1. Asuka_-'s Easy (1.43 stars, 104 notes)
2. DAISUKI IMOUTO MANGA (4.11 stars, 330 notes)
3. Hard (3.08 stars, 240 notes)
4. Neko Sensei (4.87 stars, 346 notes)
5. Normal (2.33 stars, 197 notes)
6. Play this not "Insane" (2.96 stars, 55 notes)
7. SO HARD DON'T PLAY IF YOU CAN'T DO IT PUT NF ON SO YOU CAN TRY AND PASS IT (5.81 stars, 262 notes)

Anxient wrote:

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Neko Sensei

00:01:987 (1,2) - IRC: Make this a jump. theres a huge beat o'er here 00:02:168 - Umm... considering that i made 00:01:987 (1,2) - a jump with a 1.5 timing section, it's the same as 00:03:441 (1,2) - this so i think it'll be fine.
00:03:441 (1) - same here. pull the entire map down (ctrl a + drag down) to make room http://puu.sh/vUUF8/ca3ad5cf73.jpg - Sorry but, if i did that style, i'll have conflict with the aesthetics. My jumps are basically overlapped on the intro. so if i changed it to a blanket, the player will somehow get confused.
00:05:623 (3,4) - this is a 1/3. - oh, i didn't hear that xd yep i'll just do a reverse slider.
00:07:805 (1) - make a jump. - i did make a jump. 00:07:805 (1,2) - this two note is just corresponding to the music which also has two large notes on that timing. (fck my english sorry)
00:09:259 (1) - same here. - this is the same as 00:01:987 (1,2) - this so i think that kind of jump is fine. also, ^^
00:11:259 (2,3,4,5) - make a stream or a 1/3. choose one, it looks like youre trying to do 2 things at once. - welp... since i cant do a stream on that space, i just made the slider to a 1/4 so it can fit the music xd.
00:16:350 (6) - friendly reminder to keep your NCs consistent. - shit i missed that one xd
00:16:714 (7) - i recommend you place this is a similar fashion to 00:13:441 (1,2) - . for consistency. this works pretty well, believe it or not http://puu.sh/vUUNL/60fe15e598.jpg - woah, lemme try that. I didn't know that you can do this. or is this legal xd
00:19:259 (6) - same NC issue. - i always shitmiss those.
00:29:623 (1,2,3) - its better to give the spacing to 00:29:805 (2,3) - rather than 00:29:623 (1,2) - . 3 clearly has the louder sound, so maybe this'll work better? http://puu.sh/vUUQQ/2c93674221.jpg - ooh... i haven't thought of that. i just blanketed it cause i thought 2,3 has good meaning to be close to each other... if you know what i mean xd
00:30:532 (5) - powerful beat is being represented with a reverse circle. this is NG(no good). try this rhythm http://puu.sh/vUUSK/fc67e4e247.jpg - that gave a better flow than i imagined... but the jump here 00:30:714 (6,1) - is a little big don't you think?
00:34:532 (3,4,5,6) - maybe make these the same DS. theyre the same loudness i think. http://puu.sh/vUUUM/120347c3db.jpg - 00:34:896 (4) - considering that the note used here is low, and 00:35:078 (5,6) - this guys as a high note, i suggest that i'll just let it be for now. if someone suggests this again, i'll change/rethink about it. if i tried to do what the picture says, the overlap of (4) is gonna be broken so i think it's good for now.
00:40:350 (3,4) - 1/3. - 00:40:350 (3) - i did a vocal slider here and then a drum 1/4 here 00:40:896 (4) - so i think this is ilegible. (what does tis mean xd)
00:43:441 - same problem: strong sound is being represented with a sliderend. make all strong sounds clickable please. you're probably gonna have to remap so lemme give you a suggestion http://puu.sh/vUUYr/5b0804d621.jpg - i just ramapped it. I HATE THAT. that's why i improvise~
00:44:532 (7) - forgot to NC? - i just spammed the NC 00:43:987 (1,1) -
00:47:441 (6) - same. ^^
00:48:168 (4) - lol whats with this slider? just make a normal one, this doesnt make too much sense. - xd as i thought it would xd
00:49:805 (5) - same sliderend is being used to represent strong sounds issue. - considering (why the hell am i always saying this.) that i put a Finish hitsound here 00:49:805 (5) - i think it's alright cause her vocals seem to be intact with a 1/4 slider. she's gliding her voice there.. get it? xd soryy 4 shitty reply
00:50:168 (6) - remember to NC! - yooooo i did it here 00:49:805 (1) - instead.
01:10:350 (1,2,3) - now this is something relatively hard to read! try doing this instead. http://puu.sh/vUV3K/afa96433a4.jpg - oooh... i knew it! i should have done that instead.
01:21:987 (1,2,3,4) - make the sliders move more lol, in comparison to the entire section, this loooks really out of place. consider doing this?
http://puu.sh/vUV6s/e7b50047db.jpg - did that, i failed. It somehow interfere's the 1/2 slider so i don't really know where to put it best. And the music doesn't indicate a heavy note to actually make those sliders a jump. You can just hear a trombone or a bass so i guess it's fine.
01:27:623 (4) - way too early! it starts at a blue tick for some reason. - whaa.. on my screen it start's on the red tick. notice how i put a timing section there. i put one on the Red tick, then the blue, lastly a yellow which is a 1/8 considering that it's a 1/8 reverse slider xd

good luck!

1. Despite being a supporting character, it's bothersome how Muramasa's head is cut (bottom right)
2. soft-sliderslide1.wav is unused

1. 00:22:896 (5,6) - Just a thought, consider combining these into a reverse slider.
2. 01:05:987 (1,2) - Slider borders are a bit close:
   
3. 01:22:714 (4,1) - Fix blanket

1. 00:23:078 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket due to stacking
2. 00:24:168 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:25:259 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:36:532 (3,4) - Ugh don't like this overlap
5. 00:40:896 (6) - This is hard to hit because it can easily be interpreted as 1/2 spacing like 00:38:532 (2,3) Here's my proposed solution:
   
   The highlighted slider on the left is 00:39:078 (4)
6. 01:04:896 (2,3) - The overlap due to stacking does not look good
7. 01:05:623 (5,1) - Slider borders too close:
   
8. 01:19:078 (1,2,3) - Uneven blanket
9. 01:21:623 (5,1) - Fix blanket
10. 01:27:714 - Add inherit point to end kiai here

1. 00:01:441 (4,3,3,3,3,3) - I'd argue these notes starting on red ticks are a bit too hard to read (timing wise) for a Hard diff.
2. 00:10:714 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:12:896 (3,4,5) - Specific to this diff, try to avoid stacks like this since it can be confused with your triples like 00:14:896 (9,10,1)
4. 00:16:350 (5,6) - This is confusing because you have sliders that end where trumpets, the dominant instrument at this part, start. Change so that you have sliders or at the very least, circles, that start in conjunction with the trumpets.
5. 00:19:987 (7,8) - Not sure about this direct overlap in a Hard.
6. 00:21:623 (3,4) - Fix blanket
7. 00:24:168 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:32:714 (4,5,6,7) - Shift these back 1/2 tick and add a circle at 00:33:623 Also NC 00:32:532 (4)
9. 00:34:896 (3,4) - This overlap is hard to read.
10. 00:39:805 (1) - Remove NC since this is a slow part and the preceding combo takes up two measures.
11. 00:41:441 (7) - NC
12. 00:43:623 (4,5) - Combine into 1/2 slider
13. 00:43:987 (6) - NC
14. 00:46:896 (4) - I would unstack and space this away from 00:46:350 (3) to fit the music better. Also make it a 1/1 slider like 00:43:987 (6) to stay consistent.
15. 00:49:805 (5) - NC
16. 00:57:532 (2) - Remove this. Do not overmap in Hard.
17. 00:57:623 (2,3,4) - Ctrl G on timeline (so sliders start on white ticks.
18. 01:00:714 (4,5,6,7) - Lost of overlap here, I recommend combining 01:00:532 (3,4) into a 1/2 slider.
19. 01:04:532 (1) - Avoid reverse sliders with more than one reverse like this one. It's confusing for newer players.
20. 01:05:441 (3) - Separate into two circles
21. 01:08:714 (5) - Turn into 1/2 slider? Music is same as 00:57:078 (5) You don't want too much variance in Hard.
22. 01:11:623 (4) - ^ also, putting it directly under 01:10:896 (2) makes it a bit hard to read.
23. 01:16:532 (2,3,4) - Uneven border spacing doesn't look good:
    
24. 01:21:805 (4,5,6) - ^ to a lesser extent

1. 00:07:259 (2,1) - Make this blanket have the same spacing as 00:08:714 (3,1)
2. 00:23:441 (1,2) - Move NC to 2
3. 00:39:987 (4,5,6,1) - Start NC on 4
4. 00:47:805 (4,5) - This stack makes 00:47:441 (3,4) this blanket look bad.
5. 00:50:168 (6) - NC
6. 00:52:896 (5) - ^
7. 01:05:987 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Starting sliders on white ticks follows the main drum beat and vocal vs red ticks which only follows one. Try this:
   
   Changes are highlighted.
8. 01:09:441 (3,4) - Ctrl G on timeline (slider starting on white tick here fits better)
9. 01:10:896 (3) - This red tick slider is fine because there are no vocal syllables where it ends.
10. 01:11:623 (6,1) - These can also be switched on timeline to match vocals.
11. 01:24:168 (3,4) - Fix blanket

1. 00:43:987 (1) - Only NC here if you're going to make an SV change.
2. 00:46:896 (1) - ^
3. 01:05:987 (1) - Consider curving this down instead of up for better flow.
4. 01:27:623 (4) - Ughh... Starts at 01:27:714 but I don't think reverse kick is the solution here.
5. Biggest gripe with this diff is the overmapped triples in the first half.

Bluekrait wrote:

-NekoNya's #modhelp mod

[Asuka_-'s Easy]

1. 00:22:896 (5,6) - Just a thought, consider combining these into a reverse slider. i think its fine
2. 01:05:987 (1,2) - Slider borders are a bit close: changed
   
3. 01:22:714 (4,1) - Fix blanket k

Thanks!!

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victorfernando wrote:

This map needs A real normal, 1.70 ~ 2,00 The Ranking Criteria Do Not Permit this.

Dragontail wrote:

victorfernando wrote:

This map needs A real normal, 1.70 ~ 2,00 The Ranking Criteria Do Not Permit this.

Sorry victor, but you are totally allowed to this. In fact, most easies are at 1.6-1.69, and plently are even below 1 star. Also, the gap is not too large so it is perfectly normal.
Also I know you forgot about it, but do not map haru modoki.

Edit: No kudosu please, but for highest diff, remember that there has to be better balance between circles and sliders, you have too many circles. Take a look at doormat's map for an example.