[Together]
Based on my rule I'll be only modding the diffs that you made.
Using hp 6.5 or 6 would tone down the drain a bit for consistency
00:05:458 (1,3) - Could be blanketed better
00:09:458 (1,2) - Try to make them identical, they follow the same vocal train so keeping them identical potentially makes your map cleaner
00:10:124 (3,4,5) - These 3 could be identical in spacing because it follows the melody in the music which doesn't have that dramatic of a change to one another since your end goal was to make 00:10:624 (6,1) - have a gap for that strong beat
00:13:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could make pattern smaller and more intuitive of a design to make the next portion of jumps leave an impact. Just an Example: http://puu.sh/w2lhq/b02d48515c.jpg
00:16:624 (2) - Too much additive hitsounds, I think just having a whistle would leave a much cleaner hitsound palette. I'll be brought up a lot if it stays but I'll just mod accordinging to mapping style
00:23:291 (2,3) - This rhythm should be Ctrl+G to map intuitively to the vocals. Maybe another could be http://puu.sh/w2lqo/27f6fa9c16.jpg or http://puu.sh/w2lrj/94f2034ba4.jpg
00:29:291 (5,1) - Doesn't need to be a forced jump to a strong beat it'll do the same being just as close http://puu.sh/w2ltZ/552638df89.jpg
00:31:791 (4,1) - Ew Blanket
00:35:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Excessive jumps just thrown in. Should've been a rhythm along the lines of http://puu.sh/w2lx5/01690b1dfb.jpg to map more according to the strong beginning vocals and then into the 4 notes
00:37:291 (5,1) - Quite a large spacing. Just something random definitely better to do it your way but spacing like this could work http://puu.sh/w2lAv/efff4cc364.jpg so it doesn't seem too forced
00:38:124 (2,3) - Not that clean of a rhythm choice here. Your main focus I believe should be following the vocals and making sure 00:38:624 - is clickable in its own right/ So something like http://puu.sh/w2lFz/1d4a43706a.jpg
00:40:791 (2,3,4) - Same with rhythm choice here, http://puu.sh/w2lHq/fffe7bb0a9.jpg Even though I do agree that mapping that downbeat sound is nice but it's lacking impact because the red ticks area the one that takes over this area You can do whatever you feel is good for you though
00:57:458 (1,2,3) - Such clean hitsounding makes me hot
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with things previously, just feels like a back and forth pattern without much backing it up
Using hp 6.5 or 6 would tone down the drain a bit for consistency
00:05:458 (1,3) - Could be blanketed better
00:09:458 (1,2) - Try to make them identical, they follow the same vocal train so keeping them identical potentially makes your map cleaner
00:10:124 (3,4,5) - These 3 could be identical in spacing because it follows the melody in the music which doesn't have that dramatic of a change to one another since your end goal was to make 00:10:624 (6,1) - have a gap for that strong beat
00:13:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could make pattern smaller and more intuitive of a design to make the next portion of jumps leave an impact. Just an Example: http://puu.sh/w2lhq/b02d48515c.jpg
00:16:624 (2) - Too much additive hitsounds, I think just having a whistle would leave a much cleaner hitsound palette. I'll be brought up a lot if it stays but I'll just mod accordinging to mapping style
00:23:291 (2,3) - This rhythm should be Ctrl+G to map intuitively to the vocals. Maybe another could be http://puu.sh/w2lqo/27f6fa9c16.jpg or http://puu.sh/w2lrj/94f2034ba4.jpg
00:29:291 (5,1) - Doesn't need to be a forced jump to a strong beat it'll do the same being just as close http://puu.sh/w2ltZ/552638df89.jpg
00:31:791 (4,1) - Ew Blanket
00:35:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Excessive jumps just thrown in. Should've been a rhythm along the lines of http://puu.sh/w2lx5/01690b1dfb.jpg to map more according to the strong beginning vocals and then into the 4 notes
00:37:291 (5,1) - Quite a large spacing. Just something random definitely better to do it your way but spacing like this could work http://puu.sh/w2lAv/efff4cc364.jpg so it doesn't seem too forced
00:38:124 (2,3) - Not that clean of a rhythm choice here. Your main focus I believe should be following the vocals and making sure 00:38:624 - is clickable in its own right/ So something like http://puu.sh/w2lFz/1d4a43706a.jpg
00:40:791 (2,3,4) - Same with rhythm choice here, http://puu.sh/w2lHq/fffe7bb0a9.jpg Even though I do agree that mapping that downbeat sound is nice but it's lacking impact because the red ticks area the one that takes over this area You can do whatever you feel is good for you though
00:57:458 (1,2,3) - Such clean hitsounding makes me hot
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with things previously, just feels like a back and forth pattern without much backing it up
[Insane]
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern doesn't seem clean can somehow adjust this to make pattern intuitive. Not to hate or anything but visually it looks clustered
Do your best my friend.