
- HP Drain + 2
00:14:223 (2) - Remove the Last Slider-Point and make it wrap around (1).
00:16:583 (5) - This Slider looks ugly. Make it sexier.
00:22:650 (2) - Make this Slider look something like that ~
00:38:156 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:42:538 (1) - ^
00:51:976 (2) - End this slider at 00:52:482
01:03:605 (3) - Make this Slider look better D: plz
01:23:324 (2) - Remove this and make circles at 01:23:324 and 01:23:661 and add a slider at 01:23:830
01:42:875 - Add Break
02:20:628 - Remove all Timing sections after this since it doesnt look like youre going to map the rest.

[Knuckles]

00:19:111 (2) - ctrl + H , ctrl + R and resnap
01:20:291 (2) - looks weird
01:44:223 (2) - ^
01:56:695 (2) - ^
02:42:201 (1) - Move the 4th Sliderpoint 1 grid to the right
03:19:953 (1) - Weird slider again :P

[Super Sonic]

00:22:482 (4) - Move this above the end of (3)
Also some slider problems here but i was to lazy to point them out =w=


This map needs some work, especially in design so Good Luck!
Donez
Topic Starter
Vergence

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hey~ 8-)
i think i just can give some suggestion for you~

Tails
00:41:189 (2) - overlap at 00:41:358 (3) this slider?
01:34:785 (3) - make it more beautiful
01:46:414 (1) - change to a circle?

Knuckles
02:04:111 (3) - up 1 grid
02:27:369 (6) - make it more beautiful
02:35:543 (1) - uh, are you lazy? xD
03:04:953 (5) - make it balance

Super Sonic
- HP -1? too high of HP...
00:13:886 (1) - make it balance
00:50:796 (3) - why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
01:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it can make a circle pattern.
01:09:504 (9) - make it more beautiful
01:39:841 (4,5) - up 1 grid
01:42:538 (4) - left 1 grid
01:56:864 (3) - again. why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
02:01:583 (7,8) - make them look like same.
02:15:908 (11) - make it more beautiful
02:39:841 (1) - start form here... please. make them (stream) close a bit.
03:03:774 (1) - too far from the previous slider. and your previous slider is x1.5 speed, then dont do a jump on the next.
03:21:976 (11) - make it balance

----
GoodLuck~~!! 8-)
ugh.. can't shoot a little star, cause being useless :(
Some suggestion I didnt change. Thanks 4 Modding
Bobo_old
Ahaha my little brother drives me crazy with this song. XD
He just loves it. :3

-General-

Remove letterbox?
I agree with Raging Bull, you need a diff between Knuckles and Super Sonic. D:
Perhaps I could help?...
A taiko diff would be nice as well. :)

Open the .osu in notepad and scrolldown to colours
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

Add SliderBorder : 0,0,0 under it:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 0,0,0


-Tails-

Really don't think you should've mapped this along the vocals. Sorry. D:

00:32:762 - First remove the repeat. Then make the slider 1 tick longer, re-add the repeat.
00:34:111 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:40:515 - Move this slider 2 ticks forward, replace the finish hitsound at the end with a clap.
00:41:189 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:55:347 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
00:57:032 - Shorten the slider by 2 ticks. Re-snap 2 and 3 to this edit.
00:59:055 - I'd place this under 2's tail.
01:03:605 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
01:06:133 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
01:28:043 - Take this whole combo and throw it back 2 ticks. Shorten (5) by 2 ticks.
01:37:313 - Shorten by 6 ticks.
01:38:661 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:52:313 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
02:11:021 - Remove this note.
02:40:852 - Remove clap.
03:15:908 - Throw this back 2 ticks, shorten by 2 ticks, re-snap.
03:16:583 - Add a note with clap. Re-snap 3, 4 and 5 to the edited 2.
03:17:257 - Replace finish with clap.
03:29:392 - Delete this note.
03:29:729 - Make this 4 ticks longer.
03:32:088 - Delete this note.
03:32:425 - Make this 4 ticks longer.

-Knuckles-

00:43:043 - Unstack this note.
00:52:987 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
00:55:515 - Move this forward 2 ticks. Shorten by two ticks and re-snap.
01:04:953 - Forward 2 ticks, re-snap.
01:10:178 - Remove this note.
01:41:526 - This broke my combo, it must die! >:[ (No really remove it.)
01:44:644 - Remove this timing zone.
01:44:813 - ^
01:49:279 - Remove this note.
01:49:448 - ^
01:52:313 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:55:347 - Move this whole combo back 2 ticks.
01:56:526 - After making this edit ^, move 2, 3 and 4 back two more ticks and re-snap them.
02:15:740 - Add a note.
02:26:695 - Move 4 and 5 back 2 ticks, re-snap.
02:48:268 - Remove this note.
03:06:302 - Forward 2 ticks.

-Super Sonic-

Umm....

Circle size 4?

I'd go a little easier on the whistle hitsound, you're really over using it in the kiai times and

from 02:39:504 to 03:00:234.

03:02:425 - U mad bro? Get rid of this. ._.
03:11:864 - I see epic jumping potential. Use it.
03:22:650 - Same here.
03:37:482 - Aaaaaand here.

D:

This is pre good I guess... @_@
Keep it up! :D
Topic Starter
Vergence
:)

Bobo wrote:

Ahaha my little brother drives me crazy with this song. XD
He just loves it. :3

-General-

Remove letterbox?
I agree with Raging Bull, you need a diff between Knuckles and Super Sonic. D:
Perhaps I could help?...
A taiko diff would be nice as well. :)

Open the .osu in notepad and scrolldown to colours
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

Add SliderBorder : 0,0,0 under it:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 0,0,0


-Tails-

Really don't think you should've mapped this along the vocals. Sorry. D:

00:32:762 - First remove the repeat. Then make the slider 1 tick longer, re-add the repeat.
00:34:111 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:40:515 - Move this slider 2 ticks forward, replace the finish hitsound at the end with a clap.
00:41:189 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:55:347 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
00:57:032 - Shorten the slider by 2 ticks. Re-snap 2 and 3 to this edit.
00:59:055 - I'd place this under 2's tail.
01:03:605 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
01:06:133 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
01:28:043 - Take this whole combo and throw it back 2 ticks. Shorten (5) by 2 ticks.
01:37:313 - Shorten by 6 ticks.
01:38:661 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:52:313 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
02:11:021 - Remove this note.
02:40:852 - Remove clap.
03:15:908 - Throw this back 2 ticks, shorten by 2 ticks, re-snap.
03:16:583 - Add a note with clap. Re-snap 3, 4 and 5 to the edited 2.
03:17:257 - Replace finish with clap.
03:29:392 - Delete this note.
03:29:729 - Make this 4 ticks longer.
03:32:088 - Delete this note.
03:32:425 - Make this 4 ticks longer.

A lot of suggestion have been taken :D

-Knuckles-

00:43:043 - Unstack this note.
00:52:987 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
00:55:515 - Move this forward 2 ticks. Shorten by two ticks and re-snap.
01:04:953 - Forward 2 ticks, re-snap.
01:10:178 - Remove this note.
01:41:526 - This broke my combo, it must die! >:[ (No really remove it.)
01:44:644 - Remove this timing zone.
01:44:813 - ^
01:49:279 - Remove this note.
01:49:448 - ^
01:52:313 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:55:347 - Move this whole combo back 2 ticks.
01:56:526 - After making this edit ^, move 2, 3 and 4 back two more ticks and re-snap them.
02:15:740 - Add a note.
02:26:695 - Move 4 and 5 back 2 ticks, re-snap.
02:48:268 - Remove this note.
03:06:302 - Forward 2 ticks.

Some suggestions have been taken

-Super Sonic-

Umm....

Circle size 4?

I'd go a little easier on the whistle hitsound, you're really over using it in the kiai times and

from 02:39:504 to 03:00:234.

03:02:425 - U mad bro? Get rid of this. ._. This is to boost the player's meter bar
03:11:864 - I see epic jumping potential. Use it. Nope
03:22:650 - Same here. ^
03:37:482 - Aaaaaand here. ^

D:

Ill redo the whistling if someone complains about it again.
This is pre good I guess... @_@
Keep it up! :D
________________________________________________
Thanks of lots for modding :D ;) . Btw, if you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice :D
Daiguren
General
  • offset -10(3090)
    dont forget resnap after timing changed!
Tails
  • 00:43:549 (1) - end at [00:46:751] will be better
    00:52:819 (3) - I think you needn't make a repeat here
    01:35:965 (1) - spcing plz , it's a little far in easy diff
    01:44:644 (x) - delete useless green line
    01:44:813 (x) - ^
    01:55:347 (x) - ^
    01:56:695 (x) - ^
    03:29:729 (2,2) - Extend by 1/1 beat
Knuckles
  • AR -1 or 2
    00:36:460 (1) - hitsound changed suddenly, and it makes me very uncomfortable ,I sugguest Continue using Hit-Normal
    01:42:528 (1) - ^
    00:55:337 (2) - quite a big jump
    01:21:123 (4) - advance and extend by 1/2 beat
    02:03:595 (2,3) - spacing?
    02:29:719 (2) - spacing
    02:35:618 (2) - new combo if you need make some suddenly jumps
Super Sonic
  • 01:25:262 (6) - add a circle here?
    02:00:656 (4) - ^
    01:44:560 (6,7) - hit-soft plz
That's all : D
Topic Starter
Vergence

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

General
  • offset -10(3090)
    dont forget resnap after timing changed!
Tails
  • 00:43:549 (1) - end at [00:46:751] will be better
    00:52:819 (3) - I think you needn't make a repeat here
    01:35:965 (1) - spcing plz , it's a little far in easy diff
    01:44:644 (x) - delete useless green line
    01:44:813 (x) - ^
    01:55:347 (x) - ^
    01:56:695 (x) - ^
    03:29:729 (2,2) - Extend by 1/1 beat

    Some suggestion has been taken :D
Knuckles
  • AR -1 or 2
    00:36:460 (1) - hitsound changed suddenly, and it makes me very uncomfortable ,I sugguest Continue using Hit-Normal
    01:42:528 (1) - ^
    00:55:337 (2) - quite a big jump
    01:21:123 (4) - advance and extend by 1/2 beat
    02:03:595 (2,3) - spacing?
    02:29:719 (2) - spacing
    02:35:618 (2) - new combo if you need make some suddenly jumps

    Some suggestion have been taken ;)
Super Sonic
  • 01:25:262 (6) - add a circle here?
    02:00:656 (4) - ^
    01:44:560 (6,7) - hit-soft plz

    I only take the third one :/
That's all : D
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Thanks for modding
Bobo_old

DragonSparta wrote:

If you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice :D
25% Done as I'm typing this. :)
I'm a slow mapper. :L

EDIT: Weee~ 70% done! ^^
Should be finished by Thursday, school's been stacking a fair bit of work on me and I'm not getting much time to work on this.
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Bobo wrote:

DragonSparta wrote:

If you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice :D
25% Done as I'm typing this. :)
I'm a slow mapper. :L

EDIT: Weee~ 70% done! ^^
Should be finished by Thursday, school's been stacking a fair bit of work on me and I'm not getting much time to work on this.

Its Okay :o :D :)
Yay! ;)
Breeze
Oh, pal, I love your font, but you only post a preview ;_;
Could you please send me the font <3

[General]
  1. You can change the sliderborder colour by add code adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values, black is 0,0,0, which I think would fit your skin) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, since you use a custom hitcircle, change sliderborder colour could fit them
  2. Remove sonic from tag since it's already in the source
[Knukles]
  1. 01:55:337 (1) - 1/2 beat forward, add a note at 01:56:348 with a finish sound, remove whistle of 01:56:179, so that fit the music
  2. 02:05:112 (4) - 1 grid up to line 3
[Super Sonic]
  1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
  2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^
nice map
star
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Breeze wrote:

Oh, pal, I love your font, but you only post a preview ;_;
Could you please send me the font <3 Sure :D

[General]
  1. You can change the sliderborder colour by add code adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values, black is 0,0,0, which I think would fit your skin) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, since you use a custom hitcircle, change sliderborder colour could fit them
  2. Remove sonic from tag since it's already in the source
[Knukles]
  1. 01:55:337 (1) - 1/2 beat forward, add a note at 01:56:348 with a finish sound, remove whistle of 01:56:179, so that fit the music
  2. 02:05:112 (4) - 1 grid up to line 3
Done

[Super Sonic]
  1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
  2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^
I'll try >_<"

nice map
star
Thanks for modding
Bobo_old

Breeze wrote:

[Super Sonic]
  1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
  2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^
:P

Bobo_old
Diff's done!

Add a speed up warning at:
02:38:483
and
03:19:943 :3

DragonSparta wrote:

Bobo (Made by Bobo) (Done) Thanks for the diff~~~~ *Suggest changing the diff name >_<"
D: Aww but I like this name :'(

Lol it's alright. I'll let you change the name to Sonic.

Download: Crush 40 - What I'm Made Of (DragonSparta) [Bobo].osu
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Thanks for the diff Bobo!! ~~
;)
Nice patterns....
Dammit message too short
Lalalalal~
theMikeAG
You asked me What You're Made Of? Well, here it is!

~Tails~
01:20:281 (2) - Fix this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/139618 I am the OCD slider master. :o
01:29:213 (5) - This sounds better ending at 01:30:056.
02:25:337 (2,3) - Replace these with a slider? Same with 02:30:730 (1,2).
03:34:775 (1,2) - Move these two so that (1) isn't overlapped.

~Knuckles~
00:42:528 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not a big fan of these streams to be honest. Maybe replace 00:42:696 (5,6,7) with a slider?
01:39:325 (3) - Finish at the end?
01:41:011 (1,2,3,1,2) - Honestly, I think it would be cool if you mapped the echoes.
01:48:089 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't really match the music.
02:15:056 (2,3,4,5,6) - See above. Not a fan of the streams.
03:17:584 (1) - Doesn't match the music.

~Bobo~
Bobo is Bobo.

~Super Sonic~
00:59:729 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, slowdown sections are kind of odd.
01:02:762 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
01:29:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^

Th-th-that's all, Folks.
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theMikeAG wrote:

You asked me What You're Made Of? Well, here it is!

~Tails~
01:20:281 (2) - Fix this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/139618 I am the OCD slider master. :o
01:29:213 (5) - This sounds better ending at 01:30:056.
02:25:337 (2,3) - Replace these with a slider? Same with 02:30:730 (1,2).
03:34:775 (1,2) - Move these two so that (1) isn't overlapped.

~Knuckles~
00:42:528 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not a big fan of these streams to be honest. Maybe replace 00:42:696 (5,6,7) with a slider?
01:39:325 (3) - Finish at the end?
01:41:011 (1,2,3,1,2) - Honestly, I think it would be cool if you mapped the echoes.
01:48:089 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't really match the music.
02:15:056 (2,3,4,5,6) - See above. Not a fan of the streams.
03:17:584 (1) - Doesn't match the music.

~Bobo~
Bobo is Bobo.

~Super Sonic~
00:59:729 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, slowdown sections are kind of odd.
01:02:762 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
01:29:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^

Th-th-that's all, Folks.
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All suggestion have been taken!
Thanks for modding!
Huskatron
Do you need another diff? I can make one if you want; I'm not busy at the moment ;)
Huskatron
This looks better to me...



(The current ki is fine)


Here's a scorebar colour :3



(You can remove the the "0" and leave it as "scorebar-colour" if you want, 'cause that works, too! :D
Bobo_old

theMikeAG wrote:

~Bobo~
Bobo is Bobo.
Indeed I am :o
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Frozen wrote:

Do you need another diff? I can make one if you want; I'm not busy at the moment ;)

This looks better to me...
Umm..what type of diff?
Can you also help me make a meter bar too? :D
pieguyn
General:

-tick rate 1? (all diffs)
-Gap between tails and knuckles seems big due to spacing/sv...

Tails:

00:38:146 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:59:550 (1) - start it 1/2 later
01:58:876 (3) - goes off the edge of the playfield
03:09:831 (2,3) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid down
03:16:573 (3) - too close to (2)
03:17:584 (1) - too close to (5)
03:20:281 (3) - new combo

Knuckles:

00:14:213 (2) - too far from (1)
00:16:573 (1) - too far from (6)
00:39:494 (3) - too close to (2)
00:42:022 (3,4,5) - uneven
01:59:719 (4,5,6) - uneven

Bobo:

-AR 7, 8 is fast for a hard :?
-map the rest of it?

00:40:842 (5,1) - switch NCs
01:04:944 (9) - too far from (8)
01:07:809 (1) - jump is pretty big for a hard :?
01:22:472 (1) - ^
01:46:909 (5,1) - switch NCs
02:11:516 (1) - wow, huge jump out of nowhere O.O
02:38:483 (1) - :cry: this 1.5x is really unexpected and is really hard for a hard
03:19:943 - 1.5x+jumps is really hard for a hard
03:21:460 (1) - interesting...perhaps you could find some way to work this colorhax into the other diffs? I only saw it in this one :?

Super Sonic:

-HP drain 6 or 7?
-CS 4?

00:51:639 - I really think that the 1.2x is too much with this high slider velocity, perhaps remove it?
00:59:055 (9) - offscreen >.<
01:07:397 (2) - remove whistle
01:25:347 (6) - new combo?
01:28:043 (8) - new combo
01:57:706 - same
02:11:864 (7) - new combo?
02:12:875 (10) - goes off the edge of the playfield
02:13:886 (5) - new combo?
02:39:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow these streams are spaced really far apart, perhaps change it?
02:43:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:57:032 (9) - new combo
03:03:774 - same... :?
03:09:167 (1,2,3) - too many whistles...remove some of them please >.<
03:18:942 (5) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140237

Sorry if it's mostly trivial issues, was really tired when modding this :cry: You're off to a good start but the map needs a bit more work before it can get ranked, good luck! :)
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pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-tick rate 1? (all diffs)
-Gap between tails and knuckles seems big due to spacing/sv...

Tails:

00:38:146 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:59:550 (1) - start it 1/2 later
01:58:876 (3) - goes off the edge of the playfield
03:09:831 (2,3) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid down
03:16:573 (3) - too close to (2)
03:17:584 (1) - too close to (5)
03:20:281 (3) - new combo

Knuckles:

00:14:213 (2) - too far from (1)
00:16:573 (1) - too far from (6)
00:39:494 (3) - too close to (2)
00:42:022 (3,4,5) - uneven
01:59:719 (4,5,6) - uneven

Bobo:

-AR 7, 8 is fast for a hard :?
-map the rest of it?

00:40:842 (5,1) - switch NCs
01:04:944 (9) - too far from (8)
01:07:809 (1) - jump is pretty big for a hard :?
01:22:472 (1) - ^
01:46:909 (5,1) - switch NCs
02:11:516 (1) - wow, huge jump out of nowhere O.O
02:38:483 (1) - :cry: this 1.5x is really unexpected and is really hard for a hard
03:19:943 - 1.5x+jumps is really hard for a hard
03:21:460 (1) - interesting...perhaps you could find some way to work this colorhax into the other diffs? I only saw it in this one :?

Super Sonic:

-HP drain 6 or 7?
-CS 4?

00:51:639 - I really think that the 1.2x is too much with this high slider velocity, perhaps remove it?
00:59:055 (9) - offscreen >.<
01:07:397 (2) - remove whistle
01:25:347 (6) - new combo?
01:28:043 (8) - new combo
01:57:706 - same
02:11:864 (7) - new combo?
02:12:875 (10) - goes off the edge of the playfield
02:13:886 (5) - new combo?
02:39:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow these streams are spaced really far apart, perhaps change it?
02:43:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:57:032 (9) - new combo
03:03:774 - same... :?
03:09:167 (1,2,3) - too many whistles...remove some of them please >.<
03:18:942 (5) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140237

Sorry if it's mostly trivial issues, was really tired when modding this :cry: You're off to a good start but the map needs a bit more work before it can get ranked, good luck! :)
Thanks for modding~. Very helpful ;)
Bobo_old

pieguy1372 wrote:

Bobo:

-AR 7, 8 is fast for a hard :? AR 7 it is~
-map the rest of it? Done~!

00:40:842 (5,1) - switch NCs Done~!
01:04:944 (9) - too far from (8) Fixed~!
01:07:809 (1) - jump is pretty big for a hard :? Fixed~!
01:22:472 (1) - ^^
01:46:909 (5,1) - switch NCs Done~!
02:11:516 (1) - wow, huge jump out of nowhere O.O Fixed~!
02:38:483 (1) - :cry: this 1.5x is really unexpected and is really hard for a hard Changed to x1.25~
03:19:943 - 1.5x+jumps is really hard for a hard Made the jumps smaller and changed to x1.25~
03:21:460 (1) - interesting Hehe, thnx :>...perhaps you could find some way to work this colorhax into the other diffs? I only saw it in this one :?

Sorry if it's mostly trivial issues, was really tired when modding this D: Don't do that to yourself! :C :cry: You're off to a good start but the map needs a bit more work before it can get ranked, good luck! :)
Thnx for the mod~!

Oh, this is the default healthbar.
Put it in the song's folder and full submit so it fits with the custom skin elements.


Download: Crush 40 - What I'm Made Of (DragonSparta) [Bobo].osu
Huskatron

DragonSparta wrote:

Frozen wrote:

Do you need another diff? I can make one if you want; I'm not busy at the moment ;)

This looks better to me...
Umm..what type of diff?
Can you also help me make a meter bar too? :D
1. Any difficulty anything's fine :D
2. Meter bar; as in the one that's there? Or do you mean numbers? And if numbers, the score or the hitcircle numbers?
Charles445
whoop

General
Kiai time should be consistent on all difficulties. Right now it's not.

Tails
Why are combo colors different on this?
02:32:752 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141126

Knuckles
00:42:528 (4) - Move this up one
01:05:449 (1,2) - Space these out more
01:28:370 (3) - There are a lot of spacing issues like this in the map. See how the three is closer to the 2 than the 4? You can fix these kind of things by using Grid 4. I won't be pointing out all spacing issues like this because there are many.
01:41:348 (3,4) - I suggest reducing the spacing between these. It's a pretty big jump for a normal.
02:42:191 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://puu.sh/54b1

Bobo
 This difficulty has the wrong tags! It's inconsistent with the other difficulties.
There is also missing Slider Layout code, but that doesn't matter much.
I don't think the color hacking added very much to the map. It will make changing combos a hassle. I would get rid of that extra combo color.
Hitsounds are far too loud, make them quieter!
Feels very overmapped. Streams are used with no indication from the music.
00:34:438 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:775 (1) - ^^ , combo spam like this is never a good idea. It messes up the hp drain for the entire map.
01:11:179 (2) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141118
01:40:505 (1) - Remove new combo
01:40:842 (1) - ^^
02:17:247 (2) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141121
02:39:325 - Add a hitcircle
03:20:449 (1) - Remove new combo
03:20:955 (1) - ^^
03:37:303 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:37:472
03:39:494 - Make this inheriting section use Soft volume instead of Normal. It will prevent sound popping.

Super Sonic
Feels very overmapped. Streams are used with no indication from the music.
HP Drain -1 seems like a good idea, but that is entirely up to you.
00:13:886 (1) - Adjust the points like this for better symmetry. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140704
 [b]This difficulty has the wrong offset! Change it to 3090!
02:39:841 - This stream section is an unexpected and rather absurd difficulty change. The first part of the guitar solo should be mapped in 1/3.
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To Frozen,

1. Can you create a diff something in between "Tails" and "Knuckles"?
2. Never mind about the meter bar already :) Bobo created it for me xD
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Charles445 wrote:

whoop

General
Kiai time should be consistent on all difficulties. Right now it's not.

Tails
Why are combo colors different on this?
02:32:752 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141126

Knuckles
00:42:528 (4) - Move this up one
01:05:449 (1,2) - Space these out more
01:28:370 (3) - There are a lot of spacing issues like this in the map. See how the three is closer to the 2 than the 4? You can fix these kind of things by using Grid 4. I won't be pointing out all spacing issues like this because there are many.
01:41:348 (3,4) - I suggest reducing the spacing between these. It's a pretty big jump for a normal.
02:42:191 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://puu.sh/54b1

Super Sonic
Feels very overmapped. Streams are used with no indication from the music.
HP Drain -1 seems like a good idea, but that is entirely up to you.
00:13:886 (1) - Adjust the points like this for better symmetry. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140704
 [b]This difficulty has the wrong offset! Change it to 3090!
02:39:841 - This stream section is an unexpected and rather absurd difficulty change. The first part of the guitar solo should be mapped in 1/3.
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Thanks for modding~. I didn't notice some of these mistakes until you point them up. Thanks~
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